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THE FLAKENING CONTINUES!!!

Here is the previous thread: >>47194083

Writefaggings last time:
Raoki >>47208775
Xaniphe >>47209131
Frances >>47209936
Anna >>47241348
Kaina >>47257414

The repository is now updated. Check and make sure all of your stuff is there.

REMINDER:

If you want ANYTHING to go in the repo, just summon me. Otherwise I will only put writefagging and sheets in the repo.

Also, I added the blank template to the ALL FLAKESHEETS folder.

To summon me simply say
>OP OP, I SUMMON THEE. PLACE THIS FILE IN THE REPOSITORY.
And I will come.

>Current Repository

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bwl7IuoVRkFxUDZRVGVfQ1BDbm8
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>>47197422
When you put it together, let me know. I will stick it in the repo.

>>47200094
Are you sure? Once he's gone, he's not coming back.
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>>47269609

I feel more pride than I should in seeing my two creations from last thread in the repository. I'm working on trying to do some art for mine.
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>>47269643
Which two? Just curious.
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>>47269673

Sydhar and Ylia. (Still open to feedback on both) It's hard to find art of female minotaurs so I used a tauren but I feel like it's a cop-out so I'll try to draw Ylia myself.
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>>47261983
I want to see a story where some Ravnican flakes, or flakes visiting Ravnica, have to go dungeon crawling in the sewers to try and find this chick. Maybe to get information or something. Maybe Belloski sent them because he wants something from spider mom.

Make it happen, writefriends.
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>>47269623
You're right, I'll work on Jorge to make him a finished flake.
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Does Rakdos have normal performers who don't blow themselves or others up?
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>>47270020

They say they do.

Why these people willingly associate with the rest of Rakdos is beyond me.
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>>47270020
Yes, but it's a slippery slope that has to do with the fact that it's a Cult.
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>>47269763
Why hasn't this happened yet?

Get on it friendos.

Ravnica needs more stories.
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>>47269763
>Belloski sending Murdock to the sewers
>you just have to get something from this old lady, doesn't get many visits, kind of a loner who thinks only of her children.
>nothing dangerous.
>AT ALL
>hilarity ensues.
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>>47270513
Yes. Yes please. Should I do it or should Murdock anon?
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>>47270530
Well you are online now. Maybe put in some more characters and write stories featuring them to get the hang of their personalities. I wonder what could Mommy have that that old dragon wants.
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>>47270583
Well, she's a drider, and maybe she has a hoard from all of the adventurers or unfortunate people who have gotten caught in her web. You know what? I'm Mommy anon, so yes. Yes she has a hoard. And the one on Ravnica is particularly big, due to the high population.
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>>47270583
Also, what characters should I include? Ideas?

Any anons on who want in on this? I'll write a little thing for your character first, to make sure I have the personality right, and over the next week I will build up to a bigger dungeon crawl story.
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>>47270765
If you want Ravnicans, go through the list. The OP Chart lists at least the following flakes:
>Katin
>remes
>Del
>Dipterius
>Rinteller
>Symon
>Siah'liel
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>>47269698

Okay, the sketch of Ylia is done. Ain't much but it was fun to doodle, and at least I don't have to lean on Tauren fanart.
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>>47270765
>story hype intensifies
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http://pastebin.com/MNgg6ehK

Del-anon here.

Here's the Dr. Roman piece I promised a few threads ago. It's short, and has no real point, but whatever.
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>>47273002
>http://pastebin.com/MNgg6ehK
Dat last line
You know you should do a series of short pieces about Del and all the walkers that come and go around his shop. It would be amusing.
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Is there a point to coming up with new walkers given all the interest in already established flakes?
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>>47273054
Alright, I'll get to work on a few It's Always Sunny in Ravnica.

