Civil War edition
>Previously on Spider-Shim Unlimited
>>27248152
Hey there, true believers! This is the superhero thread, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as the deadly, the spectacular, the amazing Spider-Woman! Anything and everything superhero and mlp related is welcome
>I can do this all day
Pastebin List (I got it right this time)
Beans
http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
untitled 7
http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
superkeaton
http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton (in parts)
Red (risen from the dead)
http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
Shocker Anon
http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
Roommate Anon
http://pastebin.com/vqHxXiMY
treppahcs (last place but rewritten)
http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
Dead?
FemAnon
http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V
>Thread theme
http://youtu.be/o8bFPvVFL34
new fred smell
Can we get through this one without a fight?
http://youtu.be/S12Mw2WvRWg
>>27294240
What fight?
Cause I'll fucking knock a bitch out.
>>27294807
>beans
>star wars prequels
>aggressive cap imagery
>bloke clones
>>27294212
>>27294221
A BULLSHIT
Beans should stop posting. Even if he's not attention whoring, people are still making a big whoop about it.
At first I thought I hated him, but now I just feel like he can't tell his story without people pissing on him.
>>27295666
calm down, satan.
He should just post and be a decent human being, and bashing him won't do any good.
>>27295691
He hasn't been indecent. He did literally nothing wrong last thread.
>>27295666
Instead of one of our best writers dropping out, you guys need to leave him alone
He noticed that everyone doesn't want to hear his life story, and he hasn't talked about his life in forever. He barely shows up anymore, when he does show up, he pretty much only posts green because he's afraid that if he says anything else, everyone will call him an attention whore or something stupid like that.
>>27295790
To be fair he only posted twice.
>>27295826
you sure like posting that gif
>>27296180
It's a good gif
>>27296192
repetition makes it bad though... treasure it more
>>27295826
Beans did nothing wrong.
Bush did 9/11.
>>27296212
I will always treasure muh Cap
>>27296232
Donald Trump did Outer Heaven
>>27296232
Spider webs cant melt steel Beans.
>>27296259
Spiderman is not physically capable of memes
http://youtu.be/xeMtL6Yk3mw
I found Beans...
>>27296277
>>27297025
>>27297025
Perhaps he's wondering why someone would shoot a man, before throwing him out of a thread
>>27297025
>mfw
>>27294212
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CdqoNKCCt7A
I haven't been dead
Just lurking
Too much studying these days so I haven't written anything yet
Will do soon though
Just don't forget about me till then
>>27297025
>>27297235
Hey bloke. I need to talk to you.
Ask the draw-friend via email for my email address, then email me. If he's hesitant, show him a screencap of this post.
>>27297368
I don't have email.
Is it serious?
>>27297461
Well...not life threatening or anything, but it's about my story. It's all right. Don't worry about it.
>>27297527
I worry about all of my subjects
>>27297569
I did not vote this man into power...
>>27297569
It's nothing. Forget about it. This thread is off topic already. Let the writefags write first.
>>27297608
This isn't a democracy anymore
>>27297648
[WRITES EVENTUALLY]
I feel fucking awful and lazy today, so probably no greens from me
>>27297648
You first.
>>27297648
All right. Chill. Be cool.
Shoot some b-ball outside the school
>>27297681
Where is everybody? They out seeing Civil War or something?
Tony did nothing wrong
>>27298063
just came back from it. that scene with tony's parents is batman tier.
>>27298149
No spoilers
I'm gonna see it in about an hour
>>27298167
Just saying
If you also like ANTS, the airport scene will probably make you jizz from sheer excitement
This was my favorite movie of MCU so far tbqh
>>27298210
I'm preparing by watching a random episode of Ultimate Spiderman.
My favorite character so far is Hawkeye
Because Troy Baker.
It's actually not that bad, I need to find a place where I can watch it from the beginning.
Why am I so excited right now?
>>27298229
That show is garbo overall familia
The main cast is totally unlikable, they completely butcher most origin stories, and the insane amount of Emperor's New Groove-style 4th wall breaking is total shit and makes this seem more like a Deadpool show (funny considering how when they actually had a Deadpool episode they had to make him a walking memefactory to outdo Spidey)
There are some arguably decent episodes, though, andAunty May is kind of hot
>>27297368
>>27297527
>>27297648
Listen here bucko.
If you're gonna stop writing, tell us.
If you're gonna keep writing, tell us.
Don't act like it's some big goddamn secret that must remain under lock and key. People are waiting on you to return with some green and pulling shit like this makes it look like you're seriously about to quit the thread.
Be upfront with us instead of pussyfooting around like a scared child.
symbiotes a best
>>27298331
Yeah, you'd think with the show being about ULTIMATE Spiderman, and the fact that it airs on Disney XD, that it'd be more serious.
Also hi, I'm back from Civil War
>>27300187
So was it worth seeing?
>No green in this entire thread
Untitled 7 and treppahcs pls come back
>>27301303
Cant make promises, but probalby today I finish a scene and let you cliffhang where I want it instead of in the middle of one
>>27301303
I never left and the part I'm on is giving me trouble
From the last thread.
>Be Anon
>Be a very confused and weirded out Anon.
>You’re standing outside Rarity’s house with a piece of paper in your hand.
>Earlier you found a cupcake and a party invitation in your locker from Pinkie.
>The invite said to be at Rarity’s after school or else.
>You heard of what happens when you don’t come to a party Pinkie invites you to.
>You sigh as you knock on the door.
>The doors opens a moment later and reveals Rarity at the door.
> “Anon, I’m glad you came.”
