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Death edition

Old thread: >>27670666

The original, read it first:
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EqD Side Story Compilation Post - March:
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PnP Document:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0ApDd-Pi_fJGZdGZiN0U0ajdtR3dTZ0FVQUh4cnhqenc

Smut Collection:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LBe5FGXd2Fgj0CRbz8HDZ6fDC11aRB9O-KfYxCODjGM

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ITT: What causes of death are more prevalent than pre-war, aside from fights? How many get to pass away from old age or similar ailments (like last thread did)?
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>>27755882
Aside from bullets, I suspect lots of disease causes relatively early death. Depending on where the wasteland ponies are, there's probably a threat of mines for scavengers.
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>>27755882
YOU FUCKING NIGGERS
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>>27755882
So making characters die feels kinda hard, and in my own case I played around with the idea of someone "dying" and then put into stasis soon after.

How would you explain them being revived several years later? Say between 5 and 15 years.

Personally I focused on high tech stuff, like a pod of some sort and a high tech faction discovering it.
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>>27755882
What are the ways raider clans with a bit of culture deal with their dead?

My canon for Wild Flower's clan is to bury them in the earth to reunite them with the land they come from. Ghouls are burned, because they are tainted and poisoned.

Also why did you guys let the thread die? Should I start writing again?
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>>27757316
He's going out on hug patrol
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>>27757326
Does he hug sleeping ponies and whisper nice things in their ears?
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>ywn fall asleep snuggling a socially awkward smiticorn mare
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Hey, /foe/lks. Where I can find active and live FoE roleplays and related? New to english-speaking community.
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>>27757766
If you're looking for Pen & Paper style RPs, you're prolly best advised to check out the Muny crowd.
Some of them might still hang around here.
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>>27757784
What is "Muny crowd" and where I can find them? Also, thanks for advice.
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>>27757805
Oh, okay, I found it.
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>>27757868
Cheers!
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>>27756405
Modern medical science can revive people who are "dead" after 3 minutes without aid, 15 minutes if you don't mind total brain death and needing to rebuild it we can do a chunk of this now.
Upwards of 7 hours for clinical death, stopped heart and brain below the points of life, with hypothermia treatment.

However, none of these work if the brain dies, only thing we have yet to counter.


Now since we have magic purple drank here, it can be argued as repairing brain tissue, as well as any other tissue, given it would have to mend nerves already or there are a lot numb and paralyzed pony parts out there.
So reasonably, if you can keep them on healing potions and then move them into your stasis pod, it could be argued they were healed in stasis as a method of allowing more time for healing.
The long length of the stasis stay could just come down to whoever runs the ReLife clinic requiring that the memory of the "dead" pony be forgotten to hide his work.
Might also provide some intrigue as the character has to adjust to a new life, while avoiding their old one.

Could have some touching moments of his baby girl being all grown up, never having been there for her, and all he can do is watch and cry at all those wasted years.
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>>27757940
We should all appreciate our brains a little more.
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>>27758028
All Enclave mares are best waifu.
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>>27758065
So you're a practicing necrophilliac then?
Not judging, just curious the draw.


The only good Enclave mare is a dead one, no matter the race.
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>>27758221
Enclave refugee mares don't deserve this treatment, they need love, safety, integration into wasteland society and also need to be reminded how clean, dainty and pretty they are.
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Wasn't Raider and Son supposed to be back?
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>>27758493
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>>27758520
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>>27758334
What they need are big brawly dirty griffons coming up through the clouds with their smoke belching noisy waifu nets, insulting and showing how pathetic all the pegastallions are, before the mares throw themselves begging for the knotted birb dick.

While in the background a few griffons are going for the pegastallions, much to the consternation of their wives.
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>>27758701
And some of them surely get to experience earth ponies and unicorns of both genders and all sorts of backgrounds!
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>>27758493
>>27758520
>>27758527

Wait, its back? Link?
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So what are good ways to make unique weapons, and better ways to describe them so they don't feel like FO4 tier, now with decals weapons?
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>>27759089
Give the weapon history or a tradition. Passed down from parent to child or a special gift that was never opened before the bombs fell.

Sometimes its just the little things that make a weapon more unique.
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>>27759227
>>27759089
You could also give it a customization that comes standard so to speak, like a silencer or a laser pointer, or some form of improved sights. Something small.
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So why aren't there more batpones in FOE/how should they be better integrated?
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>>27759723
Somber killed any chance that the bats can be a respectable race in FOE.

Not like they were one in the first place anyway
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>>27759723
because batponies are cancer no matter what the setting
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>>27759885
pretty much this.

The only 'canon' you can attach to batponies is that Luna's guards look like bats and there's really no explanation about why that is, whether it's a different race of pony or some kind of cosmetic effect.
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>>27760011
Yup, the Season 5 finale just added more questions. Like why does RD have bat wings, but doesn't have the tufted ears, bat eyes, and fangs while NMM's other guards do?
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>>27760011
>whether it's a different race of pony or some kind of cosmetic effect.
The writers confirmed ages ago that they're a separate race, but like >>27760101 says, the S5 finale had a lot of inconsistencies with regard to batpone RD.
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>>27760101
>>27760111
I don't seem to recall this detail and I watched that.
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>>27760118
Probably because you watched it during stream and didn't catch the tiny details. Here's showing the other guards have tufted ears/eyes while RD's eyes look normal.
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>>27760118
and next to other batpones for comparison:
>http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/mlp/images/1/12/Guards_see_Spike_disappeared_S5E26.png/revision/latest?cb=20151202050237
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>>27760118
The helmet RD wears gives her the impression of having the slit eyes. When she takes it off there's noticeable lenses in the helmet, sort of like contacts I assume.
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>>27760144
Still doesn't explain the ears though.
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>>27760157
maybe it was because they wanted to make RD more recognizable?
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>>27760175
She takes her helmet off though, so that's sort of a moot point.
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>>27760132
>>27760144
Dash also has batwings, which pretty much confirms that Luna's guards could be regular pegasi wearing enchanted armor.
>>27760111
>The writers confirmed ages ago that they're a separate race,
They may or may not exist, but everything about them so far is pure fanon made up by the fandom.

