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Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
>>47803381
Mystery Box
Is there an imagur album of branching hearts? The thing updates so much it would probably be easier that way.
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Reposting my Hero Academy build because I posted it on page 9 and everyone else was too busy arguing to read it:
The absolutefudgiest build anyone has ever seen.
>>47801075
Name: Darren "theChocolatier" Dark
>School
Ej Har
>Classes [Hated Prodigy x2]
Smithing x2
Potion Mixing x3
Elemental Magic x2 [fire, to bettercookobstacles such asbad foodthat stand in his way]
Knowledge x3 [the dark art of makingconfections]
Physical Training [to prevent his work from taking a toll on his health]
Teamwork x2 [to lead his followers to crafting the perfectcandy]
>Companions
Eloise Avery
Chandara
Scal
>Events
Y1: Fund Raising - Selling his work so he can get the funds to continue his research into darkchocolate
Y2: Fund Raising
Y3: Fund Raising
Y4: Fund Raising
Y5: Research Proposal
>Clubs
Cultural club (cookingclub)
Educational club (gastronomicsciences)
>Drawbacks
Hated Prodigy x2
Even at a school as evil as Ej Har, Darren has never been accepted. At every other school, he is reviled just for being in Ej Har at the first place, but even in Ej Har people hate him for his work. He is somewhat eccentric, but more to the point, everyone wonders if there is some dark secret behind devoting himself so much to makingchocolate. One day, though, he will show them all. He will show them all the end result of his labor, no matter how much he has to shove it down their throats. And looking at the faces of the peers who doubted him will be delicious.Because they've eaten the best candy they've tasted in their lives, and they love it very much.
>>47803397
>Is there an imagur album of branching hearts?
No, but they're up on Beri's Google Drive, which is listed in the pastebin.
>>47803414
>everyone else was too busy arguing to read itI wasn't. I found your spoilers amusing. Still think the CYOA should get its own thread due to all the arguing, though.
>>47803397
>updates so much
Actually, it hasn't updated lately because Beri had a fever.
I hope he's okay.
Of course, there are 30 waifus now, so it might just be that it's full.
>>47803447
>>47803467
>>47801075
If Box Wine sees this I'd like to ask about your thoughts on an equipment/accessory page for Heroes Academy
>>47803381
huh. well there goes my idea for a really quick cyoa I could make today
>>47803478
What kinds of choices would you guys want to see in a cyoa about angels?
>>47803436
Then make it yourself.
>>47803490
>>47803485
Just because it's been done before doesn't mean it can't be done again (with minor differences).JUST DO IT!
>>47803481
No. Just presume that the school provides you with the necessary gear.
>>47803414
Won't he join sport discipline of cooking to represent Ej Hal(which they lost all the time because all theur food was....edgy)? I'm sure there should be one
>>47803515
>Then make it yourself.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - No. - - - - - - - - - - - - - -For a single-CYOA containment thread to be effective, I'm pretty sure either the author or one of the participants has to do it. Also I'm lazy as fuck.
>>47803515
The choice to fuck angels
Which OCs or updatesbesides Urban Fantasyare you most anticipating?
Pic related.
>>47803515
Waifus. Option to become a cupid who finds humans waifus.
>>47803530
The cooking club is explicitly mentioned as part of Cultural clubs, not Sports clubs.
So naturally, the likelihood that there's a cooking event at Sports is somewhat low.
Could be at Battle of the Arts though, but it'd be kind of stretching it.
>>47803436
you know, with how often you/that guy keeps talking about it, why haven't you/that guy made a thread?
you/that guy can continue to say "get your own thread", but until that happens, nothing will change.
>>47803515ones thataren't in the cyoa I'm making.
Options about fluffy wings. Describe how fluffy they are. When you wrap yourself up in them, does it hurt to sleep on them?
What does society think about winghugs or wrapping you and another person up with your wings while sleeping?Do they think it's okay, but angels think it's super lewd?
>>47803522
Indoor voice, anon.
Well, it was more like
>pick a big theme
>pick one/more small themes
>maybe some waifus or whatever
And then there would be small changes to how the waifus act depending on what you pick, but you'd have to imagine those (like if you pick a superpower world then they get powers, too, or if you pick the Harem option they may or may not want to share you)
>>47803556
I wish whoever made this would give us the last page of >>47803447
>>47803564
Also, this sounds interesting and different enough than the one already in this thread! Do it!
>>47803564
>ones that aren't in the cyoa I'm making.
I'm going for a more biblical-esque thing, so I think you're ok.
>>47801075
The hopefully final Ej Har version of Alexandra. I rewrote somethings. Tell me if liked the changes.
(Part 1)
>Name: Alexandra Lannis
>School: Ej Har Institute
>Classes:
>Physical Training (x1)
>Unarmed Combat (x1)
>Maneuvers (x2)
>Unholy Arts (x2)
>Arcane Magic (x1)
>Elemental Magic (x3)
>Ki Attunement (x2)– From Hated Prodigy
>Companions:
>Chandara
>Scal
>Inas
>Sanyo
>Events:
>Basilisk Den (x4)
>Battle Royal (x2)
>The Great Hunt (x2)
>Clubs:
>Paranormal Research
>Cultural Club
>Drawbacks
>Hated Prodigy
She ran away to Ej Har out of a combination of escaping her mother's influence and giving a big fuck you to her.
A noble whose mother hates her for the actions of her dead disgraced father. He was revealed to be a demon worshiper and killed shortly after Alex was born. Since he was of lessor standing and married into his wife’s family his secret brought them great shame and as a result they killed him. He did manage to kill Alex’s grandfather and granduncle before being finished off by Alex’s Uncle and because of that almost all of Alex’s family dislikes or hates her and as a result Alex developed a hatred of arrogant nobles. Alex’s mother Samantha even tried to kill her once when she was 13 during an attack on her family’s vacation home. Samantha was about to run Alex through with one of the assassin’s swords but stopped because she was interrupted by her brother who didn’t realize what she was doing. Her mother however, doesn't know that Alex was awake and not passed out from her wounds. Her mother teaches magic at Lunestier and that is the main reason Alex ran away to Ej Har with help from her uncle Maximillian. Her uncle and his son are the only people in her family that she was close to.
