Innnnnnn..... west philadelphia born and raised...

>>65467437
Back in my "trynta be a gangsta" phase

thrash in the blackness
aint going out passive
losing my traction
but flailing for balance
lost and abandoned
my time being rationed
mind has been fractured
these eyes seeing static
body is tattered
flesh has been ugly
illusions were shattered
these people are nothing
decay getting faster
you wont see me bugging
death is approaching
accepted the subject
succumbing to numbness
i wander alone
discontented round people
perpetually roam
sentenced to drown
but im finna float
gonna die either way
so i aint coming home
jaw staying closed
i got nothing to say
silence my solace
dont dare relate
withdrawn into darkness
it's clear as the day
im reliant on no one
fuck out of my face

feedback on rap lyrics i wrote tell me why they are bad.

i dont like that a lot of it is just me saying "this is how i feel" rather than providing examples that allow the listener to put stuff together for themselves and be more engaged

You're straight out of Compton
You're straight out of luck
This ain't east coast
This is eastern europe

i rip and i rhyme
i rhyme and i rip
thats the way that dylan spits

You need to “Beat It”
That boy Michael Jackson ”Bad”
난 너의 “Billie Jean”이 아냐
Don’t you “Leave Me Alone”
하지만 애매한 반응 난 원해 “Black Or White”
포기 못해 나의 “Man In The Mirror”
“Why You Wanna Trip On Me”
넌 너무 짓궂지
Boy, you make me “Scream”
너에게 왜 이러지
하긴 너의 “Love 정말 Never Felt So Good”
그건 아마 짜릿하다 못해 Watching the “Thriller”

>>65467805
but I ain't got no shit for the fucking vaporwave craze

you mean a stream of consciousness thread where we try to make each other laugh? OK

smelly neck turkey dick
go to work with a barbed night stick
i will pile drive your closest loved ones from the top of the building you were born in
i will tie a slipknot around your kittens neck and tie to it your ceiling fan in the night over 50 cents.
you a bitch who look like they allergic to milk marijuana and gluten little gluten bitch
little gluten bitch so sticky cuz youre a slug person morphed out of ignominious itch

baby i wanna sniff the scent off you like stripping enamel off a wire
i wanna feel what its like to be inside a bomb as it ignites and you do me right
im surprised that empty nest still supports such a breast that feeds the mouth of unending spite

I'm one of those niggas who considers rap a form of poetry, so these are some 'poems' that I wrote
>To be or.....to be?

We ain't got a choice
We just pawns on a board
We're all God's whores
His playthings
Fucking sacks of flesh

You know what you are?
Nothing

Except when you say shit
Talk loud, speak out
Don't let nothing hold you down
It's a man fuck God world
Words out now
He's holding ya back
So ya better step up and act
Cuz other little niggas are real
Fucking fake ass bastards
Trying to control you
Even though you can run faster
But they got that machine
That automatic weapons shooting
Killing machine that grinds you down
And cuts you up clean

So careful now
Try not to die
And whatever you do
Don't lose sight
We ain't God's whores, no
We're free to fly
Now, Motherfucker

but im not a rapper

yo bitch nigga you a cuck
you aint getting money cuz you aint got the look
and ya just a faggot who 24 7 shook
i like food and i like to cook

ya man thats dat memerap
i always play shooter games on team maps
im gay like hitler
but im black so im gay like nigler

I hate niggers
Especially those in big diggers
I have huge pee pee
I make all the dank me mes
Your moms gay
Shes like a horse and eats hay
Go away
You are gay
I have never met a jew
I drink a lot of mountain dew


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