It'll be one weird fucking day if they actually make it canon that batponies are fanged, bloodsucking fruitlovers who worships mangoes and all that crap the fandom has made up.
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>>27760364
>It'll be one weird fucking day if they actually make it canon that batponies are fanged, bloodsucking fruitlovers who worships mangoes and all that crap the fandom has made up.
Ay, I never said that much was true. Just that they're supposed to be considered a separate pony race. This fandom does a lot of stupid autistic shit that pisses me off.
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>>27760364
Haven't watch but from the post in this thread. It appears Dash only has the batwings and this may be the reason why that the others may just be pegasi but looking closer, the ones with ear turfts also have different eyes. Could possible be another separate race.
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>>27759089
History, and/or some modification. Most of the real memorable unique weapons often seem to have a history of it's own. Like "This machine" "The Rat Slyer" or "Lucky" were they clearly have a history connected to the area they are found in.
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So what would it be like for a mare in Filly if one of the griffon guards decided to use her for sexual entertainment?

Would she be shunned by the other slaves for fear of joining her?
Be beaten and more for getting fucked on the job?

What would happen if she got pregnant?
With a hippogriff?

Would the griffon take the child to safety?
Abandon it to a life of slavery?
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>>27760822
I think it would all depend on where and what job the slave and the griffin are in. As for the hippogriff kid, likely they would be taken in by redeye, as he is most interested in protecting the next generation.

I peronaly plan to have this be something that comes in in a story I plan on making, where there as Brother and sister hippogriff, who father is a former Red eye merc. it's going to be a point of tension between that family, and a former red eye slave turned Sharif.
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I was thinking about reading this fic, but heard its dead/not updating anymore.

Any truth to that?
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>>27761918
Its writer tried to take on the cartels in order to become closer to his waifu.

Sadly he didn't make it.
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>>27761934
its writer a spiteful shit
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>>27761161
Does it end with them having to save the slave's life in a way of showing the magic of friendship?
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>>27761918
nah, the author just rereads the entirety of project horizons before posting every chapter
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>>27760822
He was five hundred feet up in the air, doing a lazy circle watch when he spotted the slave unicorn lower her autoaxe and stand unsteadily to peer at her work. Canting a wing, he spiraled lower looking the situation over. The other slavers were busy keeping to the walkways above the metal reclamation pits, masked faces uninterested in letting an uppity slave get a good swing with a work tool. A guard tower was nearby and empty of any fellow Talons, where he was unlikely to be disturbed.
Asver wasn’t a big griffon, strong, or even all that smart. What he was, was sneaky and cruel, skills that had served him well in this job. When his clutchmates had signed on as soldiers of fortune, they had sought glory and found only ruin and death. He had sought an easy life and joined Stern’s Guard, taking the enjoyable job of being a guard. And right now he was about to exercise one of those perks.
Gloss Wax stared unsteadily at the cuts she had been making in some prewar contraption, spots of darkness bouncing around her eyes from exhaustion. She hadn’t had much to eat, nor time to rest. Such was the typical lot of a slave in Fillydelphia. Taking a step back to try and steady herself, her stomach gave way to butterflies and she felt wind rushing by her ears. Throwing out her legs, she tried to brace for the fall, but found nothing. The ground simply was now several hooves beneath her. She yelps, her panicked motions finding several sharp pricks digging into her barrel. Looking up, she sees a face she dreads to see this close, an enforcer of Red Eye’s will, a Talon, taking her somewhere away.


>What happens next?
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>>27762607
Does this technically mean she has had nurse VR check her temperature with her magic sceptre?
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>>27762194
nope, somebody gets shot.
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bumpan with some fresh new Swedenpone

Hope you like it, Ham.
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>>27763992
Glorious...
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>>27763992
dats a big gun
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>>27764294
what if it's a smol horse, anon? ever think of that?
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>>27763992
Alloy's picturing her in that same pose, but with a towel on instead of the armor, in her personal sauna
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>>27764599
Would that be somewhere in the bowels of her ship?
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>>27765063
Probably somewhere near the boiler if it's a steam boat.
Let's hope she treats Alloy to some intimate one-on-one conversation down there after going for a swim together and toweling each other off!
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"Reminder to give ghoul mares some love" bump
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>>27763992
Malice makes Goldie an offer on behalf of her indecisive mollusk god.
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>>27763992
>You got Pokemon right Lil Blue?
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http://www.nexusmods.com/fallout4/mods/15699/?
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>>27762598
>rap
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>>27761918
I'm certain there's plans to continue it, but the author is also an artist so naturally he's busy in a lot of areas.
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>>27765563
What about a nice husky unicorn mare ghoul busy being escorted through the wasteland by a dwarfen Dashite?

He not having much energy and all too little stamina ends up frequently being carried by his charge while resting.
Only to when better try and scout to fulfill the contract.
Eventually his body can't take as much and he ends up spending more and more time being carried, before the ghoul reveals she simply wanted a travelling companion and he needn't have pushed himself so hard.
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>>27766034
That would be cute
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>>27763992
Now do an edit where you can see her tummy.
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>>27766711
So lewd!
That would be indecent exposure.
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>>27763992
Freaking love it. I keep seeing new details every time I bring it open again, like the Equestrian flag on the shelf.
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>>27766804
I'm glad you love it.

It was really the first time I really attempted to do "line of sight" work in my art. Everything in the pic is aligned in a way to draw your eyes onto Malice no matter where you look. Trying to give her a sense of power and ownership over the whole scene. Her pose was what I worked the longest on trying to figure out. I wanted to make her open and cocky. With a "try me" sort of look next to her massive gun I feel it really worked out in the end.

>>27766711
2lewd anon
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>>27766410
Ah but what if she takes him to a rest stop to let him recuperate?
And instead of it being some dive hole, its full of people enjoying themselves, listening to horrible karoke, and randomly talking with each other?

Tents are pitched on the grounds, and games of poker and drunken antics go on inside.
None of the typical bar hoodlums or place of seediness.

Then she reveals to him she owns the barn and its her way of making sure the apocalypse doesn't happen, by keeping a spark of the old world intact through everything.


Let's have something nice like that.
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>>27765880
Call me when I can turn dogmeat into a pony
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So would they actually have foals per FO:E genetics?
Given that there is no species mixing previously, would that lead to them having a barren womb and home?
Or would we get natural alicorns? Since Cadence is a pegasus and Shining a unicorn, it makes sense.
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I want to sing an uplifting song with Murky and co.

Namely this one: http://youtu.be/WlBiLNN1NhQ
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>>27767684
I want to see a bit of humor from Brim.

Where he baits a trap for Barb and his shades, then coats everything in the front of the cell with wonderglue, and sits nearby with a giant bag of flour, waiting for them to come in and get stuck.
At which point he makes them all truly ghosts and then ignores them as they whine for help from being stuck in the glue.
Since he can't see ghosts, he can't help them.
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>>27767530
I've considered genetics and such in my own ideas but I really don't know how to go about it.

