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Changes: 2 new girls, Switched out an option on Miya's page.
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(4/17) - >>47710904 Fei La & Mishe
(5/17) - >>47710938 Twile & Harmony
(6/17) - >>47710983 Omne & Pan
(7/17) - >>47711012 Alice & Andrea
(8/17) - >>47711031 Kaila & Jeanne
>>47729470
Nothing new to see here...
(2/17)
(9/17) - >>47711047 Kataline & Floof
(10/17) - >>47711064 Saki & Oki
(11/17) - >>47711085 Chere & Yin
(12/17) - >>47713393 Lillan & Bloom
(13/17) - >>47713427 #056 "Bunny" & Medi
>>47729486
New intro page. If I add many more, Miya's gonna be NSFW, soon.
This time, it's Hakuna Matata Balloon and Earthen Ninja Honor.
(3/17)
>>47729470
>>47729486
Oh god why do you keep doing this I CAN'T CHOOSE A GIRL STOP TORTURING ME.
>>47729503
NEW PAGE
(14/17)
>>47729521
Library. It got full, so now this needs 2 pages as well. The file size is too large for me to just make it double wide.
(15/17)
>>47729541
Library 2.
(16/17)
>>47729551
Miya - THIS PAGE WAS UPDATED. The Nightie has been replaced. Plus, I swapped out another image for one that fits a bit better.
(17/17)
>>47729516
That means I'm doing my job!
>>47729470
It's not that I don't appreciate such a nice CYOA, but how many of these updates are we going to have before you finalize this thing, senpai? Renaming and reordering these new files in our collections is a pain.
>so anon, what's your characters background story?
>my character is a graduate from a hero academy
>>47729570
If I knew, I'd tell you. It's a hassle for me to up all the page numbers when I add a new intro page, too.
>>47729567
Give me a harpy or lamia girl and /I will melt./
THE FIGHT FOR LEGITIMACY CONTINUES.
http://www.strawpoll.me/10457273/r
Do these charts and similar where people world build using have a place in modern /cyoa/ society?
>>47729609
A qt bee girl might be nice too.
>>47729609
I'm trying to shy away from too many of the traditional monstergrills.
>>47729659
I was actually considering that one. I don't think she'd have any real overlap with Floof, but I feel that her theme (being in insect) might be too alike.
>>47729573
HE WAS TOP OF HIS CLASS IN EJ HAL
>>47729744
>>47729767
>>47729792
>>47729816
>All this Hero Academy dickery in the past few threads.
>No one has posted the actual CYOA so I can't post my new build.
>>47729833
New page.
>>47729567
Every waifu entry page just makes me love Mya even more.
>>47729573
god damn, i think as a rank and file soldier nothing would frighten me more.
>OH YOU'RE THE NEW COMMANDER, PLEASURE TO MEET YOU SIR, SO HOW MANY WARS HAVE YOU FOUGHT IN?
>"Th-This is my first one.."
>WELL, RIGHT, OKAY, BUT I MEAN YOU'VE BEEN IN FIGHTS OFCOURSE, YOU'RE COMMANDING US AFTER ALL
>"A-Actually i just graduated, I've never been in a fight"
fucking foobar meng.
>>47729567
Dragon loli when?
>>47729744
>>47729767
>>47729792
>>47729816
>>47729833
>>47729862
You made a deviant art character generator
>>47729629
Stop needlessly trying to divide people. They've been on /tg/ for years and occasionally happen into our threads. They've no real following and if they get one, which is very unlikely to happen as they've never really had one to begin with, they can just create a thread for themselves. For as much as they're posted anywhere it would not surprise me if more than a handful haven't seen them before to even know what they are so there isn't much harm in the occasional template. For fuck's sake, this is /qa/ tier.
>>47729573
>so it says here you majored in mage-armour and magitech engineering back in Odesium, can you make your mage-armour do any neat tricks?
>>47729703
I figured as much, but I'm a stickler for the classics, I guess. I've been following Branching Hearts since like 5 threads ago, and the ones on the top of my list, in no particular order, are Fei, Mishe, Floof, Bloom, and Medi. The new Plastic Air girl is kinda interesting though. The rest just seem too humanish for me, I guess? Hard to explain.
Anyway, love this CYOA tho, so keep it up.
>>47729868
I'm glad to hear it. I hope it make up for the "nerf" of her be-the-girl option being replaced.
>>47729885
That's a bit more on the unique side. I dunno, maybe.
>>47729754
>>47729875
>>47729862
It's still the worst page. It wouldn't be as bad if going to Academy City made you a gemstone instead, but esper is worse even if you cheat your ass off than "mage with infinite power."
>>47729875
I don't think anyone would put newly graduated as commander, more like
>Grizzled older veteran walks with some young fucboi infront of troops
>"This lad is my new steward that just graduated, he will be second/third/forth/fifth in command"
>>47729955
Yeah, I was trying to have a fair bit of humanish ones in there instead of purely monstergirls. That way it'd be more encompassing.
>>47730006
>That feel when you finish at the top of your class and you spend the next 4 years holding the chamber pot of some old alchi berzerker
>>47729567
Give me a black trap girl and /I will reflect on my life choices and what led me to develop such a ridiculous fetish as a former poltard/.
>>47730040
>not graduating top of your class from Odesium
400k starting salary baby
>>47730141
That's a pretty human description, so *technically* you could get that from #056 if you take her bonus.
>>47730147
>implying you won't get student loan cucked into working on the Odesium airships for a few decades after graduation
It's almost literally canon.
