Post a clyp of what you've been working on. R8 & H8.
https://clyp.it/ktruyolb
My friends can only listen to so much of my music. So now I turn to you all.
>>65834869
yeah it's good, some of the lyrics are uite cliche though which took me out a few times. Is there going to be any other instrumentation?
here's mine
https://clyp.it/3yesm1k5
>>65835424
>some of the lyrics are uite clich
Afraid of that. Noted.
>Is there going to be any other instrumentation?
Depends on what the band thinks of it and what I can do about the lyrics.
Yours is good, on the short side though. You've got some intriguing facets at play here, like that vocal line in the background and that accordion-esque line going on at one point. Would make a nice interlude as is. If you were thinking of expanding I'd tweak the dynamics so there's more of a crescendo and drop. Good stuff though.
https://clyp.it/a231n3ne
Heres my pscyh pop song
would appreciate criticisms and tips.
>>65836006
Needs more variation in the verse section.
Also, you need to axe that EDM style Snare/Clap. It sounds way out of place.
>>65835424
nice but that sample that sound like a reversed snare gets super repetitive and too attention grabbing.
https://clyp.it/5hob13kj
>>65836057
Thanks will try adding more to verses they do get a bit stale but there will be vocals ofc to spice it up. I will mess with snare sound but i kind of like it.
>>65836391
Idk, the snare just really sounds off for that style of music and instrumentation.
>>65835629
Some of the lyrics are a little meh desu. Might need to spend a bit more time on that front.
https://clyp.it/xyjtcoon
Real rough sketch.
>>65836585
>Might need to spend a bit more time on that front.
Well I do that everyday. Thanks for listening.
>>65836652
I like your ideas and thats some rather detailed production but you gotta step up on the DAW and VST game my boy ( i do too but w/e). above average melody.
That was a very engaging and interesting listen!
>>65836074
Now that is an odd choice of crescendo, very neat. whats that sample?
What do you guys think of my songwriting/arranging? how about the production?
https://clyp.it/ypicj3l1
>>65836872
it's the windows logon sound
>>65836946
No the french woman you mother fucker
GOD you are stupid as fuck i hate you
>>65837010
I didnt say the melody was odd lol,
but on the topic of the melody it was reasonable but subtly sophisticated as well
I could detect the cadences but i didn't know where the song was going to go.
>>65836974
Oh that, it's just a text to speech program, supposed to be for the French language but I put some English text in so it sounds like made up words
bumper
Hey OP here, bout to leave for work. Anyone got some tips on improving lyrics?
https://clyp.it/df3w1eru
How's this sound? I'm probably never gonna finish it, though
https://clyp.it/lp5hnjhi
Basically finished. Would love some feedback bros:
https://clyp.it/orolgg2p
>>65839687
Really like the vibe of this
Be nice, it's the first demo
https://clyp.it/5zwlyv3v
>>65840322
pretty good
>>65841263
i dig it
>>65839249
Don't sound corny, that's all
>>65834869
i like it, good work OP
>>65841998
You listen to my clyp by chance? Too corny?
>>65842061
Thanks. There's a verse stanza I just added in there that I think I'm going to change. I think I'm a little on the nose.
bump for feedback
>>65841998
No but I did now. They're fine, but I'm no lyric snob
https://clyp.it/4cc3xyaf
Kind of techno/house-y tune with a breakbeat
I've been messing around with FL Studio for the past month or so and this is the first actual thing I've made myself sit down and work on
>>65842373
nice, i like it
>>65842373
EARTH ANGEL, EARTH ANGEL
WILL YOU BE MINE
yall need to step it up
https://clyp.it/wveum5jp
Anyone got any advice on a DAW to use for Android phone?
>>65841263
self-bump, looking for feedback pls
>>65841931
thanks anon
>>65842444
just use your pc
>>65841263
Has nice melodies. My one suggestion is to work on tweaking the mix a little bit between the guitar and vocals. I'm no prod expert by any means, but maybe try double tracking the guitar, pan each track to one side then try and place them behind the vocal tracks. Some harmonies would definitely emphasize your vocals a bit more too.
Also, have you thought of raising the tempo a bit? Good work regardless.
>>65842735
Thanks, that's some useful feedback and advice
https://clyp.it/1mrkn1lk
This is a quick recording of a song that I'm writing which will hopefully be part of a project that I'm writing. What kind of atmosphere does it give?
>>65843090
reminds me of a male lo-fi Joanna Newsom without an annoying voice and with an acoustic guitar. pls be an artist
Couple of recent ideas:
https://clyp.it/qeeet0jc
https://clyp.it/5poarcn1
Gonna roll a joint and listen to the thread now.
