>I mostly got over him but, sometimes, when I remember his caring hands, his warm smile, those beautiful moments of him teaching me to play my guitar, his warm embrace on those faithful nights and...
>I'm sorry, I shouldn't be telling you all this. You're a great friend tho, thanks for listening to me. It hurts messing it up like this but, with friends like you, I can stop regretting hurting him so much.I'm back with more green
>>26430748
But first the ones I already wrote
>Sunset Shimmer, the love of your life is talking to you once again
>Sadly she's talking about that idiot again, the stupid Sentry
>Look at her eyes, they are still so full in love for that guy
>What the shit did he do?
>Yes he taught her how to play the guitar
>And yes he was the only one that truly cared about her when she was an evil bitch
>Pretty handsome too, do you remember when you took a peek on his abs? So tight.
>Wait, stop getting horny boy, that's not the time for that.
>Shimmer almost has hearts for pupils with how she's describing her love life with her.
>It makes you sick
>"Say" you finally decide to answer"ever thought of moving on?"
>"Oh all the time" she says "but I just haven't found the right guy to make me forget about him, you know?"
>"Well" you finally decide to say it "what about, someone like me?"
>"Oh I don't know, bud" She laughs "I wouldn't want someone as wimpy as you. Haha, just kidding, bro. You know I don't mean it"
>"y-yeah, haha..."
>You shut your mouth like the good old beta kid you are and keep listening to her blabbing about Sentry once again.
>You hate that guy so much.
>>26430800
>"Oh hey, Flash!" Sunset said while she walked right behind him.
>"Oh, Sunset! Hey... again." She nervously said.
>You were walking right behind them while holding Shimmer's books.
>"So how are you doing?"
>"I'm doing alright, thank you for asking again. You know I have somewhere else to be right now. See ya." He says as he almost ran away from her.
>"Ok then... bye" Sunset said while slowly waving away while her face showed a painful expression.
>"I'm never going to be able to talk with him ever again, am I?"
>"Forget about that jerk, Sunset. You know, I'll always be with you, forever."
>Pretty smooth, cringelord.
>"Oh, thank you so much, bro." she says while she proceeds to hug you.
>"You're the best friend a girl like me could have."
>You can feel the tears filling your throat while you nod respectfully at her.
>"Fucking Flash Sentry" you think to yourself "this is all your fucking fault.
>"Hey, guys?" You heard a voice speaking behind Sunset. It was Sentry.
>"I'm sorry for acting like a jerk just now. It's just that, I'm still a little uncomfortable by all this, you know? But I'm glad that you got yourself someone else, Sunset."
>"What, him?" She suddenly said while breaking the hug "Oh no! We're just besties, he is just helping me with my stuff."
>Flash, understanding your painful situation, looks at you and gives you an understanding look.
>"Oh, I see. I'm sorry man. Anyway, I do have to go right now but I'll catch you later, alright?"
>"Yes, of course! Bye bye Flashie! I mean, Flash!" She excitedly said while waving her hand. "Oh you heard that? he doesn't hate me!"
>Great, now you will have to suffer three hours of her telling you how great that piece of shit is.
>Fuck you, Flash
>>26430824
>At night, you constantly listen to her on the phone.
>Most of the time it was alright, she talked about Twilight and the other girls.
>But when she talked about Flash, oh boy.
>Two hours of an emotional rollercoaster.
>She went from happy, to depressed, to angry, to melancholic, to excited, to crying.
>But you were there for her. To comfort her.
>Honestly, you didn't know what she was thinking half of the time.
>She always missed that jerk, but then she was angry at him and then she was depressed.
>That faggot, how could he have left her?
>A girl with such a perfect body, beautiful face and such an innocent soul.
>I mean sure, she was a cunt, but it was his responsibility to crack that tough exterior to bring out the delicate flower inside.
>What an idiot, not being able to take his chance.
>While Sunset was talking, you could feel your feelings blooming more and more, you couldn't hold them in forever.
>So you decided right there, right now, that you were going to tell her how you felt.
>But before that, you had to be sure.
>"Hey, Sunset" you started "what do you think of boys that confess on the phone?"
>"Pfft, what?" she laughed "Why would anyone do that? That's so creepy. What, are they not confident enough? Also, what do you mean by "confess"? That just makes it weird, you know? Flash never confessed to me, you know? He instead knew how to make a girl fall for him~"
>"I see..."
>Fucking Flash Sentry, it's your fault that this conversation will extend two more hours.
>>26430878
>>26430878
alright then, let's get to work.
>>26430748
>OP is a writefriend
Huh.
>>26430878
>Another time, you invited Shimmer to the movies.
>This was going to be the perfect date for you two.
>First you will watch a romantic comedy with her.
>However, you wouldn't hug her yet, you didn't want to scare her.
>You know you have to give her some space to get comfortable around you.
>Then, take her to eat some ice cream, listen to what she has to say.
>You'll pay for it, of course.
>Finally, you'll walk her back home and you'll earn a kiss on your cheek, which will make her fall for you little by little.
>It's the perfect plan, however-
>"Hey man, what are you doing here?"
>Flash Sentry. What is he doing here?
>"I'm doing nothing" You answer "just waiting for Sunset to go to the movies."
>His expression changed.
>"Wait, she's coming too?" You could see him getting nervous.
>"Yeah, got a problem with that?" You say, trying to reaffirm your manhood.
>"Well yes, I mean no... It's complicated. Anyways, it's nice that you're trying to be with her but, you have to be more assertive around girls, bro."
>Wha- Who does this guy think he is? Giving advice to you?
>"Well I'm sure I can do it just fine."
>"Alright then, but I'll give you a small tip" he said while sitting right next to you "If she agreed to come to the movies, you have to make sure that she's into you. The easiest way to know that is to slowly and subtely touch her fingers. If she doesn't move away, then let the magic flow."
>But you didn't need his advice, your plan was flawless.
>"Alright fine, whatever. Thanks anyways."
>"Good luck. I'll be gone before I meet her alright?"
>Finally, you're in the movie theater with your Sunset.
>Your plan is going alright but the movie is almost done.
>You wonder if his advice is actually good.
>You do what he said and touch her fingers with yours.
>However she moves her hand away.
>...
>That was humiliating, why did you follow his advice?
