Previous Thread: >>27677102
Succubus Anon, Lilith, and others stuff is good too.
drawing and writing encouraged!
Pastebins:
NotTheOriginal - http://pastebin.com/BLH9fRXY
Never - http://pastebin.com/PngTMrCJ
Leiffer - http://pastebin.com/u/Leiffer
Captain Conundrum - http://pastebin.com/Eu8XrdcL
Edgy demon story - http://pastebin.com/UfpZnyfz
AngryWino - http://pastebin.com/u/AngryWino
Summoner Trixie story - http://pastebin.com/Yteybzpn
Carpenter - http://pastebin.com/u/Thy_Carpenter (hiatus)
Disappointment - http://pastebin.com/JhDP831R
http://pastebin.com/jC35hfhM
(warning: starchy) http://pastebin.com/GhtVw67B
>>27682439
>9 replies last thread
I know you're trying Anon but...
I forgot to bump the thread and it died.
reposting to start new thread.
>>27667867
>You help Trixie and Rainbow Dash up and put Spike on your back.
>It looks like he passed out in all the excitement, but he still doesn’t look to good.
>You grab the grimoire as you all head upstairs.
>You place Spike on the couch and cover him with a blanket.
>Rainbow Dash is the first to speak up.
>”So what exactly happened to Twilight?”
“It’s just like she said, she spent too much time reading this thing and I guess that was enough for something to possess her.”
>”But you can help her, right?”
“Probably, though I’m not sure how to do it, but I know I can find the answer in here.”
>”Is that safe to do? I mean, Twilight read it for too long won’t something happen to you?”
“Nah, I’ve read it before, it doesn’t really affect me that way.”
>”Oh.”
>You flip open the grimoire and feel that familiar sensation as it takes hold of you and the information begins to flow.
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>Be Celestia.
>And you just felt a tremor of demonic magic.
>Has Anon broken the contract?
>No, that’s not possible; she is bound to the contract.
>Then what could be causing the disturbance.
>You get up, but before you can begin to investigate, somepony knocks on the door.
“Who is it?”
>A male voice speaks up from the other side, one of the guards most likely.
>”Twilight is here to see you your highness.”
>Twilight’s here?
>She usually lets you know when she’s coming by.
“Let her in.”
>The double doors to your room opens and one of golden plated guards let’s your faithful student in.
“Ah, Twilight, is everything alright? I just felt a tremor of dark magic and you usually tell me when you’re going to visit.”
>”That’s why I came here! I’ve been doing some research with Anon and she just showed me how to do long range teleportation, that’s probably what you felt. ”
>>27682455
should tyr not using such a shitty OC for the header.
>>27682457
>You just look at Twilight for a few moments just trying to take in all what she just said.
“Well I’m glad you’re being friendly with our…visitor, I don’t think you should get close to her and didn’t they something horrible to you?”
>Twilight blushes and looks down at her hooves.
>”Well yes they did, but both Trixie and Anon pledged to make up for what they did, so I made Anon let me do some experiments on her.”
>Experiments?
>You’re not sure you like the sound of that.
>But you trust Twilight, and Anon seemed to have a good temperament.
“Well then I’m glad everything seems to be working out then, but that can’t be the only thing you came here to talk to me about is it?”
>Twilight’s tone softens.
>”Yes there is, but I’d rather we sit down first, if that’s alright with you?”
“Of course it would.”
>You walk over to your bed and sit on the edge and have Twilight join you.
“What is it that you wanted to talk to me about?”
>Twilight sits on the bed and starts fiddling with her hooves.
>”Well with the nature of all the recent events, it got me thinking about some things.”
“And what would those things be?”
>Twilight keeps looking down and seems to get more nervous.
>”W-well, see it was, oh I don’t know if it’s a good idea if I tell you.
“That’s quite alright, you can tell me anything.”
>”Ok, but it might be better if show, but promise not to be upset, ok?”
“Of course I won’t be upset with you.”
>Unless she summoned another demon.
>”Ok, well here it goes.”
>Before you have a chance to react, Twilight kisses right on the lips.
>You’re eyes fly wide open in shock as Twilight lingers for a few moments before pulling away.
“T-Twilight, I…I don’t know what to say.”
>>27682468
>Twilight looks down in disappointment.
>”You don’t have to say anything; I knew this was a long shot.”
>Now you feel bad, but you really have no idea what to say.
>You reach out your hoof to comfort her.
>But you feel strange.
>There is numbness in your face that seems to be spreading quickly throughout your body.
>The feeling is so powerful that you can’t sit upright, and fall back onto the bed.
>Your breathing becomes shallow and you can’t move at all.
>Have you been…poisoned?
>You strain to look at Twilight and try to ask her to help you but all that comes out are quiet whimpers.
>Twilight crawls up next to you.
>Instead of concern on her face, she just smiles smugly at you.
how come it's not showing the previous two threads as dead?
>>27682660
I'm guessing it's because they are archived and not completely removed yet.
We should consider moving back to AiE, I guess.
>>27684182
I don't know man, while some of the greens could definitely fit, but if this was just AiE wouldn't the succubus/demon HAVE to be anon in demon form instead of just a demon horse that isn't anon?
Update time
>>27682476
>”Poisoned lipstick, you didn’t even notice I was wearing any, don’t worry it won’t kill you, you’ll just be paralyzed for an hour or so.”
>This can’t be happening.
>Twilight would never do something like this.
>Unless.
>The realization of what happens dawns on you.
>She notices the look of horror on your face as you figure it out.
>”So you probably realized that I’m not actually your little student, and that I’m just borrowing her body for now.”
>You struggle to move but the poison is very effective.
