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>What is this thread about?
This thread is centered on stories about ponies being enslaved. Every kind of theme is welcome.
>I want to write my own story but I'm new to writing.
Check out these guides:
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pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3
pastebin.com/g4VpEg4f (clop specific)
>Where do the writers hang out?
Head over to www.rizon.net/chat with the channel name #slavepone. If you're ever having a writer's block or need advice, that is the place to go!
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>>27304898
Nice name. I approve, for what it's worth.
Slave is for riding.
>>27304991
>>27305021
>presented by mcdonald's
kek
>>27305048
I'm lovin' it.
>>27305021
>tfw fat
>tfw would ride slave pone anyway because it's my fetish
>>27305106
Don't worry, you just need a bigger, stronger slave pone and you can ride without burning through slaves like you burn through cheeseburgers.
>>27305021
>>27305106
>>27305131
>>27305310
Jesus Christ fucking why???
>>27305354
There is nothing wrong with that picture, that lovely woman is of a completely healthy weight and is light enough to ride that horse. Stop fatshaming, shitlord.
>tfw no slave pon to do yard work for you
The one thing i hate about this house it that it has a giant yard i never use. At least the rent is cheap.
>>27305418
They could keep the lawn neat just by eating the grass.
>>27305478
Its mostly weeds.
>>27305509
They'll eat weeds too, unless it's some shit like stinging nettles.
>>27305478
You want fat slaves? Cause that's how you get fat slaves.
autosage test
Skittles being forced to wear cute dresses and act all girly when?
>>27306041
Fat slave is healthy slave.
made something
>>27307067
>he mouths the cherries
>return home from work early
>slave mare is laying on your bed, intensely sniffing one of your dirty shirts
>she's wearing a pair of your underwear and rubbing herself through them, biting her lip and moaning and shuddering with desire
What do?
>>27307441
>>27307497
>not raping slave to assert dominance
What the hell is wrong with you?
>>27307561
wrong thread
>>27307576
She obviously wants the hot monkey dick, why not oblige her?
>>27307596
That would reinforce negative behavior.
>>27307596
because as funny as it would be, buying an orangutan to rape her would be expensive
Wait what happened? I've been out for the last 2 threads.
>>27308033
scruffy ate one and made the other one unbumpable
>>27308043
Still?Any answers from /qa/?
>>27308054
none so far...
>>27307846
This kills the pony.
>>27308093
FAT.
>>27308093
THICC?!?!?!
“Happy Birthday to you, Happy birth day to you, Happy Birthday Scootaloo, Happy birthday to you!”
>The chorus wound down as everyone clapped their hands and hooves.
>Scootaloo took in a massive breath and blew out the candles which adorned her large birthday cake.
>All the prep work was well worth it at this point.
>Katie was snapping pictures while Scoots jumped in her seat with excitement.
>”This is soooo awesome! I haven’t had a birthday party in forever.”
>”Well it’s not over yet, cause now it’s time for presents!” Katie happily proclaimed.
>And just like that everyone brought out their gifts for the birthday girl.
>You couldn’t help but smile as she thanked everyone.
>Granny made her a scarf with what she said was a pattern of a team called the “Wonderbolts”
>As she got present after present the pile of toys and books grew in front of her.
>You could only stand back and smile as she tore through the various boxes the moment they were placed in front of her.
>”Psst Anon.”
>Looking around you spotted Katie by the doorway motioning for you to come over.
>As quietly as possible you snuck away.
“Whats up?”
>”Go grab your gift, I’ll keep an eye on things here.”
>Giving her a thumbs up you walked past and into your bedroom where you hid the present.
>There was a part of you that was honestly scared that she wouldn’t like it.
>Grabbing the wrapped gift you made your way back to the living room and peered in.
>From the looks of it she’d already gone through and opened everything in the span of thirty seconds.
>Clearing your throat you walked in.
>Everyone's heads turned to you.
>>27308261
“Scootaloo, normally there’d be a nice speech that I could give here, but I really suck with words.”
>You could see Katie facepalm at that.
“So I’ll keep it simple. You have made this place a home, and brought all of us together here.”
>You gestured to everyone gathered around.
“And we may not be a traditional one, but today were all a family.”
>Stepping up you placed the gift right next to her seat.
>…
>…
>Ok did you screw this up.
“Uh… heh heh, you can open the gift now.”
>Scoots head was downcast.
>Oh shit you fucked up.
>Looking around you saw the same look of confusion on everyones face.
>In that one instant you felt the force hit your chest as the little filly clung onto you.
>Quickly reaching up you hugged her as she hung onto.
>Looking down you saw tears streaming down her face.
>But she was smiling.
>Sitting down you still held Scootaloo close.
>If you had been paying attention you would have also noticed that everyone else came over and sat down right beside you.
>Katie, Granny, Fluttershy, Cheerilee, and all the others.
>Your new family was an odd one, but you wouldn’t trade it for anything in the world right now.
>>27308292
What did Anon give her?! I must know!It's a scooter, isn't it?
>>27308319a hug
>>27308319
No you retard, it's his monkey penis!
>>27308292
Oh holy shit, HeliAnon is back. Good to see you again!
>>27308386
But how do you wrap a hug?
Is mare for whipping or riding? Or both?
>>27308292
HeliAnon is back with some fresh green!
They all come back someday!
Have faith brothers!
Hi guise, Did I miss a Skittles update or something?
>>27308739
Nah, he still dead.
>>27308748
And from what I see there were moe scruffenings than usual. May I ask what happened?
Have a goddamn update: http://pastebin.com/BTw2cgw4
>You are Moondancer, magical genius, regular genius, co-founder and leader of a relatively successful anti-slavery organization
>You are also drunk, lonely and more than a little hurt
>Stupid fucking Anon
>You don't know why you put up with him
>His words about Trevor continue to bounce around in your brain
>You cringe
>That used to be you
>Until you made friends
>Not that you had them for long
>The war started pretty soon after you finally came out of your shell
>You and your friends were in the volunteer corps when you were all captured
>You'd been helping in a small fort when the human soldiers arrived
>You remember it so vividly
>Chatting with Twinkleshine about the lunch you'd both had that day
>The sudden gunshots
>The screams
>You still have nightmares about it sometimes
>Getting down on the ground and begging for your life
>The hands that grabbed you and pulled you away from the base
>Being taken to some kind of prison with the rest of the ponies they'd captured
>The absolute terror about your situation
>The relief when you found your friends
>The feeling of hope that their group hug gave you
>Finding out you were going to be sold as slaves
>Minuette's plan for escape
>The fucking disastrous celestia-damned plan
>She disappeared for a couple days after that
>When she came back, she was broken
>She never smiled
>Never laughed
>The only time she spoke was when one of your captors spoke to her
>Even then all she'd say were things like "Yes, Master," "No, Master," and "Thank you, Master"
>The rest of the time she just stared at the wall and said nothing
>>27308913
>At first, all three of you tried your best to be there for her and coax her out again
>After about a month, Twinkleshine was sold and they took her away
>Lemon Hearts followed a week or so later
>But you refused to give up
>For months you tried to help your friend
>The whole time, her dead eyes wore away at your hope
>One day, it became too much to bear
>You made a decision that day
>You were going to save your friend
>You remember all of this but there is one thing that you remember better than anything else
>Minuette didn't even struggle for her life
>>27308924
Ok, the update is full of feels. However, I don't think I'll be doing anything this heavy in this particular story again. I may try a bit of a more sad story once this one is more fleshed out and I trust myself to write better sad.There were some WEIRD versions of this update that got changed around.
