Chainlink Shackles is best daddy edition
Old thread: >>27407231
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ITT:
Discuss how ponies deal with finding out their parents are quite different than they expected, or worse, they brought great shame and dishonor to the family name.
>>27445878
>Discuss how ponies deal with finding out their parents are quite different than they expected, or worse, they brought great shame and dishonor to the family name.
...this is odly specific. It would need a character who has yet to find their parent/s.
All the more strange muh PnP OC is in exactly that situation.
>>27445878
This poor mare's father abandoned her all her life in an underground stable. Now she's on the hunt for him and has discovered this big super secret project he was working on.
BUT WHAT WAS
>>27445878OH BOOOOOOOY
>>27445945
>>27445962
>>27445963
She oughtta slap some sense into him for his poor parenting!
>>27445971
>>27445962
Okay, maybe not knowing one or all parents isnt that unspecific in this fandom.
Now I feel like a cheap hack.
>last thread was shitposted in so much people didn't want to post anymore and just waited for it to die.
>Only reached 200 posts
Good job guys. A really healthy community ya got here.
>>27446021
I imagine it's pretty common in a violent place like the wasteland.
>>27446062
Her daddy is probs not dead though, he just went Cigarette Shopping 19 years ago and never came back.
>>27446026
I could have saved it anon.
I sat there, watching it die slowly, the the 9 becoming a red 10.
I just waited, watching, enjoying the pathetic countdowns going on as it inched torward oblivion.
It taught me something.Nobody cares about my Murky reviews, but PH got lots of responses.
>>27445878
>letting the thread die
you fucking idiots
>not putting the thread name in the subject
you fucking idiot
>ITT
So poorly worded I'm embarrassed but here goes.
Not well considering they know next to nothing about either parent besides what's written in a personnel bio.
>>27446202
What can I say? It's a trigger.
>>27446235
[Spoiler]Batman's strappy green nemesis pls.[/spoiler]
>>27446288
Dude spoiler that shit.
Its pathetic, you just press command + s.
Like this:This pony know not her father's firmness, nor her mother's kindness.
Raised on the streets, made to steal to survive, she has learned little of the world or herself.
To all this, it changed one day when she met a zebra.
Suave and cunning, he brought her into a new life, offering not a replacement of her parents, but the companionship of a lover.
>>27446331I really really hate to say it because Im really happy someone would talk about muh OC on a
anonymous Image board for mongolian basketweaving, but: She does Know her Mom. Shes crazy protective of her and her brother since dad left... aaand a bit crazy.
You made me feel like doodling though, any requests?Yes the Blowjobpic is still coming, no worries.
So in contrast to who is the most disappointing parent, who would make the most unexpectedly good parent(s)?>inb4 Pip and Calamity
>>27446381
What about a diamond dog getting a pony ride and having the sparkle eyed magic cutey look of enjoyment.
While the pony is regretting putting a name on a bathroom wall.
>>27446426
I think Mach pleases his father in the end.
He strikes me as the sort that will try to mold the kid, but understands that at some point they will have to choose their own life.
>>27446467
...that sounds cute but, uh, how is it FO:E related?
>>27446516
Blegh, Hellhound, not diamond dog.
Meh, how about a pegasus dropping through a skylight on some raiders?
>>27446555
cant argue with trips, sure gimme a bit
>>27446555
How about a Pegasus bowing before her Unicorn masters.
>>27446613
Can't bow if there's no need to touch the ground.
All a unicorn can do is throw a rock.
How can they counter weather magic with primitive TK?
>>27446624
You underestimate the power of the master race.Besides, the pegasai need to be punished for abandoning the world like that and killing so many surface poners. They all need a good telling off and nice hard spankingfrom their magic-wielding betters.
>>27446426
Save for the whole being deadthough the teens would count that a plus, Gardener would be pretty good.
Though part of what got me for Gardener in the fic is that he paid attention to the fact that radiocontaminats are surface borne first, but then failed abysmally on the percolation through the soil.
This is a major issue in Gardener, as much is made of the clean soil and water from the contaminated external material.
A more problematic part of this is, that the plants grow fine in the soil, so why not just shave off the top soil until you are free of the contamination?
Instead it just seemed to be this arbitrary under concrete or not for if the soil is healthy.
>>27446624
Can weather magic counter AA flak?
Got told the thred is ded.
I see ded thred.
Posting a pic because why not.
Herb.
>>27446909
Thread died because anons are scared that there is a world of people out there that act differently than them.
Pajeetanon made them all run for the comfort of diapers and finger paints in their safe spaces.
Also Kip, you need to get one with rosy cheeks from sneaking your cherry wine.
>>27446909
Lol, like anyone would even remember us anymore.
>>27446932
They'll remember me only because apparently people still do. I remember last time I posted about rad rabbits in fo4 and someone immediately knew it was me and shouted about it.
>>27446932
Actually I just don't care for you, and you love that.
>>27446755
Yes, thunder and lightning are very frightening against fixed emplacements.
>>27446944
meh, who cares anymore. the king is dead, long live the king.
>>27446950
you probably don't even know me. not joking, I haven't been back here in months.
![19112947[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/Y4VItgR.jpg "19112947[1].png")
>>27446930
>Pajeet anon
Holy fuck, what?
>>27446978
Hate anon, you went on wonderful capslocks tirades.
The better question is if you know me.
![1463908392960[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/2TGhGDj.png "1463908392960[1].png")
>>27446980
Wrong image. Huh, didn't even know I had that saved on my phone.
Lets find the right one...
>>27446995
fuck, sanctus, lucid, um...jet wave, fuck I give up. it's been too fuckin long for me to remember the old guard's names.
>>27446980
>>27446996
Pahjeetanon is a bigger shitposter than Nymph confirmed.
To the surprise of no one.
>>27447039
What? I'm not Pajeetanon, I'm just surprised that there IS a Pajeet who goes here.
Being on /g/ for too long has left me ingrained with disdain for Pajeets.
>>27447039
What if nymph is pajeet anon?
>>27446202
I let it die too. Fuck it, who cares about this fandom anymore. Ham's not writing, Relentless isn't writing, our drawfags are down to a skeleton crew. PG is kinda still there in that he's still drawing but he's definitely not here. I haven't seen Neuro doodle anything in awhile though I bet he still lurks.
