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1.15 is about 3/4ths done excluding the Lore that's going to be coming with it. I was thinking about making a special set of mission 'mystery boxes' for certain options, allies and such. Thoughts?
>>47743483
It'd make the final mission less lonely. However, I'm sure you've noticed how some characters and CYOAs have been ruined by mystery boxes.
Hell, Harem is a textbook example of how mystery boxes can go wrong.
Just watch your footing, boss. I really like this CYOA.
>>47743483
For this big of a cyoa, I think no on the mystery boxes.
>>47743483
whatever gets it done a teeeeny bit faster.
cant wait to see the new version.
If beri read this, please answer mais question from last thread >>47743041
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>>47743813
Feedback is much appreciated. I'm going to try and pull an all nighter tonight to get everything for the 1.15. Blood and thunder and all that aye?
>>47744164
Hustle, don't hurry.
>>47744164
Oh boy oh Boy new travellers CYOA!
>>47744527
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>>47743657
Random parts to a CYOA are better for larger ones.
anyone got Hibiki's updated CYOA? I haven't made a build for the vehicle version yet.
Does anyone have the Persona CYOA? I didn't save it when it was first posted.
>>47745426
What's the point of wearing skirts like that when just leaning forward a little lets everyone see the goods?
>>47745475
You act like that's not the entire point.
>>47745475
Which is a good point.; )
>>47745475
>implying that isn't the whole point
I love this one, too bad Club Soda is hardly an option, quite like the real life version.
>>47744262
>time loop
what if you're living in jail? LOL you're gonna get fucked.
>Reincarnation
good luck living as a fucking insect
>Transferal
go fucking die when there's no living beings left
>Perpuation
Get fucked when you're paused
my god, all of this is just pure shit. Atleast make an option where we get to reincarnated in a fantasy world
>>47744527
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>>47744565
So confusing, make it like others man, like from up to down, That thing makes me dizzy
>>47745601
Luck is either hit or miss, both Charisma and No sleep are amazing, but I'll have to take the "only read something once and able to perfectly recall it"
>Lemon-Lime
At least I only have to drink it once.
Welp ea conference is over guess it's time to go back to work on OC might even get it out before the annual Todd posting starts up
>>47745647
The Isles CYOA has been that way for a long while, and many variations.
>>47745605
>good luck living as a fucking insect
Then you die and live as something else.
I was thinking that reincarnation was one of the the few choices that was remotely palatable.
>>47745605
Enjoy
>>47745767
>>47745716
>You may ask, "How did this tradition get started?"
>I'll tell you!
>>47745605
Sorry, I didn't save the whiny bitch CYOA for you.
>>47744907
-Mammalian (like werewolf)
-Increased Strength
-Increased Defense
-Increased Speed
-Regeneration
Drawbacks & Mission
-Budget Rangers +2
-Magical Girl Team +3
-Nosy Reporters +1
-Infiltration +2
Boss Perks
-Enhanced Strength
-Enhanced Defense
-Enhanced Speed
-Enhanced Regeneration
-Band of mooks (Free)
imma use my band of mooks to rape the little magical girls you know blackmailing them, (all anime girls can't do shit once they got blackmail kinda like those shitty NTR manga)
and told the mooks to kill the rangers, wear their uniforms, then kill the reporters in PUBLIC. so that the knew it was the ranger's fault. If magical girl's blackmailing failed. imma use the ranger as a distraction so that it will be magical girls vs power rangers. Fuck. It's going to be great.
>>47745767
this one's good, thanks god bless
>>47745601
Cherry soda. I really need luck right now.
hey guys, what are unique classes for a fantasy CYOA?
>>47745986
Arithmetician
If someone could make a nice CYOA about Warhammer ( Sigmar ), I would be gratefull.
I have already done the one that was posted here lots of times.
>>47745986
Sewage Constructor/Epidymologist
Gynocologist(with specialization in Succubi)
Teacher
Scribe
>>47745986
Moon Knight
Rune Monk
Dualist
Undine
Star Lancer
Steam Warrior
Demonic Rogue
>>47745819
Wasn't there one with like 3 options?
>>47745986
Rider
Lancer
Avenger
Shielder (using dual shields)
>>47746214
>moon knight
KEK
>>47745986
Stuff that's setting specific, like zombie turtle cavalry, or a "paladin" that uses a type of blood magic from a god of live, fertilitty and carnal pleasures.
>>47745986
I like Alchemists, Gunslingers, Illusionists, Fallen Paladins, Swordmasters (just some dude really good with swords), Witch/Wizard (occultism and curses).
I think you can choose almost any topic and make a nice class out of it with some creativity, like a knight based around constellations, detective-type about tracking and noir stuff or berserker with rape powers.