>You chuckle awkwardly as you scratch the back of your head.
“Well, I heard how Pinkie gets when you don’t show up.”
>Rarity giggles at you while moving to the side.
> “You wouldn’t have to worry about that. Now please do come in.”
>You nod and enter her house as she shows you where the party is.
>Once in the basement you can see Twilight, Pinkie and Sunset setting up some snacks and stuff.
“Hey girls.”
>They wave back but Sunset looks away from you as Pinkie gets behind you and pushes you towards Sunset.
> “Hey Nony, how’re you doing? Good? That’s good, hey you mind helping Sunset? You will thanks.”
>You shrug and follow Sunset into the kitchen.
“So what do you need help with?”
>She walks over to the counter and grabs a bottle of soda.
> “Mind just grabbing a few of...woah.”
>She took a couple of steps when her foot slipped and she threw the soda bottle up.
>Thinking fast you step forward and wrap your right arm around her shoulders while your left hand is on her waist.
“Gotta watch yourself SunWWWWMMMM.”
>The soda bottle hit your head, forcing it towards Sunset’s head.
>With your lips against hers.
>>27302528
Boy, that escalated quickly. I mean that really got outa hand fast.
A Spider Shim thread woefully underpopulated by greens?
This looks like a job for DOCTOR BEES!
>You are Shocker.
>And you have been introduced to teh CMC's "Plan Omega".
>That is to say, dating you to prevent you from committing crimes.
>Which, to be fair, does seem to be somewhat of an effective deterrent.
>One problem.
>You really, REALLY don't want to go to jail for pedophilia.
>You're pretty sure that's Doctor Light's schtick (or something like that), and NO ONE likes Doctor Light.
>Fortunately, you are saved from such a fate thanks to DOCTOR BEES and his shit load of bees.
>Yeah, it stings like a god damn bitch, but at least it made the CMC forget their plans due to being stung by a shit load of bees.
>Right now, you're at home trying wait out the pain, while possibly rubbing it out to some various porn.
>Just another day in your life.
>>27302552
Just you wait. The ride hasn't stopped yet
>>27302580
Am I right in assuming one of the girls is using her powers to this?
Like Pinkie going all Quicksilver on Anon and Sunset
>>27302606
Well yes to the friends part no to the powers part but you gave me a few ideas now
>>27300466
The villain's plan is convoluted as fuck
Captain America forgot he was a soldier
Iron Man is acts stupid
But
it's like any other MCU movie
Good watch but nothing to write home about
>>27302528
>You could see her beautiful cyan eyes and her cute blushing face.
>You couldn’t think of anything but the girl in your arms.
>Then you remembered you were kissing your best friend.
>You ended the kiss and lifted her to her feet.
“Sorry, so drinks right?”
>Be Sunset.
>And you feel a bit happy and a little lightheaded from that kiss.
>You feel your face turn as red as a tomato.
>You try to calm down but it doesn’t work.
>You didn’t hear what your boy-I mean my friend said.
>You totally meant your friend.
>Looking at him smiling and see he’s blushing as well.
“W-What did you say?”
>He rubs the back of his head while looking at the counter.
> “You just need help with the drinks right?”
>You nod frantically as you grab a soda bottle and walk to the door.
“Yeah, soda sure.”
>Be Pinkie pie about a few moments ago.
>And the first part of the plan has been executed.
“Good job using the marble Jackie.”
>Beside you, Applejack tipped her hat at you.
> “Not a problem cousin but how did you get the bottle to hit Anon’s head? Is Rarity in on this part as well?”
“Actually I didn’t plan for that but I won’t complain.”
>Even you know some plans have unexpected results.
“Now get ready for next part of this operation.”
>>27302716
>>27302716
Looking forward to seven minutes in heaven
>>27303020
as if
>>27303020
Maybe
>>27298672
Need more fem-Venom
>>27304970
Green*
>>27302636
What about the super hero registration act?
>>27304970
>>27305079
.... I'll add it to the list of things I'm gonna write.
>>27302636
>villains plan is convoluted
It worked, didn't it?
>Cap forgot he was a soldier
What?
>Iron Man acts stupid
True
>Nothing to write home about
Wrong
>>27305575
I will wait, sempai
>>27305785
The SRA mostly sits in the background during the movie as it becomes more about everyone wanting to kill Bucky
>>27305803
Fucking really?
>>27305832
yes, even the people who should know better than to rage on the mind-controlled victim about arbitrary reasons which were never a deal until it was convenient for the plot (in the series of MCU)
>Wasted potential
>>27305899
Went out like a bitch.
>>27305947
Hail Hydra
>>27305989
>>27305989
idea for story: Anon's actually on the side opposing the regular establishment
and... not useless like shocker? (sorry shockeranon)
>>27305636
>villains plan is convoluted
its silly as all hell
>Cap forgot he was a soldier
he had to fight in WWII where he took orders from someone above him
he had to fight for SHIELD where he took orders from someone above him
>Iron Man acts stupid
Yes
>Nothing to write home about
Its like every Marvel movie
They are good but not spectacular
I've watched them all besides a few and I've never been engrossed in themIt's OK to like or dislike a movie, bloke
>>27306197
>>Nothing to write home about
>Its like every Marvel movie
not quite
yes, it's a good movie, simply because marvel knows what it's doing most of the time
but it's just another marvel movie, and it only bantered to fanservice
so again, yes, it was a good movie, but we know Marvel is capable of making much better ones, they simply retreated to what's popular and fall into, what every studio does "just make prequels"
>>27305636
I'll admit though I loved the spiderman bits.
they did him so well as a young peter parker
his actor was also very good.
