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>>2862711
ill just say that its a bit weird that shes just standing in the forest. i would like if she were doing something like kicking at leaves or brushing her hand along a branch as she walks. just normie stuff that one would do passing through trees. also idl aspect ratio

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I Post my pictures almost anywhere but all I ever get AT BEST is "there's no object in there
I really try hard with colour grading via liftgammagain rather than colourzones recently
I also posted all my favourite ones in other threads so you'll have to judge my "sloppy seconds"

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>>2862733
The colour contrast is okay. What is the subject, though?. Also focus. I think that might be why it doesn't feel like there's a subject. If those mushrooms popped a bit more, their being obscured by grass, or being framed by it, might come off better.

Clearly you're looking for decent subjects, though. That's something you should keep up.

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>>2862738
As I said, this is my "sloppy second"
>>2862522

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>>2862711
uhhh you got the focus right i guess..

But picture is really flat and leaves in the front are very distracting

>>2862733
Yeah I'd agree with anon above. If you had a little bigger DoF and got both mushrooms in focus, the picture would seem a lot stronger.

Colors and lighting are cool though

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I've gotten a lot of mixed feedback on this one

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>>2862862
Colours seem alright, but it just seems a bit poorly composed. I'm no master critic though, so hopefully other anons can help more.

>>2862862
Waaaayy too much going on. I mean, you could have at least cropped that out of focus black shit in the corner. Also highlights btfo

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>>2862862
I see where you were going with this, but it could have been taken on a phone, nothing really stands out, plus his feet are cut off. Maybe a vertical crop will help. #Trump2016

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>Implying anyone should listen to a group of faggots that think they know shit about photography just because they've watched a couple of videos about composition and the exposure triangle.

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>>2862998
nice, you fucked up the levels you lifted blacks faggot

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>>2862723
Don't know why nobody said something, I like it. Nice use of out of focus subject and dutch angle.

>>2862862
Crop it as >>2862998 said.

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>>2862728
>>2862763
while I don't really like some one else posting my pictures I appreciate the critique. I still have a hard time framing with the huge 6x7 viewfinder without a tripod and originally posted that one because I like the tones and how nice that delta 3200 turns out.
how would I counter that flatness? orange filter? I'm not too fluent with shooting bw film

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Frankly, I'm an idiot.

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>>2863031
Too dark?

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>>2863090
dont take it too personal but one of the few things I learned on here is to stay away from generic-flowers-with-some-bokeh-shots

>>2863098

duly noted.

i did only get the camera today though, so i'm just doing the lazy things first.

>>2863021
I like the pic on the left

I don't think that can really be done with single pictures. You would need to look at the whole recent work of the artist and also perhaps ask for what he tries to achieve with his photographs to give him meaningful critique.

Photography is not like painting where you could tell someone to improve anatomy or shading etc.

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What do I do with extreme colours, especially blue.
In this image, the blanket was SO AGGRESSIVELY BLUE that I had to use Colour Zones (once ago my favourite toool, now I try to avoid it) to turn down the saturation on all blues.
In other pictures I might not have this option.
Also, what do I do when almost nothing is seperated by brightness so I cant properly use lift-gamma-gain to seperate areas/objects/colours?

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Help senpai

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>>2865224
nice editing, composition sucks and there is nothing really interesting in the photo, it lacks subject

>>2863178
"Also, what do I do when almost nothing is seperated by brightness so I cant properly use lift-gamma-gain to seperate areas/objects/colours?"
>what do i do when i've taken a bad picture in the first place and now need to edit it in post to make shitty look good?

>>2862743

Snapshit... not much more to say.

Ducks being boring, with bad framing.

>>2862862

>not believing in yourself

Sanders cuck btfo

>>2868162
the distinct lines from over sharpening or shitty masking look terrible. i would work on the general editing a bit, but otherwise it's a fairly dull picture.

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>>2863098
Buh buh...mah flowers...

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>>2862704

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I found this image to feel somewhat symbolic.

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>>2868381

>a bit

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>>2868258
Sadly, the world does not cater to my lighting needs, so sometimes I rather take a sub-optimal picture in the wild and try my best to improve it in post then to not take the photo and regret it later.