>>47745986
>Beast Tamer
Yes, it's common in fantasy games but it's extremely rare in fantasy cyoas.
>Artificer
Basically a glorified wizard smith, but sometimes very cool.
>Golemancer
Necromancers and summoners are common, but golemancers are not.
>Onmyodo
Special kind of japanese exorcist that's pretty fucking interesting but barely ever seen in cyoas.
>Ninjas
Good luck finding one of these fellas in a fantasy cyoa. Closest you can get is a rogue but they don't come with Ki manipulation powers and martial arts.
>>47745986
Peasant
Pauper
Poor
Live Bait
Dragon Layer (no, there's not supposed to be an S there)
>>47746268
If you like Alchemists on the battlefield, look up dragon's dogma online. It combines them wiith the monk to make them a status effect based tank.
Heck, that franchise hasgreat class systems in general.
>>47745986
Battleship
>>47746324
>not Apache attack helicopter
Fucking cis-scum.
>>47746316
Just watched a video, looks fucking radical, you never see alchemist beating shit like that.
Shield Sage sounds good too.
>>47746300
>Ninjas
Are they that rare in CYOAs? I've always liked the Final Fantasy ninjas that had elemental ninjutsu. That reminds me that Final Fantasy Tactics A2 and the Bravely Default games are a good source of some neat classes.
>>47746349
Helicopters are too OP
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xFxrzSrVv0I&t=35s
>>47746395
Shield Sage was better in the First game, you could turn into a magic gatling gun.
>>47745986
Potato
Background Character
Australian
All I got.
>>47746316
I just looked it up, and Element Archer is just like one of the typical builds I make for my waifu.
>>47745986
I do have an unfinished cyoa about fantasy classes lying around, but unfortunately I won't get to my PC for the next hours.
>>47746398
Yes, you're lucky to find a battlemage in a fantasy cyoa let alone a ninja. It's really hard to balance mages - warriors - rogues and somehow ninjas are somewhere in between all 3 of them which makes it even harder.
>>47746515
That's mostly non-sense mysticism. Ninjas are more of a sub-class to rogues/assassins or a local variety thereoff.
>>47745986
Always found the idea of the Synthesist from pathfinder interesting despite never actually having had a chance to play one. The whole summon things to fuse with is an interesting take on a summoner.
>>47745986
Semen Demon
Fluid Druid
Jizz Wizard
Cum Conqueror
>>47746557
Seriously, you don't need all those different ones when the first you mentioned is already the best. But you did give me an idea. Imagine a lewd CYOA with a bunch of different sex classes like that.
>>47745986
From Bravely Second
Catmancer
Exorcist
Hawkeye
Patissier
Merchant
Performer
>>47746542
Depends on the type of ninja, but they are usually more martial arts based than assassins which tend to be 1 HKO types. KI based skills, often elemental, also gives them access to a form of magic. They basically dabble in all 3 base archtypes although do they lean most to the rogue/assassin side. That doesn't make balancing them easy though.
>>47746557
Spunk Monk
Seminal Sentinel
Semen Summoner
>>47746585
I'd gently fuck this idea.
>>47745986
merchants are all too rare
I already picked the classes I'm using, thanks for the responses guys.
>>47746557
Cock Sock
Cum Dump
Lew Lieutenant
>>47746656
Which ones? Don't tease us like that.
Making a simple CYOA that's just "pick X perks from a list of Y"
there will be 24 perks total
what feels like a good number of choices? thee?
>>47746719
I think it should have thou.
>>47746398
>>Ninjas
>the Bravely Default games are a good source of some neat classes.
Catmancer here desu. I'll fuck your shot up with the help of my friendly cats who for some reason can do all kind of special attacks.
I wonder what new jobs they'll add for bravely third.
>>47746719
It really depends on the perks and how broadly applicable they are.
>>47746719
Depends. How good is each perk?
"You can generate one cute doggo picture a day" 6+ perks
"You can move shit with your mind" 6- perks
"Satan is your assrape slut" 1-2 perks
>>47746719
>>47746727
I'm fond of Ye
>>47746689
Have to keep it a secret.
It'll be better when the CYOA comes out.
>>47746774
ranges from making voodoo dolls to becoming an expert negotiator to being able to see well in darkness or blinding light.
So I'm guessing five, or so.
>>47746834
>turns out it's just Arithmethician
>Arimethician CYOA
>also pick waifu-versions of historic Mathematicians
>>47746639
>Super Novice
Fucking, Japan.
>>47746680
>Cock Sock
Absolute toppest tier, tbqh.
>>47745426
i don't have it but i'm also interested
>>47746898
If you wouldn't fuck Gauss you can just get right the fuck out of this thread right now.
>>47746906
It's Korean?
