Post a song you made and others rate it
>>61147856
I would watch the shit out of that
>>61147856
https://soundcloud.com/abelian-1/amber-track-19
Alright
Peep it guys
https://soundcloud.com/user-831105513/janies-poem
>>61147882
i think fucking anyone would
>>61147989
I would invest in a better mic, but I believe you could make interesting stuff if you tried
>>61147894
I'm really enjoying this man, you're music has a very transient and lonely feel to it, a mood I very much strive for myself. Cool mix of post-rock like guitars and harsh beats
Here's a track of mine:
https://m.soundcloud.com/calum-j-johnston/the-paper-mache-mountains-of-the-west
>>61148015
I WILL LEARN TO LOVE
https://pinkpots.bandcamp.com/track/we-trespassed-to-make-this-music-video
This is punk rock with synthesizers somebody love me already :(
https://youtu.be/_0K6OyhRJfs
pls no bully
Krautrock inspired:
https://soundcloud.com/the-deaf-aids/ghost-horses
https://clyp.it/xlm52zw4
https://m.soundcloud.com/montiemontgomery/holding-on-to-something-once-more
(^:
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0hNY4wwBTiR
https://soundcloud.com/dedmusic-517833335/y-e-s-y-e-s
https://ecniv.bandcamp.com/track/historic-preservation
>>61147989
the lyrics are kinda corny man
I once walked into a coffee shop and saw a guy on his laptop making dozens of these Paul Blart edits.
https://soundcloud.com/klangcollage/elegia-a-alirio-sinforoso-mahecha-mogollon-alirium-et-mortem
>>61147894
3.5/10
Some really cool parts but most of it is very generic.
>>61148379
0.5/10
>>61148683
Yikes
How would you suggest I improve it? I've heard many critiques, but generic has not been one of them
>>61148635
Haha, is that you?
I wrote this to match my randomly generated album cover in a thread a while back
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0Oy0l7x9Vj6
>>61148925
Yes, why?
https://soundcloud.com/silene-1/arcturus
rate
https://soundcloud.com/yungmilopkl/yung-dead-zombie
https://youtu.be/DtrxDmuLRec
>>61148878
The intro is interesting but the chord progression that kicks in at 2:40 is one of the most overused / generic progressions out there. Personally I kind of cringe every time I hear it. That section also drags on a bit. The section starting at 4:10 or so is pretty nice but still a pretty generic "post-rock" sound imo. Not very interesting. The distorted drop at 5:30 makes it sound like a cheesy song used for credits on a crappy movie. I would try to rework that part. I don't mean to be overly harsh... just my honest opinion. It's got potential but most of it is kind of that rehashed "epic post-rock" sound imo.
https://soundcloud.com/sap1en/prism
recommended if you like dolphins n shit
>>61149004
m8/10
no but seriously, what's with this beat
>>61148975
Why did you feel you needed to post a pic of yourself? Is it supposed to make people think differently about the music?
>>61149004
>>61149122
primus sucks.
>>61149137
thats a famous actress in the picture you fucking idiot.
>>61149251
fair enough, but it doesn't mesh at all with your flows. i like primus as much as the next guy (although primus does suck) but unless you're intentionally using jarring instrumentation it isn't doing the job
>>61149004
Absolutely disgusting. I don't know what's worse... the blatant my name is mud rip off or the wigger rapping.
https://clyp.it/gqlzzqu0
>>61149276
oh really... who gives a shit
>>61149368
I don't really like the drum machine you used but its really good other than that
http://www87.zippyshare.com/v/Xy7WqTFd/file.html
>>61149403
nigger
https://soundcloud.com/grand-am/floater
Instrumental Hip Hop, probaby my fave beat i've made
>>61149368
pretty cool i think the problem with the drums isnt the sample but that some of them are just too loud.
here goes
https://soundcloud.com/valhelm/cyclogenesis
>>61149486
https://soundcloud.com/grand-am/floater
this is nice good one
>>61149389
apparently you do with the line of questioning you stupid fuck
You guys are forgetting to rate shit
>>61149009
1/10
bad recording, bad humor, bad instrumentation
>>61149004
1/10
physically painful to listen to
>>61148983
4/10
Boring chord progression. Sounds like you're trying to get into producing without having any knowledge in composing music. But there are some production skills there, and nothing clashes terribly
>>61148536
5/10
Not bad, but a little boring
>>61148531
1/10
physically painful to listen to
>>61148463
3/10
Beginner-guitarist-tier. Keep at it and you'll improve
>>61148425
5.5/10
There's a good idea there, it's just all very rough
>>61148379
1/10
Physically painful to listen to
>>61149556
>>61148536 here
anything you would suggest?
https://soundcloud.com/p-a-n-g-s/oversight
Attempt at some house music
>>61149527
this is kinda cool. what did you use to make it?
