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What cyoas do you guys want to see revised?
>>47791208
Pride, forever and ever.
>>47791208
Would you guys prefer a generic giant mecha CYOA, or a Pacific Rim CYOA?
>>47791260
Generic Mecha.
>>47791208
Might as well post part two
>>47791260
Pacific Rim
>>47791260
Generic Mecha; haven't seen Pacific Rim
>>47791260
Generic Mecha for sure.Fuck Pacific Rim desu
Quick, I need one more neat monster ability/body part for my CYOA.
>>47791260
Generic two-pilot mecha fighting kaiju.
>>47791260
Pacific rim is cool, but generic mecha is more versatile.
>>47791322
The giant fucking tail from this thing.
>>47791021
What exactly did we Ej Har heroes do to make you hate us this much?
We've just got different priorities than you, that's all. We're definitely not "terrorists".
>>47791084
Your dad was murdered by an Ej Har hero? Jeez, sorry to hear that. If you've got any clues, mind sharing them? As a member of the Disciplinary Squad, I'm not gonna let a murderer ruin our reputation!
... Well, not that we had much of a reputation to begin with, but still!
>>47791351
The funny thing is that he keeps treating Ej Har like they're the middle eastern school when Box is making an ACTUAL desert school for next time.
>>47791351
I have this weirdly shaped anti-magic sword, and I know that the killer has the other half!
I'm not sure who murdered him, but I heard rumors that if I came to Ej Har, I'd find answers.
Your Student Government President looks mighty suspicious though.
>>47791372
He seems to have Ej Har and Odesium confused since he's talking about blowing people up and stuff.
>>47791351
>responding to posts from last thread
>while the last thread is still up
anon please. Dead threads stay dead. You don't bring up old shit.
>>47791382
Hey! We at Odesium are much more advanced than that!
When we blow things up, we always keep ourselves a safe distance away!
>>47791396
And the only explosives at Ej Har are either exploding spells or traps, and nobody is stupid enough to trigger their own explosive trap.
>>47791376
What, Prez? No way!
I mean, I can look into it for you, but I really don't think they did it.
>>47791396
Now that's a blatant lie! I damn near lost my arm when I studied with you guys!
Hell, I still have burn marks from it!
>>47791469
Well, those who pay attention in class keep themselves a safe distance away!
>>47791469
Well, she did announce to the school on a giant pedestal that she'd tell me who killed my dad if I managed to beat all the members of the Student Council in duels, so...
Not thirty posts in and we already have a shitstorm.
Might as well post a cyoa and be back in a moment.
>>47791571
shitstorm? chill, mang. we're just roleplaying.
>>47791585
and it's old...really really old. make a hero academy rp thread. fuck.
>>47791606
Would be a good idea.
>>47791606
that's not a bad idea...
but everyone who cares about hero academy already just hangs out here anyway.
but maybe we can work it out.
does /tg/ allow rp threads? i've never seen one, but then again, i don't really check other threads that much.
>>47791535
I thought you were going to investigate...
You don't like rational ways, do you?
>>47791535
could you insert an actual good anime into the hero academy setting instead of shit like klk?
Finally got this here OC in a more or less serviceable state.
It's not really finished as I have companions, perks, anon's valiant escapewaifusand more in the works but it's going to be a while before those are done and I feel this is perfectly playable as is.
Builds, complaints, feedback, even more ideas for augmentations are all very much welcome.be gentle, anon, this is my first OC
>>47791511
Hey, I was paying attention!
Do you know how hard it is to keep nitroglycerin from exploding while you're vaulting across rooftops while also trying to stay out of sight? Very!
>>47791535
Oh, you serious?
Must've been before I joined, then... Wait, but I'm on the Student Council now! You're not gonna fight me, are ya'!?
>>47791652
>high CHA
But i like this patron god thing, is there a follow up?
>>47791606
>>47791643
>>47791662
FUCK that shit. Exiling popular CYOAs just leads to shit like jumpchain.
>>47791662
Power Armor had a rp/pacyoa thread for months. Accidental Magical girl still has a thread.
If I were to make a CYOA that would stat you IRL, how angry would you faggots be?
>>47791728
Someone made it on a dare and no.
>>47791747
Just sounds boring.
>>47791675
NONSENSICAL IS OUR THING!It's a Hiroyuki Imaishi anime. Since when is it ever rational?
>>47791714
Only the top four members.
>>47791747
Autism Prison kind of was a variant of IRL statting, wasn't it?
>>47791712
>Basing it on real life stuff.
>Basing it on how GOOD you are in real life.
Anon, this is a bad idea. The only CYOA like this that remotely worked was Autism Prison because it gave us more points for being shit.Also why are you treating IQs of 130 as bad? That's remarkably good when the average is barely 100.
Daily reminder all other schools are batshit insane and filled with autists.
Odesium is the only sane hero academy school and actually is working on ways to save lives.
>>47791712
too much math.
>>47791739
No. Popular CYOAs have been exiled before and then come back when the fuss has died down some. There were threads for Conduit and Stardust, for example.Now, these weren't exactly GOOD threads, but the current level of thread content that's just hero academy/builds for hero academy/rp about the builds is a little extreme currently.
>>47791818
Yes. It's you bitches throwing a fit because you can't ignore conversations you don't like. It floods the board with permanent cancer.