>>47746898
So we'd get a bunch of faux-geeky waifus who've all been gangbanged by warriors and bards, and now pretend to be shy nerds because their biological clock is ticking and they need to catch themselves a mage provider.
>>47746834
Now I'm going to be up all night wondering if you picked one of mine.
>>47746906
Korea, actually.
>>47746920
Serious question, why people say Gauss is so great?
I don't see why he would be more important or impressive ou influent than Euler for instance.
>>47746906
>Fucking, Japan.
IIRC, some people liked to play as the novice rather than upgrading to one of the other classes like you're supposed to, so they made a novice+ class for them. also it's korean.
>>47746898
>historic Mathematicians
So most of them would be middle-eastern waifus?
>>47746585
I don't think it's been done yet so you could have at it if you want.
>>47745767
>>47745785
Oh boy, and I just finished bio soldier CYOA
>arthropod (Xenomorph style)
>increased strength
>increased speed
>increased defence
>Enhanced senses
Drawbacks
>budget rangers
>magical girl team
>dark hero
>nosey reporters
>exposure
Boss Perks
>enhanced strength
>enhanced speed
>enhanced defence
>enhanced regeneration
>napalm breath
>vibro blade (vribro whip tail)
>shadow step
>band of mooks
DEF SS
SPE S
STR A
and for the Faerie
Companions
>Blossom (Blossom a cute I say, A CUTE.)
>an old friend (come my minions rise for your master)
Adventurers
>none
Nations
>skylands
Locations
>sky pirate
Contacts
>swift flyer
>elemental lance
>first mate
Drawbacks
>hostile hostiles, The Ardent Flyer
>hostile hostiles, House of Roses
>hostile hostiles,The Rogue Tower
>>47747015
Tasty brown al-Khwarizmi waifu
>>47746898
That would need Zhou Bi Suan Jing and Pythagoras next to one another with the main differences being ethnicity and age.
>>47747015
And Greek, English, German, Italian, Russian. There are a lot of mathematicians.
What makes a cyoa memorable? What makes a cyoa actually good?
>>47747213
>What makes a cyoa memorable?
Unique capacity for lewd.
>What makes a cyoa actually good?
Not needing to rely on obvious lewds for the above. Anons tend to be a thirsty breed, but make them creatively earn it and they'll love you.Or just make another slut life.
>>47747213
>What makes a cyoa memorable?
The writing and characterization really, it has to be spot on, concise enough to fit in one or two maybe three sentences per option but detailed enough for autistic players to put all the pieces together like a puzzle when they read between the lines. This keeps themhooked.
And the most important aspect of a good cyoa is inherent tribalism. There has to be competing factions that the players can identify and be part of, forming the cornerstone of their escapist narrative that shapes everything else.
Other then that, waifuable and non waifuable companions are a must.
>>47746595
>catmancer
>not nekomancer
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>>47740429
Lost out due to timezones again. Oh well...
Cross-thread links suck.
MELODY:
Take a melody, simple as can be. Give it some words and sweet harmony~
Orb of Life
Library of the Supernatural - We are your friends! You'll never be alone again!
Surveillance - I am going to play harsh noise music for the camerabots and you will like it.
Lessons - Despite loving music, I have zero talent. So.
Video - Because I know today has been the most perfect day I've ever seen... Anyway, I think this is the most useful during concerts.
Voice Mic - I'm gonna be the next Mike Patton!
Bonus - Good way to compose music. I'll take the Instrumental Dress, 'cause instruments are fucking expensive.
Ranks: #2, between Jeanne and Harmony.
I REALLY like music, and I've always wanted to be a famous and talented performer.
FALCHION:
Minna, miteite kure!
Orb of Life
Library of the Supernatural - ONE PUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNCH! ...That's how it works, right?
Surveillance - I can edit it into a training montage!
Whip into Shape - I mean, otherwise I'm gonna be a lamb to the slaughter.
Lock On - Stops at the affected area and immediately dissolves!
Coat of Arms - Hey, kid, wanna buy a sword?
Bonus - Owie. Well, okay... Divine Radio sounds nice. Hopefully it's not b& in Valhalla.
Ranks: #22, between Lillan and Saki. I'm a lover and I am also not a fighter. There, now it's logically correct. Plus, I'm really sensitive to injury...
>>47747510
>>47745986
King
>>47745986
Cannibal.
>>47747584
That reminds me of one of my favorites: the Princess from Etrian Odyssey.
>>47745986
Proletariat
Bourgeousie
reminder that Bumpsy is the best choice
>>47746639
>Geneticist
"Lo! Your father is not truly your father!"
>>47747526
Yeah, you always seem to be a thread late.