No one wants to discuss anything and there ISN'T anything to discuss. No one wants to draw anything so there's no new content to talk about. Why keep the thread on life support? Let's just take it behind the shed and shoot it.
>>27447073
That would be good news. Then all we have to do is spam DESIGNATED whenever Nymph starts shitposting and we'll eventually run him out of the thread.
>>27447075
Neuro just did stuff, Hoers updated, Nymph is doing commentary on Murky Number 7, Freckles is doing random draws, We're going to see FS update soon, and Tofu does still draw.
>>27447075
"wah all my friends moved out so I'm going to burn down my apartment block" I swear like 30% of this thread or more is people whining about how nothing happens in the thread
>>27447113
>"wah all my friends moved out so I'm going to burn down my apartment block"
I see you've been to detroit lately.
>>27447097
I'd prefer based, but yeah I am typically the designated driver as is due to few friends wanting to actually get drunk on anything other than shitty Coors or Bud.
>>27447110
>Tofu does still draw.
>draw
>not write
kek
When was the last time Tofu even did anything for the thread, anon?
>>27447110
And I just got back from vacation, no less.
>>27447191
>>27447205
What does that have to do with the thread? Does Sinrar even come to the thread?
>>27447217
>>27447075
I'm working on the follow up to A Little Sin...
>>27447191
Outlaw is shit anyway, an update wouldn't stop the ship from sinking. Which it isn't, by the way.
FFS the drama in here.
>>27447027
Well I'm not that old, 2 soon to be three years old.
>>27447262
Thread has been garbage the entire year tbqh senpai.
>>27447368
>>27447262
the hell do you people even want
>>27447378
0 fetish posting and Somber leaving permanently for one.
>>27447378
Magic wangst cyborgs, lesbian romance, more wangst and edge, and Greaser as lead.
And lots of sex with black latex.
>>27447404
a fetishpost actually lead to some interesting story discussion last thread
>>27447378
This needs to stop as well. >>27447412
>>27447426
Which post was that?
>>27447432
That's sarcasm there Sparky.
Hey faggots, how about you actually discuss shit instead of complaining about how nobody discusses shit, hmm? Anyone who is complaining about how the thread is dead and how the subfandom is going down the shitter is doing nothing to help it, because the only discussion I've seen in here has been from fucking Nymph and the few posters who respond to him.
I myself have been too busy to keep up with updates for fics I like, and have only been able to respond to Nymph's murky posts some of the time, but I'm not complaining that the thread doesn't do anything. My point is, if you're bitching about the thread being shit and you want it to be better, read and discuss the stories yourselves instead of hoping someone else does so you can sit and watch.
>>27447461
The one where asking about Atom Smasher being a virgin turned into speculating about how she'd respond to reuniting with her family and what their reasons for abandoning her were in the first place.
It also attracted some third world goober talking about backwards marriage practices, but cancer is difficult to be fully rid of.
Guys pls, we do this every second thread and its getting boring. Think of something new to complain about or start a discussion about something interesting
Like what happened to alloy's parents? Did she just run away from them and almost get captured? Did they try to sell her into slavery perhaps? Maybe they were enslaved themselves and she escaped? Lets discuss these theories.If you don't I'm gonna shit up the thread with Atom Smasher clop so please guys for the love of Tofu's goatee discuss.
>>27447853
Go with the clop, I want to be inspired to do something.
>>27447876
Is thathoers? if it is pls do some Atom smutt, I beg you! There isn't nearly enough foe smutt and I want some of muh waifu, damn it.
>>27447853porque no las dos?
>>27447876
You asked for it.
>Atom enters your local watering hole
>you can tell she's already absolutely smashed
>she stumbles up to the bar and orders the strongest drink available, insulting the barkeeps moustache in the process
>after he angrily serves her a shot of something green she drunkenly saunters over to you, downing the unknown beverage as she does so
>she chokes on it slightly and coughs most of it up
>you roll your eyes as she finnaly manages to breath again and regains the cocky grin shes been giving you
>"Hey there s-st *hic* stud... My parents aint home... wanna have some fun or something?"
>she sits next to you and leans into you, trying to flick your nose with her tail and failing
>she opts to tickle you under the chin with her wings instead
Wat do?Might as well make it a cyoa, all the others are ded.
>>27447991
Look, you are actual fucking shitfaced.
Not drunk, shit faced.
If you keep this up, you're going to end up face down in your own puke in a bathroom and have failed to get to the loo in time.
At this point, I'm only going back with you because my parents, who are home, would be livid if I left a mare in distress.
>>27447991
Oh dear, this is going to end intears.Order a glass of water from the bar and offer it to her, claiming it's vodka.
>>27448030
>>27448057
>you give her your speech
>she responds by bursting in to a fit of drunken giggles
>"Oh yes I'm in such awful distress" she feigns a swoon and falls against you "save me from my unquenchable lust!"
>you shuffle uncomfortably as her wings tickle your crotch
>she rolls over slightly to whisper in your ear
>"I could do with a knight in shining armour to sweep me off my hooves and show me his big, long, glistening sword..."
>you shake her off awkwardly and head to the bar, red faced, as she bursts in to another fit of drunken laughter.
>you order a glass of water and bring it to her
>you tell her to drink it and sober up
>"Aww but I'm so much more fun like thiiis"
>"aren't you going to show me home and... take care of me?
>she gives you a sultry wink, licking her lips
Wat do?
>>27448177
Take her home and show her that we are like the white knight Lancelot.
>>27448177
Will continue this tomorrow, give your suggestions for what to do next.
>>27447075
I'm still trying to write, I promise.
WEcon will continue. I just don't hang out here much these days.
>>27447545
we need to bring back the reading club or whatever the fuck it was, and this time, have it so that people need to read X amount of chapters within Y amount of time and then when the time's up, we all fucking TALK about it.
Why is it good? Why is it bad? What parts did we like/dislike? Any honorable mentions? Was there some little piece that wasn't important to the rest of the plot but still interested us? etc.