>>47791801
St. Flares:
>kids with chuunibyou
Lunestier:
>corrupt politicians
Odesium:
>mad scientists
Ej Har:
>do you even have to ask?
Uzuza:
>outdated street fighting men
??? (new school):
>holier-than-thou /pol/acks
Yeah, sorry. Everyone's batshit insane here.
>>47791801
>to save lives.
No, it's filled with crazy robots that want to turn world into machines, they are worst of all
>>47791845
*one crazy robot
>>47791790
It does give points for having autism though.
>>47791845
Some lives are more important then others.
>>47791712
I'm sorry, but as another anon said, the scoring system just doesn't work. Most people here won't score that well, which will decrease the popularity of this CYOA. Also, CYOAs generally shouldn't be based on how you are now in RL, that clashes with the escapism wish-fufilment nature of this form of entertainment.
In addition, the upgrades are far too expensive. For an average person, having a crossbow in your arm and not needing to sleep gives you a 1/3 chance of dying.
The only way to have a decent score is to be afflicted with a ton of mental illnesses. Given the relatively weak nature of the powers, it just isn't worth it.
Remove the whole scoring system, just give points to spend on powers. Make the powers cheaper. If you keep the system as it is, I really don't think anons will like it.
>>47791891
>The only way to have a decent score is to be afflicted with a ton of mental illnesses
>Most people here won't score that well
Anon, have you forgotten where you are?
>>47791652
>Unique feature 13
>Biological cycle 9
>Cha +4
>Lifespan +1
>Int +3
>Wis +1
I don't know what the difference between the two is
>Mathematicha +3
>Imperia +5
>Esthetica +2
>>47791763
Oh, phew!
... I still can't allow you to attack other students, though.
>>47791891
Sorry, a roughly 1/3 chance of being crippled
>>47791891
I think there's some potential in having the start of a CYOA be based on your real-life self. Seems like it might help with the self insertion part, like it's "really happening". It would need a better and more generous scoring, though.
>>47791904
>Anon, have you forgotten where you are?
Well, memes aside, being socially inept is not a mental illness.
>>47791918
Did you miss the memo where she declared a week-long free-for-all where beating as many other people up as possible got you higher in the Student Council?
>>47791904
Many people here might have one or two (an autist with anxiety? sure) but not the 3-5 you would need to get a decet power selection and not die or be crippled
>>47791790
Theadmittedly flawedassumption is that people of average intelligence would have an easier time just going with the flow, whereas genius level intellect would, assumedly, be more in control of their emotions. This leaves above average to realize the danger they're in and freak out accordingly.
Also, anon, I'm giving points for mental illnesses and shit. I'm pretty sure manic depression doesn't make you "better" as a person.
>>47791208
>>47791267
and the counterpart made by somebody with better grammar
>>47791945
Most people here don't have an actual mental illness, they just failed at life.
>>47791712
Autism cyoa works because it takes various scourges from groups around here and makes a bizzare adventure out of it.My stand is a super strong frog man, his power is a shotgun.
This on the other hand- eh. Could be done better by a more abstract system.
>>47791935
I was an exchange student at Odessium.
She seriously did that? Gonna need to talk to her about that, that's definitely abuse of authority.
>>47791963
Don't remind me.
>>47791962
>>47791945
115-135 is above average, though.
Like, far above average. World average is like 100.
>>47791891
>Also, CYOAs generally shouldn't be based on how you are now in RL, that clashes with the escapism wish-fufilment nature of this form of entertainment.
My next CYOA will at least make people feel conscious about their stats.
>>47791838
Don't forget those fucking ej har terrorists
>>47791964
A more abstract system?
Do elaborate.
>>47791999
We aren't terrorists, stop spreading that damn rumor!
>>47791712
I like it
>>47791652
Unique Taboo
Proffesion Typecast
str 4
Con 3
Dex 5
Int 3
Wis 5
Cha 3
Lifespan 5
Will power 5
Lemuria 5
Ethica 5
I made a race of monk people.
neat
>>47791838
There are two new schools.
>>47792018
Say you do it upon nearby objects, room size, length of fingernails, living family members, abstraction of birth date, blood type, etc, etc. There's a number of things that could be picked that could really make things interesting, while not necessarily binding it to the individual's form.
>>47791975
They called it the "Naturals Election."
...Oh. Naturals Election, Natural Selection. I just got that.
And her mother owns the world's largest corporation, so good luck with that.
>>47792029
Oh really Ej har. I bet you also say you don't scream "Ej ACKBAR!" When you are fighting? I know you are trying to blow us all up take away our freedums and impose Sharia law on us, like you have at your school. Damn towel heads.
>>47792086
Seriously, Box is working on an ACTUAL desert school next. Save the terrorists jokes for them.
>>47791712
final score before augmentation -10%. Fuck this shit, doesnt even give me a chance
Rolled 97 (1d100)
>>47791712
>+10% for age
>Not sure what my IQ is, but it's around 130-140, so I won't make changes based on that
>-55% from Swarm and Ouroboros
>-5% from 2x Clockwork (Lungs and Heart)
Literal 50/50 shot, let's go.
>>47792095
> Implying we don't need a real Gaelic school for our terrorist sterotypes
> COME OUT YE BLACK AND TANS
>>47792100
You're Dead Jim.
>>47792100
Good night sweet Prince.
>>47792086
I seriously don't get what you're talking about. I mean, we've been devil worshipers and heretics and such before, but this is... How do you even come up with this stuff?