Any stories about Nurse Redheart yet?
>>27309092
Features prominently in Trainer Anon. Less so, but still present, in A Deal is a Deal.
>>27309115
Okay then, thanks.
Which ponies weren't prominent in any stories at all?
I kinda want to write a slave story, but I also want to write about a pony that wasn't featured yet.
>>27309162
Derpy hasn't gotten much of one, if I remember correctly.
>>27309200
She's been mentioned a few times and the star of one aborted green, but nothing much. Same with Cheerilee.
>>27309200
Derpy, huh... That could be interesting.
Her innocent and naive nature... Broken and left totally twisted...
Fuck. Alone thinking about this makes me sad.
That's good. Thanks.
>>27309209
I was thinking a buddy cop comedy, but ok.
>>27309162
Well, Rarity only got that one unfinished story a while back and I think might have appeared in a few other stories.
>>27309218
The one where she was forced to drink her master's piss?
>>27309231
Man... I still can't believe that human beings exist that would do that to another sentient creature.
It makes me feel fucking sick.
>>27309231
There was also the horse trainer story, and didn't she show up in Bookhorse? One of the Twilight stories anyway. Maybe the ponk story too?
>>27309244
In terms of fucked up shit that can happen to you, being forced to drink piss is relatively mild compared to other stuff.
>>27309162
spike
babs
big mac
sunset shimmer
starlight glimmer
spoiled rich
daring doo
fleetfoot
blaze
misty fly
spa ponies
fleur de lis
tree hugger
sassy sadles
zecora (hmm interesting)
>>27309244
>Forcing a slave to drink piss.
>Thinking that's all that bad.
Anon, you need to teach your slave to love and cherish ANY give their master gives them. Including that one.
>>27309267
>zecora
>"Yes, Master, I obey, please don't whip my ass today."
>>27304898
Photo dump 1#
>>27304898
>>27309280
Photo dump 2#
>>27309259
I know, but still...
This might be a bit bloggy, but I have seen a lot of shit in my life,
Gore, dead people, stories of misery and dread and a lot of other fucked up shit.
All that shit you would have seen if you visited that site as long as I do.
I have no problem stomach this kind of shit.
But... Injustice is something makes me rage something fierce.
Ponies are such innocent creatures who don't deserve being treated like a toilet or cum dumps.
I just can't stand shit like this.
>>27309254
I think it was actually in one of the Ponka stories. She worked at a clothing store, I remember that.
>>27309162
Do you mean written about as a main character, shown up as a side character in a story, or even appeared at all in any story?
>>27309305
As a main character.
>>27309297
Neither can most of us. There's a reason we were called White Knight General for a while.
>>27309297
What if pone wants to drink the piss?
>>27309321
Then I would fucking let her. I don't have any problems if that's her fetish.
I had a girlfriend who loved when I demeaned and hit her while I fucked her.
But she wanted that I did this to her, so it's fine in my book.
>>27309315
Yeah... I've read most of the stories that wer written in this general.
Most likely that's the reason why I like it so much.
>>27309343
>I had a girlfriend who loved when I demeaned and hit her while I fucked her.
I'd never do this to a woman, even if it were her fetish, I'm too paranoid about false rape accusations, and if I left a mark or did anything "kinky" with her that she wanted at the time she'd turn it around and spin it as rape if I pissed her off or something.
>>27309309
Ah, well then as a main character there are quite a number of options. Off the top of my head...
>Celestia
>Twilight Velvet / Night Light (Twiily parents)
>Bulk
>Big Mac (played a major role in one story, but he wasn't really a character exactly)
>Derpy
>Flitter
>Cloudkicker
>Flim/Flam
>Mayor Mare
>Trixie
>Starlight Glimmer
>Zecora
>Fleur De Lis
>Shining Armor
>Braeburn
>Strongheart
>Any Wonderbolt but Spitfire and Soarin
>Any colt/filly character but the CMC
>>27309370
This may help anon.
>>27309370
I live in germany, so I didn't have to fear anything like you described...
Sounds like that shit sucks, tho... I feel sorry for you.
It was kinda hot to call her a "worthless bitch who only exists to recieve my semen in her useless pussy".
>>27309267
>>27309385
Mane-iac (On Progress)
Doctor Whooves
Discord
Coloratura (not yet as a main character)
Celestia (>implying it's in the paste because descent into fine autism)
Limestone Pie
>>27309387
Wouldn't stop some lying conniving cunt from saying she was intimidated/forced into signing/posing for the picture.
>>27309385
>>27309400
Flurry Heart
>>27309401
Good point anon.
>>27309416
>flurry heart enslaved
kek
Would love to read about this.
>>27309416
>>27309422
how would babby slave even work? She'd have to be aged up
>>27309422
Would be an interesting Idea but she would most likely be sold as a pet.
>>27309425
She could hold your beer.
>>27309416
>>27309420
>>27309422
>>27309425
>>27309431
>>27309433
Ah crap...
>>27309433
She would probably spill it. Or drink it.
Drunk slave Flurry Heart when?
>>27309395
You mean Merkel hasn't made it a felony for men to even breathe in the same room as a woman yet?
>>27309425
>Want to buy a pone
>Decide to get a young one, since they're supposedly easier to train
>Somehow get shipped a CMC-aged Flurry Heart by accident
>Pony-by-mail service steadfastly denies they offer any alicorns
>Leaves you in the awkward position of explaining how you got one
>Can't hide the horn, it's kind of solid
>Can't hide the wings, they're too damn big
>Can't hide the voice, because she whines all the time
>But you can't bear to just kick the poor thing out either.
>>27309524
Cut the wings off.
>>27309524
Apply bonesaw to the horn. Now she's just a pegasus!
>tfw you will never buy three pone slaves and sew them together ass to mouth to form a pony centipede
>>27309385
>>27309400
Damn...You are claiming things I claimed.
Well its not like its a catastrophe if there multiple storys about the same pone...
But I have to correct you:
Derpy 2 Stories so far
Limestone Pie 1 story
Celstia atleast one
>>27309546
>>27309557
>>>/SiM/
>>27309572
Fuck no. Even SIM doesn't want that kind of gore shit.
I want to break Thunderlane by inflicting all his punishments on Rumble and making him watch
>>27309385
>>27309400
>>27309267
Zecora
Trixxie
Starlight Glimmer
Coloratura
Mayor Mare
>>27309276
I'd love to give Zecora a few more stripes
>>27309563
>Celstia atleast one
When? I haven't seen any Celestia focused stories.
>>27309598
Missed daring doo
>>27309613
I dont remember when but it was there.