>Fucking Sentry, he is a piece of shit.
>You don't need his ideas anyway, you can conquer her heart just fine.
>>26430997
Go on
>>26430997
>Another day, another launch hour you sit with Sunset and her friends.
>They mostly talk with each other, sometimes to you.
>You don't know why Rarity and Fluttershy look at you with sad eyes from time to time.
>While Rainbow Dash laughs and calls youa whipped fucboi.
>God she's the worst cunt.
>But as long as you can sit with your Sunny Bunny, everything will be just fine.
>Except she starts talking about Flash.
>That piece of shit asshole, always ruining everything.
>Whenver she brings his name, the entire table gets silent.
>It has to be the most awkward conversation topic.
>Everyone in the group of friends know that Twilight has a crush on him, but Sunset keeps talking about him with no end.
>To the point that Twilight is afraid of getting close to him because he is always trying to avoid Sunset.
>But you don't care about that, the more he avoids Sunset, the bigger chance you have.
However, even you feel bad for Twilight when Sunset goes on one of her rants about that dick.
>Sometimes the group suddenly stand up and leave, tired of her.
>Except for Fluttershy, she wouldn't dare to leave a friend talking by herself.
>Luckily it wasn't very often when she talked about him with them.
>That was your job, unfortunately.
>"So yeah, when I went to the movies the other day I crossed my path with him and we talked for like 10 mins. Oh that was best thing of that day."
>So that's why she arrived late.
>"Yeah, that's cool. Now please, can we talk about something else?" Rainbow Dash said.
>"Jeez, no need to get angry. What's wrong with you."
>"Well you talk about him so much that he doesn't even eat on the caffeteria. Can't you see that he is avoiding you for a reason?"
>"Hey, you can't talk to her like that" You say, backing her up.
>"Oh shut it, fucboi, this doesn't concern you." Dash said.
>"...I'm not a fuckboy" you mumble.
>"Ugh!" Twilight had enough, she angrily stood up and walked away.
>>26431143
this anon needs to man the fuck, find a new women or some shit
>>26430748
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NjRDL3Cv7xU
>>26431143
moarrrr
>>26431143
>And thus, the discussion in the table began.
>You weren't very good with people fighting with each other, specially if they were girls.
>For some reason they tend to scream a lot louder than men.
>You decide to slowly walk away, while they were busy in the heat of the altercation.
>They already knew each other when you met Sunset for the first time.
>And ever since you remember, the only times they fight are for the same reason.
>Because of Flash Sentry.
>Oh how much you hated this guy.
>What an annoying, smug kid.
>You still wonder what does Sunset look in him.
>And why she doesn't notice you at all.
>You've been trying to hide your feelings, but by now she'd probably do something, right?
>I mean, a boy and a girl together, it's pretty obvious right?
>But then why she doesn't see the love in your eyes for her.
>Oh this is so annoying, you thought.
>If only he wasn't here, then maybe you two could be together.
>You sat on the hallway trying to rest, when you hear instruments coming from a near classroom.
>Someone is playing in the middle of the break?
>You take a peek and of course, it had to be Flash and his band "Flashdrive."
>What a stupid name, who lacks the self awareness of that?
>Well whatever, at least the other two band players know how to play.
>Maybe Flash too but you didn't know much about instruments to give a real opinion.
>After they finished their song, they began talking.
>"Yo, I heard they were fighting in the cafeteria." On of the members commented.
>"Really? what happened?" asked the other one.
>"I think it was Sunset Shimmer and her friends again."
>"Oh no" Flash said, while shaking his head. "Why is this happening? What is wrong with her?"
>You try to be as quiet as possible.
>"Hehe, guess she still likes you."
>"Still likes me? She is stalking me. She's pracitcally obsessed. I don't want to call ehr this way but, she may be a little bit, you know."
>"crazy?"
>>26431781
Guess I should put on my trip. I mean, anyone can write if they want, but it'll be easier to follow one story this way.
>>26431781
>"Hey I told you not to call her that! but..." He sighs "I don't know, man."
>You keep listening to the conversation.
>"I mean I'm flattered that she still remembers our time together. She is such a cute girl after all but, maybe I should talk to her."
>"What are you planning to say?" One of his friends ask.
>"I don't know. I'm good with words tho, so I'll probably be fine."
>"By the way, who's that guy" one of the memebers of the band said while pointing at you.
>Oh crap.
>"Him? It's Sunset's friend." Flash answered.
>"Oh right. That guy."
>"What do you mean, that guy." You answer.
>The group of friends sigh and they tell you to come in and close the door.
>"Look man, we need to talk, alright? I hate seeing bros in your position" Flash said.
>"It is fun, tho." Another one said.
>"Hehe, yeah, but it's still not cool." Flash answered.
>"What are you talking about?" You ask.
>They look at each other.
>"You like Sunset, don't you?"
>How could they know about your secret crush?
>You try to hide your face by looking at the ground.
>"Nah bro, it's cool. I understand, she is cute and she can be very sweet but, I've seen how she treats you, you know?"
>"She treats me fine, thank you." You said half embarrassed, half aangry.
>"Well you may think that but... well, you know what friendzoning is, right?"
>The f word.
>They said it.
>"I-I know what it means."
>"Well there you have it" Flash continues "She's using you without even knowing."
>"What do you know about Sunset?" You answer, now angrier than before.
>"I dated her, man."
>Of course, you completely forgot about her.
>"And even if she changed her ways and is not that big of a, well, naughty girl, some things take some time to die."
>"Yeah man" his friends continue "She used to manipulate Flash all the time in doing whatever she wanted."
>"she used me" he continued "and I see that is happening again, but the worst part is that she doesn't even notice it."
bump, I'm still trying to figure out some things, but don't let this thread die yet. I know what I want to write.
>>26432154
Fuck, it hits too close.
>>26431197
This.
Bamp
Say, how long it takes to a thread get 404 if no replys?
>>26432154
I never thought I'd say this but Brad here is a bro. Anon should listen to him, stop being such a fucking beta and find a new waifu.
>>26433481
Got that right, then Sunset will stalk him
I've been waiting for this for awhile now. Thank god.
Dont let this die
>>26432154
I've been there once. Never again will I go through that.
>>26433257
Depends on how active the board is.