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>>2868408
too much space with nothing in it. The bottom 1/3rd of the image adds nothing to it. I like the effect, but you need a better location and better composition.

>>2868416
The subject is potentially interesting except you haven't done anything with it. It's just a picture of a pole. Composition is non-existent. Color looks straight out of camera. It's just not a good image, sorry senpai.

Once you find an interesting subject, work with it. Think of all the interesting angles and scenes you can capture with it. Don't just take one photo and move on, take 5/10/20 until you find a shot that works.

>>2868856
better than your other photo. color is fine, subject stands out well. needs more context, but it's better than the other image.

>>2863021
Good Color, interesting composition. The right image is my favorite of the two. I'd like to see a series of photos similar to this.

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>>2868892
The subject was supposed to be the plant so-to-say breaking off the pole ("symbolic").
I have numerous shots but decided to use the one I took on the lowest level because from above it just looks dumb.
Colour was Green-Magenta contrast increased, Green saturation up, all other saturation down.

In this one I played with the colours more.

What exactly do you mean by "bad composition"?
Should I used less background or a different one? I was thinking about going far away and then zooming all the way in to take some of the background away.

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>>2868925
It is just not a very interesting subject. So it seems like a random photo of nothing.

Tip: crop and rotate so vertical lines like the building are actually straight. Everything tilted to the side is not helping.

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Just started photography and did my first food photoshot this week for a restaurant, I think I did o-k.

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>>2869472
Still have a work to do on my editing I think, critics are welcome.

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>>2869473
I have some other shots, will just post these 3 for now.

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I feel like I needed to get lower to the ground for this shot.

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>>2869472
probably clean up the plum/apricot skin cut

>>2869473
wish the dof was wider so the enter subject was in focus

>>2869474
strawberry leaves are very unappealing; try to be more selective when picking up food

love the feel of the photo though: rustic, yet subtle colors with soft shadows. i suggest applying the same composition (same angle, padding) across all the photos, and really carefully pick what food you want to use in the photo.

>>2869842
I agree with everything you said, I was kind of uncomfortable taking pictures outside of my usual work environment so I messed up some obvious things (keeping the same composition, food picking). I think my next work will improve a lot.

Thanks a lot for the feedback and advice!

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>>2869839

no actually, the camera being higher off the ground gives a pleasant floating effect, i like it

what i don't like is how unnecessarily close those leaves are to the lens, its distracting, that and the chromaboration is so intense here the sky appears pink,

>Pic Related, how i would have processed it

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>generic sunset
I really like sunsets

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Embarrassing edit

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>>2869839
definitely should have pulled out that weed looking thing in the right foreground.

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>>2869839
fixed for you.

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>>2871147
Sorry! Heres the cropped version.

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Rate Me!

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I probably could have gotten closer to the barn, not sure how I feel about how much fence is in the foreground, and I have no real tools for post processing

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>>2862711
She looks like you just told a lame joke

>>2862711
shes not into it dude

next her, hit the gym

>>2871136
Why there's a bottle of cologne sitting in the grass, I don't know. And also my eye wants to bring that m down so I keep seeing Bumberry. Dunno if others get that

>>2873298
Yeah i get that too

>>2868162
throw away the red filter.

>>2868925
get closer, have it dominate your frame. Just enough dof to clearly separate the subject from the background while not completely blurring the remaining poles into obscurity. Not sure if you can do that easily with that tiny sensor.

Your colors are fucked it looks like an early digital camera which is not pleasant. Red and green are far too saturated; my eye is drawn to the red on the apartment, trees in the background, and that strip of red behind the pole.

Try to do some lens corrections as well and I think there is some green ca on the streetlight but these last two gripes are just "good hygiene" and not major.

>>2869986
sunsets are fine imo but get a camera that doesn't have that aggressive color banding.

>>2869995
yup

>>2871150
face is blown. expose for the highlights and bring up what you can of the shadows. you were at iso base iso anyway you probably could have pulled at least 3 stops out of the shadows.

>>2873267
would have been interesting with animals in the yard. I think the fence frames it, its not bad. Either pirate lr 5 or just work an extra hour a month to pay for it.