>She straddles your midsection and strokes your multi-colored mane.
>”Now I would love to have some fun with you and I’m sure you would too, but I’m in somewhat of a hurry and it would be pretty scandalous if someone walked in wouldn’t it?”
>You try to cast a spell, anything!
>But your horn barely even glows.
>”Now then, there’s something I need from you.”
>You can only look on with despair into the eyes that once belonged to your faithful student.
>”Sister I thought I-Twilight?! W-what are you two doing.”
>Luna! Thank goodness!
>Twilight glares at you for a moment then gets of you and puts on a façade of surprise.
>”Oh Luna, we were just uh, having a little, chat or something?”
>”A chat?”
>”Yup.”
>The possessed Twilight gives your sister the best guilty grin she can.
>This creature possessing her does a very convincing Twilight impression; you just hope your sister can see through it before it’s too late.
>”Right, well if this looked like what I think it was, it would be very bad if word of this got out.”
>”Oh yes of course! It would be quite scandalous, I don’t know what came over me, I didn’t even think about the repercussions of my actions.”
>”Yes, well as long as we are the only ones how know, it should be fine, now there is something that I wanted to talk to you about sister.”
>You lay on the bed motionless.
>>27685729
>”Come now sister, I know you’re embarrassed, but that’s no reason to lie around like that.”
>Oh Luna, what are you doing? How do you not see what’s happening.
>Twilight looks from you to Luna, beads of sweat rolling down her face.
>”Sister really, this awfully immature of you, but I guess I would pretty embarrassed if I were in a similar position; very well we can talk later.”
>Luna turns to leave.
>No! You have let her know somehow, even though you’re completely paralyzed, you have to try!
>You strain with all of your willpower and eek out one small word.
“Luna…”
>Luna looks back and raises an eyebrow.
>Twilight glares back down at you, a dark expression on her face.
>”Did you say something sister?”
>Luna turns around and comes closer.
>”Sister? Are you alright?”
>Luna comes closer, eyeing you and Twilight suspiciously.
>Come on Luna! Figure it out, please!
>Luna looks at you with scrutiny, and then looks to Twilight.
>”Twilight, what’s wrong with Celestia?”
>Twilight looks down at her hooves, hiding her face.
>Yes, now that imposter will ousted and Luna can save you both!
>But Twilight does something you weren’t expecting.
>”I’m sorry! Please don’t be mad, it was an accident!”
>Tears are in her eyes, as babbles out apologies.
>Luna is taken by surprise, just as you are.
>”What do you mean Twilight? What happened?”
>”I-I was reading up on alchemy and I created a potion I thought was a simple love potion, but it was actually a paralytic poison!”
>”Poison! You made poison and gave it to Celestia?”
>Luna rushes to you, her face etched with worry.
>”Y-yes, but it was an accident, but the poison only lasts an hour, so now real harm done, right?”
>>27685735
>You have to warn you sister somehow.
>You look up at Luna and try to motion at Twilight with your eyes.
>Luna gives a quizzical look, as you try to warn her.
>With Luna’s attention on you, she doesn’t see Twilight looking at the booth of you with an evil grin as a vial of strange liquid appears in her hooves via magic and daps some of it on her lips.
>Twilight creeps closer to your sister; you begin franticly moving your eyes in a desperate attempt to warn her.
>Luna finally gets the message and turns to look at Twilight.
>But Twilight catches her of guard with a quick kiss.
>Luna pulls away, blushing and shocked.
>”T-Twiight what is the meaning…of this…
>You watch in disbelief as your sister and only hope falls prey to the imposter.
>She falls beside you, a look of shock frozen on her face.
>”HA HA HA, I can’t believe it, I was able to poison the both of you! This makes things much easier.”
http://pastebin.com/Yteybzpn
Bomp
Bump. Damnit
>>27682439
OP is missing thr link for that long Lilith fic from awhile back. Mareholic I think. Hot shit. Wish Zajice drew more stuff too.
>>27686931
I'm giving it all she's got captain!
>>27687917
I've been talking to Zajice on Derpi, and he's mentioned wanting to come back at some point.
I only hope he follows through with that.
bump
>>27689180
bump
>>27689837
bamp
>>27688507
I'm not sure Zajice is even alive lol. Seems super silent, though his tumblr does have updates.
Bump to stay alive
Bump with some silly doodles
Just a little something had floating around that I might continue later.
>Be Twilight.
>And you just found a very ancient tome in the archives at canterlot.
>It didn’t have a title, but it’s filled with all sorts of summoning spells.
>A lot of the summons are pretty scary, but one in particular actually seems kind of nice.
>The description says it will summon a being that will fulfil your desires.
>Must be like a genie or something that grants wishes!
>Let’s see, you need the summoning circle, check.
>Various other reagents, check.
>And…a pint of blood!
>That’s a lot!
>You don’t know where you could get that much and you don’t like the idea of using your own.
>Maybe you can just use a little less and it’ll still work.
>Yeah, that’ll defiantly work.
>Summoning circle prepared, reagents layed out, you prick yourself with a needle and let a few drops of blood land on the circle.
>And recite the incantation.
>The circle glows a furious red and the reagents are consumed in small gout of hellfire.
>Eerie mist pours from the circle and you can barely make out the outline of figure through the dense haze.
>”Who dares summon me?”
>A rather young sounding voice proclaims.
>That sounded like a filly.
>The mist dissipates and in the center of the circle is the cutest little demon you’ve ever seen.
>She has small curled horns, tiny little bat wings, and tail with a heart shaped tip.
>”Why have you summoned me mortal and…why are you so tall?”
>The little monster looks at you for a second then looks at herself.
