Had the chance to shoot with a friend and would like to get some feedback. These were edited in VSCO on my phone - I don't know why there's that weird banding happening.
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first one is cool, it has some noir feeling, others not so much, regular photos.
Snapshit crap.
Merely everything's wrong, I can't even fix it
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>>2726411
if the model has to be looking to the camera in this, maybe add really soft lighting on the left?
I like how it emphasizes on the curves and definition of her muscles but it the photo seems poorly executed, a bit half-hearted.
like >>2726420 but not touch the lighting on her back.
>>2726409
should've brushed the hair back, I like neck.
>>2726399
eh, crop or shoot tighter, too much empty space
>>2726401
>>2726407
sorry but these two are pointless, not intimate, not showing her aesthetics or the surrounding. It seems bland.
>>2726412
without the shadows, this would've been great.
If it's gonna be intimate, make it concentrate on the intimacy, dont add some artsy shite to it.
>>2726413
for me, this is the best photo you have here. But you could've edited it a lot better. maybe blacken the blacks more. Get the whole of her into the frame
overall good job, I'm sure you'll do a lot better next time.
I like them, but they are slightly underexposed with ugly artefacts.
>>2726409
is nice
>>2726407
is sort of strange, somehow it doesn't work but the dark mountain in the background is interesting.
>>2726401
No.. there is nothing there.
>>2726420
Assuming someone else did this edit, it's much better than the original but ugly artefacts strike once more.
>>2726413
>>2726412
Nothing to see there really.
I would say >>2726409
and >>2726411
would be nice if they were properly exposed.
>>2726399
have the camera on an angle such that we can see the curves, instead of straight beams of light
>>2726401
Other than "no" like others have said. That pose is no good because she gets ripple-neck. The lighting is bad becaust there's like an anti-rembrandt triangle going on.
>>2726433
as in, not dutch angle, but off axis/perpendicular to the wall
she's cute but why do you keep shooting her with lighting and angle to accentuate that disgusting piercing?
>>2726401
I love her curves, nice tonality on her back too. Intersting pose/expression, unlike others I like this shot. Interesting background too.
>>2726413
>belly button piercing hole
Edit that shit out. It looks so tacky and trashy.
>>2726420
i can see you want to focus on the back as the subject, so darken the shadows on her face or add more contrast to the point you can only see the shape of her face, i like it a lot though
kek that editing looks fucking bad. learn to post process.
>>2727074
>These were edited in VSCO on my phone - I don't know why there's that weird banding happening
TOPKEK?
>>2726399
>edited in VSCO on my phone
why?
great photos, you dont need to fix a thing.
>>2726411
>>2726412
>>2726413
This are good, anon. It reminds me a lot of Lucien Clergue (pic), take a look at his work. I think his choice for wide angle when explicit lines in nudes works very well.
Your processing could get a bit better. For the b/w: reach the black point, reach the highlight, keep a floating point to ensure good skin detail, which you already got.
>>2726399
>These were edited in VSCO on my phone
Ah, this is why the constrast is messed up. Photo editing is very easy to learn, anon, take a look: http://www.cambridgeincolour.com/photo-editing-tutorials.htm
>>2726399
aggressive Edward Weston feels. but all in all pretty okay
