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>>44201168
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/44201168/
Post builds, roleplay, write stuff.
Fully implemented CYOA v1.3 character creation, written in Python (rolls the dice and calculates your stats for you): https://repl.it/BZ5I/33
CYOA Stuff:
Writefag Archive: http://pastebin.com/rSvTGQzP
Char Pic Gen: http://www.dolldivine.com/sailor-moon-senshi-maker.php or http://pochi.lix.jp/k_kisekae2.html
Magical Girl Images (updated 10/09/15): https://mega.nz/#!ccd0lJTL!Eg_BiXe2DjMEC_nD1C1s55FgwhAdzAv8fcH1Gw0mGwY
Character Archive:
https://titanpad.com/3eUtOCoeGJ
Add your character here!
Wiki:
Wiki http://mgcyoa.wikia.com/
RPNP Stuff:
PNP Rules: https://titanpad.com/EDGQ9bwZmn
IRC doc archive: http://pastebin.com/u/MagicalGirlPastebin
Monster List: http://pastebin.com/bd6KD7j0
Summonable minions-of-the-week: http://pastebin.com/zqqXhqaj
WIPS:
Benchmarks for all Specializations: https://titanpad.com/L24yLKk9nD !! NEW !! Trees updated daily!
White Coin Expansion: https://titanpad.com/5jH4AfsEtp
Jayne's System Mods: https://titanpad.com/LWeUkNHMEJ
Fusion Rules: https://titanpad.com/EWco1RvgBU
Tangent's Point Buy System !! NEW !!
http://pastebin.com/24RA72eJ
IRC on Rizon:
OOC Chat: #MGCYOA
In Character RP Pub: #TheWand&Circlet
IC Campaigns: #MGChronicle
IC Shenanigans: #Overcity
https://www.rizon.net/chat
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Old Thread OP Text: http://pastebin.com/usMM2EC7
!! NEW !!
Introducing AMGCore, an integrated character creation PDF which allows you to roll and get your mechanics down in one handy PDF.
Created and balanced by Sahara.
ver. 1.01 Update feat. a buff to Twin Souls and better formatting.
!! NEW !!
Suggestions for AMGCore 1.1 (including the proposed 10 new Powers) will be taken here at
https://titanpad.com/TbgnTa6lg7
Hope everyone had a merry Christmas, or whatever your winter holiday of choice is. Didn't finish the Patron Module, but have a single completed teaser page from it. This is the Puchuu package.
reposting the bestiary that got posted last thread:
titanpad.com/IiGPFWpBR1
>>44403688
noice
>>44403541
>>44403541
>kisekae
What are some unoptimal but fun builds?
Rolled 7, 17, 6, 13, 11, 7, 11, 18, 4, 5, 16 = 115 (11d20)
Oh hey, new thread.
>>44404563
Use the Python random generator and try to put the min-maxing out of your head while doing it. If you see something you like, build on the theme instead of going over into trying to optimize.
>>44403688
text is too hard to read. otherwise looks nice
>>44403541
What about this goes in the character picture generator instead of a lewd fetish dress-up program?
https://2995c29805bc62632246266798940ee013527468.googledrive.com/host/0B31ASET0VYFvWjE5SEtwZWZmbjg/chara2.html
This one can get lewdish, sure, but you have to rummage around in the options to even enable it.
>>44404712
Part of that is because of the image output rather than .pdf, but the dark text doesn't show up quite as well on the starfield background as it did on the pink one, even with the shaded boxes. I may swap this back to the same as the core CYOA, or find a different BG image.
In other news regarding the Patron module - Spirits renamed and refluffed to 'Lesser Forces' to emphasize it as the grab bag 'use this for anything that doesn't fit the others' option.
Deities & Horrors largely complete, just awaiting additional images. Lesser Forces and The Beacon about half done, Ebon Mint has some wonky shit intended for it, and has barely been touched. Definitely won't be complete by New Year, but I may have a working beta build by then that will be functional, if lacking in images.
>>44404782
Use a thicker weight text of the same font type? or perhaps bold? or a false 1 pixel stroke?
>>44403541
>>44405018
Roll time.
Rolled 20, 16, 16, 1, 13, 12, 11, 13, 17, 2, 19 = 140 (11d20)
Rolled 13, 16, 16, 1, 14, 16, 2, 14, 3, 19, 9 = 123 (11d20)
Rolled 20, 19, 17, 11, 10, 17, 13, 4, 4, 12, 10 = 137 (11d20)
Rolled 8, 4, 9, 6, 14, 7, 3, 4, 13, 13, 12 = 93 (11d20)
>>44403688
Looks good.
>>44403688
So will this include monster girls and Dark magical girls?Or will that be in a different update?
>>44413177
black and white coins are both in it in some form so...