>>47803564
>you know, with how often you/that guy keeps talking about it, why haven't you/that guy made a thread?
I've already made my reasons clear (see >>47803544).
>>47803594
(Part 2)
Raised to be a sorceress she is extremely talented and skilled in the magical arts. At Ej Har She chose to study Unholy Arts out of spite and out of desire to have some small connection to her father who she has very complicated feelings about. However, unlike her father she worships Hegra the Prismatic Rain whose domains are Rain, Storms, Passion, and Emotion. Her influence is what has made Alex become so wild and indulging in sex and violence.
Making real friends for the first time has really changed Alex's outlook on life. She is deeply loyal to them. She and Scal bonded over their hatred of their families but unlike him she doesn’t care about revenge. Alex loves playing along with Inas and encouraged her to join the drama club.
All Alex cares about during the festivals is having fun. Whether by fighting both monsters and other students or by indulging in the Basilisk Den.
Researching the unknown and trying to solve paranormal gives Alex great joy. Plus it lets her spend time with her friends in the club.
As a member of the Disciplinary Squad she is tasked with help keeping order in the girl’s dorm. However, it’s suspicious how many girls start acting out or making trouble when she’s around. It’s almost as if they want to be punished for being naughty girls.
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>>47803592
>biblical
In that case, the angels should look more inhuman than human.
>>47803594
>>47803609
(Part 3)
As much as she hates her mother she really doesn't care about any idea of revenge. Showcasing her abilities is enough of an "Fuck You" for her. All Alex cares about is an uncertain future filled with opportunity and adventure. She hopes to travel with her friends as a group of mercenaries fighting, seeing new things, and corrupting innocent maidens in her downtime.
Personality wise she has a bead habit of acting slightly smug and arrogant because of her skill and ability. She is also a bit bloodthirsty which is most likely a side effect of the passion domain of her patron deity.Or it could be due to a dark experiment her father subjected her to when she was less than a week old.
Originally I had a concept for her that just got expanded and eventually I didn't really know what I was doing with her. She became a conglomeration of different ideas so I simplified her. I’m finishing up an alternate Lunestier build for her.
>>47803530
Nah m8, I'm pretty sure the cooking contests between schools are hotly contested.
St. Flares = generic european cuisine
Lunestier = Cordon Bleu/french cuisine
Odesium = SCIENCE cuisine
Ej Har = Spicy middle-east/chinese cuisine
Uzuza = barbecue, grill, rotisserie masters
>>47803594
Another Unholy Arts student, and a friend of Inas. Nice to meet you.
>>47803614
Isn't that only few types of angels?
>>47803515
How bout a CYOA where Armageddon is happening and you get conscripted to fight the armies of hell with an angel partner. Points can be spent on your individual gear or increasingly powerful angels that ascend in rank, from low cherub to might archangel.
That or make a generic angel waifu CYOA
>>47803637
I thought it was most.
Someone post a cyoa that centers around you becoming little girl
>>47803621
>SCIENCE cuisine
I think that's called gastronomy.
>>47803614
>>47803637
They can shape shift. I'm not to particularly interested in physical appearance.
>>47803621
>St. Flares
Monster meat!
>>47803648
![6509B306921130586D062D6AB1E0971EB4A51A0B[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/OEZz9yM.jpg "6509B306921130586D062D6AB1E0971EB4A51A0B[1].jpg")
>>47803621
>Ej Har = Spicy middle-east/chinese cuisine
As great as that sounds, I don't think Ej Har is supposed to be wholly "eastern."
>>47803592
you are, definitely.
What about fluffy wings though?
I'd love different classes of angels, with different jobs and power levels, but anon might get mad he can't get max power + max easy lifeI think being a Cupid, and being allowed to use your powers for egotistical purposes, would be fun. That, or a Guardian Angel for a protagonist
>>47803605
yeah, you said you won't do shit but you'll keep whining. Good job!
>>47803703
>yeah, you said you won't do shit but you'll keep whining.I've mentioned it a total of twice, and I don't plan on doing more than mentioning it off-hand if it seems appropriate.
>>47803637
Yeah, most angels look normal, but for some reason, people keep doing them all as horrible monsters.
>>47803773
because contrarians
>>47803447
Damn you author! Why won't you post the last page!?
>>47803515
The most important question by far isare you Angelanon?
>>47803639
I'm thinking more of a new angel being born and picking its class/powers sort of thing, but I might include something like that in the quest options. Thanks anon.
>>47803820
I guess I will be when I make the thing, but I'm not right now.
>>47803839
Angelanon is dead, long live Angelanon
>>47803827
So we are the angel?
>>47803863
Si. I just need to know what kind of choices to include besides the ones of class and statsas well as the obvious one about joining not-Satan.
>>47803621
Ej Har is supposed to be transylvanian
>>47803827
hold on, do we (as in me) become an angel, are we creating a character (that is distinctly not us) or are we getting an angel buddy?
because, I'll be honest, I'm only really interested by the first one.
>>47803637
It's almost all of them.
Good things happened today, so let's have fun with
>OC
(or don't that's okay, I won't force you to have fun. You should only have fun if you want to have fun, and maybe this isn't fun to you, and that's okay)
>>47803888
>hold on, do we (as in me) become an angel
Yes
>>47803888
I'm not big on being an angel because muh rules and lawful alignment but as long as you add a badass flaming sword and lightning powers I'd be happy. Good luck amigo.
>>47803974
cool. I wish you good luck, and may the Muse of CYOAs be with you.
>>47804002
You're probably not going to like this, then. It's made pretty clear from the getgo that your purpose is to serve God by serving people. You can stilljoin not-SatanI suppose, but that might just end up being another kind of servitude.
>>47803414
Gib candy.