>>47730220
>he thinks working on an airship is somehow bad
>>47729289
bu- OH SHIT
>not reposting the damn cyoa so the rest of us can get in on all this banter
>>47730269
maybe if you ask nicely
>>47730283
Can you post Hero Academy cyoa pretty please with sugar and sprinkles on top?
>>47730249
Odesium is this close to getting shot out of the air once people realize how dangerous their forced magitek revolution is to the balance of an established lower tech fantasy world. I don't want to be anywhere near that airship when it happens.
>>47730333
Anon they're not forcing an magitek revolution, you're reading way too much in that one popular transhumanist/Father of Machines worshipping build and basing the entire academy on the actions of one individual.
>>47729908
>what is anything involving multidimensional/multiversal travel
>>47730317
here have sneak pic of first part of five, since I'm going to sleep beg other anons to post rest :3
Im confused, is the hero thing nine classes per year or nine total?
>>47730385
>nine classes per year
THATS INSANE. HOW FUCKING STRONG DO YOU EVEN WANT TO BE?!
>>47730406
On average, a university student studies 5 courses per semester and two semesters a year.
And a typical bachelor's degree with honours takes 4 years.
So in total a average college student would have taken 40 or so courses, assuming all courses last one semester and they all give the same amount of minutes/credits.
>>47729443
I have made OC.
It is not high quality, and english is not my first language, thus I'd appreciate criticism be it harsh or constructive.
If there is any interest I'll continue with the next page.
>>47730366
That's the theme of this entire meta-discussion, though!
>>47730381
suppose I'll do it.
>>47730625
>>47730644
only one more
>>47730602
I like it.
>>47730666
also, don't blame me for the shitty quality of these pics. I just went back to the last guy who posted it and downloaded it from there
>>7694659
If you want a clean pic you better wait for box wine to post it.
>>47730602
The rest please
>>47730602
I'm liking this a lot. It triggers all my special snowflake buttons just right.
>Shaolin Iron Body
Mandatory durability option.
>Flowing Stances
Counterattacks give me diamond erections.
NEXT PAGE PLSI'm praying for a cute trap companion.
>>47730705
>>47694659
apparently I didn't copy the 4.
>>47730711
I am sorry, I meant I'll continue making the next pages, my work on it started only a while ago. I just wanted to know if anyone would have any interest in a CYOA such as mine.
>>47730381
I just realised Uzuza only accepts exceptional physical specimens as students. I guess that build goes down the drain.I like the cliched from zero to hero thing. I can't start out as a musclebound Chad.
>>47730753
You proud of yourself for being such a slutty tease?
>>47730799
N-nomaybe.
>>47730733
I can't promise anything, but I could say japanese men tend to be effeminate.
>>47729521
Just for clarity, does the library automatically give you Beyn Deal?
>>47730602
Shunpo and Shaolin Iron Body. My punch would hurt like a mofucker. Both to me and whoever gets caught in it. I'm like a cannonball really.
Good start so far. Will keep my eye out for your updates. I think it's a plus that you don't get actual measurements of your power. Though you might want to say Master Fu taught you over several weeks instead of one lesson.
>>47730602
Hell yes, Iron Body and Flo-
>>47730733
Aw, beat me to it.
Well then Shunpo and Iron Body, I'll be a whirlwind of fists and iron!
>>47730859
>>47730871
DAMN IT.
>>47730819
>but I could say japanese men tend to be effeminate.
Why do I get the feeling 4chan is actively trying to make me gay?
>>47730733
>Counterattacks give me diamond erections.
they always remind me of ashita no joe.
>>47730406
When i was looking at builds i counted way more than nine classes so i wondered what the rules were
>>47730886
Shit son, just go fire and flo. You negating all the damage that comes your way while leaving flaming hand imprints on your enemies as you counter them.
>>47730602
>Everybody likes shunpo
>Nobody likes shadow form
What's the matter, 2edgy4u?
>>47730871
>>47730886
Anon can't seem to catch a break.
>>47730859
I will consider it, one might really be too little.
Maybe a week is good balance? You'll still be a genius, but it'll be less absurd.
>>47730602
>Shunpo
>Shadow
Nothing is worse to fight than an invisible teleporter - plus they're both useful in day-to-day life.
>>47730859
>over several weeks instead of one lesson
You trying to derail our special snowflake polar express?
>>47730945
>>47730954
>20 seconds apart
>>47730954
For the sake of balance I'm going to imagine shunpo+shadow users teleport with the sound of a loud fart and leave behind a dorito dustcloud.
>>47730928
That's not a bad idea.
Or wait if I take Shunpo and Fire, does that give me Rocket Kicks?
>>47730976
Longer than you have left to live...
>>47730625
I like this cyoa and wanted to make a build,
then i realize there's school war goin' on
>>47731025
>>47731025
Unless, you know- good back armour.
>>47731038
>Not defending your school
The shit is wrong you senpai?
>>47731025
shunpo+shadows
*shunpos behind you*
psssh
*you shunpo behind me*
psssh
*i shunpo behind you*
psssh
>>47731079
I'm insecure
>>47731063
And/or stand in front of something that will produce amusing results.
>>47731063
How can you stop what you can't see?SHADOW CENA
>>47731081
Truly this is the ultimate test of the ninja.
>>47729567
Why the fuck would you take out the best option?
>>47729521
FLO:
Orb of Life
Library of the Supernatural
Employment
Pick-Me-Up - Drugs without the bad effects! Woooooo!
Pump Up - Trap option?
Soap Star + Electric Fan- I'm not exactly sure what problems Electric Fan can blow away. Crippling depression? Money problems? Bad politicians? Where does it end?
Bonus - Actually, the squeaky sound of plastic is one of my least favorite sounds of all time. So.