Any anons want a certain flake in? I'll take suggestions, but I'll prefer lesser known flakes.
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>>47273275
Drunk Murdock makes for great laughs.
>>47273208
I persoanlly don't do any after the first, but some people like to just make flakes.
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Everytime I see these threads I get reminded of my terrible idea for a walker and the urge to work on them builds.
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>>47270724
Belloski-anon here
I like this plan. A lot.
>>47269609
Oh hey the Frances short I did is still there. Nice
what are your guys' opinions on it?
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>>47273696
Do it. Worst case you get mucked in public.
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>>47273896
>sending Murdock to a spider infested pit with an insane planeswalker
We really have to decided what debt she has with him to obey such orders.
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>>47274693
what if spider mom and dragon jew just want to have tea together and he's just sending Murdock in to give an invitation?
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>>47273899
base idea is a blue Kor from Dominaria, their spark awakening some time after the Time-Spiral incident.
During the time distortions he ended up getting cursed with some form of temporal immunity; he wasn't connected to the timestream and was unable to effect or be effected by anything. A thief and spy he used his newfound temporal-weakness as a strength to you know... spy on folks.
Managed to cause a lot of trouble on the plane before a dedicated wizard he was tailing discovered how to fix his curse and give him a well deserved beating; thus awakening his spark.

After so long stuck in a timeless fleshless prison this Kor dude is off to explore the multiverse, to experience all the world has to offer. Thus ending up Blue/Red.

This sound like a stupid idea?
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>>47274767
Flawless.
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>>47274693
So Murdock and Frances are going? Anyone else? I'm compiling a list.

>>47274767
I don't know how this post makes me feel.
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>>47275711
>Murdock, the paranoid sellsword and Frances, the mad druid
A match made in mind bending hell
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>>47275711
I would say The Cathar, but his penchant for running straight into danger combined with Murdock running away would only end in tears.
Also since he killed two nests of spiderlings, the mission will go sideways in a spectacular fashion.
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>>47276071
>>47275711
I'm thinking of adding Katin and Zix, too. With a Del cameo. Anyone else? And would Zix-anon like to write his own intro piece for the story?
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>>47276539
I'm also considering Iosha. Spider mom may have some interesting artifacts in her Horde. Maybe she makes a side-quest while Nishal and the others were off gathering parts?

Any of these anons want to give me the deny or go with their characters? Or would you like to write a piece yourselves?
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>>47276539
It all comes down to who would work for Belloski
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>>47276580
>Horde
meant hoard. I've been posting in the WoW thread too much.
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>>47276584
>It all comes down to who's stupid enough to work for Belloski
FTFY
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>>47276686
>It all comes down to who's crazy enough to work for Belloski
FTFY
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>>47276712
>It all comes down to who thinks Belloski will actually pay them.
FTFY
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Would this be good for a Mardu colored walker?
>TFW no good pictures of black people in armor.
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Still working on Anna's story, getting writer's block
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New flake incoming
soon enough
maybe
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Here you go
If anyone wants to use Starke, feel free.
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>>47280033
Maaaay more red than white, to the point i would have used the red version of akroma rather. Also, there is no red spell in his spells list.
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>>47277226
50%no 50%ye
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>>47279683
How exactly do you use that weapon?
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>>47280079
So there isn't
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>>47282177
Like an axe that you can hand and a half with I suppose.
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>>47280033
I agree with the other anon, go with Akroma of Fury rather than Wrath Also, Pristine Angel, Firemane Avenger, and Baneslayer Angel might be good fits for your flake as well.
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>>47282177
You use it like an axe. And if you get locked against another blade, it provides you with an additional grip to gain the upper hand in leverage.
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>>47280033
God I was so fcking tired last night.
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>>47273275
>>47273054
http://pastebin.com/wwgZ1sVq

Here's the first episode of It's Always Sunny in Ravnica.

It's short, but I mostly just wanted to explain how Del's shop worked, I guess.
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Here's an edit for y'all
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>>47285299
>he only summons waifus
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Otp confirmed
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>>47285299
I hate to break it to you anon, but that is a picture of a woman.
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>>47288107
What's OPT?
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>>47288107
>>47289274
*OTP
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Hey look, it's Nishal-anon back again! might do some writefagging today/tomorrow, but mostly I've been thinking of designing cards for all the 'walkers in the thread to work a homebrewed planechase-variant game thing.

