PREVIOUSLY ON THE FLAKE THREAD:
Some flakes posted a kink sheet. MOAR ZIX AND SYMON. Reposts reposts and more reposts. Some new flakes happened. There was all kinds of shiiiiiit.
And we got some HARDCORE writefaggotry going on. Instead of describing them all, I'm just going to link the first post of each story. I recommend reading them. There were actually some really good ones this time around.
Zix and Will >>46907163
The Messenger >>46907425
Del >>46909388
Iosha, Nishal, and The Messenger >>46909647
Gaia/Celuêl >>46914015 and >>46916155
Rala >>46916245
Symon and Zix >>46917749
Ivander >>46918379
Selenra and DIOmedes >>46918536
And that's about it. Let me know if I missed anything. Also, I think I'm going to make a repository of everyone's character stories over the next few days, so send me all of the stuff you've written so far and link OP in all of your writefag posts from now on.
LET THE STORM CONTINUE
Previous thread:
>>46906914
Ginger is RED,
Inzhu is BLUE,
Chillbrass is a liability,
You should think so too.
>>46924999
>Who is your favorite flake? Why?
>Who is the most Marry Sue flake? Why?
>Who is the most Magical Realm flake? Why?
>Who's the shitiest flake? Why?
>Who's the most bangable flake? Why? Who are the runnerups?
>>46925057
Is this troll?
>>46925340
No, walker hunters are a problem.
>>46925347
Are Ginger and Inzhu walker hunters?
>>46925208
>Who is your favorite flake? Why?
The messenger, myr flake is adorable. Shame he's dangerous.
>Who is the most Marry Sue flake? Why?
They're all sues. they're flakes.
>Who is the most Magical Realm flake? Why?
Vanya, because monster girl.
>Who's the shitiest flake? Why?
>Who's the most bangable flake? Why? Who are the runnerups?
Gaia, hot coma wife. Followed by Astera, Xaniphe and Cala. I love colorful bitches.
>>46925373
No, Chillblast though man.
>>46925378
>They're all sues. they're flakes.
But who's the most sue, tho?
Who is shittiest?
>>46925208
Deka, because she is cute as fuck
William because lol travel back in time
Cala because corruption is my fetish.
Makayel because lol phyrexia
Deka because CUTE
Dyna
Astera
Ginger
Acervus
Ygraine (hot skitty on wailord action)
Redid DIOMEDES, working on a new card.
>>46925420
>Deka because CUTE
Am I the only one who thinks Deka looks like a boy? Like, I'm about 70% certain that character art is supposed to be a boy.
>>46925420
>Deka because CUTE
>Dyna
>Astera
>Ginger
>Acervus
>Ygraine (hot skitty on wailord action)
>Not Gaia, the forever bangable coma wife
What are you, gay?
>>46925489
STILL CUTE
>>46925455
DOES DIOMEDES GO AROUND PICKING FIGHTS AND CALLING PEOPLE FUCKBOYS?
>>46925515
RIGHT BEFORE STABBING THEM WITH A SPEAR.THE SPEAR ISN'T HIS PENIS
>>46925610
IS IT HISFINGER?
>>46925515
CARD AVAILABLE, WORRIED IT MIGHT BE BROKEN BUT FUCK AREN'T WE ALL?
>>46925705
Broken as FUUUUUUUCK
You can coast on that +2 alone.
>>46925705
Swap the +2 and -3 and ditch annihilator
I'm working on a card for Iohannes.
Also, the OP image really needs updating, it's missing like, a dozen new flakes.
>>46924999
New flake.
>>46925742
Yeah I need a away to pump him up to becoming an unstoppable warrior. How about a +1 to do 2 or 3 damage, make his ult a 7 cost, and his - a -4?
>>46926011
Full pic of flake.
>>46925958
Hm, I feel like I need some measure of board wipe to make him a win condition. He's supposed to be the 'perfect' warrior who doesn't do anything but use his magic to buff himself basically.
>>46925705
>>46925958
Yeah, Annihilator is an Eldrazi thing.
Reminder that your walker a shit.
>>46924999
Posting a few flakes that weren't added.
>>46924999
I'll get around coloring it... maybe tomorrow.
>>46925691IT'S HIS SPEAR
>>46926061
Then +3, DIOMEDES DEALS DAMAGE TO TARGET FUCKBOY EQUAL TO HIS LOYALTY
-2 DIOCESES DEALS DAMAGE TO EACH FUCKBOY EQUAL TO HIS LOYALTY
-1 DIOMEDES COMES DOWN THERE AND IS READY TO PUNCH SOME FUCKBOYS IN THE THROAT UNTIL END IF TURN, HIS PT IS EQUAL TO HIS LOYALTY.
>>46926011
Another colorless Eldrazi walker oh boy
>>46926099
But I don't have a walker.
>>46926067
You're right, but I dont know how to differentiate him from Gideon. He's not a leader of grand armies, he's hercules who slayed the nemean lion or beowulf who ripped Grendel apart with his bare hands. He's a force of nature like Nico or Ugin.
>>46926204
Or normal speak
Deal damage to up to one target creature equal to his loyalty
Deal damage to each creature you don't control equal to his loyalty.
DIOMEDES becomes a creature with PT equal to his loyalty until end of turn. He has double strike and indestructible
>>46926233
She's not an Eldrazi though. Just mutated before she was turned.
>>46925979
I know it's either going to be broken as all fuck or woefully underpowered, but I'm not sure which.
Of course King Of The Skeletons has graveyard shenanigans.
>>46926369
His +1 is madness for his cost. His 0 is poorly worded; you probably wanted "Draw 3 cards, then discard 2" or something to that effect. His ult could be more flashy, like "Return all creatures from all graveyards to the battlefield under your control" (like liliana, but make it different I guess)
>>46926328
Shit, make him a 5/10 with Indestructible, Haste, Double Strike.
>>46926408
Fair enough. I also realize I forgot to give him a starting loyalty.
What if his +1 just returned a target creature to the graveyard? I was thinking of the "all creatures from all graveyards" deal for his ult, but then he'd basically just be Liliana.
>>46926369
+1 is too good and worded poorly
0 is outside of the color pie
ult is eh
>>46926369
Forgot his loyalty. Make the +1 conditional or something, but I'm not too upset about an o ring. Your zero looks fine. Your ult is decent, it'll be a climb to get that far assuming 4 loyalty.
>>46926369
+1: Exile target non-black, non-artifact creature.
0: Draw three cards, then discard two cards.