>”W-what is this?! Why am I so small and cute!? I’m supposed to be tall, terrifying and sexy! Not cute!”
>You can’t but giggle at her little outburst.
>She looks back to you and glares.
>”You, mortal! You summoned me correct?”
“Oh um yes.”
>”Then did you perform the ritual correctly?”
”Well for the most part yes.”
>>27692308
>Her glare intensifies.
>”What did you do.”
“I may have used a little less blood then what the book said.”
>”What?! Why didn’t you do what it said? it was written that way for a reason!
“Um sorry?”
>She just stamps her little hooves in frustration and puffs of smoke come out her nostrils.
>”I demand recompense! You summoned me in such a form now you have make up for it.”
bumpony
Bump to stay alive 2:BUMP HARDER!!¡
Bomp
bump for the bump god
If you're gonna make a thread and just only bump it for a couple days straight, you should probably just stop with the threads in general.
>>27696718
We've had content every day for the last couple of days so piss off faggot. Don't come here and whine like a bitch. Hide the thread if you don't like it.
>>27697823
a general can't sustain itself very long if only one writefag posts. If you really want this to last why don't you post content instead of bitching at someone trying to give advice?
>>27689180
Is this bump image someone's OC or just another version of Lilith? Either way I like it and want to know if there's more.
Update time
>>27685740
>Twilight creeps upon you and Luna, a malevolent glint in her eye.
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>Be Anon.
>And you may just figured out a way to fix this mess.
>Although it’s going to be difficult to pull off.
>And you’re not sure if it will work the way it’s supposed to.
“Alright, I’m going to help Twilight, she might have already have gotten to Celestia, so you two should probably stay here.”
>Trixie and Rainbow Dash look at you with incredulity.
>”No way! Twilight’s my friend and I have to help.”
>”And you’re Trixie’s friend, Trixie would be ashamed is she just sat around and did nothing.”
>You look at Trixie for a moment.
“I didn’t think you’d be so eager to help Twilight, the whole reason for bringing me here was to get back at her wasn’t it?”
>Trixie blushes slightly.
>”Yes well, Trixie has had a change of heart, and she still needs to…nevermind.”
“Aww Trixie, that’s sweet, I’d almost think you have feelings for us.”
>Trixie sticks her nose in the air and ‘hmphs’ while blushing just a little harder.
“Ok then if you want to come then fine, but if you two are coming, it wouldn’t hurt to bring the Elements and their bearers.”
>”But they won’t work unless we have Twilight, it’s all or nothing with the Elements.”
“So you’re saying you and you’re friends are useless without them?”
>”No! I’ll show you what we can do!”
“Good I’m counting on it.”
>With that Rainbow Dash shoots out the window.
>Trixie turns to you, legitimate concern on her face.
>”Do you think they’ll actually be able to help?”
“I’m not sure, but at least this way I’ll be able deal with Twilight without letting her getting her hooves on more souls.”
>”And what about Trixie?
“You don’t have to worry, remember? You signed your soul off to me and I take good care of my things.”
>>27699381
>Trixie gives you a cheeky smile.
>”Oh, is that all Trixie is to you, an object?”
“No, but you’re still mine, now let’s go, we have to go save your favorite pony.”
>”She’s not-oh fine let’s go.”
>Trixie hops on your back and take off into the sky towards Canterlot, at high speeds.
>Trixie clings on to you, clearly not expecting you to go so fast.
>”Warn Trixie next time you decide to shoot off like that while she’s on your back.”
>You just smile in response and carry on.
>You and Trixie soar through the air, making good time.
>It’s only a few moments before the castle comes into view.
>But it’s not the picturesque fairy tale castle that the books describe.
>Dark clouds hang above and dark murky magical aura surrounds most of the castle.
“It looks like Twilight already got to the Princesses.”
>”Do you think you can take on the power of the both of them?”
“I don’t have to, I just have to catch Twilight of guard and perform the ritual as quickly as possible.”
>”How do you plan to do that, and what do you even do in the ritual?”
“Don’t worry, I have a plan.”
>”Oh that makes Trixie feel much better.”
“Sarcasm isn’t very nice you know.”
>Trixie goes to retort but changes her mind as the two of land in front of obfuscated castle.
>You would have expected there to be guards or something here, but the place is deserted.
>”Can we even make it inside?”
“Some silly little mist isn’t going to stop me.”
>You’re horns glow red and a transparent, shimmering shield surrounds you and Trixie.
>With the barrier in place you and Trixie plunge into the darkness.
>>27692103
why isn't she hovering if she wants to lick the corpse?
or is she just using that forked tongue to collect scents from the air like a snake?
>>27684182
>We should consider moving back to AiE, I guess.
I'm with
>>27684934
on this.
>>27699381
>>27685740
shit's getting real.
>>27692308
I'm just imagining this succubus with the voice of the Engineer from TF2 when he's wearing his "the fly" Halloween costume.
>>27701525
>why isn't she hovering if she wants to lick the corpse?
What corpse? No corpses in there. The pony is perfectly alive, just a little bit tiredand nailed.
But as for the topic, hovering looks kinda bad, unless its an animation. I planned to place her on hind legs and move cross higher.
>>27702080
Thank you for explaining.
>>27699392
>”Warn Trixie next time you decide to shoot off like that while she’s on your back.”
HOHOHO
>>27682439
Whoever makes the next thread,
Please update the pastebin link list for the OP post.
I think the last time someone added to the list was 1 or 2 months ago and there have been more pastebined stories on this thread since then.
>>27692103
Cool.
>>27703734
>>27704053
What's wrong with the fact, that instead of just "typing" bump I also drew that silly related? At least better than being bump general.
