'High as a pony' edition
Your one stop shop for all for things human-turned-pony. Writefags, drawfags and lurkers alike are all welcome.
Any type of transformation into ponies, gryphons, dragons, minotaurs, changelings, etc., whether OC or canonical, is fair game.
Previously on PTFG,
Apocrita: The Worst Lovebug by Woofr:
http://pastebin.com/ZACzLYKA
Welcome to Los Pegasus by Blackbox
http://pastebin.com/22kGgk86
http://pastebin.com/YXQqGFtW
What's in a Name by Icarus
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/322570/whats-in-a-name
TEMPTING TENSION by Woofr:
http://pastebin.com/TVCGs17R
Bugged Up by SpaceWolfe:
http://pastebin.com/PLkRPrMK
http://pastebin.com/eyBrxELx
A Simple Wish by Scionic Speedster - New!
http://pastebin.com/TXctjGhm
Story archive and additional links and materials:
http://derpy.me/PonyTF
Unrated TF image dump thread:
http://derpy.me/ptfgnsfw
Below are some suggested writing prompts.
New Beginnings
>Congratulations, you get the chance to live in Ponyville as a pony, but there’s a catch: you’ve been turned into a young filly or colt. You’ll be raised by two loving parents but treated as a child. You haven’t lost any of your human memories but may find yourself slipping into the role and acting more childishly as a side effect of the transformation.
Anonpone:
>Twilight is giving you a choice: To become a copy of a pony from her world in every sense except for memories and be paired with another anon, or to be said other anon. She has to see how humans react to being ponies and the mating potential of humans and ponies... you know, for science.
Official /soc/-type chatter's in #ptfg on irc.rizon.net
Previous Thread:
>>27005801
>Archer took his shoes off before easing off of your counter.
>You could already see the black chitin spreading bit by bit up his fingers.
>”Had to make sure the stuff was safe.”
“I guess.”
>Nonchalant about the fact that he was gradually shifting into a bug horse, Archer walked behind your counter to maintain some modesty as he took his clothes off.
>You caught a glimpse of two identical tattoos on his buttocks as he took his pants off though, of a clear shot glass and a phial crossed together.
>Kind of weird, they were cartoony and not really Archer’s style.
>The chitin had reached all the way up to Archer’s shoulders now, he showed no signs of pain or discomfort though.
>Archer shrugged off his shirt and vest, taking the time to fold them before setting them out on your counter.
>His muscles rippled with each movement, back flexing as he rolled his shoulders.
>An eye stared back at you from there, tattooed in Archer’s flesh.
>It was huge, spread all across his back from deltoid to deltoid, and in the same blue as Archer’s own eyes.
>Down the rest of Archer’s back, bleeding hands held up lotus flowers to the eye.
“I never understood that tattoo. Just looks creepy as fuck to me.”
>Archer turned around to face you, completely nude.
>Luckily the counter was blocking his lower bits.
>”I like it. Went to Anonymous for the suggestion actually.”
“What’s it mean anyway? It’s always codes and symbols with that stuck up prick.”
>Archer actually laughed, hardly sparing a glance down at the shiny black exoskeleton that had already covered his abs and was now spreading across his chest.
>”In his own words: ‘It represents the Archangel Ramiel, who guides the souls of the reborn and the faithful into heaven.’ ”
>You rolled your eyes and stood up, watching Archer’s scarred hands ball up and meld into unmarked hooves.
“Of course it does.”
>A vile symphony of cracks echoed on the air when Archer’s spine snapped and shrunk down into place.
>>27124175
>He grunted, falling over as gracefully as he could onto all fours.
>You figured you’d be able to look without getting an eyeful of Archer’s cock now, so you trotted around the counter to face him.
>Archer’s back legs were shrinking, bending up and widening at the thighs now, just as his arms shrunk and filled in to be the girth all over.
>You could tell he was going to be bigger than you.
>Archer’s barrel was much bigger than yours, and his wings spread wider and crimson red on his back.
>The hair on Archer’s head burned up in a bright red flame, making place for the chitin to spread along his scalp, changing the shape of his skull as it went.
>A horn erupted from his forehead, twice as long as yours with an extra jagged curve in it.
>And then Archer’s mouth reformed, stretching into a boxy and rough looking snout.
>His ears stretched too, moving up along the sides of his head to rest right at the top, black and long.
>He opened his new eyes, red and pulsing the same way yours did.
>Archer’s red head fin and red tail came in next, swooshing slightly behind him.
>The transformation was nearly finished.
>Now came the painful part, you knew.
>Archer knew too of course, he snorted and shut his eyes tight in preparation.
>A bang hit the air, loud and clangorous as the sound of it rebounded off of the tiled floor in your kitchen.
>Archer had a hole now, in his right fore leg.
>Despite the pain, Archer just frowned deeper.
>Then came two more bangs in quick succession, along with two more holes in his right leg.
>Archer’s brow furrowed further, his breath came short.
>You watched, mildly impressed, as Archer withstood hole after hole.
>Until finally, it was over.
>Breathing a little heavily, Archer opened his eyes and started trotting to you.
>Then suddenly he screamed and dropped down flat on his stomach.
>You jumped back in surprise, eyes darting all over Archer, looking for a wound.
>You spotted it on his neck.
>>27124182
>A scar was being traced all the way down Archer’s neck, from the jawline to the nape, wide and ragged in pale white across his otherwise black chitin.
>Archer kept on bellowing, obviously in extraordinary pain.
>You’d never seen him like that, ever.
>Hell, you’d never even heard him yell before.
>And you’d known Archer for years now, years of boxing, drunken brawling, street brawling, a car crash and more than a few wipeouts on one thing or another.
>Never had you seen him show pain like that.
>It seemed to last for ages, the screaming, and tears started to run down Archer’s cheeks.
>You were starting to wonder if you should dial nine one one.
>But just as you started to trot away to do it, Archer went silent.
>The finished scar looked like it had been done with goddamn cleaver or an axe.
>Archer stood up, breathing in and out deeply.
>All in all, he looked positively brutal.
>Where your features were slyer and almost snake like in places, Archer looked like he was carved from solid stone.
>Cruelty as opposed to your viciousness.
>He was around five feet tall, built like a tank with thick fore and hind legs.
>The chitin on Archer’s back, his wings, tail, fin and eyes were all in that crimson red like blood.
>And the scar only added to it all.
>Archer looked himself over, then spoke.
>His voice was a deep rumble as always, hardly changed by the background buzz to it.
>Faggot had no off switch.
>”You’ve got yourself some special stuff here Kane.”
>You laughed, hissing and cold.
“No shit. What the fuck was that about?”
>Archer sat back on his haunches, rolling his neck, getting the kinks out.
>”Your C4NG3 gave me the exact same shape and size as the last time I took C4NG3.”
>Wincing a little, Archer passed a fore hoof over his scar.
>”Right down to the things that I got while I was transformed.”
>>27124193
>You stared, incredulous.
“What the fuck did you do?”
>Archer shrugged.
>”Got in a fight with some drunk who’d had too much to drink. Told him I wouldn’t serve him anymore and then we started beating on each other.
“Jesus fuck. Did he have a knife or something?”
>Archer shook his head, examining his hooves now.
>“No. All of this happened when I was in disguise by the way. Right after the fight ended I was carrying the drunk to the bus stop and I tripped, fell on that spiked metal fence that’s around the cemetery. My disguise fell off, but he was too drunk to notice and there was no one else around to see.”
>You shook your head too, sighing.
“Shit.”
>”The transformation reverted just ten minutes after that. The ten minutes hurt a bit though.”
>Your muzzle scrunched up.
>”Hurt a bit.” huh?
>…This was the most Archer you’d ever seen Archer be.
>You couldn’t help but laugh at the stubborn fag.
“You’re a fucking idiot.”
>>27124206
Done for now. Be lurking.
G'night PTFG.
>>27124228
Damn, you made that seem so painful, I could almost feel it.
>>27124017
What should I write?
>>27124488
Whatever takes your fancy, Anon. Your options are wide open.
>>27117670
I really like the way you've written Discord.
Has anyone written about a draconequus transformation yet?
>>27124888
Yup, there's a couple of them, just search on the story archive, http://derpy.me/PonyTF
(Image, for the most part, unrelated)
Please come back Pony/Wishmaster Samsa.
http://pastebin.com/Tnb84VKR
pg10 bump
>>27126412
Page 10 bump
DUDE WEED LMAO
>>27128442
DRUGS R FOR MUGS
>>27125337
I second this.
>>27127995
Poor Anon, I hope it's just temporary.
Why can't people spell hooves?
>>27128875
they're distracted by their feets
Here's a strange thing from fimfiction, ponification spread by belly rubs:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/325631/belly-rubs
(even stranger is the fact that it passed moderation)
I want to be the virtual pony.
>>27131803
I want a lot of things, but none of them will be.
Besides, that pony VR sim looks really shit. There's not even any input. If all you do is fucking stare at grass and mountains I'd just go outside and drop some shrooms so I hallucinate pone instead.
>>27131818
Brain-Computer Interface. It's probably pretty sweet.
>>27130174
What a great fellow Discord is.
>>27132517
Mspaint is not a good method of transformation, Anon.
>>27132556
what wold u suggest?
>>27132561
Paint.NET is a better one, there's gimp, or one that i can't remember the Name of
>tfw you will never experience positive reinforcement and clicker training while being prepped for your new life
>>27132801
Thank Celestia for that.
>>27132884
We just posting random shit now?
>>27132931
I think his last of us pic was in reference to the word clicker in the gut he's responding to's post
>>27125337
Final Essay will be done Tomorrow. I am sorry, but school needed to come first. I cannot write fifteen page essays and stories at the same time. It gets very tiring.
>>27132997
oh.
Oh.
Have pic of Twilight that went too close to a clicker
>>27133037
Don't apologise for having sensible priorities. Good luck with your essay.
Glad to see you're haven't disappeared or forgotten about us though.
>>27133037
It's fine. I just put out one post a thread in case you forgot. All I needed was a reply.
>>27132556
>>27132763
Here's the paint you want.
Turns out blank flank was better than the alternative.
I thought this is treehugger thread. It took me five minutes looking at images to realize my mistake.
>>27133961
Ah ha, how awkward.
>>27133961
Close enough.
You guys should kill yourselves
>>27134706
a couple of hours with hooves and a belly rub or two, and I bet you'll change your tune
>>27131670
Unfortunately, this writers writing style and grammar aren't the greatest. I tried to read one of their stories but had to stop part way through.
>>27134706
Why's that?
>>27135016
Cute, but I don't think even Icarus transforms them that small.
>>27135044
In other words, typical fimfiction quality.
>>27132517
This is the worst TF drawing I've ever seen.
Horses staring into your soul, unmasking your innermost desires and fetishes.
>>27136764
Strangely appropriate
>>27136059
And yet people here accept it
>>27137933
lolno
They just ignore it.
Fuckin hell you sad cunts need to go meet some real women
>>27138161
Thanks for keeping the thread alive and bumped overnight disgruntled non transformee. I agree with this anon >>27135016. A few hours as a pony with some belly rubs and some ear scratching would set you straight.
