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>>26706890
Twisted Desires Pastebin
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>>26885126
>Opening your eyes you see yourself standing on top of a hill
>The sky is black and the wind is blowing
>This feels more like a nightmare than a dream
>Man even in your sleep, you can't shake this feeling
>You hear something happen behind you
>Turning around you see Umbra come through the portal
>She looks around
>"This is a little... Darker." Umbra says before looking at you
"I'm worried, can you blame me?"
>She smiles at you
>"Just relax." Umbra says "We're gonna get through this."
>You take a deep breath
>She's right
>You can get through this
>Suddenly you hear a thunderous noise off in the distance
>"Right on time." Umbra says
>"ANONYMOUS!" You hear her yell
>JUST STAY CALM!
>Looking up in the sky you see both Celestia and Luna flying towards you
>Celestia doesn't look too pleased
>When her eyes get set on Umbra, she flies right at her
Got distracted with dumb bullshit
>>27127516
>Anon getting ready to fight
>>27127516
>"YOU!" Celestia yells as she dives right at you and Umbra
>"MOVE!" Umbra yells before pushing you out of the way
>You both narrowly avoid Celestia
>As she flies by, you swear that you see a trail of embers behind her
>Celestia lands and spins around
>"Well that's one way to greet somepony." Umbra says "What's wrong, Celestia? Aren't you happy to see me?!"
>Celestia makes an irritated sound and she charges at Umbra
>Umbra does the same and the two lock horns
>You see Luna beginning to try something so you stand in front of her to stop her
"Not this time."
>Looking back you see Umbra and Celestia trying to kill each other
>"How DARE you send your dogs to Canterlot!" Celestia asks "Who do you think you are?!"
>"Just like how you sent Discord to get Anonymous?!" Umbra yells "You have NO right to talk!"
>The two mares continue to try to overpower each other you can only see both of them getting angrier
>"So Celestia, did you see that MY beloved isn't under a spell?!" Umbra asks
>"Silence!" Celestia says "I won't accept it, not now, not ever!"
>"So you DID see!" Umbra says "Tell me, Celestia, do you see now who his heart truly yearns for?!"
>"I SAID SILENCE!" Celestia yells
>You see Celestia break away and fly back
>Luna flies over next to her sister
>You look between the mares
>Both Umbra and Celestia look like they're about to unleash hell on your mind
>"I'm going to defeat you." Celestia says "And just like your brother, I'm going to seal you away. Then after you're gone I'll take control of your empire."
>You see Umbra show her pearly whites in anger
>You step forward
"Then you're going to have to seal me away too." You say "I can't and won't let you do this!"
>Holding out your right hand, Rebellion comes out of the ground and into your hand
>>27129322
>Both Celestia and Luna look at you
>"Anonymous, please..." Celestia says "I need you to stand aside."
"Not when you're threatening to seal her away in some prison." You say "I'll fight tooth and nail just to protect her."
>You hold your sword up to them
"I won't lose her again."
>You look back to see a smile on Umbra's face
>"I don't think we need to worry about that." Umbra says "We won't lose to her."
>Celestia's eyes drift to you
>"You know I wouldn't hurt you." Celestia says
>"You already did when you broke his heart." Umbra says "How quick you are to forget that."
>Celestia glares at Umbra
>Umbra only has a smug smile on her face
>"What are we going to do, sister?" Luna asks
>Celestia stares at you and Umbra before turning around
>"We're going." Celestia says "If we continue to fight we might end up damaging Anonymous's psyche."
>"We are just retreating?!" Luna asks
>"Good, at least you aren't a complete moron." Umbra says "I was afraid we would end up hurting my Anonymous."
>Celestia looks back to Umbra
>"This isn't over." Celestia says "I'm focusing all my efforts into finding your rats den now. Soon you will have the might of Canterlot breaking down your door."
>"And the might of my Empire will be there to make you fix that door." Umbra says "Now get out."
>Celestia looks back to you before looking at Luna
>"Luna." Celestia says
>Luna nods her head and a portal opens up before them
>"Until next time, Anonymous." Celestia says "And next time should be soon."
>And with that they leave through the portal and are out of your dream
No fight yet
Oh boy I woke up late as fuck
Let me just eat something and I'll get a part out before I go to work
>>27129519
>You let out a nice breath of relief
>Well that was tense
>You look over to Umbra
"We're getting close to you two finally meeting in person, huh?"