Gosh.
>>27682439
Hey Disappointment (and any other writefags who this may apply to)
Please add "next chapter" links to your stories.
like in this edited together example.
It makes it a lot easier for readers to navigate.
>>27704130
>What's wrong with the fact, that instead of just "typing" bump I also drew that silly related?
Nothing wrong with it dude. In fact I thought it was cool, that's why I said so.
Please do more in the future. It is appreciated. Sorry for the confusion.
>>27698847
Advice? Nothing of what was said were any type of advice. This thread is doing fine, may be a bit slow, but still fine. Now piss off, bitch.
>>27682439
Nice OP image.
Thanks to whoever drew it.
I got inspired.
>>27705075
alt
>>27705082
nother alt
>>27705075
>>27705082
>>27705131
>>27705179
That's pretty good!
But if you're looking for more Lilith his tumblr is fairly acitve and that's where I got that image, although Zajice himself hasn't produced much content lately.
http://zajice.tumblr.com/
Update time.
>>27699392
>As soon as you enter the inky blackness, you suddenly feel a great weight pressing down on you.
>It’s as if a mountain had just been placed on your shoulders!
>Your barrier falters under the sudden pressure.
>Trixie grips you tighter, as she sees you struggle.
>But your resolve is strong and you strengthen the barrier and press on.
>You grit teeth under the strain and sweat rolls down you face, but you keep going.
>Every step is a task and your legs feel weak.
>But as you push through the darkness seems to be dwindling and you can see light.
>You give a final push and burst through the dark shroud.
>You stumble forward once you’re free, the sudden decrease in pressure throwing you off.
>You release the barrier and fall back on your rear, breathing heavily.
>Trixie is at your side.
>”Are you alright? You looked like you were really struggling back there.”
“I’m *huff* fine just gotta catch my breath.”
>As you catch your breath you take in your surroundings.
>You appear to be in the main entrance hall to the castle.
>Tapestry’s depicting The Princess’s, Discord, Nightmare Moon and many other things line the walls.
>There also large stain glass windows that would look beautiful if the sun was shining through them, but they only cast dull shadows now.
>You take one more deep breath and get up on your hooves.
>”Wait! Are you sure you’re fine? You only rested for a few seconds.”
“Of course I’m fine, a little fog won’t stop me, I’m as strong as ever, see.”
You flair your wings and flex your muscles.
>You feel your body ripple with power.
>Even though Trixie has seen you flaunt your power first hand, she still seems a little doubtful.
>”Tr-I know you’re strong, I’ve even seen you sleep off mortal wounds, but this thing that has Twilight and probably the Princesses now isn’t from this world, and I’m just worried is all.”
>You look down at her and she looks up at you with worry.
>>27705387
“I know Trixie, but you’re going to have to trust me, I’ll be fine.”
>”Promise Trixie; promise me you won’t get in over your head.”
>Even though you’re supposed to be some monster, this pony cares that much about you?
>You haven’t even known her that long.
>But still, her words warm your heart.
>You smile warmly and hug her.
“Of course I promise, but you have to promise me the same thing.”
>She hugs you back tightly.
>”Of course Trixie will, she’s not so selfish as only to make you promise.”
“Thanks, Trixie.”
>The moment only lasts a few seconds, till its cut short by a familiar wicked laugh.
>”Aww, how sweet! It almost makes me sick to my stomach; I will enjoy breaking the both of you!”
>You jump in front of Trixie looking everywhere for the source of the voice, but it seems to be coming from all around you.
>”But I am impressed you made it through my barrier so easily, not many beings in this world or ours can do that, but enough of this, I’m not one to hide, at least not now that I have this power!”
>More laughter, but you notice it sounds a little less like Twilight…
>”I’ll be waiting in the throne room, if you think you stand a chance! But I’d be willing to hear your pleas for mercy~.”
>You snort at her suggestion, small puffs of flame coming out.
>”Oh, did I get you all flustered? Well come and face me then!”
>Her cackle fills the hall, and fades into dark corners of the corridor ahead.
“Ok I’ve heard enough, let’s go!”
>Trixie nods and follows you as you both gallop down the hall to face Twilight.Now we're getting close to the climax and I had some lewd planed, but I almost feel as though it might mess with the current mood. I'm still going to write it the way I think is best, just looking for some feedback.
>>27705420
Battlefucking?
>>27705420
>>27705483
>combat fucking
>with assault tentaclesand tongues
I can't wait
>>27705483
more likeexorcismfucking?I don't man I haven't written it yet.
>>27705307
so wait. did she like, put lipstick in, then put lipstick on her sopping we lower lips, so that she could then do your lips, and in the process spread her scent onto your lips, which are just under your nose so that you can't keep but smelling her?
That's pretty involved.
I like it.
>>27705307
Thank you. I already sent them to his tumblr along with a copy with no text in case he wants to have fun with the base image or post it for others to put things in.
>>27705420
why am I suddenly jonesing for spaghetti and red sauce?
Oh god, the memes are infecting my subconscious.
Anyway. Please continue.
beep
>>27706461
boop
>>27707325
Booop
we need some succubus pony creepy pasta.
Like we've had lots of comedy and sex, and even some romance, adventure, and deep stuff that makes you think.
But only one or two honest to god, "o shit I'm scared", stories.
>>27705307
She stores lipstick in her snatch?
>>27705307
Has that been finished yet? It's been about three weeks.
>>27708742
This is so old and boring. Who the hell does want to hear about evil demons? Purely evil character will either be too shallow or woun't have reason to be evil in the world such as Equestria.