>>27304898
Gotta wonder if enslaved ponies are forced to fight in wars and coincidentally against other slave Ponies
>>27304898
>>27309677
I was actually thinking about writing a war-dog story about Daring Doo being a draft pony, and saving/getting saved by Handler-Anon.
>>27309677
It was a thing and it was pretty decent.
pastebin.com/UfJuXdhh
>when u non com to tred and make hte bup
>>27305021
>>27305310
>>27309724
This may be interesting
>>27309267
Spike
main in one where anon got twilight then trying to get the mane6 + spike together
anon was a war hero, killed many ponies
cant find the story
Big mac
A Deal is a Deal, fucked her sister (if it was him)
>>27310876
tfw that story is kill
tfw i started writing then got cockblocked by my brain
I only come to these threads if slaves are made to drink my piss
>>27308292
your surprise very infrequent updates are always welcome.
>>27308924
Holy shit dude. You had such a good story.
Now you gone and tainted it.
The "ending" of Regards, Anon is still not in the list....
http://pastebin.com/dtTcYGB6
Get your shit together Jingles
>>27311635
the problem is that the ending was wrtien by a different writer
>>27311692
And that means he cant put it in the list as a separate entry?
>>27311635
>>27311692
>>27311731
Yeah... That ending was horse shit. I considered rewriting it so it sucks less.
>>27311815
The original ending wasn't bad. Would have been better if writefag had stuck with his first idea, but it wasn't bad.
The new ending completely negates the point of the story.
>>27311635
Already read it. Still a fucking tear-jerker.
>She never smiled
>Never laughed
pic related
>>27312576
Forgot reply
>>27308924
>>27309724
Proceed in thine act, homosexual.Long green incoming, just making the last tweaks and finishing a scene.
>>27311395
I'm sorry, Anon. I promise the next update will make things better. This is just a spark to start some things.
It is incoming, The long green has arrived.
>le ebin Anon
>You've been at drug dealing for a while.
>And began to run your own little business.
>Of course, you're at the black market.
>Since your face is the police's favorite.
>And they already put up a price to your head.
>But no one of your customers ever tried to throw you out.
>Yeah, no you, no weed for them.
>But there's one problem...
>It's a one man army.
>You're the only one running your own business.
>When things get tough, you'll have to move on to have more people than just you.
>Even one of your most devote customers said so.
>And recommended one of these weird things...
>...Ponies?
>Yeah, he has a steel brain.
>He began smoking weed like, 2 years ago, and he's still thinking straight.
>So he's someone to believe.
>Hey, he didn't gave any sensitive information to the police.
>...yet.
>But that doesn't matter.
>Now you're at the black market.
>Where he said there was a specific 'pony'.
>'One whose mane's strength equals to a hundred men.'
>Sounded cool, yet you haven't found that 'pony'.
>He said you'll know it when you see her.
>Her...?
>Well, you'll ask someone...
>There are some other drug dealers, mexicans, more mexicans, bonus ducks, bank robbers, and a lot of other illegal people.
>Cartel leaders and their men...
>...etcetera.
>There's shit you don't wanna get into, so better ask one of the weed guys.
>As you pan through the market, the guy who told you about this 'pony' is looking at some guns.
>AK-47s, to be precise.
>You reach to him, and he backs off a bit to the surprise.
>"Hey Anon! So... you finally took my advice?"
"...Yeah."
>"Looks like you can't find her, Am I wrong?"
"Nope."
>"Hmm... Okay, She's over there."
>He points his index finger towards a really big 'pony'.
>And by 'big' he meant 'a shitton of hair'.
>But without the 'shitton of hair' she has, she's bigger than the average ponies.
"Thanks."
>"You're welcome Anon."
>You let him check those AK-47s and begin gathering your mon-
>>27313489
>Damn, you're in a day off. You ain't gonna give him weed.
>"Ah, Anon. Here, have this."
>He gives you a gun.
>Looks like it's from the police.
>And it's loaded.
>"If you buy her, make sure those guys over there ain't trailing you."
>There are some tough guys near the pile of fluffy green hair.
>"I heard they're waiting for someone to buy her so they can kill him and claim the pony. But don't worry. Aim for the head and don't fear regret, the cartel is little enough to empower anything. That's what I heard."
>With the gun in hand, you reach over to the four-legged equine pile of fluffy hair.
>As you begin to get close to her, you notice some things.
>She's crying, and nobody cares.
>This is a black market, where did you think you were?
>And the tough guys are giving you weird looks.
>Shit, hope the gun is loaded.
>You save it in your pocket, just in case.
>As you get close and closer to her, a fat guy comes out of nowhere to sell you what you came for.
>"Hey, you came for the cumslut who can give blowjobs with her mane?"
>That's a long offensive pseudonym.
>You can't help but chuckle.
"So... What's the price?"
>"It's kind of high but by looking at you, seems you can afford her."
"And what's that number?"
>"Ten hundred dollars."
>A bit high, but you can afford her.
>Perfection.
"I'll have her."
>You take a final look at the pile of green hair.
>She's not just crying.
>She's smiling,
>And doesn't even blink.
>Basically, she's crying out of laughter.
>...it seems.
>But that's not something to care about.
>You need someone to help you with work, now that you're making your own territories.
>And help with the big sharks.
>The fat guy gives you the crazy pile of hair and you give him the money.
"Thanks."
>"To you."
>And you leave.
>The guys didn't trail you or something.
>You hope not.
>Anyways, you're the guy with the gun.
>...Against like, 3 or 4 guys also with guns.
>...
>...'May the force be with you.'
>Now, you look at your back...
>...No one.
>Good.
>>27313497
>Time to leave this damned illegal shithole.
>Now, what's pending...?
>Lunch.
>You might be the only white-knight on this shark tank, but she might need something to eat.
>Her hair is covering her face.
>Cutely.
"Hey, I'm not here to kill you or something like that."
>She begins to lift her head to stare to you
>"A-Are you... going to d-do... something... w-worse...?"
>>implying
"Nope, why do you ask?"
>"W-What they d-did... to... m-me..."
>'They'?
>The fat guy.
>Yep.
"Don't worry, you're safe here."
>You get on the drug dealing van and drive home.
>You'll sure will see what she's capable of.
>Finally home.
>Good thing the police didn't saw your van or anything.
>Really good thing.
>Now for the fun.
>People say her mane and tail are the keys to her popularity and high price.
>...And that you chose a black friday as a day off.
>Your customers will rage at it sometime.
>But for now, you've got unfinished business yet to do.
>You two got inside.
>She stumbles sometimes when she walk.
>Like she's not used to do so.
>Or is it just the 'whatever-the-fuck-is-now numbing pills'?
>Anyways, Whatever pill's effect it has, it should be wearing off by now.
>Because her smile...
>It's the same, but you feel like it's not of a crazy person.
>Like she never felt happiness in a hundred million years...
>But anyways.
>Let us begin.
>You two sit on the biggest couch you have.
"So... I heard your mane is your special trait, right?"
>"Y-Yes... b-but..."
"But what?"
>"M-My old... M-Masters... They said... My mane is only t-to bring them... P-Pleasure and nothing else..."