>>27447853
I usually write long shit posts in the middle of the night about random topics, so I've been doing my part too. Like I wrote the big ole 'Homage is a Machiavellian mastermind' post, I mentioned my idea for a Enclave like faction out of the remnants of the Equestrian Navy, and I also recently talked about a potential Institute stand in of a bunch of pre-war stable ponies who use Soul magic and put themselves in robots, and kidnap wastelanders to make them their 'servants'. Most of them get very few replies at first, though oddly enough it seems people like them enough to mention them several times after the fact so I dunno what else to do to start discussion.
'encouraging discussion' is pretty hard in and of itself. You can't force people to be interested in what you like, so you usually just have to try and come up with something that you think the thread will be interested. This is why Fetishposting continues to be popular. Because despite endless bitching from people who hate it, there still are people who like that edgy shit.
This is also why I still believe fetish posting is a pretty big determinant to the thread and to discussion. As Pahjeetanon demonstrated last thread, when people begin shitposting most of the more normal user just fuck off for a while and wait for them to stop talking. It's just that Pahjeetanon was so bad that not even the usual shitposting cadre were willing to play ball with him, and so the thread died.
So what's the point in trying to start discussion when some faggot can instead start shitposting about ' I want to fart into Pegadoggie's intestines and eat their soupy remains XD' and instantly scare away every reasonable anon for a few minutes or hours? And not only that, the same shitposting anon will inevitably get more replies than my attempt to drum up discussion. So why should I even bother?
[fucking character limit reeee]
>>27448870
Content is the only reliable method of getting discussion going, no matter the quality even (look at PH). The problem is our own resident content creators are either dropping like flies or not pumping out enough content to fill in the gaps made by the recent ded ones. Most of them seem to be burnt out in my opinion too. None of them have really done anything unique in a while.
The slow heat death of FoE is another problem. There really aren't any good stories coming out recently. Most of them fall into a few easily identifiable catagories nowadays: Utter shit, Still birth of varying quality, A decent fic that has an extremely long update schedule (aka most of the popular fics here), or a dead fic. This leads to lack of discussion mainly because people have nothing new to talk about. The book club is sort of flawed in that regard since like half of the fics we read were dead. And people will naturally not want to read a story knowing it'll never ever get a conclusion.
>>27448747
This, I miss the book club. It was always fun to have a story to talk about. Good or bad. I think the problem is that some of the last few were so bad that they weren't even worth talking about, which kind of killed the mood.
Also it seemed the guy who organized it is now kill so shit.
Pun bump.
>>27448934
Well I'm not him but if I was, that's how I would have done it.
Pick a fic by popular vote, then fucking read it.
Wake me up, it's not time to sleep.
Wake me up, your soul I'll reap.
>>27446909
>laughing_alicorns.png
Disarmed Pip x multiple raiders is best 'ship.
>>27448177
Have fit of embarrassment in front of the cool kids.
>>27448177
Protect m'lady from malcontents on the way to her abode.
>>27451283
>>27451408
>after some more drinks and teasing from atom you finally agree to take her home
>you tell her your parents are home, however, so you'll have to go to her place
>"ehhhh maybe not a good *hic* idea... my brother and his squeeze are Stove Readers are probs having a fuck sesh... might be fun to interrupt them with my own, but his bitch would probably break my nose or something."
Wat do?
>>27451443
You got a multitool?
I bet we could do it in the air vents.
>>27448934
>>27448870
On that,
I tried getting some of the authors to show up here for encouragement and discussion, but no luck.
They're there, but it seems its that they have their own things or are terrified of "4chan - rape and pedos inside"
>>27451443
>>27451446
>Atom suddenly turns to you
>"Wait, you got a multitool? I bet we could do it in the air vents!
>you stare at her blankly and she starts giggling again
>she wraps her tail around your neck and leads you like a dog for a few feet before remembering that she's too drunk and too lazy to walk all the way there herself.
>she hops clumsily onto your back and points in a direction
>"Izzat way"
>she checks her shitbuck "I think... fuck it just walk"
>You set off in the direction she pointed, grumbling to yourself.
>she isn't exactly heavy, probably her pegasus genetics, but she isn't exactly light either, probably her Stable lifestyle.
>she bops you on the head
>"I heard that!"
>you blink in confusion, Had you said that outloud?
>She bops you again
>"I knew it! you were talking shit about me in there!"
>you sigh and keep walking.
>this better be worth it.
Wat do?
>>27451461
tonight on CNN: normal (for certain measures of normal) people are intimidated by random hostility and the erratic behaviour of an unknown number of people all under the same pseudonym
>>27451477
Look for the primary air recirculator, it will be just after the heat exchange fan.
We want to cut the power to it by pulling scissor switch salmon, then turning dial brick to 37.5 followed by rose being set to 4%.
Once done, we have to remove the maintenance inspection hatch cover by loosening the 27 #4 torx screws.
After that, we should be inside the air vents.
>>27451477
acquire drunkenness by osmosis.
>>27451477
Make lewd euphemisms about explosions.
>>27451477
Stroke her back.
>>27451596
Imagine what would happen if a pegasus is used to wide open spaces, a feeling of being the only living being for miles.
Then, when they come down, its cramped cities, people everywhere, and more than a few want to touch him like he is a deity.
How would they react to this change?
>>27451508
>>27451559
>you spend the rest of the journey exchanging lewd euphemisms about explosions
>hers are better.
>by the time you reach the steel ranger compound you're in a better mood
>atom is asleep on your back
>the main entrance to the compound it guarded by a pair of power armoured sentries
>its unlikely they'll just let you in, even if atom vouches for you.
Wat do?
Completely unrelated, but every time I see the word "nuclear" all I can think about is
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7XmDYJBZZdc
>>27451644
And the worst part is it was admitted the song was only used for being catchy.
>>27447914
>not enough FoE smut
Isn't smut things up all you dickwads do?
>>27451637
Produce clipboard and pen, its time for a military inspection.
>>27451780
I stopped.
>>27451780
You make that sound like a bad thing!
>>27451637
We're clearly escorting one of their own back to safety.
Now seeing as they're clearly on guard duty, they can't just go abandoning their post, but we can see her safely inside no problem.
Speaking of CYOAS, should I restart one of my failed ones, or roll up something new?
If new, what would you lot like to see?