>>47792076
Oh, how wonderful...
>>47792100
RIP
>>47792098
But, anon, that's still 40 points worth of augments with a 50/50 chance of being perfectly fine.
>>47792086
What is "Ackbar"? What is "Sharia law"? What is "towel head"?
You talk like you're from some crazy alternate universe, mang.
>>47792098
>Make no changes
>Roll 99
>Become paralyzed
>>47792100
>>47792140
>>47792098
Costs are rather stringent. Will take care of that.
I just want to talk about hero academy
>>47791712
>My IRL suffering transfers to points.
HAHA. TIME FOR POINTS!
>overcome adversity
All.
>physically fit
Was until the "life threatening illness". Still currently not though.
>under 30
Yes
>suffer from
Four or maybe five of those. Three at least confirmed but one assumed due to family.
>Currently 190%
>Are you remarkably physically unfit?
How is this counted? I'd say at the moment I'm as strong as the average guy due to exercising for three years but I've no stamina... I think I'd pass this check.
>IQ in the 115-135 range?
If an online test is to be believed I score at 116. Best I have to tell.
>Currently 185%
EVERYTHING IS COMING UP ANON! But-
>If you feel there is something relevant that has no been mentioned, feel free to add and subtract
I'm almost thirty pounds underweight. Would you say that's worth 5% or 10%? Still rocking 180% or 175% either way.
Will do a build when it's finished. Other anons might not like the idea but I think you've done a great job. Reminds me of the karma CYOA.
>>47792203wait till 300 post, then you can talk
>>47792203
Start a Hero Academy thread.
It's somewhat awkward to discuss it in the middle of all these other CYOAs, so it having its own thread would actually be kinda nice.
>>47792246
>Trying to exile popular CYOA again.
Fuck off.
>>47791962
>Even thinking about an act that falls under the domain of the seven deadly sins will drain your power.
God damnit. A shame, really liked the aura of purity power.
Will probably just take Diligence and train constantly for more power.
>>47791818
Quiet had it's own thread when it got out of control like Hero Academy has. Once that died down it showed up now and then back in the regular cyoa threads.
>>47792279
>People talking about CYOAs I don't like are out of control.
MASSIVE autism.
>>47791837
Like your spechul snowflake rping isn't flooding this board with shit also.
>>47792309
>Board
Putting it in another thread hurts the board more than you not whining about a few posts you don't like.
I'm sure CYOA's can coeexist, right guys
>>47791924
Heh yeah it's like, Ok i bought a single organ so I can survive and that's it.....yeap really super there.
>>47792095
I can't work on shit at the moment because my AC decided to go the way of a shamed samurai.
I got a guy to come tomorrow so expect the reworked drawbacks then.
Rolled 93 (1d100)
>>47791712
Well shit, I got that Tool referencebest song of that album.And Sandra probably is also a reference to me, but...
+10% for age.
Last time I checked my IQ (years ago, almost a decade), it was like 132 or 133. Fuck. -10%
Augmentations:
>-10% Siren
>-10% Atlas
>-7.5% Horus
>-15% Sherlock
By needing a lot of iron in my diet, what does that entail? If I just regularly take iron supplements, is that enough?
That's 57.5%. Wish me luck, comrades.
>>47792166
Screw that, I love this CYOA.
>>47792353
Looking forward to screaming at you for fucking over my build by nerfing shit way too hard.
>>47792360
>Rolled 93
>>47792219
>I'm as strong as the average guy due to exercising for three years but I've no stamina.
-15 pts bucko.
>>47792360
I'll play song at your funeral
>>47792360
RIP SDA
He really did die of ass cancer this time.
Rolled 98 (1d100)
>>47791712
PUNCHMASTER BUILD
>life threatening illness
>Under 30
>sheltered
110%!
>Atlas
>Man of Steel
>Herakles
>Clockworkx2
>Caliburn's Scabbard
Got a 65% chance here!
>>47792308
Don't be a dipshit. Last 5 threads have been hero academy shit. Take it somehwhere else. It's not even discussing the cyoa it's jerking off in each others mouths with your spechul snowflakes rp faggotry.
>>47792360
>Proclaim your love for it being too harsh
>Die horribly
Fitting end.
>>47792405
please play this song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f-3_pZcFjow
>>47792318
Yeah right. Tell that to the towergirls people who were pressured to move to their own thread. They and the board are doing just fine.
>>47792422
>>47792360
>>47792100
>Everybody rolls higher 90
Just drop a nuke on us already, end our suffering.
>>47792425
>Last five
Last was half other shit, a quarter branching hearts, and a quarter hero academy. Last two before that were arguing about Branching Heart. Where are you getting your bullshit from?
>>47792353
What's the plan for the rework? Because while min-maxers annoy me, I don't think they need to be punished. Just more explicitly state the negative aspect of the drawback and that there is no way around it. That should be fine, right?
>>47792360
You're Dead too Jim.
>>47792422
Congratulations! Corpseboy!
>>47792261
Chastity is very much hardmode, but it's also potentially the most powerful. At full strength you can erase a full-power sin in 10 seconds. At long range even.
I've been considering making an add-on for that that adds boon:
Holy Gifts (Choose 1):
Notes: Charity is allowed to own a gift, and kindness cannot gift a Holy Gift.
