Can you critique my new rap, /b/? I feel like I comment on s

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op (ID: !jkBS9X46Jg)
2015-11-13 11:27:24 Post No. 60352133
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op (ID: !jkBS9X46Jg) 2015-11-13 11:27:24 Post No. 60352133 [Report]

Can you critique my new rap, /b/?
I feel like I comment on some big issues going on right now. Do you think I could ever make it big?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_TlLX78j84&feature=youtu.be

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op (ID: !jkBS9X46Jg) 2015-11-13 11:33:29 Post No.60352169
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op (ID: !jkBS9X46Jg) 2015-11-13 11:33:29 Post No.60352169 [Report]

Sorry I meant /mu/ but I asked /b/ before

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Anonymous 2015-11-13 11:59:49 Post No.60352389
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Anonymous 2015-11-13 11:59:49 Post No.60352389 [Report]

Busdriver?

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Anonymous 2015-11-13 12:36:50 Post No.60352672
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Anonymous 2015-11-13 12:36:50 Post No.60352672 [Report]

>>60352389
Nah, I'm a student. Did you like my freestyle?

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Anonymous 2015-11-13 12:45:58 Post No.60352727
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Anonymous 2015-11-13 12:45:58 Post No.60352727 [Report]

>>60352133
fuck off

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Anonymous 2015-11-13 13:01:24 Post No.60352833
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Anonymous 2015-11-13 13:01:24 Post No.60352833 [Report]

>>60352727
Why? I just want help to become a better freestyler

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Anonymous 2015-11-13 13:02:35 Post No.60352837
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Anonymous 2015-11-13 13:02:35 Post No.60352837 [Report]

>/b/

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Anonymous 2015-11-13 13:17:31 Post No.60352941
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Anonymous 2015-11-13 13:17:31 Post No.60352941 [Report]

haven't listend to it yet but i don't like it

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Anonymous 2015-11-13 13:29:09 Post No.60353024
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Anonymous 2015-11-13 13:29:09 Post No.60353024 [Report]

rap isnt music you should post this on /lgbt/ for better responses

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Anonymous 2015-11-13 13:34:50 Post No.60353056
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Anonymous 2015-11-13 13:34:50 Post No.60353056 [Report]

>>60353024
+1

Keep on here though op. It is /mu/ anyways.