Would a Buddist Bodhisattva be a Lesser Force, A Diety, or part of The Light? I would personally say the first or the third, but the second could work as well. (Although putting one of them as a "lesser force" is kind of an insult.)I'm getting a Barrier of Sanctification to ward off evil in general from Sitatapatra if I'm allowed to.I better start practicing those mantras if this is allowed.
>>44413177
It integrates Black Coin and White Spark, Ebon Mint being the distributors of the Black Coins and the Beacon being the White Spark quasi-puchuu. Monstrous forms will be broken up into various parts, mental changes, and weaknesses you cannot together to make you monster girl or dark magical girl.
>>44415266
Probably functions best as a Deity, though refluffing the Beacon might work. Lesser Forces are intended for things with narrow focuses that can be slain or destroyed and I don't think it would work properly for a Bodhisattva.
>>44416694
>cannot together
Fucking phone. 'That you can take together.'
bumping, hype for the AMGCore 1.1!
Rolled 12, 17, 17, 20, 12, 6, 3, 1, 20, 2, 19 = 129 (11d20)
>>44418775
I have high hopes for mounting and sizeshifting.
I am glad this thread is back up. I'm gonna throw up my first draft character bio later today. It feels too cliche and I need input on how to make it pop better.
>>44424630
go right ahead! Everyone so far is neat to one another about their characters, come to the IRC so we can further help you too!
>>44425476
Is there a good Android IRC client? I'll be out and about much of the day but I wouldn't mind having a chat to drop in on.
>>44427273
I personally have no problems yet with AndChat. It fits my needs. But there are many android irc clients that are probably better.
>>44427379
I'll have to shop around a little. I used to use mIRC on my computer all the time, so I'm sure there are features I could miss. If I remember what they are, anyway.
>>44403688
It looks amazing!
Also,
>88
>>44424630
>>44425476
Miette was born in Generic Fictional City. Throughout her childhood, she was a talented athlete, competing in several different sports before settling on soccer. Her stubbornness and her desire to win led to her becoming a team captain as soon as her coaches would let her, and while she could be a polarizing figure, her teammates grew to respect her and follow her lead during games.
Miette became quickly popular her first quarter in middle school. She’d been well known as a soccer star before, and she still outshined the competition. However, a knee injury towards the end of the season removed her from the field, and threatened her future as a competitive player. An unfortunate side effect of her injury was the loss of her status, and therefore most of her friends. She fell into a depression, exacerbating the problem.
*something something video games* The key in this paragraph is finding a way to feed the competitive spirit AND the leader role without being on the field the way she was as a team captain. Video games were the only thing I could think of when putting this together, but I know there have to be other options out there.
Thoughts? Places I can improve? Even just basic grammar or phrasing tips are appreciated. Also questions about the character are welcome - I've got Miette defined pretty well as a character in my head, but I haven't put all of that to text just yet.
Working on the IRC bit atm, HoloIRC has the most recently good reviews so I'm gonna give it a go.
Rolled 18, 5, 4, 16, 7, 15, 2, 19, 4, 14, 3 = 107 (11d20)
>>44403541
LET'S GO
>>44404724
Cute, I like it.
>>44430300
Also taking the White Coin!
Age 14
Underdeveloped (+1 MAG)
Spirit (+2 MAG, +1 LCK)
Weapon: Rune-engraved gauntlets (Fists/mystic) (+2 STR, +2 MAG)
Flowing and elaborate outfit (+2 STR, +2 MAG)
Third eye
Martial training (+1 STR)
Awareness
Training
Overcity shift
Fated (+1 LCK)
White coin virtue: Inquisitiveness
10 STR (1 bronze)
6 AGI (1 silver)
6 VIT (2 bronze)
20 MAG (1 gold, 2 silver, 1 bronze)
6 LCK
>>44429680
Why video games? Knee injuries are pretty decent Not-Kyubey bait to lure her into becoming meguca?
What made her agree? How does she feel about being megica? Is her story more idealistic or more gritty (cakes&cream or guns and grit? ie: sailor moon or PMMM?)
Rolled 9, 9, 1, 15, 12, 6, 14, 12, 16, 1, 5 = 100 (11d20)
>>44431406
>why vidya
I follow esports and in games like league, there's usually a shotcaller. They're not necessarily as good at the game mechanically, but teams are often make or break based on how good their shotcaller is. I have to imagine there are other competitive atmospheres with a similar leader position, but I've been drawing a blank on it.
>knee injury
I didn't really think about the knee injury itself being the catalyst. I could definitely see that working.
>what made her agree?
Possibly the knee injury. Definitely the depression stuff though. I don't know if I'd make it full blown depression or just an extreme loss of direction in life, but that would really be the catalyst.
>how does she feel about it?
She takes to it because it gives her purpose again. It's not always easy for her to figure out what she should be doing about any given problem, but she is always 100% confident that she should be helping as a magical girl should.