-8: Return all Horror, Zombie, Skeleton, Vampire, and Spirit creatures from all graveyards to the battlefield under your control.
>>46926478
>>46926418
>>46926491
His 0 feels pretty black to me, could use some white though. Also he has a pretty specific cost which can make him more aggressively costed
>>46926478
So
+1 Target creature is sacrificed by its controller
0: Each player draws three cards, then reveals their hand, you choose two nonland cards from each hand and players discard those cards (sorry for the clunkiness)
-8: Return any number of creatures with a total converted mana cost of 8 or less from your graveyard to the battlefield.
>>46926408
>>46926500
>>46926491
>>46926506
Alright, here's a revised version. So his 0 lets him defensively send cards to his own graveyard, his +1 lets him boost the other graveyards, then his ult pulls all typical creatures for his control.
>>46926135
I would appreciate some feedback anyway, since I am new to this thing.
>>46926527
His 0 is a strictly worse compulsive research.
>>46926545
It would help if I attached the image.
I feel like he could do with some more white stuff though.
I decided to redo some on Balbus's shit, still pretty crappy but oh well. I decided to keep him as mono-white because in my opinion, most of the blue spells are only done because of his brother
>>46926590
HA IM AN IDIOT lol
>>46926566
What the fuck does RETURN target creature to the graveyard mean? You are supposed to keep track which creatures were played from graveyard for this effect?
>>46926135
Neat, maybe her and Anna can be amnesia buddies eventually.
>>46926612
...it occurs to me that "Destroy target creature" would be a WAY more succinct way of phrasing it.
>>46926618
Well I guess yes if she manages to get Murdock to listen to her without running away. You can give it a shot if you are one of those who write stories about 'flakes.
>>46926535
+1: Target player sacrifices target creature.
-3: Search your library for a white creature card with converted mana cost 6 or less and put it onto the battlefield.
-8: Return all white and black creature cards from all graveyards to play. They all gain flying and become an Angel in addition to their other types.
>>46926566
Do this.
>>46926654
>>46926605
And now I'm seeing all of the typos. sigh. I should read through things first.
>>46926654
>>46926676
Making things into angels is interesting, but feels really against character. Although it would make him killing other undead way more into him "redeeming" them.
>>46926618
SYMON X ANNA WHEN?
>>46926724
Then spirits.
>>46926724
>>46926724
Shit, the more I think about this, the more I like it. Benevolent king gets brought back by his dying advisor and given his spark. Immediately begins a crusade to redeem all undead.
>>46926761
Currently writing a story where they interact.
>>46926961
Will we see it in this thread?
>>46927301
Maybe, going to play EDH in a bit.
Here's the start of a new snowflake.
>>46925208
>>Who is your favorite flake? Why?
One of the following, in no particular order: Zix, Selenra, Gaia, or The Messenger. So far, they have the best stories imo. And the Messenger is just adorable.
>>Who is the most Marry Sue flake? Why?
Used to be Vronak. Now it's Vronak-anon's new flake. Dude doesn't understand domain.
>>Who is the most Magical Realm flake? Why?
Fffffffff I have no idea
>>Who's the shitiest flake? Why?
Maybe Unit IV or Vronak-anon's new flake. Both are lore-shattering.
>>Who's the most bangable flake? Why? Who are the runnerups?
This is a tough one. Hmmmm.....
I think Ima default to Gaia, followed VERY closely by Selenra. It's hard to say know to such a glorious COCK though.
>>46925378
>>46925420
>People like my devil-flake
Well, I'm not sure whether or not this makes me feel awkward.
Re-posting my most recent two flakes.
>>46927785
Alright, another shot at the Iohannes card, based on feedback.
I feel like -10 is enough to justify his ult being so powerful. So you can choose to play defensively and use his -3 to keep pulling things from graveyard, or go for broke with the -10 and get EVERYTHING back extra-spicy.
>>46927874
Again with your wording.
+1: Destroy target creature.
>>46927874
Also... -8: is justifiable due to it only being white and black creatures.
>>46927785
>>46927756
People waifu cute stuff, news at 11.
>>46926547
>>46926135
Same feedback as last time I commented. She's particularly black with her self-interest and she conveys it in a very unique way - she's paranoid and constantly looking over her shoulder rather than being an asshole. I'm finding some difficulty seeing the red in her attitude there. Where's the emotion that drives her, aside from fear?
SUMMON[ADORABLE BRETHREN]=5: EXECUTE_
Still trying to think something to writefag about The Messenger. Perhaps another scenario from its perspective in "myrcode" or a scene from the eyes of an observer of the growing army.
repostin' Nishal and Iosha, because I'll probably write another thing tonight at some point. Thinkin of basing it on Ravnica; anyone interested in adding their flake?
>>46928338
>>46928215
She really wants to go get her memories back, and possibly go back to her homeplane as well, that's what leads her actually and it seems like a pretty red thing to me. Other than that it is just that well, red magic was the first one she learned anyway, from the yamabushi in Sokenzan.
>>46928338
Dipterius is Ravincan, if you wanna include him.
Izari here.
I might have some time to do some writefagging tonight at work. Anyone want tinder anything in particular?
>>46928611
Dunno but I would love if anyone was to take Murdock around for a little writefaggotry.
>>46927456
What's wrong with Cromat-chan?
>>46928338
Del's Ravnican, if you want him.
Reposting from last thread. Decided she didn't need any work, might make another tonight.
Does anyone have the template?
>>46929001
His reasoning for being black and blue is that he uses counterspells and some black cards.
>>46929285
Colors are literally just different schools of magic though. It's not like you need a specific range of emotions to wield an axe instead of a sword. A real mage has no reason to not use every single school/color of magic.
>>46929347
There's more to it than that.
Spells are reflections of personality. It's unclear whether utilizing a type of mana makes you a certain way or you can't utilize different colours if it doesn't fit who you are though.
>>46929368
Maybe if you're a bad mage. Strong mages like Ugin can overcome color. Intellect trumps 'reflections of personality.'
>>46929347
Certain kinds of spells resonate more naturally with different people. This is because spells and much broader concepts can all be related to mana colors. While it's possible for planeswalkers to use spells from outside of their natural inclinations, it is infinitely more likely that their card colors will match the kind of person that they are, and that their spells are a reflection of that.
>>46928221
SO. CUTE.
I don't know why everyone is saying Deka is the cute when you have THIS LITTLE FUCK RIGHT HERE.