The Divine Radio is perfectly acceptable in Valhalla... in the right sort of events. You could get a fighter jet for the dogfight competitions or join a tank battalion in a group. Airstrikes are allowed in certain modern warfare events. Huh, weird how these were almost at the top and the bottom of your list.
>>47747650
this is fucking acesEther Rex all the way
>>47747697
That's because I'm living in China right now...
so timezones aren't exactly optimal.
I should be going back to America soon, though.
>>47747650
>not rocking ether rex for consistent misses and crits
>>47747639
He said fantasy, comrade, not real life.
>>47747707
How are things in Ching-Chong Land?
>>47747753
Nobody pays attention to traffic lights, the sky is colored white, the government has blocked Tumblr but oddly not 4chan or Reddit, and everyone boils water before drinking it due to water quality.
I just want a cold drink...
>>47745986
Radical
Groovy
Brutal
Gnarly
Metal
>>47747650
>>47747704
>>47747719
>Not Samantha
Similar bonuses, but better-rounded, less speschul snowflake, andwaifu potential.
>>47747704
>>47747719
>>47747807
One-Shot Johnny fucks over all of you. Unmatchable speed coupled with maximum attack means you niggas will never hit me.
>>47747833
Bumpsy is literally your hard counter.
>>47747862
One-Shot Johnny has more speed, thus Bumpsy can't keep up.
>>47747833
>>47747885
Ether Rex has 170% luck.
Let's be real about this folks... He's got crits and dodge checks nailed.
>>47747833
You're faster by half a bar, if Bumpsy is chasing you then he's behind you, hydrodynamics dictate that you're forced to endure more drag and turbulent flow then Bumpsy and thus you're unable to utilize your full speed.
>>47747956
You having trouble finding the next page or something? Let me fill it in.
>>47748055
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>>47748074
Not him, but thanks a lot.
>>47748106
No problem. You're welcome.
I wonder if there is going to be even more goddesses added.
>>47745986
Something languages/linguistics related, like a rune master
>>47748191
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>>47748253
Do not pick this fucking box.
Don't you dare pick it.
>>47748266
To late
>>47744907
>Arthropod
>Increased Defence
>Increased Speed
>2x Bio Laser
>Great Devourer
>Rape
>Dark Hero
>Enhanced Defence
>Enhanced Speed
>Shadow Step
>Enhanced Regeneration
>Band of Mooks
I see it as some sort of boogey man endurance hunter, using its band of mooks, toughness, speed, teleportation and regeneration to battle or pursue its opponent until they simply cannot fight any longer and it kills them. Against the dark hero the battle will probably consist of jumping and teleporting everywhere firing lasers. If the hero does somehow wound me I will just teleport and/or flee to safety while my mooks keep him busy so I can heal.
>>47747650
Big Crimson or Zippy Smalls for me.
>>47748266
But Goddess wills it, anon!
>>47748055
I started posting it, but loading the image took forever and my kettle started whistling and I just forgot about everything else.
>>47748338
I just realized throughout Yaweh's profile there is no mention of he/she/him/her in it.
>>47748437
There's an image right there.
>>47748266
DEUS VULT!
>>47745426
>>47748266
The only real waifu in the entire CYOA.
>>47748488
>>47748266
You better believe I'd choose the option that invalidates the majority of the CYOA.
>>47748528
>>47748437
It's "Pick a Goddess" and The Four Letter Word is an option. Clearly that means she's a she.
>>47748535
>Invalidates the majority of the cyoa.
>Yaweh allows the other deities to continue to exist and be real.
>Italics said you can ignore the mystery box entirely as it's an add-on and other stuff.
Come on anon.
>>47748554
>can ignore the mystery box entirely
Can, but I won't.
>>47748554
>implying I can calm down when someone's being wrong on the internet
>implying I'm not too autistic to accept a figment of the imagination can be a legitimate person in a fantasy world.
>implying I'm not too autistic to ignore the mystery box when it's provided
>>47748554
>Be real
No, they're fake imaginary figments.
