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>>47234287
What's up with all these disgusting comfy CYOA's I keep seeing? it was bad enough that some degenerate would request it every thread, but now this filth's in the OP? It's official, /cyoag/ has gone to shit.
>>47234349
Yep. You might as well leave now; things are never getting better.
>>47234349
I post random CYOAs for the OP. If you don't like it, then you can make the new thread before I do.
Simple enough.
>>47234349
Stop being a bitch
Well, I said I'd post
>OC
so I better do it.
I-it's not like I want to, idiot!
>>47234458
My interest is rather muted, but I'll look at it later.
>>47234458
>that intro
Is that some /pol/ bait I see? That is some fine bait, anon.
Too bad about the CYOA, it looked nice but it's a blatant fetish fest. I'll take the demon timeline though, nothing to lose really. So #339 it is.
>>47234458
Hmmm. Earth #21 definitely has some pretty big flaws from my perspective but damn if that lady doesn't look fantastic in a tux. #268 is a close third place but tease & denial does not at all interest me. Finally, I could live in #339 and that succubus girl sounds pretty perfect. Still can't decide though. Guess I'll roll. Evens are #21, odds I go to #339.
>>47234458
>we literally made Hitler
This is fetishfuel, terrible fetishfuel. Even worse is that it's mostly femdom.
I'm still going to pick #992 though. Men basically have all the power there for some reason.
>>47234552
I mean, the whole thing is pretty baity. Can't say I'm looking forward to people freaking out over shit, probably made up claims of NTR given the track record around here. Still though, kind of a fun distraction of a CYOA. No real meat beyond picking a fetish but whatever. Dropshadows, fitting art, readable text. Certainly above-average.
>>47234458
>boys have to like being raped because it's a girl doing it
Ahem.
How do you come up with a stat system /cyoag/? I've been having trouble creating one for my cyoa.
>>47234669
Don't include one?
>>47234669
What do you need a stat system for?Seriously. Answer that question and solve for each of your needs, it basically builds itself.
>>47234669
Depends on how detailed you want to get, and to what purpose. Stardust, for example has a lot of stats, but they don't mean anything because no units are given. Other CYOAs have quests with stat unlocks. Power Armor borders on actual RPG mechanics, while Rapture Academy reverse engineered its stat system from the RPG it's based off of.
What do you want to do, Anon?
Anyone have any medieval fantasy CYOAs?
Is Gluttony not the best choice?
>>47234669
I made a stat system with my upcoming CYOA because I found it to be a key mechanic. Don't include stats for the sake of stats or you get that whole mess with Titanlands.
Try to give meaning to your stats, I mean the Monster Hunter CYOA was good practice on stats, but it could've been better. Still, try not to make it too overly complicated. Cap it if you can.
>>47234777
No. The best choice is to be embraced by the Lord in Heaven and not to fall for Satan's trickery.
>>47234458
Okay the problem is I don't know which I pick, all I know is that I don't like #339.
Just look at it
>Timeline #21
>Women harassing me, groping me form behind while I do the dishes and getting fondled in public while pretending to resist
>Timeline #268
>Fucking Amazons. Sweaty, battle sacred women throwing me in bed
>timeline #635
>/ss/.On second thought, it would return me to before puberty. No thanks.
>Timeline #992
>Also a daring timeline but not much as the top two
You win this one,faggot. I can't find the best one.
>>47234552
>>47234604
That could be any Austrian former painter.
I didn't make the CYOA, but my headcanon is thathis paintings would have been so bad that literally any other timeline would have been favorable
>>47234777
>>47234805
We have options for that as well
>>47234800
>he doesn't want to build a 170.5 stat points godslaying character
How pathetic.
>>47234777
Triple sevens are hard to deny, but Gluttony was the first one I looked at and that sounds terrible. Maybe the other 6 come with huge downsides as well but is the point of this CYOA to pick which one of 7 awful curses you're supposed to try to live with?
>>47234856
>>47234458
All of the options are pretty good. #268 is probably my least favorite because it seems painful. #339 is good, but expects me to be too forward. The other three are a bit of a toss up, though. I think I'll go with #992. It seems to have nice security (40:60 ratio). Plus it even mentions being possessive. I don't mind the cute, either. Actually, as far as that goes, #635 is also good. Gonna go with #992, though, because of the opportunity to be stay-at-home.
If I were you, I would have named the timelines, though. Like: "#339 - Demon Uprising" so that they could more easily be referenced in builds. Unless there's context clues, I can't recall which each number was.
>>47234458
Well >>47234812 here
I'm gonna take the #21'th timeline
>>47234800
How to make a working stat system:
1. Make all stats equally powerful.
2. Make sure all options have the same cost per stat ratio.
3. Cap stats.
As >>47234669 said Titanlands was a mess that failed completely at #2 and #3, and Monster Hunter is a good example of well implemented stats. I'd also suggest looking at Dark City and Train Stop for examples of good stat systems.
>>47235098
That's not the order the quotes were supposed to be in.
Oh well...
>>47234458
Meh. I'd like 21 if it wasn't for the "playing hard to get" thing. I like the idea of being the only guy who will actually give them what they want.
hey /tg/ for a CYOA with classes, would you rather have each class get a choice of skills (like how Titanlands has a choice of Fire Manipulation, Boiling blood, etc.) or would you rather you pick abilities like a Fireball spell?
>>47235148
I kind of just took that as being as accurate as any broadly-spoken relationship advice in our current world. Write a 2 paragraph description of the culture of our current world and it's going to be more wrong than right so I just figured it got the broad strokes across but other than that it's still basically humans. The generic advice holds true generally, but it's much more important to be able to respond to individuals, well, individually.
>>47235274
I'm fine with either. Hell, mix the two together with "generic abilities" and "specialist abilities".
>>47235274
I hate cyoas where picking a class means nothing more than getting 4 skills. I'm not a fucking pokemon. Having Raise Undead, Drain Life, Death Blast and Create Monstrosity, does not make me feel like a Necromancer.