>>46928338
>>46928371
I like these two. I look forward to watching their side of the story evolve.
>>46928338
Ye
>>46929285
Cromat-chan here. Just because someone uses certain cards means that is all their personality is described by those cards and only those cards.
It doesn't mean that they are limited to only those spells. You have to realize, that the color and the spells a person is proficient with doesn't mean their personality is similar to everyone else whom uses those spells.
Perfect example is Jace. He is a master at wiping minds. And he doesn't like to do it, but he can. He's a pretty swell person. Yet, mind wiping is one of the most horrible things in the lore's society.
>>46929347
This is more or less true. But, also depends on the character. Most mages use particular colors and spells because they are proficient with them. But, they can dabble in other colors or spells either by whim or by result of their emotional state.
>>46929368
For most mages, they can learn damn near anything. They just specialize in certain colors or spell types. Look at how often Planeswalkers change colors in the lore.
>>46929424
This is subjective to the mage.
>>46929426
Colors are subjective. It's the spell types they choose to use that a person is typically attracted to using. But, not all users of the same spells act or think the same. U/B experimental necromancers, U/B mind wipe wizards, and U/B assassins/rogues don't all think the same. Nor do any of the individuals of those group all think the same as their piers.
>>46929996
>He's a pretty swell person
You were doing good before saying this, you know.
>>46928338
>>46928371
>>46929194
>>46929840
Hiding an interplanar ship on a plane with no hiding place was, Nishal learned, actually pretty easy. Mostly because with all the airships flying around they didn't actually need to hide it anywhere. Iosha brought the ship in to tether to a walkway on the side of a great tower, many other airships with unique colours and designs already roped to its sides. "Alright," she said, as soon as she was sure they were correctly moored. "We took a little more damage from that dragon than I'm strictly comfortable with, and I still haven't managed to clear all the sand out of the aether-compressors or the etherium transmitters. It looks like I'm gonna need at least one of each of these," she said, absentmindedly handing him a note. "And probably some help. There's bound to be some Izzet fellows around here; make sure you get the ones that look like they probably know something about ships." With that she climbed back aboard; within seconds Nishal could hear her clanking about through everything inside. "An' make sure you find something to eat! Ravnica's got all sorts of good stuff around, it won't be hard!" He chuckled as he walked into the building. He wasn't sure he would know the first thing about anything on this list. It looked more and more like he would need to find someone to help ensure he wasn't being robbed blind, or at the very least find a vendor who he could scare into honest trade.
An hour later he entered into one of the many markets of Ravnica's streets, taking in the sights and sounds. All around him members of various guilds were milling about, shopping for food and clothes or simply laughing with members of other guilds. He smiled as he seen someone, a Gruul guildmember if their fur clothes and matted hair was anything to go by, began juggling as an Orzhovi member laughed so hard he nearly fell over. He watched for a few moments before continuing on his journey to locate the items they needed to fix up (cont'd)
>>46930415
>interplanar ship
Top kek, into the Vronak pile it goes.
>>46930415
Cool work so far, writeanon, but keep in mind that Del isn't actually a member of the Izzet, since that seems to be the road you're going.
Though, in all honesty, he'll probably just help whoever if they just ask.
>>46930415
their vessel. He approached one stall, seeing that it was filled with all sorts of artifacts in various states of repair. "Hello," he said, getting the attention of the bored-looking shopkeeper. "I am looking for the items on this list, and was hoping that you would have some of them." He handed Iosha's instructions over to the girl, watching as her eyebrows quickly went higher and higher.
"Listen mister, I don't know what you're looking to do with most of this but you can't just get this in Bane Alley." She handed the paper back to him, staring at him intently. "This is the kind of stuff you need to go to the League for, and even then I don't know if you'd be able to find it." Nishal made a sound of understanding. He knew little of the Izzet league. "I might know someone who can get you some stuff from them," she ventured when she caught on to his feeling. "Name's Veldren; looks a little funny, but if I stuck the two of you beside each other you'd look just fine. He's a member of the League, not too high up but definitely able to get at least a few of these things."
The smile came back to Nishral's face. "I would like to meet this Veldren. Is he near here?"
"Well, I'm not getting a lot of business right now. I'll just bring you to him, he usually hangs out a few districts from here. C'mon, I know a shortcut." She said, closing up the blinds around her wares. She muttered a quick enchantment before turning away to lead him, and he silently threw his own safeguard over the stall as they walked away.
Though there was less sun than he would have liked, the vendor's shortcuts seemed to save them some time. Though Nishral had no idea how long it would have taken him, it would have definitely been far longer than it did with guidance. "He's usually right in there," she said, pointing him to a small shop sandwiched between two larger buildings. He entered and was amazed at the sight that greeted him: (cont'd)
>>46930610
you missed the last story, didn't you?
>>46930642
And with lore rape like that I'm glad I did
>>46930611
before I go any farther, can Del speak? I'm not sure how weirds work.I'm actually gonna have him and Veldren be huge nerds together in a cookhouse with Veldren kinda gushing about Izzet stuff while Del just putters about doing his thing
>>46930699
Magic lore changes as quick as the blocks in standard, man, are you really going to bitch at someone having a thing that happened already in canon happen again just because it doesn't sit well with your view on the perfect magic lore? This is a thread about making borderline joke characters anyway for Bolas' sake.
>>46930280
He's the typical Mary Sue sweetheart that is the main protagonist that always does what's right.
A pretty swell guy.
Personally, I do not like the character of Jace. He's not developed enough and has almost no range to his personality. Sure, he's the "do everything that's right" kind of guy. And he's meant to be edgy, cool, and loved by fedora wearers. But, I personally prefer characters that have more depth to them and can be complicated in their decisions and their personal beliefs.
But, I do recognize Jace as the nigh-emo Superman archetype.
>>46930702
Yes, but he speaks in very short sentences.I like to think his voice is Ron Perlman's.
>>46930610
You seem to hate everything that doesn't agree with you and treat it all like it's beneath you.
Something tells me that you do, or at one point did, own a fedora.
And the only reason you might not now is because of 4chan's cringe threads.
>>46930702Veldren isn't that much of a nerd
>>46930855
I wear a fedora in winter, it helps keep my hair in place and rain away from my eyes, but i never felt the need to put on a leather coat and a katana too, and sure I don't like how they handled jace. Which is a shame because he wasn't that bad at the beginning (Alara), when it wasn't clear how much of a superhero thing the Jacetice League was going to be.