>>27133961
This is one of the greatest posts I have ever read in this thread.
>>27136872
I would rub her belly, while being highly curious about what it's like to be on the receiving end.
>>27138161
>meet some real women
Where do you think you are?
>>27138868
very unf worthy
>>27138868
I awoke to the fresh breeze wafting through my window. In my hooves was the incredible pony that I had only met a few months ago. Who could have guessed that meeting in such a way would have pulled our lives together? I was so scared. Scared of doing anything wrong, scared of trying to move too fast, scared of upsetting her in any way. I pulled myself up and looked out the window at the glorious Ponyville morning awaiting me.
Morning was my favourite time of the day. It was peaceful, quiet, tranquil, and was the time of the day where flower buds opened, ready to take in the sun’s rays. Luckily for me, Lily enjoyed mornings as well and she yawned sleepily, glancing up at me as I held her in my hooves. She instantly smiled at me and hummed happily.
“This is real, right?” She whispered.
“Yeah.”
“We really… We had… s-sex. Oh my gosh...” Her cheeks flushed red and she nervously bit on the tip of her hoof.
“Hey.” I placed a hoof on her cheek. “I know… I know it's scary, and if you want to slow down, please tell me. I would never hurt you.”
“S-slow down?” She said, panic in her voice. “N-no! It's more… I just never thought… I would feel this way. About another mare, that is.” She said quietly, her head swimming with thoughts as her eyes darted back and forth. “I m-mean… you said you've always been attracted to mares, but… this is all so new, and to be honest… scary.”
“I know, that's why I said if you want to slow down, we will.”
“I don't think I want to. I… really really like you, Roseluck. I just don't want to overload myself.”
“Lily, we're friends. You don't have to call me Roseluck. Only my mum calls me that anymore.”
“I - I think it's a pretty name…” Lily muttered. Who would have known that four months ago, those words would have kickstarted my feelings for this incredible mare.
“A quite lovely memory, if I do say so myself.” I jumped as a voice spoke from across the room. “I hate to have to interrupt it.”
“L-Luna?” I jumped up before bowing. I heard her laugh before walking over and placing a hoof on my withers.
“Oh, I really must remind you before I get into things, you are dreaming, Rose.” Princess Luna laughed and a rush of conscious thought filled me. This morning… the morning after our first time together. The morning after I first told her I had feelings for her.
“I wish…” I started. “I wish all my memory dreams were as nice as this one.”
“Yes, unfortunately though, life is a journey. If it was all easy, then it wouldn't be life.” Luna said solemnly.
“I-I guess so.”
“I believe this is your third month along in your pregnancy, how are things going? I see you’re beginning to show quite obviously. Has everything been alright recently?” Luna asked, genuine worry in her voice.
“Uh, fine, really. I think the last of my morning sickness is going away, but the cravings are still kinda crazy. I told my parents about us, about the pregnancy, about our engagement-”
“Ooh!” Luna clapped her hooves together. “Congratulations! I am very happy for you both.”
“Th-Thanks. I also told them… that you might be taking us back to Equestria some time In the future which they had… mixed reactions to. My mum still has a little bit of doubts and worries, but she seems to be accepting the idea, if quite slowly.”
“Yes, about that…” Luna frowned in worry, sitting down next to me. “We must talk you coming to Equestria.”
“Wh-what? W-we can still come, r-right?” I said, panicking slightly.
“Yes, of course! In fact, it would actually be better that you arrive here sooner rather than later.”
“What do you mean?”
“Rose… this world is slowly draining you.” My blood went cold. “Pony bodies were not meant to live in a world devoid of ambient magic. It is the fabric that holds our reality together, and without it… ponies will deteriorate.”
“Oh my gosh.” Fear filled me, not even so much for myself, but for Lily and Brisk.
“Do not fret too much, as you are far off from experiencing any effects of this magical deterioration, but obviously, we want the best for you, Lily, and your foal. As such… I would recommend you begin preparations to arrive in Equestria as soon as possible.”
“Wait, for real?” My eyes lit up. “You found a way to take us there!?”
“Yes, Rose.” She smiled and nodded warmly.
I smiled and was about to shout in celebration, but a certain question nagged at the back of my mind. “W-wait… I have a question to ask.”
“Go ahead. I will answer to the best of my abilities.”
“I know that this life, my life on earth, isn’t what I’m supposed to be living. I know for a fact who I am, but… The love I have for my human parents is still real. I don’t… I don’t want to have to say goodbye to them forever.”
“I think I know what your worries are. I can assure you that we will be able to organize a magical tome that you can use to communicate with your parents. All you need to do is write in your version of the tome and it will show up in theirs. I hate to separate you, but unfortunately, Equestria works in the opposite way that Earth does. There is too much magic there. If humans were to come to Equestria, the ambient magic would slowly overload them.”
“I-I understand. Thank you, Luna. I just need to give my mum something to hold on to. That magic book will mean I can talk to her when I want, and although it’s not perfect, I really hope it will be enough to satisfy her.”
Luna nodded, her eyes close.
“I can sense that the love you hold for this world is real, and I would be heartbroken if you had to be whisked away without any connection to your family here. My sister, Princess Celestia, and I have decided to give you one month to prepare. Any longer than that, and the risk of you, Lily, or your foal being harmed increases.”
“Th-thank you.” I said, my mind still rushing with all of this new knowledge. I was going home!
-
I shot up, waking up from the dream and looking to my side. I was about to shake Lily awake, eager to tell her the amazing news that I had just heard, but the image of Lily sleeping was way too adorable to wake her. I smiled, happiness filling me entirely as I imagined what our lives would be like. I wanted a nice little cottage home, close to the markets, yet not too close that the morning rush would wake us up on our days off. I wanted to find a nice school for Brisk Breeze, where she would be able to make many friends.
I would wake up early every day, preparing food for both of the wonderful mares in my life, before sending Brisk off to school, going to work with Lily, and setting up our stall together. Flowers were adored by every pony in ponyville, not only as a gift, but also as a nice snack.
That shocked me a little. A snack? Did ponies really eat flowers? I mean, I guess they could, but humans can eat them too, and they rarely did, if at all. I licked my lips as I tried to imagine a flavor for them, my curiosity causing me to glance over at the flowers that my mum had bought to “spruce up” the living room. No, I was not going to eat my mums gifts. I would try flowers later.
I decided to wake Lily up with a warm cup of coffee and made my way to the kitchen. I prepared it just the way she liked it and returned with a steaming hot cup of coffee in my hooves. I placed on the table before relieving my own cup and placing it next to the other. I gently shook Lily awake, my heart racing and my face plastered with a huge smile. I couldn’t wait to tell her the great news!
She slowly woke, yawning before looking up at me and smiling. Her face went red as she remembered our time that we spent together last night.
“M-morning, Rose.” She smiled sleepily.
“Morning!” I beamed at her.
“What’s with the smile?”
“Lily… I had another visit from Princess Luna last night.”
“Oh? What did she have to say?”
“Well… First, I want you to not panic at what I say next. Luna has assured me that we’ll all be safe for the time being.”
“Y-you’re kinda scaring me, Rose… Did she tell you something bad is gonna happen?”
“No, no, no. It’s good news. Well… mostly good news. Point is that if all goes well, nothing bad will happen.”
“Okay…” She trailed off nervously and glanced at me to continue.
“The way she explained it was that on earth, there’s none of this thing called “Ambient magic”. I don’t know exactly what it means, but apparently, ponies were never meant to live without it. Since we live here now, as ponies, we’re getting slowly hurt by this.”
“Wh-what!? I-It’s hurting us?”
“No, not yet, but…” I tried to hide my excitement at the next part. “Luna says that we have a month until she’s gonna be taking us to Equestria.”
Lily’s face immediately lost all looks of worry and instead was showing disbelief.
“A-a month…?” Tears dripped down her face.
“Hey, why are you crying? This is good, right?”
“Yes!” She threw her hooves around me, sobbing into my fur. “I-I’m so h-happy! I’m c-crying because I’m just so happy!”
I relaxed, hugging her back, planting reassuring kisses on the side of her head.
“W-we’ll be able to give Brisk a real life, Lily.” I whispered in her ear. “We’ll be able to live our life. Together.”
“O-oh my gosh…” Lily panted out between happy sobs. “This is the best day ever!” She launched herself at me and planted a kiss on my lips, giggling through her tears as she covered my face in kisses. I giggled back, returning her kisses whenever she gave me the opportunity to do so.
“R-Rose, I love you so much.” Lily smiled, exasperated and panting. “I c-can’t believe this! We’re… We’re going home!”
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“Dad… I got visited by Princess Luna again and she said that we… we have to go to Equestria in one month.”
“What!?” He said, face immediately filling with worry. “One month!? I thought you were going in like, a year!”
“I-It’s not actually our choice now, dad…” I nervously explained what I had told Lily before, about the fact that living in this world was slowly hurting us.
“My god, Rose… I’m so sorry, I didn’t know.” My dad said, tears beginning to show.
“It’s okay, dad. I know how you feel. Honestly, I would have loved to be able to spend more time with you and mum before we left, but it’s not all bad! Mum will be pleased to hear that Princess Luna will be bringing a magic book over, when you write in it, it’ll show up in my book in Equestria. I know it’s not perfect, but it’s better than nothing, right?” I smiled, hoping that it would make at least my dad happy. “Who knows, maybe I’ll even convince Luna to let us visit in the future. If it’s possible…”
“If it’s possible, I’m sure she will let us.” Lily smiled and placed a reassuring hoof on mine.
“Rose, I… I’m sorry for the way we’ve been acting.” My dad apologized and I raised a hoof to stop him.
“You’ve been fine, I’m more worried about mum.”
“No, I should have been acting kinder to you too. Your mother… will be fine. She’s been getting better over the past month, but I’m sure you understand why she’s like this.”
“I do.” I nodded, confident that my mum would support me, no matter how hard it might be.
“I’m… I’m gonna go explain things to your mum. Wish me luck.” My dad waved to me and stood up. I watched in silence as I waited for him to return, fiddling with my hooves and staring at the empty seat that my dad had been in. After a short while, I heard quiet voices coming from the laptop speakers before thumping footsteps, slowly growing louder. Suddenly, my mum dropped into frame, her face full of tears.
“Listen here, missy! You and Lily are coming to live with us for the next month and that’s final!” She shouted, pointing a finger at me.
“Uh…”
“No buts! I’m not letting you go without spending as much time as possible with us!”
“O-Okay.”
“Do I get a say in this?” Lily asked before my mum replied with a deafening “NO!”.
“Well. Looks like we better get packing, huh?” I said, pursing my lips. Lily smiled at me and wrapped a hoof around my withers.
“Thank you, Rose… I’m sorry for shouting, I just…” My mum said, sorrow in her voice. “I’m gonna miss you so much.”
“We’ll still be able to talk to you through the book, mum. It’s not goodbye forever.”
“B-Book?” She raised an eyebrow. “What book?”