>What did you expect from a big bunch of green fluff?
>'Ayy le ebin mastre b so gud ai kem fro hte gudnes'?
>Good thing it's a No.
"Well, it is time to break those habits, shall we?"
>If she can give blowjobs with her mane...
>She might had experienced gangrapes.
>...The thought cringes you.
"And let's begin now. What can you lift with your mane?"
>"Uhm... Master...?"
>'Master'?
ç
>>27313504
>Well, you bought her and you need help with the drug dealing work so...
"Tell me."
>Am I supposed to... L-Lift m-my..."
>You would interrupt her but you want to see how fucked up she is.
>"...A-Ass...?"
>Now you have a proportion of what the FUCK is going on.
>Get it?
"Uhm, Why would I do that?"
>There was a point where we needed to stop and we have clearly passed it.
>But let's keep going and see what happens.
>"Uhm... B-Because... You b-bought m-me to be your s-sex slave?"
>She thinks you're testing her to see if she knows her place.
>Masturbating to BDSM shit when younger surely did a thing.
>But that's not the idea.
>"My dear... What's your name?"
>"M-My name is... whatever y-you want to call me, M-Master..."
>Whelp.
>You try to think of something that's not 'pile of fluffy green hair'.
>Her crazy beady small eyes and her weird smile reminds you of someone...
"...Chara."
>Despite beginning to have success at drug dealing, you're pretty lousy at names.
>"O-Okay... M-Master... My n-name will be Ch-Chara then..."
>Her broken and filled-of-fear voice gets cringier and cringier everytime she speaks.
>Like a countdown.
>For the bomb to explode.
"So... Chara. I don't need your ass to be lifted. I want to know if you could lift something else... For example..."
>You try to think of the heaviest thing in the room...
"...This couch?"
>"...Y-Yes, Master."
>She hops off the couch...
>And two strings from her mane begin to wrap the couch in the blink of an eye.
>...
>The sudden feeling of the floor falling relies on how she could actually lift the whole couch with you.
>You acquired perfecion in discount!
>Moving the weed you move requires heavy work.
>Who's better than Chara?
>No one.
>And today's your day off.
>So... What'cha gonn-
>*Internal gargle*
>Lunch, of course.
>So... You still had money so you could go to a restaurant.
>>implying the public doesn't know your face.
>Right... Right...
>Little details.
>Or... You can call for pizza.
>>27313512
>They know your face, but not your voice.
>Good, so a fedora and some sunglasses would do enough.
>Or...
>Fun's not over.
>Chara's gonna go for it.
"So, I'll call for pizza, What about when it comes, you bring it?"
You notice she stopped smiling like a crazy schizo.
>That's good.
>Smiling in depressing situations is for freaks.
>"Y-Yes... M-Master..."
"'Kay, Later."
>*30 fucking minutes later*
>Finally, damn.
>Your record of 30 minutes of doing absolutely nothing finally pumps out its brakes by a nice doorbell.
>Stupid of you putting a heavy metal song as doorbell music.
"Hmm, guess that's the pizza, Chara."
>It's something basic, not like she can't do anything at all.
>Hence the high price.
>As your couch groans, you begin to hear steps, alongside some slips.
>*Daily reminder Chara looks like she needs to improve her walking*
>...shit.
>But she'll get over it.
>Now it's time to wait for her to get to the fucking door.
>...
>...
<...
>...
>Really?
>That slow?
>Maybe you can...
"Chara, what's taking you so looong?"
>"T-They said not walking with our h-hooves was s-something... Bad ponies do..."
>Even though that fat fedora lord killed her smile and optimism, he still had a kink for BDSM.
>You can use that kink to your favor.
>Maybe it sounds stupid, but it's something you can't know without experience...
"...Here, a 'bad pony' is the one who doesn't walk the way they are used to."
>It's Chara's turn.
>"B-But they said..."
>1v1 me skrub.
"Tell me. Who named you Chara?"
>"...You, M-Master"
>Get rekt...
"Okay, now please get the Pizza now."
>As your last syllable leaves your mouth, you begin to hear thuds.
>Like something punching the wood.
>And it gets faster and louder every time...
>OH SHIT NIGGA WAT DIDYA UNLEASH?
>A suddenly loud creek makes its way to your ears.
>To EAR rape you...
>...Shit, even YOU can't laugh at your own bad jokes, but still.
>It's ear raping either way.
>>27313520
>And so a hair string pulls out of the flying mane thingy to pull the door open.
>She wasn't grinning from ear to ear like last time.
>Just a decent smile.
>Genuine smile.
>The first one you've ever saw on Chara.
>As the front door creeks its way to the side, you take a glance on how Chara does her shit.
>Two strings to hold the money like if it was on a table.
>One string to hold the pizza box.
>And another one so it doesn't fall.
>Total of hair strings used: 3.
>To be honest, you expected more strings to be used.
>But that's not a problem.
>"M-Master, here it is..."
>Because you're a soppy white knight, you'll let her know she did a good job.
>That means patting her head, and some stupid emotional words.
>And so you do it.
"Good pony, Chara. You did great.
>Her ears droop down as a response to the patting, and looks up to meet your gaze in response to the speech.
>How cute.
>Now it's time to fucking eat, yo.
>>27313526
Kek. Feedback and criticism accepted, even if it's just 'muh ferb be autistic'.
I'm on the IRC if something.
>>27304898
I'd rather let a pony enslave me
>>27313558
You're in the wrong place, Anon. In this thread, PONY wears the saddle. No exceptions.
>>27313534
Its nice.
Hopefully he will give her shower soon, hair semen is not cool.
>>27313566
>Implying you don't want to be a cute mare's slave
>Not wanting to share your fetish openly
>>27304991
Was getting saddled part of your plan?
>>27313534
Your very first line of green made me groan, and made my brain turn off.
If you are going to do stupid meme shit, try to be more subtle.
>>27313687
The thing here is that I wanted to find another way of saying it, besides the >be Anon.
Or the >you are anon
But it's a once in a lifetime shit, nothing to worry about.
>>27313687You expected anything less from an >underage b&?
>>27313709You're gonna make me ban, shit.
>>27309462
>You are a slave. Once the ruler of a proud nation, now reduced to a liquor store assistant.
>All it all, it's not that bad.
>The hours are certainly superior, and Ethel reminds you of yourself in many ways - chief among them delegation.
>Oh, *delegation*, that most glorious of ideas... it truly is hell being on the other end of it for once.
>Particularly now.
"Was I inadequate in some way?"
>"Not at all, dear."
"Then could you explain to me why you felt the need to..."
>You gesture towards the infant alicorn.
>Even now, it's diabolical mewling sets your feathers on edge.
>"Poor thing didn't have a home," Ethel answers with a shrug of her bony shoulders. "We couldn't just leave her out in the cold."
"Yes, we could have."
>"Oh, don't be like that, we have to -"
>And then the screaming begins. Again.
>Oh, sweet YOU, the screaming!
>You pluck Ethel's gin from her hand and shove the open flask into Flurry Heart's mouth.
>"Tia... I... um... are you sure that's..."
