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Comic tumblr archive:
http://marble-pie.tumblr.com/tagged/apa/
>>27372120
Sorry everyone for the delay, next week I should be back to more frequent updates. At least I hope so, I've done a lot of 3D assets and I think importing it all to engine and setting up levels should be less intensive work.
>>27372135
>3D assets
can you expand about it? i wanna know
forgot to toggle eye shine layer.
>>27372120
Muad is too lewd dude
>>27372120
>>27372167
What a cute cat Maud
>>27372120
I like the way as you write Maud.
She's blunt and straightforwarded. Like a tossed rock.
>>27372133
>>27372222
>>27372255
Uh oh
Will this thread be blessed by dubs?
>>27372167
Nice page,look like we have another competitor to be the first to be filled with the human magic
>>27372167
>test without receptacle
Equestria have fleshlight?
>>27372270
you tell me
>>27372120
As funny as human fetish can be, it's horribly over-played in this comic. Even the blatant sexual outbursts by the ponies is really overdone. Should probably tone it down a bit.
>>27372167
4th and 5th panel have sparkly manes, others don't. Intended?
>>27372368
Hello EQD
>>27372368
Pounding pretty pony pussy!
>>27372167
The butt, it exites her so
>>27372120
>>27372167
So what's up with their hairs?
>>27372380
Nah, just an overlook, I should save the sparkles last and do it all on same layer for the whole page I think to avoid forgetting to add them.
>>27372382
They hate this lewd comic but still will advertise it to gain some extra visits and score some extra ads money.
>>27372410
my art friend used to make a checklist on the rough draft and then mark them off as she went.
>>27372382
I don't know what that means, but it's just an honest critique. I don't know if this is meant to be a borderline porn story, but it would help the comedy bit if it wasn't so overdone.
Now with extra bucket of glitter.
>>27372491
Can you put some glitter on anon's head?
>>27372167
aww yiss
princess loving
also maud 2cute
I just want to take the time out to provide Mr./Miss Pencils with some validation. We all super appreciate your work. Keep doin' wat'cha do, keep being you.
Thirsty princess
>>27372491
Your work is amazing. Not to rush you, but I was wondering if there are going to be lewds. I'd love to see them. Your horse anatomy is great, and seeing a fit man plow a mare drawn by you would be something worth framing!
>>27372167
I hope you realize there must be princess petting and cuddling at some point.
>>27372605
Read the pencils tumblr
http://marble-pie.tumblr.com/post/143472684343/you-made-over-70-pages-so-far-are-we-getting-any#notes
>>27372654
SOON
>>27372120
>Even the princesses aren't safe from Anon's attractiveness
Even God can't save them now
>>27372491
if someone doesnt give you a grammar list, ill do so after my movie is over.
>>27372368
Look at this mare.
Look at that little smile on her face - it might be the cutest thing I've ever seen.
And I've seen a lot of cute in my days.
>>27372491
>Humans are at their most dangerous when their hearts are honest and pure
Gramatical error or human lore?
Anon magic would goes nuts easy because he isn't evil?or the princess thing that anon is pure/virgin and that is dangerous for any human in equestria?
>>27372887
I think Celestia is the cutest.
>>27372368
Problem is it's so over-done that you might as well go full retard with it. Only thing left is a lewd granny scene.
>>27372927
I disagree but respect your opinion.
>>27372681
How can you tell? I don't know if he meant page 82 had lewds or those were the number of pages.
Also forget all the people saying the ponies are to assertive. Pencils is doing a great job and the characterization of each mare is pretty spot on for a comedic herem-ish fic.
>>27372904
I would not be surprised if Pencils is a Harry Potter fan. That's a mighty fine Dumbledore-tier quote you've got here.
>>27373037
Never read any of the books actually, saw few of the movies but I think I was too old already to be in the "demographics" when the series rolled out.
