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assorted critique.

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>>2855268
This one looks like it was taken by mistake when you were fiddling with your camera. What is the focus of this picture?
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>>2855268
This >>2855273 also those poles. This isn't even a snapshit.

>>2855269
Why the foreground? Why from that far? At least take it from closer at high/low pov to make it interesting. The way is taken is just shit.

>>2855271
Cut stalagtites at the top, distracting light at the back, not enough contrast between subject and foreground, should have cropped top right/bottom left ones. In conclusion shit.

>>2855274
At least on this one the light helps. What Im looking at here, the stalagtites from the top who aren't completely framed, the stalagmite on the left who also isn't or the bottom were there is fucking nothing? Make up your mind before shooting.

Enjoy you're critique
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>>2855277
Nice hotline miami sky colour

>>2855279
>that top left tree

>>2855281
>that bottom right roof

>>2855282
Sky or reflections? Sky is shit go another day, and reflections cut.

>>2855284
Go to a bridge were there aren't signs ruining your generic carlight pic

>>2855290
>If I use B&W a boring snapshit becomes interesting
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>>2855292
Statement of errors:
*substitute foreground for background in >>2855271 appreciation
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>>2855271
>>2855292

>>2855268
For this picture i tried to get the trail of lights from the bus and car. but the shutter was to short. so yeah it was an accident, but its my favorite photo I've taken so far.
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>>2855271
>>2855292
>>2855296

On the small LCD it looked fine, it was only till i blew it up at home i realized it to be sort of blurry and weird.

I didn't have to much time for adjustments either, and it was really dark. the tour guide moved from one area to another really quickly.
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>>2855294
thanks for the critique.
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>>2855304
You can always play with LR/PS/wathever later on and try to compensate for the lack of contrast, somewhat composition (cropping), colors, etc. But gotta get a good pic to start with
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>>2855299
Even if the exposure time had been correct, at the most basic level you still have a pole if some sort smack bang in the middle of your picture.
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dude do you have palsy or what? buy some image stabilization. looking at these photos is like someone smeared vaseline on my glasses.
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>>2855277
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>>2855282
Very nice.
If you go to aperture f10, lights will have that star burst look like you got in the lower right.
Experiment with shorter exposure times. Your lights are blown out, especially the neon signage. If you use Lightroom, you can slide highlights all the way to the left to bring back some of the details lost in the lights.
I like the reflections in the water. Try showing more of the water: one third sky, one third city, one third water. Those reflections are where the magic happens. Also, the long exposure time makes the water look mystical.
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>>2855284
this is a very cliche photo. Cutting off the buildings makes it feel disjointed.
Barrel distortion in your lens makes the vertical lines lean in, particularly on the sides. In Photoshop, there's a filter for easily correcting verticals called Adaptive Wide Angle. You can find tutorials on youtube
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>>2855512
wtf am I looking at? Is this what Alice saw in the rabbit hole?
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>>2855512
A E S T H E T I C 美 学
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>>2855268
Mtion blur is good to have in a photo. The street sign pole in the foreground seems purposeless. You could probably Ps it out. I also dont know why the focus is so much toward the close part of the photo, and falls off about at the point where the car and bus are. The fence in the background is soft, and the boring ground and pointless light pole in the front are super sharp comparitively. Off to a good start though, I only complained cuz you asked for crit.

>>2855512
rrriiiiight
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>>2855282
this one was worth enlarging the thumbnail. How about more water and less sky though? Maybe longer shutter to make the water even more creamy.

Sunset pictures are kind of lame. Getting colorful pictures of the sunset doesnt really require any more skill than pressing a button. If you make the colorful sunset be a secondary element to a more interesting subject, they really do a lot for a photo. Sunset pictures have already been played out.
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>>2856432
>Sunset pictures are kind of lame.
>>2856432
>pictures of the sunset doesnt really require any more skill
>>2856432
>Sunset pictures have already been played out.
>>2856432
>make the colorful sunset be a secondary element
Not a sunset, it's a city skyline at night, you dumb fucking nigger!
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>>2856433
Great shot, perfect DOF - I like all of the different textures and details.
Nice crushed blacks and PP work.
I like the way that the old man is cropped so short in the shot, it makes him look like a little boy and the woman seems motherly.
Why did you ISO 250 instead of ISO 100?
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>>2856481
>>2856432
this one was worth enlarging the thumbnail. How about more water and less sky though? Maybe longer shutter to make the water even more creamy.
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>>2856581
>make the water even more creamy.
fucking niggers, I swear
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>2856433
Excellent shot.
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How do I improve this in post processing? Which edit is best?