"Yes. You put me in charge of looking after her -"
>Curse that old woman to a sunless existence!
"- so you should trust my judgement on the matter."
>"Tia, she's drinking my gin."
"A necessary sacrifice. Believe me."
>"Well, she *is* quieter this way."
"Yes. She is."
>>27313497
>Ten hundred dollars
The word you are looking for is "one thousand".
>>27313737
Fix'd
>>27313687
Fix'd
>>27313574
Added to the To-do list.I ain't gonna drop this easily
>>27313700
Now I see why my filter didn't get this garbage, you're only using the trip..
To you guys, thw ones who filter me, I'm telling ya, if I ever try to make green, then it's because I want to improve. I'm well aware that I'm living my cringy days and had the worst fate cuz Spanish language, but damn, what is it now?
>>27314238
Have you considered getting a proofreader to read your stuff before posting?
>>27314303
Uhm... I could...but underb& kinda ruins it 4 me
>>27314380
Ask on irc. I'm sure one of the other writefags would be willing to help.
Threadly reminder that you faggots got SiM killed, and any bad shit that comes your way is simply karma.
>>27315780
How so? We literally did nothing to SiM.
>>27315808
We talked to them at some point, so it's our fault some asshole with a hard-on for thread deletions deleted their thread.
>>27315850
That was happening way before any of this.
>>27315808
Ugh, don't take the bait ffs.
It's one anon that's either got a hate boner or likes to stir up shit, hell he might not even be from SiM, but even if he is the rest in there probably don't give a fuck.
>>27315780
Or just plain retarded?
>tfw you will never repeatedly dutch oven your little pone slave and laugh maniacally as she wretches and gags, struggling desperately to escape the smell
Is there a story, in progress or not, that has a happy ending for slave pone but still goes lewd at some point? Love the stories I just cant blow my load to any of it :/
>>27316193
Pick a pony, Anon, I'll write you up some short quick happy slave pone smut in an hour or so.
>>27316193
"Regards, Anon" has some sex in it. Somewhere in the last third.
>>27316193
>>27316333
You better pick Pinkie or Twilight or I WILL find you!
Nurse Redheart is fine too.
>>27316333
>>27316341
Guess Anon didn't want custom slave pone smut. Back to AiE with me, I guess.
I need to write faster to get to the sex in Trainer I think... we have a gaping hole that needs filling.
>>27316710
>gaping hole that needs filling
I see what you did there.
>>27316689
You give up rather easily.
Look everything is in shatters because of Scruffy, Shitposting and other stuff.
All the writefags are currently working on storys.
If you want a story you should give the writers something to work with, a prompt, a picture, a setting, a feeling, something that might make them interested.
And you shouldnt expect an answer or a story within hours.
Last update
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/27289827/#27300472
Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/zGy7dNgp
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>Anon stands with his legs slightly apart, hands behind his back, and a strict, calculating gaze as he waits from them to come closer.
>They do, as always, the returns leading the way with heads bowed, and the new ponies following suit, not sure why their peers are so eager to come up to the yellow line painted on the floor before Anon.
>”If you’re a return, step forward.” Anon says.
>About half sheepishly step forward and you recognize a few faces.
>Lily Valley, Apple Cobbler, Cheerilee and Roseluck were all from Ponyville.
>The other two you didn’t know.
>”Before I get started, my name is Anonymous. Address me as Master or Master Anonymous. Sir is fine also. The return mares who were trained here will assure you that disrespect of any kind will earn you less than favorable circumstances. I am your worst nightmare if you cross me or any of the staff here. You’d do well to be humble and thankful around any humans or slave staff here.”
>He pauses, watching their reactions.
>The front row stays quiet while the new ponies whisper and shoot worried glances at one another.
>“That brings us to our first lesson,” Anon said. “You probably haven’t had a chance to clean yourself since you were shipped here. It’s not much to me, but I know you all are probably bothered by it considering your sense of smell, and well, it feels good to be clean.”
>He nods to the doorless shower rooms.
“In the room to your right, there is a small group shower facility. It has hot water, scented soaps—anything you should need to get freshened up.”
>A few of the ponies perk up at this, and glance at one another, not sure what to think of this gesture.
>>27317403
Shoot, I screwed up something. This text isn't edited yet. Let me clean it up real quick.
>>27317403
>The returns, all but Roseluck who looked down with a forlorn expression all respond with “Yes, Master” or “Thank you very much, Master.”
>Some of the new ponies scowl or curl an upper lip at the returns, but a most only look embarrassed.
>One by one, most of the ponies took their turn giving their thanks.
>”Y-Yes, Master, I’ll use it well.”
>”Thank you, um, Master.”
>”That is gracious of you, Master.”
>”Sir, I appreciate the gift.”
>Part of you feels a twinge of nausea and horror at listening to them, but it’s nothing but a flicker.
>You’ve been through the routines too many times.
>Anon surveys the group for a moment then spoke.
>“Good, some of you know how to be thankful when something is given to you. Know that besides today, you’ll have to spend points if you want luxuries like hot water. We’re in the middle of the ocean, and we don’t have enough for everyone to use. This is a treat that some of you get today because you showed obedience. The returned ponies and the ones who did not show gratitude, stay here. The rest of you, go ahead and enjoy your showers.
>”It won't be that easy to earn things in the future, but this is the first step. Meet back here within ten minutes.”
>With that, the ponies in the back row, minus a lime green pony with a cowboy hat and a canterlotian white pony with a pink mane, head off to the showers, giving the others who they left behind worried looks.
>The return ponies glance at one another—all but Roseluck at least.
>This must be her third time being returned.
>Poor Rose…
>Anon walks over to a firebox on the wall, unlocks it, and starts to uncoil the hose.
>You heard Rose whimper, and you hum thoughtfully.
>Honestly it wasn’t that bad.
>They’d experience much worse in their lives if Anon didn’t prepare them.
>You do still barely remember a time when watching this disturbed you though.
>How long ago was that…
>>27317467
>Anon finishes working with the hose and gives it a few test blasts off to the side.
>Water blew out in a gush and he adjusts the nozzle down, though you could still hear the harsh slap of water on the floor.
>He presses a button on a pocket remote and drains open up in the floor.
>”For those that haven’t guessed,” he begins, “ponies who are not interested in serving their masters are in for an unpleasant time. If you do not obey, punishments get worse. Accept them as they come, even if you don’t agree, and they’ll become a passing memory in no time.”
>The pony’s in the back row glare at him and the one in the cowboy hat spoke up.
>>”You’ve gotta be kiddin’ me. You’re going to hose us down with that?”
>”Yes, and if you’re feeling talkative, you’re going to step up and be the first.”
>>The pony spits. “Like hell I am.”
>She walks right up to Anon, and the front row balks, whisper yelling at her to stop and sit back down.
>The mare didn’t listen and walks right up to Anon.
>Anon for his credit didn’t show a flicker in his demeanor and kept on with examining the hose.
>>”If you think for a SECOND, I’m going to be a submissive little cur and let you make me into your little precious little slave then you have ‘nother thing comin’. There’s nothing stopping me from bucking you into next week!”