>Umbra nods her head
>"I'm tempted to give her a map of our location, but we need more time to ready ourselves." Umbra says
"Wait what?" You ask "You want to give her a map?!"
>"Anonymous, I'm tired of her constently sticking her nose where it doesn't belong." Umbra says "The only way this will stop is if we defeat her and her sister."
>She steps forward before turning to face you
>"I want to make sure that we'll win this." Umbra says "And for that we need to plan ahead."
>You sigh before she comes up and plants a kiss on you
>"We can talk about it in the morning." Umbra says "For now why don't you wake up and reset your dream?"
>You nod your head and Umbra leaves
>When you open your eyes you see Umbra still cuddled up to you
>"I don't think she'll bother you again." Umbra says "I think you'll be safe tonight."
>You hold her closer to you and she get comfortable
>"Goodnight, Anonymous." Umbra says
"Goodnight, Umbra."
>The two of you share one more kiss before you shut your eyes and drift off to sleep
Alright off to work when I get back we'll try to get through the next day and then maybe we can get to the little time skip I have
>>27134597
Someone else needs to bump this thread.
>>27134851
bump
We await rager's break from DSIII
it might help if the subject line was filled
>>27135751
I'm hooked super bad..
>>27136628I'm a dumbass
>>27127414
this threads theme
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uTOp7b-Ggkc
>>27135751
Bed bump
>>27132772
>When the morning rolls around you feel the bird chirping outside
>Maybe Fluttershy can tell you how there are even birds out here
>Opening your eyes, you look down at the mare in your arms
>Umbra's sleeping soundly on your shoulder, her mane sprawled out on your arm and chest
>Her legs are also hooked onto you
>And she making those cute snores
>Brushing some of her mane from her eye you continue to watch as she sleeps
>Man it feels nice to be back in this bed with Umbra
>And that was no doubt the best sleep you've gotten in days
>You try to adjust yourself without waking Umbra
>Today should be interesting
>You and Umbra are going to show your friends around the empire
>It should be fun
>You notice that Umbra starts to stir from her sleep
>Her eyes flutter open and she looks up at you
>A smile forms on her face as she snuggles into you
>"You're still here." Umbra says "It wasn't all a dream."
>You chuckle before planting a kiss on her head
"So you want to stay like this for a while?" You ask "We haven't shared a bed in some time."
>"You read my mind." Umbra says as she lets out a happy sigh
>>27137155
I dig itBut I feel it's more suited for a "different" Umbra
>>27138205
Whoa, stop it right there page 10!
>>27136628
>>27137064
Yeah, I scrolled past this thread a few times because of that.
>>27141922
s'all good
>>27138781
>You stayed like this with Umbra for some time
>Umbra continued to snuggle and kiss you as the morning went on
>It was nice
>Except...
>Things started to get a little heated as the little kisses started to turn into something more
>She just smelled so nice
>Her aroma started to mess with you
>She eventually ended up climbing on top of you
>"You know, we never finished what we started that night of the party..." Umbra says as she runs circles with her hoof on your chest "Now that you're home, maybe we can continue?"
>You smile
"As much as I want to, I think we should wait till we get another special night." You say "Also my friends are sleeping in the next room, and you tend to get loud."
>"I can't help it." Umbra says, a blush on her face "You're so good at making me feel loved."
"Soon, my Queen." You say "Soon."
>"I can't wait." Umbra says with a smile as she plants a kiss on your lips
>You hear a knock at the door
>"Come in!" Umbra says
>The doors open up and in hops Ariadne and Pinkie
>Behind them are the other girls
>"Good morning, Lady Umbra!" Ariadne says "How are you and Anon doing-"
>"Come on, Sleepyhead!" Pinkie says "Time to wake-"
>They both stop in their tracks and avert their gaze
>As do the girls behind them
>Why?
>It's only when you look at your position that you realize why
>Umbra's butt is resting in your lap and the blanket is covering up her behind
>Oh
>It looks like you two are doing the "deed"
Fuck, looks like that's it for tonight. I'm sorry Anons for the one part tonight.
>>27148277
You know what i've never actually said anything negative about the delays but you literally just ended a update on a joke the next update should of been a super easy one even if it was a lil shorty.