This is pretty cool. Can't wait to read more
Anon seems to be thinking more about Flash than Sunset in these greens.
>Anon starts thinking more and more about Flash
>becomes bitter towards Sunset due to her rejecting him
>starts dating Flash to get back at her
>>26435269
I wouldn't see that coming. Good twist
>>26435269
What a plot twist
>>26435269
Better to be a gayboy than a fuccboi.
:^)
>>26435269
What a twist
>>26432154
Anon its a pretty cool bro. I mean he really care for anon. On the other hand anon is the tipycal fedorafag
>tfw i was like anon. Not ever again
>>26435752
I think you meant to say Flash?
![d99[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/WvxHv7X.jpg "d99[1].jpg")
>>26435749
>>26435749
We gonna see more today?
>>26436541
Yes of course.
>>26435813
yeah i mean flash being the cool bro. Anon is just a cunt
acunton
>>26436555
Yes on both accounts
>>26432154
>But you don't believe his snake tongue.
>"You know what? I don't like you talking about my friend like that." You say.
>"Come on, man, I'm just trying to help you." Flash said.
>"By bad mouthing her? I find that very offensive. Good bye." You finally said while you walk out of the room.
>What does he know about her, anyway?
>He is just bitter, he doesn't understand the new Sunset.
>Jealous that he lost his chance with her.
>Angry that she was mean with him and that he won't have it again.
>It's almost time for class, so you walk to your classroom.
>You see Sunset alone in it too.
>"Hey, what's up?" you ask.
>"Oh nothing, the argument got a little heated and some teachers had to get in." She sighed "They scolded us pretty hard."
>"Don't worry, Sunset, they were on the wrong in that discussion." You say, trying to console her.
>"Oh shut up" she angrily said "They were kind of right."
>"Oh. I see..." You back down a little and sit down on your bench.
>You didn't want to make her angrier than she was, so it was better to let her cool it off.
>But she didn't stop.
>"I mean, what's wrong with me?! I thought I changed... Now they are angry with me and Flash hates me."
>Maybe, just maybe...
>"Well Sunset, sometimes you need to stay with the people that care the most for you."
>You extend your hand and grab hers. "Like me".
>Her stare tore your soul apart.
>A look of disgust and annoyance.
>"Don't be a creep, alright? I don't nee that right now."
>She pulls her hand back and walked to her sit, leaving you looking at her.
>Your self respect was crushed.
>The only good thing about this was that no one saw you.
>However, when you turned around to see the door, you could see Flash looking straight at you, shaking his head in dissapointment.
>You felt like you wanted to cry, but you controlled yourself.
>>26437888
Fuck, I don't see a happy ending coming for anyone anytime soon.
>>26437988
happy ending?
>>26437988
Well...
>>26435269
>>26437888
Go on. I need to see how fucked Anon gets
>>26439214
Very fucked. And it will be all his fault.
>>26439265
Good, now I need to know how it ends.
>>26437888
>For the rest of the class, you doodled on your notebook.
>Nothing much, just small circular patterns.
>Every now and then, you'd turn to see Sunset, but she was looking out of the window with an angry expression.
>Was she angry with you? her friends? Flash?
>Whatever the reason, you were feeling pretty bad from what happened.
>Today wasn't a good day at all.
>When the final bell rang and it was time for everyone to go home.
>However, while he grabbed his schoolbag, he noticed that Shimmer stormed out of the room, without even looking at him.
>Weren't they always walking home together?
>Why is she acting like this?
>Doesn't matter though, he blew it up.
>Maybe he didn't pick the right time.
>Or he didn't use the right words.
>Whatever the reason, it didn't matter now.
>You cannot go back in time and now your actions were set in stone.
>Once everyone left the room, you slowly walked out of the door, with your head full of regret.
>You didn't want to do anything, just sit at the computer and waste time.
>That way, no one would see you cry.
>If no one knows you did, it may as well never happened.
>While on the hallway, a hand grabbed him by the shoulder.
>He turned around and saw Flash.
>The torment never ends.
>"Hey are you busy right now? Maybe we could hang around for a while."
>You were going to say no, but you were only able to shake your head.
>"Aw come on, the guys want to head out." Flash pointed at his band mates and two more guys waiting for him.
>You don't usually hang around with people, so why not give it a shot?
>>26440002
Keep going pls I need this.
>>26440002
What's up with the constant changes between first and third person ?
>>26440333
whoops, that's just me being dumb and not paying enough attention. Sorry about that.
>>26440344
No problem, other than that being distracting you're doing good.
>>26431197
I said it before. He needs to invest his time and energy on another girl, and watch how sunset loses her collective shit about it.
>>26440739
i'd actually love to read that
>>26440739
That would make it just another revenge fantasy friendzoned people have.
>you-you'll see ! I'll get a totally hot girlfriend and you'll regret turning me down
Either have him get over it after fucking himself over hard and Sunset not care about him (because the world doesn't center around him) or do if you have to have her be jealous let it not be because of Anon dating another girl but Flash dating him, at least it would be a twist compared to the usual stories.
>>26440783
Why not do both? The other girl is Starlight Glimmer, but the spark isn't there, so he cuts it off and turns to Brad. He could even not learn his lesson and do the same thing to Glimmer while Sunset seethe that her beta stole her husbando.
>>26441035
*same thing to Glimmer that Sunset did to him, that is.
Sorry if I'm not writing faster than other times, but I'm still here.
>>26441775
imma keeping dis thread alive
>>26440002
>So you all walk out of the main entrance.
>"Where are we going?" you ask.
>One of them points out that the closest thing to do is waste some time at a small burger place.
>While walking through the street, you see Sunset Shimmer sitting by herself on a park.
>Half of yourself wants to go and hug her, but the other half remembers the trauma of her actions.
>"Hey guys, I'll be right back, you go on without me." Flash said.
>You see him walking into the park and sit besides her.
>After you all arrive to the burgers, they start talking about getting friendzoned.
>"Man, don't worry about it" one of them said "it's shitty but we've all been there. Remember that time? With the girl with the hips?"
>Everyone else laughs.
>"What an evil bitch, but you couldn't do anything else but stare at them."
>"...I'm not friendzoned" you mumble, trying to keep what's left of your self respect.
>"Don't worry about it, you'll get over it. The first time is the hardest but you'll be able to forget that ho."