>Anon’s careless gaze flickers suddenly, and he frowns.
>Just as the pony starts to turn and crouch, he sidesteps and reaches down, grabbing her by the neck.
>>”What the—”
>Anon shoves her down onto the concrete floor, forcing her legs to buckle and pinning her in place.
>The mare gasps and hacks as his hand keeps a firm hold on her neck, but not hard enough to strangle.
>She struggles, but thankfully it looks like she’d been taking her magic supplements and was too weak to break free.
>The mare was luckier than she knew.
>Anon had moved fast for her sake.
>>27317477
>Anon motions over to you, and you open the first drawer from the large, wheeled tool chest.
>You grab the first item in your mouth and trot over, handing it to him.
>The device was a double spreader bar, with a chain linking the two bars and another chain leading from the middle to hook into any of the clips settled in the floor.
>As the mare gasps for breath and struggles in his grip, Anon clips her hooves into the spreaders and drags her away from the group.
>He hooks a finger around a notch and brought up a clip which secures the spreaders to the floor and walks away just as the mare was catching her breath and staggering to her feet.
>Without so much as a twitch of emotion, he dusts his hands and walks back to the hose.
>”Who wants to get clean first?”
>The ponies don’t say a word, and you can practically feel their trepidation.
>”I will, sir,” Roseluck says with her head bowed.
>Anon nods and she takes her place.
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AN: past tense from here on out. I keep switching to it unconsciously and having to edit.
>The cleanings went like usual.
>The defiant pony yelled taunts at Anon while he laid into other mares with the hose.
>They all cringed and winced at the sharp sting of both the pressure and the cold, but they all stayed mostly quiet, save for a whimper here and there.
>You’ve never experienced it yourself thankfully, but you have had your fair share of cold showers on the rig.
>You hated them, but they weren’t the worst slave life had to offer.
>After a little while, some of the new mares came back from their showers, towels wrapped in their mane or around their barrels.
>A few of them paled or pulled their ears back as they saw what the noise had been about.
>They took their place all the same, likely thankful it wasn’t them under Anon’s focus today.
>You idly stare at the floor and dig your hoof into it.
>Their day wasn’t over yet.
>>27317489
>”Okay, that’s the last one then,” Anon said and he gestured for a pink coated pony to return to the group.
>>”Hey, I’m talkin’ to you, you big dumb ape—”
>Anon reached in his pocket and produced a remoted and clicked the button.
>A loud surge of energy shot through the green pony, and she screamed.
>Her legs wavered and she collapsed, unconscious.
>She probably was going to be the pony he choose today… poor thing.
>The mare had been defiant but she still didn’t deserve it.
>Anon started over to the fallen mare but stopped for some reason.
>He narrowed his eyes and looked across the ponies who waited on the line.
>His mouth moved as his eyes flicked across them.
>”Six… seven… eight—”
>You blink.
>You hadn’t even noticed but one of them was missing.
>Anon scowled then looked toward the shower room.
>Your sensitive ears picked up the sound of a shower still running and you clicked your tongue.
>Looks like no hot showers for you tonight…
>If only he’d just go in and take them out of there, but Anon insisted on letting them make their choices.
>He crossed his arms and relaxed his posture.
>And so you waited.
--
>>27317508
That's what I'm posting for today. Might be a little bit before next update as I'm almost out of fresh text and need to make sure the feel is right. It's been difficult expressing what I want out of Anon and how his motivations work, but I'll get there and post soon enough.
For the faint of heart readers, we're almost back to comfy parts, but the next update barely holds back on what I feel needs to be shown.
Comments and criticism appreciated as always.
>>27317556
MAKE US HURT!
>Twilight yawns softly as she lifts her head from its resting place on your bed
>she hears your car door slam and her ears perk up, then flop
>she hops down from the bed, stretching and flapping her wings before trotting excitedly toward the front door
>her tail starts to swish as she sits on her haunches
>she gives an eager little whinny as the doorknob begins to turn
>”Welcome home, Master!” she happily chirps the moment she sees your face
“Hello, slave,” you reply, reaching down a hand to scritch her ear.
>”Dinner’s in the oven, Master! Oh, and I was just finishing the last of your laundry, sir.”
“Good girl,” you say, walking past her toward your room, “but I’m not very hungry at the moment. I had a stressful day.”
>She deflates a little at your words. She always enjoys watching you eat the meals she lovingly and painstakingly prepares for you.
>”Yes, Master,” she replies dejectedly, her ears slowly flattening as she looks at the floor.
“Aww, come on, girl, don’t be like that. I’m sure it’s delicious, just leave it right where it’s at and I’ll eat some later.”
>She simply nods in reply
“I didn’t hear that.”
>”OH... sorry... Yes, Master!” she quickly corrects herself, smiling nervously.
>You kick your shoes off as you amble down the hallway, unbuckling your belt with one hand as you push open your bedroom door with the other, kicking off your trousers and sitting on the side of your bed
>You pull your shirt off as you sprawl yourself out on top of the blankets, closing your eyes with a sigh as you roll over to get more comfortable
>You feel a warm spot on the bed and one of your eyes shoots open
>You call out curiously, raising your voice just enough so that she can hear you
“Twilight, come!”
>She’s at your bed side moments later, sitting on her haunches and tilting her head to the side as she looks up at you
“Was someone on Master’s bed without permission again?”
>>27317722
>”Y…yes Master… I’m sorry… I… I just missed your scent and thought a few minutes wouldn’t hurt…”
>You sigh and pull open the drawer of your nightstand, reaching for a riding crop, which you gently tap the bed next to you with
“Up, girl,” you command sternly
>Without hesitation Twilight jumps up onto the bed next to you
”Assume the position, mare.”
>She gulps and shudders, lifting her rump into the air and moving her tail out of the way, burying her face in the blanket between her forehooves
>WHAP!
>She bites her lip as the leather makes contact with her exposed rump
>She knows better than to cry out
>Her hindquarters begin to tremble as the whip makes contact a few more times
>After administering the final stroke you toss the whip back into the drawer and close it
>Twilight gives a sigh of relief and slowly turns to face you
>”Thank you, Master.”
“What a good little slave you are, you didn’t even cry,” you praise her as you pull her on top of your bare chest chest
>You place your hands over her rump and begin to rub softly as she settles down onto you, hooking her front hooves over your shoulders
“Did that sting, girl?”
>”Yes, Master,” she replies softly
“Awww, poor thing. Want Master to kiss it and make it all better?”
>Her intense blush makes the answer obvious, even through her purple fur
>You continue to rub for another minute or two, gently kissing the tip of her muzzle before lifting her entire body and situating her so that her rump is directly in front of your face
>Her marehood is already becoming moist, and your cock begins to stiffen, straining against your underwear, begging to be released as her intoxicating scent wafts into your nostrils
>You push her tail to the side, giving her a swat on the rump with your open palm on the same spot you put the whip to her moments ago
“Naughty little filly,” you chide playfully
>”mmph… yes Master…” she whimpers
>>27317731
>You lean forward, inhaling deeply through your nose, a hair’s breadth away from her glistening folds as she begins winking at you, moisture beginning to trickle down the insides of her thighs
>It’s been weeks since she last got to cum, and the air is heavy with her lust
>She shivers intensely as she feels your hot breath on her hindquarters
>You gently place a kiss, then another, and another, on her tender little rump
>She stares at your cock for several moments, seeming mesmerized by it, then looks back over her shoulder at you hesitantly
>”M…may I, Master?”