>>47235274
I can't quite parse this, but I think I know what you're trying to ask.
Personally, I prefer a box of skills to choose from, and if there's character classes I prefer the class to have some kind of perk that synergies with everything.
For example, I could pick a warrior class, and their special skill might "weapon arts", which allows me to use martial techniques based on my abilities. Even if I spend every one of my skill picks on magic abilities, I'm still a great fighter, because I've made myself a spellsword.
WIth the same set of skill picks, I could be a mage, a rouge, an assassin, and a bard, and if the class perks are done right, I'll still be a great mage, bard, whatever.
That's just my thoughts on the matter, but I might not even be answering the question you're trying to ask anyway..
>>47234867
There not really curses, but I see your point. And to answer your question, you pick one of seven powersets and imagine what you would do with them.
It's strange, many people have stated Gluttony is terrible, and yet I still like the option. Am I retarded?
>>47235370
>I'm not a fucking pokemon
you sure?
>>47235148
What a manslut. Don't you know that a pencil that gets sharpened too much is eventually reduced to nothing? I bet you have a small d and a lot of mommy issues.
>>47235274
I would always, always prefer something like "fire manipulation" to any number of specific spells I can do with fire. I loathe that kind of creativity-crippling video gamey mechanic.
>>47235452
>>47235406
Well after having taken the time to read through them all they're all pretty terrible in one way or another. Which is fitting. Gluttony, to me, still seems like the worst choice however. It just removes so much of your agency as a person the drives you mad over time. It's not even about enjoyment; Lust has very similar problems but the Chosen of Lust at least about pleasure and isn't driven by the same overpowering compulsion. A Chosen of Gluttony loses the ability to do anything but eat and is unlikely to find any enjoyment in the task until their mind is truly lost.
>>47234945
yeah... I realize I haven't a damned clue what you're all picking.
>>47235416
Quite frankly having only four moves makes him less than a pokemon, at least each poke has a different ability as well.
>>47235515
Black on White text, please?
>>47235487
Yeah, I guess that would suck. Though I have taken much time to think about it and may have found about two or three ways to deal with the loss of sanity. Care to hear?
>>47235403
>>47235475
So my idea was this:
Warriors (or the rough equivalent) get superhuman statistics and inhuman skill with some weapons of their choice.
And mages (or the rough equivalent) get stuff like fire manipulation, lightning manipulation, etc. etc.
And you get to pick and choose some of the abilities like in Titanlands.
>>47235699
Sounds good to me
Welp this is the first technically playable build probably won't post an update again until i finish the next (and for my sake hopefully last) two pages anyways hope you guys don't hate it.
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>>47235732
Ended up dropping demonology for assassination and cherviler for dueling
also special thanks to all you wonderful volunteer proofreaders you guys are awesome and beautiful and I would buy you the highest quality boxed wine if i could
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can someone post the latest dragon cyoa?
>>47235732
>Uzuza
>Unarmed Combat x3
>Ki Attuenment x3
>Physical Training x3
>Berserking
>>47235732
>>47235766
Lunestier
Master Tactics, Advanced Teamwork, Advanced Maneuvers, Basic Traps, Basic Stealth.
Lunestier: Diplomacy.
Warriors, Mages, Archers. They're all valued, but none is more valued than the leading officer, whom always gets a better pay-- Which stands to reason, as there are less leaders than there are warriors and followers behind him.
Here I go!
>>47234349
"Someone derives pleasure from something I don't like so I'm going to complain about it and ruin everyone else's good time." You are an enormous tool. I hope you grow up one day.
>>47235596
Hit me, if only because now I'm darkly curious as to what could come out of this CYOA.
>>47235908
That has been the theme of the last few threads. It's shit, yes, but this one has been remarkably clear so far.
>>47234812
>I don't like #339.
B-but, Succubus onee-sans...
Can anyone link skeleton gangrape CYOA? Me and my friends are gonna run a SG session this weekend.
>>47235732
At this point I'm just annoyed.
I'll still do your cyoa when it's finished, but seeing this half-finished thing posted over and over again is getting boring. I'm not going to look at it until it's done.
>>47234347
Reposting my question from two threads ago.
>For easy drainage, shouldn't it read something like "unless your body has an unusually high production rate, you'll be fully drained with every discharge"?
>As it is, I think it kinda reads as the opposite of that.
>>47235949
>not looking her in her eyes
>not looking her in her tits
Does this guy just have the craziest neck fetish, or what?
>>47235949
>the way her eyes squint when he asks about the age
Amazing
>>47235732
>>47235766
>Ej Har
>Physical Training: Advanced (2)
>Armed Combat: Master (5)
>Manouvers: Advanced (7)
>Blood Magic: Master (10)
I'm not sure about this build but it might work and I like Ej Har as an institute. I wouldn't be much of a pure mage, rather a warrior wielding blood weapons, and using blood magic for enhancement and support.
I'll probably end up scrapping this build though.
>>47235879
Kindly kill yourself
I'm not even joking. I genuinely don't want to live in a world where you might end up raping a woman and spreading your genes.
>>47235732
>Ej Har
I don't think most people would mind if I just went rogue and did my own thing, being an Ej Hari mage.
>Arcane Magics * 3
>Summoning Magics * 3
>Potion mixing * 2
>Smithing * 1
>Blood Magic
I'm a magic inventor!
>>47235978
I think he's looking back. Like, the direction that to the succubus, would be left. More like he's just avoiding eye contact entirely.
>>47235909
As you already know, Gluttony's main issue is his ever increasing decent into madness. However, I see two (maybe three) ways to fix it.
1. Join Pride and help him get the others. Since Pride's Might of the Emperor ability makes him a god upon having the other sins view him as their leader, it is within reason that Pride would be able to aid in keeping Gluttony sane and able to think.
2. Eat Envy. Might just be the most likely option to succeed. Since Feed allows Gluttony to take the powers of any chosen he consumes (though much weaker), eating Envy and using Theft to take other's sanity and use it for yourself would deal with the madness.