Also, I need an opinion on whether or not I should continue to sit on a BFZ fatpack or if I should cut my losses and open it

>>47289296
only true pairing.
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>>47285088
Del best walker. I want more of this. Can I write more of this?
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>>47289479
Nishal-anon, see>>47276580
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>>47289857
>Del best walker

Go right ahead, friendo.
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>>47289883
yeah man, go crazy!
for a personality refresher, Nishal's pretty much "hey look! friends!" with a healthy dose of "fuck Phyrexia and any tyrant," and Iosha's pretty much Sassy Smart Friend(TM) and a Collector-type when it comes to cool artifacts
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>>47289173
That was the best picture meeting my requirements I could find and figured Starke could be feminine.
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bumparoo
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>>47289906
http://pastebin.com/cckMFe6C Be gentle senpai, english is not even my first language and it is almost 3 am here.
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>>47274792
could I get some feedback on this idea?
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>>47274792
seems cool; I don't recall seeing any non-white Kor, so if you write it right it should be a neat thing
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>>47291674
There are I think two non-white kor; one blue one black from dominaria. At least that is the justification I'm using... And I figure planeswalkers aren't limited by their planes racial colors.
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http://magic.wizards.com/en/articles/archive/news/announcement-day-2016-05-16

FOUR COLOR LEGENDARIES CONFIRMED
Now we'll be able to see how to better manage engineering a four-colored flake
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>>47291568
>it's better than what I wrote

y-you too
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>>47291568
>http://pastebin.com/cckMFe6C
It was pretty good, the only thing I saw that bugged me on first glance was not starting a new paragraph when speakers changed, though that's a common thing these days it seems.
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I will post this until I get feedback
http://pastebin.com/P509vXHj
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I have a question, can Planeswalkers sense each other? I've seen plenty of old lore about Planeswalkers knowing when someone else had a latent spark.
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The rough translation of a prophecy passed down by the people of Tarkir who aren't under the rule of a dragon lord
Diomedes, Diomedes, by his honor is sworn,
To keep evil forever at bay!
And the fiercest foes rout when they hear triumph's shout,
Diomedes, for your blessing we pray!

Hearken now, sons of snow, to an age, long ago,
And the tale, boldly told, of the one!
Who was bound to aether, and places far away!
With a power to rival the sun!

And the spells, he did wield, on that glorious field,
When great Tarkir shuddered with war!
Mighty Diomedes, like a blade, cut through enemies all,
As the traveler issued his roar!

Diomedes, Diomedes, by his honor is sworn,
To keep evil forever at bay!
And the Scale Lords rout when they hear triumph's shout,
Diomedes, for your blessing we pray!

And the Shamans have foretold, of black wings unfold,
That when dragon's war come unfurled!
Silumgar, Bane of Khans, ancient death unbound
With a hunger to swallow the world!

But a day, shall arise, when Ojutai's lies,
Will be silenced forever and then!
Wild Tarkir will be free from foul Atarka's maw!
Diomedes will be the savior of men!

Diomedes, Diomedes, by his honor is sworn,
To keep evil forever at bay!
And the Warkites rout when they hear triumph's shout,
Diomedes, for your blessing we pray!
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>>47295043
old lore applies to oldwalkers, neowalkers can't inherently sense it, although if you were extremely knowledgeable on the nature of planes and walkers, like maybe Ugin, I'm sure you'd know what to look for.
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>>47294141
I tend to not do it when the speech continues from a previous one, honestly.
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>>47298267
It's not as bad as other examples of it since it is in the same conversation but it did take me out a little.
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>>47294343
it's words
a bunch of them
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>>47291630
you could
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>>47300188
S-senpai
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>>47302028
arranged into sentences that people can read
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snowstorm 2 confirmed dead
let's never do this again
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>>47303073
Wow, what a pessimist. Eat a dick. We've had more writefagging this storm by far. It's finally moving as fast as the old storm. Damn.
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>>47273275
if you want a kidnapping or someone who has a strangely specific knowledge about the past and future on request you're welcome to use Kaina but you have to talk like a faggot and pay her with something symbolically valuable
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>>47303073
>>47303328
speaking of, I'm excited to see what happens with Iosha and Nishal in the spider-anon's thing.
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>>47303388
Spider mom here. Sssssooooonnnnn.