“Yes, pony,” you reply, “you may.”
>Before you can even finish your sentence her horn glows and your underwear are quickly torn from your body
>You’ve been chastised by nearly everyone you know for having a magically unrestrained alicorn, but you know she won’t try anything foolish
>Besides, knowing she could kill you at any moment should she decide to, and yet instead chooses to obey your every word, is a huge rush and boost to your ego
>You feel a drop of drool spatter onto your stomach as she licks her lips, not taking her eyes off of your now-free member
>Without warning you dip the tip of your tongue into her sweet pie, lapping at it delicately, just barely making enough contact to drive her wild
>It takes all of her willpower to prevent herself from bucking like a wild mare against your touch
>You’re rewarded with a quick, short spurt of mare juice on your chin and neck
>You wipe your chin with a finger before licking it clean with a chuckle
“You taste delicious, slave. You want Master to fuck you?”
>”Yes, sir…” she coos
>You give her a firm slap on the rump, eliciting a ragged gasp from her
>WHAP!
“I didn’t hear that. I said, do you want your Master to fuck you?”
>”Mph! Yes, Master,” she cries out a little louder, her whole body quaking with desire
>WHAP!
>>27317737
>She lets out a squeal and you’re rewarded with another little spurt of fluid from her marehood
“I’m not convinced, slave. Convince me.”
>”Oh Master… fuck me… PLEASE fuck me, Master!”
>WHAP!
>She scrambles around on your chest, staring into your eyes pleadingly, her ears pinned flat against her head, tail raised as high as it will go as she hovers her rear end dangerously close to your throbbing member
>”PLEASE Master, PLEASE fuck me!”
>WHAP!
“Now why should I do that?” You tease, guiding the tip of your member to the edge of her slit, slowly dragging it up and down her hot lips
>She bites her bottom lip so hard it nearly bleeds, wanting nothing more than to ride you like a bucking bronco right then and there
>She’s practically screaming at this point, tears threatening to form in her eyes
>”PLEASE! Fuck me, Master! Fuck your little slave! Use me! Please, let me make you cum!”
“Wanting Master’s cum? That’s a bold request.”
>WHAP!
“What have you done to deserve such a gift, hmm?”
>”I don’t deserve it, I’m not worthy, but I need it! Please Master, I’ll do anything, I’m begging you, I just need you inside me—aAAHHH!! OHH!!!”
>She throws her head back and whinnies loudly as you suddenly hilt inside her without warning
>Her shrill cry is cut off suddenly as you force her muzzle against your lips, her tongue eagerly meeting yours as it invades her mouth
>Instead of thrusting in and out of her you simply grind your hips against hers, feeling her clit winking wildly against the base of your shaft as her pussy rhythmically expands and contracts around your girth
>It’s not long before she constricts around your entire length with a loud, guttural grunt, which might have been a scream if her mouth weren’t so busy with yours at the moment, as her mare cum erupts around you, soaking your balls, insides of your thighs, and the blankets and mattress beneath you
>>27317754
>You grind into her harder, giving her rump another hard slap as you redouble your efforts to suffocate each other with your tongues, her second orgasm hitting her with full force before she even has a chance to recover from the first
>She’s been waiting for this for a long time, her body’s violent tremors of orgasmic ecstasy resembling an epileptic fit as she wiggles and grinds herself against you
>Unable to hold out any longer yourself, you pull her body against yours as hard as you can and roar with a primal intensity that would put any beast to shame, unleashing a torrent of your seed deep inside her as your entire body seizes up in pleasure
>She collapses onto your chest, her heart beating rapidly in her chest against yours, and gives a long, drawn out and satisfied sigh, flicking her soaked tail in satisfaction, the two of you having made quite the mess
>You linger inside her for several minutes, both of you panting as you try to catch your breath, Twilight licking the sweat from your neck and chest, occasionally staring lovingly into your eyes as she laps at you
>She eventually settles onto your chest contentedly after stealing another kiss which seems to last for an eternity
>”I love you, Master,” she coos, almost at a whisper
“I know,” you reply, beginning to idly run your fingers through her mane as she gradually falls asleep
>>27317754
>>”PLEASE! Fuck me, Master! Fuck your little slave! Use me! Please, let me make you cum!”
>“Wanting Master’s cum? That’s a bold request.”
>>WHAP!
>“What have you done to deserve such a gift, hmm?”
>>”I don’t deserve it, I’m not worthy, but I need it! Please Master, I’ll do anything, I’m begging you, I just need you inside me
Absolutely beautiful. You are the one shot hero we've always needed.
>>27317556
>faint of heart readers
I'm sure I'm not the only one that stopped fallowing your green a long time ago.
Write whatever.
>>27318098
>doesn't read the story but reads the ending notes.
>>27317768
That's not a happy ending at all...
>>27318283
How so?
>>27318292
She's still a slave...
>>27317556
If you're about to go full edgefag please don't.
>>27318303
A willing slave. She loves her Master. She could easily escape if she didn't.
>>27318322
There's no such thing as a willing slave.
>>27318332
You are wrong.
>>27318098
>I'm sure I'm not the only one
probably pretty close to it
oh shet kek
>>27318332
>>27318382
Willing slaves are boring. I like my slaves to have a defiant streak in them, even when utterly broken. It makes punishing them that much more satisfying.
>>27318436
Stop shitposting
>>27318490
>Shitposts once in a fucking blue moon
>Gets hate instead of being ignored
Enough of this shit.
>>27318545
Seriously stop shitposting
>>27318785
Yeah, the only shitposts we allow in here are stallion steeds and mares for whipping
>>27317508
Hooo, boy. Well, here we go.
Do what you want, but please don't hurt the Dinky. She's too damn cute.
>>27317768
Well. Uh, that wasn't where I was expecting that go.
Not complaining, though. Nothing wrong with a full fetish story, and utterly broken Twiggles is as good as any. You continuing?
>>27318840
K.
Who is best for whipping? Celly or Moonbutt?
Bumpa
So guys, just got back from ban for the last 3ish days. Anyone want to guess why? Here is a hint, it involved calling out the mod for posting in random threads that he proceeded to nuke, saying we would merge with them. That mother fucker banned me for breaking rule 8 and calling the sniveling fuck out on his bullshit. That is all.
>>27319621
Also before I forget Ekans might be in on this bullshit, all my posts here and elsewhere were deleted for no reason, as well as being on topic. tfw pissed off a cuk bitch so passive aggressive he shitposts while I cant post back.
>>27319621
>>27319679
WHAT?
>>27319765
Bullshit janitor, might also be a butt hurt cuck writer we had her, but told to fuck off. The irony is not lost on me. The fucker would come in and try to start shit, also likely is the one that goes to the other large generals and tells them to expect us to merge with them.