3?. This one is only questionable because it involves >>47234856 >>47234874
(set in the same universe of course). Instead of siding with the forces of darkness, it might be possible to use Kindness's wish ability to remove madness from Gluttony's powerset entirely and allow him to join the forces of good, though this may require multiple wishes (three or four).
Thoughts?
Wasn't able to post this in the last thread when people were asking for BroQuest stuff.
>>47234458
Hard to say between /ss/-world or reversed gender roles (#21). /ss/ since fem -> male rape is one of my more shameful fetishes.
>>47236021
Pretty sure the school exclusive magics are 'free.' You get nine to spend in the 'public' pool and 1 to spend in the 'private' one.
>>47236091
Forgot to mention, Number three will require other people to be willing to sacrifice their wishes for you.
>>47235732
I don't dislike this at all, but I'm with the other guy. I don't really get the purpose of posting works in progress, cyoas are like anything else you write. You should finish a bit, look over what you've done, finish more, look things over, finish the entire thing and give it a careful rereading again, checking once more after every change, and definitely make sure to use spellcheck somewhere along the line. Putting WIPs in the thread only gives people promises of things to come that may be left unfulfilled due to loss of time, work, or motivation.
All that said, my build so far
>St. Flares
>Ki Attunement Mastery
>Arcane Magic Mastery
>Elemental Magic Mastery
>Basic Proficiency in Druidism
Things should go either very right or very wrong for me like this.
>>47234458
I like this well enough but all of them are basically the same.
I'd go 339 as it's a little less about being raped all the time.
>>47235732
Alternatively to >>47235900
Odesium, Enhancement.
Master Arcane Magic, Master Elemental magic, Basic Illusion Magic, Advanced Summoning Magic.
Selling magical weapons can be profitable I guess. Not sure how Illusion Magic and Summoning Magic can add up to enhancement, but I guess its worth it.
>>47236026
Did you mean to reply to that anon or was that supposed to be for someone in another thread?
>>47235866
You had the same build as me! Well, I didn't plan on getting Broly big though. Plus imma mage slay.
>>47235766
>Beast training
>aquatic creatures, incests, birds of prey, etc
>incests
uh
>>47236154
Since the exclusive magics don't mention your proficiency in them, I assume they function exactly the same as the basic classes. They're just exclusive and you get 1 point in them for free.
>>47236026
>B-but if a man doesn't like being dominant he's a deviant
Oh yeah sorry for the deviancy
>>47235732
I don't hate it.
Based on what you have so far, I think I'd shoot for a techno-bard:
Odesium
Basic Ranged Combat
Basic Smithing
Advanced Illusion Magic
Basic Arcane Magic
Advanced Bardic Arts
Basic Mage Armor
Advanced Enhancement
I will have a robot band with illusion magic lightshows. I wanted airship skills too, but instead I'll partner up with a bro whos and airship specialist and we can tour the world that way.
>>47236290
>he doesn't get his beasts to train from incests
>>47236290
What anon, you've never heard of the legendary Imouto? They say it only comes into bloom every 15 years.
>>47236261
Oh wait scratch that, I read that wrong. I had 3 in Berserk and one in maneuvers.
>>47236259
I obviously meant it for you, you collosal faggot.
>>47236318
>Baisc Mage Armor
>Advanced Enhancement
Max 1 specialist class, that's not how it works, yadda yadda, sorry mate.
>>47236309
I'm not surprised you can't read, given you can barely spell. You can go back to /d/ to fap over your cartoons rather than post them here.
>>47235949
What is this anime?
... For research purposes, of course.
>>47236358
Pretty sure Box Wine said that the exclusives work the same way as the other courses. Except of course you can only pick the ones from your school.
He should be fine
>>47235732
>>47235766
>School
Odesium
>Classes
Knowledge (Master-Engineering)
Smithing (Master)
Ranged Combat (Basic)
Maneuvvers (Basic)
Tactics (Basic)
>Odesium Classes
Airship Training
build me a badass airship and join in some badass adventure
>>47236351
>>47236351
>I obviously meant it for you
Funny, considering I didn't start posting in this thread until after you told that anon to kill himself. Reading comprehension would have told you it wasn't me, considering I said "that anon" instead of "me."
I'm genuinely confused though, how do you get that someone should kill themselves before they rape someone by them admitting to be a guy that wants to have the female role in a relationship? Actual rape rates aside,it's about 50/50 for the gender split for those curious,society tends to view the female role as rape victims, not perpetrators.
>>47236358
Where does it say that?
It says 9 classes, + one free specialist course.
And then the specialist courses are exclusive to a school.
So why shouldn't I be able to spend some of my 9 class points on extra specialty classes?
(Them working on the same Basic/Advanced/Master as the common classes was an assumption of mine though)
So I disagree. Unless you are actually Box Wine in which case you may want to specify that only one exclusive course can be taken.
>>47236358
I asked about in the other thread and what I understood is that you have 1 free course from the specialized school, but nothing tha limits it to only one.
>>47227934
>>47236412
Konosuba.
Watch it now, it's great.
>>47234458
I could kiss you right now, Anon. This caters to my most important fetishes.
>>47235732
Academy: Odesium
Basic Smithing
Basic Arcane Magic
Basic Tactics
Basic Teamwork
Master Knowledge
Master Airship Training
Basically, build and organize my own Air Fleet, going around to investigate interesting ruins and magical anomalies across the world to learn their secrets, then use those secrets to develop fancy new technology to improve my airships.
>>47235968
If you give feedback while it's still in development the author gets to course correct.
Stop being a whiny bitch and accept that many places use Beta releases for a fucking reson.
>>47234458
992 sounds the best of this, no rape, no needing to be overtly submisive and as another anon mentioned you can have a lot of power as women can't really force you into anything as there always other women who are ready to "save" you. 635 might not be bad too, especially as you get a biiger lifspan due to startin younger.