“Dad didn’t tell you?”
“I tried.” My dad said, coming into frame. “She got all hissy and stormed off before I could even mention it.”
“Mum! You didn’t even let him finish?”
“No… Sorry.” She said guiltily.
“Okay, well listen, please. Before overreacting, honey.” My dad said, kissing her on the cheek.
“Princess Luna said that she would bring a magical tome to our world that when you write in it, will send that message to my book in Equestria and vice versa. I know it’s not the same as seeing us, but I promise that if we ever get the chance, we will come visit.”
“Th-thank you, Rose.” My mum sniffled and wiped the tears from her eyes. “Y-You’re still staying with us for a month, though.”
I nodded.
“Yes, mum. I promise.”
“Okay, I have the day off on tuesday, so I’ll come pick you two up then. Make sure you pack everything you need!” She shouted before hanging up the call.
“T-Tuesday!?” I stuttered in disbelief. “Th-thats… tomorrow! Why didn’t she just say tomorrow?”
Lily shrugged and hugged me tightly. I felt her body relax against mine and immediately, the worries left my body. I kissed her on the forehead before lying backward on the couch, Lily falling with me and placing her head on my chest.
“Your mum really loves you, doesn’t she?” Lily spoke up after a minute of silence.
“Yeah, she does. Sometimes, a little too much.”
“I… I wish…” Lily started before looking away and clenching her eyes shut.
“Hey, hey, what’s wrong? Talk to me, Lily.”
“I…” She nervously glanced toward me, lip trembling. “I wish… my mum was like yours.”
“I know you do, Lily. I wish so too, but there’s one thing that I don’t want you to forget.”
“What?”
“You have more than one mum.”
“Wh-what are you talking about?”
“You have a mother in equestria too, you know.”
“I know, but… they’re not really my parents. I mean, well, they are, but… do they think that they are?”
“Of course they do! What kind of parents would ignore their child because they’re slightly different?” I said, immediately regretting my words as tears welled up in Lily’s eyes.
“Oh gosh, I’m so, so, so sorry, Lily. That’s not what I meant…” I said, stroking my now crying marefriends mane. “What I meant is that I’m sure they would still think of you as their kid. You might not have all of your memories back yet, but they are returning, and you are Lily. Not Jack, Lily.”
“I-I don’t even know what they l-look like!” She sobbed loudly.
“Well, who’s to say you won’t have a memory dream about them?”
“Who’s to say I will?”
“No-one. That’s the thing. You gotta let you control your life and your emotions. I believe that if you truly want to remember them… you will.” I smiled warmly and placed a tender hoof on her cheek, wiping tears away and staring into her beautiful golden eyes.
“P-promise?”
“You need to promise yourself that, not me. My promise won’t do anything. It’s yours that will.”
“I-I love you, Rose.”
“I love you too, Lily. We should probably get packing. We’ve got a lot of stuff to do before tomorrow.”
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“Okay!” Lily said, clopping her hooves together. “Just got off the phone with your dad, he’s gonna sort out the rent situation. Once we leave to Equestria, He’ll come and take the furniture and stuff, then pay off the rest of the rent contract.”
“Really? G-gosh… that’s a lot of money, Lily…” I said, a guilty look on my face.
“I know, but I’ve promised him all of my remaining funds for when we leave; It won’t do us any good here. I still have quite a bit saved up that was just gonna go towards living here anyway.”
“O-okay, if you’re sure. I finished packing our laptops, phones, clothes, our-”
“Clothes?” She interrupted, giggling. “Rose, we don’t wear clothes. Not to mention that they’re male clothes, even if we did wear them.”
“....Oh. I guess you’re right.” I blushed, looking away from embarrassment. “I don’t think there’s actually much more to pack, then. I keep forgetting how little we actually need.” I said, wracking my brain for anything I’d forgot, when I remembered something slightly off topic that I had forgotten.
“Oh! Lily!” I squee’d excitedly, rummaging through my luggage.
“Wh-what’s up?” She asked.
“This!” I handed her a soft blue velvet box, relatively large for us, but smaller than a palm on a human.
“R-Rose, is this…?” She said, a smile spreading across her lips.
“Open it!”
She slowly lifted the lid to the box with a hoof, revealing the gold ring with a red-gold band around the outside. I made sure that this band was slightly different from mine though, in a strangely convenient way.
“I-It’s beautiful, Rose!” She said, trying to keep herself from crying in happiness. “I love it! I really like the indent on the side, what is it?” She said, looking toward the red tinged gold part of the ring.
“It’s called rose gold. It’s to show you that I’ll always be with you. Even if I’m not with you physically, I will always be close to your heart.” I smiled, showing Lily a gold chain. Lily’s face was dumbstruck as she let me take the ring from her, attach it to the chain and clasp it around her neck, the chain letting the ring rest just above her breast.
“C-Close to my…” She sniffled, the tears finally pouring free. “My heart… Oh, Rose!” She flung herself at me, pulling me into a loving embrace. I let her press her lips against mine and she kissed me passionately. I didn’t even care that she was crying all over me, I just wanted this moment to last for ever.
Knock, knock!
Lily jolted out of the kiss in surprise.
“We’ll finish this later, o-okay?” I stared up at her and she nodded, wiping her tears away as I composed myself and walked to the door. I opened it up and my dad walked in carrying a large duffle bag.
“Morning, Rose! Your mum’s just waiting in the car for you, so let’s grab your stuff and get-” He stopped when he saw Lily, still wiping tears away. “Is everything okay?”
“Oh, yes, yes.” Lily laughed, waving a hoof in dismissal. “These are happy tears, Mr Linden. Rose just... gave me an engagement ring, and it’s… very very beautiful.” She said, the tears returning a little.
“Aww.” He smiled at me approvingly and picked me up, giving me a large hug as I struggled around, shocked that he had handled me like that.
“D-Dad! Put me down!”
“Fine, fine!” He said, placing me back on my hooves. “It’s hard to find a comfortable way to hug my cat sized daughter, okay? Speaking of cats, I assume Simon’s coming with you?”
“Yep. He’s not gonna be very happy in that carry cage,” Almost as if on cue, he hissed from his uncomfortable position. “But I’m sure he’ll forgive us. You… you guys don’t mind taking care of him once we’re gone, do you?”
“Of course not! He lived with us when you were at home, he only left because you did too. I’m sure he’ll love to be back there.”
“Okay, then I think we’re all set to leave.” I said, smiling confidently at Lily.
“Not exactly.” My dad said, unzipping the duffle bag he was holding. “I think I remember you telling me how you got Lily here, right?”
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I am so sorry, Lily. I had no idea how horrible it was in that bag, or I would have tried my hardest to make it more comfortable for you. Not to mention, we only had to go down the stairs and outside this time. Last time, it was down her stairs, all the way to mine, then up my stairs again.
The drive out to my parents house was long as usual, but after being locked in one apartment for three months, not even able to go outside, really did make us appreciate the views of the city we got from our seats. We agreed not to stand up in the seat until we were out of the city to avoid prying eyes, but once we got to the outskirts and then eventually, the countryside, we both peered out of the windows, greatly enjoying the view.
Everything seemed so… big! It was like we were tiny! Oh, wait… Nevermind. It was definitely nice to be able to see a little bit of the outside world after such a long time, even if it was through a window. My mum was awkwardly quiet on the ride to their home, but I knew not to push her. This change was going to be huge for all of us. Hell, it already was huge for all of us, and they had reacted admirably so far. Any normal person probably would have lost it completely.
After the ride, we finally arrived at my parents house and I stepped out of the car, breathing in the fresh country air. Ah! So wonderful! This was what I remembered Ponyville smelling like. The dew on the green grass, the smell of nature integrating with life. It was a calming and refreshing smell, one that, from the look on her face, Lily was enjoying and remembering too.
“Well, Lily, this is our humble home!” My dad mentioned dramatically to the relatively large country house. It had two stories and was made with raw weatherboard. It’s look perfectly encapsulated the “retired old couple” look, but just happened to also be the home I grew up in.
“It’s amazing!” Lily said, trotting to the patio. “It’s so big, too!”
“Hehe, it’s not that big, it’s just big for you.” My dad chuckled and lifted our luggage out of the car. “Best part about it is that the entrance to the property is behind the treeline, so you’re safe to go outside as much as you like without being spotted.”
My dad and, unfortunately, still silent mum, showed Lily and I around the house. I knew the vague layout, but a fire had caused them to remodel a few years ago, so a lot of it was new to me too. One thing that wasn’t new was my old bedroom, the one room on the second storey. It was almost an attic like room, but was incredibly warm and cosy, with it’s angled roof making the room feel a lot larger than it was. As much as I had taken some stuff from this room when I moved out, there was still some stuff left behind. A large couch that was too big for my apartment, by old bed that was too small for a six foot man, my old CRT TV, which was hooked up to…
“My SNES!” I said, running over to the cherished console and picking up my old and battered controller. “Oh gosh, Lily, we have to play Kirby together.”
“Kirby? The pink blob that eats everything?”
“Yeah! I still have a working version of Kirby Superstar. We totally need to play it!”
“Sure!” She said and jumped up onto the bed. “First, though, I believe we were in the middle of something before we left this morning…?”
It took me a few seconds before it clicked and I smiled nervously at my enticing marefriend, placing my SNES controller to the side before joining her on the bed.
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And that's another chapter done! I'm happier with this chapter than other ones, and I don't exactly know if I did get it right, but I feel the romance scenes were a little bit better this time.
Hope you enjoyed.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/322570/11/whats-in-a-name/chapter-nine
Delivery tonight!
Is it going to be good?
Is it going to be grand?
Will it advance the plot?
No.
I've been too busy with schoolwork.
>>27140391
But it is a delivery. Happy stoned day, buggo
>>27139762
Nice
>>27139768
Good to see things advancing. The communication book's a nice idea.
It's just too bad that the universes discriminate about what sorts of beings they'll accommodate.
>>27124175
>>”I like it. Went to Anonymous for the suggestion actually.”
Since Anonymous seems to have been everyone's consultant for tattoo matters, will those skills carry over so Keyboard Masher is an expert on cutie mark interpretation?
>>27141679
>Universe acceptance
I swear I've seen that somewhere.
>One day, it happened.
>The operation is a go, and the craft is leaving orbit.
>Full speed ahead. And once you've left Equestria's sphere of influence, it's time for subspace.
>Basic tests, not too fast. And when you find the jumpnode, there'll be no going back.
>Fun times ahead.
>Days go by. Sleep, talk with the crew and Twilight, reading books or smoking with the engineers.
>And one day, the ship arrives at the location of the jumpnode.
>You're standing on the bridge.
>There's nothing but blank white dotted space around the craft.
>The captain is an old fella. A rugged mare, with a prosthetic hoof and an eye patch.
>She's shouting commands, hooves flailing about, everyone busy in the chaos before you.
>"All crew! Prepare for gravitational environment shutdown!"
>>27141916
>With a click and a low hum, you feel yourself floating upwards.
>Mane flowing in the gravitational void.