>Ignore the mystery box
Doesn't make it non-canon
>>47747471
>Magical
>Beyond Human
>Military
>Focus 2 (free because Magical)
0
>Endurance 3
3
>Durability 3
6
>Immunity 3
9
>Directed Energy Attack 3
12
>Self Healing 3
15
>Strength 1
16
>Passion 1
17
>Self Improvement 2
19
>Flight 1
20
>Agility 3
23
>Enhanced Senses 1
24
>Stealth 1
25
>Reflexes 3 (3 because Valuable)
>Training (free because Military)
>Unique Weapon (magical melee weapon like lightsaber, powered by my passion)
>Armour (stylish armour)
>Reputation (known for being kind but very emotional and passionate by coworkers)
>Prime Subject (free because Fiona)
>Samuel Mason
>Yuito Kataoka
>Fiona Dawley
>find book of magic in old library
>start learning simple magic only to discover it's owned by ancient magical being
>mysterious being offers to help make me super powerful sorceress in exchange for favors
>military notices me because magic has changed my appearance
>military decide I'm valuable and capture me
>they destroy book and owner (prime subject)
>forced to work for military instead of magical benefactor
>kick butt of evil terrorist groups with help from Samuel and Yuito
>do lots of good, but have trouble with public image because 9 feet tall with wings and have bitchy reporter trying to make me look bad
>will have to find a way to deal with annoying reporter, but unfortunately can't just kill her
>>47745601
Root beer is objectively the best
Think of all the possibilities (the non-rapey ones)
Lemon lime comes a close second
>>47744262
Reincarnation and 25 pizzas. I will be unstoppable. 100 toppings.
>>47745601
Lemon-Lime
Time to become a scientist hellbent on achieving immortality.
>>47746639
>>47747471
>Mutagen
>Inhuman
>Renegades
Abilities
>Natural Weapon 1
>Self Healing 3
>Adaptability 3
>Extra Limbs 1
>Strength 2
>Durability 3
>Agility 2
>Endurance 2
>Reflexes 1
>Weapon Mastery 3
>Unarmed Mastery 3
>Stealth 2
>Enhanced Senses 1
>Power Burst 3
>Natural Toxin 3
>Immunity 2
>Flight 1
Perks
>Bootcamp
>Armour
>Authority
>Defector (Free)
Allies
>Ryan Elmore
>John York
>Big Mike
>Satan
Enemies
>The Prototype
>Ghost
Drawbacks
>Toxic
>Pain
>Aging
>Valuable
The very best of the super soldier project and the very worst at the same time, I was created not to blend in or train future soldiers, simply to kill. The renegades liberated me from the laboratory where I was being held and now I hope to destroy the organization that created me for giving me this short and painful existence.
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>>47748074
How the hell am I supposed to pick any of the lewd tiddy witches when Skala is sitting there crying like that
God damn it I was hoping I could finish the expansion before the Bethesda conference.
Oh well should be able to finish and post it after the conference.
>>47748946
>Implying there will be anything worthwhile there.
>>47748957
yfw new elder scrolls game and its more slimmed down than fallout 4
>>47748957
>implying I would miss out on my yearly dose of Todd posting
>>47748978
It just works
>>47748938
Well, you could get Dispersion Chalk. Have your fun with the lewd ones & if you get bored of that, you'll still have Za Warudo to do stuff with.
>>47749019
How does her sister work though?
I'm assuming she lives by saving dead battery-kun from getting hit by a bus, but how is she even a choice then?
>>47748266
I read the discussions about the box when it was posted days ago. So here's a new version that fixs the thing that generated those long discussions. Still working on Pokemon Personified, 0rder, and Spire.
This goddess cyoa will receive 4-6 new powers, new living areas, and some other updates to make the cyoa interesting after above projects are done. New goddesses to appear next update: Loki (Norse), Saga (Norse), and some exotic ones from mythologies less cared about.
>>47749056
Well, time-travel is on the table. Skala could either save dad bus man or she could just prevent Piet from forming a bond with him in the first place. In the latter case, you can also choose Piet to get a matching pair of witches, if you want.
>>47746639
What game is this?
>>47749101
*dead bus man.
No, the guy in question doesn't have any children he left behind.
>>47748946
Is there some reason for the multi-colored ribbon everyone seems to be wearing?
>>47749163
If I had to guess they're all trying to suck up to gays because of Orlando.
>>47749086
>Loki
Get ready to have some freaky kids.
>>47749163
Like 50 people got killed at a gay club with about 53 more critically injured at a gay club earlier today.
>>47749086
Aren't both versions equal....? The text in them, at least.
>>47749192
Shit. That sucks.
>>47749221
Check Voat for more info
>>47749216
They are equal in text except one small part about the goddesses.
>>47747956
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>>47748074
>>47748089
I'm going to choose whoever gives me an opportunity for femdom and preferably an easier life.
Tina seems to be 100% femdom but if she doesn't get older? Pass.
>>47749253
>>47749253
>>47749086
Is there even any meaningful change italic? In the end it's all the same~
I compared it btw, it's the same.After all we are also people italics.
It doesn't change anything.
>>47749293
He changed it to say they are 'real' and removed the word figment.
>>47749293
It's even worse
it said without people's imagination, they are not real in the first place, in this new box.
>>47748933
>now I hope to destroy the organization that created me for giving me this short and painful existence
Pretty rough desu:( Will you do anything to try and cure yourself?
>>47749278
Nah, she can age more.