>>65843179
pretty cool stuff
>>65843130
Thanks anon, and I'm trying
>>65842962
No worries. Just an opinion too, by no means do you have to take my advice, I need more feedback myself.
Good thread guys, thanks for keeping it going.
>>65843090
>https://clyp.it/1mrkn1lk
Obviously v unpolished but the progression is nice and I like the melancholic vibe
>>65842433
>https://clyp.it/wveum5jp
Nah...this sort of thing has been done way better, there's not much to grab onto and the structure is aimless.
>>65842373
https://clyp.it/4cc3xyaf
Aphex fan? Pleasantly surprised by the combo of the first 3 sounds+rhythms, they work well. The repetitive break not so much.
>>65841263
>https://clyp.it/5zwlyv3v
Autotune your vocals and whack loads of reverb onto everything and I'll be able to sit through this.
Oh, you said be nice...guitar tone is pleasing :)
>>65840462
>https://clyp.it/orolgg2p
Like the first section a lot and quite like the last section but not the middle.
The low end is very muddy, you need to roll some of that off.
ƒrom: >>65843179
eh. here's part of a song.
https://clyp.it/1hnxwfr3
I'm gonna describe what kind of food a few clips sound like to me.
>>65843179
First one is sucking a ring pop while at an arcade, 2nd one is eating cheezits incorrectly.
>>65843090
Eating sourdough bread because its the only think left in your apartment and you don't have the energy to go out and get something else.
>>65842433
repeatedly deepthroating multiple bananas, quickly.
>>65842373
Munching on a pear while driving through LA at midnight.
>>65841263
microwave dinner fettuccine alfredo that tastes surprisingly alright.
>>65839687
Blueberries
>>65836074
Ironically eating guava.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0jjO8NPZyIO
Clyp.it isnt loading
>>65844191
What is the correct way to eat cheezits?
>Eating sourdough bread because its the only think left in your apartment and you don't have the energy to go out and get something else.
>Blueberries
I take these as compliments
Also your song was nice. You are much better at guitar and singing than I am
>>65844191
Do OP please. I'm curious kek.
>>65844272
Thanks.
The correct way to eat cheezits is to not eat them incorrectly. And I meant all my responses as compliments, except for one.
>>65834869
>>65844295
Eating fruit by the foot in the late 90's and accidentally eating a bit of the paper attached to it but you didn't even notice until a bit afterwards so you just decide to roll with it.
>>65844397
Kek thanks anon.
>>65844481
I'm just here so I don't get fined.
>>65844525
Well glad to have you here, mate.
>>65843179
first one sounds like garbage, literally like a pig dying
and i can tell you made those drums in fucking drumsynth live, are you kidding
second one sounds exactly the same
>>65844191
thanks thats what i was going for
im >>65842433
>>65844722
Sorry for hurting your ƒeelings ƒam
Pretty early work in progress for me. Trying out some weird patterns and just playing around with my synths
https://clyp.it/3mm43yrw
Feedback for others that I've listened to so far:
>>65834869
I dig the lyricism. Pretty interesting stuff.
>>65835424
Pretty slick production. I like the changeup at the one minute mark.
>>65836652
I love the old-school cat synths and the percussion. Sounds like an IDM remix of a track off of the Fez soundtrack
>>65836074
Got the rest of this as an album? Feels like a teaser or an intro for an album
>>65844852
sorry you have no clue how to write music
>>65844885
And yet writing music is my job :)
WIP post-rock/ambient track.
https://clyp.it/motx5i0a
Any feedback welcomed.
>>65843179
Groovy shit, anon
>>65844927
This is very lush and dreamy
>>65844924
cool, i'll let the label (who published Gnarls Barkeley, Dangerdoom, Tobacco) im releasing with know
>>65845051
>>65844885
>>65844722
>>65845051
>>65844924
>>65844927
Lush ƒam. I'm a real sucker for pretty, consonant ambience like this.
>>65845051
Stop being so mad ƒam. You've got to be a bit thicker skinned if you're going to release music into the public.
>>65845173
>>65845214
Stop using that dumb f you piece of shit.
What, you think is is ƒucking ƒunny you ƒlaming chunk oƒ ƒaggot cake? Just because you spend all your spare time ƒingering all your ƒurry ƒriends in their ugly hairy sƒincters doesn't mean you have to bring this gay ass shit here ƒucking ƒairy. Go ƒuck yourself.
>>65845259
Time to take your meds my ƒƒƒriend.
>>65845259
>yourself
Missed one ƒam
>>65844882
It's the start of the last part of my album Absolute Madness IV
i already posted this itt but i didnt get any feedback (despite giving some myself!) so here i am again
https://clyp.it/ypicj3l1
>>65845302
Thanks bruh. I'll check it out
>>65845330
meme
>>65845259
Ok I was a bit harsh ƒam, I like the pads in the first little break.
