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Hey gang! I'm craving some criticism. Please tell me how
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Hey gang!

I'm craving some criticism. Please tell me how shit my street photography is.

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...is this the only one?
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>>2836381
He probably had a heart attack. No one makes a new thread for posting only one photo! :^)
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>>2836319

That's a nice moment, and it's great that the woman's hand (which really makes the shot) is silhouetted against a darker gray. Maybe tighten up the crop to a traditional 3:2 or even a 4:5 ratio... I think there's too much of nothing going on in the left 2/3s of the frame.
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>>2836456
>I think there's too much of nothing going on in the left 2/3s of the frame.
I wouldn't say that. It's just like the left 2/3s is an independent scene which does not connect to those people. Note that everything points to the left, there's nothing guiding to the right.

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With >>2837045 I realized the Z shape became much more prominent, which of course guides to the right.
However, I did not manage to push more attention to the people as in the crop attached on this.

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>>2837050
Especially I did not manage to crop a substantive scene which just connects the people to the buildings where she's pointing at.

>>2836319
In the original crop, the gangplank has too much weight, it even belabors the point of this shot.
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Here's an alternate shot from the same scene. I think this one works a lot better.

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>>2836319
>Please tell me how shit my street photography is.
It would be better if you actually moved from this spot or at least had more than one subject in this spot.

It's just the same picture over and over.

That said, I like it better than any shot I've ever taken.
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>>2837804
I like this the most. Their are some decent elements in the composition. I wish that the people stood out a bit more. Stark figure-ground contrast often works in street photos.
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