Ranks: #20, between Chere and Lillan. It's just that I REALLY don't like squeaky plastic...
BEYN:
Tell me. Why does she wear the mask? ...Oh. "Beyn." I just got that.
Orb of Life
Library of
Training - I'd feel dirty if I chose Private Show, and I really don't handle spicy food well at all.
Sand Shield - It's not the coarse kind? And it'll cushion my falls? Yes please!
Miracle Oil - She likes it.
Bonus - Wait, which option is the Summoning Scroll? Sorry, I'm dumb.
...And what did she do to get banished anyway? Just the diary?
>>47729567
Nooo! Not the forbidden love option!
>>47731119
You're a pretty cute doggo so you could probably become a servant of one of the Lunestier noble girls. No need to have an opinion either, just accept their superiority.
>>47729521
Both girls seem neat, I like Beyn more because I don't have a latext/inflatable fetish (and yes that's a thing.)
>>47731186
N E V E R
>>47730381
Official St. Flares requisitions catalog for new students. Please select one option before submitting your voucher to the schools quartermaster.
Note: Plate armor and all courses related to the Department of Chivalry are no longer available due to budget cuts. All enrolled squires should report to their career councilers immediately.
>>47731227
That no pickle pee,
that no pump-a-rum!
>>47731205
>I don't have a latext/inflatable fetish (and yes that's a thing.)
If you feel the need to point out that these relatively tame fetishes exist for real, here of all places, then I must warn you to leave and never come back.
Your innocence is at stake.
>>47730381
>School:
Odesium
>Classes:
Ranged Weaponry x3 (Rifle, Mortar)
Potion Mixing
Smithing
Maneuvers
Stealth
Enhancement
Explosives
>Companions:
Znanje - Between her and Bathsheba, we should be rocking power armor in ten years.
Tash - Seems cool, and someone who could help me with my explosives classes.
Liene - Meh, elven waifu/meatshield
Valerie Bluewood - waifu/meatshield
Bathsheba
>Events
>Sports (Marksmanship, Unmounted)
>Research Proposal x2
Znanje, after years of hanging around and researching Bathsheba is finally ready to show her Autonomous Mage Armour Mk. 1 off as the pinnacle of Odesium technology. As long as we can work out all the kinks and get the higher-ups to notice, this could be the beginning of a revolution in magitech.
Anti-ki enhancement. Working with Izuki from Uzuza, I'm making my own proposal to the board, a new set of enhancements that work more efficiently to remove ki from an object than the traditional enhancement methods.
>Battle of the Arts x2
No one's fucking with me and Tash's fireworks display.
>Blind Date x2 (Sanyo; Izuki)
The date with Sanyo lasts about eight minutes during which she calls me a "bleeding heart heretic, overly concerned with not punishing the innocent", and I call her a "weak-hearted slut who had to suck off a god because she was too stupid do shit by her self" Blind Date - creating sworn enemies for centuries!
Izuki's a bro though, we chill and talk about the benefits of having multiple enhanced weapons that can be used to work the weaknesses of enemies. We promise to work on a technical ki-enhancement project later that becomes a research proposal.
Fundraising
Running a trinket shop to help protect Znanje from getting expelled after she fell asleep in class for the 40th time.
Post graduation: Preferably go to one of the other ships, and run a few marksmanship classes while working on continuing my research into adding enhancements and potion effects to ranged ammunition.
>>47729521
Few questions about Flo. I really like her personality. Don't care for the ninja girl.
Can she do pump it up on herself?
Can she do pump it up any time on me, or is it a one time thing?
And I guess I could theoretically make it so I essentially look like a woman, with breasts, bigger hips/thighs, and a more feminine face, right?
>>47731205
>I don't have a latext/inflatable fetish (and yes that's a thing.)
Oh sweet summer child, how I envy your innocence.Come back when you've fapped to amputee cuntboys being tentacle raped.
>>47731184
Oh, I forgot to rank Beyn. #18, between Kaila and Andrea. Rank might go up once I get clarification though.
>>47730858
Note quite. Although Beyn's banished, Cinder has her own personal reasons to pursue her. The effects of her "banishment" are actually pretty light as no one cares to enforce it much. Mainly it just means that she's only allowed to return home if she does so stealthily in the cover of night & leaves by the time anyone notices anything amiss. If they find evidence that she visited later, they'll just ignore it. Still, just to not be labelled an outcast would be nice. Because of the nature of the Library bonus, you're practically may as well take the drawback bonus since since otherwise she'd still have that preventing her welcome return.
>>47731182
Well, I remember one anon a couple threads back thought that option was present in too many of them, for instance.
>>47731184
>Pump Up - Trap option?
well, it *could* be used that way, I suppose.
The Electric Fan blows away pests & certain forms of generic bad luck (like a tree about to fall over on your house). The biggest limitation is that it can't do much against people because they might just get upset and persevere. That, or contact you through email.
I can understand you dislike of squeaking. It only really occurs if she / you (with bonus) rub your hands together or something.
Beyn uses the summoning scroll to summon any one of the 3 item options. Getting more scrolls means you can get all three. Basically her banishment went like this: Won Cinder's diary in a bet. Cinder made a counter-bet to win it back. Cheated. Beyn stole it with ninja stealth. Cinder cried to her mom (village elder). Beyn was "banished." That's why the banishment isn't taken that seriously. It is expected to only last until Cinder & Beyn make up... Even with the library bonus, Cinder will come running if Beyn returns home. But really, watching Senran Kagura in your house every morning while you eat cereal isn't the worst of fates. Might be some occasional damages, though.
>>47731205
Glad you like them.