>sailor moon vs pmmm
It wouldn't be a carbon copy of pmmm, but definitely a guns and grit setting. Magical girls in the setting have to grow up fast or suffer hard for it.
>>44435535
>I have to imagine there are other competitive atmospheres with a similar leader position, but I've been drawing a blank on it.
How about Chess, or a tabletop game like 40k?
>>44435577
That could work. It would give her the super analytical mind for command, and if she didn't expect someone to disobey, it gives a good opportunity for conflict between good guys, which I always like. I imagine her actually being a bad overall party leader, not having much patience for incompetence. But her eye for the battlefield is excellent, so she's invaluable as an effective battle commander.
Maybe she's impatient because she's used to playing Warhammer or another tabletop where her units do what SHE wants, ALWAYS.
>>44435929
>Maybe she's impatient because she's used to playing WarhammerTau or Humanity?She seems like a Commissar, however...
Unrelated, but still going to be stated:
I would have figured there are multiple types of the two archetype settings. I mean technically Real Life is a Guns and Git setting, and yet it certainly isn't Meguca tier grim dark."What do you mean your entire planet was destroyed by a Witch that consumed everyone's souls? Back where I come from the worse we normally get is a bullet in our heads and it is game over!"
Rolled 9, 14, 12, 18, 4, 7, 7, 19, 8, 12, 9 = 119 (11d20)
Are there any PbP games going?
>>44438565
PbP, not yet, but group stories are a thing and there are plenty of IRC games.
Rolled 10 (1d20)
>>44438565
Age: 15
Body: Average
STR +2W
AGI +1S+1O
VIT +2S
MAG +1S
LCK
Specialization: Light
Weapon: Fist
Outfit: Skimpy
Power: Focused Assault
Perks: Enhanced Transformation, Awareness, Get out of Jail, Natural Aging, Big Damn Hero
Not really feeling the inspiration here. Rolling for the Monster Girl's additional specialization.
Do I get to pick the Monstrous Motivation?
And on that matter, the Dark Magical Girl's Weapon and Power are direct picks, too?
>>44438716
My schedule is not remotely reliable enough for an IRC game. Where would I find those group stories?
>>44438716
Just a thing I've been doing with people on the IRC, just see if anyone wants to write with you and start a gdoc for it?
I think you do, yes.
Rolled 3, 18, 7, 2, 4, 2, 11, 2, 17, 9, 12 = 87 (11d20)
It's time.
>>44438781
Age: 15
Body: Average
STR 9
AGI 9
VIT 9
MAG 9
LCK 9
Specialization: Light, Darkness
Weapon: Fist "Libra"
Outfit: Skimpy
Power: Focused Assault
Perks: Enhanced Transformation, Awareness, Get out of Jail, Natural Aging, Big Damn Hero
Motivation: Dominator
Coins: +4 LCK, +2 STR, VIT, MAG, +1 STR, AGI, AGI, LCK
This works.
A rather monochrome looking monster girl who tries to teach everyone how to live a fuller life by embracing both sides of the coin, light and dark.
Her extreme obsession with perfect balance however usually makes things difficult to disastrous. Think Death the Kid gone very wrong.
>>44438868
Age: 10
Body: Underdeveloped
Stats: 13 STR (4 Bronze), 11 AGI, 14 VIT (2 Silver), 15 MAG, 6 LUCK
Specialization: Beast (Gold)
Weapon: Princess Lock (Whip)
Outfit: Skimpy
Power: Royal Guard (Killing Blow)
Perks:
>Martial Training
>Enhanced Sustenance
>Big Damn Hero
>Soul Jar
>Enhanced Outfit
White Coin:
>Perfect Laifu (Fake Parents + Interdimensional Apartment)
I'd summon dinosaurs.
>tfw random generator broke the game
http://pastebin.com/TxzNMCr6
>>44438067I know it's heresy here on /tg/, but I don't actually know much about 40k. If I had to guess based on a very brief internet search, it'd be humans
Guns and grit: there's definitely dark monster things, and there's definitely very VERY real danger of serious injury or death, but that's as dark as I'm likely to get. I've never been big on putting seriously fucked up stuff behind the scenes - doesn't really bother me to read stories with it, but I don't think I could write it well and I wouldn't enjoy writing it anyway.
Friendly Reminder
>>44441090>it'd be humans
Well shet.
> there's definitely dark monster things
Personally I see most of them as more savage creatures that just happen to have been bumped up to Magi Grade, and have to be put down. I mean normal people get attacked by normal animals all the time for varying reasons. Our Megucas basically experience the same thing half the time with monsters.Only they are much stronger and much more violent.
Actually from the CYOA some of these "monsters" don't even seem like actual monsters. (I'm not going after Bigfoot and Ghosts JUST because they exist, damnit!)