>>27306197
Cap quits taking orders when they go against his beliefs, as seen in Winter Soldier
>>27306197
If it's nothing to write home about, why are we here writing about it?
>>27306396
triangles?
>>27306417
Pizza time
>>27305899
>>27305947He's not dead apparently, Frank Grillo supposedly revealed a little too much in an interview.
>>27306434
>>27306718
"Pizza time"
>>27306718
"PIZZA TIME"
>>27302716
>Be Anon.
>And this little party has been pretty nice.
>When all the snacks and stuff were brought out, more guests showed up.
>Mainly Rainbow and Fluttershy came a bit later.
>Anyways after they arrived everyone either played games, ate some food or just talked to each other.
>Right now you’re playing against Pinkie, Twilight and Sunset in the deadliest death trap ever made.
>Mario Party.
>It’s down to you and Pinkie.
>All you need to do is just jump that stupid flaming jump rope.
>But you get hit by the fire and you lose.
> “WOOHHHOOO. I won, I am the greatest.”
>You shake your head but smile at her antics.
“Ok so you won, what’s next?”
>Pinkie pulls a bottle out of her hair and holds it out in front of her.
> …..Not going there.
>Not worth it.
> “It’s truth or dare time everyone.”
>Everyone sits in a circle on the floor.
> “Everyone knows the rules right?”
>Everyone nods their head at her question.
> “Then let’s begin.”
>She spins the bottle around for a while but then starts to slow down.
>It stops on…….
> “Fluttershy, truth or dare?”
>The shy girl looks a bit nervous as she tries to hide with her hair.
> “Well, um ….can I not pick?”
/mlp/ R3: Topics must be show-related. When discussing people, they must be associated with the show and not the fandom.
>>27308209
go tell that to AiE, because this is the same thing, only everyone has superpowers
>>27295826
>best
I'll admit that there's a limited number of people writing, but he's worse than shocker anon.
>>27308385
I would have thought Shocker Anon would be better than me
>>27307633
>Everyone shook their heads as that wouldn’t be fair.
> “Truth.”
>Pinkie puts her fist under her chin to think but a lightbulb appears above her head.
> “Oh so that’s where it went.”
>She puts the bulb on a table.
> “Fluttershy, what’s the worst you’ve ever done?”
>She fidgets and shakes a little bit.
> “I feed the animals at the shelter thirty minutes late.”
>She hides herself behind her hair as Rainbow pats her on the back.
> “Now it’s your turn Shy.”
>Fluttershy grabs the bottle and daintily spins it.
>Unknown to you, Rarity puts a ring on her finger.
>The bottle slows down and stops at Sunset.
>She grins at her.
> “Dare. Give me your best shot, Fluttershy.”
>She opens her mouth but Rainbow whispers something in her ear.
>Fluttershy nods to what Rainbow is saying then looks at Sunset.
> “I dare you to sit on Anon’s lap until it’s your next turn.”
>Sunset looks shocked and nervous.
> “Can’t I run around the house naked screaming like a banshee?”
>You’re not sure which you want to happen.
>Fluttershy shakes her head.
> “That’s my dare, if you don’t mind.”
>Sunset sighs and walks over to you.
> “Sorry Anon but a dares a dare.”
>You lean back a bit, resting your back against the couch.
>Sunset lowers herself to the point where she’s kneeling on the floor and backs up till her hips are hovering over yours.
>She then gently lowers her hips down and leans against you.
>She moves her whole body to get comfortable.
>Rainbow gives Sunset a smug grin.
> Or you, it’s hard to tell.
> “Hey Sunset, is Anon comfy as a chair?”
>Sunset just nods her head with a blush as red as her hair.
>Not that you could see.
>>27308385
>Insulting Shocker
why are we being such assholes to beans? Christ I understand being fed with blogposting, but he fucking stopped. Now suddenly everybody fucking hates him. At this point I'm worried we'll drive him and other writefags away. Let's just stop fucking discussing this shit. If he starts with the blogs again feel free to tell him to knock it off, but christ we don't have to be pricks about it every time he shows up. Seriously, take your own advice and focus on the green, not the writer's life
>>27308585
That's all for now, Should have a couple more tomorrow and I'll update the pastebin
>>27309062
What this guy said.
>>27309347
I get the feeling that symbiotes are gonna play a part in your story
>>27309500
they might, but I'm also just flat out a fan of the symbiotes.
>pic related is muh waifu
>>27309509
>You will never have your own symbiote
>>27309516
the thought haunts my every waking moment and tinges every dream, muddying idyllic slumber into gnawing nightmares
>>27309537
>You will never see a more inaccurate origin story
http://youtu.be/jKSmIT0zZ-E
>>27309590
......
>>27309615
And, I was wrong.
http://youtu.be/hv3vzuH19fo
>>27309634
that's fucking awful
also, why would a flashbang blind his Spider-Sense?
>>27309668
(Ok, there's gotta be something good about this show)
Ooh! It's got Coulson!
http://youtu.be/NfLmk2x-FKk
>>27309691
Not gonna lie, made me grin
Also, fuck you Spidey, not everyone has to have powers to be effective
>>27309722
(Ok, what else is decent about this...)
Ooh! It's got JK Simmons! And they actually acknowledge someone's death
http://youtu.be/WNcV_Ec168c
>>27309754
"You were killed by the man who now jobs to me with hilarious ease!"
"Also Blackheart, for some reason."