Remember, even Chrysalis, imho the most interesting villain, realy lacks motivation as to try to capture Equestria, instead of just saying "you know, we feed on love, can someone pls love us? you gonna like us, we will do our best"
>>27709839
I dunno man. The interpretations of the effects of changeling love feeding the fandom comes up with can be pretty horrifying.
>>27710497
>the fandom comes up
And I'm speaking about what only was mentioned in the series.
>>27711427
Oh ok. I didn't realize that.
People talk about fandom stuff a lot so if you don't specify that you are talking just about things in the series it can lead to confusion.
>>27704277
here is some stuff to add
Trixie x Demon Pony MIGHTY_SHAZBOT - http://pastebin.com/Yteybzpn
A Servant to Succubi Wiggy(chuck?) - http://pastebin.com/d5qBDXmB
>>27708224
Boooop
>>27712690
Booooop
Update time
>>27705420
>As you both run down the corridor you notice something unsettling.
>The tapestry’s and stained glass windows all start to gradually change as you go.
>They go from depictions of Equestrias legends, to looking like the one you saw in your dream after you were stung by the manticore.
>The memory of the dream is unnerving, but you push it from your mind and move on.
>The white marble floor is affected as well.
>Fading from the pristine white and slowly becoming dark as if it were being choked out by some corrupting entity.
>It’s not long till the corridor is completely different place.
>Black marble floors, tapestries of hellish, otherworldly places and braziers of purple flames.
>It feels familiar, not just because of the dream.
>You don’t know how to describe it.
>It just feels familiar, like you’ve seen things before.
>You shake your head and clear it of these thoughts.
>You should be thinking on the fight to come!
>Not reminiscing on memories you no longer have.
>Thankfully you don’t have to think about it anymore, as you come upon a large set of double doors.
>You take a breath and put a hoof on each door and push.
>They’re heavy and open slowly, making a muffled scrapping noise.
>”Ah, I’m so glad you two could make it.”
>There sits Twilight on the throne, with a golden crown on her head.
>Celestia and Luna lay at her hooves.
>Both of them seem pale, their manes limp and lifeless, devoid of color.
>The Throne room has received a similar treatment as the rest of the castle.
“Stay behind me.”
>Trixie nods and does as you say.
>You walk forward, readying yourself for a fight.
>As you get closer, you notice Twilight herself looks different.
>Glowing purple veins run through her and her eyes glow a dull purple as well.
>It’s like she has too much magic inside her and is about to burst.
>”Like what I’ve done with the place? Much better than all that white and bright lights, don’t you think so my pets?”
>>27714388
>She strokes Celestia’s mane like one would pet a dog.
>Celestia leans into her hoof, a dopey look on her face.
>”Mmm, yes it is, whatever you think is best.”
>Twilight giggles at her reaction.
>”Ah, this is nice, why don’t you join them? They look pretty happy don’t they?”
“I don’t think being a lifeless husk would be very enjoyable.”
>”Oh don’t worry; I’m not going to that to you, just your little friend there. No I haven’t different plans for you; well your body that is, see this one has reached its limit. I need a body that can stomach the power I crave and yours can do that.”
“Do you think I’d just give it to you?”
>”No, and I know I can’t convince you, but do you think you honestly can defeat me? I’ve taken the power of two Alicorns and the entire Royal Guard! You have power, yes, but nowhere near what you could have, your unwilling ness to consume the souls of this land will be your undoing!”
>Twilight leaps from the throne and fires a large beam of chaotic purple magic at you.
>You react quickly and throw a barrier in front of you and Trixie.
>The beam clashes with your barrier, causing a spectacular explosion of power.
>She’s strong! It feels like your holding back an avalanche!
>The beam dissipates and you retaliate immediately.
>You leap forward and attempt to grab her, but she fires a quick blast at you.
>It strikes you in the chest, halting your charge.
>It doesn’t hurt much, but there is a small burn mark and smoke rises from the wound.
>But it gives you an idea.
>You’ve wanted to try this for a while.
>You take a deep breath through your nostrils, power and heat gathering in your chest.
>Twilight eyes you suspiciously as breath in.
>When you’ve just about reached your limit, you open your mouth and spew a gout of reddish flame.
>>27714398
>It takes Twilight by surprise and barely throws a barrier of her own up just in time.
>The flames flow over her shield, like water on rocks.
>You take advantage of the situation and leap forward again, this time the flames blocking you from view.
>Twilight doesn’t see you charge and doesn’t move to dodge.
>You slam into her shield, horns first with a resounding crack.
>Her shield shatters and you grab her with your hooves.
>You grip her by her midsection and toss her like a sack of potatoes.
>She crash lands in the middle of the room and tumbles on the ground.
>Twilight picks herself up, brow furrowed.
>She’s visibly upset that your trick worked.
>But you have her right where you want her.
“Activate the circle Trixie!”
>Before Twilight can react, an intricate circle of runes light up with a blueish hue underneath her hooves.
>Her body goes rigid as the magic of the circle takes effect.
>”W-what?! When did you draw this! How!?”
“I didn’t draw it, she did.”
>You motion to Trixie, who has particularly smug grin on her face.
“While you were busy fighting me, Trixie drew that containment circle, and well, you know the rest.”
>Twilight growls in frustration.
>”Do you honestly think she hold me here all by herself?”
“No, I just needed her to hold you still for a few seconds.”
>Your horns glow, and several red glowing shackles burst from the floor and clamp onto Twilight’s legs, effectively immobilizing her.
>But you’re not done; you materialize a small circular ring with a red gem inlaid in it.
>You levitate it over to Twilight and slip it down her horn.
>Twilight thrashes at her bonds and attempts to blast you with magic.