>>44441360
I admit that so far the monsters that I'll face are pretty abstract, and my setting is likely to change some (I've got a few friends I always bullshit random setting details with for whatever's on my mind that day). I can't imagine it'll ever be cakes and cream, or even close to it, but it's not really set in stone at all. I'm mostly using the CYOA as is as an inspiration document - I'm not gonna worry too much about the technical differences between a 16 and 17 in a stat, I'll just know that if the 16 and 17 go head to head, 17 has a bit of an edge just for being a little stronger.
Was humans the wrong choice? I can change it!
>>44441646
>Was humans the wrong choice? I can change it!
Lets just say the Imperium would purge your Meguca's ass faster than their lasguns can actually fire, because of your magic and you are probably associated with Puuchu. (Puuchu are filthy Xenos, after all.) Meanwhile the Tau would welcome you with mostly open arms, provided you aren't going to be an asshole and actually help them out with The Greater Good.I am now curious as to what a Tau Meguca would look like.
Rolled 13, 12, 17, 4, 15, 6, 1, 1, 9, 18, 16 = 112 (11d20)
New roll, new character I'll never play.
>>44442362
Age: 9
Body: Average
STR 12
AGI 4
VIT 12
MAG 11
LCK 4
Specialization: Stone
Weapon: Melee+Mystic
Outfit: Elaborate
Power: Familiar
Perks: Dual Weapon, Interdimensional Tourist, Big Damn Hero, Eternal Style, Sorcery
Not really feeling this one either...
>>44442362
Just use the Python roller so you don't need to spam up the thread.
>>44442998they are bumping
>>44443016
I know that they are, but now we can at least report the people who do and have a better chance of it working. As a bonus, the people who honestly didn't know can find out.
>>44443299
...what are you talking about?
The Python roller just feels wrong. It's no fun at all to roll up Megucas with that sterile, inflexible thing.
>>44443299
Talk about no fun allowed, huh?
Would making things melt be an appropriate oddball power?
>>44445512
Powers are more elements than gimmicks, so...what "element" would that correspond to?
>>44445512
Oddball:Liquid?
>>44445512
How does she make things melt? You can do it with a few specs, I think. But if you wanna keep it oddball, try calling it Entropy.
>>44446047
I like that Idea thanks friend.
If I have a melee weapon and +1 weapon stat do I get +1 str and +1 vit or only one of those stats?
Rolled 12, 13, 7, 4, 9, 10, 5, 2, 6, 4, 15 = 87 (11d20)
>>44403541
Eh, why the hell not.
>>44447118
You only get 1. You get to pick which one, but you only get one.
>>44441908
It sounds like I meant to say Tau all along. I don't know why it came out as humans that first time - silly mistake on my part I suppose.
>>44447511HERESY! BLAM!!!
>>44447222
trips checked
Rolled 11, 12, 19, 16, 13, 2, 8, 11, 5, 14, 20 = 131 (11d20)
Roll.
Ophelia
16 years old, overdeveloped
Psychic
Fists
Elaborate outfit
S 10
A 10
V 7
M 11
L 7
Powers:
Third Eye
Regeneration
Perks:
Gifted
Fated
Enhanced Sustenance
Awareness
Eternal Style
Black Coin: Weapon (Sword)
It is the embodiment of sadism, of exultation in destruction.
Cursed with a need to dominate.
The person who was Ophelia swerved to try and avoid the magical girl. It didn't go so well; they killed the girl, crashed the car, and fatally injured themselves in the impact. Crawling out of the wreck, they were offered the choice to be a magical girl or to die of their wounds. An obvious choice. Regeneration from the transformation began to kick in, but before it was complete the monster the first girl had been fighting showed up.
Talk about a trial by fire. With no real knowledge of how to fight, still half dazed from being mostly dead, it ended up being a pretty one sided fight. Ripped to pieces for the second time in five minutes, she heard a voice in the back of her mind. It offered a chance to win. A black coin was hers, and it promised a weapon that could save her. The puchuu tried to stop her, but hadn't it been holding her ransom just a few moments ago? An obvious choice once again.
With her new sword, she cut the pouncing monster down, and felt the thrill of her new existence as she lost consciousness. Perhaps it wasn't all bad.
She awoke in the morning. The puchuu was gone, but the sword was still here. Her memories were a little fuzzy. Perhaps the multiple near death experiences had something to do with it. Her body though, that was as good as new again. Her eyes were better too, they saw so much. She could see where that monster had been. That was something to do. Follow the trail back to where it had come from, find who or what was responsible. It was time for some payback.
She took the name Ophelia, and her journey as a dark magical girl had begun.
What y'all think? Interesting? Shit? Might try some writefagging tomorrow.
>>44450887
Could be good. I often feel Psychic is not a great direct combatant, even though it's probably the best at clearing out subtle monster infections. With Third Eye and Awareness, she'll be really good at noticing things. Of course, with her need to dominate and access to memory-editing... well, she can get into trouble right quick.