>>27309797
"You're Spiderman?! But you're so...BLACK"
>>27309819
there's a fucking outtake somewhere where that's a line said
>>27306718
"PIZZA TIME"
>>27308879
So, you gonna be posting soon, Beans?
>>27310228
Pizza Time
>>27310374
Can't go wrong with pizza
>mfw waiting for greens
>>27311530
Why did these fags have to bully beans away? We needed his green and the occasional drama to keep these threads going
>>27311881
Because we were given a ridiculous story that made very little sense by Fem Beans, and so we called the story out for being ridiculous.
We also called him out on blogposting because it was a waste of thread space and derailed everything.
That's fucking it.
BEANS was the faggot who got upset that people didn't believe Fem Beans' nigh nonsensical explanation.
BEANS is the one who disappeared again because of it.
No one bullied him, he just couldn't deal with people finally voicing their concerns.
Now, whenever someone tries to make sense of the whole situation, or explain it to someone who is out of the loop you fuckers start screaming, "WAAAH STOP BULLYING BEANS!"
No one is bullying beans, he's just being a baby.
End
Of
Discussion.
>>27312048
Wait a minute. Are we having a shitstorm, about a shitstorm?
>>27312153
any new responce about it makes it worse
Anywho, current stand still on art projects, feeling burned out and uninspired.
Btw trep, really liking the reboot. Cute but not overly so and a good flow imo.
Looking forward to either commissions or further green to wrench me from funk of last few days before work again.
>>27312711
remember my Twilight request?
>>27312711
Thanks, I'm glad to hear that. Hey do you mind if I ask for another pic? Either Discord as Doctor Strange or Celestia as Nick Fury minus the eyepatch.
>>27308585
This is getting 3lewd5me
>>27268577
>“Ahh, I can see why The Tinkerer takes a liking in you. Did you get that phrase from a fortune cookie or has taught you that?”
>The Tinkerer?
>Does she mean Dr. Mason?
“And I see you dodging my question.”
>“Feisty, even.”
>Oh, so you’re feisty now?
>After seeing your expression she continues.
>“I have the job to babysit you through Level 5. We can’t let you wander alone, and some security guards don’t even have that clearance, so they had to call me all the way from floor 17 down... just for you.”
>She sounds pissed.
>“Why that is, I do not know. What makes you so special, Mr West?”
“Mmmmmaybe the amount of mods I got to work on Fallout 4 without crashing it?”
>You force a grin.
“I don’t know... You have looked up my files. In front of me to show off your power- or like... access to information here at Flimdustries, something you probably have done before, but you did now again to show off.”
“You probably are pissed because an escort mission is well beyond your paycheck, and now are letting off some steam on me.”
>She looks at you for a few seconds before smiling.
>“Chrysalis.”
>Then, against all odds, she reaches out with her hand to you to shake it.
>You do so with a reasonable firm grip.
“Anon.”
>Her grip was less firm than you had expected.
>But then again, you had expected her to crush your hand.
>“Tell me, Anon, are you loyal to those who have been good to you?”
>She lets go of your hand again, and moves to remove the terminal.
>She even stepped aside for the two of you to have better room.
“Or maybe you’re not pissed but are testing me.”
>You tilt your head and smile as she didn’t loose hers.
“The honest answer is that I’m not making a life commitment to anyone who simply shares a slice of pizza with me. It’s uhh...”
>“Opportunity cost.”
>She has her head tilted and still a smile of amusement on her.
>>27313641
>“And I believe you’re a smart enough man to know that neither cost nor reward solely consists of money, aren’t you?”
“Yeah, like dental.”
>You say quite sardonically, before following up with more serious reasons.
“I assumed I was quite useful to Dr. Mason, but hearing he’s appreciating me is nice–”
>“Respect. What you yearn for is respect.”
>You want to say something to that but then just close your mouth.
>“Which, for you, is a paradox because you can barely accept praise, nor even recognize your own accomplishments.”
>You frown
“What accomplishments?”
>“You just said ‘What accomplishments?’ Are you serious?”
“Uhh...”
>“You have a perfect SAT score.”
“Anyone with a good memory can-”
>“You finished Dr. Masons capacitor problem. And I know what a capacitor is, but what the actually problem was about?”
“Dr. Mason did most of the work and excluded a great number of possib-”
>“Unable to take praise and recognize your own accomplishments.”
“I-”
>You stop.
>Both things she said would certainly be impressive to anyone unfamiliar with the circumstances.
>But does it matter?
>A perfect SAT score is a perfect SAT score.
>A solved problem is a solved problem.
>“When was the last time you had really been challenged?”
>You were unable to answer.
>There was the brain mapping to control the spider legs you made...
>No, you could simply use already existing research here at Flimdustries to jump to it.
>Like the ones Dr. Octavia uses.
>Yet you had been unable to acquire the proper materials for it...
>Your less-elegant solution still bothers you to no end.
>But..
>The suit itself.
“I do make mistakes.”
>“And now you flip the coin around to show me your short comings, just so you won’t feel like I praise you.”
>She raises her head and mess up your hair.
>“You’re adorable.”
>You let her do as she pleases, but that doesn’t mean you like it.
>>27313646
>Especially not since she seems to be on to something.
>Ugh... that sucks.
>The elevator door opens again and she quickly removes her hand from any possible onlookers.
>“Come.”
>Is all she says before walking out at a quick pace.
“H-hey.”
>You have a hard time catching up to her.
>Not because you don’t have a quick walking pace yourself, but because there was so much awesome stuff around to look at.
>“No sightseeing.”
>While pretty much all of the laboratories were cut off behind blast doors, some were still open for you to gaze into.