>>47234458
It's entirely possible anon just wanted to make a fetish CYOA, you all realize that right? I don't hear this shit about Slut Life or any of the other fetish posts, even the two or three other Femdom ones. Shitposting aside, It's a hard sell between #21 and #992 for me, cause #992 hits about four of my favorite fetishes, but damn does that girl look good in a suit.
>>47234458
Can you post the girl in the tuxedo? I find women wearing tuxedos extremely hot
>>47234863
Ej Har
Master Elementalist
Master Illusionist
Basic Arcane
Basic Ki Attunement
Basic Potion mixing
Blood training
Things I saw:
"well lets move on too your classes"
Uzuza spelled differently in "student of uzura can't take.."
Arcane, "by their immigration (imagination?)
Specify >>47236497 , it's written like specializations are a choose one add-on. Alternatively, simply stick with the "choose one" thing, makes it interesting.
G-gib box wine.
>>47236539
If you love it so much I can only assume you'll make a cyoa on the premise, right?
I mean, it's the least you could do if you really liked it.
![CgOla9VUEAEYqjC[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/33iES54.png "CgOla9VUEAEYqjC[1].png")
>>47236901
Not the creator, but I found it on Danbooru.
>>47236893
The vast majority of responses to that have been positive, or at least receptive, though? I'm not sure who you're telling off.
>>47236901
Agreed. It's probably one of my favorite aesthetics.
>>47236958
Christ, how did I misquote that bad.
>>47235732
>>47235766
>>47234458
>that filename
You prepared more than one page, future proofed it or what?
>>47236962
Jesus, man. I've already got something I'm working on and I don't want the first thing I do to be a fetish CYOA, but maybe in the future I'll make a shitstorm-causing fetish CYOA of my own.
>>47237011
It would only be fair, don't you agree? I do something you like, you do something I like, and then I want to reciprocate once more.
A happy circle of OC.
Mine hasn't started a shitstorm yet, just someone posting about "men must enjoy rape"he's right, of course, actual rape is fucked. But this isn't actual rape., so I don't see how that comment relates to anything.
I finally finished the main part of the Dragon King CYOA.
I'll do the optional Companion page if you want me to, and I'll post the mystery box if someone chooses it.
Not shitposting. I want to become more openminded. What's the furriest cyoa there is?
>>47237103
Page 2
>>47237103
Companions? yes please!
>>47237122
Page 3
>>47237103
>companions
Yes please. Preferably a subby inferior dragon.
>>47237114
>asking for something furry
>on 4chan
I believe you when you say your'e not shitposting, but yeah. That's gonna go well.
>>47236973
The first few responses I read called it fetish bait, and that seemed unfair to me. I may have overreacted a little.
>>47237156
It's blatant fetish bait IMO.I want more of it.
>>47237103
Companions? Yes.
That said, I don't think you'll get many people telling you to make less content.
>>47237141
I like the factions but none of them feel very Kingly.
>>47237174
see >>47236962
I'll be waiting with bated breath for when you make one.
>>47237141
Does the joy arua overide the grey dragons human see you as a monter triat?
>>47237212
But anon-senpai, I'm a terrible writer and designer.
>>47237141
what is marduk's path? Am I blind?
>>47237130
>>47237148
>>47237203
Well I'll get to work on it then
>>47237208
Well in most of them, you're appointed leader of the faction, and you can rise beyond that status. I just made it to where if you don't want to be king of the dragons, you can still be king of something
>>47237222
I can change it to where the Grey dragons can't choose Jovial
>>47237260
The mystery box. If you want to choose it, I will post it
>>47237103
>Dragon
>Scaleless
>Marduk's Path
Going full Seath here.
>>47237282
You win Marduk's Path.
>>47237281
>>47237282
dew it
>>47237281
b-but i want to be a Jovial grey dragon sempai
>>47237281
Post it goddamit.
>>47237308
Well it'd be contradictory, but you can be
>>47237253
Though titties, I suppose. Guess we'll never get a big reverse gender roles CYOA since you aren't willing to try.
>>47237103
>Manta
>Astral
>Nomad
>Divine
>Marduk's Path
The other factions are too controlling and Tiamat needs to be less of a dictator.
If Marduk's Path sucks, then I'll just fly off into space never to be seen again.
Was the last part of Rapture Academy ever posted?
>>47237335
Well, I could, but I'm worried that my ideas might cause another shitstorm.
And this is /cyoag/, so you can't really say my concerns are unwarranted.
>>47237357
I think the shitstorm scared them away.
>>47237351
>giant space manta goes off to find alÃen life that doesnt suck.
Cool concept
>>47237357
>>47237369
Aw, making all sorts of different builds for that was the most fun I'd had in a while with a CYOA.
>>47237103
Shenlong
Grey
Harem
Jovial
The Consortium
Slavery is Happiness
Ignorance is Bliss
War is Peace
>>47237303
>Marduk is the edge incarnate
Damm, I'd hoped Marduk would be portrayed mythologically correct. This Marduk is a big no no.
>>47237103
>>47237122
>>47237141
I guess if y'all are curious as to what I would choose:
>Dragonborn
>Crimson
>Harem
>Majesty
>No Path
I will be Dracula, the Vampire King. I will give the world the gift of half-human, half-dragon vampires.
>>47237411
Yeah, I was hoping for some kind of Gwyn like character.
>>47237411
It's a fantasy world, I don't think being mythologically correct would matter.
>>47237443
Isn't the fact that you made the mythology real enough to make it a fantasy world?
A CYOA about aligning with one of the norse gods would be a fantasy CYOA, no?
But people would still think you're breaking some invisible rule by making Thor the god of magic and Loki the god of honesty.
>>47237369
It was a CYOA about a highschool with sex slavery of women, of course there would be a shitstorm..
>>47237366
The "shitstorm" for this one was incredibly mild though. Honestly I was pretty surprised, considering it certainly had that potential. Still, I did call it fetish bait as well but I mean, I liked it. I'd say they're maybe defined too narrowly (no world-spanning culture is ever going to be that homogenized) but it was kind of like the light snack of the CYOA world.
