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2015-12-14 03:23:11 Post No. 2721306
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Anonymous 2015-12-14 03:23:11 Post No. 2721306 [Report]

What would improve this picture?

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Equipment Make Apple
Camera Model iPhone 5c
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Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area
Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 33 mm
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Image Orientation Bottom, Right-Hand
Horizontal Resolution 72 dpi
Vertical Resolution 72 dpi
Image Created 2015:12:13 16:39:00
Exposure Time 1/20 sec
F-Number f/2.4
Exposure Program Normal Program
ISO Speed Rating 125
Lens Aperture f/2.4
Brightness 1.4 EV
Exposure Bias 0 EV
Metering Mode Pattern
Flash No Flash, Compulsory
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Image Width 3264
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Anonymous 2015-12-14 03:24:29 Post No.2721307
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Anonymous 2015-12-14 03:24:29 Post No.2721307 [Report]

Taken with phone because I forgot my camera :/

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Anonymous 2015-12-14 03:24:33 Post No.2721308
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Anonymous 2015-12-14 03:24:33 Post No.2721308 [Report]

A subject

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Anonymous 2015-12-14 07:01:02 Post No.2721417
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>>2721306
i'm guessing you took this because you like the way the light bounces off the wall, and the light shows that it's raining. but it's a boring photo - there's nothing to draw one's eye around the photo or to the subject, and once one looks at the lamp in the center, that's pretty much all there is to it.

to contrast, check out this photo. red ceiling by eggleston. it's also just a light, but one's eyes are led to it by the wires (leading lines), and the unusually strong color makes it pop. this is minimalism done correctly.

keep trying. also, remember to resize, and if you are only going to post one photo, put it up in the 'recent photo' thread and ask for CC (constructive criticism). someone will get to it.

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Anonymous 2015-12-14 07:29:30 Post No.2721430
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>>2721306
The glare is bad. I see nothing particularly wrong with it otherwise.

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Vertical Resolution	72 dpi
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ISO Speed Rating	125
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