I'm going to step away once i put up the epilogue / concept dump tonight. We should send all these pastebins over to fingerbang too. Our thread cannot stand on its own anymore.

If only we had a thread archive.

bump for dump

Bump because I just want the epilogue

alright here

>Your story blends into time; exciting events both good and bad come too quickly, so suddenly to be recorded with diligence
>The hospital's assumptions are correct. Rainbow Dash has a tumor pressing on her amygdala, damaging her capacity to reason and restrict her fight-or-flight instincts
>This in and of itself is not a point of great chaos. Her family, while distant, is well-insured and the tumor is removed without any complications

>Save, perhaps, recovering from an increasingly violent reputation
>For a time you refuse to speak to her, and rightly so. She harmed your love and often struck you or started fights with no reason
>But Fluttershy broke through to you
>You have no idea why she would be so firmly in her corner, but you eventually come to realize the pain that Rainbow's condition causes her in the wake of its passing
>Reports of many tearful nights. AJ refuses to speak to her even after all of this

>While you, Fluttershy, AJ, and Featherweight train for the Friendship Games with the other Apples and Mr. Biceps,
>Fluttershy convinces you to talk with Rainbow more
>Already depressed at being unable to compete in boxing due to the risks associated with further head injury, her distance from AJ gnaws at her
>Every night over sodas and snacks she opens up a little bit more

>Hours before she first dropped you to the pavement, she and AJ shared their first kiss.
>And the twisted curse of it all?
>The emotional high mixed with her ailing amygdala drove her haywire
>She took it out on you
>And in the end, that led to AJ's fury
>She was already confused, as you gleaned from her during training
>All her life she was raised without hatred, but perhaps... some disapproval for those who weren't willing to provide god with a few children, one might say
>That mixed with the irrationality of Rainbow's cruel actions drove her away
>One night you get them onto the same veranda at AJ's farmhouse
>You take a minute to mediate, just to make sure a fight doesn't break out

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"AJ, you know Rainbow's been beating herself up over this. She regrets what she's done."
>"Yeah... Ah know..."
"And she was mad about it, Rain. And she had a right to be. But she's ready to forgive you if you're brave enough to come out."
>"M... mhm..."

>You ducked away, giving them their privacy
>*THWUMP*
>You skidded and turned around, scrambling on arms and legs back to disrupt the fight
>...of course, it turns out to just be a fight over whose tongue is stronger
>They embrace each other so desperately and vigorously that they don't even notice your return
>So you slink away and give them their time

>You feel that you've won a victory without a battle
>Once you would prefer to see Rainbow smashed into the pavement for her actions
>But seeing her happy like that?
>Watching tears fall down her and AJ's faces from passionate reunion?
>Nothing could be a more wholesome resolution

>Fluttershy struggles, carrying a silent burden as always
>You go to meet her father properly one day, sitting down for dinner
>The affair goes south after mere minutes
>Fluttershy lets slip the story about the purse, then you accidentally mention the fights
>And one thing leads to another, and Ocean Rig drops an ultimatum:
>"My only daughter..." he seethes, "If you wish to besmirch and toss away and disregard me and everything I and your mother MADE for you, refusing our security and continuing to associate with the COMMON folk, I will NOT room you or finance some wishy-washy degree! First things first, Anon must go!"
>Some more yelling and a heartbroken girl later,

>Rarity takes her in. You and Fluttershy reaffirm your commitment
>Each day you have yet more reasons to wonder at the wellspring of pure love you stumbled into a relationship with
>Fluttershy grows more and more dedicated to her craft with boxing, and Rarity deigns to make the two of you some matching apparel

>>27384273
>Green and yellow. On paper the concept is repulsive, but with the backing of traditional fighting styles and color sets, Rarity, ever the genius, weaves this in like the master she is.

>The Friendship games come round, finally!
>You're called to family business two cities over after the early boxing events, and you're told you miss quite the show with regards to a new Twilight (there's two?) and some sort of "magic" mishaps
>But the fighting itself goes swimmingly
>To a degree...