>>27313593
Implying your in the correct thread.
>>27315780
You died because your fetish is shit, and you have no fans. Don't bitch at us for your inadequacies.
>leave SPG for months
>come back
>BlindAnon is dead
>>27320091
and for some time man, it was a bad loss.
>>27320212
almost as bad asskittles
>>27320258
rip.
When
>>27320992
When he's ready.
>>27320613
I wish to ride the little mare.
>>27322272
Ride or not to ride. That's the question
>>27322573
That's a silly question. The answer is ride. The answer is always ride.
>>27320992
When?
>>27322593
>>27322272
Mare doesn't want you to ride her.
>>27323079
Mare doesn't get a choice in the matter. Mare better have her saddle on when I get home or she's in trouble.
>>27323100
>saddle
Bareback riding is better.
>>27323119
But the saddle is extra weight for her to carry and an added reminder that she's my slave.
All you fags that took a ban for us, and are only reading this.
Thank you.
F
>>27323250
F who, may I ask?
>>27323783
I think he means "Press F to pay respects". Hence why he only typed F.
>>27323850
K, if so...FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF.I was one of those fags.
>>27323866
here here brother.
>>27322812
>>27320992
eventually. I'm staring at my notepad wondering what the fuck I'm doing
>>27325255
>notepad
>not using something with autosaves in case vista shits itself.
>>27325272
I know that feel bro. One of the reasons I write on le phone
>>27325272
>my notepad
Last time I checked, paper doesn't run on Vista.
>>27325272
Write in the reply box like a real man.
>>27325296
IT CAN DO THINGS
not much, but things
>>27325477
>That word processing program
>Everything about that task bar
Oh god, why?
>>27325495
I know. Faggot isn't even running Dwarf Fortress in the background.
Am glad to see he changed his mind about Ling dying.
>>27326131
>Not even running dorfs in the background
HERESYHi tgn
>>27326131
>Am glad to see he changed his mind about Ling dying.
Ling kill scene incoming
“So have you thought of a name 1337?”
>“A name?”
>The changeling, who is one of your sisters, looks down at you curiously
>from YOUR bunk
“well, yeah, a name, I go by Ling here”
>“A changeling named ling”
>She looks at you for a moment before getting a grin
>“I see”
>Oh shit nigga
>“Then I will be called Chang”
>JUST
“You cant name yourself that”
>she head tilts trying to be cute
>It doesn’t work
>“Why not”
“Chang Ling? Really”
>“yeah”
>She grins
>You groan and shake your head, taking Cadences bed for now
>While you try to lay down to wait out the ling drive
>Chang as she calls herself now just wont shut up
>You put a pillow over your head but it does little to hold her back as she tells you EVERYTHING that’s happened to her since the war
>every
>fucking
>THING
>When you get a break from the talking, you grab the walkie talkie
“Anon whats the next stop”
>Static
>“We’re heading out to texas, I wanna try something”
“What something?”
>“Steak”
>You go silent
“Steak…the thing you can get anywhere, you’re going to texas for it?”
>Anon chuckles loudly
>“Not just any steak. A 72 ounce”
>dudewat
“Explain”
>“You’ll see it when we get there”
>The talkie goes back to static and you put it back on the charging port
>Weird
>When Chang returns to YOUR bed, she goes back to talking
>Luckily, she hasn’t been abused
>But she was sold, a lot
>No surprise really
>You are reminded of the one time she walked in while Chrysalis was in an important meeting, walked right by everyone, made herself a sandwich with the party food, and walked right back out
>10 days in the mines didn’t help her gain any sense either
>Weird changeling
>It only takes 4 hours to drive to Anons goal
>But it feels like 3 days due to Changs constant chatting
>“And THAT’S how I managed to be a maid while disguised as a slutty unicorn. Oh and then when you and-”
>>27326886
>Anon swings open the door
>“WE’RE HERE”
>Oh thank Chrysalis
>>“……...Finally”
>Stepping out, you see Cadence visibly cringing, and Starburst staring at the sign
>FREE 72OZ STEAK
>Anon rubs his hands together menacingly
>You notice Chang grinning in the corner of your eye
“Been a while since you’ve had any protien”
>“Well technically back whe-”
“No”
>You turn to face her
“Stop there. I don’t want to hear about your escapades with human anatomy”
>It stops nothing, as Chang starts explaining one of her previous owners
>You use your magic to clamp her mouth shut
>Not today bitch
>Chang and yourself change to ponies, Rarity and Fleur De Lis respectively
>You all enter, getting, as expected, strange looks from some humans who were not exactly fond of ponies in their restaurant
>However Anon saying he’s going for the challenge , the mood changes, and the waitress brings him to one of the ‘challenge tables’
>Just normal tables with counters on them
>All of you get drinks, yourself and Cadence getting ciders, Anon a honey blonde lager, and sunburst and chang soda
>Chang on soda
>Not exactly preferred
>The beers are brought, and an announcement is made
>The eyes following to Anon with the huge steak in front of him
>And 4 ponies
>its uncomfortable
>>27326892
>F5F5F5F5F5.... nothing
Done for the night?
>>27327306
for now, not sure what to do from here, eat the steak, but then..eh..I need to get the group out to RMs group for the section he already wrote, but thats pretty much all i got in terms of a plan
>>27327306
>using F5
My newfag detector is off the charts.
>>27327334
>>27327498
Shh... You'll summon him...
>>27325477
>font size 14
Ewww....
>Fire and Sky is still being written
I read slow and just spent 2 hours catching up on that shit.
God, White Knight General is 6 months old already?
I don't care if we run this shit into the ground. Being here with you faggots to get taken along the wild rides of Buying a Bookhorse and Skittles and all the rest... This has been fantastic. This is the kind of memory I'll be daydreaming about if I'm still alive at the age of 70 in 50 years.
God, I'm so tired, I'm so giddy, what the fuck, somebody spank me
>>27327340
>not just having keyboard commands on
>>27304898
Any of these stories involve rape?
>>27329689
You can see clit through those panties. Might wanna delete that post unless you want a vacation. I wouldn't risk it.
Bump with a discussion
How can magic suppressant pills do their shit?
In Regards, Anon, Vinyl takes those pills like it was weed, and became addicted to them.
And in other stories it's just 'some weird-ass shit to prevent unicorns to do their magic'
>>27327504
>tfw Jerry won't get better at golfing
I need some happy.
Anybody got some to spare?
>>27329698
just answer the question Jerry
>>27329707
I don't know why anyone hasn't thought about the magic removal thing from the Equestria Games episode. It would make much more sense that humans got a hold of some of those and used them on unicorn slaves than it does that humans could somehow come up with a countermeasure to a force they have zero practical understanding of.
>>27309209
with her innocent and naive nature you could easily trick her to enjoy it instead.
She may never understand why other ponies hate their situation or even her master could start to see her as more than a slave
>>27329707
Twilight did it.
>>27329707
Buying a Bookhorse had some science-babble about the drug only binding to neural connections in the horn.
>>27329825
Because they're not mobile or something the average Anon could afford. Plus they don'y have the whole addiction angle.