I've just been mad busy the ladt few days. I'll start writing intro pieces tonight. You know, the "start of adventure/pcs meet" stories.
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>>47303424
oh dam, now I'm excited.

I've actually been thinking about making balanced PW cards for some of the flakes, as well as 30-card decks, so that they can be played in a planechase-variant thing where the player IS the planeswalker card.
pretty sure I mentioned it already, actually.
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>>47303483
I'm curious, are you a particular anon?
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>>47303975
I'm Nishal-anon
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>>47303997
Cuuuuuuriooous.

So, I'm terrified of writing other people's flakes. Why do YOU think the two of them would descend into the lair of the spider mom? What is their motivation? Is anyone with them?

Also, could I have a brief rundown of their personalities and demeanors?
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>>47304073
sure thing!
Nishal's all about "I gotta help the people! Also adventure!" so getting him to do stuff isn't hard, just have someone ask them to help save someone/multiple someone's from the murderweb.

I imagine him to be mostly jokey, but he can be serious when his friends or the lives of innocents are threatened. So I guess generally amicable until threatened?

Iosha'd go along for treasure and MAYBE to help people, but it would have to be a LOT of people to convince her to do it. She's more for the "greater" good than "common" good. I made her to be very much the opposite of Nishal's goofiness; where he just runs into things headfirst she plans ahead. She doesn't get too upset when randoms are threatened, but if someone threatens someone she calls a friend, she jumps to their defence immediately.

Where Nishal sees one big problem, Iosha breaks it down into smaller problems that can be dealt with quickly. Honestly their quirks very much break down into their colours. Nishal is good for bruiserwork, Iosha is all about thinking things through before they go south and turning the situation into her favour.
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>>47302363
>mfw senpai noticed me
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>>47304177
Would/could Belloski fit in with this as their effective quest giver? I have an idea for it, but I would like your input.
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>>47303073
Actually. I'm typing up an epic involving multiple flakes. Hopefully I'll be done by Friday.
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>>47304637
sure, I could see that happening.
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>>47305062
Oooh? Who is involved?
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>>47305200
Good:
Diomedes
Desdemona
Gwen
Íreth
Emir
Jorge

Evil:
Ivandar
Kixdle
Irriad
Vronak
bbeg Kurokami
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I gotta find a way to get on the character socializing train here. Maybe I'll write something up after my tabletop session.
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>>47305536
>Diomedes
>Desdemona
Finally more of these two.
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>>47305552
Who is your character?
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>>47305765

Got two: Ylia and Sydhar. Actually scribbled up Ylia earlier in the thread at >>47271497

Not sure if either of 'em are up to quality standard yet, though.
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>>47305751
Why not? I feel like they could have some good adventure times.
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Belloski bump
working on a thing btw
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>>47307756
Who will it feature?
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>>47307786
It's a solo story about Belloski and the deep, dark, inner machinations of his mind
Just doing it so that he can be fleshed out beyond the "scary quest giver" status he currently has
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>>47307841
Hey he fills the role pretty nicely, though. Sorry if I have been writing him wrong, if that's what you think.
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>>47307859
Oh no, you definitely aren't. I just want to do something with him.
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Alright, I return with edits to Sabratza. Hopefully this is slightly better of a reason for her spark igniting. I'll probably write an actual story of the ignition itself, but the gist was that the fight between her and her parents ended when she almost charred them with some uncontrolled magic, ignited in horror, and then bamfed to Tarkir.