I know there's the whole Xx Yy XY xy Xy xY some of that is probably wrong shit in there but all I can really think of is "Murky is the extreme example of recessive pegasi genes in the wasteland."
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>>27768390
There are more complex Punnet tables you can draw up with three or more alleles or multiple loci, but in reality, most traits are a complex result of the input of many genes. It's complicated enough that in most cases you can just do genetic inheritance as the plot demands.

>>27767530
Human populations have been separated for 10,000+ years and interbred just fine. Also Cadence is an alicorn, and alicorns are as the plot demands.
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>>27768457
Okay so if two Earth ponies bang and have a kid, how likely is that kid to be a unicorn considering that the male parent has a unicorn parent of their own?
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>>27768648
Odds against but possible? Anything more precise than that would probably need a real life template.
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>>27768747
so let's say it happens then, does the unicorn offspring of this pair of earth ponies have a more earth pony-like physique or less affluence with magic?
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>>27768788
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>>27768856
you're not being helpful.
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>>27768457
Cadence is listed as a pegasus in the TCG, then alicorn. Much like Twilight is a dildohead then an alicorn.
Metaphysics wise, this is what makes Flurry Heart so abnormal, since she is a born alicorn, as opposed to the apparent uplift type.
Given that misceganiation is likely, the divined answer is that a pegasus uplift alicorn with a unicorn is the proper trigger for a natural alicorn.
Theorizing further, the alicorn spell was developed by an elder unicorn to perhaps create a universal ambassador during the tribal times.
But as ponies were divided still, they may have been seen as outcasts, nothlits, and thus never fucked to realize the spells real purpose of pony unification.
Hell, maybe all alicorns make alocorn babies and the sisters have just been to prudish to fuck before.
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>>27763992
>ywn intimidate introverted blacksmiths from your throne in the bridge of an old ship, surrounded by medals, ammo boxes and weapons

why live
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>>27769303
okay I've started seeing >ywn everywhere now, when the fuck did this become a thing and what does it mean?
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>>27769358
it totally means yawn and it totally means anon wants to take a nap with the mentioned characters
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>>27769358
It means the anon wants to suicide.

Been dead before, strikes me as the literal worst decision to make.

Now excuse me, but I have a certain feathered freak to murder.
Ten bits and a cameo to the right guess.
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>>27769358
>ywn understand ywn
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>>27769358
>he isn't up to date on his meme acronyms
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>>27769428
>>27769399
>>27769379
>>27769371
I knew you guys were niggers but you too TDP? Assholes.
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>>27769463
>You will never ywn
I'd post that greentext of "you will never force twin mares to make out with each other" but desustorage archive is kill
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>>27769493
okay now I got it

>ywn stop thinking everyone in this thread is a fucking faggot
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I'm here with no computer, can only shitpost to maintain sanity.

Also trying to write snapshot anyway
>>27769463
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>>27769516
I'm not sure, I reckon it was very prevalent like around April 2014.
Just about a month or two before bellyfagging took off if I ain't mistaken.
I recall one anon being annoyed about its overuse/incorrect use in that aforementioned greentext
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>>27769542
yeah it was but I didn't see anyone shortening it.

And yes I remember that green, we were frolicking in the fields of rape and fetishes.
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>>27769916
Does that mean I should stop
>>27762598
>>27765923
Or continue for nostalgia sake?
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>>27769916
Those were fun times.
Wish they'd return. Oh the joys of discussing naughty and unspeakable things to do with (or rather, inflict on) the mares of the wasteland.
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Is it at all possible for us to make like, some sort of huge infographic with all the reasons why PH is bad? Something easy to read and digest, perhaps a little funny.

We have enough photoshop fags in this fanbase we might as well right?, its easier than having to post a list of reasons.
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>>27770270
This sounds like the thing I'd waste my time on fuc
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>>27770270
fucking christ, that screen cap gave me cancer

And yes, we REALLY do.
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>>27770270
>>27770383
We don't need to, we still have this thing.
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>>27770380
>>27770383
So I guess we just need to get a template or something, if anybody has like an actual graphics design degree for how to make something easy to read?

I'm thinking a graphic that goes "Before you read, consider the following?" sort of deal with different boxes with quotes and quips about how bad it is
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>>27770419
Not the nightmare edit version?
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>>27770424
well no, really what we should have done is just screen cap every time pic related happens.
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>>27760364
>>27760599
>>27760377
So then a proper batpony could be a pegasus that has been experimented on?

Perhaps some unicorn worshipping Nightmare Moon, believing she has taken over the world and wishes to serve in her court?
In the end cooking up some bullshit enchantment on the pegasus that can't seem to be dispelled and makes the "life sign" spells say she is some unknown race of batpony?
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>>27770466
noooo

There's a stable who listens to a radio signal that penetrates their vault walls and it's hosted by a cooky pony who thinks there are bat ponies on the moon and explains how to avoid dangers in the wasteland!

Years later, the broadcasts stop, and the stable dwellers decide to leave for the first time since closing the door to go find him.

Turns out he was a batpony.
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>>27767530