Universal Focus- A shard of the altar of diligence, holding this aloft will cause the infinite energy of the universe to flow through you. Even as one of the chosen, your body isn't made to handle this much energy coming in all at once
Shoulder Angel- will do her best to keep you on track, give you tips about working with your restriction, and may even help out more directly, though she's not much of a fighter. She can die, in which case she respawns 40 hours later, descending from heaven to join back up with you.
Little Red Box- delay losing your power when breaking your rules
Rosary Beads- Holding these while praying at a church lets you teleport yourself and up to twelve nearby people to any other church in the world.
The Colt- A revolver with six bullets. Each bullet will kill whatever's shot with it instantly, no matter what it is.
Pure Holy Energy- You begin with your powers as if you had been doing good for a year
Second Chance- The first time you die, you awaken three days later in a cave in the middle-east
The Reward- You may select a mortal to become the unnoficial Virtue of Karma, who reflects damage back on attackers. Doesn't count towards kindness' power
Plus 2 or three more that I haven't come up with yet
>>47792430
But that's exactly the fun of it.
Some of you guys are too afraid of losing.
>>47792447
Bullshit ever since Hero Academy came out it's been almost all rp bullshit every thread. Branching hearts took up some room but has died off and yet here we are, with moar HA bs.
>98
>93
>97
This doctor has a 100% Mortality rate.
>>47792495
>Make up bullshit
>Keep spewing butthurt when it's pointed out you're wrong
>>47792516
All you have to do is go look at the threads since HA started and you'll see I'm right, unlike you and your made up crap.
I just want a necromancer cyoa update.
Is it too much to ask?
>>47792398
Still have 160% or 165% with the weight thing accounted for.
Rolled 34 (1d100)
>>47792432
Lets see if I'll survive
>lower class 110
>Under 30 120
>Antisocial disorder+ paranoia 140
>Not super genius 135
Atlas -10 125/135
Man of Steel -20 105/135
Sting Like a bee (right hand) 95/135
Horus 87.5/135
I can't die, I have song to play for our falen brotha
>>47792502
I think that's hilarious
>>47792545
That is very true, Better then most. Good luck with your roll.
Was this ever finished?
>>47792542
It is if you're not willing to do it yourself. And that's coming from someone who made changes to other people's CYOAs.
>>47792563
Sadly no. There was a fan addon and that's about it. So many good cyoas that were never finished.
>>47791571
I prefer the OG gods. Amlia a best
Though Ezaja does still hold a special place in my heart
>>47792490
Interesting, I myself have been working on some boons for the seven sins cyoa remake. So far, however, I only have a few. In addition, to gain one of them,you will need to sacrifice your companion. I can give you more information if you want.
>>47792550
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZTidn2dBYbY
>>47792136
Ej Har sounds kind of like ej hal. That sounds slightly arabic. Thats why us good Uzorans think you are all terrorists.
>>47792148
Ackbar means great, sharia law is what rules you guys have at your school it is super restrictive with women being slaves and having to wear bags on their heads.
>>47791712
Severely decreased costs.
Thoughts?
>>47792353
Yo Box! Are Ki and Magic mutually exclusive, because I kind of want to do a build that uses both imbuement and enhancement using exchange, but don't know if that'd work.
>>47792575
Honestly, I didn't know which one came first, so thanks for telling me. That is what you meant with OG, right?
>>47792608
Nope
>>47792628
Is that a no they won't work, or a no they aren't exclusive?
>>47792588
"Sharia Law?" We do not have anything like that at our school. These are three of our female students. Do they look like they're wearing bags on their heads?
>>47792550
I LIVE!
>>47792100
>>47792360
>>47792422
I won't scatter your sorrow to the heartless cosmos, I'll always play a song for you
Rolled 27 (1d100)
>>47792604
I'm gonna use this as an excuse to re-roll >>47792360
Also, apparently I calculated the IQ wrong, it was -5%.
105% to start.
Same choices:
-3% Siren
-3% Atlas
-3% Horus
-5% Sherlock
That leaves me with 91%. I think you made this way too lax on points, I preferred having to take the chance. The appeal of the CYOA to me was the hopelessness of the situation, and the big numbers reflected that.rng gods will probably fuck me over again anyways
>>47792545
You're fine. It's mostly about how well your body can take the stress of surgery. If you can handle anesthesia and run a quarter mile without dropping, you're good.
>>47792638
Ej Har has the cutest girls.
>>47792490
>Universal Focus.
Sounds wonderful. Though I have to ask, what could one use this energy for, and how fast can it disintegrate both a mortal and a chosen? Can these gifts be stolen?
Also, the Alters have power? That's interesting.
Rolled 95 (1d100)
>>47792604
Retrying with new costs
>+10 Age
>-15 Ouroboros
>-7 Swarm
>-10 Clockworck x10
78% chance of NO PROBLEMS, let's go!
>>47792638
The one on the right is wearing something far uglier.
>>47792666
>>47792638
>Ej Har has the cutest girls.
yes
Rolled 63 (1d100)
>>47791712
>100%
>abusive childhood: 110%
Yep.
>under 30: 120%
Yep.
>medically diagnosed ADD: 125%
Strange for this to not be included, since I can't function without meds.
>Atlas: 115%
Lots of chicken liver for me... yay...
>Herakles: 100%
I want muscles like the guy in that pic.
>Mover: 70%
Telekinesis is pretty cool.
>Sherlock: 55%
I don't know why I want this but it's probably good.