>>61149540
lol. What are you so angry about? Posting a pic like that to make the music "more aesthetically pleasing" or whatever is lame as fuck. Who gives a shit if it's her or a famous actress.
>>61149486
>https://soundcloud.com/grand-am/floater
wow this is honestly great, checking out the rest of your stuff
>>61149577
It lacks melody. You could try adding a spacey droning lead in the background
>>61149623
yeah dude album covers are stupid
>>61149623
no one in this thread cares except you
>>61149641
sweet thank you man
>>61149401
>>61149496
thank you for the feedback. the drums are just stock ableton impulse 808 with heavy compression, i don't really know much about constructing a rhythm section so i wanted to keep it simple for now. i'll turn the volume down on them though
>>61147989
this gave me cancer bro
>>61149556
https://soundcloud.com/silene-1/inflata
Could I get your input on this track too?
https://soundcloud.com/tet-offensive/sometime-last-year
desu senpai
>>61149659
>says the person replying
>>61149605
It's a notation program, not meant for production. I use it to write classical scores, but the playback isn't bad.
It's like a cloud-storage alternative to Finale or Sibelius.
https://www.noteflight.com/
https://clyp.it/auja4ewv
come at me
https://soundcloud.com/augmentality/so-hey-i-decided-to-rap-to-birocratic
The instrumental isn't mine, but, y'know.
https://pinkpots.bandcamp.com/track/20th-century
PAY ATTENTION TO ME IEGbouEGBoagboaeugbaoeugboaeugb
>>61149759
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>>61149690
6.5/10
I'm not the best judge of ambient stuff, but it seems pretty good for what it is.
>>61149797
I know, hahah.
I kinda just threw it together at the last second.
What about lyrical advice? My future stuff won't be done with only one attempt like this was :P
>>61149824
Ay thanks anyway man I appreciate your input.
>>61149486
Fire.
https://nigtino.bandcamp.com/track/latin-gardens
Started working with a band I used to play in recently. One is just a long riff. I have other parts but they still need to be worked out. Other is a rough cut of a song we threw together. Still very rough and recorded on the drummers phone in the middle of the room but doesn't sound too bad for being recorded on an iphone.
https://soundcloud.com/user-774536907/brian-riff-11-24-15
https://soundcloud.com/user-774536907/new-recording-10
http://vortexofcrap.bandcamp.com/track/meme-track-4-preggo-remix
>>61147856
Demo
https://soundcloud.com/why-zodiac/wanted
http://vortexofcrap.bandcamp.com/track/honestly-why-do-people-hate-the-band-kiss-its-music-you-can-dance-to-it-whats-the-big-deal-its-even-got-the-same-instruments-as-the-bands-you-think-are-superior-and-dont-even-blame-the-foken-sell
>>61149901
>https://nigtino.bandcamp.com/track/latin-gardens
Thanks man. Really enjoying this. Silky smooth sample you have there!
http://auxy.co/track/lStj6H_0bymz
>>61150027
Not bad. I dig it. The vocals are pretty rough in parts and all the parts drag on though. I'd consider cutting most sections to half their current length.
>>61147894
Love the guitar parts so much
>>61150203
Thanks for the feedback.
https://soundcloud.com/inputnoise/input-noise-halfway
https://soundcloud.com/cherishh/02-teach-me-how-to-smile
best thnig I made ever before i quit musics
>>61150271
No problem.
I posted >>61149933
Mind giving some feedback?
>>61150487
Nice man. I'm not even a fan of that type of music usually but it was very well done and accessible imo. You should definitely keep at it even if it's just a hobby.
>>61147882
Honestly if prime Kevin James did a movie where he actually WAS the mall instead of just a mall cop, it could have been goat.