>Fluttershy lost her first two practice bouts weeks ago, and only got a draw in one recently
>You don't expect a miracle out of her, but your heart swells with pride whenever you see her lace up
>If nothing else, she's an inspiration
>Each fighter from the two teams of two gets to face both of the other team's opponents one-on-one
>The girls go first
>Fluttershy draws with her first opponent, some wiry CryPrep track star
>But the next match is almost disturbingly brutal
>Some party girl gone fighter named Lemon Zest blasts her around the ring for two rounds until you throw in the towel
>Fluttershy almost looks angry behind her bloodied face, but even she knows that there was nowhere but the canvas for her to go in that fight
>You ice her face and gently wipe away all evidence of scuffle, easing the knots in your stomach by declaring each second just how much you hate seeing her hurt
>"I-it's OK Anon. T-thanks for h-helping me so m-much."
>And she kisses you, and you kiss her back
"I just hate seeing..."
>And blah, blah, blah

>AJ gets revenge for Fluttershy though, coming out on top in both of her bouts
>Things go quite the same for you. Featherweight wins his first and ends up getting a TKO at the hands of some hulk monster
>The same first opponent is easy for you,
>And the one you call "hulk slowgan" eventually crumbles under your withering barrage, unable to counter your agile style

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>For whatever reason, the Games are called a draw. Most big events you can call in your side's favor though, and CHS has a lot to celebrate for a surprise strong showing.
>Prom comes a week later

>Of course Fluttershy accepts your promposal
>You swore to yourself you would never do one of those stupid things,
>But you end up breaking your back with Big Mac over a shit ton of heavy bags to spell out your question at the Orchard County gym
>And with flowers in hand, you greet Fluttershy on what she believed would be an uneventful day of training

>For your efforts in the Games, you and Fluttershy are made junior prince and princess
>And for the night itself, Rarity handles pictures and attire
>Not a day goes by afterwards that you don't feel the desire to thank your generous new friend profusely for everything
>Specifically, your date's black dress
>Whose thin velvet drapes over her succulent contours like the world's must alluring blanket
>Prom itself is a blur
>Dancing, all packed together in the sweaty hall
>Featherweight is there, all of the "Mane 6" too

>Naturally, you spend the last song of the dance with Fluttershy's warmth curled in your arms
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sLtRSIw3t8g
>Neither of you feel the need to open your eyes
>Just the two of you, together
>With Rainbow back, the Games over, and her new home with Rarity secure, at least for the time being
>You all split into the night, and you walk her to your car to drive her back to Rarity's
>Until she pulls on your tie with both hands
>Her eyes shimmer under the moonlight, cheeks glowing like sunset
>When she says,
>"Anon, I don't want to wait anymore."

>You spent the night at your place
>Luckily, all family was away on account of some obscure wedding
>Just you and the one you were made for, the one who was made for you

>>27384410

> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ztGPYPArAyE
>Months become years
>Senior year comes and ends all too quickly
>You have no outstanding ambitions for glory, working at gyms and studios in your free time for respectable money.
>Fluttershy finds herself pressed to get a degree to break into vet work
>You don't need to think before you offer to move in with her at UCanter and help her pay for tuition

>Which is the story of how you sort of go to college
>The two of you in an off-campus apartment
>You work at Hayburger, a Muay Thai studio, and a regular gym
>Boxing whenever you can, and picking up some Taekwondo and BJJ on the side
>Fluttershy is devoted to her studies, but seems to always find the time to train with you
>Things are never easy, but through all the struggle and stress of poor living all on your own, she comes out with a master's degree and open offers for her expertise at nearly every animal hospital in the metro area

>Meanwhile, you take up prizefighting
>At first, the boxing bug hits you merely as a hobby
>But when you see real money in it, you jump on the train and make a name for yourself in minor circles as a quick, wily fighter able to put on a good show and challenge even the most skilled veterans in the area
>You get a bigger than average fight one day
>It's a big deal for about half of the city
>The rest of the Mane 6 show up, naturally
>How could such a fantastic group of friends just drift apart, after all?