I encourage you to writefag something. We could use a few more - production has dropped off considerably since the initial MGCYOA boom in April and a short secondary boom after the transition to AMGCYOA.
Also, seeing this reminded me of a rule interaction that I hadn't intended - as per the 1.3 rules for the Black Coin, you have a weapon that generates an aura of some dark emotion or feeling - which would feed into an Empathic girl's specialty giving her juice for a specific kind of magic pretty much all the time.
Rolled 16, 15, 9, 10, 19, 7, 11, 13, 18, 2, 11 = 131 (11d20)
>>44451259
Oh, yeah, Amelia and Alexa's latest installment was finished recently.
Coin Toss- In which there's an argument after morning church.
http://pastebin.com/KfzS02Fd
>>44454669
Is this something I can read without having read the rest of it?
>>44455110
I'd like to think so- if it doesn't hold up well as its own piece, let me know and I'll try and do better next time? This one's fairly short compared with the others, though.
Also any commentary is welcome.
>>44455128
Will do. I don't have time to read it just now - just alt-tabbing back and forth as I play GW2, and I'm in the middle of a world boss at the moment.
>>44455209
thanks and happy hunting
>>44456752
Uh...you sure you posting in the right thread buddy?
>>44456752
...thank you?
>>44456981
>>44457028
>>44456752
SJW copypasta guy! How've you been? Roll a girl, it's fun!
Also someone needs to play Oddball: SJW.
>>44457119
might as well be sound so they can screech at a frequency that makes everyone tell them to shut the fuck up
I just finished rolling this one up
Felicity
age: 13
body: Average
STR: 10
AGI: 4
VIT: 8
MAG: 9
LCK: 4
Specialization: Oddball Bone because I’m unoriginal
Weapon: Melee Bone club a Giant bone fist on a bone pole thing the fist has a cannon in it
outfit: Flowing
Power: Regeneration and barrage
Perks:
1.) Healing artifact
2.) Awareness
3.) Inter-dimensional home
4.) Money
5.) +1 Weapon Stat, Dual Weapon
Retain vit out of costume
Introducing AMGCore 1.1.
Features requested 10 new Powers, 20 new Perks, new combat actions, and more!
Changelog:
https://titanpad.com/cJhuJGoP4e
>>44457462
Yesss finally :D!
Rolled 17, 16, 2, 7, 11, 3, 20, 10, 11, 2, 16 = 115 (11d20)
>>44457462
Claiming first roll!
Rolled 3, 17, 4, 18, 10, 17, 3, 2, 14, 14, 8, 12 = 122 (12d20)
>>44457462
Damn whoever took first roll!
Rolled 5, 14, 19, 11, 12, 20, 3, 2, 10, 10, 16, 5 = 127 (12d20)
>>44457462
>>44457938
I should've looked at that picture before attaching it...
Rolled 8, 11, 9, 7, 3, 9, 17, 19, 11, 4, 8, 7 = 113 (12d20)
>>44457462
Let's go, let's go!
Rolled 4 (1d20)
>>44457462
Rolled 14 (1d20)
>>44457938
And if cocking up the image wasn't enough, I cocked up the roll too!
>>44457462
HYPE HYPE HYPE
Rolled 7, 6, 6, 3, 1, 7, 7, 1, 4, 4, 1 = 47 (11d10)
>>44458207
Rolling Big Friend, including perks
Rolled 6 (1d20)
>>44457462
YOOO. Upgrade time.
>>44457462
Updated MongPerks to 1.55, minor improvements to fit more in line with AMGC 1.1.
Keyboard is borked so no Changelog, I recommend just looking through or asking me on IRC. Apologies for the inconvenience.
>>44457462
Nice! I think if you're going with the blue scheme I'll swap the BG of the Patron module to the original pink for easier visual recognition.
Rolled 6, 14, 16, 5, 11, 1, 11, 10, 15, 2, 3, 5 = 99 (12d20)
>>44457968
>>44457462
There's also a template pastebin for characters if anyone wants to use it and link to the AMGC doc http://pastebin.com/xdr3wCRL
>>44459083
>AMGC doc
wat
Rolled 3, 17, 17, 20, 5, 6, 19, 15, 16, 6, 17 = 141 (11d20)
>>44457462
>>44459100
Don't shoot me I'm just the messenger
>>44451259
I did think psychic might not be great against other girls, what with most probably being pretty high on the willpower front. Even if changes can't be made though, the ability to read minds combined with third eye and awareness must open up a few easy counters.
>>44457462
Might as well update it now before I do anything with it.
Rolled 13 (1d20)
>>44460038
Fuck. Always put 'roll' instead of 'dice' in the options for some reason.
>>44457462
Aw shit it got released. Sweet.
>>44451259
Well there is a boom in the IRC still. I feel most people are preferring collaborative writefagging and RP to writing things for the thread these days.