>>47237103
Dragon
Orange
Hunger
Divine
Mercenary
I will just go around the world fixing problems people may have in exchange for some money, which I will use to buy a large sum of food. Any who try and stop me will be kindly asked to not do so before I decide to roar them into submission.
>>47237366
Well that sucks.
>>47234458
I know people are going to disagree with me (probably because they have a humiliation fetish), but if you are going to do femdom cyoas this is how to do them. Certain other CYOAs resort to humiliation, forced crossdressing, torture, violent rape, and futa, because apparently the only way they can make her "dominant" is to make your life a living hell.
Either go with Demons or /ss/. The shota options has the side benefit of de-aging me by over 15 years giving me a good chance at a "do over". But demons are always more fun than humans and the demon option is actually not dom at all strangely enough.
>>47237150
Why is 4chan so against furry anyway? I don't understand the appeal myself but cat ears can be cute so there's that at least.
>>47237497
The demons option even gives you a lot of room to avoid femdom, if you so choose. I still slightly preferred the Role Reversal world but I admit I have my misgivings.
>>47237475
Angel, I'm sure we've been over this before: One full-stop shows you've ended the sentence, three are an ellipsis.
You don't use two full-stops.
Another new one that might get some folks mad
>>47237531
Not really. Just pick Pauly and you get to be a powerful, rich magical girl after a 1 year fuckbuddy relationship.
>>47237531
I'm going to be very disappointed if literally explicit bait actually gets any sort of angry response.
>>47234856
>>47234874
I'll take Kindness. Try to get the Virtues together and lead humanity as a sort of god king. I just hope I can keep the Virtues together.
>>47237531
I would get mad if I could read it.
>>47234458
I choose the leg shark of course.If I am a grill, can I have a husbando instead?
>>47234458
#339, absolutely. #21 and #286 were strong contenders.
#635 and #992 weren't options.
>>47237103
>Dragonborn
>Purple
>Worship
>Mentor
>The Hunters
I'm not some crude brute, slaughtering humans without art or skill. No, instead I go about my business quietly without the humans ever realizing their impending doom. Imparting to them magical secrets, those they worship me for, that ultimately lead to havoc and destruction. They think they did something wrong, and I'm long gone with cults cropping up in my wake.
>>47237514
I don't think we consider simply kemonomimi as furry.
But if you asked for my uninformed opinion, I'd guess that most people hate them for various reasons:
-they find it incredibly disgusting (like the reaction some people would have to, say, scat or guro)
-they equate it with bestiality
-they might associate it with SJWs if they're the type to get pissed off about that sort of thing
-a disproportionate amount of furries like to cross it over with other "disgusting" fetishes
-many of the most vocal furries can reach full-autism level of social unawareness in public and online
But it's not like I, like, do research about this stuff or anything, so take my guess with a grain of salt.
>>47237599
It doesn't say anything about changed genders so I would assume so.
>>47237531
>might get some folks mad
How? If you want to retain your purity, just go with Alexandria. It specifically states her boyfriend won't touch you and she has no interest in you. Yeah, it also says she might "reward you to him" or invite you to a threesome, but it's special occasions only and it already said he won't do anything to you. You've just got to be the maid. As for her brother, he's almost 13 and most definitely not your caretaker/handler, so he can't force you into anything.
>>47237599
Does the CYOA mention the gender of the waifus? If so, no, you obviously can't genderbend them
>>47235732
>>47235766
Lunestier
>Ki Attunement (3)
>Potion Mixing (3)
>Tactics (1)
>Teamwork (1)
>Maneuvers (1)
>Diplomacy
I'm going to be the best damn roids producer ever.
>>47237677
He can do whatever the fuck he wants. There's no harm in imagining a waifu is a husbando.
>>47237103
Behemoth
Mecha
Guardian:The United States of America
Warrior
The Hunters:Other patriotic American dragons
>not pledging allegiance to the flag
>not upholding the constitution and the Republic
>not having a mechanized body that is further improved and refined by the brightest minds of the Free World
>not being armed with the entire arsenal of democracy
>not being BFFs with the President of the United States
>and be President Trump's glorious mount as he rides to war on Mexico
>>47237531
>Oh btw, you're magically bound to your handle and can't leave them for extended periods. And no matter what, any of them can overpower you if they so choose.
>Johny loses his magical power after 6 months
>He can still overpower me
Okay.
Also, Alexandria. Just cause.
>>47234458
So #21 explicitly mentions women being the main breadwinners and the other don't. I find that highly interesting.
I guess 635 has pintsized CEO's and scientists. (probably not bouncers, maybe soldiers)
992 mentions some girls forcing their bf's to stay indoors but that of course means most don't
so you'll probably have a job. I wonder what the tolerance is for possessive relationship rivalry in the workplace
>>47234458
>Greece wasn't Christianized on Earth #268
I know what I must do. Nobody expects the Greek Inquisition
>>47237677
>>47237721
>If I am a grill
>>47237668
>her boyfriend won't touch
On his own, he definetly touching you during a threesome or when she will reward you to him. But yeah, it's a good choice anyway.
>>47237778
'he' is a gender neutral pronoun
>>47237627
The one thing I do know is that furries are extremely aggressive with copyright claims and their own "do not post" rules. So much so that allowing furry content makes life hell for moderators and users alike, which is why furry is specifically banned from all boards here (NOT because people hate it, specifically because it's more trouble than it's worth).
I figure by association that gives people enough reason to hate, and years and generations of users down the line the hate becomes a more irrational and generalized sort of thing.
>>47237768
Get your hands off my poetessfu you sister-fucking worshipers of Dagon!
>>47237778
So you saw the post but didn't answer the question?
Strange. Why bother asking when the only answer youll accept is "yes, it's exactly the way you want it to be"?
>>47237817
lel
>>47237828
I meant if I could be the waifu you thick skulled fucktard.
>>47234458
I want to go to a female dominated world.
I don't want to get raped though.