>>65845380
th...thanks
>>65845330
It's like if Steven Stapleton got really chill and went outside. I like the variety and how you either splice or blend the sounds together
>>65845415
thank you ! Ive never heard of this stapleton man, is he any good?
Its funny that you mention outside because I acutally recently wrote a "nature suite" which was kind of a tonally organized collection of phrases and segments
Would you like to hear it? It actually eneded up on one of the /mu/ makes an album bandcamp releases aaha
>>65845485
You maybe heard of Nurse With Wound. It's mostly an industrial sound collage project that's decades old and pretty spooky, but generally well-made
I'd like to hear it. Post it, anon
>>65845562
https://christianvaporcollectivence.bandcamp.com/album/the-sword-the-shield-the-a-e-s-t-h-e-t-i-c
Go to the last track of the album, thats me!
It got some praise in the threads after it was published!
>>65845609
Very cool. Checking this out. Thanks!
>>65845631
Youre quite cool yourself mister
>>65845631
Got a name/link for just your stuff? jw
>>65845666
meant for
>>65845648
>>65836006
Fuck that's nice. You gonna add lyrics?
>>65845852
>deleted his post for no reason other than he wanted his stupid irrelevant trip on
are you literally autistic?
>>65845686
>>65845666
https://juliawinters.bandcamp.com/releases
here, but rather unhappy with its current stance
Thinking about scrapping all of the ideas, and re recording from scratch with the arrangements being showcased mostly by the human voice (i will get my friend to immitate a banjo, and other string instruments
Plus, i plan on conceptualizing it as an double feature of being an album and a childrens book, it would be about this pilgrim who finds a magic bicycle that can travel through the air AND time so the book would be him checking in on and witnessing important american historical events, and he would meet a woman that he tries to take with him and all that
do you think thats a "forward thinking" idea for an album? im trying to break barriers here
I made this recently, nearly finished. Hopefully going on a 12" but I would love some extra feedback on it..
https://clyp.it/xarwj342
>>65846041
It's pretty forward-thinking, but if you do it well, it'll catch on with someone
>>65846332
Would you like to help me with it???! just brainstorming ideas maybe storyboarding if you draw at all or anything like that would be appreciated
>>65846464
Not much of an artist, but shoot me a message
[email protected]
Does it sound nice?
https://clyp.it/dnlwsxu3
>>65846272
it sounds great! where can i find your stuff?
>>65834869
I like the song, but it sounds like you're straining your voice and/or singing with your nose in some parts. if you fix that, it'd be a little better. but overall good work OP
>>65835424
I like it. I don't know the technical terms for all of the effects, but the part where it suddenly got a lot quieter was really cool.
>>65846795
You know any exercises to reduce strain/nasal singing? My mother told me the same thing recently. Been trying out different keys and slowing down individual sections to work out kinks. Thanks for the feedback.
>>65846923
Relaxed breathing, get more airflow through the mouth, open wider if you have to but don't tense up.
>>65840322
That's pretty awesome. any plans to expand on it? maybe add some new verses?
>>65846667
Thanks! I'm at https://soundcloud.com/hydeott
>>65840462
I like that dissonant feel in the beginning. it adds a lot of tension. I'm one of those people who likes to try to feel the music and this feels like someone is looking for something small in the middle of a crowded city and when the piano cones in, they've found it, but the strings coming in is something happening to cause the object or person to be just out of reach. its very expressive. I like this quite a bit. I could honestly see this being in a ballet or something and possibly being used for a solo dance. really good man.
>>65842735
^this
https://clyp.it/jw3drzex
Any thoughts on this?
>>65848155
would be good for a soundtrack. like in a David Fincher flick or something.
final lump
OP here, bout to get off work. Seems just about dead. Thanks for participating guys it was productive and fun. You're all beautiful.
Good night.
hope this thread isn't totally dead :<
https://clyp.it/qfrg0fgm
would love to hear criticisms etc...
will gladly return feedback
>>65851344
sounds too familiar but it's good. keep it up
>>65851653
thank you! what do you mean by too familiar?
>>65851951
Idk I guess I can imagine other producers making the same beat, or I feel like I've heard elements in other stuff but whatever influences are cool too
>>65851966
okay sure! well thanks for taking the time.
>>65847138
Thanks man. I would love to but im pretty stuck for ideas. Do you think i should add another instrument or change up what is there for another verse?
>>65842433
This sounds like complete shit. I know what you were going for, and you failed miserably. Just because it's different doesn't mean it's good.
>>65846614
Heck yeah it does
>>65842433
This reminds me of Shinichi Osawa's The One, your execution is nice but your rhythm is terrible.
https://clyp.it/lc4n3gs1
something something glitchy dance