>You pull off a KO in the 9th with a wild left hook, and you hardly notice it through your swelled eyes
>Ten thousand dollars
>You depart the canvas as soon as you can, joining your jubilant lover ringside
>When, after the first hail of kisses subsides and your face is scrubbed clean,
>Rainbow passes you a little box

>It's something you've discussed from time to time, and mostly ever assumed
>And Fluttershy knows it when she sees it. Her friends know it. Even the crowd knows it

>>27384453
>The boisterous crowds all hush at once
>You get to say what you know you've always wanted to say
>On what feels like the first day of your life

"Fluttershy, my truest love and most valued partner, will you do me the honor of being my wife?"
>She's the kind to turn puffy and cry like a leaky faucet
>"Y-YES *SNIFF* ANON I L*HIC* LOVE YOU SO M-MUCH"
>And true to form she falls to pieces in your exhausted arms
>Every cell she touches screams in pain and soreness, but not in a million years can they ever drown out the divine symphony of the apex of love

>The wedding is a quiet affair at Fluttershy's request on the first best day of your life. Featherweight is the best man and Rainbow the maid of honor, leading the rest of the Mane 6
>The little shindig is paid for by your prizes, saved in secret for this very event
>And for the down payment on the house ten minutes away from the vet clinic whose offer Fluttershy accepted
>You can't help but feel the old masters, some of your de facto fathers, approve
>You won. Not by making enemies out of anything, and still without compromising your identity

>>27384520
>Years become a decade with change
>You sit on a lawn chair in your backyard soaking up a rare dose of sun with your wife snuggled up under your tough, haggard form
>Rainbow, now a sports trainer and practicing Buddhist, plays in the yard with AJ and some of your children
>Of which there are five, in fact
>You knew Fluttershy had a deep love for animals
>But her fecundity and near-obsession with children were twin surprises
>A boy and a girl were a twin surprise too, at that
>Among two other boys and one girl

>Aside from training and the occasional small fight here and there, you've given up the hard pro fighting to be a stay at home dad
>Almost instantly when you saw your firstborn as a new father, the drive to throw yourself needlessly into harm's way to take and throw punches subsided
>And it's a new role which you're quite taken with
>"Daddy" sounds better than "champ" anyhow
>A torn-up offer for a paid exhibition match with some league champion sits under your chair as you look over at the mother of your children
>Snoozing now, quietly
>"Honey" sounds pretty nice too

>You take a deep breath, kissing her gently on the forehead
>Wondering how an angel like her fell and joined you
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WaDsrN-Yx4g

FIN

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I can't express how sorrowful I am over the incomplete nature of the story, but this sort of closure is immensely satisfying and certainly dulls the pain. I hope you've all enjoyed the ride despite my inability to deliver it in full. Below I will copy my draft doc.

-amber lamps
-fuck
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-AMYGDALA

Fluts gets Anon to meet family
Like him at first kinda
Dont want her to date a low class guy with no college plans or shit
"This RAKE?"
Fighter brute idiot? PAH!

Fluts starts training forreal

Rainbow recovery

Anon finally dinners with the senpai
Expresses not wanting to educate, just train and go into bodybuilding or UFC
Father has it up to here with her being in unsafe situations / bad guys
She accidentally admits she got nearly mugged
Abandon leaving the fold of business to pursue odd stuff (vet science) and shit or lose daddy's free money
Doesn't abandon
Fluts moves in with Rarity (generous)
Rarity makes anon some fighting gear which is fuckin rad

Rainbow recovery

Fluts loses practice bout
Serious doubts
Press F

Rainbow recovery

Loses another practice bout
Draw!