>>47749049
But I need that chalk to keep Piet alive otherwise Skala is just going to cry for eternity in a never ending time loop
>>47748946
Thanks for that comment, Box. Had forgotten about it. Late by forty but fuck it.
>>47749403
Why would you?
She was prevented from bonding in the first place, so she didn't die when she would've.
>>47749403
Nah, there's no time loops. Once Piet is saved, she'll stay saved & Skala will never be able to time jump again.
>>47748957
Well, they re-announced a new Prey.
Bad news, it looks way less interesting than space bounty hunters.
>>47749427
>>47749430
Nah man time fuckery is never that clean.
Like the time Spiderman got god powers and used it to stop his uncle Ben from dying, then Ben just died again several times every day because the universe was wrong.
>>47749483
Yeah? What about the time in Scooby DooMystery Inc.where all the killed people were unkilled after the whole world was saved and time starting going different? That was everything going well.
>>47749086
Are you ever going to add back the Token amount for selecting 10+ Goddesses in Pantheon?
Hey does anyone have the ASOIAF/GoT CYOA?
That one's pretty fucking neato.
>>47749595
Yes. In time Anon.
>>47749599
YOUR WISH IS ANSWEREDmy wish is that you get better taste in fiction, though
>>47749657
Thanks dude. Now I can get to the correct mind set since I'll be in an ASOIAF campaign.Also, can't people like many different things rather than just one?
>>47749695
Man that latest episode...
>>47749695
>the correct mind set since I'll be in an ASOIAF campaign.
I do hope you're recreating that Taragaryan prostitute build for your game.
>>47748191
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>>47748253
I appreciate the work that was done on this one, but it's full of grammatical errors. If I were to make a proofread version would somebody typeset it?
>>47749657
>>47749720
It's not my fault! I had to prostitute because slave! But I still found a way to use it to become Queen, so it wasn't all bad in the end.
>Girl in Kingdom of the Reach
>The Smile with Advanced Education -1 Blessing
>Animal Companion, Targaryen Blood, Touched By Magic, Grace And Beauty, and Valar Morghulis -4 Blessings
>Ashara Hewett
>Chains and Without A House +2 Blessings
>be long lost Targaryen who inherited unhatched dragon egg
>get captured and sold into slavery, but not before burying dragon egg
>get training to be pleasure slave and learn how to manipulate people
>escape and dig up dragon egg
>bump into Ashara and convince her of my royal heritage, might be easier after dragon egg hatches
>marry somebody with a army who wants to be king and would have better claim if they married a Targaryen, here's where the smile might help
>Valar Morghulis my biggest rival (probably Dany)
>raise dragon to be big and use it to help in quest
>take over with army and dragon and become Queen
>feed husband to dragon and take charge, proclaim myself Empress
>>47750122
Forgot pic.
>>47748191
Hastur a cute.
>Increased Endurance
>Urban Living
>>47749657
>Region
Beyond the Wall
>Profession
Higher Education, The Blade
>Gifts
Tools of the Trade
Giants Blood
Targaryan blood
Touched By Magic
Animal Companion
>Curses
Wanted
Without a House
>Companion
Corton Penrose
>We should have acted.
They are already here. The legends told of their return. Their defeat, was merely a delay. Until the time after Valyria fell. When the sons of the North would spill their own blood. But no one wanted to believe. Believe they even existed. And when the winds of truth finally came... they were winds of winter. But! There is one they fear. In their tongue, he is Dovahkiin. Dragonborn!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UsnRQJxanVM [Open]
After my mother revealed the truth to me about my heritage, and the strange stone she had given me, everything fell to pieces. My clan was slaughtered for mixing blood with kneelers with everything I knew in that seaside town burned to the ground. Alone and hated in the frozen North, I might have died, yet some fire kept me alive in the snow and ice. Corton tells me it is the fire of the Lord of Light, I have no reason not to believe him but I cannot know for sure. What I am sure of, is that THEY are coming, and they would see us all dead by winters end. The Kneelers and Crows will not save us, they are fat and coddled. We must seize our destiny with fire and blood, as my ancestors once did across the sea. First, we will turn back the tide of the Others and bring a dawn to the Long Night. Then, once our children and our women are safe at our hearths, we ride South.
Well now's as good a time as any I suppose.
1/6
>>47750355
2/6
>>47750355
>Box please mortal man was not ready for this
>>47750370
3/6
>>47750374
well its a good thing you're all immortalin my heart
>>47750386
>>47750404
Can I beimmoralin your heart?
>>47750404
huh apparently i can trigger (you) by posting fro a different tab, learn something everyday I suppose.
5/6
>>47750355
Is this new update?
>>47750280
Kneelers?! Who you calling kneelers barbariancousin!!!