>>47731300
Glad you like Flo. Yes, she can pump up herself. She can pump you up whenever, but if she does it at least once, she won't be able to do the other options as well... unless you're fine with exploding into chunks. Yes, she could do all sorts of plastic surgery type things on you. She just can't remove anything that's already there.
>>47731313
>Beyn
>pure maiden where it matters
>deliciously brown
>will teach you martial arts
>gives you a magical power
>absolutely amazing items
>bonus comes with a free tsundere ninja
>#18
How did you get such shit taste? Did you get cursed by a gypsy or something?
>>47731342
Ooh, if I can get all three scrolls and get her to make up with her village, I'll gladly take the bonus.
>>47731375
Well, uh, it's #14 now that I know the bonuses...
But the other girls are just better...
>>47729855
It's okay anon. Box will finish the new page soon.
>>47729567
Miya's blurb page, for any interested. Berri stopped posting it a couple threads ago.
>>47729875
I dunno anon, multiple characters (like the cute dwarf) mention being veterans of combat, and the tournament and monster hunts are held every single year, so if you've never been in a real fight that's your own fault.
>>47731342
>Well, I remember one anon a couple threads back thought that option was present in too many of them, for instance.
It could be in every one and it wouldn't be "too many". Besides, there aren't many that offer it as a temporary thing. Really with her it just makes the whole outfit thing actually usable, at least after the bonus, otherwise may as well just throw the whole section out.
>>47731462
Well, the bonus is more of "she sneaks back to the village to get the scroll & that allows Cinder to track her down & end up staying with you as the two fight daily." For the "banishment" to be removed, she'd have to lose to Cinder.
>>47731500
They can all get altered, not just in measurements, but to something you'd be willing to wear. Plus, the CYOA gives Miya more attention than anyone else. Also giving her such a highly prized item seemed like a bit much.
>>47729470
Orb of Life
Dream Home
Employment (Mediator)
I feel really bad for Fei La, plus she seems nice, so I'll choose her.
Homemaking
Sex Drive
Love Potion #14
I agree to feed her and get the Lustonomicon. Screw going out and trying to find love, we'll just use the love potion and become the most sickeningly sweet couple out there.
So, did SDA finally succumb to his prostate cancer?
Whats the latest version of stardust?
>>47729855
I know that feel.
>>47731342
So we have to keep her from ever being able to go home to prevent this Cinder hussy from stepping in, huh?
>>47731342
Wait I just fucking though of something. Her name is Beyn. She wears a mask. Beri damnit you clever fuck.WHY DOES SHE WEAR THE MASK!?
>>47731603
He was in an argument with an anon two threads ago about the Battlemage update. He's around, just stopped using a name.
>>47731668
Are you SDA?
>>47731668
Gotts' be praised.
What about battlemage?
>>47731639
>not wanting to dick them both and convince them to dick eachother
Do you even harem anime?
Granted, no one should ever actually watch harem anime, but still.
It's a pretty classic setup.
>>47731682
He's planning an advancement/quest system and anons were salty about being third battlemages.
>>47731686
>Sharing your waifu with anyone
Never.
>>47731639
Well, you don't have to "keep" her from going home. She just won't try unless you're that intent on getting extra items. She's somewhat neutral towards the prospect of fighting against the village's other top not-ninja every day. That fire sash is dangerous.
>>47731655
If she took it off, it would be extremely (emotionally) painful.
>>47731692
What intense babbies they are then.
>>47731712
She's a big girl.
>>47731723
Not really.
>>47731712
What I meant was that this Cinder person gets up in her face if we correct the problems keeping her from going home, so to keep Cinder away we pretty much have to keep her from having the choice.
>>47730602
Hey faggot, you promised page 2.
>>47731712
How would Miya feel if I just used her well stocked closet to play dress up with her and never bothered with it myself?
>>47731723
pic related
>>47731744
Yeah, but really, Beyn's the one that chose "banishment" over giving back the diary.
>>47731766
You'd get to see the rest of her hidden collections, for one.
>>47731706
They're both your waifu, they're also eachother's waifu and you are both of their hazubandos.
>>47731785
Does the Lady's Nightie still exist, but it's just not one of the things Miya initially offered?
>>47729567
>The Nightie has been replaced.
annnnnnnnnnd CYOA dropped.
>>47731807
Nope. Still sharing, still unacceptable.
The only good harems are the ones where both of the girls are only interested in the man and only have sex with him except during threesomes.
I just don't want this Cinder chick.
>>47731829
You could of course direct the harem in that way, it's the default for successful harem anime, but it's sub optimal and also shit taste.
>>47731863
Well I disagree, that's all there is to it.
>>47731872
There's more to it than that, namely you only disagree because you have shit taste.
Then again this is also to be expected of harem anime, because it too is shit.
>>47729862
So is the main difference between the two versatility?
>>47724968 >>47724981 >>47724997 >>47725013 >>47725033 >>47725054 >>47725066
>Race:
Lizardfolk
>Classes:
Warrior, Cleric
>Skills:
Embolden, Inspiration, Voice Mastery, Blocking Mastery, Heal, Purification, Holy Fire, Purge
>Armor:
Legionnaire Armor
>Arms:
Sword, Aghanim's Scepter
>Campaign:
Fort Brightstar, Krylock, The Reach, Wayfren, Traitors!, The Five Decade Siege, Food From Blackwood, Siege the City, Purge the Rulers, Put Down the Beasts
>Companions:
Centurion Marcus Longinus, Marguerite Berger, Thorleif Iciclebeard, Teeth-Like-Swords, Morahg,
>The Prison's Scouts
While the information is "extremely" valuable the raiding from Krylock is weakening us as a whole. It's terribly unfortunate that those scouts must die for other more pressing matters but their deaths will actually make it safer for whomever goes after the information again if the right person is sent and it's not like your life is promised when you join.