CYOA authors could rule the board. SDA did. He took CYOAs to the far Imgur. There was nothing left to make; the board was his. But SDA is dead. His CYOAs are gone. And so we live in evil days; the free authors of /cyoag/ have turned on each other, instead of their proper enemies: those who envy all the authors have done. SDA must weep, if the dead weep. I will weep in his place, but I will also hope. The world turns; what was may come again. The waifus still spin the web of men's lives. So now, perhaps the authors wish CYOAs to be great again. Perhaps a new SDA will take up his photoshop, bring order where there is chaos, remake /cyoag/ into a better place...perhaps.
>>47803594
>>47803609
>As a member of the Disciplinary Squad
But you aren't a member of the disciplinary squad.
>>47804066
Yeah, fucknot-Satan.
>>47804066
>serving people
interesting, what are ways you can serve people?
>>47803352
>Not linking to this in the old thread
>>47804167
The fuck are you on about? >>47803359
>>47803592
>>47803637
>>47803592
>>47803703
Both are valid. The two lowest choirs (Groupings) of angels are the Angels and Archangels. The protectors of individuals and nations. They look like humans. Everything else is eldritch.
>>47804166
Protecting them from demons, trying to influence their actions without revealing yourself or impinging upon their free will, saving their souls from death (it's a two-stage process and thus has two whole classes of angels devoted to it). That sort of thing.
>>47803965
What's the theme of this OC?
>>47803965
>ZA WARUDO
Time to make everything better...?
Beauty (2-5-10) - How can ugly people be in a world of fetishes?
Politics + Effective (1-5-9) - I'm not saying what my political views are here, but with Effective they can be a grand utopia.
Peace on Earth + Crime - Self-explanatory. (1-5-7)
Smart + Remove Stupid (1-4-6) - A new age of humanity!
Affect gender + Affect groups (0-4-5) - I'll figure out what I want later. But I'm gonna try to target groups that are vanilla/share my fetishes (because after this, my fetishes will be vanilla).
>PERSONAL
Perfect Everything (0-3-2) - This way, I will live long enough to see everything without taking Reality.
Beauty (0-2-2) - Time to become the little trap.
>LEFTOVER STUFF IN WORLD
Fetish Normal + Remove fetish (0-1-1) - Will not say which I'm adding and removing to avoid shitstorms, but suffice it to say that most of 4chan will probably agree with it.
Libido (0-0-1) - With Effective, this won't disrupt things too much.
I think this is more than 100 characters long, so (0-0-2)
>LEFTOVER STUFF IN PERSONAL
Induce (0-0-1) - So my partner likes what I like.
Pheromones (0-0-0) - So I can do what I want.
Good CYOA. I do wish there was a way to exchange Bronze for Silver though... I would say I wanted a more generic point system, but the non-generic system, I think, is one of the things that sets this apart, so.
By the way, you have Sexuality in both headers.
>>47804212
Also, pretty much everything but those two stayed in heaven with god doing heavenly things. Throne rank was more about how close to god they were, not their power. Michael was an archangel, for one, and he was the big soldiery battle angel.
>>47803869
Shots fired! Tfw Angel is more /tg/ than I'll ever be.
>>47804119
This should be a cyoa.
I have decided to grace this general with a CYOA of my own,as I have a few days of freedom.
Tell me, residents, what type of CYOA do you long for?Waifus included as pre-order DLC
>>47804331
How about an idol CYOA?
They're included as throwaway options in lots of CYOAs, but I don't think I've seen one with it as the focus.
>>47804331
>Tell me, residents, what type of CYOA do you long for?
The type that has comfies and one or more of: powers, waifus, lewds.
>>47804299
SHITPOSTING BACK ON THE MENU BOYS
>>47804331
Banana republic CYOA
>>47804331
We need more lewd CYOAs.
>>47803965
Huh, really interesting CYOA. I feel like the balance is pretty spot on as it is, honestly I'm having a hard time making my final decision on a few things.
My one critique is that there seems to be a lot of overlap. Sexuality and Create New are in both headings, and Ignore seems to cover a lot of the same stuff as No Punishment.
>>47804409
I want more "be a fuckslut" CYOAs but honestly the Slut Girl mythos seems to have a pretty solid lock on that.
>>47804409
what kind?
They're weird to make since they attract such a niche group of people
>>47804466
it doesn't cover much potential. Like where fuckslut in high school cyoa? Fuckslut trying hard not to end as sex-slave cyoa
>>47804331
>Anon get teleported to a magical realm
>>47804466
>>47804480
Fuckslut idols whoring themselves to producers.
Fuckslut office lady fucking her way up the ladder.
>>47804409
working on it. monsterboys soon.
>>47803965
>high magic
>amazing
didn't read the other options, i can replicate their effects with magic. i spend my other coins at one of those whirly things at the supermarket where you drop a coin in and it spins around.
>>47804539
Fuckslut magical girls defeating monster by fucking them.
Fucksluts hunting down cute boys to corrupt into their lewd ways.
Fucksluts growing big futa cocks and fucking other fucksluts with them.
>>47804409
Have you tried getting laid instead?
>>47803381
You know, the infamous Harem CYOA is technically a part of this. You are now honor bound to post it. Post it, and set fire to the thread.
>>47804616
Tried that few weeks ago. Lewd CYOAs are better.
>>47804480
>trying hard not to end as sex-slave cyoa
>trying hard
???
Why would I try hard not to get the good end?
>>47804665because in good end you get loving husbando
>>47804616
>People who have sex don't watch porn
>>47804119
10/10
>>47803556
>Shunpo, blade stance
Shunpo past opponent with blade held at neck height. Instant win.
>>47803965
You have "ignore" and "get out of jail free", and "harem" and "magical harem" as a couple of overlapping options.
Also, "Growth" should also affect men.
>>47804506
>>47804409
>>47804387
>>47804374
>>47804363
Thanks guys, you've actually given me a really interesting idea for a CYOA that I think hasn't been explored by now.
I'll be coming back here for more data, so I'll take the temporary name of Evergreen until it's completed.