HEY GUYS PROM AFTER FGAMES

Help Rainbow ask AJ to prom

Fgames intro and stuff
Dealing with Cprep and their brute man

Scilight turns to the good side
Gets jumped walking to the city bus stop by Cprep peeps
Mane 6 + Anon = anger
RD, AJ, Pinkie, Fluttershy, and Anon escort her
RD AJ and Pinkie end up fighting some of the other girls
Fluttershy takes one down
Brute man grabs Fluttershy by the hair and breaks her phone
Anon = 10,000000% mad
Utterly destroys his face

Prom prince and princess
Rara "flutters you look marvelous in your dress, model for me some time"
black dress picture

last slow dance of the night
"I don't want to wait anymore anon"
Drive home to Anon's place (mom outta town)
pound town


LONG TERM
Fluttershy goes to school to be a vet tech taking loans and doing work
Anon works at a hayburger and a boxing gym to make ends meet
>After fluttershy gets degree (masters?) or ~6 years
They've cut student debt down a shit ton
Anon wins first fight, uses money he's secretly saved up as down payment on a house and pay off last of debt
Proposes
Yes
Ten years later

>>27384548
Rainbow is a sports trainer and uses buddhism to calm down
Hang out all the time with the girls at AJ's farm still
five kids (TRAIT:FECUND WIFE)
Fluts is a vet, Anon is a stay at home dad part time prizefighter
Hears that the heavyweight champ is open to all challengers
cliffhanger end

>>27384555
These are notes for stuff that already got written:

go 2 farm
party up
aj invite to deck 4 a cider
"it's not alcoholic right"
"no but this is" grab beer
wrong about anon. like martial arts? anon wants to do boxing
-didn't want to believe rd was that bad
-on the bright side fluts is happy likes anon
wanna hit the bag? knows boxing
anon goes hard on the bag
fluts comes wondering for anon, AJ leaves
anon leaves fluts wanting the monkey d
fluts hits the bag "but I am weak and helpless and I have friends who understand" but she feels wrong about it but does have an interest in boxing
fleetfoot shows up with applebloom after a dato
fleetfoot and anon can stay for the slepover
GRANNY SMITH CALLS PINKIE "PACHINKO PARLOR"

MS DOO TEXTS FLUTTERS

Meet Ms. Doo and Dinky again
Little dinky asks "do you guys wrestle"
"well my mom says people who love each other wrestle sometimes! like how when Dr. Whooves-"
"Alright that's enough sweetie"

>>27384559
-monday
-friendGames sports announce
-boxing is one
-rainbow is back
-Shy "Anon I'll go with you and I'll make sure she doesn't give you any trouble"

-Mystified by this passionate girl all through the day
-Praise the heavens for the coincidences that led you together
-doing something with featherweight after school, sign up oth for guys boxing team

-next friday, hang out with fluttershy at her hosue. Ditzy told her to come straight home. "Oops everyone's out for a meeting"


-"Want to take it slow / hard to control myself"
-"At the same time you make me feel so brave. None of it scares me anymore"
-"I feel like you're a confident person. But not just in yourself. It makes me feel confident. I... I have always been interested in boxing. I never told AJ but I love watching her and Applebloom and Big Mac practice. And I loved seeing you practice.
-Hot tub heart to heart with don't you wanna fall

But you make it feel so easy. Like all I need to do is just go and do it. That's why I want to be careful, since I still want our time to be careful. I don't want to be unchaste. B-but... I do... um..."

"Anon. I don't know much about it but I think I love you"
-As anon leaves switch to fshy
-Be super fucking happy
-Ms. Doo "So did you tell him?"
-MHM
-Ms. Doo "And what did he say?"
-SQUEE

-next week monday assembly annoucning Fgames participants. Rainbow and AJ are the female boxing team
Pep rally
-Practicing starts that day after school
-RD challenges anon
-Fluttershy gets in way
-Rainbow yells
-Fluttershy pushes her when she tries to push through
-Rainbow blind rage pushes her
-Anon gets 1000% mad
-Anon remembers he doesn't want a fight
-"I couldn't care less about you. Just leave us alone. We haven't done anything to you. Especially her"
-RD fucks with Anon
-AJ gets 200% mad and throws down with RD and smacks her
-Trade blows, she passes out in corner


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And that's it for all my notes.

>>27383357
bemp

>>27385602
Thx

eee

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