>The Green Hell
Simply put, I don't want to go anywhere near there and I'm not the right person to send anyhow. Let those unaffected go and reclaim what they lost. They've more of chance now than then.
>Issfror
More or less as the aforementioned but this time with the others clearly taking precedence.
>The Horn of Augustus
I've literally(he says, looking at the description for Siege the City)no way to know if the claims about it are legitimate. I will not let mere conjecture hold weight over facts.
>Purge of the Falseol
I ultimately don't need to be there. With the other two missions accomplished the final blow to our enemy is assured. I can rest easy knowing that we did what was the hardest and that it is done. The credit for being there at the end is not required.
>Each companion would be more than interested in an intimate relation
Marguerite is the only female in my party and we'd both likely learn from each other through my telling her of the world now. It's not a stretch to say that we could become friends or more...
>>47731909
One lets you warp reality and kick ass, the other is psychic powers.
>>47729521
Can you give us a picture of Cinder? I need to be on the safe side. Ww-w-what if she's acute girl?
>>47731820
sure, I guess?
>>47731821
>dropped
I was afraid of that. I'm always hesitant to nerf existing pages for reasons like that. I'm so sorry that I've ruined it for you...
Let me get a bit of data.
http://www.strawpoll.me/10461369
>>47731930
Sure.
>>47731909
Versatility yes, but espers also have instant access to their power with no preparation.
>>47731603
>>47730263 is linking to him
>>47731950
Well, in that case, that means we can get the Nightie if we waifu her. All is not lost!
...Although I should probably take it slow and not marry somebody just for a magical item they have.
>>47731950
Would be one thing to have never given her it to start with, although she would be a much lower tier basically not offering anything at all of value and still having the negative alcoholism.
taking it away after the fact? You should probably just drop the whole CYOA now. Now I'm afraid you are going to take away anything I like, so why should I bother building? And it's obvious you don't want to do more of what I like either, so what do I have to look forward to?
>>47731950
>http://www.strawpoll.me/10461369
Having absolutely no investment in my cock disappearing all I can say is I have no stake in the matter and still I like you.
>>47731680
Have you seen my god?
>>47732005
Jesus Christ, I liked the nightie better too but now I almost want to vote for the other option out of spite.
You're being too autistic about this. Beri's already included "be the girl" options in a lot of these, and only took it away here because he got lots of feedback that he was including too much of them. And it's very unlikely that he'll go back and change anyone other than Miya much at all.
You could just tell him "I enjoy the 'be the girl' option, and I'm sure many others do too, so I don't think you should listen to those asking for it removed" instead of getting all triggered and insulting someone who's provided you with so much content for free.
>>47729567
Huh I like the bunny suit seems very cool keep up the good work.
>>47731909
Theoretically, you could say that a magician has a broader bag of tricks, but a harder time using them, and espers get a single trick (albeit one that can be pretty big) and can use it all they want.
what are people's opinions on Anti-mages as a class?
>>47732099
I've already voted for the other option to spite him.
The guy is trying to guilt trip Beri and being a total dick.
>>47732135
100% sounds great
>>47732135
Shit. They basically make mages completely useless and a bad pick.
Rolled 17, 15, 2, 1, 5, 5, 1, 19, 6, 7, 11 = 89 (11d20)
>>47729521
Just to clarify: Is "Pump Up" a Trap-only option, a increase the size of the crotch bulge option, or can it be used as a gender change?
>>47732135
It makes sense that they would exist but overall I am not interested in them.
>>47732178
Nah dawg a good mage can get out of anything Anti-Magic just adds a challenge.
>>47732199
Nope, their powers now do nothing.
>>47732099
I am with you. The Nightie was probably the second best thing about Miyu (besides Miyu herself) and with that removed it greatly lessens Miyu. But that guy is just being a jackass.
>>47732135
Necessary. Mages must have a counter.
>>47732135
Only of you have anti-fighters, anti-rogues, and anti-clerics too.
Either have one class work well against mages but have other uses or balance the existing classes better.
>>47732236
So mages must be useless?
>>47732235
Err Miya. Great waifus name already getting fucked up in my head.
>>47732135
It's an obligatory shitfest option in the hands on PCs. As a setting element, they're okay. Of course, you knew this before you posted, and were looking for shit.
>>47732142
Spite me if I wish I just felt the need to convey how much this kind of thing pisses me off.
She's not even one of my top picks, I had her down at number 10 already. I just really, really hate the idea of heavily nerfing existing options unless it's really necessary and they are breaking the CYOA otherwise.
>>47732000
Using it post-marriage would be kinda...
>>47732005
I know that reducing any option after-the-fact is always met with hostility, but that's something I was a bit skeptical about even when I had first added it. Please forgive me, Anon. I just didn't want Miya to outshine the others is all...
>drop the whole CYOA
... I guess I haven't really started on the next page, yet.
>And it's obvious you don't want to do more of what I like either
What do you mean?
>>47732006
Thanks, Anon.
>>47732099
>>47732142
It's working...
>>47732124
But it seems the other is appreciated, too. And that Anon seems like a minority...
>>47732188
It can't be used as a gender change. Basically, she can reshape your body but only in ways of adding to it. You could be a trap or get a bulge.