>>47804714
>implying the anons constantly calling for more lewd Cyoas aren't all thirsty as fuck.
Who are you kidding anon?
>>47804758
It doesn't matter, your premise is false.
>>47803965
thats a lot of god damn options and potential.
What would you like to see in a futanari CYOA?
There is of course going to be the mandatory body type, cock size and balls/no balls options, but what other options would you like to see?
I'm planning to include three different worlds you can choose at the start, that include staying in this world as the first futanari, going to a world where futanari have always existed as a third sex, and the third option is to remain as you are and being transported into a world where everyone else is a futanari.
>>47804409
artist?
>>47804783
I'd like to see it not exist,
Don't.
>>47804783
>What would you like to see in a hermaphrodite CYOA?
I don't.
>>47804753
>Lewd magical realm full of lewd Idol bananas waifus with super powers
Well I can't say that it has been explored.
>>47804806
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=h_kasei
>>47804783
not my cup of tea, therefore it has no right to exist
>>47803965
Reality (1B)
Because quick is good.
Lolify (1S)
Single (2B)
Only women
Growth (3B)
Now it's much easier to tell adult women from children.
Big (2S)
Single (4B)
Only men
Heroes: Mutants (3S)
Hmm... I'd like to get the gender distribution option of Worm without making the powers so great that muscle has no chance of competing against them. Oh well, I'll go for it anyway.
Heroes: Worm (4S)
Only women
Peace: Peace on Earth (5B)
Because war is lame
Peace: Crime (6B)
Crime's lame, too.
Libido: Normalized (5S)
Libido: Dysphoria (7B)
Let's have it affect women
Beauty (6S)
Gender bender (8B)
Shape- oh, I'm out of silver. I'll get everything I want with gold first, then.
Amazing (1G)
Perfect: Body (9B)
Ageless (10B)
Exchanging my other gold for 2 more S.
Second's (?) time the charm (7S)
I was sort of expecting a gold-cost immortality option somewhere, but this is still good. Well, maybe I can get something done with:
Magical Races (8S)
One gender only (11B) - to be payed for by text.
I never did go back for that shapeshifting... oh well.
So now the world is full of oppai loli monstergrill women with weird powers & all the men are huge and muscular. I only wanted the powers of women to even out where men have superior strength, but it seems to have gone into the realm of femdom. Everyone is lewd all the time. Even if they have fancy powers, the monstergrills would rather lewd than hurt anyone. Besides, there's peace and no more crime. Hmm.... if Worm would let me pick the TYPES of powers for each gender, I'd like to give men generic physical boosts to allow for masculine heroic figures to venture off and fight... something 'er other. Hmm... There's not a lot of opposition anymore. Well, they can enter the annual hero competitions or something.
If I had one more S... I'd probably get Induce bend. Considering how drastically different the sexes now are, that would be a really potent power. In fact, I could unlock hidden potential via Worm.
>>47804810
>>47804815
Thanks for the input. I will see if I can make enough content for a third page.
>>47804767
>>47804783
>There is of course going to be the mandatory body type, cock size and balls/no balls options, but what other options would you like to see?
You shouldn't be neglecting tits and their various options.
>>47804820
I never really talked a lot on this general, usually only come for the CYOAs, so I gotta ask, if I post my idea and premise will it get stolen by some other writer, or are writers here more respected?
>>47803690
>Normal everything (40)
>Athletic(Body building)(35), Tech-Mastery(motors)(30), Artistic(drawing)(25)
>Retain Memories (10), 3x Extended life (7)
>Future Love Interest (4)
>Prep School (3)
Retaining my memories will together with all the perks make my new life much easier so I'll be able to deal with Prep School.
>>47804299
Why don't people like her again? She seems pretty chill. Just likes amazons A LOT. Looks like she's into tabletop war games to.
>>47804922
If you make it clear that it is something you're working on, I don't think someone will steal it. Just word it like "I'm gonna make a CYOA about X" instead of "A CYOA about X sure would be nice." If someone really wants to do it, I think they'd ask first. But what do I know, I showed up to the big Valentine's Day Jamboree accidentally wearing the same CYOA as someone else. That was embarrassing. Speaking of which, even if someone copies your idea / your idea has been done before, the execution could be entirely different.
>>47804922
>If I post my idea will it get stolen by some other writer,
I can promise you right now that no, posting
>please make my amazing idea for me!!!
will not have anyone make it for you.
>>47804922
Let me put it this way:
I'm not sure what our big-name writers are exactly like, but let me put it this way: if your idea does get stolen, it won't be stolen by someone who will make it actually good.
>>47804922
That's a good question, The Idea can be stolen but your style and skill at the moment of presenting your CYOA is what differenciate them.And to be more secure present your idea with a WIP if you think it's going to be good
>>47804299
Why does she dress like a dyke? I thought she would be more cutesy.
>>47804331
A CYOA where anons and their waifus go on a quest.
>>47805074
wait, the OP is a picture of Angel?What do I have to pay to get a better picture of you?>tfw you will never seduce a cutie "alleged" lesbian girl into being your waifu
god dammit angel, stop it. Stop making me want things I can't have.
>>47803965
>A PRETTY GOOD WORLD
>Low/Medium Magic
Medium magic seems pretty good
>Politics All/Effective
Enjoy your American-brand FREEDOM, without any of the problems. Effective and unobtrusive government, no fuss no muss.
>Peace on Earth/Crime
Objectively moral and right.
>Beauty
noice
>Intelligence/Remove Stupid
no problems here
>Magical Races
We already have magic, so we might as well throw this in!
>Remove Fetish
Getting rid of Pedos
>Reality
Why wait?
I guess I'll throw down the last few bronze ones on the Perfect/Mind/Ageless thing
No interest in changing the gender ratio or libido or whatever. Not my place to change that stuff. Not all coins need to be spent.
Everybody wakes up tomorrow a smarter, more attractive version of themselves in a world without war or starvation. Sounds pretty swell to me!
Hi guys.
I'm awake now.