>>47237141
>tfw no bonus for choosing no one
>tfw it's worse than choosing mercenary and doing fuck all
Why
I also kinda wonder why there's no healing and defensive dragon colors...I guess that comes with the territory of being one of the more esoteric types?
Behemoth
Astral, I'm sure I'm not supposed to be able to choose this but I see no restrictions. So I 'm choosing it. And can fly now.
Survivor, assuming I keep my dragonform's human abilities
Hermetic
Hunters , what if I don't ever actually "cause havoc" though? Is that "leaving the faction"?
>>47237843
In a way they're right, technically it was once the rule in english if you are unaware of someone's gender the default pronoun to use, 'he'. Though that's basically an archaic rule that has faded away, and replaced with the use of the word, 'they'. I'm also not sure why the hell I know this.
>>47237892
Green is kind of a healer
>>47237897
Leaving the Hunters would mean you're not going around and killing or destroying, so yes.
>>47237933
It's fine anon. Technically they is "supposed" to be substituted for he/she, but it's only a formal rule.
>>47237103
Breed: Tarrasque
>>47237122
Color: Mecha
>>47237141
Immortality: Hibernation
Aspect: Mentor
Faction: The Golden Council
I am a Machine of Peace. I aim to guide the sinful to the path of virtue, as well as serve as a standard for the righteous to follow.
>>47237933
>I'm also not sure why the hell I know this.
If it helps, this describes the entirety of the English language for me. This language is a trainwreck and "English" classes don't help.
Affinity:
>Mystical
Size:
>Petite
Race:
>Celestial
Boss Perks (8):
>Hybrid * 2, Demonic + Draconic (6)
>Vitality (5)
>Magic (4)
>Personal Guards (3)
>Bonus Affinities * 2 (1, Technology and Air)
>Companion (0, Acoustics, Average, Humanoid)
Minions (15 + 4 to spend on lieutenants, they are mostly Celestials and Constructs that take various forms, Petite and average are their sizes.):
Mooks:
>Mages * 2 (13)
>Engineers * 2 (11)
>Soldiers * 3 (9)
>Clerics (8)
>Servants (7)
>Recruiters (6)
>Merchants * 2 (4)
Elites:
>Craftsmen (3)
>Overseers(2)
>Sorcerers(1)
Minion Perks:
>Training (0)
With the complications:
>Ascendance (7)
>Evolution(6)
>Appearance (5)
>Priests * 2 (3)
>Psionics * 2 (1)
>Warriors (0)
Lieutenants:
>Archmage(3)
>Warlord(2)
>Oracle(1)
>Champion(0)
Realm Perks (2):
>Unknown & Hidden
Complications:
>Benevolent (+3 Minion)
>Crusade (+5 Minion)
>Undead (+5 Minion)
Thus my kingdom is comfy asf.
>>47237103
Dragon-Turtle
Green
Worship, Majesty.
No Path.
Time to become the god-island I was destined to be. This will either by a very lax life, or I will fail immediately.
>>47235732
>>47235766
>Odesium
>Tactics x3
>Illusion Magic x3
>Summoning Magic x3
>Explosives
What's better than being able to summon otherworldly beings to do my fighting for me? Being able to summon otherwordly beings to do my fighting for me that also make stuff go boom! And with my Illusion magic I'll make it seem like I have twice as many as I have. Is that the real one coming at you from the left or is it just a distraction from the actual real one on the right?
You're going to ignore them and try to go straight for me? Good luck, I'm behind 7000 summons.
>>47238053
I forgot that I have five more points left.
Then the rest are split between:
>Warriors * 3
>Soldiers * 2
>>47237956
So taking either manta or tarasque and staying human constantly essentially provides true immortality right? Get punched in the face by behemoth and live?
>>47238046
Now you're just being silly. All languages are fluid and allow poetic license, they all have children changing the rules, and they all take loanwords from the rest of the world. English is a moderately exceptional languange in some regards, mostly having to do with America's cultural impact, but it is not really a "trainwreck". It only seems that way since you're (obviously) much more familiar with it.
>>47237763
Johnny is the exception. It specifically says he's your bitch-slave after the 6 months and he DOESN'T lose his magic. Just specifically his power over you.
SO it's a year and 6 months of pure hell and then a few decades of pay-back should you hold back from just murdering the bastard.
>>47237531
Ron probably.
If he's straight-up a replacement with my own personality and shit, I know exactly how to deal with that, you know? Also, I'm really not that bad a guy. Unless that prevents me any access to my old family and friends if that'd otherwise be an option picking anyone else.
Otherwise Alexandria. Because Alberto doesn't have direct control there, so if sexual favors are supposedly inevitable, I could probably just conditionally withhold them in exhange for him doing my chores and shit. Maid duties averted.
>>47238097
Try not to get run over by an ambulance.
>>47238195
You can still die, but it'd just be harder to kill you. You can still be pierced by a Manta's tail or get sick and die from dragon venom, but blunt force isn't as effective or ineffective, depending on what you choose.
Image Version: https://www.mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches
Highlander will post Rank draft when he can, polls later.
>>47234669
It really depends on your needs. In most of my half built OC I don't have one in the first place.
For one thing, I take the Y in CYOA seriously, and prefer the character be the player; so anything that would be covered by a stat is just some multiplier or adjective.
Even apart from that, I try to keep it simple. Rather than numbers, I like stats with just levels that are relative to each other. Almost like the point of CYOAs is that the imagination of the player is the driving force; I felt that as I'd add more and more specific details to what exactly some strength stat means your robot can lift, or how many MPH their speed stat lets them move, I just created more opportunities for the imagination of the player to hit a stumbling block and go "wait that's stupid, that stat is worth ten times that one by these examples."
So it's all about paring down. I made a kingdom maker only has technology, economic power, and military power, each with only five levels, for instance.
On the other hand, there's always value in doing something different. I'm excited by this magical adventure CYOA I've been working on, and it has fairly detailed and crunchy stats for your magic's overall power and for your magic casting stamina. There's also a kind of skill psedo-stat that isn't bought directly, but a measure of the player's compatibility with their form of magic.