>You buzz your wings, and float down.
>You've been acting as the extra communications officer.
>Two operators usually take care of it.
>Schooled operators.
>But you've insisted on being useful, to the ship, so the captain assigned you to the assistant position.
>"Hyperdrive resonator, active. Activate gravitational shielding."
>>27141927
>With another hum, you feel yourself being tugged slightly in all directions, before the sensation completely disappears.
>The front of the craft lights up, and a white whirlwind opens from nothingness that is the Dragon Jumpnode.
>"Helm, take us in."
>The airship tugs forwards.
>In one infinite small point in time, the spaceship stretches for twenty five light-years. Between the entry node and the exit point.
>And in the other, it exists solely in the quadrant of uncharted space, twenty five light-years away.
>Not even in the slightest bit of measurable time.
>Instant travel.
>And you and everyone else, is sitting right where they were.
>"Transfer successful, captain! We're halfway to the tear! Do we proceed in Delta at the maximal speed we dare to do?" The helmsmare smirks, turning around to the captain.
>"Permission given. Delta layer, maximal speed. Miss Verita, you're dismissed for the time being."
"Yes sir!" You salute and smile.
>You untie the seatbelts.
>And immediately begin floating away.
>Getting used to this will be annoying.
>>27141937
>You're floating through the hallways of the craft, carried by inertia.
>What should you do now?
>You could go see Twilight.
>Yeah, that seems a good idea, since you have nothing better to do.
>You propel yourself to the crew quarters.
>And with a couple bounces and near misses with the rest of the crew, you're holder up against Twilight's door.
>Knock, float away, knock again.
>Twilight opens the door, her room in a mess of flying books and other objects.
>"Verita! Are we in hyperspace again?"
"Yes, we are well on our way. We might even arrive sooner."
>"Sooner?"
"Pedal to the metal. I think the helmsmare will try to set the speed record for this distance."
>"Pedal to the metal?" Twilight says with a slight tilt of her head, which sends her slowly spinning through the air.
"It's a saying. To go as hard as one can."
>"I see. Well, one more thing to write on the list."
>Twilight has been keeping a list of oddities you brought with yourself into Equestria.
>The entire document currently stretches pretty far.
>Some words completely alien to the pony dictionary, measurements, or the concept of a non magical world, where technology does everything, Latin and other languages, and the list stretches on and on.
>"Verita, how about we go to the cantina? I'm pretty famished."
"Seems fine with me." You say, and float aside, whilst the purple unicorn floats out of the book cloud present in the room.
>>27141947
And that's it. Sorry if it were a bit of a letdown. But I seriously have hardly the time to write.
Bonus points to who gets what my favourite space fighter simulator is.
>>27141963
What's the mission again? Save the universe?
This story confuses me a bit with how it's gone from tentacle rape to sci fi.
>>27140672
>Happy stoned day
We got the appropriate OP pic for it, now we just need a story to go along with it.
>>27142898
Blackbox's life.
>>27143177
THIQUE
>>27143145
That would be fun, but no. Just on occasion. Today is a good occasion.
>>27141963
Good update nonetheless. Halfway curious as to what book or lecture series will come out of Twilight's notes in the end
pg8 bump
>>27142361
We went from tentacles to being thrown into Equestria, through meeting Twilight and finding out the universe is like a leaking ship.
>>27132292
>Rarity giving Anon lessons in how to be a proper mare.
>>27146981
>"Now, Anon, when you're presenting yourself to a stallion, remember to raise your tail like so."
>"Anon, don't moan so loudly. It's uncouth. You have to control yourself."
>"What do you mean you can't fit the whole thing in your mouth? I'll send for a smaller stallion then. In the meantime, let me show you how it's done."
>>27147086
She makes a wonderful teacher.
>>27146981
>>27147086
Or what if it wasn't just Rarity?
The mane six see Anon as a blank slate and each tries to mold him into a mare according to their own character traits.
Just checking, you guys are actually enjoying What's in a Name, right? I (not permanently) stopped updating my other stories in place for this one because I enjoyed writing it more than the others, so just making sure, you guys are enjoying it too?
>>27148239
I'm loving it, m80. You write some very adorable pones.
I pressed my body against Lily’s while keeping the pressure away from my belly and kissed her intently. The bed was much more comfortable than the one at my apartment, mostly because my mum and dad actually put a good amount of money toward this bed instead of buying the first one they saw. I felt Lily’s hoof begin to rub my belly in circles, eliciting a soft coo from me as I melted in her touch.
“I love you, Rose. She's going to be so beautiful…” Lily said with a soft smile on her face. She placed her lips on my stomach and kissed me lightly, trailing downward. I held my breath, warmth building inside me, as her kisses got closer and closer to my-
“Rose! Lily! Lunch is ready!” I heard my mum call from downstairs. We both froze as we heard footsteps coming up the stairs before Lily quickly pulled herself up and sat next to me, trying to calm herself down as the door to my room slowly creaked open.
“We made some lovely kale and cucumber sandwiches for you two, if you feel like-” My mum stopped as she saw the huge blush and awkward look on both of our faces. “O-oh. Uh… did I interrupt something?”
“N-nope! Nothing, w-we’ll be right down!” I said in a panic and my mum smiled before closing the door. As she left, I covered my face with my hooves and groaned. “Ugh, damn it. I'm sorry, Lily.”
“Hey, no problem. Look at it this way. When I eventually do make you cum…” She said, whispering seductively in my ear, causing me to shudder slightly. “It'll be that much more intense.”
I “eeped” quietly as I felt myself get even more aroused at her words.
“C’mon!” She grinned at me and jumped down from the bed. “I'm starving!”
I followed her down and caught up to her. As I reached her side, she leant over and whispered in my ear once more.
“I sure won't be hungry after how much I'm gonna eat you out tonight.” I shook in arousal again before playfully shoving Lily.
“You are unbelievable, Lily. I love you.”
“I love you too, beautiful.” Lily said, smirking.
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“So, Rose, as much as we know about you, you still haven't really told us much about this “Equestria” place. What's it like?” My dad asked curiously as we ate lunch.
“It's amazing!” I said, swallowing my bite of food. “I mean, I still don't know a huge amount of it, but I'm learning more through those memory dreams every day. There are three “tribes” of ponies there, the earth ponies - that's me and Lily - the pegasus ponies, who have wings and can fly, and the unicorns. They have a horn that let's them use magic to do lots of stuff like levitation and teleportation.”
“Wow. Real magic, huh? Just a shame you got the short end of the stick.”
“Not really.” I shook my head. “Earth ponies are super resilient and have an affinity for plants and nature. Both Lily’s and my cutie marks are nature related too.”
“Cutie marks? That's the girliest thing I've ever heard of.” My dad chuckled. “Those are the things on your sides, right?”
“Oh, uh, yeah. Everypony eventually discovers their special talent, and that's what we get our cutie marks for.”
“How did you get yours?”
“I… I don't really remember yet. Sorry.”
“No, don't you be sorry. What about you, Lily?”
“O-oh!” Lily shot up, her mind clearly on something else. “M-my cutie mark? Uh, I was… ten, I think, and I was trying to help my friend out with their school project. They had to grow and take care of some flowers, but eventually gave up. I don't know why, but… I kept going. The next week, my friend came by and saw all of the flowers had grown, and I hadn't even noticed that I got my cutie mark, I was so engrossed in working.”
“That's lovely, Lily.” My mum spoke up, breaking her silence. I smiled at her, glad she was at least trying to cheer herself up.
“So what about Ponyville? That's the place where you'll be living?” My dad asked.
“Y-yeah. Me and Lily had a house there, but I don't know if we still do. I mean, Luna said that time had only progressed about a year in their time since our disappearance, even though it's been like, twenty years here.”
“Woah, that's even weirder. My dad smiled, taking another bite of his lunch. “You better tell us all about it when you get there, Rose. I'm sure your mother would love to hear about your life there as well.”
“Of course.” I smiled. “Kinda defeats the purpose if I don't, right?”
“I guess so.” My dad chuckled and began to stand up from the table. “So, Rose, did you want to join me on a walk down to the stream? Like we used to when you were younger?”
“Of course!” I jumped down and began to follow my dad. I turned around to Lily to see her looking down, her mind drifting again. “Did you want to join us, Lily?”
She looked up again before shaking her head. “N-no, I'm a bit tired, so I’ll see you when you get back.”
“Okay, if you’re sure.” I smiled at Lily, placing a kiss on her hoof before turning and following my dad outside.
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I sat on my chair as I watched Rose walk away with her dad. I quietly looked back to my food as Rose’s mum silently ate. I felt my eyes well up as I began to think about my own mother again, but forced the memory down. I didn’t need her anymore. I reached up and pulled the pin out of my hair, placing it down on the table and staring at it.
“It’s a very pretty pin, Lily.” Mrs Linden spoke up and I raised my head to meet her eyes. She was smiling, but there was that same look of sadness on her face that had been there the whole day.
“Th-thanks. My… My mum gave it to me.”
“Oh, I'm sorry. I didn’t mean to touch on that subject, Rose told me how it made you feel.”
“No, no, it’s not your fault, I… I shouldn’t be so sad about it. It happened years ago, and she… My mum is the only one that lost anything of value. Sh-she doesn’t d-deserve to have me in her l-life…” I said, trying to subdue my tears and stay strong through the sentence.
“Lily… I know that you didn’t react too well before, but… I’d love to be someone that you can confide in. I’d love it if you talked to me more. I'm not a replacement for your mum, but… It’s hard. I only just got Alex back, and now he’s… She’s… leaving. I'm losing my son. I just want to help and accept what’s going on, but it’s hard.”
I nodded. I knew what she was feeling and really, I wished I could help, but… I couldn’t. All I really could do would be to try and make this last month with Rose enjoyable.
“I… I know how you feel, Jenny. More than you think. I lost my mum and dad. I know they didn’t die, just as you know that Rose isn’t dying, but the fact that… I'm never going to see them again, purely because of how I wanted to live my life? I didn’t want to leave! I would have happily only dated girls for the rest of my life, but they didn’t want that. The off chance that I might ever be attracted to a man was too much for them and they threw me out!”
“I-I'm sorry…” Jenny said, fiddling with her hands.
“Rose… She still loves you. Never forget that. She might be going to another world, but she still loves you, and through that, you’ll never really lose her. She’s promised that she’ll write at least once a week in the book, and I know for a fact she’ll try her hardest to come visit if it’s possible.”
Jenny nodded, guilt filling her face. “I'm… so, so selfish. I should have been thinking about her happiness, and instead, I'm only thinking of mine. I-I know this isn’t even a choice anymore, and I never wanted to try and hold her back, but Alex… Rose… She never was a very social child. She locked herself away in her room and rarely went outside. When she left to live in the city, I thought I had definitely lost her. This change has made her so much more happy. To have her start talking to us again, only for her to be torn away… feels like torture. I know I'm not “losing” her, but I still feel like… I don’t know, but it’s not the same.”
“It won’t be, but… we can’t live here. Even if we wanted to stay, this world is hurting us. I will never let anything hurt Rose or our foal. Ever.”