>But you barely got a second passing each and anyone, and after she rebuked you on sightseeing you felt obligated to obey and look forward.
>It’s not as if there wasn’t something juicy swaying in front of you...
>No!
>You have a girlfriend now.
>Sort of...
>Even if all you did is hold hands... kinda...
>You try to distract yourself by thinking about what /whoever/ could possibly want from you to call you down into Level 5.
>Was it Dr. Masons capacitor thing?
>Whatever it is... You should accept praise if it’s given to you.
>Just shut up if something rubs you wrong, smile, nod, and say ‘Thank you, sir.’
>...
>Why are you at Level 5?
>Would they show you what the capacitors are used for?
>Parts are made in the Levels with less security, only the important stuff, and valuable materials come this far down.
>Oh damn, they’ll show you, won’t they?
>Calm down. This isn’t christmas, and you’re noa 5 year old.
>“In here.”
>Ah.
>Lost in thought you had almost ran into her.
>She unlocks the door on a terminal and as it opens she gestures you to go in before her.
>A ‘ladies first’ was at the tip of your tongue, but you let her do her job.
>When you think about it, just having you walk behind her in the hallway would have been a sort of security risk if she was supposed to keep her eye on you.
>No time to ponder.
>You step inside.
>>27313646
>G-Goodies.
>Your eyes flow quickly over the techwear used for minor construction, like the tentacle arms Dr. Octavia was so fond of.
>But there were people present, so you had to focus your attention on-
>Holy shit it’s-
>No, it’s Flim, the less goblin-y, less homicidal of the two brothers.
>Their similarities were too uncannily close. But Flim was the thinner of the two with less muscle mass, but also the one who had an PhD.
>Wait.
>This is still Flimdustries, and this is still Flim.
>The big boss is here... for you?
>Besides him was Dr. Mason, Dr. Octavia, and two other doctor (a man and a woman) you didn’t know. As well as another security guard with a freaking rifle.
>They all theatrically stop talking and turn to you as you enter.
>These times when you have the feeling that everyone stops talking because they just talked about you behind your back?
>This is one of this times.
>Only this time you think you weren’t paranoid.
>“Mr. West, good evening.”
>Even Dr. Mason was ‘Mr. West’-ing you now, but probably to keep a formal appearance in front of the others.
“Good evening.”
>You nod to them and approach the table with the techwear they stand behind.
>Your eyes are caught by the last one.
>A pair of elbow protectors measuring muscle movement in ones forearm, the right one shows fire damage but appears to have been cleaned of burnt skin.
>As well as a metal backpack, which is only slightly dented.
>You don’t panic.
>You don’t have any strong emotions whatsoever to be honest.
>>27313654
>What’s missing is your spider-costume, but most of that got destroyed.
>You look up to them.
>Judging you.
>Dr. Flim begins “First of all, Mr. West, I’d like to apologize for having an agent break into your dorm room and remove some of your property.”
>And Dr. Octavia continues “It is, upon further inspection, indeed non of our technology, nor technology you would have only been able to construct by making use of intellectual property belonging to Flim Industries.”
>She tone shows some disdain. Maybe because your tech was so close to her favorite.
>The pause was quite awkward.
>Dr. Flim however cuts through the thick atmosphere.
>“The crime committed we committed can certainly not be forgiven by simply cleaning your technology and handing it back to you, but we did so anyway. What I’m here to ask of you is not to press any charges.”
>You smile.
“That’s not what this is about.”
>You sigh and close your eyes to make yourself a better picture.
“You know I won’t because I can certainly not hire a better lawyer than you. Best case scenario for me is to stir up some scandal that you have to steal tech and throw a bad reputation on your company...”
>You hold back a comment about how it’s already pretty damaged, no wait, you have a better idea.
“Which would be bad, especially since you’re doing a good job rebuilding said reputation.”
>That’s it.
“But that’s not going to happen, because surely in the investigation there will be an annotation that I’m the person to even have it...”
>You take a breath.
“It’s... you know. You know, you’re smart enough and have the resources to know. And you want to talk about it. Would you not have wanted to talk about it you had simply put it back and I might not even had known you knew, but now I do.”
>>27313659
>That’s it.
“But that’s not going to happen, because surely in the investigation there will be an annotation that I’m the person to even have it...”
>You take a breath.
“It’s... you know. You know, you’re smart enough and have the resources to know. And you want to talk about it. Would you not have wanted to talk about it you had simply put it back and I might not even had known you knew, but now I do.”
“And don’t come me with goodwill that you return it to me because you’re a nice guy, you broke into my dorm room. The ‘nice’ guy doesn’t do that.”
>Your eyes widen.
“But you know, it’s what you did for the company, it wasn’t... ‘evil’-evil, just... an inconvenience.”
>You hope his brother wasn’t too touchy a subject.
>Silence.
>You look up and see them only exchanging glances and a shrug, while Dr. Flim continues to stare at you.
“So no... you’re not here to give it back, we’re here to talk...”
>Dr. Flam nods.
>“You’re a smart kid – I’m sorry – a smart young man, Mr. West. And I’d like to have you realize that the outcome of this conversation might shape your future to come.”
>The only thing you were able to do was nod in understanding.
“What’s going to happen now?”
>“As you so thoroughly brought some things to the point, I’d like you to take a guess – no. Come to a conclusion.”
“No.”
>You shake your head.
“No.”
>As if repeating it makes it clearer.
“Anything... this conversation can lead to. No.”
>“Mr. West. Any sum of money-”
“No. It’s- ah.. It’s not mine to give.”
>This makes him stop.
>Bet he didn’t expect that.