Back to it then, the pastebin for the CYOA I'm working on, WIP and no changes from 7 hours ago: http://pastebin.com/ZFN8eeUD
>>47804783
You must make this if for nothing else than all of the assdamage.
>>47803690
>Appearance
I'mma try to build something close to myself, a bit modified.
Normal Hair Color [black] (0)
Normal Eye Color [dark brown] (0)
Glasses (-2)
Pure (4)
Ultra-Sensitive (6)
Trap (9) - Yes please.
>Talent
Un-talent [athletics] (4)
Cute [General] (9) - Cute trap!
Lucky [Deus Ex Machina] (14) - OP desu
>Bonuses
Note to Self (19) [Enjoy your new body and life--don't fuck it up.]
Quick Learner (27) - Saves two points for Bookworm and Tech-Mastery, at the cost of convenience.
Extended Life (28)
>Friends
Future Love Interest + Hero Fusion (37) - I'm gonna be the best trap waifu for the MC.
>School
Fun Kindergarten (40) - F U N P O S T I N G
>Teacher
Sweet Teacher
I'm going to enjoy my new slice-of-life very much. Except this time, I have the whole cake... of life. Cake-of-life?
>>47805241
Will it be imaged?
>>47805243
nah, I'll hide it. I don't care about the cyoa's premise, I don't care about the people who like it and I don't care about the people who dislike it.
>>47805323
I appreciate your stance on the matter.
>>47805304
Maybe.
As I said last thread, me an image editors on this macbook don't get along.
However I don't lack for friends with windows PCs, so I might make some miracles happen.
That or an anon can take it upon himself (or herself, I don't discriminate) to image it. That'd be cool to.
>>47804630
Whenever I post this, I hear the beginning of "Navras" playing in my head.
>>47805264
Marble Dragon CYOA where?
>>47804119
But I'm not dead.
Also, I'm no longer single as of today.
>>47805384
>>47805413
Who's the lucky guy faggot?
>>47805384
>>47805421
>>47805413
Who's the lucky gu
>>47805435
fuck!
>>47805074
>Why does she dress like a dyke?
Gee anon, I wonder.....
>>47805142
Yeah it's me.
>>47805413
Please stop. Your relationship will fail, and we don't need to hear about it.
>>47804783
I think, choice to say "Fuck it" and move on. Cmon, people are scared.
>>47803965
Looks fun!
>Gold
The World: High Magic [Only Males if possible]
Personal: Amazing
>Silver
The World: Beauty
The World: Intelligence
The World: Mutants
The World: Worm [Only Males]
The World: Ratio [1:100 Male/Female]
Personal: Super Power
>Bronze
The World: Growth
The World: Remove Stupid
Personal: Perfect Body
Personal: Perfect Mind
Personal: Ageless
I feel kind of guilty not wishing for no war on earth, no crime, and no extreme selfishness, but that utopia feels too easy (and boring).
Instead it's a world where men are rare and superpowered. Will the sexes resort to violent conflict for domination, or will peace and cooperation reign?
Regardless, a new group of supervillains have risen up, led by the most powerful male. Me.
>>47804783
I'd like to see that. Not to be one of course but to meet them.
>>47805465
No, that's your brother. You like to wear cute, frilly dresses and girly panties.
>>47805534
You sound like a gentleman and a scholar. I hope there are options in the CYOA for people like you.
>>47805558
>You sound like a gentleman and a scholar
You sound like a redditor. Fuck off.
>>47805573
Nah, I think I like it here better than le plebbit.
>>47804630
>>47805384
>Anon desperately wishes he could start shitstorms with this, but nobody gives a fuck anymore.
>>47805413
So all your CYOAs will be infected with your girlfriend's political opinions and you'll be too busy sucking up to her for us. Great.
>>47803965
Reality (2/6/9): So things take effect.
High magic (1/6/9): Easily the most condensed option without silly remove concept abuse assuming a reasonably flexible magic system. If by "archmage" you mean "Epic level 3.5 wizard" for example it's half the list by itself.
Peace with crime (1/6/7): Even next to remove concept this is pretty damn efficient and broad, especially with political options to change the definition of crime.
Remove concept: Oh boy, where to begin, only downside is nothing affects myself and even that can probably be worked around because I'm a freaking archmage. And it's only a bronze for reuses?! Insane.
"Concept of unattractive human beings" (1/5/7) Beauty for cheap.
"Concept of belief in concepts proven false" (1/5/6) Remove stupid for cheap, probably removal of religions for cheap(which removes a source of conflict and social backwardness) .
"Concept of humans less intelligent then the current most intelligent human" (1/5/5): Smart for cheap
"Concept of monosexuality" (1/5/4): Removal of another source of conflict and hate, makes threesomes easier.
"Concept of disease" (1/5/3): Probably wouldn't have lasted long with high magic, but just to be safe and to avoid magic diseases.
"Concept of low human libido": (1/5/2): Libido for cheap.
"Concept of selfishness": (1/5/1) In a world with high magic, we don't need people not sharing.
"Concept of monogamy": (1/5/0): Harem for everyone!
"Concept of sex taboo" (1/4/1): Completely unnecessary with STI's gone and high magic + 5 billion geniuses to solve population issues.
"Concept of addiction" (1/4/0): To avoid everyone fucking themselves to death.
"Concept of tradition" (1/3/1): Old values are pointless now.
"Concept of short-term thinking before long term problems" (1/3/0): another flaw that causes long term issues.
"Concept of mental illness" (1/2/1): Another awful thing gone.
"Concept of old age".. etc: I could go on but char limit.
>>47805573
Why don't you? Nobody likes an overly hostile douchebag.
>>47805615
It would be easy to cause a shitstorm with it. What you do is post the individual cards out of order. That will trigger people's OCD so much.
>>47805500
I'm just a little happy, anon. Don't be so rude.
My next small-ish CYOA is going to be centered around being a mook. Specifically, Guard Duty. That argument with that "no-mook policy" anon the other day gave me some good ideas for one. I'm thinking of involving some number crunching with juggling your pay versus expenses to maintain your little squad of unextraordinary guards.