>>27451920
>We're clearly escorting one of their own back to safety. Now seeing as they're clearly on guard duty, they can't just go abandoning their post, but we can see her safely inside no problem.
>you propose this idea to the guards who look at each other and shrug
>amazingly they let you in
>you look around the compound
>you wake atom to ask where to go
>she swears at you drunkenly
Wat do?
>>27452350
Look for the messiest quarters.
>>27452350
Commence plunder.
>>27452464
>she finally directs you to a ventilation hatch
>she plops down off your back and fiddles with it until it opens
>she crawls in, making a show of wiggling her flank at you
>you follow
>the pair of you crawl through the vents until you find a reasonably wide area
>she turns to you and grins
>"Come get it big boy!"
Sex options:
>Make love to her (slow missionary)
>Rutt her (Doggie style)
>Take her for a ride (Cowgirl)
Wat do?
>>27452515
>Make slow missionary love to her
>>27452515
First option.
>>27452515
Make war.
>>27452515
>Take her for a ride (Cowgirl)
>>27452531
>>27452559
>>27452636
>you wage a gentle war on her coochie as she rolls over and spreads for you.
>you enter her easily, she's soaking wet
>as soon as you bottom out in her you feel her walls clench around you tightly
>"Hmmmm good boy"
>she wraps her forlegs around your head and pulls your face cose to hers
>"Fuck me."
>she pulls you into a ravenous kiss as your hips begin to slowly pump on instinct
>her tongue skills catch you by surprise as she all but suck the life out of you.
>you can still taste the absinth
>she wraps her hing legs around your waste, urging you to go deeper
>you begin to fuck her deep and slow, making her moan into your mouth
Wat do?
>>27452703Forgive the typos, had to rush it.
>>27452703
Use little soldier to find her danger zone and hammer it with coordinated strikes to achieve total domination.
>>27452730
We'll need a follow operation to engage the enemy's rear for a hammer and anvil strike.
>>27452823
>>27452730
You both have been designated Charlie-Uniform-November-Tango squad and have been transferred to compound Delta. Your orders are to find and capture the fugitive 'Tofu' and bring him to a secure writing facility to cure his loafing.
>>27452871
How many pieces do I need to ziploc for positive ID?Not pictured, chainsaw on a stick.
>>27452893Bris pls
>>27452904
Pls. I don't have an AR. Too poor.
>>27447075
>Relentless isn't writing
Well, I'm not, no. FS ain't dead, I'm just real busy right now.Two jobs, full time trade school, followed by transitioning into a two month army course has really killed the immediate desire to write. It'll get better once things settle down, but that won't be for a while still.
In the meantime, we were lookin at doing sone edits to released chapters, particularly #4. It's kinda painful looking back at what ended up getting released there, and based on views a lot of people seem to have stopped reading there, so that needs to get fixed.
>>27453064
I'm happy to review, just send it to [email protected]On a separate technical note, would you guys feel it improper if I started work on a forum for FOE and attendant chatroom?
>>27453204
If it means this thread will finally die I'm all for it. (^:
>>27453204
Well in the words of vault tech: Prepare for the future!
might be a good idea incase we have anymore sudden rule changes and need to relocate.
>>27453001
>911
>mosin nigger
Bro, do you even mall ninja?
Qtbump!
>http://www.equestriadaily.com/2016/05/equestria-daily-interviews-kkat-author.html
So this happened.
>>27454078
Boring.
>>27454121
No man, it has some gems I swear. Like this one:
>"There are a few that I have recommended or given shout-outs to on my blog; but for the most part, I am hesitant to put any story on a pedestal above the others when I have read so few."
Despite being the biggest HoF shill, hue.
>>27454158
I gues thats more to avoid future shit after the whol PH "kkat aproved" BS
>>27452110
Which ones are we talking about, exactly?
>>27454269
Power ponies theft adventure, griffon versus gang of mane care producers, zebra unicorn and pegasus with foal, Windsheer and thumtulu the manticore etc..
I kind of forgot what the others were.
>>27454033
I'd like towatch her from a distanceandleave valuable items for her to find so I could see her smile.
>>27454447
>We'll never make our secret wasteland crush happy from a safe distance
It's not fair!
So what do ponies sing while on patrol?
I mean its not like its only Sandy Shores, surely they have come up with their own patrolling now music or something.
>>27454932
I've been curious about this as well. Spontaneous singing seems to be a culturally pony-like thing to do and one of the few things past 34 of PH that I liked was the concept of ponies doing better in combat whilst singing.
Just seemed like a pony kind of thing to happen.
Except for Psychosluts little "I'm in love" bullshit before Rape Curing Cock died and then his dad went full Nagato from Naruto Shippuden.
But yeah, Sandy Shores and Sweetie Belle are a thing but what about other pre war singers?
>>27454973
how dare you like anything in project horizons, who do you think you are
>>27455013
A semi rational human being who can pick the gold flakes out of a pan of shit.
>>27454932
I want to capture a pretty birdie and put her in a nice, comfortable cage and make her sing for me.
>>27454033
that mare is supercute, which fic is she from?
>>27455079
Could you get more trussed up turkeys?
Its getting boring having just a blue one.No Hoers, this is not an excuse to make tied up Atom Smasher, its a request.
>>27455317
You shush he has enough to do.
>>27455341
I thought it was a she?
>>27455317I'll just give you one I had to hand.
>>27455353
No, Hoers just prefers to keep his KRD persona ambiguously gendered and I'm sure he has good reasons for it.
>>27455341
Yes, and now he has one more job to do at his leaser.So long as we get our tied up scouseburd I don't care how long it takes
>>27455369
>And this is why you make sure the cockring and condom are properly fitted for the catheter.
Remember, UTIs are no joke.
>>27455377
*leisureDAMN IT autoccorect is supposed to CORRECT IT!
>>27455360
Her enthusement is visible.
Particularly the part where she is reminded of how much this is like home, and how much the wall could really use a mural.I like to think the walls needing mural line is actually a lot more important for stable dwellers.
Its effectively a control mechanism, a post hypnotic suggestion for the overmare to use in case things go tits up.
Essentially, deploy a mural on a wall, and Stable dwellers are drawn to it, and become hypnotized essentially by it.
