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First time using a off camera flash.

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>>2834277
It's a party snapshot that will be interesting to exactly four people in the world.
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I managed to sell this as a 8x10 print

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Lil nigga tried to beat my ass

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He told me he was gonna beat my ass if I took another photo

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TFW when no waifu to dance with

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>>2834277
marry, kill, fuck
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>>2834277
This is very weak, subjects should be making eye contact with the camera.

>>2834278
Front row is out of focus, more depth of field for group shots.

>>2834282
You're capturing something real here the subject is great but the composition is bad good timing on the shot though. Maybe try getting in closer and getting rid of all the wasted space up top.

>>2834284
Composition is weak, engage and get eye contact.

>>2834285
Composition is weak, engage and get eye contact.

>>2834287
This is cute, but you have sensor dust above her head clean that up in post.

>>2834290
Unsharp maybe even a tad out of focus but you have eye contact so thats something.

Overall;
Look at other people shooting events and mimic what works in their work. Keep shooting and copy others, once you have the basics on point you can develop your own style.
Try to also write a bit about each post you make, tell us what you were trying to do and thinking at the time.
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>>2834317
Not OP, here.

Why do you want so much eye contact shooting an event? If I was to shoot an event I'd want candid shots to capture real moments.
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>>2834317
The reason why most had poor comp was because I couldn't see shit through the viewfinder. I was using the flash and the viewfinder didn't show it so I was shooting blind

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>>2834328
Plus I was using a manual focus lense. I'm thinking of either using this photo or the other one of the couple for a print as a present for them

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General comment here is that you need to work on your eye for proper exposure and color balance. You may not necessarily get it right in camera but at least in post-processing.
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what is a lense? lindsay?
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>>2834449
Lens? What'd you think faggot
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>>2834683

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>>2834287
wtf are those flies surrounding her?
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