>>47234777
I don't like any of them! Too much imposition on my personality, too much other people suffering.
>>47234867
>>47235406
They seem a lot like curses to me.
Gluttony does give you a potentially arbitrary lifespan, as well as the ability to steal greatly weakened powers of the other chosen. But you suffer ego death somewhere along the way; and well before that you either go mad or lose that power anyways.
Sloth seems like one of the least objectionable to me.
>>47238497
Well, they are the Seven Sins. Were you expecting them to be nice to you and others?
>>47238497
What about Greed?
All you would have to do is get loads of money.
>>47238097
Watch out for ambulances and ghost children.
>>47238572
The other Seven Sins cyoa was a lot more enjoyable. I do agree that this one was highly on-theme.
>>47234458
I need 339 right now.
>>47235956
I assumed this had to be a joke. "Even the absurdity of 4chan must have a limit," I thought. Oh how wrong I was.
>>47238722
Okay but where are the 2 DLC pages?
>>47238722
>>47238755
Dunno.
>>47238756
(Are condiments food? Captcha accepted it I guess. I hope I haven't forever corrupted some newly awakened AI.)
>>47238575
Yeah but I'm lazy.
>>47238205
>>47237531
I thought Ron would be an okay choice too. Poor deluded fork of myself. I'm not totally clear, I get zero magical powers before the time's up? It'd be nice to make my clone more attractive.
>>47237763
As >>47238205 said, Johnny doesn't lose his magical powers, just his power over you.
Also it's not six months. It's six months AFTER the expected end of the term, which is a year. 18 months of knife rape.
>>47237817
To about the same way that "you" is strictly plural, and "robes" means something you've robbed from somebody, sure.
>>47234458
>>47237599
>>47234458
After carefully thinking both 21 and 268 through, I choose 21. The idea of me having a little manslut who I can order and boss around, only to have him blush and say "Yes ma'am." is too much to pass up.
For starters, I think I will mandate that, in addition to his normal uniform, that he must wear a male corset in order to perfect his posture, whether the corset be visible or not is of no matter to me, though I will definitely enjoy it more if he makes it visible. As well, I will not tolerate the slightest sloppiness on his part. His hair must be properly groomed, and I will force him to undergo laser removal of his facial and nose hair lest he lose his job, at my expense of course. Lastly, my office toy must eat his meals at my side, just in case I require something from him. Of course, since he is a man, he will most likely have slobbish tendencies, and I cannot risk him making a mess of my desk. He will eat on the floor next to it, kneeling so that he may rise with haste if I require it, and also be in perfect head patting distance. I think I will relegate him to shining my shoes as well... and due to their supreme craftsmanship, he should honor the talent of their female maker and kiss each of them, before and after.
God, it would be pretty fun/sexy. 10/10 anon, better than legshark material.
>>47238722
>>47238756
Dwarf Skeleton. Crown.
Time Travel, Flight.
Skeleton Cave.
Nemesis can only be Kelly Goldstein.
>>47238756
Allies: Luther, Randal, Dr.Bones.
Artefact: Child's Doll.
Lesbian rally.
>>47238777
France.
CYOA books.
Hypno-Disc
By secretly smuggling my CYOA books into my vacation after all my rapes are completed, my incompetent and distracted teammates will shortly take leave trying to rape alone/doctor people/stalk outside of the main base, and then I will transform into a little girl and live in France!
If I fail, this all be a delicate inquiry as to whether gang raping a loli is better for the loli or for the gang rapist skeletons!
Its a win-win!
>>47238926
You realize that you're the man being bossed around, not the boss, right?
>>47238947
Read the spoiler in the first post she linked.
>>47237303
>Marmaduke
FTFY
>>47238115
I'm actually going to remove one of the warriors and replace it with Hybrid to make my celestials part-dragon. Then I'm going to remove one of my Soldiers to add another race to my minion pool:
Giant Beasts. I'm too worried for my people to make the creatures any larger. On the bright side, those that know of my kingdom will be hard pressed to attack it.
Lastly, I'll remove one more warrior and replace it with some riders; let's hope a soldier or two learns something.
>>47238882
Who said you had to work hard with Greed? You could just invest in stocks or become a loan shark or something similar.
>>47238926
You're a much meaner boss than the canon girl is, Jesus. I'd just quit in that situation. I'm sure there are other lewd bosses around with nicer attitudes.
This thread has a lot of good OC in it.
Speaking of OC, tomorrow, perhaps around this time. I'll be finished with a 9 page CYOA. I'm halfway through the last page now, but I won't be able to finish it until after a busy day tomorrow.
>>47239402
Take your time, friend. We've got plenty other things to bitch about while you fine-tune it.
>>47239179
>Implying I'm mean
Anon, I'm a controlling bitch, but I'm a kind one. You want an expensive corset, with better support but softer fabric? Sure, I'll order one for you. You aren't feeling the cafeteria food is up to your standards? I'll just have my chefs cook another course just for you. You can have caviar or steak with a small glass of wine every day you work of me, if you will just kneel and let my gentle, but controlling hand fall upon your head. Hell, if while you are shining my shoes, I happen to notice your own aren't up to the standard of my secretary? You'll be receiving a new pair in the mail by the end of the week. I am even kind enough to remove your morning inconvenience, so that you aren't forced with the chore of shaving so that you have the pleasure to leave work at night with my lipstick embedded in your cheek, my sweet musings of your obedience and quality of character making you blush as you drive home to your empty bed, dreaming of the pleasure I promise to give you when you put that diamond ring aside for a golden band.
I'm hard, but if you stick through all the shit I throw at you, you're worthy of my adoration, love, and so much more.
>>47238959
That's not how CYOAs work, this one is clearly balanced towards player being male.
>>47239561
Yes, but that's how she's choosing to play it. It's really not my problem, friend. I'm just explaining why she's doing it.
>>47239561
>Balanced
How the hell do you balance a fetish CYOA?