“Lily, you’re… You really are the perfect girl for Rose.”
“I-I wouldn’t say perfect, I… I just love her with all my heart. It hurts me to see her in any type of pain.”
“I know what’s best for my Rose, Lily. Right now… You’re best for her. She really needed someone to love and take care of her, and you’re the perfect candidate.”
“Well, I'm glad you think so. Th-thanks… m-mum” I smiled at her, tears dripping down my cheeks as she sat up and rushed over to me, throwing her arms around me and hugging me tightly.
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“Wow! It’s so beautiful this time of year!” I said, glancing around in awe at the amazing foliage around me. The green of a few plants was mixing incredibly with the oranges and yellows of the autumn leaves. “Oooh, I love these flowers!” I said, trotting over to to a thin plant with bright red flowers. “Fairy’s Trumpet, if I remember right.”
“Jeez, Rose, since when did you know so much about flowers?” My dad said, walking up beside me as I inspected the plant.
“Probably some of my memories leaking through. I wasn’t into flowers before I changed. I wasn’t, right?”
“No, Rose.” My dad chuckled. “You were much more into the “anime’s” when you were younger.”
“Well, I can’t say I don’t have an appreciation for it now! It’s my special talent!”
“So, I assume that’s what you plan on doing for work when you get to Equestria?”
“Yep. Lily and I had a flower stall that we ran together. Lily was a lot better at growing them where I had a better hoof on arranging them in a way that looked pretty.”
“You’re so girly, Rose!” My dad said, laughing as he scratched my ear with his finger.
“S-so what?”
“Nothing bad, you were just so into games and boy things when you were younger.”
“I-I'm still into that stuff too, I just… also kinda like to do some feminine stuff too.” I said, blushing as I turned away from my dad. He stroked a hand down my back, relaxing me slightly as I looked at the stream beside us.
“Y’know, Rose… I always wanted a daughter.” My dad said quietly, sitting down next to me on the bank of the river.
“Really?” I asked, looking up at the man who had raised me. “B-but you were always so… I dunno, you always seemed like you were happy to have a boy.”
“I was, don’t get me wrong. I wanted to have more than one kid, but your mother only wanted one. You know how many aunts and uncles you have on your mother's side, she grew up in a large family and absolutely hated it. I let her have her way, and we only had you, but I always wanted a daughter too.”
“Do… Do you mind if I ask why?”
“I don’t really know, but I think a lot of it was probably the fact that you were always so… confident, I guess. You protected yourself and shut yourself away. I wanted a little girl that relied upon my help. That I could protect. You didn’t ever seem to want or need that.”
“Dad, I was a stupid teenager. I wanted to be one of those self-dependant guys who didn’t need any help, but… Lily has really opened my eyes. I'm not as scared to ask for help when I need it now. I… I needed you guys.” I said, smiling happily up at my dad.
“Rose, I love you, kiddo. I always will. I might not show it, but…” He stopped, tears dripping down his face. “I'm gonna miss you just as much as your mum will. She just shows it more.”
“Oh, dad.” I wrapped my hooves around him and hugged him. He slowly placed his hand on me, taking extra care not to hurt me as he accepted the hug. “I’ll miss you too.”
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The sun was still high in the sky by the time my dad and I reached home and we walked in to see my mother and Lily tending to some potted flowers. She smiled happily as she gripped some pruners between her hooves and neatly cut some overgrown leaves from a bright yellow flower.
“We’re back, girls.” My dad said loudly as we walked in the door. Immediately, Lily turned around, smiling as she saw me walking in behind him. She looked up at my mum and she returned her look with a motherly smile before Lily placed the pruning shears down, then nuzzling her hand.
“Thanks, m-mum.” She whispered, just within listening volume of me and my dad. She jumped down, stopping when she saw a huge smile across my face. She nervously stepped toward me again and I sidled up next to her, leaning over whisper in her ear.
“I'm so proud of you, Lily.” I said quietly and kissed her on the cheek, rewarding me with a cute blush.
“How was your walk, honey?” My mum said as my dad took his boots off.
“It was nice. The woods are very nice this time of year. I’d love it if we had a picnic with Lily and Rose before they leave.”
“That would be lovely!” My mum said, taking her gardening gear off. “We’re still having a barbeque tonight, right?”
“Oh cool!” I said, hopping a little in excitement. “I haven’t had a barbeque in years!”
“Yep, that’s still on. I even bought some cucumbers and mushrooms to cook for Lily and Rose.”
“Can I help?” I asked, walking up next to my dad. “You’d be surprised how much stuff I can do with hooves.”
“Heheh, sure. Well, we better get started then!”
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I always loved it when my dad cooked barbeque food. The chilly night, warmed by our outdoor heater (and in this case, the body heat of my beautiful marefriend), the sound of night time bugs, the smell of cooking smoke and vegetables. I had explained to my dad that the smell of meat cooking was unbearable to Lily and I, so he reluctantly agreed to do any meat cooking inside and to leave the meat inside after it was cooked. We were mostly unable to smell the meat, and even the small amount we did smell didn’t spoil the nice evening.
“So I look across the field…”
“Dad, please!” I pleaded.
“And there’s Rose. She’s pulling at her sports shorts and making this weird face. The game starts, so I don’t have any idea what’s going on, but she keeps wriggling around.”
“Stephen, must you embarrass her further?”
“Of course!” He laughed loudly. “So, at half time, she comes over to me and says “Daddy? I forgot my underpants!”. Hahaha!”
“Daaaaad…” I groaned loudly as Lily laughed.
“Turns out she’d been wriggling around because her pants kept riding up her buttcrack!”
“Okay, okay, that’s enough.” My mum said, stifling a laugh. “Unless you want me to tell them the story about how you got drunk last new years and came home in someone else's car, hmm? Covered in…” My mum said teasingly, wiggling her eyebrows.
“Fine, fine, I’ll stop.” He said, raising his hands in defeat. “Did you feel like having anything to drink, girls?” My dad said as he stood up and walked over to the wine cooler.
“Uh, no thanks, dad. I'm pregnant, remember?” I answered.
“Oh, god! Sorry, Rose, I completely forgot. Did you want any, Lily?”
A grimace appeared on Lily’s face for a split second before she looked away.
“N-none for me, thanks.” She replied, her voice strained and awkward.
“Hey, you doing alright?” I whispered to Lily as my dad poured himself a small glass of wine.
“Y-yeah, I just don’t… I don’t ever want to drink again.” She said, her voice still strained. I knew that something about this was touchy and dropped it for now.
“Here you go!” My dad said happily, sitting down and taking a generous gulp from his glass.
“Thanks for the food tonight, dad.”
“No problem, Rosie! I got it just how you like it.”
“Stephen, you charred it. The only one who likes it like that is you.” My mum said, frowning at him.
“What are you talking about? Everyone likes it like that.” My dad said with a cheeky grin, winking at Lily and I.
Lily yawned next to me and rested her head on my shoulder, smacking her lips.
“Thanks for tonight, m-mum and dad.” She said, an air of nervousness still in her voice.
“No problem!” My dad shouted boisterously. “Happy that you’re feeling more comfortable, too, Lily.”
“Thanks.” She smiled sleepily and yawned again.
“Looks like Lily’s getting a little tired. We’re probably gonna have an early night tonight.” I said, lifting my nearly asleep marefriend up as she blinked, trying to keep her eyes open.
“She does look pretty tired. You get her to bed, we’ll see you bright and early tomorrow morning.”
“Thanks, mum. Night, guys!”
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I smiled as I lead an extremely tired looking Lily up the stairs and toward our bedroom. Hey, I'm the pregnant one! Why am I carrying her up the stairs? Oh well, I was happy to help her. She yawned again as I opened the door and shut it behind us, walking toward our bed and helping her up.
“Up you go. What has you so tired?”
“I dunno, I guess the excitement today just took it out of me.”
I laughed and kissed her, causing her to attempt to kiss me back.
“Lily, can we…” I was interrupted as she yawned. “Can we pick up where we left off tomorrow?”
“Awww, but I wanted to make you cum…” She said, closing her eyes as she finished. I giggled at the childlike nature of how she said that and lifted our blanket over us.
“You will, beautiful, but not tonight. Besides, you’ll probably just fall asleep between my legs.”
She responded by laughing quietly, her eyes still softly shut. I heard a cute snore come from her as she fell asleep and I pulled her foreleg around me, letting me rest on her breast. It wasn’t long before I was off in the land of dreams as well.
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Chapter ten is complete. Hope you all enjoyed the cockteasing.
In case no-one picked it up, the personality of Stephen is based on pic related.OVERDRIIIIVUUUU
Hoh shit, niqqas. Featured on fimfiction.
>>27149065
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/322570/12/whats-in-a-name/chapter-ten
>>27149065
Featured? Congratulations!
>>27149219
Yeah, for about three seconds. It's gone now.
>>27148239
I am continuing to do so.
anyone else feel like they're in a limbo state?
I don't read the stories posted nor have much interest in the images anymore and want to move beyond this general and /mlp/ as whole, but I always keep returning. Like a restless spirit.
>>27150741
There's always other hobbies. Watch a different show, play video games, plan how you'll eventually end your life. I'm doing the latter, seems to be working pretty well.
>>27150838
Watching a show isn't really a hobby, and I do other stuff. I just feel the need to check this thread every so often despite there being nothing for me really.
I guess it's akin to opening the fridge repeatedly and being disappointed because you haven't actually filled it.
>>27150856
I get what you mean. More of a habit than a hobby. Dunno then, I guess get yourself banned to stop coming here? Blacklist the website so your browser doesn't let you? If not, just continue to check in on the thread, do nothing, and wait until you finally get bored enough to stop.
>>27149010
Ah, the downsides of living with your parents. I guess they can try and be discreet about it.
>>27149029
>The off chance that I might ever be attracted to a man was too much for them and they threw me out!”
At least that won't be an issue any more. I don't imagine they'd look any more kindly on miniature lesbian horses.
>>27150741
I'm pretty sure you're here forever, Anon.
What would you like to see more of in the thread?
Personally I'd like more short stories.
>>27151407
Pretty much the same, yeah. Short but sweet greens. Preferably without it devolving into buttfun.
I totally accept that there's an audience for larger stories, prose and hot dickings, but it's just not for me.I also dislike the concept of 'Anon' and embedding board memes into stories. Named characters are simply more likable and any self-referencing humor is an instant eyeroll.
>>27151443
I think 'Anon' works best in short stories, if you're going for a fairly quick payoff and don't want to spend too long fleshing out a proper character. Particularly if Anon is the only human (or former human as the case may be) - mixing Anon with regular named people, or even having multiple Anons seems immediately stupid.This has give me an extra little bit of motivation towards bringing my half written, half arsed, short stories to fruition.
>>27151989
Even a nameless character is fine (at least until they gain one through the story).
It's just the whole concept of "Anon" that irks me. It was supposed to be self-insert, IE you were Anon, but with /mlp/'s storylust he quickly became his own flawless character who just seduces anything.