Now, I just want to get a feel for Miya's popularity. If it is low, I wouldn't feel bad about pandering a bit more it. This'll be the last strawpoll on the matter. Basically the same two options as before, but if Miya (with or without that option) isn't your favorite & you feel like voting, please select the third
http://www.strawpoll.me/10461482
>>47732253
>anti-fighters, anti-rogues, and anti-cleric
It's called a Mage.
Aside from waifu cyoas. What is the easiest type of cyoas to make/get into?
>>47732314
>My only media experience was to DnD.
>>47730753
>>47730819
Heads up - I will find you and murder you with a rusty knife to the liver if you don't make the rest. Just a friendly tip.
>>47732261
Depending on the power of the setting's magic, Mages can counter non-Mages easily. This leads to a Mage-dominated world.
Anti-Mages are the answer.
>>47732314
>balance the existing classes better
>>47732321
>mage as anti-cleric
>DnD
C'mon son. A well-balanced DnD party is Wizard, Cleric, Druid, Archivist. As it should be. I mean, I guess three-four of each is still balanced, but.
>>47732315
Fantasy adventure. However all the successful ones have waifu companions/options. Space can also work but SDA ruined that for everyone.
>>47732312
Don't drop the CYOA.
>>47732312
Although keep in mind that you can expect, like, only one in twenty or so votes to choose anything other than the third since you have so many other girls.
I really really like Miya, but she's not my absolute favorite.
>>47732321
My local mythology has entire armies giving up and going home because of a single mage.
Legendary wizards have places named after them here, still.
>>47732312
>What do you mean?
I mean you decided, in your own words, that you had too much of that option already, so it seems pretty likely you won't be putting it in very many more times if at all. I've said already that it's possible to have an appealing option without it, but it's much more difficult.
Just FYI, I was the anon who posted a build for everything this morning.
>>47732362
What mythology is that?
>>47732351
How did SDA ruin space for everyone?
>>47732312
As the first anon who said I was going to drop it I don't want YOU to drop it. I want you to keep making the other anons happy while you enjoy making content. Its just that I can't pick someone besides Miya now as she is just what I want and without me being able to be a girl with her it ruined it just for me.
>>47732373
His autism cannot be matched in doing things and Star Dust I don't think can be easily matched or even outdone. Space Refugee came close but that was only due to the exotic aliens.
>>47732373
Because nothing can compete with SDA's Space CYOA. Which is incomplete and has balance issues caused by SDA not being able to into balancing, from what I've seen posted.
>>47732372
Native American
>>47732404
Wait, I thought your favorite was Twile.
>>47732332
I'm writing it all on a txt to make things easier later, problem is I'm also writing code for an assignment so it might take some time.
So far I have done work on companions and have laid down the barebones of what I shall do later. I can estimate it will take another 3 pages depending on how well I am able to make things fit.
>>47732421
You know you're gonna have to specify which tribe, bro.
Though yeah in general magic users are fucking scary in Native American mythologies.
>>47732424
Different anon? I am >>47731821 not >>47732005
>>47732424
Did you misquote? Because yes, mine >>47732370 was Twile. And yes, I'm the one being a total asshole about it. That's just how much I hate random uncalled for nerfs.
>>47732434
It's a hodgepodge of tribes all in the same general area, even if I could name them all I couldn't remember how to spell them, what with the weird dialectics they put all over their names.
>>47732419
>>47732420
>Because nothing can compete with SDA's Space CYOA.
>Star Dust I don't think can be easily matched or even outdone.
I'm going to beat SDA when it comes to space stuff now.
>>47732353
Alright. If it's still being enjoyed, I'll still add to it.
>>47732355
That's what I would hope for, a proportional share. And in that case, I wouldn't have any problems restoring the option to the most desired state. It would mean I was just nervously overcompensating and caused a mess over nothing. But that's still preferable to a significant flaw in the CYOA. As of this post, about half of the votes chose Miya. I'll see if it changes any by the end of the thread before making a decision.
>>47732370
Oh, you meant gender changing options. No, I wasn't done with them. That wasn't it. I just don't want them to be too dense is all. A few with, a few without, just didn't want it to be too common. As I add more options, of course it will appear again.
>>47732404
But if you couldn't pick anyone other than Miya & Miya wasn't going to get any additions, wouldn't you technically already be "done" or having "dropped" the CYOA? The only part you cared about wasn't going to change. I'll bring the option back, poll pending.
>>47732427
I can wait as long as it gets done eventually. Godspeed anon, your thing is good.
>>47731025
Where is this from?
>>47732490
Just a small recommendation. *IF* you do decide to bring the option back, make sure to leave the "replacement" as well. Otherwise you could just end up making more problems.
>>47732493
.... your worst nightmares.. kid...
>>47732544
fuck you too I guess
>>47730381
Name: Lindaswen Thereliel (goes by Lindas)
>Lunestier
>Arcane Magic x3
>Summoning Magic x3
>Tactics x3
>Magic Refinement
>Valerie Bluewood
>Allyce Westhold
>Crale Edwards
>Tennie Northbreed
>Suzette Highking
>The Great Hunt (every year)
>Security
>Bodyguard
I was a orphan adopted by Lunestier groundskeeper. A teacher saw that I have strong innate magical skills. So I got accepted in the prestigious magical school.
Hopefully with my summoning magic and tactics I can basically become a general of my own magic army and I can use arcane magic to protect myself and support my army. After graduation my friends and I can go on quests to find treasures and lost knowledge and help protect peasants and kingdoms. After I become stronger, I can take over a old castle as base and start small Queendom of magical creatures summoned from the different planes. Then become a famous mercenary company and have my magic army help settle conflicts in exchange for extravagant gifts and titles.
Eventually have more titles than all those pompous spoiled students at school who wouldn't except me because I'm "poor" and "low class".