>>27372491
I'm sorry Pencils, but it needs more glitter
>>27373134
>>27372120
I want to touch princess celestia
>>27373075
Yeah I didn't read my first hp book until the series was done and I was in high school. They're for adults too though. Anyway, that you haven't read them just makes it more impressive because that really is something Dumbledore would say. The man was chalk full of little nuggets of wisdom.
>>27373258
Where would you want to touch her?
>>27373271
Now I want a pic of Dumbledore drawing pony butts
>>27372491
So ... is Anon's butt gonna get a horsepussy edit too?
>>27372120
>>27372167
>without a "receptacle"
>"we need to watch you fap"
>>27373277
Everywhere
I want to give her sensory overload
>>27372782
See >>27372482
Also, quit getting offended for other people. It makes you look like a faggot. If he wants to reject the criticism I'm sure he'd say something.
>>27372936
The least he could do in that case is not just make every pony instantly go "dat ass" every time they see him for the first time. Take to longer comedic route rather than the lazy route. It's no funny when literally everyone does it repeatedly in the same exact manner.
Like when Anon split the cliff in two and Marble went awestruck. That was good. Having Twilight randomly go "Now suck on it like it's my horn" for literally no reason is pretty stupid. Mildly funny, but it could have been played out a lot better if he went about it in a different way. And now with Celestia going "nice ass" is just completely out of left field and unnecessary. Maud's blatant sexual remarks are actually hilarious due to her point-blank and casual nature that she naturally has.
>>27373333
>>27373431
>Celestia will watch alone to protect everyone is some magic surge happens
>Luna hear anon moan in the other room
>She go to check her sisters innocently to ask if everything is fine there
>open the door
>Anon just cum and Luna get a facial by accident
>"sister, this human milk taste really weird" with a big and innocent smile
>awkward silence for 5 minutes
>>27373657
Welp
I lost my sides. Thank a lot based pencils
>>27373657
>>27373657
Words cannot express..
>>27373657
My new headcanon is that pencils is actually Dumbledore
>>27373761
Albus Pencil Wulfric Brain Dumbledore.
>>27373657
>this actually exist now
We crossed the line?
>>27373540
>quit getting offended for other people
Your faggotry offends me anon.
>>27373540
You're not making a criticism. You're just saying ways to do things.
You're not contributing for ideas to the story either.
The way the story is told is the artist who decide and what the story will tell is the thing that(You)could suggest to make some useful contribution.
>>27373657
based
>>27373657
>>27373667
luna is the best when she's oblivious
>>27372167
>spare no expenses
I hope they hire more than one IT graduate.
>>27373889
Back when, if someone wanted to talk about sex, they'd just talk about sex, not make bad jokes.
>>27373657
Nothing short of glorious.
>>27372491
only grammar error i see that stands out is in the bottom left panel
>and will let this human to live among us.
and will allow this human to live among us.
nice work.
>>27373834
I'm making contributions by suggesting alternate styles for his comedy that I think>opinionswould make his jokes stand out more and not fall flat.
I have no issues with the story. It's your generic run-of-the-mill AiE with the exception of his impending nuclear detonation (which is pretty original) and "mare-lust for his dick on sight" trope. Pretty basic shit.
>>27373657
And so, with that that one picture, a man in Finland made a man in Mexico spit out his cereal.
Got to love the internet.
>>27372120
Pencils,why do you make me feel things that I don't understand?
>>27373657
THE MADMAN
>>27372120
That last panel. That. Last. Panel.
Sides are now requiring alicorn intervention to maintain a stable orbit around Equestria.
>>27374682
Celestia confirmed for thirsty.
>>27373657
You couldn't resist those quads of epic enchantment, could you?
>>27374700
We can improve it. We have the technology.
>>27373806
LONG TIME AGO. And it was so long, that we forgot it, hence we can cross it again.
>>27374438
Did he make you spit outplasmatoo?
