>>23599090
50 shades of kek. monitoring.

>>23599090
Completely redo the first part. Don't call yourself a great person.

The "what I'm doing in my life" doesn't sound like an honest answer and more like you're trying to create an impression of yourself which may or not be accurate.

Be a little more frank and to the point. What are you doing with your life? School? Pursuing a passion? Working?

Shorten what you're good at to:
Dancing
Cooking
Massaging
Photography
Making People Laugh

At absolute most, less may be even better.

Favorite stuff: This is the one section you should throw a few things in. It's the thing you stand to have in common with someone that'll give you guys something to talk about. If you have the same eccentric favorite of something as a girl they'll want to talk about that.

>>23599090
your profile makes you look autistic, and like an insincere "nice guy" to boot

Did you get my advice yesterday in the other thread about your picture?