>>27148277
It's alright, thanks
>>27148231
>"I need this Anon, please. They can watch."
>>27148231
>"What's the matter?" Umbra says
>"Geez, Anon." Rainbow Dash says "You couldn't wait one day, could you?"
>Umbra raises an eyebrow before looking down at your predicament
>She looks at you and you smile
>"O-Oh!" Umbra says, her face turning bright red "I-It's not what it looks like!"
>Umbra rolls off you before moving the blanket
>"S-See?! He still has his pajamas on!" Umbra says
>It's funny to see her all flustered
>You throw your arms around her and pull her in
"There's no need to be modest, my queen." You say "What happened to my sultry queen a minute ago?"
>She squirms around in your arms
>"Will you stop, you fool?!" Umbra says as she tries to suppress a laugh "Release me at once! I am a Queen!"
>You release her, but not before booping her snout
>"I hate you." Umbra says with a smile "You choose to do this when everypony is in here!"
"A queen shouldn't lie." You say "You love me!"
>The two of you share a kiss before you both sit up
>Leaning against the headboard, you rub the sleep from your eyes
>"Well, I suppose we should get dressed." Umbra says before looking at your friends "Can you all excuse us? Once we get dressed we can go get some breakfast."
>The girls nod their heads before heading outside
>Except for Rarity
>>27148429
The sun was coming up! I wanted to get to sleep.
>>27151254
I have read your entire story in 3day and believe me when I say that I need longer for thamthig that big. What is rong with me
>>27152224
Your english?
ni,p
I'm home, but I'm gonna make something to eat and update the pastebin so give me a sec
>>27152302
Nop im no from germany.
But I can read better then write
>>27155836
Well in any case I'm glad you're enjoying the story
>>27156357
Yes I like your story.
There are only 5 other storys that I had read so fast in the last 2 years?
>>27151254
"Rarity?" You ask "Can we help you?"
>"Don't mind me, I'm just here to study your marefriend's beauty secrets." Rarity says "I just can't get over how beautiful she looks!"
>You just look over to Umbra
>"I suppose it couldn't hurt." Umbra says "Do you mind waiting for me to take a shower? It'll be quick if Anonymous helps me."
>Rarity nods her head
>"Well, my love?" Umbra says "We should get going."
>You nod your head and Umbra pulls you into the bathroom
>After taking a quick shower, you and Umbra emerged smelling clean and feeling fresh
>As you stepped out of the shower you saw Rarity looking around at the room while Ariadne continue to clean
>"So you're saying that Umbra saved you and your family when you were just a filly?" Rarity asks her
>Ariadne nods her head
>"Yup! If it weren't for her I wouldn't be here." Ariadne says "Ever since that day I promised to always serve Lady Umbra until the very end."
>"And you're doing a fine job so far." Umbra says
>Rarity turns and rushes up to you and Umbra
>"Oh you're done!" Rarity says
>"That I am." Umbra says as she walks over to her vanity
"Hold on, Rarity." You say "I need to get dressed."
>Rarity waves you off
>"Oh please, darling." Rarity says "It wouldn't be the first time I've seen you naked."
>You see Umbra stop in her tracks as she turns back to look at you
>"What was that?" Umbra asks
>>27156528
Cool, just bear with my slow posting for now
>>27156738
It's not a Problem for me came a vre hard workdays where I have not much time to read
Bamp
Bamp
>>27156738
"Hold on, Umbra." You say "When I first got here, Rarity was the one that made my clothes."
>You look at the white mare standing next to Umbra
"And you just like with Seth, I had to do the same with her."
>Umbra looks over to Rarity who nods her head
>"I found Anon fascinating when we first met." Rarity says "Unfortunately he took an interest with Princess Celestia."
>Rarity bumps Umbra
>"And now he's with you, you lucky mare." Rarity says before leaning in to whisper something into Umbra's ear
>Umbra giggles before looking at Rarity
>What did she tell her?
>"Thank his captain for that." Umbra says "When we met, Anonymous was just a twig. Arthas was able to get him into shape and create the man you see now."
>Oh okay
>They're talking about your body
>"He so defined now..." Rarity says before whispering something into Umbra's ear again
>Umbra blushes before they both start to giggle again
>"Rarity, a lady must never share her adventures in the bedroom." Umbra says "Although I will say that I'm always satisfied afterwards."