>>2873348
Yeah, I did get the horse peeking out through the door, but the animals dont come out until the daytime, and the lighting wouldnt be as good

>>2871177
I will ignore the technical deficiencies of the image for a moment.

Good: Like the visual "pun" with both the lampshade and bear leaning in the same direction. The light makes the image.You kept everything in the frame (barely at top, though). The horizontals are indeed horizontal.

But - the image is not balanced - which a statement like this needs. It's weighted far too much to right of frame - which basically leads the viewer right off the image. Bye-bye. Too much dead space and dark space at left. Too tightly cropped at top. Not by a ton, but by enough to matter.

>>2873267
>>2873267
Very nicely framed
Not entirely sure if I like the color though. It kind of works though

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>>2870026
This is way better, dude. Prepare your body.

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>>2873544
bro

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>>2873339
thanks, I will remember those tips.

Currently trying some framing and composition

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>>2873567
>>2873339
Nevermind, just realized I forgot lens correction.
Darktable doesn't auto-recognize my cam+lens system yet

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What did I fuck up? Or what did I get right?

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Also, how's this one? I don't do action shots very often at all.

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>>2873606
not bad, a little saturated tho

>>2873606
Try to get rid of those abberrations. Also, oversaturated. Try to blow out colours and then desaturate everything with global values.
The subject is centered, try to keep a 1/3 2/3 theme in your pictures, but given it's a sports-shot, it's pretty good framing

>>2873702
>>2873606

>pretty good framing
>can't see half of the subject

if you can't frame the whole skater you should move. look at skate mags you will always want to see the whole skater

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>>2873567
There's no reasonable explanation for the image.

If you are focusing on the structure or geometry of your image (call it composition & framing) - break the elements down.

If you can't visualize it - quint until everything is blurry.

You can see that there's not even a pleasing sense of chaos in this image. It's just imbalanced all around.

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>>2873499
Thanks. What specifically makes you unsure about the color?

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>>2863021
>>2873728
This one is an example where there is obvious harmony, balance and structure.

Probably best in thread from that standpoint.

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>>2873731
I think it's mainly the sky color.
Idk. I can't place it
I do like the shot though

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>>2873732
>>2873728
The two edges of the grill are running through the 2/3 line. The green in the opposite half of the image is contrasting to the red.

After people told me to pay more attention to what is in what parts of the picture I thought this would be a decent shot

>>2873732
This however doesnt look like anything ordered.

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>>2873587
you fucker you took a shot I took a few months back and made it way better that's what you did.

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I took this shot for the angles, did I do it right-ish?

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>>2873847
in retrospect I wish I had framed the horizon on the top third line, but I'm a sucker for blue skies still.

>>2873841
Consider the visual weight of the elements. First, it is true that reds and greens contrast well enough - but the image has a few recognizable objects - a bike, a hose, a grill, garbage can.

All of that is in the right side of the image. Recognizable objects carry more visual weight than things like foliage, bricks, the ground, etc. Account for that as well.

It's good that you're thinking about contrasting elements, color, etc. and where to place the main subject in the frame - but just placing one visual element on a thirds line doesn't really mean much on its own.

The image really doesn't work.

>>2863021
As for this diptych. I might not have kept the wire in the left panel but it does at least break up a certain monotomy. The flowers in foreground and home in background create almost a vague symmetry about the centerline, which is pleasing. The rough symmetry in shape is of course disrupted by the contrasts in color, distance and subject. The image would work much less with a shallow DoF.

The right panel carries the color concept and flower in from the left panel, and is nicely dominated by strong verticals. The visual weight of the "walk sign" works, as it's balanced against the diagonals and the building at right. Rule of thirds would suck here.

I really believe you're on the wrong track if you feel these images are poorly composed vs yours.

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>>2873848
You had to make some choices. There's a cloud at top of frame that would have been cut off if you moved the horizon much more up - but maybe it would be nice to see where that angle with the oar/boat meets.

While the water horizon is around halfway - the mountain tops average to something close to the golden ratio, which isn't the worst thing in the world.

Not ideal, but another choice may not have been substantially better.

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I was having a hard time with them moving around so this was the best I got of them.