>>46930891
Oh no, someone doesn't like something! Time to attack and insult what kind of person they are!
>>46930855
>Jace
>Always does what's right
Is that why he's been fucking around for the last two blocks instead of doing his duty in Ravnica?
And before that, he only helped out Ravnica because after he mind-wiped himself, that became his home plane.
>>46930891
Haha what a faggot, I bet you're Vronak whose all super upset we see the difference between lore and your shitty dredge deck mechanics.
>>46930970
Was he the one who mind wiped himself? I thought that was left undisclosed what happened before his story started on Ravnica.
Also, going out of his way to help other planes in jeopardy. Yes. That's totally a superman complex.
>>46930984
> dredge
Please tell me this is a troll. No one can be this stupid, can they?
Well, maybe they can be. But, surely not this poopnut.
>>46931032
Does he at least remember WHO did wipe his memory?
>>46931084
I don't think so.
>>46931032
>>46931084
>>46931101
The stories about it have been pretty inconsistent.
>>46930992
>>46931055
>poopnut
>never refutes the argument, just attacks people who disagree
Oh boy, we got a troll.
>>46931114
One day they'll come full circle and tell what the fuck happened in his past. I figured they'd have done it with Origins. But, what ever.
>>46931175
That's the problem. Origins' story doesn't quite line up with the other version of the story that they told.
>>46931154
What was the arguement?
All I remember is that we agreed that you're a kiss ass. I get fuzzy on the rest.
Really though. You hate on most anon's flakes and their backgrounds and antagonize pie olé constantly.
But, why?
Why do you have to hate everyone that doesn't share the exact same perceptions you do? Why are you even here? Why are you so conflicting over insignificant made up shit?
>>46931246
Nigga I don't know you, I don't know who you are. I've been posting flakes, and loving ones like Gaia or Will. It's just that bit's a piece of lore rape, and this 'we agree'd' bullshit you're spinning up is pathetic because literally no one likes your flakes and you continue to troll.
>>46931246
Just ignore this guy.
>>46931283
I have nothing against shifting-capable ships, though, so i guess this is a vote against your point. Not because of canon reasons or whatever, but because your attitude while criticizing is frankly obnoxious. Just relax, it is a thread about people making up fictional planeshifting mages, and magic's canon lore is rarely any good anyway.
>>46931367
Fair enough about the attitude. However lore post mending is pretty insistent that only PWs can walk now. Hell, afaik portals don't even work anymore after the mending.
>>46930870
>>46930911I can work with both of these thingsI know he's not a dragonling but Nishal doesn't and saying Viashno over and over seems silly
>>46930642
A small dragonlike being was sitting at a counter, chatting at a great, blue-and-red creature that looked to be made of liquid. Somehow it was holding a bowl and a mixer, and was cooking something as it nodded its head(?) in response to the ramblings. "So anways," it said, "I was walkin along and this Akroan goes 'I, DIOME-" he was cut off as the weird turned what was DEFINITELY its head to look at Nishal. "Hello!" it said, waving the mixing spoon. "Take a seat; welcome to Dev's!"
"Actually," he said, walking to the counter. "I am searching for someone named Veldren. I was told that he would be able to help me find some materials." The dragonling put out a hand, offering it to shake. Nishal took it as he said "That's me! That little shopgirl tell you about me? I swear, help her out once with a shipment and you never hear the end of it. So what do ya need?" Nishal held out the list once again, and this time it was read over and handed back quickly. "I can get you just about everything on that list, but it'll cost you. What've you got to offer back?" He asked.
"I have these," Nishal said, reaching into his pack and pulling out containers. The dragonling's eyes opened wider and wider with each one.
"Wh-where'd you get those?" He asked. Each container was full of a different substance; one metallic, another storming - literally.
"I think you know as well as I do. That DIOMEDES fellow you mentioned, I believe he is a mutual acquaintance of ours." Understanding lit up Veldren's eyes. He swept the containers into his own bag. "I'll have as much of this as I can get soon," he said, turning back to the counter. "But first I gotta get some of what Dev's making. Best cook in the multiverse, this guy!"
Dev chuckled, somehow, and Nishal decided not to dwell on it. (cont'd)
>>46931410
Planeswalkers are the only thing that can walk, but in the Mirrodin cycle it's actually mentioned that Venser had discovered a way to move ships through the multiverse. That's more where I'm pulling this ship from than the Weatherlight Saga
>>46931434
What I've got so far, wanna make sure I'm not bunging up someone's flakes again before I go on
>>46931283
Right over you're head.
The entire "we agreed you're a kiss ass" line is from Red vs Blue. Watch it. Great series.
The only "lore rape" I posted a lore for Cromat. A creature that definitely should have a lore, yet literally nothing about it exists.
And I've posted a lot of flakes. You just don't realize all of them. Just because you don't like some of them doesn't mean you haven't liked any of them.
Also, stop ragging on other people. We all play MtG here and we all love the game and to some degree the lore behind it. You should embrace your fellow supporters of Magic. Constructive criticism is one thing. But, blatantly bashing people is completely another thing that should be avoided.
And I'm not talking about how you've treated me concerning two of my characters. I don't take it personally at all. But, I do wish you would take my advice and start treating others better.
>>46931457
Venser was trying to find a way to make planer ships, he never got it done. And it may never be done because all his notes are stuck in New Phyrexia.
>>46931457
I'm pretty sure it's because Venser could blink things out of existence.
He probably could blink them back into existence as well.
Which would be a great concept for flake.
>>46931506
And he's dead. That put a damper on his plans too.
>>46931530
That didn't stop Bolas from his live forever plan, I don't see why it has to stop Venser.
>>46931559
Because Bolas didn't die. Venser did. But, meh. I liked Venser a lot. It's a sad thing that he's gone. He was powerful and amusing. Very likable character.
>>46931434
Guy who made Veldren here,
nice job
>>46931462
I'm sorry I don't waste my entire life on the internet like you do. But whatever man, enjoy your shit show, I'm going to go have a life.
>>46931683
And yet, here you are.
Also, it's a work night. My life outside of work starts on Friday. I enjoy shooting the shit with anons here after work. So, again... Why do you act like this? Do you really feel the need to be so antagonizing?
>>46931434
D-E-L, not D-E-V.
>>46931789
shit. I fucked up hard, apparently.
I've got an exam in the morning so I'm probably gonna finish that tomorrow, I'll repost the whole thing in the next thread.
>>46931827
S'all good. Really good story, aside.