What, no, you dont get Alicorns by Pegasus and unicorn horizontal Tango. Why would you?
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>>27765923
Gloss Wax stared unsteadily at the cuts she had been making in some prewar contraption, spots of darkness bouncing around her eyes from exhaustion. She hadn’t had much to eat, nor time to rest. Such was the typical lot of a slave in Fillydelphia. Taking a step back to try and steady herself, her stomach gave way to butterflies and she felt wind rushing by her ears. Throwing out her legs, she tried to brace for the fall, but found nothing. The ground simply was now several hooves beneath her. She yelps, her panicked motions finding several sharp pricks digging into her barrel. Looking up, she sees a face she dreads to see this close, an enforcer of Red Eye’s will, a Talon, taking her somewhere away.
Wax whimpered in terror, her tail clutching tight to her belly as she saw the ground fall away to the sound of mighty wing beats. She had seen what happened to slaves taken by Talons. The lucky ones had only had to fall from the sky for it to all be over. The unlucky ones were sent back, alive, as examples. Mentally, she focused on what she had done. She tried to think of what she had done wrong, what had led her to being a criminal. Dreadfully, she wondered if she was going to be hauled to the Pit and left to die at the hooves of a better fighter.
Asver beats his wings slowly, headed for the abandoned guard tower. He was slow in his ascent, not so much of the weight of the scrawny slave he carried, as out of making sure nobody asked questions about his plans. Clenching his claws, he pulls the pony in toward his center, her struggles throwing him off balance. Headed to the wall, he decides to set the mood a bit, an evil despicable grin forming on his beak.
“Hey calm down. Keep squirming like that and I might be too tired to try more than one of your holes.”
He crows evilly, his cruel words rumbling through his breast and clearly into Wax’s ears.
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>>27771539
Gloss Wax was shivering in fright, her already damnable existence now getting worse as she saw the great wall falling down below her. She swallowed, nervously daring to hope she might be about to be released from Filly by the griffon. She had heard tales of ponies that had been released by the griffons, given a chance at freedom in exchange for being a hunting target. She had never met one that failed, she thought darkly. Seeing the tower come closer, she stammers trying to offer pleading excuses for any misconduct she may have made.
“Please, I didn’t mean to stop working, I was just inspecting where to cut.” She stammers nervously, “J-just wait, I’m sure my master will be willing to tak-to discipline me!” she mumbles out, mind panicking.
He laughs. He just starts laughing, his beak clattering and clacking, his belly fur rubbing the back of Gloss Wax’s head as he kept going at it. He laughed until he started spitting, a guttural hacking sound making Wax cringe.
“Discipline you. Oh you slaves can be so funny, just so damn funny. As if you merely needed the whapping on your beak from a mother’s wing to fall into line, no no, you’re not here to be disciplined.”
Asver let out a short screech and tucked his wings, descending toward the guard tower. Their speed picked up, diving for the tower. Asver pulled up shortly before the tower, his wings flared out as he let go of his toy. Wax tumbled through the air, her legs fumbling, trying to grasp air as she flipped over mid arc. She lit her horn, trying to come up with a spell that might save her from her doom. She was shocked to find stone meet the nape of her neck. The rest of her head met the stone floor of the guard tower as she skidded and rolled on the floor, disorienting the unicorn before she was stopped by a chunk of rough leather. Asver followed in after her, hind paws spreading her hind legs apart as his talons came to pin her forelegs above her head.


>choose your rapey time fun
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>>27771539
>>27771550
These names annoy me.
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>>27770424
Just remember that David wrote project horizons because he was painfully in love with an internet persona and thought he would outwrite the bible with Fanfiction.

What a tool.
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>>27755882
>>27756959
How many raider clans would eat their own dead? And I mean for reasons other than depravity.
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>ywn get intimate with a flustered forgehorse
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The door to Tenpony swings open, filling the insides with a blast of irradiated air as a steel covered pony clomps in, shaking bits of alicorn from his silver colored armor. "Ahh... could really go for a nice crusade right now!" he booms through his respirator, minigun removing the head of a marble statue as he turned to head for the café. Trotting up to the cafe counter and lifting his upper half to peer over, he brought it down, shattering the wood surface as he searched for a pony to serve him. "The might alicorn hunter has arrived, who will serve me!” Steelhooves called out, gazing around the room to see only a few pones cowering in a corner booth. They were not ready to help him on a crusade.
To a zebra lounging on a sofa by the fireplace, the clear view of the ranger pone's butt was simply too much for her! She props herself up from her slumber, and begins mixing a few small containers on her hooves. She slinks stealthily toward the hidden rump, tongue hanging cutely as she drools at the sight. "Must... have... pone butt-" she bites her tongue, realizing that had not only not been in rhyme, but might have given her away on her secret mission. Close now, she jumps forward, a hoof striking the cod plate of the blighted armor, and removes it entirely. For the first time in two centuries, clean air touches the green furred plot of the Canterlot ghoul.
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>>27775993
Applesnack yelps as the hoof pokes at his plot, hind legs leaving the ground as he blunders through a wall in surprise. Looking behind him through the cloud of dust, he sees a blushing Xenith drop the armor plate to the ground. "Umm... hello!" the striped enemy offers, looking the Applejack Ranger elder in the eyes, though her eyes keep looking back to the now exposed plot from time to time, enthralled by its untouched beauty! "S-Steelhooves, I uh think I found a way to get you out of the--" Xenith is silenced by Applesnack jumping his armored suit into the air, demolishing the café’s menu, plot sailing toward her, all so he could he could tackle her with his no longer shiny metal ass! The pair landed on a table and collapsed it against the floor, Xenith's muzzle inches from the plot she so coveted.
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>>27776002
"Heh, I’ve seen you check my ass out more than Pip after Gawd. You’ve been wanting a piece of this ever since we first met in Filly,” Steelhooves chuckles, as he wiggles his plot in Xenith’s face, crotch grinding lewdly across her belly. "Getting me out of this armor, well that’s the first good idea your kind has had in centuries," he admits. "You like sticking stuff in stallions' butts then?" he flicks his armored tail excitedly, the mighty booms as it pulverizes the floor making it hard to tell if he was mocking. Xenith just blushes harder, mouth opening wordlessly, unable to express her love for him. A great heat grows in her loins, a small fountain of femcum begins to spurt as she relishes the position. Applesnack reaches a hoof up, and undoes the latch on his helmet for the first time since the pink cloud. A mound of blonde hair cascades down, and with a quick flip of his head, the handsome mane is shown to his lover. Xenith just stares, eyes flicking between the object of her lust and the soft eyes of the stallion who owned it. She compromised, and with a soft squishing sound, began kissing and pushing her tongue into that soft ponut as she locked eyes with Applesnack.
"Good," Steelhooves nods, "You’ll really enjoy this then!" he raises his body off the mare before dropping, his gravity assisted plot smashing down onto Xenith’s muzzle, planting it deep in the spit lubed hole. The smell of horse manure is quickly made known, after all Steel Hooves hasn’t been able to use the bathroom in 200 years. Xenith didn't seem to protest, even as those lovely, roundish pulsed and gripped, inexorably dragging her in.
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>>27776010
"I rather like it too," Applesnack laughs, trying to explain the driving force that was tugging her head into his rear. "Soon I will wipe the striped menace from the land of Equestria and flush it clean!" Not that Xenith really needed to be told, her ears had gone flat against her head as she disappeared with a slick, muffled squelch. Her muzzle became lodged in warm, mushy filth, the thick turds filling her nostrils with their potent musk. Steelhooves seemed all too aware, as he gave a lurid glance to the table on ponies. One had revealed themselves as a Pegasus by her large wing boner. Smirking, he reached back and gave Xenith a hearty slap on the glyph mark with his hoof, pushing her in a bit deeper. "Don't you worry about getting dirty, by the way. Not gonna have much say in the matter when I let you back out!" Steelhooves yells into his barrel, biting his lip as his anus clenches around the zebra’s form, her legs now pinned tightly against her sides.
With some crushing squeezes and lustful moans, Applesnack manages to drag the enemy of Equestria the rest of the way in, hooves slipping in with an obscene slurping pop, left for the world to see through the now gaped ponut.. "Ahhh... right where traitorous shit like you belongs," Steelhooves smirks. With an ear paining clang, he marches over to where the zebra had been reclining and heaves himself down. The recliner explodes, its stuffing scattered across the ruined café as lounges on it. While he relaxed, Xenith stewed in the unpleasant warmth of his bowels, her whole body caked in horse muck, a tingling sensation spreading through it. She couldn't tell if she had been pulled into the stomach, or was simply becoming one with his shit, but the simple fact was she wouldn't last long, and she'd coming back out as something far less than herself soon.
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>>27776019
Steelhooves relaxes, and waits as the Pegasus comes over and plays with his now uncovered cock. Eventually they fall asleep together to the sound of Xenith’s moans, leaving his body to process the zebra through his sleep. He's woken by a large pressure in his lower gut, and gently removes the sleeping Pegasus. His dick is chased out by the fin earth pony seed he had planted in her womb, a sure sign she would bring a new soldier for Equestria into the world. "I thought you wanted to be in my butt Xenith,” Steelhooves taunts, clomping into the still standing bathroom and plants his green furred rump over the toilet, letting loose the traitor’s remains in a more appropriate form. Great logs of thick brown waste pour out, nary a speck of bone to be seen in them, Applesnack blushing with relief as the last zebra in Equestria’s remains pile up below, forming a nice mound which he joyously pisses on, feeling energized from the long victory. "At last, at long last, I have won! Victory to Equestria and glory to the sisters!” He shouts as he bounces out, the sweetness of victory giving a new leap to his steps as he goes back to the Pegasus he had claimed.
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>>27775561
did somebody say tummyrubs
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>>27776065
Yes!
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>>27776645
Better bump than the last one.