>>47805465
I was excited that anons were right and people in cyoag were just a pretenders. But alas
>>47805706
>I'm just a little happy
Get ready to stop watching anime because it's sexist.
>>47803965
Beauty (2 - 5 - 10)
Ratio (2 - 4 - 10) 99F:1M
Lolify, single (2 - 3 - 9) only men
Big, single (2 - 2 - 8) only women
Intelligence, single (2 - 1 - 7) only men
Politics (1 - 1 - 7)
Peace on Earth, crime (1 - 1 - 5)
Fetish, all of the yes (1 - 0 - 4)
Perfect, body, mind, ageless (1 - 0 - 1)
Turn that last gold coin into 2 silvers (0 - 2 - 1)
Ignore, fetish ignore (0 - 1 - 0)
Beauty (0 - 0 - 0)
I gave men intelligence because I felt they deserve something back for being shrunk.
The world is /rr/ now. Also libertarian leaning.
>>47805654
Anon, it can't physically affect things.
So addiction, low libido, unattractive human beings, less intelligent humans, old age, and disease are all gonna be there.
But nobody knows what they are anymore.
You've doomed us all.
>>47803556
That one, Back Alley and Crossworlds would be cool to see updates for. Don't care about seeing anything Hero Academy related due to all the rpers ruining it. Couldn't give a shit about quiets. It'l be the same bullshit as his last one.
>>47805634
>implying I share what I do on this website with anyone in real life
I wouldn't mind doing this if it weren't a one way ticket to being labeled a gimp. Just look at the transsexual argument that happened last thread.
>>47805413
That's a lie, I've died long time ago
>>47805658
I'm not posting this until all the redditors are gone.
>>47805751
Doesn't matter. She'll force you to think and act like her in real life, and then you'll act like that here too.
>>47803965
>Coings: 2G 6S 10B
>The WORLD
>High Magic 1G 5S 9B
>Magical Races 1G 4S 9B
>Beauty 1G 3S 9B
>Reality 1G 3S 8B
>PERSONAL
>Amazing 3S 8B
>Perfect 3S 7B
>Mind 3S 6B
>Ageless 3S 5B
>Magical Harem 2S 5B
>LEFTOVER
>THE WORLD
>Superpowers: Mutants 1S 5B
>Worm 5B
>PERSONAL
>Harem 4B
I've got 4 leftover bronze points but I don't mind. I've got enough Personal Powers to make my way in this world, and the world itself is a vast improvement over what we had.
I love the cyoa btw. Excellent work.I was the one who suggested using a slot machine system with coins, and you really went above and beyond that suggestion.
>>47805772
Someone sounds a little paranoid.
I've been in a smothering relationship before. I know what to avoid now and when to call it quits.
I will never understand the appeal for yanderes. It's literally the worst kind of relationship you can have.
>>47805757And another CYOA is dead because it's practically impossible to tell whether someone on an anonymous image board frequents another specific website or not.
>>47805741
That may be what was intended, but that's not how it reads.
>Remove one concept from existence
not
>Remove one political, organizational or ideological concept from existence.
May I recommend a rewrite? RAW nothing I did was against the rules.
>>47805536
>Hypercube (this is way too handy for a personal servant, or anyone), Stamina Boost, Butler
>Melee weapons, Cleaning, Gardening, Grace
>Cat Ears
I feel like either some things need to be knocked down in cost or we need a bit more credits.
It's hard to balance being a battle maid/butler while being a functional maid/butler.
>>47805718
you have a funny idea of what girls are like. He's told nothing about her yet you already assume.
>>47805706
>>47805706
Sounds awesome. Number crunching and triggering pansies who don't get their way are two of my favorite things in a CYOA.
>>47805757
I can't read it, but I'm choosing the bottom left corner because the source image is from the same anime my waifu's from.
>>47805757
>>47805825
Should probably just replace "from existence" with "from the minds of everyone forever" or somesuch.
>>47805536
>No, that's your brother.
Why would you say that!? You can totally see mywaist-to-chest ratio.;_;
>>47805757
You do realize the full-size image comes up on Google Image Search, right?
>>47805788
>you went above and beyond
aww, thanks bruv (I already have a waifu though)
I'd like to believe it was pretty good consider I got the idea from that
>I'll use my second wish to make all straight guys have micropenisesgirl(?)
(I'll go over the builds in a moment)
>>47805757
Hate me, senpai. Bully me until I cry.
>>47805935
I don't hate you, I'm just disappointed in you.
>>47805902
Holy shit, that was me too. You serious or are you messing with me?
>>47805935
That isn't the only cyoa I've found on another website!
>>47804212
>>47803642
>>47803773
>>47803935
The angel hierarchy is divided into three ranks:
>1st sphere
The big three are seraphim, ophanim (also called thrones), and cherubim. These are the weird ones, with cherubs having multiple heads, thrones being wheels, and seraphs actually theoretically being relatively normal; the only details explicitly stated being that they are fiery and have six wings (often times given serpent-like details due to the origin of the word seraph, though). All three of these stay with god pretty much 24/7
>2nd sphere
These are the guys that everybody forgets about, generally just making sure heaven is in order. You got Powers (aka authorities), who are pretty much inter-planar police, though they're also responsible for distributing some power down on earth behind the scenes. They look like traditional soldiers more than anything. Then there's Virtues, also called Strongholds; we hear pretty much nothing about them (no physical description), but they may be literal miracle-workers. And Dominions/Lordships mainly boss other angels around; even though it's stated these seldom show themselves, it's also stated these look like traditional, majestic winged humans, but with orbs of light decorating their weapon of choice
>3rd sphere
These are the lessers that actually get shit done, and include archangels (not to be confused with Archangels), angels, and principalities (rulers). All of these are traditional looking angels, with the distinction for principalities being that they have royalty gear like crowns and whatnot.