Huija anon here, I decided to make a sheet for the Plane I made up for him. Ironically, I learned about Mongseng like a week after, which would have negated this occurring.The Emperor is Cao Cao.
>>46931971
I, DIOMEDES, will find great honor on this plane!
>>46931971
Typos occurred, so here's the fix.
I give this new Snowstorm 3 weeks tops before inevitably dies.
>>46932166
Fuck no, nigga. I'ma keep it alive.
>>46931283
>and loving ones like Gaia or Will.
tfw people actually like your flake.
>>46932216
GIVE US THE SHIPPING
>>46932433
My biggest problem with a Will/Gaia shipeven if it's epic funnyis that realistically I don't see Will as having any interest in interpersonal relationships and I don't see Gaia as ever falling for someone as amoral as he is.
But perhaps long ago both Will and Gaia were different people. Perhaps at that time, before Will went insane and Gaia went to sleep, there could have been a brief passing between the two? Perhaps a passing that led to a temporary relationship?
>>46932433
How do you want to see this ship go down? Give me juicy details.
>>46932585
Will Anon here. I figure he was always a little off after Baron Sengir murdered everyone he knew and loved. Probably not crazy though, not until he got deep into colorless mana and started exploring the blind eternities. nothing, not even being an oldwalker could come out of that healthy and sane. I imagine he loved teaching, and helping people learn more. It's a part of why he likes Zix, because Zix chooses to be more than just a goblin.
YOU DARE FORGET THE GREATEST OF THEM ALL???
>>46932990
Maybe they had were a thing before he ascended? Gaia strikes me as a person who doesn't really care about power levels when it comes to choosing a partner. I think she would have been in love with his desire to teach and spread knowledge. Maybe she found his zeal for it intoxicating? But maybe she left for a little while, because oldwalker nonsense, and then after the stuff with Baron Sengir he wasn't quite the same? And then, as time passed, they just grew apart?
I dunno. I'm just trying to thing of something plausible.
>>46932585
>>46932990
>Will and Gaia were once in love
>Something happened and they fell apart whether or not they wanted to, ending in Gaia creating her plane.
>Originally he wanted to get into her plane to apologize to her for something he did or just to spend one more day with her, not knowing what happened to her.
>Then the mending happened and William's memory slipped away
>Now he suddenly 'found' a dark plane and he wants to get into it.
Can Symon's anon tell me about his personality?
>>46933197
You've got good taste, buddy. I like you.
>>46933197
And here I thought he was Xehanort for Kingdom Hearts
>>46933195
That would be rather interesting. Hell, they could have had kids and everything, only for them to get slaughtered when she was away. Would explain their split, because he thinks she and all her power failed them. If she was a master of color energy, it's adds an extra Freudian reason for his search of colorless mana beyond scientific curiosity and corruption. And it furthers her desire to protect her plane after losing so many of her children and family.
>>46933197
Seems as good as any explanation. My only issue with it is I had imagined Gaia created her plane long after she and Will had stopped communicating. She did it because she wanted children, and not children in the mortal sense of the term. It's just that after living soooooo many millenia and seeing sooooooo many things, her wanderlust had just worn out. She was ready to settle down, so to speak. I hadn't pictured her creating her plane as being a reaction to anything, such as a harsh break-up or a world-shattering event. She was just ready for something different, and ever since her Father (Illuvatar) helped to teach her how to balance black mana with white mana, she continually looked to his wisdom as an example. And what had he done with all of his power and knowledge? He made a world. He created fully autonomous children. It inspired her to do the same.
Eventually, she felt competent enough to no longer need his guidance or advice. And so, like any good child, she started forging her own path. Hence why in the story I wrote for her "The Beginning" depicts her disagreeing with her Father's ways, even though she still honored him.
>>46933464
>Hell, they could have had kids and everything
Not Gaia or Will anon, but can oldwalkers even have children in the traditional way? They are energy beings.
>>46933597
I mean, the didn't start that way. I bet they probably could, but they probably run into the problem of the act causing all sorts of magical bullshit as two fonts of mana try to make a third, tiny one.
>>46933597
Well, this would have been before Will became an old walker right?
>>46933653
>I mean, the didn't start that way.
Well, yeah, but since they're not from the same plane, one of them would've been an oldwalker by the time they met. And I thought Gaia ascended a looooong time before Will was even born?
> two fonts of mana try to make a third, tiny one.
And even if they did have a kid, that kid probably wouldn't have a spark, and therefore would be mortal. But I'm still pretty meh on the idea of kids.
>>46933683
>Well, this would have been before Will became an old walker right?
Probably, yeah. Again, not Will or Gaia-anon, but from what they have said that's what I'd guess.
>>46933718
>>46933683
I just wanna say that Gaia (who is from Tolkien-verse) falling in love with a mortal is INCREDIBLY Tolkien.
Will Anon. I think they could have kids, but that's not to important to me. Honestly the pre-relationship is kind of interesting if only to show how much colorless mana and his obsession has twisted him, but otherwise I don't care too much one way or the other. Since Gaia anon is the one doing a lot of writing, I'll leave it up to them.
For lore-exploration purposes, I'm gonna post this question that Doug Beyer answered (in two parts)
Dear Doug Beyer,
I'm Vorthos to the core. I usually go daydreaming about stories and flavor, and many of the stories I imagine use elements from Magic. Recently it became important in one of those stories how much a planeswalker can carry with him from plane to plane. I'm figuring he doesn't just come out of the vortex stark naked, and Ajani proves me right in that, because he carries his double-headed axe around. But I'm also thinking that one planeswalker can't take an army with him from one place to another. So what can he take?
—Sophus,Bloodshot_Trainee
This is a dangerous question for me to answer, because some future novel or other bit of Magic-in-the-media could come along and, for story reasons, contradict my answer. It's like asking how fast the Flash can run—I could quote you how fast he has run but then some comic might come out and show him running faster than that. I definitely won't nail it down like a D&D teleport spell ("the caster can take with him 50 pounds of stuff per level, end of story"), but I'll tell you how I think of it, and you can go from there.
>>46933827
First of all, anything is possible, given the right conditions. Planeswalking is a form of magic. With enough time and mana, or with specialized spell knowledge, or with access to enormous power, it's possible for a planeswalker to transfer gobs of material and/or creatures with him as he planeswalks. Planeswalkers are mortal, but they're incredibly creative and resourceful—if there's something a planeswalker wants to hang on to as he planeswalks, then he'll probably pay the price and do the work to make it happen.