Why is she wearing a bridle?
Or is it a he with the visible hooves?
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>>27776686
That's Hired Gun, a mare, and that's her battle saddle bit.
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So a Stable Pony leaves his little hole in the ground.

He gets killed by raiders. Get it?

This has be Jokin' with Raiders.
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Which is something to care for more:
A unicorn slave barely able to stand, her body exhausted and coated in scars and fresh bleeding welts found staked to the side of a road by her collar.
Left to shiver and freeze in the one patch of possibly irradiated ditch water around.


OR


A Dashite who has hit the ground hard, wings broken and trailing on the ground.
Desperately running around trying to find shelter somewhere anywhere to make sense of their new world.

In the distance you hear the sound of a raider warband hunting horn. You will only have enough time to save two of the three. Attempting to save all three of you results in horrible grisly games from the raiders, followed by worse death. It is unlikely they will even use your remains for more than a pile of desecration.
Which do you help?
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>>27777405
the unicorn obviously. theyre worth more.
wheres the third option though?
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>>27777441
Get everyone killed by raiders in a horrible and grisly manner.
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>>27777405
The unicorn.

The gratitude at being saved makes them easier to manipulate. You could groom them to be fiercely loyal to their rescuer. Nurse them back to health, teach them to read, write, track, address wounds, use a weapon.

If you had the right resources, you could turn that scraggly little would-be corpse into a highly effective tool, eager to prove themselves to the figure they owe EVERYTHING to.
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punch bird bump - fuck you Commo start writing
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>>27777405
Dashite.

Much like >>27778233
The idea would be to create loyalty. Much easier as he has the symbol for a tramp stamp.

The advantage is that once the wings are healed, he could travel much more readily across the wasteland, a critical need.
Further fun is that with him, I have some independance of thought, while the slave will likely have to be directed constantly.
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What about setting the unicorn and pegasus free, while accepting our grisly death?
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>>27778993
This is Cummo's OC?
I find that very hard to believe.
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>>27780041
Not enough stories about the hero dying. Everyone wants to see their hero win when they write.
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>>27780114
You'd be surprised how many people hate downer endings, no matter how well done.
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>>27780108
it's Sambo from One of a Kind.

http://pastebin.com/cZQJVQMy
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Which would fit the magic meta more, time slow or super speed for a unicorn?
Could both exist as a rivalry?
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chapter 7 hapen
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/301900/7/fallout-equestria---make-love-not-war/let-the-sunshine-in
validate me pls
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>>27781028
Yay more sweaty fetish birb!
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>>27781122
I like panting sweaty exhausted pegamares.

Mostly speared on their brother's mighty tazicky sauce dripping crotch gyro.
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>>27781122
u no u luv it bb
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>>27781028
It's about damn time!
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>>27781510
Angry mothers are the true nightmare of the wasteland
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>>27781028
All that and Atom only now finds the joy of dissociative hallucinogens and the wonders of dehydration?

What's next, finding out that if she hooks her personal cooling unit up to a fan, she can play the Equestrian National Anthem with her lip flap farts?

A good breather chapter, you did well to show how Atom is a bit more mature.
Though I must question if its maturity or recognizing "just a prank bro" is a bad plan around trained and armed killers.

Overall, I find it funny for who the actual tribal is, and its not Atom.
Then again, I'm still holding out for her finding a used grease pan and a number of small wasteland critters that listen to her so she can pull off a William Wallace speech on the tarmac and a charge at the cantina.
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>>27781561
Indeed, especially if you somehow blunder between one and her foal(s). Even coddled Stablemare can be deadly.
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>>27770618
Where the fuck is this and how do I read it. Sounds amazing.
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>>27781749
it was a random post from an age ago in here
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>>27781762
Damn, I would love to read it.
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>>27780041
Could be quite fun, especially if its not done as a last stand/you shall not pass thing and instead we just hand over what supplies we have, take nothing and basically run to our doom, make them chase us until we slow and end up horribly dead.

And then the slave and the Dashite are all alone, the only one who cares about them having traded his life for their freedom.

Together they have to work and make sense of their new life, knowing it was paid for in blood.

The Dashite teaches the slave how to be free, the slave shows the tricks she has learned to survive to the Dashite to keep him alive.
Slowly they grow to rely on each other and become fast companions.

And then they have alicorn babies.
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So /foe/ gonna re-read the OG. Havent touched anything foe related since I got turned off from horizens.

So it's been years. But im ready to see if it's just as good as I remenber or if the magic died.

Fallout 4 was a dissapointment desu. Im hoping this will quench my thirst for more fallout since obsidian will never get the rights to another game.

For anyone who has re-read the original recently, is the cringe real or will the story help me power through it? I honestly dont remenber much.
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>>27782274
well I'm sure the story hasn't changed. Some things may be meh but just power through and focus on the small stuff.