>>47239530
I'm not sure if you're posting in-character or if you don't see how your disregard for some of the more fundamental aspects of your fantasy can come across as callous or mean to anyone who wouldn't want to be in the position you're proposing. Frankly, it does seem kind of abusive, even.
But don't worry, I'm sure you can find the subby boy of your very consensual dreams around here someplace.
>>47239612
I've had some ideas on the topic but nothing I'm very happy with. Basically it comes down to the player adjusting the score based on whether or not something is a fetish for them. Obviously an imperfect solution to something that isn't even really a problem to begin with.
>>47238174
Critique: There aren't enough slaves I care for, which is ultimately fine, but I'd like more money pits so I can make proper use of my full 2500 gold.
>>47239690
>Wood
Yeah right, one fire and this shit goes down quickly. Also, the Natural Materials bonus will be fucked over with all the wood you're using to make it.
>Stone
Best option. Attracting Tourists is clearly the best perk and is immune to the common weapon- Fire.
>Concrete
Second best option.
>Chain Link
Okay this is pretty good I must admit but the long term maintenance costs are going to fuck you up I'm telling you. Will also cause the bolt cutter industry to get more money, causing you more damage as time passes
>Electric
p/guud if not for the power costs
>Concrete*
I CAN'T FIND THE FINE PRINT HERE, WHAT IS THIS SHIT.
>>47239690
Stone, Triple Wall, Defeat China, Guard Tower, Wall Spikes x4 (Spikes on top of spikes).
We're gonna have the best wall. Several layers & lots of spikes.
>>47239677
>Abusive
Not her, but that's part of the power exchange dynamic. There's an implied or explicit contract in these kinds of relationships where the submissive gives up agency to the dominant in return for a certain kind of comfort and affection.
It looks abusive, and I suppose in a way it is, but that's the kind of relationship both parties thrive in, and its nothing if it isn't consensual, and even revokable. All couples have their spats, everybody goes too far, and healthy relationships can get through it, even D/s relationships
Top 10 fantasy cyoas?
>>47239887
Oh I certainly agree even though my second paragraph looks, in retrospect, sarcastic. Just sort of backhandedly pointing out why it seems mean.
>>47238174
3100(Base + Collar Malfunction + Abolitionists)
>Lamia Cook (2700)
>Childhood friend (2450)
>Both of the orphans (2200)
>Elven Scholar (1650)
>Spidergirl (1350)
>Goblin(1150)
>Cyclops(950)
>Fallen Noble (450)
>Cat(400)
>Spell Book (300)
>Young Drow(0)
I need no collars or whips, I'm not going to abuse them so what have I to fear from their freedom? Though I'm an abolitionist at heart, I'll work the farm; it's best for the children.
>>47239977
1: Muscle wizards
2: Faerie
3: Hunter
4: Dungeon Meister
5: Enchante/d/ Rings
I don't actually know that many Fantasy (or otherwise) cyoas off the top of my head well enough to call them favorites. Just give the top 6 slots to Muscle wizards.
>>47239677
Yeah, I'm posing in character pretty much, but I do find it hot. Also, I do see how it is abusive/callous, but isn't that kinda the point of that particular setting in the first place? I mean, it is blatantly the average "male dominated" society flipped on its head for the sake of kink. In that regard, I am assuming the average male in the setting is generally accepting of their position in society (Frankly, if they weren't it would make it even hotter, as he would be forced to choose between his "independence", and his job, only to find my dominance gives him more happiness than freedom.), so I would also assume they would be more accepting of my treatment as well. Lastly, asserting absolute power with a gentle hand ultimately shows my intention for the sub: to make him not have a care in the world except loving and obeying me.
>But don't worry, I'm sure you can find the subby boy of your very consensual dreams around here someplace.
Thanks anon, I hope you get your waifu/husbando too.
>>47234777
thats a weird way to spell Wrath, senpai
>>47237103
>Breed
Fucanlong
>Color
Astral
>Immortality
Hibernation
>Aspect
Majesty
>The Solidary Path
No Path
So.. are we all fucked by whoever picked Marduk or what?
>>47240100
You're nice, please comment more often.I'm not the you you were talking to, just thought you should know
>>47240100
Eating off the floor is just gross.
>>47240358
M8, I said eating ON the floor, not off.
>>47240303
Thanks bae, though I won't do it too often.
>>47240444
Don't reply to either of these posts.
>>47240444
Its the robot again. Aaaand...
>Waist 1 foot wide
>hips 8 feet wide
Okay no
>Height 5 feet tall
>Hair length 18 feet long
Seriously no
>Weight 1066 lbs
Oh I get it, its some kind of abomination.
>>47237103
Actual build:
>Dragonborn
>Purple
>Dragonsword
Edgemaster build:
>Drake
>Gold/Umbral
>Celestial Bureacracy
FUCK YOUR EVERYTHING METEOR DROP build:
>Behemoth
>Astral
>Hunter
>>47237103
>>47237122
>>47237141
Behemoth
Black
Hibernation
Sagacity
The syndicate
Won't be that fast but with the Black+Behemoth+Syndicate strength buffs and with that Binding Chain I'd probably be unstoppable. Hibernating 2 years every 10 years is easy, and sagacity doesn't have any drawbacks.
>>47234458
What would happen if you pick the succubus world, but are too beta to make a move on the tsundere succubus? Because I think I'd honestly just prefer being teased to the limit every day instead of making it go further.
>>47240619
She'd probably just rape you at some point. You can't evade a succubus forever.
>>47240619
I was under the impression that her succubus skills outweigh your beta-ness and will make you try something eventually anyway.
>>47240657
Well that's fine too. I just want some femdom with my succubi.
>>47240700
There are also more succubi fish in the succubus sea, anon. Maybe she doesn't work out for you.
>>47240830
True, but it says she'll let me stay at her place, and if I'm gonna be honest with myself, I'd probably be willing to put up with a lot if it means I don't have to go find my own place to live.
>>47240187
And you have an odd way of spelling Greed yourself, sir.