This implies that a less prepared or less-skilled planeswalker may have significantly lesser ability to bring items with him. A planeswalker on his spark-awakening "maiden voyage" might indeed show up naked on a new plane—or even missing some hair, a thumb, and a few patches of skin (the space between the planes can be dangerous territory)—while a veteran planeswalker might be able to hold on to a few trademark items and travel unscathed with ease. It's all about the particulars of that individual planeswalker.
Note that the nature of being a wizard generally lets a planeswalker ignore the necessity of, you know, packing a bag. When the Terminator shows up in 1984, he has to steal clothes and a motorcycle to execute his mission. When Garruk shows up on Lorwyn, he can cast spells to summon just about anything he needs. He might not be able to pop into being with a huge army all around him, but given enough time, you can be sure that he can build up a pretty good one after he gets there.
>>46933827
>>46933842
So, with this in mind, it would make sense for flakes to carry different amounts of artifacts and even have varying game plans for how to set up or move into action when they arrive on a new plane.
Just some food for thought.
Can someone tell me about Symon's personality?
>>46934033
Check Zix's writings, he's the only one who wrote about him so far.
>>46934033
>>46934045
Zix-anon here. I've written a piece with Symon, but Symon-anon wrote one too. My most recent pastebin included his story, which is the last one in the series. You also can probably tell which one it is because of writing style/character voice etc.
http://pastebin.com/DeR8chVu
>>46933761
Gaia anon here. I'm cool with them having a relationship before Will ascended. I agree that it would show some excellent character development for Will and really highlight how tragic his own villainy is. And it could be good for Gaia's character too to show that she tried having a normal life at one point in time. Honestly, if we spin it right, it can add depth to both of their characters.
Perhaps pic related is them when Will was very young?
>>46934229
Something like that, though I imagine he was always a scholarfun fact, I originally wanted to use a drawing of Tolkien for Will
>>46934249
lol, that's cool. He can totally be a scholar in that pic. Maybe the plant bits are just a side-effect of Gaia's magic.
>>46934249
>fun fact, I originally wanted to use a drawing of Tolkien for WillWell what a coincidink, as I'm sure you noticed I'm a MASSIVE fucking Tolkien fag.
>>46934087
That was a neat story
>>46934229
>Will finally breaks into the plane
>He finds Gaia at the center and she's dying because mending.
>He holds her as her breath slows and the plane begins to fall apart.
>She remarks that at least she got to see him one last time.
>He doesn't remember her but knows the pain in his heart.
>As the plane collapses around him, Will instinctively planeswalks away.
>He spends the next few weeks just sitting in front of a fire in his study.
>>46934368
>implying he's not going to stabilize it with colorless mana plus a second planewalkers spark, or turn back time to prevent him from ever getting there.
That or he's so utterly lost already that he no longer cares.
>>46934368
>>46934368
Post yfw William's ambition destroys the only thing that'd could've ever given him true peace and restored his soul.
>>46934407
Or that by the time he realizes it's happening that it is too late to save the plane.
Or rather he travels back in time before Gaia makes the plane to spend time with her.
He convinces her not to make the plane because it won't end well and they are spending time together, but creating a paradox starts destabilizing the multiverse to the point where they are forced to choose between setting the timeline right or watching planes get swallowed up by the time rifts.
pic kind of related after Will goes back to the original timeline
>>46934520
>>46934568
>watching planes get swallowed up by the time rifts.
Tfw Will and Gaia were responsible for the time rifts all along.
FUCKING PARADOX
>>46934662
>implying he's not already the reason Lorwyn had the split between day and night, and Alara was split into shards to see how planes work when severed from their colors/aspects,
>>46934520
>>46934033
>>46934087
Symon-anon here, I'm back at work so it's been hard to make headway on my own writings. My bad.
Regarding Symon's personality, he's meant to be very curious and analytical, but becomes an excitable thrillseeker when he's doing what he loves- exploring and travelling through fantastic landscapes and tracking down rare and powerful creatures. An adventurer at heart, he likes getting down and dirty and experiencing what a plane has to offer- he'd sooner hike the Gatstaf ranges of Innistrad than planeswalk to the top, for instance, and he'd be exhilarated to find a ridgeline from which he could see dragons engaged in a territorial dispute. Think extreme sports nuts that get really pumped when they pull off something dangerous.
>>46934520
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dO1rMeYnOmM
>>46934936
Hey anon! Did you read my last story with Zix and Symon? Do you want to write the next part to that or should I?
>>46924999
Took me way too long to find this thread. Contemplating more writefaggotry today. Maybe.
Maybe even start writing a plane or a second flake.
Razheil is back and stronger than ever. How colorful this new blizzard is...
>>46935794
Fuck that guy so much, poor ob rip off
>>46935285
Stop making me feel sad. It's too late in the evening for that shit.
>>46932433
WELP. You got your wish. Look at all these fucking posts.
>>46936427
>He can't be with Gaia, but sometimes William just hops back in time to when she's sleeping and just sits by her bedside for a little while before moving some hair out of her face and returning to his proper time.
>>46934368
>Be Will sitting in front of the fire.
>He's perplexed by his own sadness, since he can't remember Gaia.
>His insane mind becomes obsessed with finding out why her death hurt him so much.
>He is driven further and further insane by his colorless mana and search for his own self.
>He eventually dies lost and alone, never finding the answers to his questions.
As a bit of brevity from all the sads, TIME FLAKE.
Ironically, I was looking up italian names when I found Fiorenza, and didn't even realize that the plane was named Fiora until halfway through the description.
Either way, I love suspend and split second way too much to not make a walker for them.I can't believe I've made five walkers for this snowstorm. What am I even doing at this point?
>>46936640
Here's her full art, and make that six walkers. I forgot Varametra.
>>46933464
>Would explain their split, because he thinks she and all her power failed them. If she was a master of color energy, it's adds an extra Freudian reason for his search of colorless mana beyond scientific curiosity and corruption.
I like it.
>>46936640
Hey Zix would hit that. If he were human. Want to join the Zix mini time squad?
>>46936670
>>46933464
And I say that as Gaia-anon, btw. It adds depth. Maybe I'll begin drafting a story over the next day or two.
>>46936427
>>46936557
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AK3PWHxoT_E
>>46936678
Hell yeah. Paranoid timespiracies can only be improved by the addition of goblins.
You think the U/R is a good color combination for getting in over its head?
