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could an experience photographer give me some feedback on some
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could an experience photographer give me some feedback on some of my photo's?

been trying to get better for a while, would really appreciate some help.

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OP pic was a bad example, here's some more.

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another one

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VERY - proud of this one.

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>>2850373
Hey OP, your camera's shutter seems to be firing at random as you carry it around your daily life. Also, you seem to have the "automatically post all photos to /p/ without regard for content, focus, exposure, or processing" option checked, you might want to look into getting it fixed.
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>>2850386

this photo was taken roughly a year ago near the sea

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>>2850386
Let them keep going
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i dont remember the exposure or context behind this shot.

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i used flash to get my required lighting in this shot but i think it was too bright

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what's the main thing i have to improve on based on all of my photo's? i keep trying to take them but they're not coming out how i want them.

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>>2850393
It's impossible to tell you what to work to improve, since it's impossible to tell what you were trying to do or share with these. They're all entirely unintelligible.
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Work on lighting, exposure, focus and composition. Also find a subject.
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>>2850396
i've been trying to encapture the dangerous atmosphere around my city at night and i think i do an alright job of conveying that tone through photo's - there are just some areas I have to work on.

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I'll be honest, this is all pretty terrible. Like:

>>2850393
>>2850392
>>2850391
>>2850373
literally wtf were you trying to shoot?

Here's a good suggestion: wait until you see something actually interesting to shoot, then shoot it.

And don't go for 0.8 second exposures when you're holding your camera in your hand, it will always come out blurry.

>>2850384
You shouldn't be. The background elements are too small compared to your subject, and your subject is too far left anyway. What you should have done is step back from the guy and zoom in as to make the background bigger in relation with him.

>>2850383
I've taken better nighttime pictures of the Liffey than this with a Nokia N95, and if I haven't I could have.

>>2850399
>i've been trying to encapture the dangerous atmosphere around my city at night and i think i do an alright job of conveying that tone through photo's
Jaysus, are we being trolled /p/, is this b8? Stick to trying to shoot actually interesting things for now
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>>2850399
In what way does the OP convey danger?

None of these look dangerous in any way at all. There are no menacing people or situations, no signs of past violence, nothing to add tension or suspense... it's just normal places at night, and empty. I get a great sense of peace out of these than any sense of danger, but even that is quite a stretch.
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>>2850373
dem highlights, and not sure what the point is

>>2850374
shows promise, but underexposed

>>2850378
camera shake, and underexposed. Use a tripod, or stabilize otherwise

>>2850383
underexposed and camera shake

>>2850384
ive been on instagram. bland

>>2850388
unexciting

>>2850393
at this point, i feel like im being trolled

>>2850399
you are going to get raped.
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Troll is obvious...
Why do you even bother to reply?
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>>2850373
it's all boring snapshits.
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>>2850408
i think ur complete trash. and you're projecting how bad you are at photography onto me. please don't post in my thread if you're just going to cry
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>>2850703
>>2850408
meant this post for another thread, i apologise.

>>2850543
thanks for feedback.

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>>2850378
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Photojournalist here. Either shoot a person or a landscape.
If you're shooting a person you need to focus on your subject (not focus with the lens but use them to determine your frame).
If you're shooting a landscape you need strong composition, light and color (in that order).

Right now you're shooting neither. You need a subject or a purpose for these photos. Keep at it though everyone does this at first
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>>2850773
thanks bro.

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>>2850782
wrong pic

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>>2850705
still not sharp. Even with a Powershot, you should be able to get sharpeness by using a tripod. I used a Cybershot for a few years when I started, and a tripod made everything change for me.
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>>2850783
you should probably find a new hobby
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>>2850783
What motivated you to take this photo?
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