Also, her family are originally Azorius, their last name being a corruption of Prahv, who thought being a civil servant was lame and got swindled by a canny Orzhov dealmaker who made them think they were joining the Orzhov proper and not just being unknowing upper class debtors.
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>>47305536
I'm so happy Ivander is showing up places. Honestly, I've made far too many flakes this storm, and it's nice to see people like using at least one of them.
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>>47308498
>there's two chef walkers now

If somebody doesn't write a cook-off story by the end of this, I'm gonna be really fucking disappointed.
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>>47308556
Wait, who's the other chef walker?
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>>47308523
I like Ivander quite a bit. He has so much potential in writing for him.
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>>47308588
Del, though I apparently forgot this when I wrote the first bit of Its Always Sunny on Ravnica.
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>>47308612
>Welcome to Darksteel Chef.
>We have here our master chefs for the challenger to battle.
>Darksteel Chef: Innistrad (Sabratza)
>Darksteel Chef: Ravnica (Del)
>And Darksteel Chef: Mirrodi- Wait, who let that Myr up on stage?!
>The messenger waves to the audience.
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>>47308661
I love it.

Give it three seasons and a spinoff about how to catch a planeswalker.
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>>47308696
It's "How to Catch a Primal Hunter".
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>>47308738
Garruk just can't shake the feeling he's being watched.

Meanwhile, behind a bush Sabratza, Del, and probably Naran pop up. One of them has a little Myr sketching out the scene, like cameras in Discworld.
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>>47308661
>halfway through the broadcast the announcer is replaced by DIOFIERI
>keeps rambling about FLAVORPOLIS
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>>47308661
>not iron root chef
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>>47304177
Starting the story now. It may not be done until tomorrow.
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>>47310911
Noice
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>>47308661
>The Messenger
Well, that would get confusing pretty quickly.
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>>47313876
Honestly, I can't help but think that Myr as part of the camera crew is a wonderful thing.
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A quick bump and question before I go to bed:
Does anyone have any ideas for the name of a Cathar group? I can't figure out if it would be something like band, unit, squad. whatever.

Honestly, if anyone has any ideas on Innistrad terminology/nomenclature, share them.
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>>47315186
A cathar gathering
A Catharing
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>>47314016
>Messenger doing odd jobs on other planes while doing its mission
>Results in cameo appearances in every other flake story as a bartender, as an extra in a mob of goblins, stunt double, etc.
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>>47315186
Catharism comes from a Greek word meaning the pure ones, do maybe The Pure?
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>>47315505
How long had messenger been active?
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What is the most pure form of Blue magic?
It seems to have a few water druids, telepaths (even two planeswalkers), and then weird energy wizards.
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>>47316794
knowledge magic too, as ambiguous as that is.
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>>47316794
I would say knowledge magic as set forth by Ancestral Recall.
Likewise, Red is damage, white is healing, green is HUEG, and black is sacrifice
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>>47316887
Would that be the "weird energy wizards" who mess around by drawing cards or returning creatures to hands?
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Who else is scared to read today's UR?

I WANT AVACYN TO LIVE, dammit!
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>>47317299
what a shame
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I just want to get to the new plane already
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>>47317553
Kaladesh?
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>>47317299
Anon, people die when they are exiled
Like, permadie
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>>47317595
Shhhhhhhhh


It's not true I don't belive you
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update on trying to make planeswalker cards for the snowflakes: for some reason MSE is refusing to let me add more than two abilites, and it keeps breaking when I install additional templates.

I've uninstalled and reinstalled the software so many times.
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>>47316622
For the purposes of the joke, as long as needed.

For reals, its been active ever since Memnarch was wrecked, since its mission and Memnarch being alive at the same time would be impossible.
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>>47305536
Alright, I've finished two chapters of the Flake Epic and I'm currently working on chapter three. It'll probably be about six chapters by the time I'm finished. Does anyone want to read the first two chapters now or wait until I'm fully finished?
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>>47319836
Damn, is no one about?
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>>47320571
I'm working on some stuff with Sabratza,
>>47319836
Hell yeah, post em!
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>>47319836
Alright here's the first two chapters.