>"But, she's my friend." You answer.
>They all look at each other.
>"Man, we've known her since she dated Flash, you know? And from what he told us, that mean cunt is still down there. He told us how she scolded you."
>You try to hide your embarrassed face.
>"Chill, bro. I mean it was funny, seeing someone whipped is always funny, but it builds you, you know?"
>You decide you want to change the subject.
>"Speaking of, where is Flash?"
>"Him? well he went to talk with her. She's been acting pretty crazy lately, you know? And he went to calm her tits down."
>As you think on what he said, the waitress brings you whatever you ordered.next, you want me to write a part where Sunset and Flash talk, or you rather that be a mystery
>>26442097
wouldnt mind seeing there conversation
>>26442097
sunset and flash talk
>>26442097
Flash and Sunset conversation
>>26442097
>Two teenagers were sitting on the bench of a park.
>From afar they could ve seen as a young couple, ejoying their lives.
>However, that wasn't the intention
>Flash Sentry was talking with Sunset Shimmer, trying to make her stop acting that way.
>He was always nervous when he was near her, because she tend to act a clingy with him.
>She was never able to let him go.
>In fact, ever since she stopped acting like a horrible person, the love she felt for him grew and grew.
>Since she believed he was the only person that truly accepted her when she wasn't a nice girl.
>Imagine what he could give to her if only he accepted her in his heart once more.
>"You need to stop doing this, Sunset. It's not healthy." He said.
>"I don't care if it isn't, Flash, I still have you in here." She said while touching her chest.
>"Yes, but you forced yourself out of mine, ripping it apart."
>"I know, but I can heal it, I can make the pain all go away" she said while caressing his chest.
>In disgust, he slapped her hand away.
>"Stop! Look, I heard what you did today in the cafeteria. If you keep acting this way, everyone will hate you again."
>"But-"
>"No more buts, Sunset. You lost me long ago, but you still have your friends."
>"I don't want them if I can't have you, Flash!"
>What did she say?
>"Sunset, please, listen to yourself." He said, scared of her.
>"You're that important to me." She got closer to him while caressing his fingers.
>"Remember how you taught me how to play the guitar? I do remember your warm fingers against mine."
>She slowly put her mouth close to his ear.
>"And I know that some part of your body still remember mine~" She playfully said while caressing his leg.
>He was a strong teenager, but a teenager nonetheless. Having such a beautiful girl talking to him was making him doubt himself.
>"I changed, Flash, I'm a good girl now, please, let me show it to you." She said before biting his ear.
>"Well, maybe not that good."
>>26443085
C'mon Flash. Don't give into the pussy.
>>26442097
Dammit Anon, listen to them.
>>26443085
getting good
>>26443085
fuck it, I'm procrastinating this story too much. I'll finish it tomorrow or on sunday.
>>26441035
I don't see the point to adding her.
>>26430748
>tho
Do you also spell through as "thru" I wonder?
>>26444233
We'll wait
Anon needs to find true waifu.
>>26430748
>>I'm sorry, I shouldn't be telling you all this. You're a great friend tho, thanks for listening to me. It hurts messing it up like this but, with friends like you, I can stop regretting hurting him so much.
>>26445560
>Rainbowdyke
>best waifu
Pick one
>>26443085
I dont like where this is going...
>>26443085
Bump
inb4 anon gettin cucked by sunset cus she fucked flash
>>26446774
hopefully not
>>26446774
But sunset already fucked Flash.
>>26447801
>>26447801
yeah i mean, fucking him after they broke
>>26443085
>It's been 3 months since you stopped talking to Sunset.
>Instead of being the beta cuck you were, you registered for a training camp with a giant of a man, known as "Aziz Shavershian"
>You would go there everyday after school, and train with him.
>Weekends would be nearly the whole time.
>Being pushed to your limits, being forced to eat food that you would've never even touched prior.
>Aziz forced you to take weird supplements and stuff too, turning you into a monster of Test.
>High Test Anon.
>Your mindset had changed too, no longer were you the lazy manchild you once were, you were instead a strong man, both in mind and body.
>Which sounds pretty cheesy, but it's the honest truth.
>But all your progress finally came to an end.
>You had been avoiding Sunset and her friends, and they had ended up forgetting about you.
>Which is great, considering what you've planned for them.
>Yesterday, you had finished the 3 month plan.
>Everything about you had grown bigger.
>EVERYTHING.
>6 foot plus master race.
>That Chisled Jawline.
>Huge Gains.
>Gains kept by Nofap.
>>26447991
>It's been 3 months since you've masturbated.
>What a good goy.
>Looking into the mirror, you glance at yourself.
>Is that even you?
>All you see is a giant of a man, with the physique of Adonis, and gifted with glorious locks of hair.
>Niceu.
>Deciding to change up your style, you comb your hair and style it.
>After finishing that up, you go through your wardrobe and take out some of the newer clothes you had bought in preparation for this day.
>You look through your old suits and say goodbye to them.
>That was the old Anon, he's dead and gone.
>You put on a grey shirt, a pair of jeans, a leather jacket and Aviator sunglasses.
>Ey babe, lookin good.
>Anyway, you grab your bag and head off to CHS.
>On your walk to school, you notice that you get a lot of looks from the girls passing by, and everytime you look back, they end up looking away and blushing.
>Many men look in envy of you.
>Who could blame them? You're fucking shredded.
>You finally reach school.
>Going through classes, you get the usual girl or two try to talk to you and introduce themselves.
>Or, 're-introduce' themselves to you.
>The old Anon would have given his left nut to even talk to an average looking girl.
>You? Nah, you're different.
>>26445560
Considering how she acted towards him she's a bitch in this story.So just like in the show.
Alright I'm back.
>>26448006
>Basic pussy only deserves basic interactions.
>Finally, break comes.
>This is it, Anon.
>Let's fucking do this.
>Be the sick kunt that your trainer made you be.
>You take off your leather jacket and hold it over your shoulder with one hand, and enter the Cafeteria.
>Walking through the Cafeteria, you lay your eyes right on Sunset and her friend's table.
>You take long, prideful strides through the Cafeteria, basking in the glory of the countless students gazeing at your visage.
>Not to be too prideful, but you were fucking handsome.
>Straight 10/10 CHAD.