>>44459898
Age: 10
Body: Overdeveloped
Spec: Stone
Weapon: Fist (BulletPunch)
Outfit: Flowing (Quick Dash)
Power: Nullification
Perks: Awareness, Monstrous, (Bronze) Sorcery, (Bronze) Fortunate, Snapshots, Sturdy
Str: 16
Agi: 4
Vit: 10
Mag: 6
Lck: 6
(Remaining Coins)
Mp1: Diehard
Mp2: Immortal
Mp3: Leviathan
Mp4: Elemental
>>44454669
>>44455110
>>44455128
I finally got around to reading it! I like it - even without the rest of the story, it didn't take long to get an idea of what was going on. Kreimhild I'm inferring is either the puchuu or the monster girl - and I'm pretty sure that I just glossed over it a little.
I noticed two things writing-wise I wanted to ask about. First, you wrote in the present tense. At first I thought you'd made a mistake, but you did a great job sticking to present. Is that a deliberate choice on your part? I've always used present for RP with people via text-based communications, and otherwise I stick to past tense. It worked, but it was a little jarring at first. If it's a conscious decision, what's the reasoning?
Second, you seemed to use certain punctuation in little spurts. Ellipses (...) showed up several times in very quick succession on a couple occasions. Also, you used hyphens - like this - in sentences right next to each other in at least two places. I always try to avoid using ANYTHING like that more than once every few paragraphs. As I recall, the idea is that you want to use "special stuff" at least a little sparingly, and you want to avoid repetition too close because it can reminds the reader of something so recent they wonder why they're being reminded of it so quickly. Don't quote me on the exact reasoning for it, cause I think there's more to it than I've put here. But it's something to keep an eye on. I find myself overusing hyphens if I don't pay attention, as well as a reliance on a small number of phrases that get to be too similar to one another.
Overall though, great story!
>stretching big
>get poked in the side
>dudewtf.mp4
This feeling made me IMMEDIATELY fucking identify with Amelia. I had a GF once who could NOT help herself with this specific thing.
Rolled 10, 5, 15, 9, 14, 13, 9, 1, 5, 11, 10, 1 = 103 (12d20)
>>44457462
aww yiss
Rolled 20, 6, 18, 9, 14, 12, 9, 13, 8, 2, 12, 9 = 132 (12d20)
>>44457462
>>44403541
>>44450887
Writefagged as promised.
http://pastebin.com/eMX0Q1Sv
Rolled 17, 11, 5, 7, 13, 11, 19, 6, 3, 6, 10, 10 = 118 (12d20)
>>44457462
>tfw no oddball
well time to roll a new one
So question, how does ranged weapon ammo work in the system? I can't find mention of it anywhere.
>>44464900
No ammo. Just keep shooting.
>>44464347
Oddball is there m8. Ice got removed and added to Water spec.
>>44464900
Unlike in the CYOA ammo doesn't run off your mana, because that would just encourage more MAG-heavy builds.
>>44464900
I always thought that the ammo was just included on account of your weapon ultimately coming from your magical-girl-ness. It makes more sense to me that way.
>>44465300
>Unlike in the CYOA ammo doesn't run off your mana, because that would just encourage more MAG-heavy builds.
In general, I would rate the production of normal bullets for a rifle or pistol at a negligible cost. I only included the line to prevent people from claiming they just BRRRRT/Itano Circus their way to victory.
>>44465380
>>44465300
So then the only thing you have to keep track of is mundane weapons then?
>>44465559
Just a random schmoe, but I'd think so, yeah. I just don't know why you'd want to do that, unless you're pulling a Homura or something. Pretty much no matter how you end up rolling, I feel like there aren't mundane conventional weapons that would be a better option than just fighting with your magical girl combat powers.
>>44460992
It was conscious- I think it's a relic of the IRC/pbp format this was passed on since I wrote this with Jran as a joint story.
Kreim is Alexa's big friend and a monstergirl. She tends to play a larger role in the other snippets.
I'll keep that in mind, thanks for the feedback!
Rolled 14, 11, 1, 18, 5, 19, 19, 18, 2, 18, 12 = 137 (11d20)
>>44457462
Neat.
Rolled 13 (1d20)
>>44466755
>in which no attention was paid to the damn PDF changes
Derps were herped.
>>44457462
Stone and Beast have out-of-costume boni that are not reflected in their stats. As written, Stone seems like it could keep 2 vit while gaining only 1 in costume, while Beast keeps 1 agi while gaining none. Is this intentional? I recognize that it's still useful due to the out-of-costume base of 3, but previous appearances of Beast have had agi boni in and out of costume.
>>44466035
I thought it might be. I'm in a between-session solo RP on Facebook right now, and it felt like that once I got used to it.
I'm excited to read more about Kreim! And all of it in general, too. Your characters are interesting and not perfect, which I like a lot.
It's definitely something to look into, anyway. I know there are examples of repetition being used deliberately and very effectively. I'm not a good enough writer to know when it really works, though.