In the "I got this" kind of way
>>46936427
>>46936556
>Looking at that pic while late at night and listening to >>46935285
GOD FUCKING DAMMIT MY FUCKING FEELS CAN'T FUCKING TAKE IT HOLY SHIIIIIIIIT
>>46936778
U/R to me seems like it could either go way in over its head in a "Will it work? I have no idea!" kind of way, or in a "Time to channel McGuyver, because shit just hit the fan and all I have is my chinese takeout" kind of way. Either way, U/R is a little less "I got this" and a little more "I think I got this, but who has time to double check"
>>46936778
You could always be Zomaj Hauc, and be incredibly well-planned to every last detail, but constantly have suppressed anger problems.
Here's an excerpt from my story involving Symon and Anna to make sure I'm not butchering his character
“Symon,” she walked towards him, “did you run into trouble? It took you longer for the delivery than normal.”
He gave her a confused look “No, I mean yes, but the only real trouble is you running off without telling me beforehand.”
“I left you a note.”
“In the back of a building being nested in by baloths.” Symon added on.
“I trust it wasn't a problem for you.”
“Of course not,” he said with a laugh and took off his backpack, fishing through it for her food.
Nikita took the food he handed her and cracked off a piece of the bread “Well, I'm glad you're here since I've got a puzzle for you.” She began heading back into the room when Symon cleared his throat. “Yes?”
“Are you saying, that you can't figure something out?” He asked in a leading fashion.
“No. It's just that I'm too close to it now, so an outsider's perspective could be helpful.” She excused and continued walking, if he wanted to follow her, he would.
>>46936893
That last name sounds like the noise someone makes when they get thrown over a railing
>>46936807
Only kind of related, but someone once pointed out to me the key difference between simic and izzet, that is, UG and UR.
In simic experiments, there is no failure. Anything that happens, happens, and they are happy with their creations no matter what.
In izzet experiments, you expect something to happen, and if it doesn't, you fucked up. You hypothesize with the goal of being correct, and ultimately have some pre-set goal that you want to achieve. You can be happy, or not, with the end result.
Just an interesting thought.
>>46936960
He was the main villain in the Guildpact novel. He was an Izzet Magelord that tried to overthrow the city by reviving a cluster of dragon eggs that he found. Dragons that were meant to be alive during the time that Niv-Mizzet was, and would therefore be around his power level.
>>46936960
Wait is she Nikita or is she Anna? I thought she forgot she was Nikita and is now Anna?
>>46936984
And again, yes. This went with the lore stating that there were no dragons other than Niv-Mizzet in Ravnica. When people in that city say "the dragon," they mean Niv. The rest of his kind is supposed to be extinct, so the printing of new dragons in the RtR block was lore-breaking the same way that new gorgons were.
>>46936984
I know that, but it does sound like that
>>46936995
Shit good catch
>>46936961
I like that idea actually. The ironic thing is from what I can figure, their actual experimental methodologies are the opposite of that. With the simic, a lot of their krasis and creations are designed with an explicit purpose, like the Species Devourer. They made it by just kind of trying stuff, and seeing what works, but it was in the end towards a goal, even if they don't really care about their accuracy to it.
With the Izzet, you get explicit, planned experiments that are some of the most chaotic, dangerous, and barely scientific things in Ravnica (See the intro the Guildpact book, where you have a goblin just kind of rolling with it), but in the end they're working towards a specific, quantifiable, and possibly reproducible outcome.
It's kind of interesting when you think about it.
>>46937022
There have always been dragons in Ravnica, it's just the intelligent ones Niv Mizzet had killed.
>>46937072
Even that card doesn't match the lore of the novels, and it's from the same block.
>>46936695
... :|So is Fry supposed to be Gaia? I'm too tired to figure out which is which.
>>46937086
Given the fact that the cardgame is the primary medium, it would be the novel contradicting the cards.
>>46937230
Either way, it'd be nice if Wizards didn't flip-flop on the lore. The gorgon thing is especially touchy for me because they also went extinct during the course of the novels, but more showed up during RtR, while on the flip side they acknowledged Jarad who was in the first block novels but had no prior card representation.
>>46937275
There could have been baby gorgons getting made between the blocks since it was about 40 years.
>>46935564
I think I'd like to try writing a plane, for now. Hopefully have something today.
>>46937341
Except that the last three gorgons were all female. And they died.
>>46937387
Except for Ludmilla, but one female gorgon does not magically make a species come back.
>>46937387
Have we ever seen male Gorgons?
and babies off screen.
>>46937407
Literally the last three of their race, taken down to one. I don't know what the hell mates with Gorgons, but considering how lavishly the Sisters of Stone Death lived for a millenia leading up to their overthrowing, it's a little outrageous to think that they couldn't have made more during THAT interim. But they didn't. And it was important that there were so few of them; it was the main argument used to get the last of them to stop fighting Savra, or else they would have gone totally extinct.
>>46937400
>>46937441
Given how much cross breeding there is in Ravnica I wouldn't be surprised if one Gorgon could make a few clutches of kids in 60~ years.
>>46937718
Maybe they come from eggs?
>>46937720
Yes that's why it's a clutch, because eggs. Or it could be that Ravnica started seeding again because like Mirrodin everyone born on the plane is descended from someone who wasn't.
>>46936640
>"il sincronizzoro"
Male article "il" for a female character, and a word that means nothing. Get your italian right, m8.
>>46937816
>p
Maybe she's transexual ;^)
>>46937816
Man, I don't even know italian. I took chinese in school.
What's the proper female article then? I'll post an edited copy.
>>46937844
"La." And I don't really know what you meant with the second word but I think "sincronizzatrice" is the closest you can get if you wanted the female italian version of "Synchronizer".
>>46937862
It was actually me making a horrible mish-mash of the words sinchronizzare and orario. I thought it would be better to have a kind of fantasy sounding fake name than a one that's just translated italian.
>>46937874
Problem is that it sounds incredible weird in italian. Also "Orario" is a word you use to mean the time in which you have to do something, like when you have to go to the doctor at 3 pm, that the "orario" in which you have to show up.I'd rather use "tempo", or "ore", really, and since we are just mashing words I'd say "sincronizza-ore" or "sincronizza-tempo" and debate or wheter or not keep the - in it.
>>46937920
What about mashing "sincronizza-ore" into Sincronizzore? Flows better off the tongue to me.
>>46936960
Are Symon and Anna gonna live happily ever after?
>>46937960
Flows worst in italian, but it is your character, so it really depends on you.