>Once you're a few steps away from their table, their conversation halts, as they all gaze at you.
>Twilight Sparkle looks at you, trying to figure out who you are.
>You smile at her, causing her to blush hard and look away.
>Chuckling, you finally get the attention of Sunset, who's back was faced to you this entire time.
>Sunset looks up at you and smiles.
>"Can I help you?"
"Mind if I sit with you?"
>You're nearly surprised at your own voice, which is much deeper and masculine than before.
>Sunset's cheeks go a little red at your voice, as she nods.
>"S-sure, have a seat."
>You nod back and sit down, getting ready for the big event.
>>26448022
>"So... Are you new here?"
"Not really, I've been here for a while now."
>Sunset looks surprised.
>"Really? I haven't seen you around here before."
>You laugh for a bit, causing all the girls to look oddly at you, before you respond to Sunset.
"I'm surprised you don't even remember me, Sunny."
>"S-Sunny? Who are y-"
>She's interrupted by her own sudden realization of who she's really talking to.
>"A-Anon?"
"Kept you waiting, huh?"
>The rest of the table all look at you and shout in unison.
>"ANON?"
"Mhm."
>Applejack is the first to ask you a question.
>"Ahnon, how'd you get so big? Gosh, I'd say you're about as big, if not bigger, than Big Mac!"
"Thanks AJ, I just eat my vegetables and run everyday."
>Like hell you're going to sound like a gym rat right now.
>Sunset then taps your arm, causing you to turn back to her.
>She can't take her eyes off your body, and won't get her hand off your arm.
"Sunset, my eyes are up here, y'know."
>She blushes and looks back up at you.
>>26448041
>"Y-yeah, I knew that, I was just... Admiring you!"
"Thanks, I guess?"
>"I'm sorry, Anon, I just can't believe how much you've changed in such a short time."
"Well, I was just busy doing my own thing, getting on with my own life."
>"You also happened to stop talking to me for the last three months or so."
"Oh, nothing personal Sunny, I was just busy with other things, and I'm here now to make ammends."
>"Really?"
"Yeah, and I'd like to ask if you wanted to mee-"
>A cough is heard from Rarity, as she looks at you.
>"Darling, as much as I'd love for you and Sunset to get reacquainted with each other, I'd just like to warn you that the seat you're in is actually taken."
"By who?"
>"By Sunset's boyfriend."
>You look at Sunset.
"You have a boyfriend now, who is it?"
>"It's Fl-"
>Sunset's cut off by someone else behind you.
>"Hey bro, you're sitting next to my girl."
>You'd recognize that voice anyway.
>Flash motherfucking Sentry.
>This is what you came here for.
>Revenge.
>>26448051
>You turn around and stand up, facing Flash Sentry.
>The fuck, where'd he go?
>Oh wait, that's right.
>You grew a few inches during your training.
>Prior to that, you and Flash were around the same height, but now you've gotten a lot taller as well.
>SIX FOOT PLUS MASTERRACE.
>You look down on Flash Sentry, who looks really pissed off.
"You alright Flash?"
>"Do I know you?"
"Of course you do, mate, it's me, Anon!"
>"Anon... The fuck happened to you?"
"Creatine, son."
>"Right, anyway you're sitting next to Sunset, mind moving out the way?"
"Actually yes, I do mind."
>"Wrong choice, Anon, I'll ask again, mind moving out the way?"
>This time, he's a little more hostile.
>Sunset tries to talk to him, but you raise a hand in front of her, signalling her to let you handle it.
"Listen up Manlet Sentry, how about you piss off, I'm trying to have a conversation with Sunset here."
>The manlet comment catches him off guard, and he's silenced.
"That's what I fucking thought, you low-test Beta cuckold, fuck off."
>He puts his tray down, and tries to sucker punch your face, but is too short, and ends up punching your abs.
>>26448065
>Unfortunately for him, your abs are hard as rocks.
>Flash holds his bruised hand in pain, as you laugh and sit back down.
>In light of your victory, you start flexing your pectorals up and down.
>Sunset's mouth is open and agape, with untold amounts of drool spilling out.
>She moves closer and whispers into your ear.
>"Anon... That made me so horny, how about we fuck here, in front of everyone to see."
>Your brain says no, but your red-blooded Alpha dick says 'yeah cunt let's cuckold Flash'.
>You are the captain now.
>Nudging to Sunset, she takes the initiative and unzips your genes, drooling at the bulge in your pants.
>As she pulls off your boxers, your semi-erect cock flops out and slaps her in the face.
>"Holy fuck, Anon, this is so big, I don't think this'll even fit!"
"Oh it'll fit alright."
>Sunset brings a hand around your cock, and strokes it softly.
>At this point, every girl in the Cafeteria is gazing at Sunset pumping your cock, many whispering and blushing.
>None are disgusted though, they're all staring in lust.
>The guys? They all glance in envy of your dongus maximus.
>Though, the girls are pretty envious too, of Sunset, that is.
>Sunset continues to stroke your cock, making it rise and grow bigger.
>Eventually you're fully hard, and Sunset's mouth is covered in a mix of saliva and pre-cum.
>"This thing gets bigger? Anon, why didn't you tell me you were packing this! You're like six times bigger than Flash!"
>You just laugh, and help her take off her clothes.
>>26448077
inb4 wakes up
>>26448077
>You grope Sunset's lithe body, fondling her breasts and giving her ass a squeeze.
>It's time.
>Glancing at Sunset's pussy, it's already dripping wet.
>"Anon... I got so wet already, can we just skip foreplay and have you fuck me?"
"Of course."
>You take off your shirt and start flexing your muscles.
>All the girls "wooh!" and scream for you, as if you were straight out of a Magic Mike movie.
>Sunset props herself on her knees on the table, facing Flash.
>You go behind her and gaze directly into Flash's eyes as you slide your length into Sunset's hot snatch.
>Normally, you'd be gentle with a girl you care for.
>But you don't really care about Sunset anymore, you're just in it for the hot sex and girls 'mirin your body.
>You mutter a prayer to the god of Aesthetics, the great sick kunt in the sky, Zyzz, for supporting you and giving you strength in your perilous journey against societal norms and bitchy women.
>Going straight into it, you slam your hips into Sunset, causing her to scream in pleasure.