>>27372167
>using layers
>>27373657
those better be male booties he's drawing
>>27372167
>butt
And that's why you never skip the legs day.
>>27372120
ffs Maud. not in front of the primcesses
>>27373657
a small edit and we also have DaVinci
>>27372120
IT BEGINS
>>27374981
>Breathing
>>27372120
>>27372167
>>27372491
>Maud getting straight to the point
Nice
>>27373657
Hey pencils, which ponies are up for grabs? All the ponies that have color to them? Because I'm interested in seeing Celestia get railed.
>>27374792
I remember reading this one funny >green about ''Lord Anon'' or something, where Anon just bullshitted his way through anything. I can't find it anywhere, does someone have it?
>>27373806
We're so far across the line, we can't even see it! The line is a dot to us!
>>27372120
>>27372491
>>27373657
Oooooh yes... I cannot wait to see what this supposed 'test' will consist of. ...Celestia magically stimulating him to orgasm? Him wanking off?
The blush on her face as her horn glows and she hears him moan and then... cum everywhere!
>>27376055
Pencils already debunked the "color implies waifu" idea. Color is just a measure of innate magic (dunno why Twi is desaturated though)
>>27376102
"Anon Cons Equestria" (http://pastebin.com/Jkf74FxJ) instantly comes to mind. There was a "Lord Anon" green (http://pastebin.com/CzAxmMzp) going on around the same time, but I don't remember it being a comedy.
>>27376233
Good work, if only someone could also replace that package with a Moud.
>>27373657
>>27376327
>replacing best Pie with average Pie
na m8, na
>>27376284
And then she cannot resist trying how "magic" tastes like.
>>27376335
Quads have spoken, he had no choice.
>>27376337
I mean, to be more accurate to the last events. Maud now seems to be the first on the lewd-list, if only royalty doesn't cheat.
>>27376233
>sucking drawfagcock this hard
>>27376361
>Failing to bait and troll this hard
>>27376361
+!
Fuck drawfags! Wheres my CYOA thread? The only true and rightful content of the mlp!
>>27376361
You really think someone would do that, go on 4chan and suck drawfaggot cock?
>>27376322
holy shit thanks mister, I remember enjoying both of these.
>>27376372
He's right, you know. Frankly, it's pretty embarassing to see.
>>27372120
>>27373657
Thank you Pencils. It may sound stupid, but you've made my utterly shitty day a little brighter.
>>27376572
(u)
Celestia is an ass mare.
Good taste.
>>27376371
I got three (you)s out of it. That's not bad.
>>27372154
I think that's what Pencils is currently studying, don't think he means any of the assets are relevant to pone comic.
>>27377074
i know, but i'm still interested
>>27372927
>>>27372887
>I think Celestia is the cutest.
True is, to Celestia is a Celestial beauty
>>27372887
But My heart is for Luna
>>27376102
kek
>>27373657
"Sir, what do you see when you look in the mirror?"
"I? I see...."
*looks in the mirror, sees a buncha dude ponies dancing in lingerie*
"....Socks. I see socks, Harry."
>>27376233
When you become a meme, it means you have made it.
>>27372904
Or perhaps that being noble and good can make you forget the danger they represent and the magical power they possess.
>>27372887
>>27372927
HNNNNG
>>27376786
would that make Luna a cock mare?
>>27372887
Weapons grade diabeetus right there.
>>27377242
We're all gonna become memes, brah
>>27377627
>>27377627
But who/what is /mlp/ strongest meme?
>>27378054
IWTCIRD
>>27372491
Super forward Maud is great.
>>27373657
I want you to know this is my desktop background currently.
>>27378437
You brave man.
>>27378054
Gay bathhouse
>>27378535
do you fix yor computer already?
>>27378535
I want to remind you not to be a lazy bitch.
>>27378544
Oh shit, what happened?
It look like the only characters who don't want to fuck Anon is Discord and CMC.
