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Post either single photos or Flickr accounts to be critiqued. Il start

www.flickr.com/photos/yeshivadee

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>>2795729
Shit. There is nothing you can do to get better. Maybe by killing your self I would not have to see your photos again.
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>>2795729
I like some of them, like the rails, some of the macro one. Especially the one with the little house.
>>2796088
You're too rude
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I shoot anything, but I've been hiking a lot recently and shooting a lot of wildlife photos. Pic related is one of my favorites. r8 & h8

https://www.flickr.com/photos/137965655@N06/

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pls no. flickr is terrible
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>>2802039
It's the duck man!
Love your shit keep it up.
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>>2802039
Ive seen this in 3 fucking diffrent threads now.
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>>2802039
do you use a k-3 or a k-3 ii ?
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>>2802068
k-3
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https://www.flickr.com/photos/cantbecool/

>>2795729
too many of the same type of photo. just select the best out of a shoot. you don't want multiple of the same type of photo.

>>2802039
not a birder, but nice.

>>2802049
shilling is real, anon.
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https://www.flickr.com/photos/dark_indigo/
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https://www.flickr.com/photos/zencaptures/
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>>2806455

mirin her tricep desu
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>>2806455
I like the composition on this photo, but there are two things that kill it for me:
First, the fake blur. It's too obvious and detracts from the inage. Either do it in camera, or skip it, but this one doesn't cut it. You can add vignetting to bring attention to the center, but blur is too hard to fake.
Second, her legs got cropped. It's OK to cut at some heights, but half calfs is not one of them.
Keep those in mind and it will be a great photo the next time.
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