>>27151443
Don't get me wrong, long stories are great and I'm always impressed by anyone who can write that much provided they can do it half decently, but sometimes it's nice to have something you can easily read start to finish in one go.
From the 'Wake up; Am changeling' thread.
Maybe it works better if you read it right to left?
>>27133037
I eagerly await your triumphant return.
>>27153987
We ain't japs
>>27155728
Anon's right. I have no radiation poisoning to speak of.
>>27155771
>Anon gets radiation poisoning. He gains that superpower of turning into a pony.
>>27157162
What's that in her mouth?
>>27158782
A piece of bread
>>27158866
I hope she doesn't think that bread holds the cure to being a pony, because it isn't going to work.
>>27156039
>... but, he didn't realise until later, not the superpower of turning back.
We couldn't fit it all in...
Long time no see PTFG. I just had a dream last night that I'd discovered a drink that could turn you into a pony for an hour and me and a friend agreed to do a panel at a convention where we'd both turn ourselves into ponies and talk about it on stage. I ended up being Bon Bon and my friend ended up being Lyra. The actual transformation part was really trippy, the bit I remember most was my legs breaking because the audience were all in shock and my friend had to carry me (until the same thing happened to him). And then hands becoming hooves was weird, my hands kinda forcibly clenched themselves to fists and then the whole thing just morphed into a hoof.
My friend ran off stage as quickly as he could after the transformation was done, don't know why. But I stayed and I was really frightened. I was a lot smaller than I had expected and people were constantly coming up to me offering help as I struggled to do anything but that just made me even more afraid.
At the end of the hour I said something like "I did this to answer the age old question, what is it like to be the little mare." And I answered myself by saying "Being the little mare is shit."Fuck you PTFG, get out of my dreams and stop brining my hopes up again.
>>27165769
"being the little mare is THE shit"
FTFYyou're welcome
>>27165769
Sounds like a nightmare, but I'm sure being the little mare would be better /not/ in front of thousands of neckbeards.
I found myself sitting in a beautiful park, Lily by my side, as we watched ponies pass by. The sun was high in the sky and shone down through a smattering of clouds. We were watching a group of young ponies playing in particular, imagining our little Brisk Breeze playing with her future group of friends. I smiled at Lily and she smiled back, placing a hoof on my slightly swollen belly.
“She's gonna be so beautiful, Rose.”
“Yes she will.” I smiled back.
Suddenly, a sharp pain shot through my body, emanating from my belly and spreading outward. I was about to scream in pain when I saw a small trickle of blood coming out from between my legs.
“No…” My stomach and heart dropped lower than they had ever done before. “NOOO!”
-
I was in the doctor's office, waiting for the doctor to come back. My heart was racing as I held onto Lily’s hoof. He'd be back any second now to tell me what I already knew. I jumped and gripped Lily’s hoof tightly as the door to the office swung open. The doctor walked in, a blank, emotionless look on his face.
“Ms Roseluck, I have some unfortunate news for you. It seems that your foal had miscarried. I'm very sorry for your loss.”
Tears fell freely from my face as I let out an absolute, primal wail of sadness. She was gone. My little Brisk Breeze was gone.
-
“Rose, please!” A voice shouted as I sobbed, thrashing around.
“Please!” the voice screamed, panic in her voice. “Wake up, Rose!”
I flung myself upward and threw my forelegs around Lily.
“She's gone!” I screamed into the crook of her neck, soaking her with saliva and tears. “I can't l-live without her!”
“Hey, hey, calm down Rose. Everything's alright. I'm still here. I haven’t gone anywhere.”
I sobbed for a while longer before looking between my legs, fearful of what I might see.
Nothing. Just plain white sheets. It was…
“You were dreaming, Rose. Everything's gonna be okay, I'm here.”
“I-it wasn’t a m-memory?”
“What… What did you dream about?” Lily asked apprehensively.
“I…” I tried to force the words out, but they got caught in my throat. I hacked and coughed, the phlegm from my sobbing clearing itself a little. “Brisk… I l-lost her!”
“What do you mean?”
“I… I miscarried.” I said and broke down once more.
“Oh, Rose…” Lily said, holding me softly and whispering in my ear. “It was nothing but a dream. She’s still here.” She brought a hoof to my belly and rubbed it softly. I glanced down, seeing that my belly was still swollen and full. Brisk was alive.
“Oh gosh… Oh thank god.” I said, the weight lifting off of my chest. “Th-thank you, Lily.” I said, smiling sadly at her, the dream still on my mind.
“I’ll always be here to protect you, Rose. You and Brisk Breeze.” She kissed me lightly on the forehead and nuzzled up against my wet cheek. “Did you want to get some more sleep, beautiful?”
I shook my head.
“No… I don’t want to e-even possibly have that dream again.” I replied.
“That’s fine. Come on, let’s go downstairs. You get comfortable and I’ll make you a warm drink.” She smiled an almost motherly smile at me and I nodded back.
“C-could you make me a c-cup of tea?” I asked nervously.
“Of course. I’ll bring down a duvet too so you can wrap yourself up in it.”
We stood up together and Lily walked by my side as we descended the stairs to the living room. She kissed me on the cheek before walking off into the kitchen and preparing my cup of tea. I pulled the blanket over myself and hugged it tightly, longing for Lily to return so I could hold her instead. Even while wrapped up in the blanket, I was still a bit chilly, so I stood up and turned on the gas heater, quickly filling the room with a heady heat.
“Brrr, thanks for that, Rose.” Lily said, carrying two cups of tea over to the coffee table one by one.
“I should be thanking you. All I did was turn on a heater…”
“You’re still amazing.” She said and pulled herself under the blanket, moving as close to me as possible while still letting me hold the mug. She hummed in satisfaction as she lay her head on my shoulder.
“You’re more amazing, Lily.”
“No, you.” She said, booping my nose playfully. “You’re so cute, Rose.”
“Am not.”
“Yuh huh. You are. You are going to look even more cute in your wedding dress.”
“W-wedding dress?” I stared, a little shocked that she had brought this up out of nowhere.
“Yeah! I think you’d look absolutely amazing in a short, simple but poofy dress. Maybe even a veil of flowers.”
“Lilies.” I said without even thinking. “I… I want to wear lilies.”
My fiance’s face went a little bit red at that and she smiled bashfully.
“R-Really?”
“Y-yeah. And… I think you should wear roses. I-if you want to, of course.”
“Of course I do! That sounds like a lovely idea. Where do you think we should get married?”
“I dunno. I haven’t ever really thought about it. Maybe a small little chapel or something-”
“Not in a chapel.” Lily interrupted. “Sorry, but I hate churches.”
“What about…” My mind drifted to a memory of mine. I had no idea if it would be anywhat appropriate or not, but the idea of getting married there kinda… felt right. “What about in a field of flowers?”
“Wh-what!?” Lily looked at me, surprised. “Y-you don’t mean where you…”
“Well, not exactly there, but a similar kind of place. A field, full of flowers… the smell, the colours, in spring too. I… I think it would be nice.” Lily began to relax and I could see her mind working.
“Y-yeah, I actually think that’d be pretty nice.”
“You sure?” I said, placing a hoof on her cheek. “I don’t want to do anything you don’t want to do.”
She nodded confidently.
“No, I am sure.”
“Well, you two are up early.” I heard my mother's quiet voice say from behind us and we turned around to see her enter the room, still in her pyjamas. I opened my mouth to speak, but Lily beat me to it.
“Rose had a nightmare, so we decided to get up a little earlier than usual.” Lily said, holding me tightly.
“Well, nothing wrong with getting up early. I was going to get some gardening done today, if you two wanted to join me?”
My face immediately lit up and I nodded excitedly.
“Absolutely!”
My mum giggled and raised an eyebrow at me.
“I was expecting a ‘no’ from you, Rose. Since when have you enjoyed gardening? No, wait, that’s a silly question.” She chuckled to herself as she poured herself a cup of coffee. “I’ve been growing some flowers recently, if you two wanted to help them grow while you’re here?”
“That would be lovely.” Lily replied.
“I’d love to, mum.” I said as well.
“Oooh, I'm so excited! Thank you, girls, it does really mean a lot to me.” She said, walking over with her coffee in hand.
“So, mum…” Lily said nervously. “Rose and I were just talking about our wedding.”
“Oh! That reminds me, I have something for you, Rose.” She jumped up all of a sudden and walked out of the room. We sat in silence, and after a short while, she came back, a small bundle in her hands.
“I want you to have this.” She said, handing the paper bundle to me. I cautiously took it from her and unfolded it to find… Oh my gosh. In my hooves was a pure white veil, lined with small pearls.
“M-mum…” Happy tears began to well up and I looked up at her, smiling. “Y-you don’t have to give this to me.”
“Of course I do. I know it’s quite large, and probably looks a bit too seventies for you, so I know you’ll have to get it altered once you leave, but I still want you to have it.”
“Th-thank you, mummy. I love you.” I said, crying happily while leaning forward and embracing her. I hugged her tightly as she placed her arms around me and hugged me back.
“I’ll keep this forever.”
“I know you will, Rose.”
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The midday sun lazily shone down on us as we happily worked away in my mum’s garden. It was much larger than it was when I was a kid, probably due to the fact that she had more time to herself with me out of the house. I wiped the small amount of sweat from my brow and smiled over at Lily who was currently pulling out a weed from the ground with her teeth. I had no idea why, but any weed we began to pull on never snapped prematurely and we were able to pull it out, roots and all. Did it have something to do with our earth pony affinity for nature? I had no idea, but it was entirely possible.
I trotted over to Lily, smiling happily before nuzzling her after she pulled the weed out. She spat it into a nearby pile with a “pwah!” and nuzzled me back. We glanced over at the garden, impressed with the amount of work that we had managed to do in such a short time. I kissed Lily on the lips briefly before walking off to do some more work. As I traveled around the corner, I spotted a bush that sent a strange wave of happiness and familiarity through me. I knew for a fact that it was a rose bush. Staring in wonder, I slowly approached the plant. As I neared it, I reached out a hoof and placed it on one of the closed buds.
-
“Ugh, why does everything have to be so hard!” I screamed, slamming by pens down onto the table.
“Dear, you must be more patient.” My mum said, placing a hoof under my chin, directing my gaze toward her. “It takes time to learn all of this stuff, but you know you must do it.”
“Muuum, maths is boring! And super hard! I suck!”
My mum responded by harshly placing a hoof down on mine.
“Roseluck, do not speak like that. You are a young lady and you will act like one.”
“Oh, calm down, dear.” My dad said, walking in the door and placing his hat and coat upon the rack.
“Daddy!” I jumped up, to the dismay of my mum, and ran over to my dad.
“Hey, Rosie!” He said, picking me up in his hooves and swinging me around. “How’s my little blossom doing?”
“Thorn, she was in the middle of studying.” My mum said, walking up to my dad with an annoyed look on her face.
“She wouldn’t let me play outside until I was done.” I whined. “I tried really hard, but I'm not good at maths!”
“Dear, look at her!” My dad said. “Poor widdle thing.”