>>47731294
>enhancements and potion effects to ranged ammunition
Scary!
>>47732493
I thought it was a Woodkid music video at first but turns out it'sK-pop
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dkYBPz4jENA
>>47732520
In all honesty, the "replacement" is what was originally there before I changed it before the first posting of it. If it is "removed" again, it will just go back into the closet of things that shouldn't see the light of day. There's not a whole lot of room to add yet more, though. I do understand entirely what you mean about removing anything being bad. It's typically never a good idea.
>>47731025
Is it me or what he's doing in this gif is not really _that_ difficult or even impressive?
>>47732491
>your thing is good
No one ever said that to me, not even my father. Thank you anon.
>>47732582
It's not technically challenging, but it's a nice effect. There isn't an absolute correlation between the difficulty of a maneuver and its effectiveness.
>>47731575
Oh, I somehow missed this and never commented on it. That's a nice little romance you've got yourself set up for, albeit rather lewd.
>>47732490
>But if you couldn't pick anyone other than Miya & Miya wasn't going to get any additions, wouldn't you technically already be "done" or having "dropped" the CYOA? The only part you cared about wasn't going to change. I'll bring the option back, poll pending.
Yeah. That was kind of a joke. I mean I pretty much dropped it as you said after I went with Miya as the CYOA was pretty much over for me anyway. I certainly did not mean for the jackass to try and guilt trip you or try and get you to change anything. I was just being a bit snarky. But this is 4chan so that is the norm.
>>47731603
>>47731682
>>47731692
I am alive. Just busy.
>>47732562
>Scary!
That's what happens when you give magical schooling to a guy that lived outside of a chemical weapons storage warehouse/test site/incinerator for a decade. Magically enhanced VX mortar shells.
>>47732835
How do we know It's really you?
>>47733087
Rape her and find out. Win/win either way.
>>47730381
>Name:
Timoth Baker
>School:
-Uzuza
>Courses:
-Martial Combat III
-Physical Training II
-Imbuement III
-Berserking II
>Companions:
-Duxix (If you don't pick lizardbro you're a fag)
-Trap-Catcher
-Crale Edwards
-Kara'Tee
-Allyce Westhold
>Events:
-Battle Royale x3
-Great Hunt x2
-Blind date (Znanje. The night starts awkwardly, and ends with us both in a city prison cell for the night and 40 bottles of machine lubricant in the evidence locker.)
-Bodyguard (The princess requests for me to take her away from the gathering to teach her what its like to not live a sheltered life. I take her to an illegal chicken fight. things get wild.)
>Description:
-Timoth is the son of a baker (hence the last name) who enrolled himself in Uzuza after deciding that he was tired of bread. He discovered in Uzuza that he had a talent for fighting with a greatsword and channeling Ki through his weapons. His short temper also led him to being a natural-born berserker. After graduation, he joined the army of the high king, and became a high ranking officer quickly. His true motivation for joining the army was to watch the princess from afar. He financed his way through school using his winnings from gambling in chicken fights, which he continues to do to this day.
>>47733176
>chicken fights
Didn't know they were letting Mexicans into Uzuza.
>>47733198
The chicken's might have been cockatrices. why do you think it was illegal?
>>47733208
>>47733198
and by might, I mean please don't tell the police
>>47733047
>a guy that lived outside of a chemical weapons storage warehouse/test site/incinerator for a decade
!?!?!
Hey Beri, I know you said you didn't really want a lamia because it's too basic monstergirl stuff, but what if she just looked like a lamia and was actually some sort of Never-ending story style luck dragon? Plenty of things you could do with that.
And on the topic of more girls, I was just brainstorming.
Other dimensional eldritch horror girl that is lovely because people are scared of her.
Some sort of girl that has a body composed of a swarm of nanobots or something. Or maybe she's an orb and creates a body out of whatever objects are lying around.
Has Hero Academy been updated in the Google Drive folders to 1.2? I think there was an update that Box Wine made for typos and clarifications.
i'm starting to love Hero Academy CYOA's build,
does anyone keep track of all the past build made?
i wanna read em'
>>47729551
You know I kinda like the muslim ninja girl.
>>47733320
Grew up near Ft. McClellan, former home of the U.S. Army Chemical Corps (and also seen in Borat). Even after they closed in '99, we still had the depot across town that held some of the Army's chemical weapons. When we decided to get rid of them, they were too dangerous to move, so they burned them on site right outside of my town of 40,000 people. We had special gtfo sirens in case the incinerator leaked or got blown up. That was between 2003 and 2011.
>The U.S. Army's Chemical Materials Agency destroyed by incineration (total):661,529 Chemical Munitions and 482,051 Gallons of Chemical Agent
>299,727 mustard filled mortars and 187,548 mustard gallons
>219,374 VX agent munitions and 196,925 US gallons (745,440 L) of VX[7]
>142,428 GB munitions and 96,078 US gallons (363,690 L) of GB
>almost 200,000 gallons of VX
>lethal dose of VX for a 80kg man is .56 milligrams
anyone got the Doom CYOA?
>>47733557
>Tfw we are just making more chemical weapons to replace the ones we destroyed.
Damn 200,000g though.
>>47733594
RIP AND TEAR
>>47730381
>>47730625
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>>47730705
>Odesium
>Mage Armor 2
Giant Robots are the tits. But I'm also building myself an ironman-like suit of power-armor for personal-scale combat.
>Arcane Magic 2
Has pretty good synergy with Mage Armor and let's me shoot lasers among other things.
>Ki Attunement 2
Can't call myself a mech pilot without hot-blood. Plus more lasers and helps mitigate feedback.