>>27378535
It's okay, I don't think anyone'll notice what he's saying/drawing. And if they do, well....
Like Dumbledore says, there are all kinds of courage....
>>27378581
That's probably because if Scootaloo knew, she'd be begging Anon to cum inside Rainbow Dash to make her superawesomealicorn.
And Discord would probably come full circle and we'd have some serious happy gay fun time going on when reverting to human.
>>27372120
>>27372167
>>27372491
>"The little pony makes a good point,..."
Does anyone else find weird Celestia talking in that way? I'm pretty sure that she knows who Maud is, more so considering that she has already assisted to the GGGala.
I think it would be much more appropriate of her character to say:
>"My little pony makes a good point,..."
or
>"Maud Pie makes a good point,..."
or
>"Ms. Pie makes a good point,..."
>>27378774
I agree
I would have gone with "This little pony" if anything, or maybe "The little mare"
>>27372120
>>27372167
>>27372491I think there's something really weird going on with Celestia's neck.
It just seems that Luna show none of the other ponies sexual interest towards Anon... does this just show her innocence or lack of experience?
>>27378970
thousand years on the moon does this things to you
>>27378105
Even though I don't like RD I have to agree with this.
>>27378917
OH GOD
WHY ARE ANON'S HANDS SO FUCKING TINY AND HIS ARMS SO WEIRDLY SHAPED
WHAT'S WRONG WITH CELESTIA'S NECK
I CAN'T STOP FINDING WEIRD SHIT EVERYTIME I LOOK
>>27378539
>hasn't been used in years
>>27376233
How does a pencil draw with pencils
>>27372120
>>27376785
What are you a child? Criticism isn't trolling, kid. Y'all need to stop acting like fucking faggots and suck OP's cock. He won't stop drawing if you show him a little less attention or give him valid crits about his comic.That Dumbledore picture was retarded
>>27379604
>>27379604
I have to admit it really has been an issue lately where anything that isn't a grammar correction is immediately seen as trolling. This is what ends up making people hate others.
>>27379752
Pencil seems genuinely grateful for the grammar and art critiques. It's the rabid children in this thread I have an issue with. It's mostly why I steer clear of the thread entirely, but I had some bits I wanted to him to take into consideration.
>>27379604
>Criticism
calling something retarded isnt criticism. if you dont have anything constructive to say, dont be surprised when your comment isnt met with anything constructive.
>>27379752
really it depends how you say it.
>>27378774 is a good example of suggestive feedback.
>>27372368 could have been better, but didnt deserve the sudden backlash of whiteknights. all it would take is one anon explaining that this whole comic was based on the old "ponies attracted to anon" threads, in which ponies are overly attracted to a physical adonis anon and hes oblivious to this fact. its supposed to be like a harem comedy.
>>27377237
underrated post
>>27380439
>calling something retarded isnt criticism.
I know. I wasn't critiquing it. I just thought it was retarded.
Celestia is a horse
>>27376322
Anyone know if that Anon Cons Equestria is going to get updated?
>>27372491
marbs
>>27382397
waifu
Thanks pencils. Its a good start
Pencils, draw pony with opposite hand.
>>27382756
>drawing with your odd hand
>drawing a picture upsidedownthe picture, not you
>drawing without using undo, ever
aw, the fundraw challenges.
Page 8?
Should we let the thread die of natural cause or prolong its life?
Love you Penci-poo!
>>27385077
i say let's prolong his life for a little bit
>>27383907
No eraser.
One layer.
No items.
Fox only.
Final Destination.
>>27379481
With his pencil.
>>27372120
>>27372491
Can we get a textless crop of Maud yawning (preferably without Luna as well)?
I want to lick Lunas dock and see if she reacts
>>27372491
Yawning Maud is literally the single cutest thing I've seen in the past year.
Yeah, I have no critique. I just like what happened there.
Page 9 whine time!
with the princesses arriving, will Limey still be able to win the anon bowl?