This way stable bots could secure the situation and attempt to repair the situation from whatever happened.
>>27455533
>This way stable bots could secure the situation
>>27455600
Dammit Hoers!
Well I guess this is an excellent way for a wasteland born pegasus inna stable escape story.
He thinks something faulty has happened to the stable, and seeks to fix it.
In reality, the overmare triggered the contingency due to said wasteland birdy's mother escaping under less than pleasant circumstances.
Now he's going to spend an adventure trying to find somepony who can hack the stable's maneframe and save everyone he loves.
After the halfway point and the Overmare leveling, it turns out his mother had lied about seeking shelter for what she knew.
She knew very well how to bring rain back to the wasteland, but she had spent far more time planning on bringing back her reign.
She has now amassed an army of dragon ghouls and seeks to claim the wasteland in her name.
Her son must now stop her reign from happening.
>>27455600
That poor birds wings! You cant tie them up like that! They'll get weak and stiff from lack of use!
Hoers how could you be so cruel to your cute little poners?
>Sunfall hasn't run for literally hundreds of years
>>27456055
At least he isn't dangling them over his desk with a fan pointed at their bellies so he scratch their ears as they feel like they're falling forever.
>>27456165
Oh god
Perpetual ear flickering.
>>27456129
Sorry, I've been working on another project, anon. It's unlikely that it will continue anytime soon, but if I find myself with enough free time this summer, I'll bring it back.
>>27456347Is it feathers or fur related?
Who is best for fetish and why is it Beej?
>>27456416
He has a love for pegasi and a raunchy fic character already.
>>27456384No feathers, but there's still fallout horses in it, of course.
>>27455317
>Getting borin just having a blue one
Or maybe a tied up darker blue, soft drink one to go with her?
>>27456759
But Pink Lemonade pony is for sexuals, not hostage!
IRC is literally Raider arguing over nothing.
>>27456416
BJ is only good for death desu
>>27456416
>>27456950
You know that's not true.
>>27456970
>drawing BJ
>>27456973
Explain how BJ was ever good. She was always the worst character in the entire story ever since the first chapter.
>>27456797
Nonono, this softdrinkhorse
>>27457005
Nymph traced both of them, so they're shit by that simple reason.
>>27456984
Nymph has never done Blackjack. As he has no taste, its clear she must be a superior pony.
>>27456970
Looks like a raider almost
>>27456970
top unf
>>27453064
As long as it's not dead, I'm fine with waiting for more scoutbirds.
What scale of edits are you thinking of making? Major or minor? The only criticism I had of chapter 4 and onward was that the story never seemed to pick up the pace after slowing down for chapter 4. A lot of words are spent getting them from Chess's place to Fort Neighson, and some of it seems like filler, like the whole ordeal with the tribals.
>>27458233
well whatever they are it won't bring back Nosedive.
sleepy bump
QT Pip bump
>>27459965
>Pip finally snaps, and is seem here massaging an imaginary Velvet Remedy
>>27458703
Alas poor Nosedive, for you would make a worthy captive.
>>27456984
>that brushable, pettable mane
>White pone, inherently good for snuggles
>>27459965
no freckles/10
>>27460478
Must-haves for a cute pip:
-freckles
-belly button
-happy pip!
>>27460748
>No Daff
>No slave collar
>No Red Eye
>No pants for Jesus
>No dandelion blowing
>>27458233
It would be throughout, without ultimately changing any major events, so no need to re-read for continuity purposes. There were a lot of choppy bits, and the handling of both surrounding and during thesex sceneis cringe-worthy, in hindsight. Would probably leave a bit more implied than I did, especially on Grace's part. Idly considering breaking it in two chapters, but the issue was always that the one natural place would leave both chapters feeling... oddly paced. I gotta sit down and give it some time one of these days.
>>27460969
>No Daff
>Forgetting his partner in crime who'd be glad to share Pip with him
>>27461040
Yeah but she is a shitty fighter and a dead cunt.
Probably has all the stamina of a griffon in bed, in heat.
So, idea for a fantasy element.
Lots of people like talking about changling infiltrators, and them taking over lives.
This is boring and not that magical, while requiring a reason for buggies much like the meth kingdom.
What if instead you have the reoccurence of souls.
A common part of reincarnation is the soul is placed into a gestalt body and born normally.
What if instead the balefire fucked this process up and instead the souls are placed as in the world.
Where they have a temporary fleeting body made from their soul and have to find their gestalt and take it over.
The downside being is the gestalt is a normal pony, having lived some chunk of their lives already.
So the soul has a choice of dying and truly vanishing from the world, while the gestalt ceases on death, or taking over and "killing" an apparent sapient being that has done nothing to it.
Would it break the FOE narrative to have mortar carriers and half tracks in a fic?
>>27461674
How would they maintain those heavy and complex equipment when
>All the roads are destroyed.
>Mechanical equipment and spare parts are hard to come by
>There's millions of mindless raiders who will shoot at you ever 2 miles, making travel a pain in the ass
>>27461710
One time use and you spend about 20 chapters of stuff before its used for some epic battle.
>>27461877
Or adjust power levels accordingly. Maybe they're the norm for a desert region - because honestly, Steel Rangers would get their asses kicked in open terrain by vehicles. They excel in urban, forest, mountains and in the defensive. What if wartime came and there was a place open enough for proper maneuver warfare, you better believe there would be a lot of wrecked but probably salvageable vehicles. Or even assume the area was part of a massive battle from the time just before the Ranger armour was brought in - we know they had tanks, it seems a fair assumption they had support vehicles, echelon, recce, and IFV's. Maybe said battle is the reason they moved away from them, leaving the wrecks behind.
What if the fic had a lot of focus specifically on the conflict over the fuel for said vehicles? The Mad Max crossovers pretty much just happen, and it could be great to read. Just avoid blatant character rips and re-using exact plot points. At the very least it would be entertaining.
Okay guys, it's obvious we need stories. I would like to write a story of my own, but give me some prompts. What are some things you guys have been interested in?Anything involving Enclave?
>>27461674
I remember Kkat herself said FoE should have had a lot more wheeled/tracked vehicles.
It could be interesting, given a proper setting - definitely not something you'd just give to a party mid-story though.