Outside the ranks are guardian angels, of which everybody gets one. These are winged people
and there's Archangels (not to be confused with archangels), of which there are no more than seven (only one is certain, others are implied or vary by translation etc). These are also humans with wings.
Of note is that it's possible nobody really had halos. That's just our way of depicting divinity
>>47805833
There's that, but I always wanted to see a mook-type CYOA, especially one where you equip a squad of them.
Not a lot of people here seem to appreciate the working class. I'm also going to focus on writing in-depth character descriptions for the squad mates, as I want to try my hand at writing more compelling characters.
>>47804119
Can we make a CYOA out of this?
>>47805706
Well there goes my goon cyoa
>>47805961
That reminds me of how fucking good the Angels in Bayonetta were.
>>47805961
Yeah, my choirs are going to look a little bit like this. Nine classes divided into three categories, and then two non-category classes.
>>47805706
>"no-mook policy" anon
I don't remember arguing with you, so does that mean there's more than one of us?
Once again, if someone has that old battlemage cyoa with a dead mentor and the "beast" please post it. I remember it being really good, until an update wrecked it and I want to see if my memories are correct.
>>47805435
>Who's the lucky guy, faggot?
>Who's the lucky 'guy faggot'?
Works in both ways.Also, is SDA actually homo?
>>47804980
It's just one very angry very loud anon who's deathly scared of women
>>47806014
It's entirely possible there's more than one very special little boy around here.
>>47806053
SDA is a girl!
>>47804980
idk desu
but from what i hear, a common complaint is that she basically posts the exact same build for every cyoa
>>47806072
No he's not. He's into anal and redheads.Good taste.
>>47804724
Opponent has iron skin. Blade breaks. He then shumpos his iron fist up your ass.
>>47805989
Just make it. I'm gunning to low fantasy in a very specific setting. There essentially won't be any magic, and there's only going to be humans. The point is to be an ordinary guard or soldier, nothing more.
Boring stuff.
>>47804724
>not being a 600lbs landwhale
>not picking Iron Body
>not picking Shunpo
>not dropping yourself on enemies from above
No chance of survival.
>>47805870
In his and your defense, you need to be informed of that, to see it.
It's really the clothes.
Damn them.
>>47806072
If that were the case these threads had dozens of guys like that one cunt obsessing over angelanon. Such a concentration of pathetic testicle brains would tear space-time a new one.
>>47805965
I'm happy for you.
I hope you can live the love life most of us here can't, but if you come back brokenhearted, at least make good grimdark CYOAs then.
>>47806133
Then why make it?
>>47806094
>poop dick
>good taste
>>47806094
Unfortunately, she's blonde. She's cute though, came from a farm in some small unknown town far up north.
>>47805961
>They look like traditional soldiers more than anything.
Dude, second sphere looks like glimmers of light and wisps of mist and stuff.
>>47805706
Remember what Metallica once sang: It's never as sweet as it seems.
Be happy while you can.
>>47806171
>Yuri
So do you girls just rub your vaginas together until one of you squirts into the other's, or were the ancient greek right and do you use your clits to somehow fuuck eachother?
I'm happy for you though.
>>47803395
Hey, the mystery box didn't fuck me, figuratively. Nice.
>>47806171
Sounds suspiciously german to me.
>>47806164
Like I said, I want to try my hand at making the CYOA appeal through an engaging number crunch/resource management system with characters who are interesting without needing your typical methods of appealing.
I don't care if it's not well received, I know the audience here isn't into that sort of thing. I just want to make it.
>>47805384
>Music
Because I've always wished I'd spent time practicing and the violin is cool as heck.
>Gym
Because a healthy body is a healthy mind.
>Yamashiro Nana
Fit girl who is easy-going at home? Sounds nice.
>Maruyama Miyako
>A fit, tall, well endowed woman who can sexually dominate me? Yes please.
>Ogawa Sakurako
Since I got that violin I think we can make beautiful music together.
I would not give up any of the benefits to look at their personal secrets but I'm going to anyway.
>>47805421
DarYamashiro Nana, rolled a 1. Not too bad. Just hope she doesn't kill me by accident over sneezing.
Maruyama Miyako. Rolled a 3. Not going to be a big issue either since I think things will move forward rather swiftly. Hopefully the penthouse is big enough for the two of us. Would probably do wonders for Miyako's self-worth if she moved out of there.
Ogawa Sakurako. Rolled a 2. Women who can punch me to death seems to be a thing that keeps popping up. Maybe I can get her to leave the gang and spend time with me. We could work out together and whatnot.
>>47806216
Will it be completely impossible to become extraordinary, or is it a matter of number crunching and minmaxing?
>>47805413
Congratulations. May she not arrive at random and bring with her a bunch of Irish with her.
>>47804224
that "change is good" and "I totally didn't rip of Magical Realm, look, I even chose not to include that option!"
>>47804227
My excuse is I did it while drunk.
You should definitely say what your political views are. The whole purpose of the cyoa is to start discussion, whether for good or worse.
And yes, it's totally fair you spread the 100 WORDS, not characters, out like that. So long as you don't post
>1
>2
>3
, it's all good.
>exchange bronze for silver
won't happen.
>>47804451
>Balance is on point
neat. Drunk balance is ok?
>overlap
drunk
>hard time making choices
perfect.
>>47804773
thanks. I hope that means you like it?
>>47804843
so you make Monstergirl Encyclopedia, but the guys aren't manlets? Nice.
I don't personally see why you'd want cool powers, but also peace, but that's just me.
>>47805188
yep, that seems really nice.
>>47805952
Nope, I mean it seriously. That comment alone spawned the CYOA.My brain is fucked.
No fucking joke, man/womanplease be a girl though."Some sort of magical slot machine and a pouch full of copper, some silver and a small amount of gold coins. You should allow us to have some personal gain though: recreating the world is fun but if I'm still (relatively) average it's a bit meh."
Didn't save the post about being insanely cruel to straight men.
>>47806217
Obvious solution is to set Nana against Sakurako
>>47806207
Nah, our stereotypical farm girls come from the high south, not the north.