>>27388417
No one stands a chance against Celestia.
>>27388492
No one.
>>27372491
I want to fulfill Maud's every wish.
>>27388521
But Celly, you are the sun
>>27378581
Pinkie, Rainbow, Fluttershy and AJ have shown 0 interest. 4/6 mane 6 confirmed dykes.
first I was in team Limestone but now I want Anon to seduce Moonbutt
damn innocent mare
I WANT PRINCESS LUNA TO PEG ME
WillBESTButtever make an appearance ??
>>27389784
she did already
read the comic, bro
>>27389812
You.....
You're a nigger.....
Stop being a nigger....
>>27388521
>dat crotchboob holder on her swimsuit, onekini or whatever
TexAnon is so based.
>>27390068
Pone bikinis with teat covers are adorable. Wish they were more popular.
>>27388521
You do know that Anon is Saitama by this point?
>>27390643
Except Saitama is an enjoyable character though.
Ponies are scared and horny
>>27391467
Why does mare want the dick so bad?
>>27389040
>implying Pinkie isn't the town bike
>>27372120
>>27372167
>>27372491
Did I missed a page or something? Because I have no idea how Anon knows who the princesses are and how he's completely nonchalant about how different they are to other ponies.
I don't even think they have even introduced themselves and no one but Quartz has reacted surprised to their visit.
It just seems pretty rushed. I was looking at previous pages and there's not even an panel showing the princesses arriving to the farm. It's just Luna and Celestia walking for a while and Celestia suddenly knocking on a door out of nowhere.
>>27393455
None of that bothered me. Hell, I didn't even notice any of it before you mentioned it.
I hereby diagnose you with autism
>>27393455
>how different they are
>iz the biggest so I'm in charge
Never felt like any of it was an issue. If it helps, they were talking about Celestia long before it cut to her and Luna
>>27388521
"You have fur, or a.....coat, or what ever the hell you call it."
>>27388521
>you will never rub sunscreen on that perfect butt
Just end my life already
>>27393455
I'm sure most ponies have gotten pretty used to them showing up uninvited.
Anon seems like he stopped questioning pony things long ago.
>>27394373
you'll stop questioning reality as well after you blow up a field with a rock, and defeat a dark souls 2 boss while you were doing that
Some pony needs to inform Anon exactly who he is dealing with, Anon then needs to react all nervous because ABSOLUTE ROYAL MONARCHY is talking to him as if he were best buds or some shit.
Hilarity ensues and shit.
Pencils comic is still enjoyable.
>>27375762
Oh god, i want to penetrate that mare so fucking much.
>>27394766
Seth pls
>>27394788
Have a random Image
>>27373691
I GOT THAT REFERENCE!
>>27391467
Pone is terrified of penis, yet pone need penis.
[SPOILER]TFW this is my fetish.[/SPOILER]
>>27394743
He referred to Celestia as "princess" and Twilight and Papyra already discussed Celestia in his presence. I'm pretty sure that would make less sense than what we have now.
>>27394800
>cranky not even in the image
fucking dropped.
>>27393455
Seems like a recurring problem Pencils has with his panel layouts. Igneous Rock shows up out from nowhere as well.
>tfw anon is jerking it, not paying attention
>Celestia/Luna is watching him, breaking down inside
>Just before he finishes, one of them hops onto his dick
>engage white-eyes magic empowerment mode
probably not going to happen, but I can dream
>>27395021
Just a different exposition than what pencils chose.
>>27376102
>>27395617
Top kek
>>27395307
why are you posting a faggot horse
I want to see an episodeor at least an animated shortwith pencils drawing style
>>27395617
Golden lines... totally underrated.
>>27395797
Because no one will stop me.
>>27372120
Is there anywhere to read this from the start?
Trying to read it chronologically on tumblr is a hassle and a half.
>>27396026
its probably on sadpanda, but you can read it from the start on the tumblr.