>“It’s your own blood, how can it not be yours to give?”
“Because they-”
>Because they would know.
>“They?”
>You’re legitimately scared, and Flim sees that.
>It has always been just ‘them’ in your head, but you had also known the name.
>The name’s been the source of pop culture after all.
“Hydra.”
Authors note:
Octavia wasn't in CHS, she's older.
As will be pretty much any character I build in who are not explained how they got there, as background characters they simply didn't exist or were other people to begin with.
comments, questions, concerns?
>>27313725
Can you update the pastebin? I really want to catch up with your story and reading it from there would be a really convenient way to do so.
>>27313832
it's all in it except for the stuff in this thread, I'll update soon
>>27313725
got a few mistakes, but I'm intrigued overall
>>27312840
Yeah i still have that one. Armored gauntlets, boots and magic pendant from eqg3 right? Did you have preference for torso clothing?
>>27312872
>>27314074
Add on since I forgot to answer, sure I can do that as well. I'll throw some ideas together and see what sticks
>>27313938
as always, please tell ^^
>>27314102
the gauntlets are only to channel the magic, and boots to fly. she lacks proper protective gear.
and I much rather leave the rest as artist's choice because I assume you know better what stuff works well together.
I just hope I get to the point where everyone will get their debut.
>>27313919
Okay then.
>>27314127
kay
>>27313641
>“Ahh, I can see why The Tinkerer takes a liking in you. Did you get that phrase from a fortune cookie or has taught you that?”
>>27313651
>Calm down. This isn’t christmas, and you’re noa 5 year old.
>>27313659
>And Dr. Octavia continues “It is, upon further inspection, indeed non of our technology, nor technology you would have only been able to construct by making use of intellectual property belonging to Flim Industries.”
>>27313677
>That’s it.
“But that’s not going to happen, because surely in the investigation there will be an annotation that I’m the person to even have it...”
>You take a breath.
“It’s... you know. You know, you’re smart enough and have the resources to know. And you want to talk about it. Would you not have wanted to talk about it you had simply put it back and I might not even had known you knew, but now I do.” (dupe)
“And don’t come me with goodwill that you return it to me because you’re a nice guy, you broke into my dorm room. The ‘nice’ guy doesn’t do that.”
>“You’re a smart kid – I’m sorry – a smart young man, Mr. West. And I’d like to have you realize that the outcome of this conversation might shape your future to come.” (outcome... to come is redundant)
that's all I've found.
I AM only half-awake, however, and could have totally missed more stuff.
>>27314102
Nice
>>27313185
Then beware of the next few parts
>>27314434
if the next part isn't from Anon's point of view and doesn't star with
>Be a comfy chair
I'll be disappointed
>>27314452
I was gonna briefly switch to Sunset then switch to the comfy chair
>>27314127
Random add on, was there a preference for hair style? I imagine as long as it is easy to ID as twi, but if you have a preferred style I'd like to know in advance ^^
>>27313725
Great update man. Keep 'em coming.
>>27312048
http://youtu.be/zEgPe3svFgA
>>27315012
I want ears back you bastard!
>>27314655
regular scitwi hair
>>27314868
thanks
>>27308879
No, like his writing really isn't that good.
>>27315649
http://youtu.be/iZSUp5Nb1Dw
>>27315649
I still like it, sans the out-of-nowhere lewds
At least, I think it's better than mine
>>27316041
>Implying yours is not the best
I'm still waiting for Red
http://youtu.be/SXjXKT98esw
>>27316117
Well one guy said beans and Shocker were at the bottom and I thought I was
>>27308385
>>27308434
>Being worse
>Than me
>>27316421
>Being better
>Than Shocker
>>27316421
>>27316461
I didn’t mean it like that. I just thought i was at the bottom of the totem pole
>>27316421
>Implying anyone is worse than me.
>>27316676
>>27316492
>>27316421
Ladies, you'really all pretty.
>>27317284
I'm a guy and expect green in a bit
>>27317312
That's the joke.
>>27308585
>Be Sunset.
>And you can't relax.
>You’re currently sitting on Anon’s lap and you can't calm down.
>On top of it all, you're shaking like a leaf.
>You can feel everything from his heartbeat to the rise and fall of his chest.
>He wraps his arms around your waist and you feel something else.
> PLEASE DON’T BE WHAT I THINK IT IS.
>Be a comfy chair.
>Or Anon as you're both at the moment.
>Sunset sits in your lap but won't stop shaking against you.
>And her shaking is waking up a certain part of you.
>SUNSET STOP SHAKING.
>You wrap your arms around her to stop her shaking.
>You literally didn’t know if it would work but you had to do something.
>Luckily it did the trick as she started calm down and stop shaking.
>But now you feel her child bearing hips and the heat coming off them.
“So, how is it?”
>You're trying to be as casual as possible.
>She looks shyly away from you.
> “Perfect, um… I mean it's fine.”
>Ok, you're hearing things.
>Just sit there and wait for it to be yours or Sunset’s turn.
>Still the comfy chair and it's been an hour since Sunset’s dare.
>And Sunset is still sitting on your lap but she's resting her eyes a bit.
>You just sat there and watched the show as a bunch of dares ranging from handstands to belching to even dress ups.
>You'll treasure the memory of Rainbow Dash in a pink ballerina outfit.
>>27317284
Am I pretty?
>>27317510
Yes, but only from behind.
>>27317432
>You’re glad you had your phone.
>But against all odds, the bottle lands on you or Sunset.
>It's hard to tell.
>Rarity looks at the both of you, trying to pick who to ask.