>But the chains hold tight and her horn emits little more than sparks.
>”How dare you trick me like this!? I will make you suffer when I get free!”
>>27714398
“You’re pretty annoying when your all tied up, lets fix that~.”
>You materialize a ball gag with a leather strap, and give her a wink.
>”Do not put that thing on me I will-mph!”
>You silence her by sticking the gag in her mouth and fasten it behind her head.
>Twilight tries to curse you through the gag, but it just comes out as muffled gibberish.
“You know, I thought this was going to be a lot harder, but I guess I overestimated you.”
>Twilight growls at your insult.
“Oh well, and I was looking forward to a good fight. Now back to what I said earlier, about things being hard~.”
>You’re horns glow again and you feel a warm, tingling sensation in your nether region.
>Twilights eyes go wide and she stops mumbling as her eyes gaze upon your throbbing horsecock.
POW PADA POW!
LOW TO THE GROUND!
KNIVES AND MARES WITH PILLS!
I wanna see a continuation of NotTheOriginal's story, that shit was soo juicy and actually a general good read if he is either lurking and or if someone knows him, then tell him he does good work.
>>27714414
I was actually kinda hoping Twilight would do the raping, and then maybe have it turned around, won't this be considered breaking the contract made with Celestia?
>>27714414
>>You’re horns glow again
Come on, I know you can do better than this.
>>27717137
Shit, I actually forgot about that and I even had a whole thing planned around the contract conflicting with fighting her, guess I got too caught up with getting updates out and made some major plot holes. I kinda want to scrap the last few updates and rewrite what I had planned and just make the whole thing a little less shitty and put more effort into descriptions like what >>27717185 noted.
So what do guys think? Rewrite with more quality and a little more coherent with story, or just keep going, I'm honestly fine with either and would just like some feedback
>>27717878
Rewrite I guess, no reason to sacrifice quality for speed, this thread is slow as fuck anyway.
>>27717878
>plot holes
I don't think its a plot hole. Besides, if you want to make this all comfy and sweet, current turn of events is perfect. Anon can say something like "I have defeated you so easily, because I have fed on true love and friendship. And not only of Trixie, but magical world of Equestria itself, which is literally radiating with that stuff, you need only to get yourself kind and lovely as well to harvest those. But you were blind and narrow-minded and now I'm going to violently rape you out of my friend Twilight with my huge, burning demon-cock."
>>27717979
But yeah, growing your horse-cock definately needs more green to it.
>>27682439
The Germans
>>27717878
I'm pretty sure due to the oath that raping Twilight even if she is possessed means Anon is in breach of it, and won't that kill him?
I think at this point you kinda have to backtrack, it's fine as long as you're learning from this, just don't rush so much, we can wait.
>>27718143
It was a fake contract that time, just to make Celestia believe, wasn't it?
>>27718214
Pretty sure it was real, but I'm tired and don't feel like looking.
>>27717137
>>27717878
>I agree to never harm or kill any of your subjects or any other creatures unless in self-defense, and to never force myself on anyone without their consent
While it may be Twilight's body, your intent is against the demon inhabiting it.
I have no idea if the impending rape is a loophole or would conflict with the contract, but the battle was in self-defense and the restraints are not harmful.
>>27718425
Given the promise, intent doesn't matter, and since the demon is subdued at this point, self-defense is out, as is consent by the nature of it being rape.
>>27717909
>>27717979
>>27718016
>>27718143
Alright, I figured out what I'm going to do. I'm going to rewrite starting from when Anon and Twilight start fighting, this time with less plot holes and more horsecock, also bumb cause I haven't written it yet.
>>27717979
I like this one. Who said green about sex-demon-pone can't also carry a message about true love and friendship? So comfy, daww.
Revised update time
Continuing from
>>27714398
>She levels her horn at you and unleashes a rapid barrage of magic missiles in your direction.
>You push Trixie to the left and you dash to the right.
>The missiles home in on you, as strafe around Twilight.
>Most of the missiles go wide and strike the walls or the floor, but one catches your hind leg.
>You stumble and fall to the ground, but quickly recover and get back on your hooves.
>Your leg is smoking from the wound, you can already feel it healing, but that doesn’t mean it doesn’t still hurt.
>”What did you even hope to accomplish by coming here? You’re helpless!”
>She fires another large beam at you, but you quickly teleport in puff of flames to the center of the room.
>Her beam strikes the floor in a violent explosion, forming a smoking crater.
>As soon as you appear in the center of the room, another large beam is hurled at you.
>You quickly erect another barrier just in time.
>But she doesn’t let up, but double the power she’s putting into the beam!
>You grit your teeth and kneel as you struggle to keep from being struck by it.
>You’re fairly certain it won’t kill you, but you’re not eager to test that theory.
>Finally she relents and you drop your shield, panting from exertion.
>Twilight grins triumphantly.
>She begins to saunter towards your exhausted self.
>”Really you must have realized it was hopeless, now we could keep going but I think we both know how this will end if we do. So why don’t you just give up, hmm? Oh I know, if you forfeit now and give up this farce, I’ll give you a little treat before I take your body, how does that sound?~.”
>You lift your head to see her walking towards you, with a sway in her hips and hunger in her eyes.
>You make no move to resist as closes in on you.
>She’s only a few feet away now.
>Just a little more and…
“Now Trixie!”
>>27722102
Before Twilight can react, an intricate circle of runes light up with a blueish hue underneath her hooves.
>Her body goes rigid as the magic of the circle takes effect.
>”W-what?! When did you draw this! How!?”
“I didn’t draw it, she did.”
>You motion to Trixie, who has particularly smug grin on her face.