Okay, that's enough. If I die, I die. If I get crippled, I want my left foot to get amputated. If I live, I live. How will I escape though?
Oh, and I just want to honestly say that Lady Luck is looking pretty good today. Did she lose some weight?
>>47792654
Pretty much all complaints up to that point will do that.
I'll tinker with the costs a bit more.
>>47792671
I'm fucking paralyzed, but I'll live forever.
Yay?
>>47792636
They work
>>47792666
Kit is objectively the cutest girl, so you're wrong.
>>47792675
She's kind of weird. I think she uses it as a channel for some ritual?
Or maybe she just has that fashion sense. She's quite witchy.
>>47792671
>Rolled 95
>>47792604
You shouldn't have changed it. It was plenty fun before. Now you're basically handing out free powers at barely any risk.
>>47792695
Yes, but on average, Ej Har's girls are the cutest.
>>47792692
how good is anti-mage classes? Some headcanon it into "magic is now useless against me"
>>47792576
Are you the original creator of the sins from op? Neat. I wouldn't worry too much about bonus boons for sins if you're gonna have companions. The main reason I'm making bonuses for the virtues is to make up for them not having companions. Really just try to make the sins more balanced with eachother, please? I mean, with mine there's some options that are more popular than others (I'm looking at you, kindness) but it's mainly because people don't feel they'd be able to keep up with the restriction in order to get the power. Meanwhile with the sins, sloth's doomed to never be anything more than annoying, being worse than pride even at his best, and the gluttony's madness makes him all but unplayable (the one build I saw making him doable was to eat envy immediately so that you can steal sanity). And of course pride is op as balls even without a companion, being able to command the other sins (and most virtues, since I didn't want to shit all over everything you did)
>>47792686
Lady Luck was amused. Seems I lost my left foot but who gives a shit. That doctor will give me a basic prosthetic leg, won't ya doc?
>>47792604
Why is SDA in every CYOA now?
Rolled 100 (1d100)
>>47791712
100%
Under 30
+10%
OCPD
+10%
Overall IQ is 188
-5%
Augments:
Sherlock
-15%
Horus
-7.5%
Clockworks:
Spinal column (Not the actual spine.)
Heart
Lungs
Bladder and Prostate for Uterus
-7.5%
Calibrun's Scabbard
-5%
Very little change of dying, but I would like not to be critically injured either.
>>47792741
FUCK YOU I JUST SOLD MY SOUL TO THE GODS OF CHAOS
>>47792721
It doesn't shut magic down it teaches students how to fight against mages
Think the Templars from Dragon Age
>>47792741
>Rolled 100
>>47792741
Is the roller doing this on purpose?
>>47792723
Not the creator, that would be Quiet. He did give me permission to revise it, however. With that said, I will balance it (one of the reasons for the boons being added, more will come.)
Oh, and that build where Gluttony eats Envy, that was me as well.
>>47792754
Seek cover, now!
>>47792604
I think this is much better.
>>47792604
I mean, there will always be some highballers. Depending on how much the perks come in at I think you should only raise the cost one or two across the board to be at that sweet spot of risk and reward. It also depends on how strong you want people to be. I'd wait to see what some others think.
>>47792659
EVERYTHING REALLY IS COMING UP ANON!
>>47792741
Jesus.
>>47791329
I'd rather see an original generic mecha cyoa than one based on Pacific Rim, though I do love that movie.
>>47792741
>IQ is 188
But kek roll of 100
>>47792753
>>47792758
>>47792765
Yeah, fuck that. I'll just use the Random.org result instead.
Znanje a cute.
>>47791712
+10 hardship + 5 iq + 10 military vet + 5 former athlete + 10 exceptional health
Swarm - 20
Ouroboros - 35
Atlas - 10
Clockwork × 10 = 25 ( heart, kindneysx2, lungsx2, pancreas, stomach, small intestine, large intestine, liver )
Horus - 12.5
Pheidippides - 12.5
25 % survival rate
>rolled 21 no reroll
Holy shit I actually survived. Augments with regeneration and agelessness with 0% of cancer
>this will never be real
Damnit
>>47792669
full text that had to be cut short to fit in the post:
>Universal Focus- A shard of the altar of diligence, holding this aloft will cause the infinite energy of the universe to flow through you. Diligence is constantly getting energy from the universe at a slow drip, this grants a steady stream for five minutes. Even as one of the chosen, your body isn't made to handle this much energy coming in all at once, and if you don't constantly use that energy as you get it it will eat away at your body, fizzling it into nothingness. At the end of the five minutes, you are drained of all energy you had, regardless of source. Diligence keeps whatever he had stockpiled, but cannot stockpile energy from the universal focus or use it to super (he's pretty much already Super 3 or 4 when activated anyway).
A mortal would probably die instantly, and humility wouldn't last much longer, both being able to expend the energy fast enough. I might have to add conditions to keep charity from Sharing the power. Let's say that holy gifts must be stolen manually, but will work for the holder (to include the box keeping the sins from being dropping, though it'd do absolutely nothing for a mortal)
The altars are what give you your initial powers, the shard is the only thing relevant after your initial choice.
>>47792791
Huh is she a dwarf? She has thick, short legs.
>>47792791
10/10 would cuddlefuck in her workshop.
>>47792666
But those Uzuza girl are sooo breedable
Is there a better superpower than a hammerspace full of weapons?
>>47792830
But they have the worst attitudes.