FoE is a sandbox better than it is a story about a hero.
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>>27781766
it was basically what I said early, but with a little more detail and it was really clever and funny

Kinda reminds me of the whole, SATS during sex green and putting a pipbuck on your dick.
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Greaser with a revolver as a sidearm when?
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Kangaroo Pip bump
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So where exactly to start with this?
Well the beginning helps, but its actually a bit more than that.
Fuzzy is finally pulling together all the loose story bits and making them feed into each other.
This is quite good as a lot of them have been nagging for a while.

There's also finally a reason given for why Red Eye just doesn't shoot Shackles for his antics.
A combination of stuck on his own system being so great, and the fact that doing so /now/ would lead to a civil war as the Enclave invade.
This doesn't answer though why Red Eye didn't do it earlier. Particularly during the wonky time post mall when it would be a few questions and a quick memory orb to find out the truth.


So Murk is now choosing to be Protege's assistant.
This is a grievous job for the colt cuddler but where is the cuddles? follower as he must be the pack mule.
Which is funny as they do have an actual mule to use, but reject this idea.

Good news, Murky is being taught to read.
Finally somebody realizes that having a slave able to do their job is important.

Bad news, Murky's friends have started n underground rock band. Nobody has heard of them.

Worse news, the damn timelines make no sense.
Murky has gone back into the Fun Barn, via a hole present when he broke into it with Unity.
In fact the guards recognize him even.
But the Enclave haven't arrived, its been at least 4 days since Bucklyn Crossing on screen.
Seriously, the whole sense of time is stupid with it being basically a rushed nonstop thing based on the main fic events and the apparent lack of time passing in Murky.
Its getting really notable now that Mareipony is about to be balefired and thus the Enclave show up.
An event in itself that has some fun dating with respect to the story.

Really, had Khat left it at two years of doing stuff, things would have been great.

Supposedly the FO3 game is actually a couple weeks just to get from the vault to Purity/Rivet City.
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>>27784637
But really, time isn't what matters, its best to just ignore it due to the lack of dates.

The primary issue here is that the great game of politics has hit Filly as everyone jockies for the useless post Unity positions.
The ones interrupted by the assault on Filly and Celestia's cider powered stream of piss.
I mean the Twilight society megaspell.

This involves the rather practical move of just shooting Protege.
Unfortunately they wait and give him time to speak, rather than just plugging a bullet in him and calling it a day.
This is really an issue as there is no good reason not to just shoot Protege early on, since they're above and waiting.
Instead, its only to ensure Murky has time to save his master.

Regini also get some vengeance on a shade, blasting off his horn as payback for her wings.
Protoge has made a speech about protecting the weak and helpless, but then promptly shoots the shade for being in pain, rather than grilling him for info.
Regini correctly calls him out on this, and Red Eye himself drops by to point out Protoge is an idiot idealist.

The biggest issue in this chapter is that Murky's pipbuck randomly finds the shade's radio signal, but the shade's proper aren't running around with portable units.
So, who was radio?

We also find that the digging efforts from team whips and chains have already been paying off, bringing in fresh tech that tips the balance.
This is an issue as well, since in 200 years nobody has snagged this stuff?
I suppose it wouldn't be much of a story without it, but really using the ghouls under the crater as the source would have been a bit more inclusive.

On the upside, Murky drew a crazy conspiracy map of everything he has figured out now.
This should be fun when anyone sees it and can map what is really going on in Filly now.
Downside is that now Murky and Protege have no allies and have to work out what to do in life.
Big fun happy times ahead for them, but they still can't see why kids love Sugar Bombs.
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I still think that device from Murky sounds like a Kingdom Hearts plot device.
In fact, I think I'll call it the Namine Engine from now on.
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>>27784673
Background wise, this chapter doesn't have as much.
The stuff written is primarily in advancing the nature of the story proper.

We do however find Coral's son, Chirpy.
This brings up an excellent question as he is good enough with numbers to sort out the logistics hub on the first try.
If these kids are already this good and superior, why are they not being used now to improve the city?
The whole spiel of coming out into a finished city is rather daft when its pointed the kids could already make the city better now, with them getting the better city as they go, or the next gen gets an even better one.

Mostly it feels like Fuzzy had no idea what to do with the kids and Red Eye's plans, so he sort of squished them together and went for the best.
This doesnot hold up very well and raises more questions than just having the kids be at an age appropriate grade level and the adults being effective.

Truth being said, I think it would work better if Shackles had been moved up higher in the order and been a foil to Red Eye more than a background "Thanatos sits on his throne waiting" villain.
Essentially, making it so Shackles is a good answer to the why's of Filly being so stupid slave heavy, rather than industrializing proper.
Perhaps with some intrigue of sabotaging Red Eye's efforts to make a case for his slave centric world, and the issue of how to prove it.

Overall the writing is good, but I'm just noticing how empty it is compared to the other fics I'm going over.
I still feel the same amount of work has been done on chapters, even when chapters can be a quarter to a tenth the length of Fuzzy's.

>>27784697
Dude, spoilers.

He says without hiding and directly retelling the story.

But no I get the idea.
It makes it even worse in my point of the conspiracy, to keep something hidden away so long, in such an open area, with so many people wanting to backstab, blackmail, and replace each other, to keep this whole thing under wraps.
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>>27784526
Anon pls she's a wallaby.
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>>27781028
I demand a sketch of Atom lewdly exposing her belly for rubs.
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>>27784711
Especially when multiple people are doing shit that would get them executed or locked away for breaking Red Eye's laws.

I mean hiding important and key materials, breaking worker's laws, conspiring against the safety of Filly and slavers...

I kind of feel like after the Mall, Regini would have mentioned all to Stern, and when Stern shows up, there's a few AM shots and the whole issue is resolved per contract and Talon code.
Instead it just got allowed to fester too long, and that even more Shackles shouldn't have gotten so much power when so many would tell and check his power.
Even more so when he starts murdering workers, something Red Eye is supposed to be against.

I would like to hear from Fuzzy some of what lead him to think this way, if its got some good parts, or if it just sort of outgrew the bounds placed on it.

Also, if Shackles had collared murky at the meeting, and thus stolen an assistant, would Regini have been allowed to summarily execute him there?
That could have been a hilarious way to end it all.
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>>27783948
Speaking of wrenchpone I saw this pop on derpi the other day.
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>pic

>>27784719
So lewd!
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You have a chance to get a Murky charcoal drawing.

What do you get?