>"Oh FUCK, Anon, you're so big and thick, I don't care if I get expelled for this, this is the best dick I've ever had!"
>You utter a primal roar, mainly for show, and gaze into Flash's eyes.
>You're the Alpha here, and you're marking your territory now.
>Pulling on Sunset's hair, you drive yourself inches deeper and deeper into her, eventually slamming into her cervix.
>Whilst her cunt is tight, you use your other hand to hold onto her hips and squeeze yourself deep inside.
>The first time you hit her cervix, you feel a flow of fluid drip from her cunt.
>"Oh fuck, I'm cumming! Ahh~"
>"My hips are moving on their own!"
>>26448103
>Sunset's screams like a bitch in heat are enough to push you over the edge and go faster and harder than you've ever done before.
>As you look around you, you notice that every girl is touching themselves to this, hell, some of them are naked and playing with each other.
>All the guys look in disgust, but you look ahead and see one, Flash Sentry, fiddling with his babbydick to you slamming his ex girlfriend.
>"Ahh~ Impregnate my ass, Anon, make me have lots of your children!"
>Her tongue's rolled out and her speech is slurred, guess you really broke her.
>You don't know how many time's Sunset, or any other girl in the cafeteria came, for that matter, but it was definitely over 12.
>Experimenting so many different positions with Sunset, you ended up forgetting the amount of times you came too.
>At this point, Sunset's riding you reverse-cowgirl style, inches away from Flash.
>"Flash, Im sorry but Anon's cock is too good. It hits all my sweet spots just right. Ah, Im cumming again!"
>You grin at Flash, as he cries but continues to stroke his tiny dick.
>In the end, it's always the SICK KUNTS THAT WIN BRAH
>YEEEEEEE ZYZZ BRAHS 1 FLASH CUNTS NONE
>"You may have taken my first but I can never go back to your average penis again, Im addicted to this cock, ohh cumming!"
>"But its okay, you can still jerk off to me fucking Anon anyday you like. Well all be together again. Just like the before the Fall formal. Aahhh, cumming! cumming!"
>"Flash, do you still want to kiss me? I have Anon's cum all over my mouth too."
The world calls for cucks who post their NTR loving stories to be rekd you Grey wannabe cuckold motherfucker
We answer.
>>26448131
13/10 Bravo
>>26448131
I'm fucking giggling like a schoolgirl over here.
>>26448013
Thank god because someone started writing another revenge power fantasy.
>>26448187
>Revenge power fantasy
yeah enjoy watching tyrone fuck your wife you cuckold
>>26443085
>>26448013
>Her playful breath tickled his ear.
>He felt his body dormant, almost as if she was putting him under a spell.
>The memories of the past were flooding his head.
>The kisses, the hugs, the erotic nights.
>Those were indeed the most enjoyable moments and not even just for the sex.
>However, with the good, came the bad.
>Other things began to hit his mind like a brick.
>The discussions, the times she made fun of him or when she manipulated him.
>Just like she is doing right now.
>"Stop!" He said while pushing her away and stading up.
>"F-Flash?" She said, not knowing what just happened.
>"You're, you are doing it again, Su-... Shimmer. Playing with my feelings for you."
>"Your feelings?" She said, a smile trying to draw on her face.
>"But it's over, you hear me? It's over."
>He walked away, but Sunset catched his arm.
>"Wait, come back!"
>That was the breaking point.
>He was about to snap at her but was able to control himself.
>"You know what?!..." he sighed "No, stop. Shimmer, I don't want to talk to you ever again. I was worried about you, but you just showed me that you haven't changed a thing."
>"B-but-"
>"Enough, Shimmer! Don't talk to me ever again!"
>He forcefully pulled his arm back and walked away, not giving the girl a chance to answer.
>After walking for a couple of minutes to the restaurant with his friends, he could feel the tears swelling up in his throat.
>He almost let her control him like she used to do in the past.
>Flash hated that feeling of powerlessness, of being controlled like if he was a puppet.
>He thought that he finally got over her but, it was obvious she still knew how to push his buttons to make him do whatever she wanted.
>He regrets giving Sunset that kind of power over him.
>If she tried just a little harder, she could still convince him to do her whim.
>He hates to admit it, but he is still under her spell after all this time.
>>26448103
>>26448131
I'm not a cuck, though. It's a different kind of story than a simple smut story.
>>26448371
Not the writer but keep telling yourself that.
>MUH FRIENDZONE
>>26448131
KEKING EVERYONE IN SIGHT
SO DON'T TELL STORY
CAUSE STORY DOESN'T KNOW
>>26448346
>Finally, you see Flash sitting on the table all of you.
>You've been talking for a while now, having fun and messing around.
>However, you all notice that the guy is almost trembling.
>"Whoa man, what happened?" One of them asked "What did she do?"
>"No, nothing. Don't worry about it." He said, trying to hide his worried expression.
>"Come on, man, you know that you can trust us, alright?"
>He looked at all of you and, after thinking it for a while, he decided to tell you what happened.
>It was hard to believe, that she would do something like that.
>But by the way he acted, you could see that it really affected him.
>"Why did she do that?" You ask.
>"Because she used to get everything she wanted that way. By manipulating people into doing her wishes and whims." Flash answered, now more calm than before.
>"So she's the same cunt as before, eh? Just with a goodie two shoes skin." One of his friends said.
>"Come on, forget about her.We were having such a good time. This guy is cool. He's a dork, but he is cool."
>"Hey, I'm not a dork!" You say.
>"Who spends all of his nights in front of the computer?"
>"Me..." You finally said.
>"Ya man. Don't worry tho, you're still alright. Stick with us, we're going to do something this weekend, wanna come?"
>It was almost nightime when you all got out of the burger place.
>You don't remember the last time you had so much fun with other people.
>You were so busy helping Sunset with her problems that you completely forgot about having some fun for yourself.
>"Hey bro" Flash said before parting ways "The reason I told you all about what happened today was so you'd understand that she's not who she says she is." She thought for a moment for a better way to say it "I mean, old habits are very hard to die."
>You thank him and then return him.
>As you lay on your bed, staring at the ceiling, you still wonder if what he told you was true.
>Well, you'll think about that tomorrow.
>>26448728
>>"Hey, I'm not a dork!" You say.