>>47791837
>implying youre not the cancer
>>47792836
The ability to alter reality at will.
>>47792804
>to keep charity from Sharing the power.
Is this so his healing factor doesn't counter the energy fizzling into oblivion? Interesting, though it would be hilarious to see a mortal with a high healing factor from Charity and the Universal focus super bitch slapping Envy right into a wall.
>>47792836
Time manipulation.
>>47792836
Maybe.Is she pulling these things out of her butthole?
>>47791712
Further adjusted costs.
>>47792686
I do mean it when I say feel free to add/subtract to/from your score. ADD counts as do many other things.
Also, the iron thing for Atlas is because goethite fibers(iron based mineral) are what lend limpet teeth their strength.
About 6-7 times the recommended daily dose of iron is about right. Yes, iron supplements are fine.
>>47792836
Time control AND hammerspace.
>>47792804
How many times/ how often are you allowed to use the Universal Focus? Because if it's a one time thing, I'm out.
>>47792885
I prefer Mami's transmutation magic even though Time Manipulation is OP.
>>47792837
Get swole and give them a good spanking.
They'll love it and mewl like kittens afterwards
Andrew
Ej har
traps x2, ranged combat x3, Illusion magic 2x, assassination x3, imbuement 2x
Inas, Cassiopeia, chandara
1st year: sports (marksmanship)
2nd year: sports, Battle of the arts (As part of the music club)
3rd year: sports, Battle of the arts, Blind date (2,3 mecherath, Is she the one that got me into the basilisk den? I believe so)
4th year: sports, Battle of the arts, Blind date (4,1 kara’tee, since I’m not heavy on magic usage this should go fine. I try my best not to antagonize her for her opinion and have a good time) , Basilisk den
5th year: sports, Battle of the arts, Blind date (4,1 again… Same as above, except now we already know each other a little), Basilisk den
Art club (music club), culture club (music club)
Exchange program x2
Andrew was born the son of a traveling bard and performer couple. The two thought him a lot about music and the nomadic lifestyle on the road. He spend a lot of his youth talking to adventurers that where protecting the caravan that his parents were traveling with and the image of those adventurers fighting enemies is something that left a big impression on him.
The adventurer that has the biggest space in Andrews heart was a hero who that studied in ej har. Usually this hero was no different from other adventurers, but whenever a problem appeared that no other adventurer could handle he would solve it. Andrew only known him for less than a year but in this year he never saw this man doubt himself. He knew that whatever the world threw at him he would be able to solve it. This courage and confidence is something Andrew will always try to emulate. And this man alone is the reason why he decided to go to Ej Har instead of st.flares.
Because Andrew isn’t really courageous (not by lack of trying) he has decided that he will be more of use as an archer instead of a frontline fighter. He specializes in killing or incapacitating his enemies in as few attacks as possible to minimize risk to his allies.
>>47792865
No, I think I'm gonna be keeping him having a good synergy with it, the burning he DOES take will do more good than harm, probably just disable his share while it's active. Or actually, he can only share healing and toughness, and the shard only gives raw energy, so it's probably fine.
That was one of the goals for this cyoa though: To have different builds/strategies be a thing, with a big focus on different things working together well. For example, the shard would also be really good on kindness and patience. The former being able to create exponentially heavier gifts (spawning tanks and such) and allowing patience to rewind time with relative ease
>>47792885
>>47792921
Wrong.
Spontaneous weapon creation.
Rolled 7 (1d100)
>>47792788
Actually it is 118. I messed up there.
Actually I will probably just make another build.
100%
Under 30
+10%
OCPD
+10%
Overall IQ is 118
-5%
Augments:
Horus
-3%
Sherlock
-5%
Caliburn's Scabbard
-2%
Ouboros
-15%
Clockwork
Spinal Column
Heart
Lungs
Bladder and Uretha for Uterus
Stomach
Trachea
The Throat
Intestines
Liver
-10%
Swarm
-7%
pls don't die and if I don't I am basically immortal.
>>47792917
you can use it as much as your body can take it. Even if the effect JUST ended, you can use it again. Just make sure that you still exist by the time you're done
>>47792741
IQ over 140 is a +5%
Bladder and prostate for uterus is a no go, anon, I'm sorry. Uncle Sam is bankrolling this for the super soldiers not the gender swaps.
Also,
>OCPD
>Misspells Caliburn
I expected better, anon.
>>47792968
yay, I'm actually alive!
>>47792975
>not knowing what OCDP is
The Obsessive part is it not what it seems to be. Look the disorder up.
Also the IQ is 118.
>thinking anyone has 188
>>47792938
fucking symbol limit meant that I couldn't actually put any comments on my build in this comment so here goes
>what do you mean adventurer lovers have to go to st.flare
>so manly fighting from the back ;)
>just barely fit this on one word page
>who is this mysterious man in andrew's backstory
>etc...
>>47792972
>As much as my body can take.
Oh boy, this is going to be fun.
Ferrean is kill
>>47792993
well on the bright side you can beat anyone in an arm wrestle, archers are strong as shit.
I'm claiming Mami as my buildfu for Quiet's upcoming Urban Fantasy cyoa.Who is your Urban Fantasy buildfu, anon? Or do you not already have a build in mind based on the terrors we have previewed?
>>47793034
Only biceps and back of the shoulder.
Real bonus comes from strong sinew.
>>47792938
I'm getting some strong homoerotic vibes of this build. Am I correct?