"Alright! I'm gonna go change in the bathroom!"
>"He actually makes a good pillow afterwards." Umbra says as she sits in front of her mirror "And when those arms wrap around you at night, it's pure bliss."
>While the girls continue to chat it up with each other you decided to get changed in the bathroom
Off to work
Bamp
Ayy back from work! And in the nick of time too
>>27159921
>After putting on your clothes, you stepped out of the bathroom to find Umbra fixing her mane
>She already has her cape and armor on
>Rarity watches right behind her
>"So why do you use a magic brush?" Rarity asks
>"Because, Rarity, a mare needs to use all the tools she can to protect herself." Umbra says "That includes my mane."
>Umbra waves the brush around
>"With this brush I can give myself the ability to use my mane as I fight." Umbra says
"You can use your mane as a weapon?"
>Umbra looks back and smiles at you
>"Oh, you're all done!" Umbra says "And to answer your question, yes I can."
>You walk over to them
"I've never seen you do that before."
>"That's because I haven't had a reason." Umbra says "Although that might change soon."
>With Celestia hell bent on finding you? Yeah
>"That reminds me, I'll have check on something tomorrow." Umbra says before looking at you "I'd love if you'd come along."
"Of course."
>Umbra smiles before placing the brush down
>Her horn glows and you see her crown come over to her
>She places it on her head and lets out a happy sigh
>"There. Now we can go get some breakfast." Umbra says "Ready to go everypony?"
>Ariadne and Rarity nod there heads
"Let's grab the other girls and get something to eat."
>"Agreed." Umbra says as she gets up from her seat
>And with that you all exit the room
Page 9 not fin
>>27165754
>After exiting your bedroom, you grabbed the rest of the girls and headed downstairs
>Along the way Umbra was telling them about how the empire was made
>"So that's why you can do that with the walls." Twilight says "And you said that you can do the same thing at Cadance's castle?"
>Umbra nods her head
>"I can do it anywhere." Umbra says "So long as I have a crystal with me."
>Entering the dinning room, you all took your seats and ordered something to eat
>While you ate, the questions never stopped
>"What do ya'll use to farm up here?" Applejack asks "It looks like it would be too cold to produce much."
>"We use a few methods to grow our crops up here, Applejack." Umbra says "Such as Hydroponics, and growing our crops underground."
>"Do you like to throw big parties!?" Pinkie asks "Are there any sweet shops here?"
>"Yes, there are, You'll see them when we walk around the empire." Umbra says "As for parties... Yes, I do like to throw extravagant parties."
>"U-Uh, Queen Umbra?" Fluttershy asks in her usual quiet self
>"Yes?" Umbra says
>"I noticed that there are some birds flying around outside." Fluttershy says "How did they show up here? The winds outside should be too rough for them to flock up here."
>"I actually think they were brought up here a long time ago." Umbra says "After that they just continued to multiply."
"How are they evening surviving up here?" You ask "Like what are they eating?"
>"W-Well if the farmers can grow food maybe they have extra that they can give to the birds." Fluttershy says "Like seeds."
>Huh
>"Well I have noticed that they flock over to the farms in the morning." Umbra says "I never really payed too much attention to them."
>"Do you have anything like the Wonderbolts here?" Rainbow Dash asks "They're like this awesome team of acrobats!"
God I hate working today because I get out a midnight
Anyway I hope this holds you guys over for now
Bamp
Boop
>>27174279
Bed bump
>>27169728
>Umbra thinks too herself
>"I don't think we do." Umbra says "It sounds like a fun concept though. Maybe I should make something like that after this issue with your princess blows over."
>"So how do you plan on dealing with Princess Celestia?" Twilight asks
>You look over to Umbra
>You can tell that she trying to hold back what she really wants to say
>Better help out
"She visited us last night." You say "And by that I mean Luna and her invaded my dream."
>"W-Wha?" Twilight asks
"Umbra and Celestia got into it and now talk of war is on the table." You say "But Celestia is the one that wants to start it."
>"I just want to be with Anonymous." Umbra says "Your princess can't seem to understand that."
>Umbra sighs
>"I won't lie to you, Twilight." Umbra says "I think the only way we can find peace is if I defeat Celestia, once and for all."