You may not be a dork, but you are a cuck. : )
>>26448743
That word, I do not think it means what you think it means.
>>26448844
used in the context of 'marriage' mostly; more specifically; as a submissive husband to a dominant wife or spouse, girlfriend, etc.
Anon/Faggot13's writing is where Anon's submissive to a girl who is not even consenting to a relationship with him, but he is interested in one
that just boosts his cuckoldry level
he's submissive whilst she seeks to take other partners (AKA FLASH)
Faggot13 writes this cuck shit
therefore we do know so can you please go back to watching some Shane Diesel porn friend : )
>>26448346
>And now back to your regularly scheduled program
>>26448728
Do you realize that you are reaching levels of cuckoldry only previously attained by The Story Man?
Step 1 to getting girls: not being a cuck and/or beta
>>26448844
>>26448371
Stop replying to obvious bait.
>>26449228
>Bait
guess every social observation is bait.just like when you got diagnosed with aspergers
>>26448728
>Next day, while walking to school, you see Sunset Shimmer.
>Trying to ignore all the events that happened yesterday, you try and go say hello to Sunset.
>"Hey, how are you doing, Sunset?"
>She turns around and says hello in a very cold way.
>Still hurt by how she answered you yesterday, you decide it would be for the best to let her be.
>The day goes without any incident, until lunchbreak.
>You were going to sit besides the girls once again, but at the last minute, you decide that wouldn't be the best idea.
>So you go and look for the classroom Flash and his band were playing at.
>For once, you were glad to be eating with classmates.
>The banter this time was fun instead of hurtful.
>You felt that you could be a lot more open than with the girls.
>Thinking about it, you were never a big friend of them.
>They wouldn't even know your name even if you asked them about it.
>But these guys were a lot funnier.
>For once, you could actually answer their insults without feeling disrespectful.
>It seems like it would be a nice thing to do from now on.
>Still, you never stopped thinking of Sunset.
>Was she still angry with you and her friends?
>What about Flash, was she still thinking of him?
>Actually, are you still angry with him?
>He hasn't done anything but trying to help you.
>Maybe he's not the asshole you thought he was.
>He's actually really nice.
>"Hey guys" You say after thinking for a while "is it hard to play an instrument?"
>"Why? you want to play in our band?" One asks.
>"Well no, but I think it would be cool to learn playing the guitar or something like that."
>"It's more practice than anything" Flash said "After a while, you'll get the hang out of it, but you need to practice everyday."
>"In that case, would you mind teaching me?"
>>26449646
inb4 homolust
>>26449646
anon just needs to get over sunset, she's acting like a cunt
he needs new waifu
![all-the-homo_o_753389[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/v3bWEPO.jpg "all-the-homo_o_753389[1].jpg")
>>26449826
>>26449890
I'm pretty sure that's the point of this story.
The character starts as a whipped idiot, clinging to someone that just won't like him and will only use him/her, realizing that and getting over it.
The next step is to mature as a person, cut off that toxic part of their life and social circle and finding new friends as well as an actual waifu/husbando.
>>26449646
>>26449646
>anon makes new friends
>learn to play guitar
>spend great times with the band
>become bro with flash
>apologyze to flash for thinking he was an asshole
>all of them graduate
>anon and they guys goes to college
>all become professionals
>have succesful and joyfull lifes
>meanwhile susntes got preggers
>become an alcoholic
>works in a shitty bar as a waitress
>no one remember her
>the end
>>26450272
Good until the Sunset part. No need to mention her or that she had a bad life. Anon becoming a better person and having a good life is a great ending in itself. No need to try to have some karmic revenge or last minute potshots.
>>26450272
Love it.
10/10
>>26449646
go on
>>26449646
I remember you, you're the guy that wrote the green about Fluttershy's online friend didntcha?have you considered my previous proposal? to make something out of this?
>>26450788
yeah, I'm that guy.
>>26449646
>It's been a couple of months since you asked Flash to teach you how to play the guitar.
>Since then, you've been hanging around him and his friends.
>Well, I guess at this point you can call them your friends too.
>Luckily your breaks have never been as fun and your weekends are a lot more lively.
>However, on the inside, you still loved Sunset.
>Even after the way she treated you.
>Even after ignoring you the next day.
>Even after ingoring you, for these last two months.
>That's right, since you stopped trying to talk with her, she didn't even try to apologize for how she acted.
>You thought that you would test her, so you were going to let her start the conversations this time.
>Not even once, did she do it.
>Not at school, nor online.
>Many times you wanted to break that rule you made and go and say hello.
>But you were able to control yourself.
>Sometimes looking at your phone at her profile picture for many minutes a day, toying with the idea of calling her.
>Why wouldn't she call you? At least to say hello?
>It's not fair, you're the one that always cared for her, worried about her problems and listened to what she had to say.
>Why did you let her control you that way?
>But at least you found other people that would help you out of this situation.
>Thinking about your new friends, you decide to change your profile picture and add a dumb selfie you took with Flash and your new friends.
>Yeah, it feels a lot better than the one you had with Sunset.
>Looking at it now, it looks cold and embarrassing.
>After some playful banter on the comment section, you decide to finally go to sleep.
>You were happy that you were learning how to play the guitar, even if you sucked at it.
>It was a nice activity to share with your new friends.
>Something to keep your mind away from her.
>>26450788
I'll think about it. Gotta know how to write it after all.
>>26451203
>The next day, on your walk to school, someone touched your shoulder.
>As you turn back you're surprised that it was Sunset Shimmer.
>"Hey! How are you doing?"
>You're a little shocked that she suddenly spoke to you.
>Why would she do that?
>However, you were happy to see that this time, your crush started the conversation herself.
>"Oh hey! It's been a while. I'm doing fine!"
>After that you start talking.
>It was really nice, catching up with her.
>She even smiled like she used to when you two were together almost everyday.
>She laughed at your jokes and you enjoyed seeing her smile.
>Like old times and you were happy to be with her.
>"Say, I saw you changed your profile picture yesterday."
>"Uh? Oh yeah."
>"So you're friends with Flash? That's really nice to hear. You know, I was thinking that, maybe, you could invite me to hang with you guys. You know, since we haven't been able to talk with each other for a while."
>Oh.
>So that's why.
>That smile wasn't because she missed you.