>>61150308
I like it
Flying is pretty good imo but that's my album so fucking what
https://tomx.bandcamp.com/album/nowhere
>>61150655
i appreciate that man. hoping to make something more worthwhile in future
possibly full lnegth project
>>61150795
good stuff
how do i make generic ass future funk like yung bae?
Ive just taking old city pop songs, changing the temp and pitch uhh... calling it good enough, but it sucks.
help
>>61151816
Yung Bae is that nigga. Keep working on it. I wanna hear your work.
https://cosbyrogers.bandcamp.com/album/mountains-outtake-version
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RVELaCbxiVM
>>61152225
Dude. I totally know who you are! I was in Jon's class!
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1NZCKGPuIVD
A tune I started writing. I'm in the process of overcoming an eating disorder while reassessing my own life and personality and I want this song to embody that reflection.
https://clyp.it/sabj3riy
>>61152548
You have the singing voice that I always wished I had. The guitar playing is just the perfect kind of beautiful melancholy that makes folk such a compelling genre. Don't listen to anyone that tells you that you aren't great, this is legitimately beautiful and I'm glad I heard this. Do you have any type of Soundcloud or Bandcamp or anything so I could show this to everybody I know?
>>61147894
Bruh this shit is legit
https://soundcloud.com/cide_rsusue/rough-demo-1
I started this tonight, its just a quick demo but idk if i wanna keep going with it or if i should scrap it
https://clyp.it/rbgldc0c
I've been sitting on this for like 2 weeks probably won't finish it.
>>61147894
is great
>>61150716
I wonder how many times he'd say "HEY THAT TICKLES" any time there's some sort of movement within his walls
>>61149486
Very clean beat bro nice work
https://soundcloud.com/jacktherappernz/se7en-prod-by-skywlkr
just playing around with words and bars and different production things (which i'm shit at but i'm learning) tell me what you think
>>61153802
*when i say production i mean on my vocals, this obviously isn't my beat
thoughts?
https://aaronellis93.bandcamp.com/album/early-december-works
>>61148961
you know, for something you just wrote on the fly this is pretty good
do you make any more black metal?
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0y1oU6Wb7OP
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0IgjK8dzK7I
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0r1E6JxVdw2
samples
aphrodites child - 4 horsemen
gonjasufi - made
royksopp - a higher place
mylo - need u tonite
eels - electro shock blues
tumblrtale ost - goat mom theme
american football - honestly
First song I ever made with electronic shit
https://m.soundcloud.com/breakfast-2000/help-i-keep-feeding-pizza-to-this-robot
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0YG37RQxD1n
Song is called "Game of You" after the Gaiman book I stole from an old flame of mine.
>>61150795
This is way cool if borin.
https://soundcloud.com/hindley/coldparadise
>>61149736
Is that Mia khalifa?
>>61147989
The poem was sooo cringe
>>61152736
Thank you for your kindness. I'm in the process of starting up my music career/social platforms. I want to have more stuff written beforehand. Keep an eye out for The Midnight Bosnian, my alias.
Work with me, I'm a rapper.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1JxWuA1OzJO
the main melody and drums are more of a placeholder
https://soundcloud.com/kootlefoosh/when-you-realize-youre-dreaming-and-your-face-swells-up
>>61157296
This sounds like fun for the band members but it's annoying for the audience. Yes, the major melody just goes on and on and on, and the drums and the bass are both so choppy. If the drums would just explode down in cymbal crashes this might be bearable, but right now it's a 3/10.
>>61155207
Very oneohtrix point never fanboy at first, but your songwriting actually feels strong and genuine. I do think you're overusing the vocal samples though, they can be really sweet when used correctly but it gets annoying. The rap could be fantastic, the lyrics are nice, but the flow is all wrong. It needs to be more confident. The chords under the drop are out of key, and it's a major disappointment. Maybe that's what you wanted to convey. I just don't like that.
can i be idem too gys?
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1jjm92E1v4n
>>61159206
Did you write this for an episode of Homestar Runner?
Wrote this with some mates a few years ago.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0o4bjYOgj2t
>>61148379
don't listen to those guys
this is cool
scentedfederation.bandcamp.com
electronic stuff made on a laptop less powerful than a phone from 2006