>Martial Combat 1
Gotta be able to wield my robot's fuck-huge sword.
>Tactics 1
So I know when best to use arcane magic and ki.
>Enhancement 1
Gotta protect myself from all that feedback. Even moreso cause I'll be inside the mech.
>Bardic Arts
The things I build aren't just combinations of science and magic, but works of art meant to inspire my allies, strike fear in the hearts of my enemies and invoke my arcane magic for fuck-huge blue lasers in tandem with Fuck-huge ki lasers.
>Tarkun Ironstout
Nearly indestructible mech sounds good to me. Her combat experience is also invaluable
>Jiel
Transportation for me, my friends and my giant robot. Seems wasteful to fly around in it all the time.
>Chandara
She promises adventure pure and simple.
>Liene
>Luvyna
>Battle Royal x2
>The Great Hunt x3
>Research Proposal
Tandem use of arcane magic and Ki while piloting power-armor and mechs
Witnessed a giant robot take down a rampaging kaiju near his family's estate when he was younger and has been obsessed with them ever since. After graduation, wants nothing more than to travel the world finding adventure and testing his skills by slaying giant monsters and dueling other mechs.
>>47733087
>How do we know It's really you?
How do we know anyone is anyone?
>>47733557
Bit on the scary side. I'm glad the incinerator never blew up. So do you have a interest in that sort of thing now? Are you in army?
>>47733809
Where is this from?
>>47729443
Reverse time
(35)
2x strength/ charisma
(25)
High jump
(20)
Leather skin Iron Bone
(10)
regeneration
(0)
slightly lucky
(0)
Slightly unlucky
always hungry
Other reincarates
unnerving aura
(35)
3xstr
(30)
make any one fall in love with you
(0)
>>47733853
[Batsu] Tentacles Training
>>47733795
>BERZERK PACK 2
>FRENZIED
>DEMON EATER
>HEAVY ARMOUR
>SPIKED KNUCKLES+CROWBAR
>GRAVITY GRENADE
>NIGHTMARE: SUCCUBI, MINOTAURS, FIENDBATS, BULKS, SNIPERS
>VERA RYABOVA
>BIG FUCKING GAME, GATES TO HELL, KING OF HELL
>HALF-DEMON
RIP AND TEAR
>>47733834
No I'm not in the army or super interested in chemical weapons, although if I go back to college it might be for Chemistry/Teaching. I'm just a poor worthless bastard that had the misfortune to live in Alabama for way too long.
If I was going to fight a war, I'd certainly consider cooking up some chemical type weapons though, especially if I was part of a group that had almost exclusive access to flying machines. As far as the scenario, I'd keep it limited to adding poisons/anti-magic/anti-ki/elemental/magic enhancements to bullets. No need to cause any more casualties than you absolutely need to, but at the same time, if I shoot something I intend for it to stay down.
>>47733504
Join us Hibiki and make a build.
>>47733795
>super-shotgun is an ordinary pump gun line the standard shotgun, instead of a big-bore double barrelled shotgun
I am mildly perturbed.
>>47733929
n-no
>>47729744
Chaos
Monk
Ravenclaw
Magical theory
potions
NevilleBest kid
>>47733989
Don't you want to be ready when the DLC drops later tonight or tomorrow?
>>47730602
Shadow flowing stances, better awareness with counters and counterpunches seems bredddy guud
>>47733902
>Chemistry/Teaching
That'd be fun! Just remember to study hard cuz upper level chemistry is hard. I got Bachelor's in bio-chemistry, and now I test water samples for a energy company to make sure we don't pollute to much. It's ok job, but teaching would be more exciting.
>adding antimagic enhancement to bullets
Don't you dare!
>>47734072
Does this mean I'm going to hell?
>>47734059
nah thanks, I will be reading what y'all building.
>>47730602
Definitely better than anything I have made. I like it, please finish it.
>>47734059
Wasn't it supposed to drop a while ago? Like 2 or 3 days ago?
>>47734160
Power outage and ban on Box. Box very early this mornining said he'd start workong it again.
>>47734106
Teaching is definitely the better job, months off every year, a union that makes your job bulletproof, and public work is the only place that still gives pensions. The problem is I'm a diagnosed avoidant. You can guess how much fun I'd have teaching a bunch of fucking pedros.
Gotta add anti-magic to the bullets. Us ranged and techie types have to innovate to stay relevant, plus you've got to give the schools what they want. Just be glad I don't have enough potion making and enhancement to make an area-effect anti-magic shell.
>>47734072
Could someone tell me where the picture of Ambrosia is from please and ty
>>47733870
That was pretty cute. Thanks.
>>47734147
I fucking love the trash goblin D.Va images that people post.
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Sorry if I missed anyone's build.
>>47734397
shiiiitttt anon,
thank you very much,
I'll grant you a free drawing request if you want.
thanks again anon
>>47734397
Holly crap. The dedication man. All the props to you dude.
>>47734460
You. Just. Offered a free thing to an anon. You do realize there are hundreds of us? Well, more like a dozen but still.
>>47734397
Also I think the smug Lunestier is actually an Ej Har trying to ruin Lunestier's good name. Think about it: Lunestier is famed for their diplomacy, caring about the people, and spoiled children either becoming respectable people or being kicked out. Ej Har is about trickery, deception, power at any cost, and is described as being Lunestier's rival. It makes perfect sense that an Ej Har spy would try to debase another universities' reputation making Ej Har look like the noble underdog fighting against the spoiled Lunestier tyranny. Maybe even a Lunestier who was kicked out for being a pretentious brat and in disgrace went to Ej Har out of revenge.Or she could just be a bitch.