> “Anon, truth or dare.”
>You need to think of your choices real carefully-
“Dare.”
>Or throw caution to the wind.
>Rarity gets a devious smile on her face and you know that you’re fucked.
> “I dare you to take Sunset into the closet for a little make out session.”
>You feel yourself and Sunset freeze at that.
> “And you can’t come out til we say.”
>You sigh and shake Sunset a little.
“Let’s get this over with, Sunny.”
>She nods stiffly as she gets off of you.
>You rise to your feet and grab Sunset’s hand.
>Her face goes red and you’re sure yours is as well.
“So where’s your closet?”
>She points at a door in the back and you walk towards it.
>She opens the door when someone pushes you in.
> “Have a nice make-out, and make sure it’s extra sloppy.”
“PINKIE.”
> “No need to thank me just have a good time in there.”
>You sigh knowing that there’s no way out of this.
>Ok, this should be easy.
>Just kiss her on the lips, make a little noise and you’ll be out of there before you know it.
>You look at Sunset’s face.
>Her beautiful cyan eyes.
>Her pouty pink lips.
>.....
>.....
>Ok this may be harder than you thought.
>>27317548
Alright Alright Alright
>>27317558
That's all for now. I promise to update the pastebin in the morning
>>27317752
good shit, trep, thanks
>>27317874
Thanks, I was worried about this part. Wasn't sure it was long enough to get the point across, you know.
>>27317558
>Knees weak
>Palms spaghetti
>Arms spaghetti
>Mom's spaghetti
Fuck me, I just had a good idea.
Dammit.
Dammit!
Fuck!
>>27318445
http://youtu.be/4QGeMApnBQQ
>>27318475
I'll file it away for later. I wanna focus on Shimmering issues first.
>>27318289
Yeah
so, how's everyone doing?
>>27320703
Good, just writing
>>27320703
Oh you know, waiting for more Green.
And what about you?
>>27319888
I hope his spaghetti doesn't ruin it. It better fucking not trep, my dick needs this man, cmon bro.
>>27320732
It won't, I promise that.
>>27320703
My health is adequate, almost done with my final project, green production is a bit slow but it's fine, so over all I'd say I'm quite good.You?
>>27320929
studying for my Philosophy final today
>>27320744
Good shit, amigo, nice going compadray
>>27317558
>Be Pinkie Pie.
>And you need to be sneaky sneak like as you and your friends whisper.
“Good job team.”
>Everyone nods or rolls their eyes.
> “I’m surprised this is actually working darling.”
“Yeah, but did you really have to keep on spinning the bottle with your powers for a hour?”
>Rarity looked to the side with her nose in the air.
> “I stopped that after Twilight’s twerking display, which I have to say I’m impressed with.”
>Twilight hides her face in her hands as she blushes.
“Wait, that was like the first ten minutes.”
> “Yes, I even tried to move the bottle on to them a few times but it didn’t work.”
>You look at her in amazement.
“Maybe, some grand higher power is causing this to happen.”
>Everyone looks at you like your crazy, but you don’t care.
>You just want to hear the sounds of some sloppy kissing.
>Be Anon.
>And you have Sunset pressed against you in this small closet.
>Her arms were around your shoulders.
>Her full breasts were pressed against your chest.
>And your hands were on her large child bearing hips.
>You need to calm down.
>You to stop being a chicken and tell her.
> “S-So should w-we do this?”
>You take a deep breathe and look her in the eye.
>>27321251
>She looks at you, curiously.
“Well, I wanted to know if you wanted to hang out some time?”
>She looks a bit sad as her as she starts to separate from you.
> “You want to hang out?”
>You panic a little.
“No, I mean we could do something.”
>She looks even sadder than before.
“Wait, I don’t know how to say this.”
>Sunset looks at you confused.
“I want to ask if you want to get something to eat some time.”
>She looks back at you hopefully.
“But if you want to I mean.”
> “Are you asking what I think you’re asking?”
“Well, I think I want toMMMMmmnnn.”
>She captures your lips hers in a light kiss and pulls away slightly.
> “Friday at 6 pm?”
>You just nod.
> “It’s a date.”
>She goes in for another kiss, not that you’ll complain.
>Guess you just got a girlfriend, maybe you won’t kill your dad.
>>27321255
aw, cute
>>27321255
I'm getting feels for no reason whatsoever, keep writing nakama
good news:stellaris is awesome
bad news:stellaris is too awesome and will now take up some of my freetime
worse news:no bad news, I'll update in like an hour
>>27322015
Well that was a wild rollercoaster of emotions.
PHILOSOPHY FINAL SLAIN
Now I can maybe take a breather and write what I wanted to write. Maybe a feelsy one-off of drama and tragedy.
Or something cute and fluffy, I still want to write about Sunset demandingly tummy rubs from Anon.
>>27322127
*demanding
Fuck you, phone
>>27322137
I know your pain. AND WRITE IT.
>>27322149
Lemme... lemme just soak up some caffeine and Overwatch. Then I'll write the thing.
>>27322015
What is a "stellaris"?
>>27322221
Who do you main? I'm good with Mei
>>27322315
Juuuunkraaaaat
>>27322388
NICE. I find D VA to be fun as well
>>27313677
>Just as you had said it you felt seriously stupid.
>You don’t know half these people.
>And even those who you know... you don’t know their allegiance.
>Then again, would Hydra have corporate scientists around and not draft them to their own /whstever/?
>“Hydra?”
>Either they all are good actors or really don’t know more about Hydra than the name.
>Something surprising happened though.
