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Not Half Bad - Newports 2016-01-21 05:26:49 Post No. 2749263
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Not Half Bad - Newports Anonymous 2016-01-21 05:26:49 Post No. 2749263 [Report]

Hey /p/, there's really not that many filmmakers on /tv/. So it would be awesome if I got some critiques on this music video I did for a local punk band. It was shot at a house party, two cameras, mostly unrehearsed, minus the obvious portrait shots and ham stunts.

Enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JpHuPPmPA1Q

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Anonymous 2016-01-21 05:28:14 Post No.2749264
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Anonymous 2016-01-21 05:28:14 Post No.2749264 [Report]

Here's something that I did a couple of months ago with no money.

It's shit.

https://vimeo.com/131327757

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Anonymous 2016-01-21 06:08:04 Post No.2749285
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Anonymous 2016-01-21 06:08:04 Post No.2749285 [Report]

>>2749264

It's not bad. The opening conversation is just boring. You could have added some more intresting angles like the first shot, to mix it up and keep the dull dialogue alive?

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Anonymous 2016-01-21 06:11:50 Post No.2749289
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Anonymous 2016-01-21 06:11:50 Post No.2749289 [Report]

>>2749285
I changed the script completely since my actors wanted it to be more accessible and to reach a broader audience.

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Anonymous 2016-01-21 06:17:25 Post No.2749292
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Anonymous 2016-01-21 06:17:25 Post No.2749292 [Report]

>>2749285
Like the way it is now, doesn't reflect what I originally had written before.

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Anonymous 2016-01-22 03:26:52 Post No.2750282
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Anonymous 2016-01-22 03:26:52 Post No.2750282 [Report]

>>2749263
well made but oh man suburb punks..