>The girls look at each other with worry on their faces
"But it would only be to get her off my back!" You say to clear things up "That's all we want!"
just make some space
>>27178222
Wasted trips?
Fuck, okay. Work time
I have a question, how do you guys want to see Umbra and Anon showing the mane six around?
Like actually parts or summaries?
>>27179046
I wouldn't mind seeing them getting shown around.
>>27179046
No, get some story progress going instead of something like that. It just feels like filler.
>>27179046
>>27179088
The reader has already had a tour of the empire, writing about the same thing but for the mane 6 will just give the reader *another* tour. So unless it has any real value story-wise, skip it.
>>27179140
i agree too many tours already.
>>27179088
>>27179140
>>27179421
I have my answer
>>27179084
I'll see what I can do
>>27183610
Compromise; have Umbra show the girls something about the town we haven't specifically seen yet?
>>27183641
The rape dungeons?
>>27183653
>Umbra commissioned the rape dungeons in a drunken stupor while Anon was kidnapped and completely forgot about them
>>27175278
>Twilight still looks unsure
"Twi, I know that Celestia means a lot to you, but even you have to see that she needs some sense knocked into her."
>Twilight continues to think
>"She's threatening to take my empire from me." Umbra comes out and says "She threatening to take everything I have worked so hard to accomplish, and to even seal me away as she did with Sombra. All because she wants me away from Anonymous."
>"Jealousy is such an ugly emotion." Sombra says as he comes out of the kitchen with a plate of pancakes
>He comes over and sits beside his sister
>Twilight looks over to her friends
"I only want to stay with Umbra." You say "That's why I wanted you girls to meet Umbra. So you could see how different she is from Celestia's description of her."
>"I already like her, Darling." Rarity says "She's so lady like, and I can't wait to see how beautiful her empire is."
>"I think she's n-nice." Fluttershy says "And if Anon loves her, how bad can she be?"
>Applejack and Rainbow Dash are still unsure about her judging by their faces
>Pinkie... You're not really sure about her
>It's hard to read her
>And Twilight has a mix of both
>"So Twilight..." Umbra says as she puts down her tea "Anonymous tells me you're a fan of Star Swirl the Bearded."
>You see Twilight's ears perk up
>"I am. Why do you ask?" Twilight asks
"She has scrolls from the old guy himself." You say "She's even met him."
>Twilight eyes go wide as she looks over to Umbra
>"Really?!" Twilight asks "You have scrolls from Star Swirl?!"
>Umbra nods her head
>"I can show them to you after I show you around the empire." Umbra says "Speaking of which, shall we get going?"
>The girls look at their plates before nodding their heads
>Umbra looks at her brother
>"Want to come along?" Umbra asks
always a morning
Insomnia is such a bitch. Thank Christ it's my day off, so i'll try and get some more parts out as soon as I eat my breakfast
>>27185369
>Sombra looks over at his sister
>"I suppose I will." Sombra says "Maybe I can get these six to see that I've changed."
>He takes a bite of his pancakes
>"It's not gonna be that easy!" Rainbow Dash says "We're still not believing this story about you changing your ways!"
>Umbra looks over to her brother
>"Of course you don't, but that's what makes it fun." Sombra says as he wipes his mouth "You'll see."
>Umbra rolls her eyes before looking at you
>"Ready, my love?" Umbra asks "I can't wait to walk around the empire with you again."
>You smile and grab her hoof
"I can't wait." You say "Let's get going."
>"Wait, I'm still eating!" Sombra says "Hold on you two!"
>"Well hurry up, Sombra!" Umbra says "I'm eager to show these girls around the empire."
>Sombra grumbles as he begins to wolf down his breakfast
>"As we wait for my brother to eat his food, I just want you all to know you can ask me whatever you want." Umbra says "You're all guest here, not captives."
>"We understand Queen Umbra." Twilight says "And thank you."