“While you were busy fighting me, Trixie drew that containment circle, and well, you know the rest.”
>Twilight’s looks furious, but her anger slowly fades back into arrogant confidence.
>”So? This won’t hold me for long and you can’t do anything to me remember?”
>You smirk and begin to circle around her, till your standing next to Trixie.
“You’re right I can’t, but she can.”
>You nod your head at Trixie.
>Twilight glances to Trixie, concern on her face, but only for a moment.
>”Ha! What can that pathetic mortal do to me?”
>You turn to Trixie and kneel down do that your eyes are level with hers.
“Do you trust me Trixie?”
>She smiles.
>”Trixie is almost insulted that you’d have to ask her, of course she does.”
“Good, now get ready, I’m sure what this will be like for you.”
>You’re not really sure how possession actually works, but your body seems to.
>Your body shimmers and becomes transparent.
>You envelope Trixie’s body with your own incorporeal form.
>A strange sensation overtakes you as your souls twist and fuse.
>She let you in of her own free will, so neither soul is dominant and the possession is smooth and painless.
>You can hear Trixie’s thoughts and she can hear yours.
>’Anon, this is strange, I don’t feel fully in control, but I don’t feel restrained.
‘I know, I feel strange too, but I think it’s best if I drive for now, you just sit back and enjoy the ride.’
>’Ok, I’m trusting you with my body, don’t do anything reckless.’
‘Wouldn’t dream of it.’
>You take full control of her and take few moments to get used to her.
>>27722106
>Satisfied you turn your gaze to Twilight, who is looking quite distressed.
“Now then, what were you saying? Something about this pathetic mortal not being able to do anything to you?”
>Twilight growl in frustration and attempts to break free from the circle.
“Not so fast!”
>Trixie’s horn glows red as you send your power through her.
>Four glowing red shackles burst forth from the floor and clamp on to Twilight’s legs.
>And to add the finishing touch, you materialize metallic ring with a red gem embedded in it.
>You shove the ring down Twilights horn and watch with satisfaction as she tries to use magic, but fails miserably when she cast little more than harmless sparks.
“Now then, I read a little something in a certain book on how to get you out of that body.”
>You circle her like a predator would its trapped prey.
>As you circle her, you run hoof along her body till you reach her flank and start feeling up her backside.
>Twilight turns to you and glares daggers at you.
>”I will make you both suffer when I free myself from these bonds!”
>You stop massaging her and spank her, making a loud slap and causing her flank to jiggle a little.
>Twilight yelps, but continues to curse you.
>Again you bring your hoof down on her, causing her to cry out in pain.
“Silence! You will speak when I want you to.”
>She lowers her head and glowers at you, but keeps her mouth shut.
“Good girl~.”
>You saunter around so that she’s facing you.
“Now, I have something to show you.”
>You stand Trixie up on her hind legs and lick one of her hooves.
>You slowly bring it down your body and stop just above her marehood.
>>27722120
>Twilight looks at up at you then back to Trixie’s crotch, trying to figure out your game.
>You force your demonic energy into Trixie’s hoof and start rub in a small circular motion.
>A red pentagram begins to form where you rub.
>It glows softly as you touch it.
>You give another push of magic, this time directed at the circle.
>You gasp involuntarily at tingling sensation the circle causes.
>A small bulge begins to form in the circle and you coax it out with your hooves.
>It protrudes further beginning to take form.
>The flared tip of a thick horsecock juts out from the circle.
>You grasp the tip and gently pull on it.
>You moan as you pull it out from Trixie’s body to its full length.
>It’s about a foot in length, blue and hard.
>You plop it on Twilight’s face and smile like a demon.
Updated pastebin: http://pastebin.com/Yteybzpn
Sorry to leave it like this but I promise lewd next update.
>>27722140
>Horsecock from pentagram
Isn't that just a biologically fully functional dildo?
>>27720759
why does twilight look like she's wearing invisible heels?
>>27698849
As the artist, I can honestly tell you I have no Idea. I just based It of a picture I saw here and posted it because I thought people might like it.
I don't come to this thread very often at all. But
If you want more, feel free to make a request! Either here or on tumblrjutasrequested.tumblr.com
>>27724268
I would like to request Lilith watching the butler anon though a window as butler anon does lawn chores.
maybe with her licking her lips.
>>27682439
I lust for this demon
>>27724268
You fucking fuck! You are everywhrere!
>>27724268
>>27725383
I second this.
>>27724268
>If you want more, feel free to make a request! Either here or on tumblr
your tumblr link is dead man.
>>27724268
Futa Lilith being impregnated by Anon.
Update time
>>27722140
“Lick it.”
>Twilight glares at you in defiance.
“If you don’t play along, I’ll make sure you don’t enjoy this.”
>Twilight gazes into eyes and sees that you’re not lying.
>begrudgingly, she extends her tongue gives your newly sprouted member a lick.
>You let her lap at your member at her leisure for a minute before you start to take a more active role.
>You grasp your cock in one hoof and place the other on her head.
>You prod her lips with the flared tip, leaving little smudges of pre-cum as you do.
“Go on, don’t be shy~”
>Twilight grumbles but complies and lets you push your length past her lips.
>You slowly pull her head forward and lightly buck your hips.
>Twilight grimaces a little when you push your member in deep, but otherwise she takes your cock fairly well.
>Is the demon possessing making her good at sucking dick or has Twilight done this before?
>Maybe you should ask her once this is all over.
>You chuckle at the though and sigh with pleasure as Twilight sucks you off.
>This is nice, but you’re getting a little bored.
>You look down at Twilight and grab her head with both hooves.