“You should be more strict on her, darling.” She said as my dad let me down.
“You always say that. What were you trying to teach her?”
“Just some basic calculus, but I don’t-”
“Calculus!? Clover, she’s twelve! I don’t think I studied calculus until I was in university!”
A look of guilt passed across my mother's face.
“I know, I know, I just wanted to give her a headstart in learning.”
My dad laughed and walked over to my mum placing a kiss on her lips (gross) and placing a hoof on her withers.
“Dear, you have to let her be a kid. You only get to be a kid once, and for Rosie, that time is now.”
She sighed in defeat.
“Okay, fine. Roseluck, you may go outside and play.”
“Yaaaay!” I ran forward and hugged my mum before turning around and heading out the door.
-
Woah! This park was so big! I know my dad had said never to go here alone, but I loved all the pretty flowers and plants so much, I just had to. I wandered around aimlessly, gazing in wonder at the greenery. A few ponies were here, playing around with their parents or friends and laughing happily. Sometimes I wish my mum and dad would come and play with me, but dad was always working and mum never wanted me to play outside. Maybe if I gave my mum something super pretty, she would want to play with me!
I trotted over to a bed of flowers and scratched my chin. I picked a few colourful flowers and held them together. Hmm, that was nice, but it could be a lot better! I wandered around, looking for more flowers, when I saw some roses, just beginning to bloom. I quickly ran over and began picking them before stripping them of leaves and thorns like my dad had shown me.
Before long, I had a nice arrangement of flowers, the red of the roses perfectly accented by the purple and yellow of the other flowers that I had found. Mummy would love this!
-
“Mummy!” I called as I walked into the house, the bouquet I had arranged hidden behind my back.
“In here, dear!” My mother called out from the living room. I walked in, a huge smile on my face, and I pulled out the bouquet
“Rose! They’re beautiful, where did you get the money to buy them?” My dad said, looking up from his newspaper as my mum sat, mouth open wide. “You didn’t spend your pocket money on them, did you?”
“Nope! I made them myself with flowers from the park!”
“The park? Rose, I said you shouldn’t go there alone. Not to mention, the park owns those flowers.” My dad chastised me and I looked down in guilt.
“Sorry, daddy…”
He laughed and motioned for me to come over.
“It’s fine, Rosie, just tell us so we can come with you next time.”
“Roseluck, this…” My mum stared at the flowers and I walked over, holding them out to her.
“They’re for you, mummy! I hope you like them.”
“Roseluck…” Tears began to well up in her eyes. “They’re beautiful!”
“Wh-why are you crying, mummy?” I nervously stepped toward her.
“Oh, sorry dear, they’re tears of happiness. These flowers are absolutely beautiful.”
“Yaaaaay!” I said, jumping around in a circle. I had my eyes shut so tight that I didn’t even notice the flash of white light fill the room.
“Roseluck, oh my gosh!” My mum said, gaping in awe. I stopped and turned to her, confused.
“What’s wrong?”
“Y-your cutie mark!” My dad stuttered, smiling as he did. “Rosie, you got your cutie mark!”
“I did!?” I said, staring back at my flank to see that a single red rose with a bright green stem had appeared. “I did! This is the best day ever!”
I rushed toward my parents and they both pulled me into a tight, loving hug.
“We love you so much, Roseluck.” My mum said, calmly. “And we both couldn’t be prouder.”
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I stumbled back as the memory of how I attained my cutie mark rushed into me.
“H-holy crap.” I whispered, my mind swimming after having so much information shoved into me at once. I glanced forward, not noticing until my eyes began to focus again that the rosebud I had touched was now in bloom.
The last time this had happened to me, I thought it would be a one off thing, but this was completely new information too, not just a more vivid version of what I had already dreamed. Not only did I now know how I got my cutie mark, but I also knew who my pony parents were!
Lucky Clover, my mum, was a statistician for a huge company in Manehattan and had a beautiful green coat, with a red mane and a four leaf clover for a cutie mark. My dad, Rose Thorn, was a gardener for some of the most famous ponies that stayed in manehattan as well as a groundskeeper at Canter Park.
This information that I had previously not known, was now readily available to me and the speed at which it hit me left me dazed. While I was stumbling a bit, trying to stay upright while I fumbled, Lily had run over to me and placed a hoof around me, holding me still.
“Th-thanks, Lily.” I said, smiling at her, but still embarrassed by my clumsiness.
“What was that about?”
“I just… I just remembered my parents. My real parents!” I said, smiling widely.
I jumped as I heard something drop to the soil behind us. I swung around to see my mum gasping, tears in her eyes.
“M-mum, wait!” I called out to her as she ran from me as fast as she could.
______
Chapter eleven is done. A little bit shorter than I hoped, but oh well.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/322570/13/whats-in-a-name/chapter-eleven
>>27166027
Huzzah
Perfect 10/10
>>27166094
I want to tongue Anonmare's sweaty ponut
>>27166110
He exploded and didn't even turn into Fluttershy, what a rip off.
>Be Anonpone
>Living the comfy pet pony life out in the middle of nowhere
>This is amazing, you're laying in his lap getting bellyrubs
>But such goodness was not to last
>A loud rapping on the front door startled you as well as your protector
>Master sets you on the couch and gets up
>He peeks out of the door
>He seems confused
"Who is it master?" you ask
>"It's... I think it's you." he looks worried
"What?"
>You were going to ask him to let you see but an arm bursts through master's bulletproof, armored door
>Master falls back and scoots away as the arm reaches for the handle and unlocks it
>The door slowly creaks open
>Oh god... It's Anon
>How is this possible
>Your old self steps through the door
>"You assholes thought you could keep me buried forever, didn't you?"
>He continues in, master runs off to get his gun presumably
>His glare shifts to you
>"You little shit, you couldn't keep me in chains forever. Now I'm back."
>You back into the corner fearfully
>You did so much hypnosis to keep him suppressed
>How was he here?
>How did he manifest?
>The nanomachines should've finished him off
>Master comes back in, holding his pump shotgun
>Anon hasn't seen him
>BANG, a loud crash pierces the air
>Anon is still standing
>He turns around slowly to face your master
>Another shot knocks him down, you run behind master's legs for his protection
>Anon stands back up
>"I'm still weak, but I'm more powerful than you could imagine. As soon as I kill her I can get back to normal."
>Master loads another shot but Anon rushes forward and grabs the barrel of the gun, shoving it to the side
>The slug flies into the wall
>Anon's fist lands on Master's right side, he drops to the ground in pain
>Anon grabs the shotgun from him and tries to fire a slug into Master's face
>The gun is empty, after three rounds
>Anon drops the gun and kicks Master across the room
>You can do nothing but hide
>From nowhere, Anon produces an RPG
>What the fuck is going on here?!
>Why was he so powerful?!
>>27166027
Ayyyyy, featured again by the way. For more than 2 seconds this time.
>>27166821
"Leave him alone! It's me you want!" you shout
>"No. The sub-conscious sent me to set it all back to zero, I'm here to kill you all and take control again."
"GET OUT!"
>You can't let him take control again
>You were miserable then
>Miserable and lonely
>"This is no way to cope, Anon. If you're not strong you die."
>You remember why you hated him so much
>He was a brutal tyrant
>Devoid of feelings, he was your id
>You were his super ego
>Almost two years ago you took control and kept him in the depths of your mind
>"You're infected, you need to redevelop, Anon." he says
>"It's why I'm here to burn down this wonderland you built, faggot."
>You summon a beam of energy and launch it at Anon
>Like you suspected, you still had control here
>Anon goes flying but quickly recovers
>He drops, sinking into the ground and disappears
>Where the fuck did he go?!
>You look around worried, he was planning something
>You run outside into the grassy field
>He is nowhere to be seen
>Your id was sneaky by nature, a dirty fighter
>You were too, if you got too upset
>Anon rises out of the ground and stares back at you blankly
>"Big world you have here, it might take me a while to get rid of it all."
"Except you won't, you'll be going back to the depths after I kill you again."
>"Come and try me, horsie. I'll fix you, super ego."
"I want to remain as the pet pony forever, leave now or I will kill you." you take a threatening stance
>Anon matches yours and pulls out a steel pole
>You try and control your power of the dreamland to create a weapon
>A squadron of royal guards materializes
>"I never did like your faggotry, super ego. So willing to hide behind your tulpa shit. I'll dispatch them all."
>Anon holds his staff from the end and strikes the first guard, sending it into the horizon
>His staff lights up and he begins to cut through the rest of the guards effortlessly
"Why can't you just leave?"
>"You're ruining us, this isn't healthy. You're sick."
>What was he talking about
>>27166957
This is an interesting dynamic. Neither side is 'good'.
Proceed.
>>27166957
>He was powerful
>Anon's strikes were coordinated and precise
>Your fears were realized
>This wasn't id, this was ego
>You had no issue imprisoning id, ego was another deal
>Anon disappeared again
>You looked around
>Above, a whining sound buzzed
>You looked up, face to fuselage with a descending aircraft
>It sputtered quietly, seconds later it began raining lead all around you
>You took flight in a panic to escape the hail of bullets
>The aircraft followed after you, shifting from a WWII fighter to a modern jet
>It roared, gaining on you
>You summoned another vanguard, who was hopelessly devoured as the F-35 took on an equine form
>Shit, no no no
>>27167062
I can in a few hours
I have a flight lesson to be at
>>27167097
oh, are you that planepone activist faggit
>>27167110
No, I don't mix tf and planepone though
>>27165982
Damn, where's Princess Luna when you need her?
>>27165987
>Maybe a small little chapel or something-”
Do they have those in Equestria?
>>27165995
>Did it have something to do with our earth pony affinity for nature?
Nice to see Earth ponies having advantages that aren't limited to just being super strong.
>>27166027
>four leaf clover for a cutie mark
Guess we know which website she uses.
Good chapter. Congrats on getting featured.
>>27167227
Aaaaand it's un-featured again.
Thanks, glad you enjoyed.
Delivery later tonight. Once I return from my jurying over in the theater.
Also, would someone add Satyr into the link over at the doc?
Not sure if it counts though, more implied than anything, since we see them in the end result rather than the transformation itself.
>>27167082
Interesting take on things.
Keep going.
>>27167097
>tfw no pegasus flight lessons.
>>27168131
;_;
>>27165769
I would never brine your hopes up. There are more suitable substances for hope preservation.
>>27167357
I added a tag for it. Even if the TF isn't explicitly shown, we'll still keep track of the species that have been turned into.
>>27165769
Sounds nice enough (minus the leg break). You got a good pair of ponies and if people were helpful then that's a lot better than their reaction might have been. You didn't have to deal with the 'I want to cum inside Rainbow Dash' crowd anyway.Why do I never dream like this.
>>27165815
No-one has yet bothered to conduct the research and settle once and for all this most controversial of questions. Just which size of mare is the best to be?
>>27169879
Small enough for my urethra
>>27170129
>>27170129I want Twilight to turn me into a little filly
>>27170154
>Anon enters Equestria.