I'm going to post them as png's because I'm on my phone and I don't want to have to post three paragraphs at a time.
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>>47320865
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>>47320865
Not even going to lie, as soon as I read "His name is Diomedes" I started hearing the John Cena theme.
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>>47320953
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>>47320975
So, would you want me to post each chapter as I finish them or wait until it's fully finished and post all chapters at once?
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>>47321001
Damn this thread is dead.
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>>47321852
I'll read them when I'm not at work.
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>>47321907
Coolio.
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Belloski edit when
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>>47323198
Right now
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I couldn't find the original snowflake image, so uh. Yeah. I made a PW card for this guy, working my way through the entire list of 'walkers.

Any tips on balance?
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>>47324677
The ulti is lame as fuck, anon.
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>>47324733
I wasn't sure what to give it that wouldn't make it broken as shit.
Maybe also giving it lifelink or first strike?
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>>47324677
>>47324770
Yeah, that's just like Arlinn's + ability.
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>>47324733
>>47324839
Maybe if it was an emblem.
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>>47324856
emblem that gives +3/+3 lifelink and vigilance?
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>>47324873
That would be -10 though.
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>>47324873
Also, doesn't fit with blue. Maybe...

-10: You get an emblem that says "Creatures you control get +2/+2 and gain vigilence and flying."
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>>47324883
works for me
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>>47324932
true, that is a mostly white ability. However the -3 is entirely blue, so it kinda evens out.
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>>47320865
>>47320887
>>47320906
>>47320931
>>47320953
>>47320975
You guys need to read the first two chapters of my story and tell me what you all think.
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>>47325066
it feels like you couldn't decide if DIOMEDES is supposed to talk like a thug or like Thor.
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>>47325140
What part is thuggish?
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>>47325206
"Like shit I'm going to be summoned by some wench to be expected to go on some journey for someone I know not"

why say "like shit"? It makes his speech sound like he's jumping between modern slang and old speak
did the greek say wench? I thought that was more a Scandanavian/UK think
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>>47325268
> not saying shit
> not saying wench
Someone has never seen Spartacus.

Also, he's a planeswalker and has been for quite some time. He will pick up lingo from other planes.
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>>47325355
you're right, I've never seen Spartacus.

Also, why did the first two snowflakes I clicked have to be UW?
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>>47325140
>>47325268
Now read the rest of it. And tell me what you think.
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Since we're doing cards, how does this look for a Sabratza?
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>>47324677
>>47324933
I'm in need of some planeswalker art; does anyone have something that fits a mage/knight type theme?
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>>47325963
What colors? Any defining kind of vibe you want to go with?
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>>47325963
Colors and quick discription of the character?
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>>47325976
Holy knight, something a little bit dressed down for a knight, not completely covered in plate mail.
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>>47325412
Again, the ulti is way too weak. Can I suggest the first ability to be a +2?
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>>47326806
I was actually concerned that the +1 was too weak in comparison to the costs of everything else, so hopping it to a +2 would work wonders

what do yo uthink about her abilities only being able to be used on other players' turns? I liked that little addon
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>>47326769
Here's one
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emergency bump
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>>47326954
Nigga, learn to word, also, don't use the fucking four-ability frame when your pw has only three.
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>>47329096
Thanks.
story this Friday maybe.
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>>47329096
Maybe his card got circumcised.
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Bump.
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>>47325412
If the creature is already tapped to be attacking, why in god's name would you want to tap it?
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>>47327136
This >>47331827
And also, you could leave it like this but it breaks one of the main rules of walkers. An alternative would be having all ablities say "at the beginning of your opponent's next turn, (x happens)" or something like that
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>>47332010
I should reword it to "tap target creature an opponent controls"
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>>47332638
Also because even if you can use her abilities in your opponent's turn, nowhere it says this gives them Instant speed. At best, you will have to use then in the main phase.
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>>47320865
>>47320887
>>47320906
>>47320931
>>47320953
>>47320975
Alright. Who has or is going to read these? *rolls around on the ground awaiting some peeps to say what they think of them*
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>>47332943
I refuse exclusively to spite you
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>>47333043
'Kay. Poor Desdemona's story will go unread. :(
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>>47333097
good
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>>47332858
yeah, after I read the initial critique I realised that the wording wasn't an instant-speed spell.