Granite lewds?
Mach getting a wedgie from Astral and wondering why he even has underwear?
Alloy smithing a Fisher cake decoration?
Dashite getting a knotty greeting from a hellhound?
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>>27786147
can we combine 2 and 4 or
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>>27781028
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>>27786147
>>27786154
Or Snap Roll giving Crafter a Sex Ed demonstration with with Ebb "volunteering" for demonstrations of the female body?
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>>27786223
true and accurate

Crumble is now pacman with ears
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>>27781028
>>27786223
>>27786319
I do so hope to see more of Crumble!
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>>27785021
cute
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>>27786223
are yo gonna draw more? I really like your style
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So woth Atom now being a druggie, what did the great glass radstag of booms tell her during her trip?
What is her spirit quest?
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>>27787127
Sometimes, a high is just a high.
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>>27787232
But Atom ain't fly.
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>>27788359
We're secretly debating out of Murky's earshot for Lewds of Granite or Steel Cherry from hom for Riddles pal
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*feedback*ops, haha. Keep those little fingers away... Ah, there we go. Just say it, right there, right there, go ahead. Ah, yay! Hi honey, listen...

I don't think Shaun and I need to tell you how great of a mother you are. But, we're going to anyway. You are kind, and loving, and funny, that's right, and patient. So patient, patience of a saint as your mother used to say.

Look, with Shaun and us all being home together it's been an amazing year but even so I know our best days are yet to come. There will be changes sure, things we'll need to adjust to. I'll rejoin the civilian workforce, you'll shake the dust off your law degree.

But everything we do no matter how hard, we do it for our family.

Now say goodbye Shaun. Bye bye, say bye bye.

Bye honey, we love you.
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>>27788503
So this is a thing. https://town.aggie.io/character
>>27769144
And there is a pip.
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Dance of Orthus guy, ewe need to proof read better, two many homophone typoes.

PS, brutal.

I'm assuming the Lurker scene was an attempted Blackjack on a tugboat?
It sure feels like it.
If you just wanted cybernetics, you do understand those are elective?
People can get them done because they want to, not because they need trauma to have perfect unyielding below 2 PSI metal added to them?

I do find your take on the Enclave having severe supply issues refreshing.
Too many forget that the original declared them as a scavenger society more akin to locust swarms than a group making stuff.

What intrigues me now is how much you intend to deal with the Enclave and their mission, versus whatever is going to come next.
You have so far given little as to the plot of your fic, and that is actually very bad.

While I get the pirates are involved, you have failed to actually make any method of bringing them in without an apparent and suddenly we're doing this now.
I would say you should have had an early section in Charon's Landing of one of the crew being a street preacher about the goddess they have and Echo dismissing them as the local loons.
Only to find out said loons have a military and some interest in something.
Perhaps also have them broadcast some hail about the pegasus and a taunting speech while they work over the docks to explain why they're important.

You failed to show, so its apt to feel jarring based on this.
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>>27789268
Yep, you literally made it "and this is now your quest"

Really dude?
Just really?


Still, better than PH.
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You know what would be funny?

A slave pulling a quick switch on the ownership papers, giving him ownership of the slaver instead of being a slave.
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>>27789516
don't know if that would work out. You'd have to consider outside forces willing to overlook the clerical error and make sure the slaver can't enforce ownership by force.
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>>27789644
Slave market trade checking papers.
With the sort of bureaucratic types who don't care, forms are in order.
So the slave is safe, if not protected on his recent purchase by the guards, at least so long as he can keep inside the gates.
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Discussion?
Discussion.

Lets talk about the weather, something that we all know it in Fallout itself is that the weather is base off the location to a degree. With it only now becoming dynamic in Fallout 4.

Now with FoE, we have the matter that we have constant cloud cover over all if not most of Equestria. Now I would imagine that over time, this might become harder and harder to hold across Equestria as time goes by. What could the possible weather be like on the outskirts and border regions. Would we see weather patterns that are natural or freaks of nature?

Now with the addition of radiation storms from Fo4, what could one expect to be in the wasteland? What would be the weather patterns?
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>>27789775
Constant uneding walls of lightning as the cloud layer discharges at its edges.

There is no life near the edge, just a horrible bright light that blinds, and closer a thunder that liquefies brains and combusts tissue.
The ground has long since been turned into a molten mass and the mountains reduced to splinters.
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>>27789829
I wouldn't think it would be that bad.
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>>27789842
Oh it makes a great picture background.
Griffons flock to it for their weddings like it Niagra Falls.

You can even buy food cooked by the lightning.
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>>27789268
>>27789367
Thanks for the feedback.

On the lurker seen, I don't quite understand what your talking about, but if I were going for PH, it would have happened to the MC, not her best friend, of which is removed from the story for an extended period of time.

As for the Enclave side story, It's more about the fact actual outsider have come to the metro after over 200 years of the residence thing everything beyond the island is dead.

It's the same with the Pirates. Why we don't see them early on is simply because they just landed on the island, the idea being that the MC just walked right into a cluster. I do have the street preacher idea in mind, but it's a down the road kind of thing.

But overall, thanks for the feedback. Trust me, it dose get better, but if you have issues with cybernetics, your ether going to love, or hate the story later on with a few characters. But I do my best to keep the story from flying off the handle like PH did. I see it as a lesson in hubris that I dare not fall into. well I hope not.
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>>27790094
So is Turnip a crustacean or an insect?
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>>27789858
Sounds retarded.
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>>27790135
Well zigga, add you're then.
Wow us with your rhyming ebonics.
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>>27790149
wrong post nigger.
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>>27790122
Crustacean, mostly a magically malformed pony shoe crab. It's touched upon in the Sparkle-Lurker one shot.
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>>27789775
I'm really not sure how to logically add any of that new FO4 stuff into FoE. It's really just, cool ideas that work if you think about it like anime and don't read into it too hard.
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>>27789775
I'd imagine that on the outskirts, far from the SPP towers, the cloud layer would grow thinner, have more gaps letting sunlight in. Maybe reduced amounts of rain, too, making for a more arid landscape.

I also like the idea of a malfunctioning tower creating strong winds or constant downpour around it.
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So what is the opinion of fics tying into each other and finishing up parts of each other?
Such as how Memories wrapped up Nosedive of Frozen Skies.
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Would a neutron spallation cannon meant to kill Steel Rangers through Brauhmstrung radiation be OP?
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>>27793240
Memories did whatnow?
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>>27793362
But anon, dead Steel Rangers are unresponsive cuddlers when you get the armor off them!
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>>27793406
Killed Frosty Winds and had her go on afterlife trial for being a murder pony protagonist.
She loses, and admits she is a bad pony.