>>47750444
Meant to spoiler "cousin".....
Rolled 1, 15, 9, 6, 11, 7, 6, 20, 8, 16, 16 = 115 (11d20)
Page 6?
>>47750432
Thought I would use this time to talk on some stuff relating to hero academy.
So about the new page, clubs are desined to be very vauge and openended much in the same way as events. If none of the ideas listed suit your fancy I highly suggest and encourage you to make up your own club and just categorize under either sports, education, arts, or culture (this is purely for book keeping purposes on my end.) Drawbacks are pretty self explaintory so I won't go musch into them unless asked
As for future content the next planed is not one but two brand new schools, one will be desert/arabian themed academy the other will be a school themed after the Vatican. I would love to hear what kinda of classes and companions you would like to see in these new schools.
As always leave critiques and comments on the new page or the cyoa in general at your leisure. I rally hope you all enjoy the new page!
>>47748014
If you're ever on the defensive as One Shot Johnny you're doing it wrong.
>>47750522
As if any St. Flare worm would be allowed into Lunestier.
>>47750355
>>47750370
>School
Lunestier
>Classes
0/12
Martial Combat-2
Tactics-3
Physical Training-2
Smithing-2
Diplomacy-3
>>47750386
>>47750404
>Companions
Sera
Eloise Avery
Chandara
Suzette Highking
>>47750432
I kinda wanna take all of the events over my years
>>47750522
Student Government+Disciplinary Squad
Bookworm
>>47750522
Is Vatican theme school going to be nice and pure or like smitey?
>>47750522
>Drawbacks that allow anon to drop companions for classes
Oh boy, may the obnoxious min-maxing begin.
>>47750522
Time to murder all my friends for gains.
>>47750522
>Drawbacks
Now we're talking. Who needs friends, anyway?
>>47750588
>>47750589
As I've stated before Hero Academy is part 1 of a cyoa trilogy, which companions you did or didn't have will be reflected in parts two and three so ditching companions has some risk attached to it
>>47750581
bit of column A bit of column B
>>47750522
>>47750549
So what is the schools policies on students from rival schools challenging each other to duels?
>>47750631
also you can only lose like 2 friends so its not that big of a deal
>>47750631
>Risk
I'm sure, but it's better to be able to protect yourself, I feel.
>>47750631
>I only dropped one friend
>Who I picked up because I didn't want an All-female party, and needed a Master of Tactics
>But if I dropped him I could Master Tactics and Diplomacy.
I'm not sure how to feel about the fact all my friends are girls. I wasn't even trying to Waifu Build. I just got a Cleric, a Healer, a Rogue, and the Hero-style Noble who is also a powerful Mage.
Balance Party ahoy
>>47750638
it's generally accepted as long as both parties are consenting and it doesn't distract from a students studies
Of course killing each other is a no-no but accidents do happen.
>>47750669
How suspicious will two 'accidents' be? I rolled two really evil characters for my Blind Dates, Damia and Kara'Tee, and I feel like the world will be a better place if I can off them at school.
>>47750669
Yes, accidents. It's not my fault that snooty Lunester types were too busy studying courtly manners instead of their sword work.
>>47750588
Welcome to my world. Just like that other CYOA which gives points for killing companions.
>No shame, no fame.
>Mfw Ej Har
>>47750692
Depends on your naritive brah
>>47750692
How is Kara'Tee evil? I can sort of understand Damia with her whole Fallout style neutrality. But Kara'Tee does not kill every mage, only evil ones. At worst she is just slightly racist/magist? against mages. Thats not that bad. Especially because of her past.
>>47750692
>Damia, Kara'Tee
>evil
In what world?
>>47750522
I am disappointed there's no way for me to use guns in this quest despite bombs, airships and other crazy stuff being around.
>>47750724
Mage Slaughterers are the worst of Uzuza's hatred and evil.
>>47750730
See above for Kara'Tee, and Damia's entry says she goes out of her way to destroy the rich no matter what they believe or how they act to enforce absolute neutrality. She's basically acting like a rabid Communist.
>>47750631
>As I've stated before Hero Academy is part 1 of a cyoa trilogy, which companions you did or didn't have will be reflected in parts two and three so ditching companions has some risk attached to it
What! I didn't know this now I'm super hyped.
>>47750777
>Mage Hunters = Evil
At best, Uzuza refuses to use magic and views it as potentially dangerous. It doesn't state that they hunt every mage. You're being dumb about this and assuming things that weren't even remotely explained.
>>47744262
Lets go with Digitalization (-6)
I wouldn't say the biggest downside is getting stuck in a toaster. Its that your new existence is completely different from your old one. With only sight and sound being familiar every other input would be new. How does it feel to be clicked?