CHANGES: upped her starting loyalty, changed the wording of the first ability.
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>>47332943
I didnt like it. And if you keep posting *=action shit I will also actively avoid reading any further things you do.
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>>47332943
soon as you TOLD me to read it I decided I wasn't going to.
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>>47333145
The second ability makes her lose loyalty if she takes damage.
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>>47333198
it's supposed to, to stay in line with her spark igniting. I'm probably gonna change it to a +2 so that there's a viable reason to do it, but I don't want to make her indestructable because her story was putting her life on the line to save someone else. That's heavily negated by just becoming indestructible and knowing you're not gonna die.
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>>47333043
>>47333170
>>47333192
Samefagging much?
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>>47333192
I never demanded anyone to read them. I merely asked who was or has. o__o
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>>47333336
as the guy who said >>47333043, I can say I'm not the other guys. I have no strong feelings one way or the other about the story, as I have not read it and refuse to do so. I don't even know what it's about other than desdemona
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>>47333386
It's the first two chapters of the multi-flake epic starting Diomedes, Desdemona, Jorge, Gwen, Emir, and Íreth.
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>>47333455
what a shame I'll never read it, that sounds exciting
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>>47333043
>>47333170
>>47333192
If this isn't samefagging then there are some spiteful bitches here.

I mean shit, was I the only one to read the girl's story?
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>>47333505
It's okay. I just wanted some opinions. I don't expect everyone to read my stories.
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>>47333505
You better not read it, do what you're fucking told
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>>47333570
yessir
>>47333515
probably not, but gosh darn I'll do everything in my power to make sure I have no understanding on what transpires within those walls of text
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>>47333604
Sounds like a case of ADHD autism.
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>>47333674
ok
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>>47333515
nah man I skimmed it but as soon as they said >>47325422
I decided I wasn't going to thoroughly read it.
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>>47333515
>the girl's story

I've seen something similar posted in these flake threads before. What the fuck does that even mean? Does it mean that the writer is a girl? How do you know that? Why does it matter?

Also not samefagging. Just because multiple people didnt like the story doesnt mean its just one spiteful guy samefagging.
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>>47333923
one of the people involved in this trainwreck
it's not that I don't like the story, it's just I haven't read it
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>>47333923
ir you'd lurk more then you'd know that it's Des-chan. Who is a girl. We know this because it's been stated multiple times.

And it matters on pronouns. I'm not going to refer to her as an it.

It's pretty damn close together to not be samefagging. Also, none of them said they didn't like her writing. Only that they didn't bother reading it. Just to note.
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>>47334053
Anything Chillbrass' creator is commenting in is a trainwreck.

I think he confuses Des-chan with Vronak-chan.
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>>47334081
can I refer to her as an it? I want to objectify the author of the story I won't read
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>>47332943
I'm sorry, I meant to read them yesterday, but I have just been so busy. I just started my fulltime job, and it has been consuming a lot of my focus. That's also why I haven't finished the first spider mom story yet.
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>>47320906
Euugggggh
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>>47334098
>>47334081
Are we going to guess the genders of anons now? If so, my money is on Gaia-chan and Narimi/Selenra-san being girls.

I still liked their writing, tho. Just saying.
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>>47334098
Des' creator here. I don't mind whatever you want to refer to me as. It's your life buddy.

>>47334123
It's okay. I do t mind waiting. I'm just excited that someone wants to read it.