>>27396026
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/900558/8d59cc31d0/
>>27396026
>>27396026
>>27396056
Wait no, use this
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/934219/a76aa1d04e/
![FANMADE_Derpy_peering_over[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/A0rIvXz.jpg "FANMADE_Derpy_peering_over[1].jpg")
>>27396066
Thanks
>>27396061
Oh. Reading is hard okay
>>27396066
>dat near perfect rating
>>27372120
>>27396113
Oh my, I wonder if Pencils will add a little Derpy to the story.
>>27395617
Iallways thought someone was going to turn that intoa comic
>>27396588
>mouthing the cherries
Stop it.
>>27397344
>>27396056
>>27396066
>tfw thought it meant this was a legit hentai.
>tfw thought OP was japanese for a sec.
Would pass desu.
>>27397368
>Mistaking Finland with Japan
That's not very nice, especially since the war.
>>27386721
But what truly is a pencil?
>>27396066
By the way, the comic has partial translations in Italian, Russian and Chinese.
>>27397860
Any status update on what the japanese think about this comic?
>>27397860
>Partial translation in Russian
Now this is interesting. Where can I find an example of Russian translation of that comic?
>>27397955
>>27397914
Here's what's available of the Russian translation. Of the three, it seems to be the one that's still being worked on. The other two are barely past chapter 1.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/931380/9d03b14e77/
Still no Japanese translation, which is ironic. Maybe Pencils could get a pixiv account?
>>27396066
I'm the guy who uploaded that to sadpanda, and I admit I did not think the comic would generate as much interest and positive feedback as it got. The rating alone was the biggest surprise, but I'm certainly not complaining.
>>27398072
What's an average rating look like there?
>>27398043
Italian version?
>>27398222
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/930994/306f00d23e/
Chinese, if anyone cares: http://g.e-hentai.org/g/914094/876220dc8b/
>>27398085
The rating varies, but looking through the first five pages of results for My Little Pony, this comic is the only thing with the full 5-star rating. A lot have 4 or 4.5
>>27398315
>http://g.e-hentai.org/g/930994/306f00d23e/
That's actually pretty neat. Dialogues look natural and the translation is rather good. I wasn't kind of expecting that, though I still prefer the English version. Call it force of habit or, whatever..
On another note, should we expect the next page to be out soon or not? Apart being busy with 3D assets Pencils said he did have issues with his computer, and I don't recall him saying they were solved.
>>27395932
>>27397955
Great, now I have to fap.Again.
boop
It worked last time.....
>content creator makes something quick and steady
>everyone loves it
>eventually content slows to a crawl
>eventually becomes a once a month deal
every time.
>>27399714
give it time man
you need to have faith
>>27399714
>updated four days ago
fuck's sake man, give it a week before you start doomsaying at least
>>27391467
What episode was this from?
Or was it not in an episode?
>>27400652
It's an edit
>>27400694
oh, its the one with the parasprites isn't it?
>>27400722
Heart's and Hooves Day
>>27397909
That's damn cute. Any higher resolution available?
>>27373657
When Dumbledore was killed, the first thing that some of his loyal underlings did was clean his study. Who knows what kind of seditious material a man like him would build up over his life that he wouldn't want others seeing. What they found were pony butts. Lots, and lots of pony butts. Some big. Some small. Some in lingerie, some in socks, but all pony butts. We can not say for sure what happened that night, but all we know is that the fires of Hogwarts' chimneys burned twice as bright that night.
>>27401438
>derpiboo.ru
>search: applejack, rainbow dash, fluttershy, kissing
>>27372120
Actually Maud points out a big issue with the plot of this comic - there's no real struggle for the Anon.
Issues that came out so far, feel more like a lengthy introduction to a story rather than an epic adventure. It's like watching a sitcom.
I hope that you'll create more tension soon, maybe with help from Celestia - it would be cool to see some kind of conflict going on between her and Anon.