>>47806173
cite your sources?
>>47804783
Retractable cock.
Customize taste.
"She has boobs, so it's not gay, right?" effect.
"I'm not a lesbian, but there's just something about her" effect.
Keep it secret effect.
Minor (to major?) domination effect.
>>47805965
>Not a lot of people here seem to appreciate the working class.
Carry on the struggle, comrade!
Also answers >>47806251's question.
>>47805935
>not being a loli
Though, I don't like the wording of "you can't age." I don't mind it so much for Overpowered Loli because of the supernatural nature of vampires. I assume they don't get cancer or anything, making me think the option has a longer net lifespan than >not being a loli. Still, both are good options. I never liked sunlight anyhow. Hmm... Maybe I should reconsider Overpowered Loli?
>>47806251
I'm going to dissapoint you:Bi guy who wanted to the best of both worlds by shrinking only Straight guys.
I'm both the shrinker and the guy who made that slot machine comment. What a strange coincidence. Once again, you did something amazing with it. Hope you end up making more cyoas.
>>47806257
That's the reason.
Though east qualifies as well here...
>>47806251
I've noticed that every single CYOA you've made has something about you (swearing you're not) drunk while making the CYOA.
Do you have a creator name? You don't seem like Box Wine.
>>47803352
So, if someone made a CYOA centered on 'theme parks', would you prefer a "Make your own Disneyland" CYOA or just a "generic themepark" CYOA?
>>47806354
Generic themepark allows for more versatility.
>>47806251
>I don't personally see why you'd want ool powers, but also peace
Heroic fights are all good in fiction, but the reality is that people die when they are killed & that's no good. Having peace does remove a lot of the action from powers, but that's the price to pay for safety.
>>47806354
generic themepark
>>47806354
I'd like it to somehow be an actual mini magical world, disguised as a theme park. So Disney, and the magic IS real.
>>47806354
Best of both worlds award points based on 'mode': Disney mode, generic mode, Roller Coaster tycoon mode...
>>47806154
Yeah, I'm not great with fashion.....
>>47806195Doesn't know what tongue is for...
>>47806390
It's for tasting delicious food, faggot.
>>47806390Gayanon here, I barely know what a vagina looks like: like a bunch of roast beef with a tiny sausage hidden in the upper flaps? Don't blame me for not knowing how lesbian sex works.
>>47806354
I think you need to define "Disneyland".
>>47806390
>>47806418
Fuck off faggots.
>>47806418
You stick your tongue into the vagina and move it around. Or lick the clitoris.
>>47806321
>Hope you end up making more cyoas.
>>47806348
>Do you have a creator name?
you're really, really fucking cruel, then.
>attracted to girls
>doesn't have a micropenis unlike the 99,5% other non-gay men
There's a special hell for you
>>47806439
I don't follow.
>>47803965
>magic
>it's just "like technology but different" and basic evocation
Why even include it then?
>Harem and Magical Harem both
Why?
>Induce Bend has no restrictions, but has an add-on that removes restrictions
Pretty sure this is a bug.
>>47805465
Nice to see you again, and posting with your trip so we know it's you and not those pretenders. As to your other post I don't see why any society given enough time/resources wouldn't progress in various ways.
>>47806451
Your name is "You're Really Really Fucking Cruel Then?"
>>47805413
Grats. I laugh at the people who will razz you for it. Then again I laugh at a lot of people here, so that's pretty normal.
>>47806462
Haven't you ever heard of "eating someone out?"
Well, I don't have a vagina, so I can't really explain it further than that.
>>47806423
Make your own Disneyland would basically involve picking past, present, and concept art attractions to include in your own disney park.
Like having an Indiana Jones ride, functioning Rocket Rods, Jungle Cruise, etc.
in current draft phase, a generic themepark is looking at a system that's like:
>Ride type: Description
>Bonus Upgrade
>Bonus Upgrade
And in general would leave more the imagination, I suppose.
Organizing and defining specifics, man, always a pain with CYOAs.
>>47806382
Well, "Actual Disney Magic" would be an upgrade for a Disney park CYOA.
(And the train would be a free option, as you would be compelled by the spirit of Walt Disney to include at least one train in the park)
>>47806244
Pretty much impossible but I'm not overlooking it.
Minmaxing, sure. But the goal is to just minmax so you can live decently, not so you can be a crazy adventurer. Your companion/squad mate choices will mostly be based on whether or not you'll get along with them during the year or so.
I mean, job choices will be things like gate watch or patrolling downtown or bodyguarding. I just want to shine a light on all of these untold stories that happen in all of these fantasy settings, you know?
I've found that most of my builds in recent CYOAs, even Hero Academy, are just ordinary guys. I didn't post mine because I thought that nobody would care, it's just another ordinary knight with no outstanding traits.
>>47806245
Thanks. I don't mind the Irish, though.
>>47806390
The one thing I think about when presented with these "become a girl" options is what clothes I'd buy. You have it hard, honestly.
>>47806451
Don't pretend you didn't think that shrinking stuff was incredibly hot, anon. It was a beautiful power fantasy for Bi and Gay guys, completely fucking over Straight guys but who cares. Who knows, you could be that one normal Straight guy and drown in sex like us.So what's your next cyoa going to be about?
>>47805669
After seeing 18+page cyoas lately, no one would give a fuck.
>>47806138
Shadow gives you enough awareness that Shunpo lets you pseudoteleport away.I only picked those two because Shadow was useful, Shunpo had synergy, and I don't want no trabbu.
>>47806512
Why would I eat out of someone? That's sounds so unhygenic.
>>47806560
Not literally, anon.
>>47806521
I'd probably go with generic themepark then.
>>47806216
>interesting without needing your typical methods of appealing
>typical methods of appealing
So no women, powers, immortality, breasts, asses, cocks, children, technology, magic, tragedy, conflict, or personality? Good luck with that. Though I'm not really rooting for you so much as idly curious what you'll come up with.
>>47806390
You know what?
Let's go shopping one of these days.