>>47334145
Wh-what?
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>>47334188
>someone wants to read it.
I do try to read everything that people post, even if just a little. But I am several stories behind now due to work.
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>>47334188
It is my life
and it is now, or never
I'm not going to read (your story) forever
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for the record, as much as I said I WASN'T going to read it because of being told to, I read it anyways,

Aside from stylistic problems I had, it's a good story. I just don't like the way it's written, but that's just me.

also, redid Akanta's card. I feel like this works a bit better, but I'm not sure if it's +2 TOO strong. Thoughts?
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>>47334327
as a side thought, the fact that her abilities can be used on opponent's turns makes me want to up the cost of her ult because bigger matches would mean she could on fourth turn.
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>>47334081
I'm really cant keep up with these shit conveyor belt made flakes made just "to have more flakes", especially when they are given nicknames.
>Also, none of them said they didn't like her writing. Only that they didn't bother reading it. Just to note.
>>47333170
>I didn't like it.
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>>47334345
Akanta-magine why
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>>47334400
quality pun, mate.
leaving the ult as-is because even if you're in a multiplayer match amount of mana you'd have wouldn't be conducive to casting massive amounts of creatures, and even then they only have ind. for one turn.

here's the first flake I picked that WASN'T uw, treeman Amund. Is their anon still around?
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>>47334243
I love Bon Jovi.
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>>47334398
*pets Chillbrass-san* It's okay.

You might be an asshole. But, you're our asshole.
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>>47334446
Oh.
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>>47334482
>this person disagrees with me
>I'll just call him Chillbrass so I will look like a good guy

You are being quite an asshole about this. I will rather drop off the storm entirely than be called Chillbrass. But good for you, right, you cunt? Lets opposing entities for you.
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>>47334725
lol, Don't be so bummed mate. It's all in good fun. I'm sure Chillbrass' creator isn't too thrilled about being dissed all the time.

I think more peeps need to relax and enjoy themselves.

So, who are your flakes?
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>>47335004
>So, who are your flakes?

So you can have more direct insults in your arsenal? Fuck off. If any negativity in these threads are met with "chillbrass samefagger", then its better that they die out sooner than later.
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right. well. since everything in here is so happy and no one criticized him, I'm assuming the Amund card is moderately balanced. Nice!
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>>47335125
Chill, bro. Anon was being playful, not disrespectful. You're the one being a sourpuss.
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>>47335125
Actually, no I wasn't going to insult you or our flakes. I genuinely wanted to know what you've made.
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>>47335704
Yeah. I think he works quite well. Good work.
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>>47335125
Whichever ones they are, I refuse to read their bios out of spite for this attitude you're showing.
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>>47334446
01 is weak compared to what other walkers can drop with their +1. Buff it a litte. You should use the canon walkers (aside form Jace and Tibalt) as a guideline imho.
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>>47334188
That bullshit prophecy flake and a wish granting artifact that is fueled by destroying planes and correct me if I'm wrong
"Bring it to me and I'll grant you a wish. "
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>>47335917
What about my bios?
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>>47335917
What attitude am I showing?
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>>47336025
Salt and spite
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>>47335983
The artifact is being used to collide two planes at a time. The artifact is fueled by mana leylines.
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>>47336033
Actually, I'm not. I'm being rather calm and open minded. I'm not the kind of person to hold anything against anyone. I think you either have me confused with another anon or are confused in the intent of my words. I'm not being sarcastic or snooty.
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>>47336045
But it can be used to grant wishes, am I wrong?
Also euuurrrgh
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>>47336069
Then both you and other anon should get along fine. So, tell us about your flakes.
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>>47336000
your you, double-o zero, anything
>>47336069
I can't read that last sentence out of refusal to read it, could you repeat it?
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>>47336092
You act like that is the first time in MtG lore that something grants the wielder wishes.

>>47336111
My flakes are Kixdle, Rakkan, Gwen, Desdemona, Ambrosia, and Kurokami.
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>>47335925
his +1 is the same as Nissa, Voice of Zendikar, which is a pretty balanced PW imo.

Should I make it "Put a 0/1 Plant creature token onto the battlefield, then put a +1/+1 counter on another target creature."?
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>>47336136
:P
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