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Posting a few pictures, looking for constructive criticism!

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>>2817283
Whenever you're doing low light photography close your aperture down since you're wide open on this pic. The whole image looks soft as a result of your aperture and you were only at 100 ISO so you could had a lot of wiggle room and actual light. Also try adding human subjects.
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>>2817294

Thank you! Here's a few with people in them

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>>2817286
>>2817587
There are my faves

Your technical skills are there, but your subjects are boring, try shooting people more like he said >>2817294
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>>2817282
I disagree with those advising that you add human subjects. You're doing interesting things with mundane subjects and I quite like it.
Although the colours in this one are a mess >>2817285
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>>2817282
That's a nice pair of blue steel you got there
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>>2817588

only good picture you've taken
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>>2817592
>>2817593
>>2817739

Thanks guys for the feedback!

>>2817754

That's not very constructive, but if you could point something out I would very much appreciate it!
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>>2817282
post more rails and trains pls...
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ease up on the blue

jesus christ m8
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>>2819529
Here's a few more from the same sesh. I experimented with a light source a bit

>>2819601
The picture looked too dull for me with correct white balance

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>>2817282
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>>2820911
I really like this one
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>>2817282
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=68ugkg9RePc

also cliche

>>2817283
>>2817284
I kinda like this

>>2817285
the colour in this is shit and you have some weird gradients in the clouds

>>2817286
nice

>>2817287
doesnt do anything for me

>>2817587
>>2817588
>>2817589
Nice, its amazing what having a subject can do for a picture

>>2820911
I like this
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>>2821929
>>2821951

Thanks guys!
Here's one more with a subject

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>>2817285
Although others critique the colours here I'd say the priority in this one is more depth of field.
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ill post a few too.

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>>2817286
i like this because muh contrast

>>2817589
this because a e s t h e t i c s

others are bad composition, boring subjects and shit edits, saying that, keep shooting
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I'm realizing I have more than I though. I might just make my own thread.

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>>2824193
>>2824198
>>2824200
>>2824202
I apologize to the person whose thread this is. I thought this was a recent photo thread. I cannot delete them any more.
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