Self Destruct (-3)
Might not be strictly necessary. Even if you get trapped in a computer with no internet access you could shut down most computers, problem is if you get trapped in something with no I/O that keeps itself online. Then you're trapped as long as the power source lasts.
Never Alone (-8)
You pretty much need this or Pull the Plug with a lot of these. Lasting past the heat death of the Universe and then some is something I'd rather avoid.
Pull-The-Plug (-3)
Even if there will always be something to connect to I'd rather always have the option. Always assume that full eternal immortality has some downsides.
Death's Number (-5)
Death's a pretty cool guy. Plus if anyone could help me get in touch with other immortals it'd probably be him.
Sadly this leaves me no points left over to spend on Training. So it will take a while to develop the skills to pretend I'm a Vocaloid.
>>47750852
Suspicion, paranoia, and hatred are hallmarks of Uzuza's stance on magic.
>>47750355
Name: Azioth Uhra
Clubs: Cultural Club (Mage-Armour Enthusiasts)/Education Club (Magitech Engineering)
Drawbacks: Bookworm
School: Odesium
Class: Mage Armourx3/Divine Artsx3/Enhancementx3/Knowledge (Magitech Engineering)x3
>Born to a obscure family of clockmakers and tinkerers
>A tragic airship accident left her orphaned and crippled
>Devised her own prosthetic limbs to get around and windup toys to keep her company
>claim that her toys spoke to her during her darkest hours, revealing wonderful secrets and magnificent truths
>finally recognized for her craftsmanship and invited to attend Odesium, when word got around that her clockworked toys rebuilt the crumbling orphanage after suffering a fire
>invests her faith in a higher power, the Father of Machines patron god of all artifice and artificers
>She believed this invitation was a gift from the Great Father, who deemed her worthy to ascend from flesh to metal, to create wondrous masterpieces to venerate his name
>feel constantly uneasy and nauseous for living and studying on a airship academy, not fully shaken off the childhood trauma from all those years ago
Companions:
Tarkun Ironstout/Eloise Avery/Bathsheba/Znanje
>Form a think tank
>Tarkun is our chief combat and warfare specialist, testing/sparring against new mage-armour models and artifice gadgets. When given the chance study her dwarven weapons and incorporate the near indestructible alloy in all armour models.
>Eloise's surgical expertise and medical knowledge will be invaluable for cybernetic augementation.
>Help Znanje with her classes and bounce ideas and design philosophies off her, she will be my closest friend and research colleague.
>sympathize with Bathseba's situation. Study her AI and artificial brain architecture.
Continued.
>>47750865
Yeah they don't like mages. But they don't kill and burn every mage they come across. Otherwise they wouldn't be able to participate in any inter school events. Mage hunters may be dicks and think mages are bad, but that doesen't mean they kill them. At most probably they get a mean look or bad words. And Kara'Tee has a good reason since her family was killed by a mage.
>>47750631
>bit of column A bit of column B
I, for one, would like very smitey while still being very holy.
>>47750865
Suspicion? Definitely.
Paranoia? For some, possibly.
Hatred? Post the actual line where Uzuza is known for hating magic.
Hell, considering how the Pen Pal drawback allows you to get a magic companion with an Uzuza background, that pretty much kills your point.
>>47750880
Year 1: Fund Raising
Year 2: Fund Raising/Research Proposal (Mage Armour nanomachines)
Year 3: Fund Raising/Research Proposal (Cybernetic augmentation)
Year 4: Fund Raising/Research Proposal (Artificial neuro-networked architecture)
Year 5: Battle Royal
>Spend four years raising funds, set up a booth for repairing and maintaining various machinery and rudimentary mage-armours, from there accumulate enough funds to start up a company/workshop/research facility.
>From second year and on wards, create and sell small trinkets, toys, tools and mage-armour components at discount prices to all students, with spyware installed to gather combat, magic and ki data
>At the same time, I should have a sufficient comprehension of engineering theory and the technical skill to develop microscopic mage-armours as a prove of concept for the first research proposal demonstration."In the beginning, The Great Father forged the primordial engine from the void. And with a spark the multiverse began."
>By year 3, Eloise should have mapped out the human neurological system and we should have developed direct working nerve-mage armour USB prototype, have her augment one of my own crippled limbs as a proof of concept for the second research proposal."Father of Machines! Your filigree gaze carves us and the scars dance upon our grateful flesh."
>By year 4, Bathsheba's AI is solved and we have developed a basic working AI architecture for the third research proposal."Child of artifice, divine by creation, beautiful in function and perfect in form."
>By year 5, all magitechnologies developed are sufficiently refined and integrated into combat ready Mage-armour nanomachine bodies for Battle Royal under all events."Let weak feed upon weak, that we may divine the nature of strength."