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Camera Software	Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows)
Maximum Lens Aperture	f/4.1
Sensing Method	One-Chip Color Area
Color Filter Array Pattern	802
Focal Length (35mm Equiv)	40 mm
Image-Specific Properties:
Image Orientation	Top, Left-Hand
Horizontal Resolution	300 dpi
Vertical Resolution	300 dpi
Image Created	2016:06:30 15:14:32
Exposure Time	1/200 sec
F-Number	f/8.0
Exposure Program	Manual
ISO Speed Rating	400
Lens Aperture	f/8.0
Exposure Bias	0 EV
Metering Mode	Pattern
Light Source	Unknown
Flash	No Flash
Focal Length	40.00 mm
Rendering	Normal
Exposure Mode	Manual
White Balance	Auto
Scene Capture Type	Standard
Gain Control	Low Gain Up
Contrast	Normal
Saturation	Normal
Sharpness	Normal
Subject Distance Range	Unknown

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Go rough,

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Camera-Specific Properties:
Equipment Make	NORITSU KOKI
Camera Model	QSS-32_33
Camera Software	Microsoft Windows Photo Viewer 6.3.9600.17415
Image-Specific Properties:
Image Orientation	Top, Left-Hand
Horizontal Resolution	72 dpi
Vertical Resolution	72 dpi
Image Created	2016:06:29 21:20:21
Color Space Information	sRGB
Image Width	2048
Image Height	3088

>>2873915
resize it.

>>2873915
The sign on the window that says "bread" is extremely distracting to me

I hate chinamen.

>>2863031
>>2863034
any commentary? I know I'm shit but I need people to pinpoint it for me so I can excise those parts of my practice

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scuffs and nicks aside, what wrong? knows its bad but what wrong

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Camera-Specific Properties:
Image-Specific Properties:
Image Width	2625
Image Height	2075
Compression Scheme	Uncompressed
Pixel Composition	Unknown
Horizontal Resolution	300 dpi
Vertical Resolution	300 dpi

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know itshit but how ok please
i did anything rihgt?

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Camera-Specific Properties:
Camera Software	Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows)
Image-Specific Properties:
Image Width	6032
Image Height	4915
Number of Bits Per Component	8, 8, 8
Compression Scheme	Unknown
Pixel Composition	RGB
Image Orientation	Top, Left-Hand
Horizontal Resolution	1200 dpi
Vertical Resolution	1200 dpi
Image Data Arrangement	Chunky Format
Image Created	2016:02:05 15:21:37
Color Space Information	Uncalibrated
Image Width	1086
Image Height	885

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Camera-Specific Properties:
Equipment Make	NORITSU KOKI
Camera Model	QSS-31
Camera Software	QSS-31 G002
Image-Specific Properties:
Image Orientation	Top, Left-Hand
Horizontal Resolution	72 dpi
Vertical Resolution	72 dpi
Color Space Information	sRGB
Image Width	1000
Image Height	985

>>2874423
did you sharpen this after scanning it?

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to dark maybe but also what other bad

>>2874425
american my friends

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Camera Software	Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows)
Image-Specific Properties:
Image Width	5424
Image Height	6394
Number of Bits Per Component	8, 8, 8
Compression Scheme	Uncompressed
Pixel Composition	RGB
Image Orientation	Top, Left-Hand
Horizontal Resolution	1200 dpi
Vertical Resolution	1200 dpi
Image Data Arrangement	Chunky Format
Image Created	2016:02:05 15:18:20
Color Space Information	Uncalibrated
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>>2874428
no downsizing in irfanview made texture wrong i'm think
.tif look evener

>>2874430
Yeah so much aliasing jesus

makes me mad because I like your photo

>>2874431
here is slightly bigger
http://imgur.com/44cPY1y

>>2874434
Love it, thank you

I really love that messy lived in, comfy feel

Also dat picasso

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I just did my first food photography session yesterday, what do you guys think about it?
You can be harsh

>>2874468
The top tip of the cake is out of focus, and I feel like the texture of the cake is too sharpened, which makes it look somewhat unappealing to me. Maybe try to make it look softer.

I don't like the reflection of the cake plate in the glass on the right.

Other than that, I think it looks good. Then again, I've never done food photography in my life, so dont really know what to look for in it

>>2874742
Thank you anon! I appreciate your opinion!