>>47793039
Sora, with a Shiro little sister if possible.
>>47792975
>>47792992
Ah, wait a second. I just found out there is a difference between OCD and OCPD. My mistake. Still, my roll is still low enough it doesn't count (The second build that is.)
Also
>implying the US government doesn't waist money all the time
>>47792804
and before I go, here's the full text on karma.
I'll be back later tonight though
The Reward- You may select a mortal to become the unnoficial Virtue of Karma. Karma has the basic Immortallity and Supriority. The more virtuous Karma acts, the more generally powerful they will become, gaining speed, strength, etc, and strengthening a passive effect called [Golden Rule]. The Golden Rule reflects a percent of incoming damage back at their attacker, maxing out at 50% (Karma takes half damage, and the enemy comes out equally injured)
>>47792992
Seemed like an avenue for a joke is all, anon. I meant no offense.
Will educate myself in the near future.>OCDP
>>47793034
very comforting.
>>47793089
Fuck, forgot pic.
Rolled 20 (1d100)
>>47791712
100%
>Lower Class Upbringing +10%
Parents also had a bad relationship and divorced before I was even born, do I'd say that's worth 5%
115%
>Life Threatening Illness+10%
Technically yes, I got two bad infections, that if left untreated could've killed me, though they were treated somewhat easily. Fuck it, I'm giving myself the 10%
125%
>20 Years Old +10%
135%
>Low Functioning Autism, Severe Anxiety, Megalomania, Schizoid Personality Disorder. +40%
175%
>Sheltered Life -10%
165%
>IQ 126~ -5%
160%
Once again, me being fucked up helps me in a CYOA, so great.
>Atlas -10%
150%
>Man of Steel -20%
130%
>Sting Like a Bee (Both arms and both legs) -40%
90%
>Pheidippides -12.5%
77.5%
>Take Sadism and PTSD +20%
97.5%
Practically indestructible, Rarely ever sleep and can super jump, punch, kick, etc.
I also now stop caring about others pain nearly as much and have flashbacks and shit ever so often.
There's also pretty much no way this can go wrong given the 97.5% success chance.
>>47793061
Eh, wouldn't fingers/thumb as well, depending on if you used mostly a European/Mongol style?
Since you have to actually be able to hold onto the string without the string ripping itself from your hands.
>>47792945
That's what you can do with that shard? Holy crap, who ever is in charge of this Diligence thing must be a real powerhouse.
So if someone like Temperance got a hold of it, he could lift very heavy objects and use clairvoyance more easily (maybe even reaching the point of precognition.) Amazing, what happens if Sloth gets a hold of it, though? I know it might not be completely possible, but I just want to know.
>>47793111
Original character, don't penetrate.
Rolled 28 (1d100)
>>47791712
105
Atlas: -10
Horus: -7.5
Pheidippides: -12.5
Mover: -30
Spectre: -15
30
>>47793143
>tfw you gamble and it pays off
>>47793039
Astolfo.
>>47793089
So an extremely high intelligence build with plenty of manipulation skills? You'd probably save points on the orphan dealio and more so if you take a drawback to accurately reflect some of their mental problems. I hope you can find all that in Quiet's cyoa but I'm sure you will. Good choice btw.
Rolled 74 (1d100)
>>47792877
>Swarm
>Siren
>Horus
>Sherlock
>Farsight
>Atlas
Target number 63. Fuck my shit up.
>>47793092
Well, there is a possibility the good doctor might be open to persuasion.
You'll have to let himmodel it after Sandr-.. Sammy's uterus, though.Other terms and conditions may apply.
>>47793161
... I'm going to waifu you if through some twist of fate I ever get the chance. Great taste, anon.
>>47793183
>Fuck my shit up.
Well, that it did. At least I'm still alive.
>>47793034
>beat anyone
beside another archer!
>>47793185
>Sandr-
>>47793086
...no? I certainly didn't intend for there to be any of such vibes.
>>47792938
I'm probably going to make three more builds for the remaining schools that I haven't done yet. Maybe today, maybe I'll be going to bed and making the builds tomorrow.
>>47793124
Well damn, I could've gone a lot lower.
Meh, no use complaining, I'm practically one punch man.
>>47791712
I'm not sure I'm understanding Maker.
Can you break it down for a retard?
>>47793127
Yeah, but fingers don't matter to much in arm wrestling. Also, filed that under sinew.
>>47793185Who is Sandra/Sammy's, and what are the other conditions...
>>47787617 et al.
Ageaus "Lucky" the Faun.
>SCHOOL
St. Flares
>CLASSES
Ranged Combat II (focus on thrown weapons)
First Aid I
Unarmed Combat I (Goat kicks!)
Knowledge I (Astronomy/Geography)
Divine Arts III (Particularly focused on the god/ess of travel or stars)
Maneuvers I
Druidism I (He IS a fey, after all)
>CLASSMATES/COMPANIONS
Kit (She's exotic, like Lucky, but the relationship would be purely platonic)
Sorte (Like Kit, platonic relationship, she'd be more of a tutor and companion for romps through the forests)
3 more TBA (who wants to be friends with the Faun?)
>EVENTS
Great Tournament: Great Hunt (When fighting beasties it's imperative you bring a healer along!)
Harvest Fest.: Fundraising (he has a soft spot for them orphans, yo.)