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>>2857561
>>2857555
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>>2857573
All I got there was "Fuck off" I would really appreciate if someone in this thread would give actual criticism and explain what I did so terribly wrong.
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>>2857580
You're putting way too much thought into a photo of a vase. Flower photos are what you take when you first get your camera. Nobody cares about them unless you take some of the most interesting most unique flower photos anyone has ever seen (and even then, only if people think they look like pussies)

Think less about your processing, and more about taking a photo worth looking at.
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>>2857583
Got it. Awesome. Thing is, I don't care about the pic, I care about the processing, which is why I was asking about how to improve this in post processing. I didn't ask for a stupid gif critiquing composition. Any criticism on tone, colors, lighting, contrast, saturation, curves, white balance, highlights, color correction, would all be super appreciated.

But flippant criticism of something I'm really not looking to improve on right now is something I don't want or need.
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>>2857588
"I don't want you to tell me to stop trying to feed you dog shit, I want to know whether I should add salt or paprika!"
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>>2857589
I can't improve my subject/composition right now at this moment. I can work on my post-processing right now, and that's what I'm trying to improve on. If you don't want to help, fine, but regardless if you're eating dog shit or a 5-star meal, knowing how much salt to add is still important, even if it isn't the big issue.
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>>2857601
You can't have one without the other. You process to support the intent of the photo. You process to enhance and adjust the light in the scene. You can practice with the tools to make sure you know what they all do, sure, but trying to learn processing without a photo is like trying to learn to race in a car that has no engine, asking about your turning technique. What you're doing now doesn't apply to the future.
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>>2857601
Fuck this gay Earth?
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>>2855277
i like this, but it would be much better without the houses in the bottom. It takes away from the very chill vibes from the top half of the picture.
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>>2859364
>i like this, but it would be much better without the picture

fix'd
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>>2856433
BBBBbbbut, thats actually good. keep doing that anon
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>>2859467
I'm no professional but I know that lens vignetting is bad and I know how to fix it so here ya go. (also learn how to resize please)

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>>2859503
Besides that, it's not to bad, not much to look at and its about as cliche as you can get but I'm not nearly as opposed to that as most people on here are. The vanishing railroad gives it some motion but once you look at that there's nothing to focus on subject-wise. Next time you should try shooting from more angles like kneel down or climb a tree or something, shots at eye level don't seem as interesting as something shot from an angle which people aren't used to. Motion is the best thing you had going here but even that could be much stronger. You could also try to bring out more color with post processing but what with the awful vignetting that was so easy to fix I'm guessing you don't know how to do that.
>>2859469
This is pretty much useless. Framing is much worse then the first one and the black and white doesn't work with this image at all. The no trespassing sign and the light pole distract from the motion that was in the first one. Also because these are both somewhat lacking in subject matter you need color to keep it interesting.
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>>2859721
Martin Schoeller without the detail, and the processing, or the most important part - a person we care about seeing.
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>>2859721
Scary eye reflections.
Sickly green lighting.
Fuzzy haze around edges of head.
Visible brush strokes above shoulders.
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>>2855268
>>2855269
>>2855271
>>2855274
these seem to have nothing that draws the eye...nothing at all

>>2855277
this is good, but it would be better if the trees didn't take up so much of the foreground

>>2855279
>>2855281
nothing that draws the eye

>>2855282
>>2855284
pretty nice, but you need a better lens for night stuff.
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>>2859721
if this was masked, it sure wasnt done very well. There are brush marks visible on the left side of the photo, by his shoulders, this >>2859826 , and it looks like the dude has a herpe or even several herpes.
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>>2859804
Why is she naked on a rock far away?
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>>2860828
Faster aperture
Lower ISO
Longer exposure

Unless you were intentionally trying to make it noisy, otherwise the composition is good and I like the ominous feel of this photo.
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