>>27461970 has the right idea, either desert environment or Central Europe-style open fields and small hills.
>>27462328
I know that feel anon, I promised myself I would write more again with my own idea but I discovered I have time for games and sleep and its fucking over my promise.
>>27462638
Loaf status: Pandemic.
>>27462328
How about a tech savvy character in an area with little to no tech? Discovering how to live off the land and survive based on wit and ingenuity rather than equipment.
>>27462913
>>27462328
Mythbuster duck tape challenge.
>>27462913
Huh, that's not a bad idea, anon
>>27462328
Unapologetically Enclave character loses armor and temporary wing privlege to spell disruption missile.
Has to go through a primitive society rebuild with the watchful audience of small animals.
Proceeds to get into civilization with the intent of getting a unicorn to reenchant his armor so he can return home.
How ugly do ghouls have to be?
If I said a pony had been working with balefire equipment during the war, then when the bombs dropped it was the equivalent of taking a match to ashes, would that work?
Also, why does the OP image look like an attempt to make a pegasus version of Xmen Apocalypse's Wolverine?
>>27463888
Pretty sure it's a vr headset
What pone gives best cuddles?
>>27464111
Chainlink Shackles, they'll crack a rib.
>>27464111
Anyone with with wings
Also, nice trips anon
>>27464111
>>27464111
Zebras clearly.
On a related note, what happened to the clop doc?
Did Nymph get chased off from writing porn as well?
>>27464945
What the fuck spawn that zigger?
>>27464985
Autism.
Next chapter of Murky review?
I mean the thread sums it up already...
>>27464945
Thats not a zebra... That's an abomination.
>>27464111
Dis 1
So why don't more ponies run around with ludicrous caliber weapons due to having better support structures and the threat of the local wildlife and rarely a Steel Ranger?
The sort of things like the loud and boomer or 20 x 120 mm?
>>27465862
Ignoring the whole 'better support structures' claim: Probably the same reason modern infantry don't all run around with such weapons: they weigh a fuckload and will be insanely encumbering. The average wasteland adventurer probably has to carry more supplies than the average soldier does too. All that will start to add up.
And, as you pointed out in your own post, most wastelanders don't really even need heavy weapons since they will rarely come across any heavy resistance. So why lug out all that extra weight, deal with more complex weapon maintenance, and have to buy even more expensive an rare ammo for something that won't benefit them in anyway?
>>27465946
Well iw ould think that its been demonstrated that ponies are the equivalent of hi end exo suits in terms of what they can carry, particuarly earth ponies.
And I did mean the wildlife is a major threat, you don't want to go hunting or tracking down feral hogs with small arms, much less the actual magical critters in Equestria.
Especially as being injured is rather lethal in FOE, as opposed to modern life where you can be chopper evacced and in crash surgery.
Also, the ammo can't be that rare nor the systems that heavy, look at all the pegasi with M98Bs!
>>27465982
Even with Battlesaddles Ponies have been shown to not be able to carry that much. Most Battlesaddles carry stuff like miniguns/flamethrowers/rocket launchers. Aka all stuff that infantry could actually feasibly carry. If anything ponies seem to be weaker since they need full body braces just to be able to effectively use these weapons.
As for hunting, well there already exists stuff like 40-70 govt and .308 in the stories. Those should be good enough to handle most of the nastier creatures for hunting. 50. BMG would probably kill the animal yeah, but there probably won't be much left to salvage.
And Nymph, please. Injuries in FoE should be total non issue since all they need to do is take a few sippies of some healing potions, maybe a chiropractor, and then they're ready to go back into the fight. Pip got rendered deaf once and Volvo was able to instantly restore her hearing like it was nothing. We obviously can't do that IRL.
The whole 'pegasi with anti-material rifles' meme is just a dumb rule of cool thing and you know it. But if I had to take it seriously: Calamity smuggled his rifles with him when he got Dashite'd, so it's possible that other Dashite smuggled high-tech weapons onto the surface if they knew in advanced they'd be exiled. Since FoE genetics don't work like show genetics (You have to accept this, any sort of deviation will literally break the lore because the Enclave were unable to make any new Raptors/Thunderheads because they didn't have 'unicorn magic'. If you except show genetics this means there could be a Unicorn born in the Enclave who would allow them to make Thunderheads, thus destroying the lore). And with FoE genetics it'd means that pretty much every Wasteland Pegasus comes from a Dashite. So when they run around with those 420 MLG Quickscopers it's actually their precious family heirloom their using.
>>27466243I'm rather enjoying Murky's take on how healing magic isn't that great and has a lot of work to do.
The default drink away the issue is rather bothersome for that reason, it removes all drama and threat, reducing a story to how much do they need to drink, followed by prompt death if they fail.
Also
>flamethrower
>minigun
>rocket launcher (assuming ammo)
>>>>>>Light
That is so not fucking true.
You're easily talking 30 kilos each for those, then ammo.
And that's even more an issue with the other fact being how many times people have dual wielding ponies.
As is, antimaterial weapons are typically 15 -20 kilos plus ammo, something within the power of most ponies to use.
If we are saying a pony can't even move 50 kilos of gear, then there are serious issues with it all.
By the same token, its quite rare for most fics to even mention provisions as being weighty, much less amenities like the sleeping bags they all have.
So short of doing what the main fic did and having a literal cart to pull all their shit in, its going to be that they carry it all in the enchanted saddle bags.
And yes, while those calibers work, it gets into the issue that if they do, then the target is not much of a threat, and those are both available in semi and full auto versions that would have negligible issues with muzzle climb due to the multipoint attachment and stability of a battle saddle.
So we get back to the same issue I wrote the ballistic sim over, if we accept that standard small arms can deal with everything in FOE, then its basically GPMG everywhere as the ammo is easily made, moved, and used.
Not a very good action world when you have now removed the supposedly invulnerable/very survivable monsters.
>>27464111
Calamity, clearly.
>big soft wings for being wrapped in
>strong chest for laying your head against
>protective personality
You all know any other choice is bullshit, you just need to admit it.
>>27466506
I wonder if he has downy feathers for "wingpit" hair.
More so, how awkward is it if he tries to hug you, and those wrap around...