Rolled 17, 13, 9, 11, 12, 6, 17, 5, 7, 18, 15, 17 = 147 (12d20)
>>44457462
Color me interested.
>>44466035
Also, I hope that when I get around to writing some stuff, I get your input in return. The magical girl genre is pretty new to me, so I'm sure I'll stumble into cliches I'm not intending to use.
Rolled 18, 3, 20, 3, 20, 19, 11, 19, 13, 9, 18, 5 = 158 (12d20)
>>44457462
What do the dice have in store this time?
>>44467987
Age: 14
Body: Average
Spec: Sound
Weapon: Mystic (Enchanted)
Outfit: Elaborate (Accumulator)
Power: Nullification
Perks: Wings, Gifted, Environmental Sealing, Eternal Style, Skeleton Key, Snapshots
S 4
A 14
V 7
M 15
L 7
Interesting. Still have to dig a little more into the new Powers and Perks to see good combinations.
Rolled 7, 9, 15, 17, 5, 3, 5, 9, 3, 16, 17, 6 = 112 (12d20)
>>44457462
>>44468135
Sure thing! I'm Tangent on the IRC, usually hang out there, be happy to give feedback there or if I spot it in thread.
Rolled 13, 16, 8, 9, 5, 5, 3, 5, 4, 14, 11, 15 = 108 (12d20)
c'moooon!
Rolled 20, 4, 1, 17, 9, 2, 11, 2, 11, 6, 19, 6 = 108 (12d20)
>>44403541
>>44457462
Does Twin Soul's stat reduction apply while untransformed? That would reduce the average twin's vit to 1. Sorry if old question.
>>44454669
>>44463180
Master List updated. Sorry for leaving Amelia & Alexa off of there for so long, but I just noticed it was now being edited into a more story friendly format rather than just being pasted IRC logs.
Rolled 12, 17, 20, 5, 18, 5, 8, 9, 9, 4, 6, 8 = 121 (12d20)
>>44457462
Maaybe a 2nd char! Rolling for new core
>>44473969
Twin Soul's stat reduction applies once, when looking at total stat number. When you are in civilian form, your stats are capped at 3 unless you have bonuses that apply out of costume.
So no, you shouldn't have 2's in stats because of Twin Soul.
>>44474388
>>44473969
DERP You're asking about AMGCore. I would assume it works the same way though.
>>44474124
No worries, and thanks! Alexa's being written by Jran, by the way.
This is a flashlight beam. It is a beam of light. This light is not effected by gravity.
Now my question is... Why don't Light Megucas have a support spell in the Benchmarks similar to this, where as long as they pour mana in they float?-and why is there a Instant Microwave skill in there? I mean I agree that it fits, but I think we need Maser Meguca attacks as well.Just in case Godzilla shows up.
Rolled 14, 16, 9, 7 = 46 (4d20)
>>44474457
Mm. Well, it looks like this version of AMGCore has the quirk of producing Twins with lower stats while transformed.
Rolling for a twin.
>>44474974
In my opinion if all specs have Flight it makes the Wing perks pretty useless, but also the Benchmarks don't accurately reflect the current state of the game.
Scroll down to the Spec trees section and look in Light's, feel free to add ideas there.
>>44478027
Wings are reliable, constant flight as opposed to expensive, draining magic.
>>44478027
>>44478892
I like to imagine that the more flight things you have, the better it gets. So if you have specialization flight, you get like level 1-3 flying with certain strengths and weaknesses based on what specialization and how strong your magic is, and wings might give you a level 2 or 3 by themselves, but with caveats of its own. Having wings AND a strong flying specialization would get you perfect flight, or at least better flight or lower mana spent (or both, depending on context).
If we're actually playing with numbers right now, I don't have a handle on what that might look like. I know DnD has various tiers of flight, so something like that could definitely serve as inspiration.
Any help on getting connected to the IRC? I've gotten as far as putting in www.rizon.net as my server, but there's a few options I'm not sure about.
Server port - should this be anything in particular?
Server credentials - I assume I'd need to set something up on the server for that? I've only ever needed to use nickserv before for that
>>44479135
https://client01.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.rizon.net%2FMGCYOA
for in browser
are you using a IRC client?
>>44479135
Disregard this, shoulda used irc.rizon.net. Sorting it out now.
>>44479188
Going to bed, This is for irc clients
Rolled 3, 6, 14, 3, 10, 20, 8, 16, 4, 7, 16, 18 = 125 (12d20)
>>44457462
>>44479717
Name: Black Willow
Age: 10
Body: Underdeveloped (+1 MAG)
Specialization: Wood (Bronze) (+2 MAG, +1 STR, +1 VIT)
Weapon: Melee (+1 STR, +1 VIT)
-High Ward
Outfit: Elaborate (+1 MAG)
-Accumulator
Power: Scrying (+1 MAG)
Perks:
Disguise Artifact (+1 LCK)
Sorcery (+1 MAG)
Training (Swordplay) (+1 STR)
Environmental Sealing (+1 VIT)
Super Map (+1 LCK)
Astral Projection (+1 MAG)
Stats:
STR: 14 (Silverx2, Bronzex2)
AGI: 4
VIT: 7
MAG: 17 (Goldx1, Silverx1, Bronzex1)
LCK: 6
>>44416694
>the Beacon being the White Spark quasi-puchuu
So basically... Picture?