Also Nosedive shows up and gets closure to his brief story bit as he waits his judgement.
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>>27793437
What if I just want to give their armour's cancer cancer?
The earth pony being turned into a weak jelly sack is just a plus.
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>>27793240
>Bad Pony afterlife trial
That gives me some ideas

>Little Pip dies and is sent on trial to determine if her actions as the Lightbringer were justified.
>Homage decides to be her attorney because Pip was unable to properly defend herself the first day of the trial.
>As the trial goes along, more evidence begins to mount against Homage herself as to all the bad things she did via circumstance.
>Slowly Homage starts not defending Pip, and more looking to defend herself, even if that means proving that Pip is worse than her.
>Final day of the trial. It all comes to a head and a single piece of evidence could either prove Littlepip is guilty, or prove her innocent.
>However, if she is proved innocent Homage knows it would mean she is doomed in her own trial.
>Her Machiavellian sensibilities are put to the test against the single shred of kindness left in her.
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>>27793659
Well if pip is already dead then Homage could just write her off now couldn't she?

The real kicker is when evidence is brought up that Homage played a similar role with other failed heroes of the wasteland.
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What is the 7th best story I should read?
I've already read the original, but all the suggested next ones are too long.

Am I supposed to feel bad that Littlepip is stuck in the capsule?
It kind of seems like the best thing would be for her to just let nature take its course and die now.
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>>27793406
It also has Outlaw with Mach and Astral showing up.
Basically, all the Enclave centric fics seem to have a portion where they go to a bar shortly before they start, and they all meet each other in one form or another.
I think its kind of neat to see cooperation like this, rather than named cities and trying not to step on another fic but making a winking acknowledgement.

I'd rather enjoy seeing more, perhaps of the survivors meeting at the bar one year later as a party to those who no longer can, and to what they have all been through.
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>>27794092
>all the suggested next ones are too long
Try Pink Eyes or Duck and Cover, both under 100k.
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>>27794092
>>27794169
Also Gardener
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So, what if rather than a pegasus being brought down to the Wasteland by being a Dashite or having won a sparkle cola drinking contest, the earth pony was taken up into the clouds to see what the state of the ponies in the wasteland were like.

Would she be able to whoo a pegastallion while stuck in an isolation chamber?
What would she find above the clouds to make her happy?
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>>27794260
They are gonna need to find a good Unicorn to cast the cloudwalking spell.
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>>27772226
Should I continue then?
Or is the thing ruined by the names?
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>>27794526
That's what talismans are for in FOE
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>>27794863
So perhaps a love plot of the pegastallion trying to get his earth mare a cloud walking talisman so she can see what his world is like.

With a chunk of the concept revolving around keeping her away from the authorities and avoiding them until she can make it safely groundside again.

With the end reveal that the experiment was a success, and the pegastallion was a part of it, but his love is real.
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>People even reading Dice's story after all his shilling

Guys giving a disobedient child positive attention only teaches them that misbehaving works.


Don't do that shit, Stop fraternising with the enemy, you did the same with Somber, don't do it with Dice.
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>>27795335
Its just me, and I missed this shilling.
All I have seen is his posts that he has posted a chapter.
I rather doubt that is shilling unless you wish to say our Lord and Saviour is a shill.
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>>27795386
>our Lord and Savior was a shill

Good times...
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>Its been a long day working on your rock farm.
>Its not much, barely a hectare, but then its what you made with your own earth pony gumption.
>Just as you finish a thin bit of soup you hear a knock at your door.
>How odd, bothe because you are so removed from everypony, but also that they had the courtesy to knock.
>You open the wood door to your stony cottage and peak out, looking for who could it be.
>Your eyes are drawn to a milk white unicorn with a lit horn by a flash of something in the air.
>You feel a sudden sharp heat on your throat and a small whine in the air.
"Oh just hello there roomy, thought I'd just come by to crash. How you doing?"
>The door is wrenched open and you are pushed back by her magic.
>Stunned, you roll back on the floor, something wet catching the underside of your chin.
>Reaching a hoof up, you realize its blood, your throat has been cut.
>Shaking you grab your throat desperately trying to keep your essence in.
"Huh not much of a talker are you? Oh my, it looks like some lucky stallion nicked their throat shaving. How kinky are you roomie?"

>what do?
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Which is better pone:

Mintstral or Oreoflanks?

Blackjack version:*?
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>>27795637
Gurgle a fuck you and go for our mouthgun.
We can at least make it a double murder.
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>>27796323
I want to know why you keep shoving shit down our throats.

#neversapphire
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>>27796876
Sapphire is best exenclave mare.
No other can compare.
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>>27797734
But who would want to compete at that tier, when you can determine who is best magicmare?
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>>27797902
That's easy anon.
Its clearly Homage.
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>>27797921
because her magic is best when she tells lies?
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>>27797921
It's easy, definitely. Easily forgepon.
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>>27799109
why is everything neuro touches so damn cute.
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>>27758028
>FoE:PH
Its shit.
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>>27799135
Should I read it over Dance of the Orthus?
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>>27800267

Dance is definitely better. Though, PH is worth a read at some point down the line.
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>>27799122
Well you see anon, the man is terminally depressed.
Having ass cancer metastasis to his face would be an improvement for him.
So all he can do is plead for help through cute pone pictures.
But day in day long, nobody does.
So he slowly sinks into greater depression, hoping to get help with cuter and cuter drawings.
All while wondering if Ireland can ever be free now.
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>>27800400
>Ireland
See now this makes me doubt everything you just said.
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>>27800415
Its not like a Scottish man wants the competition for the queen.
He wants Ireland gone so he can then get her attention, have her pimple poxxed face love him.
Only then, when love blooms on the field of papist bastard corpses and Neuro has been reverse sword knighted by the queen, only then will the depression lift and he shall draw boring plain scribble pones.
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>>27799122
I sold my soul to the devil to be able to draw cute
>>27800425
>>27800400
Anon Please, I'm not even depressed now.
Have a thing im hopefully going to wo
rk on and be a biweekly thing
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Homelands updated.
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>tfw literally everything updates before Loafu

RIP
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>>27800908
Wasteland Economics 2: Friedman's Revenge
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>>27800267
I have to say PH is better as a more classic style Fo:E story, up until after volume one, then it slowly starts to go off the rails, and then flys off if it after BJ's fist death.

DotO takes a different rout, and inspiration from Metro 2033.

Personally, if you have not already, read Pink Eye's, only start PH if your ready for disappointment after a few months of reading.

Also chech out the storys from Gamma Deekay and hahatimeforponies. Their stuff is always worth reading.
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>>27801045
>BJ's fist death
this says everything you need to know
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>>27801068
yep, should have left her in her grave.
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