Night bump
boomp
>>27467653
bunnyhorses.
>>27446612
a bit of what?
>>27446624
how far can they take their weather magic
>>27468086
Something I've often wondered.
Is it scaled based on cloud size?
So they could something by just snorting a bit?
Or is it the clouds themselves have to be magical and thus come from the SPP/Cloudsdale.
Which if that's the case makes things far more interesting in how it works, where pegasi are using the cloud as the battery.
Personally I think this is the case, as when watching Rainbow Dash, clouds with a mind of their own flying around are not a case to freak out over sentient clouds, but a normal expectation.
So I'd say it needs magic clouds and most all clouds are magic/the only clouds in Equestria are manufactured.
In the sense of what the magic can do, there is cloud tech and capital ships being made, so pretty far.
I think that more the case is that people forget pegasi and griffons can play with clouds for building material, while pegasi can trigger weather.
Nominally, I've had characters keep clouds around as tools on the basis they last fine, with them then using the cloud as building material or a magic focus to chill beer.
As with all things pegasi, they shall betray their own freedom.
So some of the big issues with this chapter is that Murky gets captured just like that, with Shackles always just being there.
Sadly I feel I am going to hate it when I find out why.
Essentially, Shackles is always in the right place to harry Murky in this time, not capture him, but I feel Fuzzy was wanting to make a sucker punch of Murky being recaptured so close to freedom.
It gets really bad later on, to the point it seems Shackles has telepathy or precognition to make sure he is ahead of Murky, not stuff that can be randomly predicted short of there being a select few locations that Murky has to go through as bottlenecks.
This isn't so grating now, but it does raise serious questions later and probably next chapter.
Murky the pet is odd, its like Shackles wants a base slave, but also a status ornament.
These really don't go together short of this being the break in period for his pegawaifu.
Essentially what makes it odd is just how violent Shackles is, not in any way more than a rule through fear or just pain.
Barb and Wicked Slit both had methods to their madness, reasons for the cruelty and end goals.
Shackles as written here is basically stuck on edge with no goal born of it.
Now we do find more of the whole Aurora Star thing and what is the deal with the past, memories and more.
Its just not that much, but points to something much greater than being just memory orbs or memory orbs with neat tricks.
Nice pacing and development on this front actually.
Something that is an issue though is the Mall Gang of Slavers is able to enact a conspiracy to obtain these techs without being stopped bothered or anything else, while admitting that Ragini and Protege are alive and knowing.
What makes this worse is that there were plenty of others that survived, and Blunderbuck, who knew as well of this plot.
And then there are the spies, informants, and possible telepathy that should root it out.
>>27468669
Essentially, as written, this conspiracy should be known to only be suffered as a means of acquiring the Star tech, and not because of some clandestine meetings by very high profile people with very obvious fields of work.
Their by line that Ragini won't speak because of the contract saying not to be involved in politics for the trial kind of goes out the window when Shackles was the orchestrator for the Mall revolt, saw a Talon dewinged, and failed Red Eye's personal student.
Given how Stern shot a slaver for not instantly stopping talking when Red Eye spoke, this seems rather glaring, since as soon as Regini speaks, Shackles and company are dead.
So I do have to ask Fuzzy, what the hell?
You fucked that up big time.
Murky escapes, a lot.
Like really, why does Shackles bother with the loud voice, just go grab Murky and wait around for him to return, again.
Much less do his spooky ghost thing and grab murky later on.
Its rather grating here as Murky is able to give him the slip repeatedly and without cause, yet Shackles doesn't move to change this.
This is an issue as Shackles swears up and down that freedom is not for Murky, yet Murky is constantly going for it, each time succeeding more.
That's not breaking his spirit, its only emboldening him.
The contrived rad collar is stupid, particuarly the 2 more radaways from it.
1.) Murky could just cut it off, he's got access to equipment readily now during the escapes.
Then one quick disposal later and its gone.
2.) If the air is a bigger threat, and effects everybody, the collar would have to be quite hot to hurt murky twice as much as the air.
Which would then mean everybody near him is being dosed as well.
3.)Other masters are going to be swapping that collar on and off to use Murky.
One little trick by Murky or them seeing its radioactive is going to see it destroyed or lost again.
Now for cutes, we do get Murky being carried on the back of a slaver, and Murky drawing daddy Shackles loving him.
>>27466243
>You have to accept this, any sort of deviation will literally break the lore because the Enclave were unable to make any new Raptors/Thunderheads because they didn't have 'unicorn magic'
Not really. Just because a unicorn is born doesn't mean they have the talent required to build something like that.
And even if they do, who's going to train them? Assuming they don't need training, how much work can one unicorn do alone?
>>27466243
Poor Tofu, he has unicorns.
Poor anon, he is to be murdered for delaying Astral x Greaser in story.
>>27469427
The raider on the right is much more thick lined and has an asymetric pattern.
Clearly that is the protagonist here.
Pictured: Pip if she was a melee oriented build.
>>27454033
What did she find?Was it a perfectly preserved box of condoms?
>>27469427
>A bunch of raider mares holding down a random wastelander so he can get his throat and plot pounded into oblivion by a strong stallion.
>Probably will tease their poor victim the entire time as they hold him down. Making snarky comment the whole time and cheering the top on.
Never realized how lewd that image was until now.
>>27470165
Great a new wasteland fetish. Like I needed this with the bloatfly larva on mare tits too.
>>27470165
Its not a good set of raiders unless they do so with a blade to his horn.
Raider sex strength contest.
The blade goes at the base of the victim's horn.
He has to resist the raider's mighty pounding horn or lose his own.
Afterwards, the raider mares play with the horn part of their choice, maybe it won't break off.
>>27470174
>>27470204
>The original image was just for a dumb vote story.
Dammit. Well, I guess I gotta write the proper story myself.
>>27464945Yes.
I have joined a nunnery that I may have my soul saved from the demons of semen and edge most foul.
I have found a new form of the feathered wing and to which it is attached.
>>27470700
>I have joined a nunnery
do you even have ladyparts
>>27470700
>>27470750
Nymph confirmed trap.
Anybody remember three threads ago the talk about Homage being a master-manipulator-type villain?