>She stops sucking and looks at you with confusion.
>She doesn’t have time to figure out what you’re doing before you ram your dick into face till you bottom out.
>Twilight’s eyes go wide in shock and gags from your forceful invasion.
>You hold her down on your cock and moan as she chokes on your cock.
>You relent a few seconds later and pull out to let her catch her breath.
>But her respite is short as you force yourself back into her mouth and begin fucking her face in earnest.
>Drool and pre-cum run down Twilight’s chin as you repeatedly deep throat her.
>You continue to thrust away and throw your head back and moan as you reach your first climax.
>>27731078
>But you don’t thrust all the way in and cum, no you want her to taste your seed.
>So you pull back so that your tip is just inside her mouth and use your hoof to push yourself over the edge.
>You groan as you flood her mouth with cum.
>Twilight tries to pull of your cock, but you hold her in place until you finish.
>You cum till her cheeks are bulging with your seed.
>You hold you cock in place as you give few final spurts.
“Now swallow it all and I’m not pulling out till you do.”
>Desperate for air, Twilight swallows your load in loud, lewd gulps.
>Convinced she downed the whole load, you pull out, cock covered in semen and saliva.
>Twilight gasps for air, while cum trickles out of the corner of her mouth.
>”Guh *gasp* I’ll make you pay for that!”
“I’m sure you will, now then, shall we continue?”
>”W-what?”
>Grinning you saunter around to Twilight’s backside, cock still dripping and half-hard.
>You position yourself behind Twilight and prepare to mount her, your cock already getting hard, ready for round two.
>”N-no! Don’t put in there, if you do I’ll…”
>You hop up and mount Twilight and place your already throbbing mare cock at her moist entrance.
>”Please! I-I’ll make you deal! Yes, me and you, we can rule this land together! I don’t need your body, that’s fair, right?”
>You pause, and put a hoof to your chin in false contemplation.
“Hmmm, nah.”
>Her eyes go wide in horror.
“I think I’ll fuck you back to where you came from instead!”
>You thrust your hips forward and plunge your member into her moist folds.
>Twilight cries out in anguish and pleasure.
>As stuff your entire length inside Twilight, you get a dubious idea.
‘Trixie you still there?’
>’Y-yes and I feel everything you do.’
‘Oh-ho, enjoying yourself?’
>’…Yes.’
‘Then how about you finish up then?’
>>27731089
>’You mean…you want me to…to Twilight?’
‘I know you want to too~’
>’W-well, Trixie would lying if she said no.’
‘I knew you did, now then, it’s your show now.’
>You relax your mind and allow Trixie to take full control of her body.
--------
>Be Trixie.
>And you’re currently balls deep in Twilight.
>Well you don’t have balls, but that doesn’t change the fact of the matter.
>You feel yourself regaining authority over your body, new dick and all.
>You give a tentative thrust into the bound Twilight, to test the waters.
>You gasp as her inner walls tighten around your member.
>Oh yes, this will be most enjoyable.
>You place both hooves on her hips and thrust all the way in again.
>You groan with pleasure as you hilt Twilight’s sopping snatch.
>”Ah Twilight, Trixie has always wanted to do this.”
>You start thrusting faster, mashing your hips into Twilights rear.
>This feeling, it’s so good!
>You push Twilight onto the ground and then lay on top of her.
>You keep thrusting and lean forward and nibble on one of Twilights ears
>”Ah, s-stop toying with me, you damned mortal!”
“No, Trixie likes seeing you squirm, even if the real Twilight isn’t there, I still enjoy teasing you like this.”
>”How about I make you a deal? I-I could find another body and then Twilight could be your slave, that sounds great doesn’t it?”
>You slam your hips into her with some force causing her yelp.
“As enticing as that sounds, Trixie will have to decline, and besides, Trixie will make Twilight her’s when she gets rid of you anyways, no stop your rambling and just enjoy Trixie’s dick.”
>She drops her head in defeat and groans as you continue to thrust into her again and again and again.
>You keep going till you’re drooling and your thrusts are quickened and erratic.
“Oh Twilight, I think I’m going to cum!”
>”W-wha-no! Don’t do it! Please don’t!”
>>27731101
>You start thrusting wildly, tongue lolling from your mouth, your vision becoming hazy.
“T-Trixie can’t stop, Trixie’s going to cum! Trixie’s going to cum in Twilight!”
>You cry out in ecstasy and slam your hips into Twilight as you orgasm.
>You paint Twilight’s insides white with cum.
>Twilight’s pussy clamps down on your member, milking you for all your worth, as she reaches orgasm as well.
>”N-nooooooooo!”
>Twilight lets out an unearthly howl as a dark substance disperses from her mouth while her body trembles in pleasure.
>She goes limp and you collapse as well, spent from your intense orgasm.
>You bask in the afterglow, still lodged inside Twilight.
>You lay atop the incapacitated Twilight for few moments before you shakily stand up and pull out with a vulgar squelch.
>A decent amount of cum dribbles out of Twilight when you do.
>You sit back on your rear and take a few breaths.
>While you rest you feel your connection with Anon begin to fade and you feel her presence leave your body.
>She slowly takes her own physical form next to you, looking just as worn out as you.
“Why are you so tired, Trixie did all the work.”
>”Possession is a lot harder than it looks, and besides it was my power that made the exorcism possible.”
“Yes but you wouldn’t have been able to do it without Trixie.
>”Yeah, you’re right.”
>>27727597
forgot an sJustasrequested.tumblr.com
>>27726025
If I could, I would clone myself so I could be drawfagging on all boards at once.
>>27725383
>>27727315
>>27731568
Nice.
>>27731598
Sick bump
