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Hello /p/!

This is my first attempt at putting together photos like this that depend on atmosphere/color schemes done in post. What do you think of them? what can be improved?

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>>2814340
those light beams look a bit off, great work otherwise
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>>2814361
Thank you! Do you think they should be up a bit more?
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>>2814384
I'm not him but I think they look like they're pointing up and to the left too far (from the perspective of the car itself). More importantly, headlight beams are cone-shaped rather than perfect straight laser beams.
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>>2814340
yeah, the lights are very weird
Lights are in a cone, not a small line, at regular field of view.
But the car comes off to me as wide angle lens and close up, two things that would stretch the lights even wider.
I love your other car scene without lights though.
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>>2814384
I feel they should be more around this height

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Excellent work. I reckon the second one would be a bit better if there was some more detail or maybe some highlights in the background, would give the image more depth
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>>2814411
are you retarded?
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>>2814334
the far light on the 2nd photo isn't too bad but does need adjusting, the first one is way out. you need a graduated filter on both darkening from the beginning of the headlight and gradually coming a little more visible as it cones outwards,
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>>2814492
No, but your sister is after I fucked her brains out faggot
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>>2814501
Nice
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>>2814411
Still off, try to follow the lines of the body, that should give a better reference.
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>>2814541
this
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>>2814541
After seeing this I see how off my placement was!
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