Re-reading the fiction, it happened to me that it can surely be so. If you remember the point where Homage ask LittlePip to go to Red Racer to retrieve music for her, she in fact tested Little Pip’s will to satisfy her demands. The Ghoul Doctor was slain in the process.
Similarly, Little Pip asking Homage about if there was a pony that would like her, Homage answered: “I might.”
Is Homage the Pony fighting the good fight, or is she that puppetmaster, using incredibly strong but morally uncertain ponies to rally up fanaticism for her cause, her long-term goal to wipe all type of opposing forces to her ideal, including Red Eye and the Enclave.
It's a nice thought experiment
>>27471063
Manipulator.
As horrible as the ghoul doctor was, his research was extremely important.
If there was a serious effort at curing taint infection, something at once nonexistent and all pervasive, then it needs to be backed.
Simply having incarceated him, then handing over Arbu for testing would have been a far more interesting decision.
Given we know taint can not go beyond Maripony, and that Hoimage was spewing the warning of taint, I would said Homage wants taint as the same fear we have right now of nuclear power.
This ideal invisible near undetectable item she can use to coral and contain a populace with the claim of unsafe supplies.
A perfect poison if you would.
Naturally occurring, pervasive, and could come from anywhere.
>>27471139
Mengele please
>>27471139
>>27471063
Eh, its a interesting topic to discusWhich this thread needs, so, thanksbut personally I think deciding "Oh no, the Author ACTUALLY wanted to say/His words actually mean is kinda retarded.
Like People who wont tire to say that lord of The Rings is AKSHUALLY about WW2, when Tolkien himself often enough said "No, thats retarded"
Sometimes the value is in the reading you make, not what the author intended to begin with.
>>27471216
Eh I gues, But going as far as saying "Oh actually, this whole story is edited Propaganda as it would exist in the world in the book" is just too /pol/tier theorycrafting for me. But hey, if you have fun with it. Just voicing my Opinion.
>>27471242
Oh agreed on the editing part.
As for Homage's motives, that is separate fun.
Much like how we can say Calamity is Jewish and committing crimes on the surface, in a town far from his home, due to wearing black and a black hat.
Where in, he could go home if he wanted to, but is so overcome with the desire to do evilhelp the surface
>>27471260
That's stupid because as far as I remember he was chased down by the Enclave and he would not be a dashite and branded if so.
>>27471274
Do you really think that Jews are a unified hivemind of evil?
And would not track down a criminal member to a foreign state while they happen to be invading anyways?
>>27471063
>mfw I realize Past Sins was actually printed
Also I really hope the printed version of Pink Eyes was heavily edited to fix the second-language grammar.
>>27471200
>>27471242
Original 'Homage is an evil mastermind' poster here. I also don't really agree with the whole 'lel Littlepip is an unreliable narrator XD' stuff to waive away anything that's proplematic. That's why I specified that the the hypothetical edited Book of Littlepip would not be the same as the FoE we read.
To be specific: I say FoE is the original recording Pip made, while the 'Book of Littlepip' is the edited and published version Homage and her Twilight Society cronies made. I speculated a few things that could possibly be removed, for example I was 100% certain Littlepip murdering Calamity's brother was cut. Not only would it work against Homage's agenda, but the only one who could object to the edit would be Pip, and she was too cowardly to admit the truth to Calamity in person herself.
Again, any edits would likely have to go through Pip and the party, so the final copy wouldn't be some drastically different story save a few minor tweaks here and there. It's also possible that some of the secret Pre-war stuff Pip uncovered would be removed in order to conceal them from the general public. Some names might be removed, etc. It's also possible the writing was made more 'sophisticated' and some of Pip's colorful internal swearing would be removed.
Most of the edits I imagine would have to be sneaky. A little rewording here or there can really change the meaning of some phrases.
I also acknowledged in my post that Kkat likely didn't anticipate Homage to be seen as a manipulator. Or, well, more likely he did but wanted her to be seen as a 'good' manipulator because she's 'fighting the good fight' and that 'sometimes being honest is knowing when not to be'. Which essentially just boils down to 'ends justify the means' or more specifically 'If you have a non-corrupt virtue/positive karma you can do literally anything to achieve your goals and as long as you maintain positive karma you are a cool dude'.
I unironically like Homage
Okay faggots
Writing from the perspective of children/foals... What the fuck is up with that? I'm looking at this piece I'm doing and I'm struggling with it, not because I don't really know what to say, but because I feel like cringing when I read what I write.
I mean, it makes sense that children who are ignorant or lacking in experience/knowledge wouldn't use certain words. Descriptions would be simplified and perhaps even lacking in description.
Emotions too, very stunted, or at least much more sensitive to those emotions and thus making their reactions more drastic. Watching/listening to children cry at my job or remembering the times I have seen others or myself cry at the age of 4 when I dropped my fucking McDonalds soda makes me wonder... Do we as adults not cry over spilt things or minor discomforts because we are desensitized to it and children are not? Cus that's one of the things I'm trying to write right now.
A kid crying because she doesn't know how to articulate her discomfort at losing something she has literally JUST been exposed to.
what do?
>>27471768
Literally worse than Nymph and Somber combined.
>>27471777
It's important to remember that kids are both heartless and remorseless because their brains haven't yet developed to the point where they understand consequences or sympathy/empathy. That's not to say they're malicious, but given the upbringing, they're capable of committing unspeakable acts without any kind of hesitation.
>>27471832
good response, ty, hope in thread slightly restored.
>>27471832
They don't really have that filter to know right from wrong
>>27471851
There's an additional part, you're conditioned to think a certain way, much as with any culture.
Children must be taught to agree on certain things, to when they understand be granted context of a certain thing.
So where you have some parts of the world slapping vicks on grandma till she is a squelchy pile of bone and goop in the house, you have others placing her on a platform to be claimed by the birds and carried to Heaven.
Then you have others that try to shelter the child forever from death and reality, all kind of funs.
So, you have the brains not formed, and then not programmed.
This means the kids will do what they want without cause, solely because they want.
>>27472488
Thanks, John Madden. That's why I said:
>their brains haven't yet developed to the point where they understand consequences or sympathy/empathy.
Which pony is most for sexual gun shooting?