>Or because she felt bad and wanted to compensate her actions.
>It was because she found a window to talk with Flash once again.
>That's all you were for her, a window, a tool to be used for other ends.
>For a split, yet eternal second, the girl you loved so much turned into something else.
>Physically she was the same.
>But you were seeing someone else.
>Someone that dissapointed you.
>A shell of something that you used to appreciate so much.
>Was she always like this?
>Listening to what Flash and his friends said, she was.
>Nothing but a manipulative girl.
>"...Are you ok?" She asked.
>"What? Oh yeah... What did you say?"
>"Don't be a dummy" she laughed "I said that if it was alright for me to hang around with you guys." She said while holding your arm.
>She never held your arm before.
>In fact, she moved away when you tried to touch her before.
>This time, however, it was you who was disgusted.
>"I'll ask them" you finally said.
>>26451430
fuckin sunset
go away
>>26451430
dammit sunset, u bitch.
>>26451430
IMAO the real beta here is Sunset Shimmer for not getting over flash
>>26451430
>"So that's what she said." You finally said.
>You were sitting in the classroom with your friends as usual.
>You were telling them what Sunset told to you and how it hurt you when you finally realized that she was using you all this whole time.
>First as a drain to complain about Flash and now as a proxy to get closer to him.
>"Ignore her." Flash finally said.
>"No, man, I need to tell her to fuck off." You said. Your other friends agreed with this statement.
>"No, you don't understand. You may think that this is the right move, to feel good with yourself, but trust me, she knows how to convince people."
>He nervously crossed his arms, remembering painful thoughts from the past.
>"The more you speak with her, the more you get entangled on her words. If you go and try to speak with her, she will slowly take you to where she'll be able to convince you."
>"But, what else should I do?"
>"Just ignore her. It's the only way to beat people like her."
>So that's what you did. For the next couple of weeks, you ignored Sunset Shimmer.
>Calls, texts, chats, everything.
>At school, you tried to be as cold as you could possibly be, without trying to be rude.
>Truthfully, this was a very difficult period.
>Because even after all she has done.
>You wanted to be with her.
>A small yet strong part in you still loved her and wanted to be with her for every single minute of your day.
>But you had to remember constantly that she would throw you away the moment she didn't need you.
>Every single moment that your phone rang, she spoke to you or wanted to hang out with you, you had to tell yourself over and over again.
>"She just plans to use me, she just plans to use me."
>After a while, however, she stopped trying to get closer to you.
>Even if there was the smallest of doubts that she was genuine, they all died when she stopped trying.
>Not even a sorry for all the trouble.
>She just let stopped trying, almost as if she was bored with you.
>>26451884
you gonna pastebin this?
>>26452275
Yeah, I always do it.
>>26452384
Good man.
>>26452384
Ur sexy
>>26452384
good to hear
>>26452384
wait,what? >>26451884 was the end?
>>26452856
Nobut it's close
>>26452972
If that's so, then...
MOAR PLZ!
>>26451884
>"It hurts, but you have to keep letting her go." Flash said.
>"I know, but it still hurts seeing her everyday sitting in the same classroom. Still, I'll keep working on it." You answer.
>"That's great to hear."
>"By the way, you know my side of the story, but has Shimmer tried to contact you again?"
>Flash sighed before answering.
>"Of course. She keeps trying to talk with people close to me to get to me. However, almost no one in my circle of friends or relatives really likes her."
>He then looked at the ceiling trying to get into a more comfortable position to think.
>"It's also hard for me, you know? She also has her strings on me and it's scary that she keeps trying to pull them back to her. Hehe, lucky for you, she isn't interested in you."
"I guess." You answer.
>There was an awkward pause between you two.
>"What are you going to do now?" you ask him.
>"For the time being, nothing. I'll just try and keep away from her. Who knows, maybe she'll stop one day."
>"And if she doesn't?"
>He went silent for a while.
>"I don't, I don't actually know. She may even be able to get what she wants." That last part saying it to himself more than to you.
>"But that's my problem now, don't worry about it. You're free from her grasp from now so be happy about it."
>The bell was about to ring, when you two grabbed your stuff to go back to class.
>"Thanks for teaching me to play guitar once again, you're a good teacher."
>"Yeah, sadly me being such a good teahcer has brought me way more trouble than I wanted." He joked. "Anyway, I'll see you later."
>After that, you went straight into your classroom and sat on your sit.
>Since you were the first on your classroom, you were able to see all your classmates slowly get inside.
>You saw Sunset get inside, crossing her gaze with yours, but ignoring it completely, as if she was looking at a wall.
>But you're finally free from her.
>And hopefully, you will never fall like this ever again.The End
>>26453163
Happy valentine's day, /mlp/.
>>26453163
I enjoyed it. A believable ending to all that mess.
7/10. Good show.
>>26451203
>It's been a couple of months since you asked Flash to teach you how to play the guitar.
>Guitar
>Not playing Saxophone masterrace
Pleb.
>>26453200
>>26453205
So any commentaries you'd like to make? I always like to try improving.
>>26453317
I mean, it was pretty good for a story, and I liked the progression of how Anon slowly goes from beta whipped fuccboi to someone with a bit of backbone. And I liked how he has his moments of weakness.
Only thing I can say is that this story has lots of points where you tell what happens than show how it goes down. This was a stumbling block for me when I started writing.
For example, the part where Anon acts cold towards Shimmer. Just a tiny snippet of how he would act towards her would have fleshed out their "relationship" a bit more and his transition into someone not going after a user. Like, does he just flat out ignore her, or answer with short answers to her questions to not give her a way into his head.
You could also have showed Shimmer's texts or her conversation with Anon. Give the reader something to show the distance between Anon and Sunset widening until she just gives up all together.
Other than that, it was a solid read and like I said, I enjoyed it. Take this critique with a grain of salt.
>>26453508
Alright, that sounds pretty fair. Thank you so much.
>>26453951
No problem m8.
Alright, I'll post the pastebin tomorrow, guys, after I fix some mistakes.either that or today
bump for those that haven't finished it yet
>>26451216
nah dont sweat it man, just do your thing.
Hope more writefag are more like you, yknow, exploring different stories and all that
>>26454170
waiting for it
>>26453317
I just wish there was a different ending for it but the bitter sweet feeling was good.