Rolled 14, 12, 17, 13, 3, 14, 10, 7, 7, 20, 3, 13 = 133 (12d20)
Rololo~
Rolled 16, 5, 18, 18, 8, 18, 3, 18, 11, 11, 3, 13 = 142 (12d20)
Rolled 13, 6, 10, 11, 1, 10, 19, 19, 13, 12, 20, 16 = 150 (12d20)
Dice always.
Rolled 4, 20, 12, 14, 20, 18, 16, 19, 13, 11, 18, 2 = 167 (12d20)
Rolled 14, 3, 10, 6, 14, 19, 5, 6, 1, 6, 17, 10 = 111 (12d20)
>>44457462
>>44492834
Age 11
Underdeveloped (+1 MAG)
Darkness(+2 MAG, +1 VIT, +1 LCK)
Mystic weapon - Enchanted (+1 MAG) (1 bronze)
Uniform - Reinforced (+1 VIT)
Tentacles (+1 STR)
Gifted (+1 LCK)
Flexibility (+1 AGI)
Interdimensional tourist (+1 MAG)
Incognito (+1 MAG)
Transfiguration (cat) (+1 MAG)
Snapshots (+1 LCK)
STR 5
VIT 9 (2 silver)
AGI 7 (1 bronze)
MAG 17 (1 gold, 2 bronze)
LCK 9 (1 silver)
Is there a limit to the number of fix it bandaids a character gets?
Amelia, Alexa, and Kreimhild celebrate Christmas. Sort of.
http://pastebin.com/QP207V59
Wo ist die Käse?
>>44498899
It's "Wo ist der Käse?"
'Käse' is masculine.
Or you could say "Wo ist die Käsesahne?", though I have no idea why you'd be making that reference.
>>44500991
[Magical Realm Intensifies]
>>44498899
As for the answer:
Rechts hinter dir.
>>44474974
>This light is not effected by gravity.
Yes it is. If it's pointing perpendicularly upwards then it'll be redshifted, at the very least, and on the larger scale the beam's path will be curved by the Sun's gravity as it leaves the solar system.
guess who wrote something again.
>implying you remember worlds shittiest writer
anyway. http://pastebin.com/Ne6THtAe
I restarted because I felt like I can write better now. more chapters will be here http://pastebin.com/NFM5GLJv
>>44403541
12 Years Old
Average Body (+1 Vit)
Light Powers (+1 Agi, +2 Vit, +1 Mag), Stone Powers (+3 Vit)
Wields Fists (+2 Str)
Wears Uniform (+2 Vit)
Regeneration
Blood Magic, +1 Vit
Enhanced Sustenance, +1 Vit
Environmental Sealing
Enhanced Uniform
Monstrous Form (+2 Str, Agi, Vit)
Absolute Direction
Spend 4 Bronze on +Vit
Spend 1 Silver to swap Hammerspace to Regeneration
Spend 1 Silver to swap Purification to Enhanced Sustenance (+1 Vit)
Spend 1 Silver to swap Eternal Style for Environmental Sealing
Spend 1 Gold Coin to acquire a Monstrous Form & Enhanced Outfit
Spend Dark Coin to become a Monster. Gain Stone Powers (+3 Vit)
Tried to shoot for a ridiculously survivable build. As a result, in my monstergirl (i.e. default) form I have 20 Vitality and can shrug off pretty much anything, while quickly regenerating from anything stronger. Hurray!
>>44499381
I-it was just a reference.
I'm sorry :'(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-j38ZeqBJzA
Rolled 17, 6, 12, 5, 18, 6, 16, 17, 14, 6, 9 = 126 (11d20)
Rolling
dice+11d20
Now let me roll
Rolled 13, 5, 20, 16, 12, 4, 9, 1, 20, 5, 11 = 116 (11d20)
>>44505553 damn im a failure at this
Reroll now
Rolled 8, 6, 18, 15, 1, 8, 17, 12, 13, 8, 9, 3 = 118 (12d20)
Let's see what the dice have in store for the new core.
>>44499381
>>44504536
Wait a second, I think it's feminine because Mami's the cheese.
>>44506540
So? Mami is a girl, i.e. "Mädchen".
"Mädchen" is neutral, not feminine.
Do not attempt to conflate German grammar with reason.
>>44508106:3
I'll never make that mistake again, Kraut-sama~, I promise!