>Abiding by the golden rule, he starts turning ponies into the little filly.
>transformation into a gorgeous dragoness.
>>27170253
>mares becoming fillies
>stallions becoming fillies
>fillies becoming slightly older fillies
>eventually, the filly princesses are able to put a stop to Anon's reign of terror by trapping him in the form of a filly
>>27170715
A real-life horse filly with a tiny horse brain.
>>27141947
>To say wings are the most useful thing one could wish for in zero G, would be an understatement.
>With little effort you can propel yourself through the hallways, flown by the wings of inertia.
>On the other hand, Twilight is flailing and bouncing off the walls.
>You buzz to your wings and catch Twilight, canceling your momentum with a small flap of wings on your back, and a smile on your companion.
>Twilight stopped flailing and you carry her on your wings through the hallways.
>A couple buzzes later, you fly to the cantina.
>Twilight, carried below you, swears loudly.
"What is it, Purplesmart?" You jokingly say and look down.
>"The cantina is closed! They can't operate in gravitational lack!"
"So what now?"
>"I dunno. We could stare out of the window."
"I think that would work."
>Just when you're about to buzz out to the crew quarters, you hear the internal ship comlink chirping to life with a couple seconds of static involved.
>"Verita and Twilight Sparkle, please go to the Captain's quarters. Over and out."
>You look over to your payload, and the unicorn looks back.
>>27170867
"Any idea what does the cap'n need?"
>"I don't have an idea. What do you think?"
"How about we find out?"
>You take a couple turns and fly up to the bridge deck.
>The captain's quarters are on the deck, and acts both as a brief room, and a dining room for the special occasions.
>You knock on the door and buzz back to the door.
>"Enter."
>You push the door aside and buzz into the room.
>The captain is seated behind a thick table, holding onto the chair, make flowing though the air, whilst trying to hold a bit of gravity.
>Heh, gravity.
>It looks almost comical.
>"Thank you for arriving so quickly."
"So what's up?"
>"Since this is the first flight to achieve such a feat and a speed, the eggheads over home want to get as much data as they can have. That means that we need to launch a probe from the fore hangar."
"Where's the catch, then?"
>>27170884
>"Since only propulsion system that's working outside of the gravitational shielding are nuclear turbojets, the probe cannot move. We need you to give it...a nudge, said bluntly. We'll set up a push team and give you all spacesuits and RCS packs. Sounds simple enough?"
"Yes, it does. You can set us up. When do we begin?"
>"You'll start immediately. Meet the engineers in the fore hangar tube. They'll brief you there."
"Aye aye, sir!"
>"Dismissed.."
>You pick up Twilight and buzz out through the ship. The main hangar is below everything, on the bottom most deck.
>Some flying and an occasional bump later, you're in the main hangar.
>It's filled to the brim with boxes, crates and a load of other hardware, kept in place with ropes and bolted to the floor.
>You navigate above the mess, and head to a clump of ponies in spacesuits, suspended in air by a few puffs of their control packs.
"Hey! We're here! Where are the space suits?" You shout and chuckle, the ponies in suits waving to a box floating midair.
>Some tryouts later, and even more fiddling, you're standing with the engineers in the launch tube, with the probe.
>>27170890
>And even later, after a ridiculously long checklist, you're in the main launch tube, strapped to the wall of the pipe, with the probe floating in the middle.
>Alarms, red lights and...silence.
>No air, no sound.
>And then, the expanse opens.
>The doors slide apart.
>The void, the empty nothingness that is the Delta layer, occasionally lit up by dark purple swishes of condensed thaumic energies hitting the invisible shield around the craft, shattering into sparks upon impact onto the unyielding invisible gravitational bubble.
>Your helmet radio crackles to life.
>"This is Twilight, we are to take positions around the probe and prepare for the thrust. Over."
"Copy that, Twiggypiggy! Taking position. Over." You say and chuckle.
>The only reply you get is frustrated groaning.
>Alright. How hard can this be?
>Puff, puff, move, cancel velocity.
>Alright. Three, two, one..
>Forward!
>You boost forwards with the small thruster pack on your back, and feel the probe moving out, gaining velocity.
>There, done.
>You cancel out all sorts of lateral movement you may posses and touch down on the metal ground of the launch tube.
>You look around.
>Where is Twilight?
>>27170903
>A quick glance to the rope that held her to the ship as a safety mechanism, reveals a horrifying sight.
>The entire rope is torn, and Twilight isn't on the other end.
>Fuck, where is she?
>You look around.
>On the distinctively dark hull of the probe, there's a white dot.
>It's Twilight's spacesuit!
>Crap!
>Against your better judgment, you unhook the rope holding you to the ship, and boost forwards. And you continue to boost until you begin to catch up with the quickly disappearing object.
>How far does the shield stretch?
>A kilometer?
>Fuck, that's almost how far the probe is.
>You speed up more.
>There she is.
>Twilight is held to the probe by a strand of rope, right by her back.
>You untie the rope with the magical usage of your horn, and just then you almost flinch in shock.
>The poor unicorn's lower body must've been out of the shield.
>Just when you're about to pull her back to the craft, a purple blast of magical energy hitting the exposed parts.
>You feel her tense up.
>You can't see anything beyond the golden vizard of the helmet.
>Come on!
>You quickly pounce off the back of the probe, Twilight in grasp, and full speed to the spaceship.
>The radio is crackling with static.
>The poor unicorn is silent.
"Twilight, can you hear me?"
>You shout.
>No response..
>>27170914
>You repeat yourself.
>Silence.
>Then, a second later, broken by a voice in distress.
>"Verita! I-I can't feel anything from the waist down, a-and it's spreading!"
"Talk to me Twi, we're almost back at the boat! We'll patch you right up!"
>"Veri-"
>You can't make out the rest of the word.
>The entire radio channel is filled with bubbling.
>Before there's nothing but an eerie silence.
>Silence of space.
>The sonata of nothingness.
>You speed up more.
>Pedal. To. The. Metal.
>You almost crush into the launch tube.
>The door closes, pressurizes and you can her the outside again.
>Twilight's suit limply floating beside you.
>And a team of medics is in as soon as the lights turn green.
"Quick! She's hurt, probably in shock."
>The rescuers slide the helmet visor up.
>It's all pink inside the suit.
>A semi transparent liquid filled the suit, full of bubbles, some of it floating about in the empty spaces in the helmet.
>But no Twilight anywhere.
>When you lay sight on the god knows what remains of the unicorn, your stomach spins.
>Crap. This is so not good.
>>27170929
And we're done. Pastebin updated.
Noticed a mistake.
Instead of
>Before there's nothing but an eerie silence.
I meant
>Soon, there's nothing but an eerie silence.
>>27170963
That's really nice
What's she's thinking "why didn't I get an awesome tail?"
>>27170929
Well, shit.
It was kinda cute, the way Verita was carrying Twilight around.
A wonderful artist in the draw fulfilled my request, Discord smirking at Anon after turning him into a mare.
>>27170715
And thus the plan is fulfillyed.
>>27170788
To that I say neigh.
>>27171647
*draw thread. I am an idiot.
>>27167135
why not?
>>27172437
It triggers Anons pretty bad
>>27171647
So there's a setup for Anon being the same color as Discord's leg, right? Of course it's a setup for an epic backstory and not just a limited color palette~ Well done, it's quite nice.
>>27172437
How are you imagining that would work?
Pony becomes planepone? Human becomes planepone? Aeroplane becomes planepone?
>>27172841
I dunno, I was just asking why anon was so butt blasted about planponsall though all of those are great options
>>27170963
That’s great work, the expression says a lot despite its simplicity.
“Where’s the tail; I need a tail if I’m going to be absolutely adorable.”
I see M.C. Sidewalk Curb made an appearance, also known in the art world as ‘I goofed up the perspective so here’s a few inches of elevation change to make up for the displacement.’ Guess you could’ve just rotated the picture a bit anticlockwise but it’s all good man.
Good morning bump.
Someone made money on this, was it from you guys? This bad by the standards of Arania.
Since some anon sent hos dream, I'll throw my yesterday events into the pile.
>Be me, literally tired as shit.
>Little spacewolfe goes to sleep.
>2AM
>Instantly fall asleep.
(I'm sure you all remember that I tried hypnosis.)
>Dream of pony hypnosis.
>Dreaming of sitting in my office chair.
>Headphones on.
>Hypno file playing.
>The next part I remember is sitting in the same chair as pony.
Then I woke up.
I have no idea what the fuck l happened.
>>27175071
>sitting in the same chair as pony.
You mean you were the pony, or you and the pony were both occupying the same chair? Either way's good I guess.
>>27172628
All the more reason to do it.
>>27175071
I dreamt about vaginas. Way more enjoyable.
>>27175361
you better have drempt about winking mare pussyand you better have drempt about rocking that shit with your rock hard horsecock
>>27175424
Nah. Dat human vag.
Perfect mounds, shapes and contours.
>>27175235
I was the pony. I think I even were a qt mare.
I need to get high and go to sleep late a lot more.
>>27175432
Did you at least rock that shit with your rock hard horsecock?
>>27172739
It's actually Anon's leg, protruding from somewhere on his back. He's mad at Discord for turning him into a grotesque five-limbed abomination, instead of the pretty mare as requested.
>>27174809
Jesus. Where did you find this horror?
>>27176077
From the style alone it's Arania, the first result for "TF art" on google.
>>27176119
I'm sorry I asked.
>>27175071
You should write a story based on your experiences with pony hypno. That'd be a fun read.
>>27170713
>a wave of nausea sweeps through your body causing you to dry heave
>you feel something hard forming on the top of your head and bring your hands up to try and comprehend what's happening
>the sight of them causes you to hesitate - they're twisting painfully, claws forcing themselves out from under your nails
>you start to scream as your nose starts to stretch out before your eyes almost becoming a snout
>you collapse to the floor and remain there for the rest of the transformation, weeping and cackling uncontrollably as your flesh warps and reassigns itself
>you feel a fiery burning feeling, a craving for gold and treasure
>you scurry off to begin your new lifehttp://i.imgur.com/OLrPHTb.png
>>27176565
You're a cruel person, Anon. Why do you taunt me like this?
>>27176422
Have an old story involving hypnosis, http://pastebin.com/7RgzVGi2
Shot in the dark, but does anyone happen to have the full sized version of this image?
>>27177367
Without text:
http://shyshyoctavia.deviantart.com/art/REQUEST-Pony-in-the-Mirror-394373446
>>27177472
Damn their art really improved over 4 years. From awkwardly drawn and heavily referenced images to fuckin' crazy shark-pone-sparkle-dog hybrids.
Maybe I should also do something with my life.
>>27177472
Many thanks, mate. I had thought it was an original piece of art done for this thread, but apparently not.
>>27177622
nah we just steal images and apply text
>>27177630
Don't knock it if it works.
>>27177701
ain't knocking it - just literally stating what we do
>>27177498
Do it Anon. Do something creative.
>>27177904
ok give me 2 minutes
>>27177904
here
>>27177985
The guy from minecraft turned into a pony?