>After talking with the girls and waiting for Sombra to finish, you all got up and headed out into the empire
>>27189011
>The weather was nice for today
>The snow came down from the sky ever so lightly
>You started out by walking out to the farms first to show Applejack how things worked up here
>When you got to the farm, the farmers came over and bowed to Umbra and Sombra
>Umbra greeted them, and when they asked why she had come for a visit she showed them the girls
>The owner of the farm offered to give you all a tour of the place, which you all accepted
>While you walked around, you saw that Fluttershy was right
>Off in the distance, you saw some mares feeding seeds to the birds
>Fluttershy even pointed out that they had feeders in case the birds came back
>You notice that while you and Fluttershy were looking at that, Umbra and Applejack were walking around together
>Umbra was telling her that when they first arrived at the empire she had to take her armor off and get her hooves dirty to help the farmers get started
>She's no stranger to the farm life as she told Applejack
>Sometime later the farmers had brought Applejack some of their food made from their crops for her to try
>Along with some homemade cider for all of you
>When Applejack took a bite from the food, you saw a smile form on her face
>Applejack exclaimed that the food and cider were delicious! Just as good as her families apples
>She even went as far as to ask Umbra and the head farmer if they could trade sometime in the future
>Umbra said she would be okay with it, as long as we come out victorious against Celestia
>You could see that Applejack was starting to warm up to Umbra while they talked
>And on Sombra's side, he was chatting it up with Rarity and Twilight
>And you were busy trying to get Rainbow Dash to give him a chance
>After finishing up at the farm, you moved on to the High End District
Bamp
>>27190801
>You swear Rarity acted as if she found paradise
>When you got to the High End District Rarity began to squeal in delight as you all traveled down the streets
>She was running to each of the stores looking through the windows
>You notice that Pinkie also ran off into the sweet shops around the street
>Umbra offered to pay for whatever the two wanted
>That's all it took for Rarity as she started to pick out clothes
>You watched on as Umbra chased Rarity around the shops
>Pinkie had politely declined as she pulled snack cakes from her black void of sweets
>During this time you notice that Seth was coming down the street
>He was carrying bags filled with different colored gems
>He was surprised to see you back, but was glad you returned none the less
>When he turned to greet Sombra, he couldn't keep eye contact with him
>Rainbow Dash had asked you if he swung that way
>You said he swung both ways
>It was then that Rarity came trotting back with a bag with filled with some pony clothes and a fancy looking hat
>When Umbra and Rarity rejoined you, Rarity gasped when she saw the gems in Seth's saddle bags
>You quickly introduced the two and Rarity had asked where he got those gems
>He said that he got them from a cave that all the tailors in the empire get them from
>When Rarity asked if they could go see this cave, Umbra thought about it
>"Hmm I guess I can show you where he got these gems. Anonymous has never been there and neither has Sombra." Umbra says "Do any of you have a problem going underground?"
>Everyone shakes their head and Umbra takes the lead
>"Well then, off to the caves then." Umbra says as she begins to walk off
Now to come up with a name for this cave
>>27193103
Doplhinrapecave_5
>>27193103
>Following Umbra she leads you back out to the farm land
>A little bit east of the farm house
>Walking up a small hill you see a set of door on the ground
>"Alright everypony here we are..." Umbra says "The Grotto of Gems and Peace, or you could just call it The Grotto."
"Why's it called that?" You ask "It just sounds weird."
>"You'll see." Umbra says "Sombra can you?"
>Sombra opens the doors and you all begin to head down the stairs
>The stairway down is actually well lit
>There are little light shafts above your head
>And the walls hold candles on them
>The designs along the staircase are pretty fancy
>When you look at the walls, you notice that this all looks hand made
>As you reach the bottom of the stairs you see that it's getting brighter
>Stepping down from the last step, amazement hits you like a bag of hammers
>You enter a giant cave that that looks as if it was made by hand
>Gems of different colors are embedded in the walls and ceiling
>There are other tunnels around
>You can hear what sounds like rushing water down one of them
"Wow..."
>"Who is that?" You hear a voice call out "A visitor?"
>Looking over at a opening in the wall, you see a hulking figure emerge out of one of the tunnels
>Is that a Diamond Dog?
>He stares at all of you before meeting Umbra's gaze
>"Ah, Queen Umbra, it's good to see you." He says before turning to all of you "Hello. My name is DD."
It felt good to actually get some parts outI wonder how many of you thought I was going to post a part or two
>>27194318
Unsure, but I'm happy to see more umbra content.
>>27194318
>My name is DD
Are Umbra and Anon Mary Sues? I think they might be.
>>27197274
its a qt romance story, and thats what matters.
Work bump
>>27197274
It'll get dumber laterIn a good way