>>46937972
I went with removing the dash, because fuck linguistic consistency, this is fantasy naming conventions. I could make her name entirely consonants if I wanted to.
>>46938009
Yeah, this is he best compromise I think. Also now I know that - is called a dash. Best outcome all around.
>>46937964
Unless of course tragedy strikes.
>>46936960
You got Anna's sheet lying around?
>>46938095
It is right here
>>46926618
I've had an idea for a Rakdos walker, since we seem to be really lacking him.
He'd be a minotaur who, upon igniting his spark, believes he is a deity.
I find we have a fair lack of evil walkers too, so it'd help that too.
>>46931434
Veldren and Nishal sat at the counter as Del continued adding ingredients to his bowl, talking amongst themselves about their adventures in the multiverse. Friends were hard to come by for planeswalkers, and Nishal considered himself blessed to have found so many in such a short period. Del served out his creation, a souplike meal with small chunks of meat and vegetables.
Nishal had never tasted something so good; after they finished eating and Vendrel left to gather what Nishal needed, rushing out with a "I'll be back in an hour or two!" Nishal turned to the weird. "The dragonling was right," he said. "I've never tasted anything that delicious. Tell me, would you be able to make more?"
If a being without a true face could smile, Del did it.
Soon enough Vendrel was back, followed by a goblin pulling a cart laden with various objects. "Now I don't know what you need with most of this," he said, handing the list back to Nishal. "Or what most of it has to do with the other stuff, but it looks like you're trying to gather a lot of Aether. Should I be concerned?" Nishal pulled another vial out of his bag and handed it to Vendrel in thanks, and said "Probably not, no. As soon as Iosha gets her hands on these we should be off the plane in a day or two. I need to get these to the Wolfblood tower, if that would be possible?"
Vendral, pocketing this newest vial, replied "Not not a problem at all, but it might be a bit of a walk." Reaching back to grab a small pot from the counter and say his farewells to Del, Nishal turned to the door and said "Lead the way, friend! This soup will not stay warm forever, and Iosha gets crabbier the longer she is hungry."
>>46938934
that feels like the end of this one; not sure where to go with it from there. I like keeping them as little adventures without a clear ending, though.
>>46935564
It's hard to give the real flavour with this much space. I expect to write a lot more about this.
>>46937964
Until Will decides no one gets to be happy
>>46939817
>If I can't be with my ship, no one can.
Myr-anon here, I made something while trying to brew something to writefag about. The Messenger as an actual card! Or actually, cardS. All of these represent The Messenger and the possible destinies it carries.
The first one is obviously the current Messenger. Dedicated to its mission, it searches the planes feverishly. It has slowly grasped its abilities of walking and calling forth the memories of its brethren.
The second one is the Messenger that had no outside influences, leaving it to focus entirely on its mission, slowly making it more and more efficient at it. It has no regards for the planes or the people in them, it will systematically search every inch of the plane while stripping its resources to build even bigger army to assist it in its search. Anything slowing down its progress will be shiftly dealt with.
The third one is the Messenger that has been influenced by good nature people and planeswalkers. While it is still on its mission to find the receiver, it has gained great degree of sentience and emotions. This makes it so that it doesnt outright raid the planes, instead it respects every living being and tries to help any plane it comes across, instead of ruining it to fuel its search. The myr has becomes something more. It has become a Hero.
The fourth one is what happens to the Messenger if it ends up in New Phyrexia and somehow its spark its NOT ripped out. There is nothing left of the Messenger's determination to complete its mission, all that is left is the corrupting will of the phyrexians. It has returned to invading other planes, but not for the purposes of finding the receiver. It now enters planes and builds armies of corrupted myr and other phyrexian creatures for the purpose of conquest in the name of Phyrexia.
Which one of these destinies will happen to the poor myr? Only time will tell.
>>46940134
Jesus, the ult of the first and second versions are amazing.
I'm working on a card for >>46938798
I find it easier to make a walker once I have a card and work backward from there.
>>46940134
>secretly likes hero messenger'cause good sentient myr is absolutely adorable.
It kina makes sense, too. Since it's traveling with Nishal, who was previously kind to it.
>>46938934
>Vendrel
>>46940134
The first two seem a little too strong for their mana cost. Efficient Messenger would be fine if Myr as a tribe weren't so good already at pumping out weenies. It could be obscenely hard to smack down for an enemy.
The -6 on 'The Messenger' should read "At the beginning of your end step."
The +1 on Emissary is probably too strong too. I'd probably pull the -1/-1 counter element of it, especially with the passive it has. That'd make the +1 slightly weak, but still playable.
All in all, they're fairly good design though.
>>46933197
What if, like, Gaia and Will had a kid/kids. And they were happy for awhile. But Gaiahad to leave for a bit because of interplaner shenanigans. But because of immortality and oldwalker shit, she's gone longer than she originally intended. Their kids get a bit older and miss their mom, but their dad keeps reassuring them that mom is coming back, she just has very important things to do (all the while worrying about her himself and keeping a weather eye on the horizon). The stuff with Baron Sengir happens, their kids (along with everyone els Will loves) is slain and Will's spark ignites. Gaia feels his ignition from within the Blind Eternities and returns to his home plane. She finds her children dead, and wweeps. She hadn't realized she was gone for so many years. Will returns and finds his grieving wife, but the murder of his lived ones and journey through the Blind Eternities is already changing him. He blames her for not being there to save him and their children. Time passes and they grow appart. Will becomes cold. And the loss of Gaia's first children are part of her driving force to seal off her plane to protect her new children.
>>46940347
That actually inspired me to add Heroic Messenger. Because who cares, all stories that want to take the Messenger for a spin now have their own alternative universe version to use.
>>46940429
Yeah, obviously they arent perfectly balanced. I might tweak them for later threads if need arises. I just mainly wanted to focus on the story and how differently the walker could end up as. Though now that I look bit more, you are right, the first one especially does seem overly strong for its intended purpose, which wasnt supposed to happen.
>>46940469
For what it's worth, I think the Heroic Messenger is absolutely spot on, and the others aren't far off the mark either, and since I imagine those were a first draft, you should be pretty pleased with it.
>>46940516
I really appreciate it! If I didnt care about how the cards themselves would work, I would have just slapped some absurd numbers on them, so this makes me happy.
A young minotaur would be a calf, right?
>>46940134
Nishal-anon, I love the Herioc Messenger! I didn't include him in my second story because I wasn't sure how to do him, but now that there's a card I think I've got a pretty good idea