Gathering of Life: Party Planner (He's a faun, he knows how to have a good time)
>CLUBS
Music (What? Don't look at me like that. He likes playing the pipes, sue me.)
Culture Club (He'd probably bounce around as the years passed, cooking one year, book club the next, etc.)
As far as fauns go, Lucky's a bit of an odd duck. He's not particularly capricious, doesn't seek ah... carnal pleasures, and is actually quite the gentleman when it comes to the lovely ladies. He doesn't mind wine and drinks responsibly, and is more than capable of sitting quietly in class, learning all he can, as opposed to being a social butterfly like you might expect out of a faun student.
He's stricken with an insatiable wanderlust, however, and joined St. Flares with the intent of learning everything he needs to travel the world at his own pace. He finds beauty in the stars, and peace from the sunsets. And if the academy can teach him what it takes to be a goodhearted person and hero, all the more better!
>>47792938
So finally we have
1.Ki-archer from Uzaza
2.Arcane archer from Lunestier
3.Assassin archer from Ej Hal
we're lacking explosive "archer" from Odesium and St. Flares can come up with some blue-magic archery
>>47793240
You start with 100 points
You add/subtract points based on the instructions
You take powers and lose points
You roll d100, if you roll less than the remaining amount of points you live without problems. If you roll between your number of points and your number of points +20. You live but get maimed some way. If you roll above that you die.
>>47792877
Fuck it let's roll the dice.
Abusive Childhood 110
Under 30 120
Depression probably counts 130
How remarkable is remarkably?
AG#458 Swarm 117
AG#459 Ouroboros 95
Wasn't going to take this until I saw that Clockwork helps me reduce the risk of cancer while also improving my body
AG#511-#519 Clockwork 77
Not entirely sure what was intended to be taken, but heart, kidneys, liver, pancreas, stomach, lungs, large intestines, small intestines. 0.1% of "untreatable cancer", whatever exactly that means, per year isn't fantastic but the other upsides are good enough I think.
AG#537 Caliburn's Scabbard 74
AG#557 Horus 69
AG#558 Sherlock 57
AG#560 Farsight 54
Mostly just wanted Farsight before I saw the prereqs. The other stuff is definitely good too.
All right, the plan was to just fuck myself up with implants then live or die based on chance, but honestly this isn't too bad. Maybe could've picked something other than "live a lot" but oh well. I realize you were coming up with pseudo-realistic technological justifications for the augments but Spectre is a bit meh at the moment, while I usually take shapeshifting type powers at any opportunity. I'm not asking you to keep toning down your adventure or anything, just that as is it doesn't really seem that worth taking. As an alternative suggestion, maybe having it closer to true-shapeshifting but it does this with some painful body-horror type dermal implants that literally reshape your body over the course of a few hours or a day.
Also, for Clockwork, I wasn't sure exactly what you intended by 10 vital organs. I did a bit of googling to get some info and most of the lists were split into groups of either 5 or 10 and the ones that had 10 were either the 8 I chose plus Brain (which you implied wasn't an option, understandably) and Skin (Which I didn't want to take). Some of them combined the intestines and added Eyes to the list as well, but you have that under Horus.
Anyways, fingers crossed!
>>47793290
Druid Archer for St.flares would work better I think.
>>47793290
>Blue Mage Archer
Oh shit that has potential to fuck shit up.
Rolled 25 (1d100)
>>47793314
Fuck I'm literally retarded. Do I get bonus points for that?
One thing I wanted to mention about Clockwork before I ran out of characters, I'm not sure if you want to include all 10 options in the textbox or leave it sort of vague as-is. Maybe have a footnote or something?
>>47793240
Basically you touch an object made up of a continuous substance. Alloys, gold, wood, water, etc. You get a sense of said substance, kinda as though it were a somewhat numb limb.
At will, you can cause more of said substance to be created at any point along the object's continuity in any shape you can consistently picture.
In doing this you're using the gloop the good doctor implanted into you which means you can easily run out. However, by touching the substance you created you can cause it to turn back into gloop and reabsorb it.
>>47793305
That's not what he was asking.
>>47793169
Thanks mate!
>>47793341
Oh, I thought he was asking: I'm not sure I understand, [oc] maker.
>>47793338
AH, so no infinite gold then.
Thank you.
Wait, since when is there blue magic?
Can someone post the thing?
>>47793383
It has been here since one of the first updates.
>>47793289
8/10 would be friends with
>>47793330
Separate organs, though the boosted functionality would allow you to function as well from one augmented lung as from two unaugmented ones. The good doctor says the brain is far too complex an organ to build from scratch complete with memories, personality and such.
However, Ouroboros will gradually replace your brain with the specially bio-engineered reversible stem cells.
>>47793335
Vital organs as in organs without which humans quickly die. The decreased risk of cancer applies to another augment - Ouroboros, which gives you a 0.5% yearly chance of developing it.
>>47793305
I think having a gunmen "Archer" would be better.
>>47793289
Seems pretty charming desu. Much better than those builds that go 3, 3, 3, 1.
>>47791208
Sex demon
>>47793415
>>47793438
Aw, thanks! Like I said, last thread I'd make a satyr student and here we are. He's loosely based off a character I played before in D&D a long, long time ago.
>>47793438
Jack of all trades is generally inferior.
>>47793438
>tfw your build was 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
>>47793039
Hahahahahah. Good guess.
>>47793497
And you know this how?
Is it wise to show wip cyoas?