>Dr. Flim looked over to the security guard who brought you here.
>She’s leaning against the wall and observes the scene casually.
>“And what do you know about Hydra, boy?”
>You shake your head.
“No...”
>You turn to Dr. Flim.
“Sir, if you... if what you say... no. If you really want to be the good guy... please accept the termination of my internship.”
>You do your best to fill your gaze with determination.
>As so often before, he pauses to think about his answer.
>“Anon... may I call you Anon?”
>His question is met with a slight shrug of yours.
>“It’s not as easy... You see, I already have heard /that name/ from you. There is no taking that back. But if you go to work somewhere else you might again be in the position to have that part of yourself exposed. While the damage is already done here, isn’t it?”
>“Anon, you like it here.”
>Dr. Mason spoke up for the first time since greeting you, and Dr. Octavia followed it up
>“Your techwear is quite impressive for the limitations imposed on you, and I’m not talking about your age.”
“Just the stuff a person like me could get without raising suspicion.”
>“You’ve been resourceful and pragmatic, Mr. West.”
>>27322406
>You clutch onto one of the repurposed elbow protectors.
>Compliments really are not easy things to hear, and you don’t listen to them any longer.
>It all feels like they’d like to keep you here.
>Yeah, sure, that’s what they actually are trying to do.
>But why do you feel like they only like to keep you here for their own personal gain.
>Because that’s exactly what it is, you would be a good asset to Flimdustries.
>Because you were taught to be paranoid.
>Because they could be Hydra, or at least one of them.
>And any affiliation with Hydra... would be bad.
>All you know is that your immune system had been failing when you were a kid, and your father made some sort of deal.
>You got a minor healing factor, and dead parents out of it.
>And now that the secret is out, Hydra may approach you. And you’d be unable to do anything against them.
>You lift the elbow protector up to inspect it again.
“I... need to become stronger.”
>>27322237
some game which triggers me in all my special places, space exploration, building/strategy, sciency stuff
and sorry for the small update, I was lazy today
http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw updated
>>27320703
Dashing
>>27322237
>>27322416
hype!
Alright, my hand hates me now but partial mission accomplished.
Behold the Sorcerer Supreme! Dr. Discord!
Had to include his personal "Wong" as well, seems to be preoccupied with something in an orb... odd....
>>27323228
That’s awesome
>>27323228
So the Smooze knows martial arts? How does that work without limbs?
>>27323503
Got an idea for Celestia Fury, think i'll do the Sci Twi request first though.
>>27323512
Follows the teaching of Jeet kun do, be water.
>>27323515
No rush and take your time
>>27321255
caught up again
it generally feels too forced
initiation should come from themselves, with only a little push from others
you explained pretty early Sunset wants a boyfriend, and it was obvious to her friends she likes Anon.
The only thing which actually needed to happen was being 'truth'ed into admitting she has a crush on him.
would I read more semi-self insert fiction I'd be probably be sick of Truth or Dare, but as I do not I still enjoyed the scene.
keep it up
eagerly awaiting their next encounter in costume
still writing, pastebin page will come... eventually
>>27323653
Thanks. The ideas weren’t coming to me that well in this part and i just wanted to finish it.
>>27323803
Have we gotten much exploration of why Anon and Sunset like each other?
>>27324029
I'm going for the childhood friend route, don't know if i showed it but that’s the idea
>>27324043
makes sense
>>27324525
Better than love at first sight, when i started this green.
http://pastebin.com/Rm1KweqK
FINALLY
>>27324610
So adorable!
>>27324758
as always, criticism is welcome
I am, after all, still very much an amateur
>>27321255
http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
Pastebin has been updated
>>27325039
Yus!
Bamp
Villainous bump
http://youtu.be/6pp0kdfFzM0
>>27326387
this is... quite good
So, writers, readers, artists, do the rest of you run music through scenes in your heads?
Fight scene music?
Tragic music?
Relaxed, comfy music?
Desperate, angry music?
Like, whenever I think about Spider-Man, I think about string, orchestral music
For example, when I think of Spider-Man in a dramatic moment, such as rejecting the symbiote and its subsequent transference onto Eddie Brock, I hear this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ydIaUx84HWs
in my head
Does anyone else do this, or is it just me?
>>27294212
You people are sick in the head and completely fucked up.
>>27326625
>>27326603
OH GOD I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE!
>>27326625
For the record, I'm not disagreeing with you, but what makes us, specifically, out of everyone here on 4chan, fucked up?
What is going in this thread.
>>27327454
Drama, writefaggotry, and the occasional based drawfag.
>>27327454
Hips mostly
>>27327482
Sounds like a good place to stay.
>>27327494
Still persuaded to join.
>>27327496
Sweet!
>>27327454
>>27326387
ya know, for a while there I thought these two were the same person, now I am concerned.
>>27322416
>“Stronger?”
“Yeah... to protect myself.”
>“Sir, I’d vouch for Anon to be smart enough to be a valuable employee with a higher security rating than what we give him as an intern.”
>Higher security rating?
>“That techwear of yours, Mr. West, would you like to improve it?”
“I- what? I mean, I’ll always improve it, but I didn’t say I would be staying.”
>However tempting it sounds.
>“And why exactly not?”
“B-because- I- You’re coming on too strongly. And I-There’s always a catch. And I know there is something you want from me.”
>You tap the vain on your forearm, easily visible from the still thin skin.
>Dr. Flim looks down, almost sad in defeat.
>Another doctor, the female one you hadn’t been familiar with leans forth though.
>“Mr. West, allow me to shed a little light on the issue. My name is Zecora, I’m in charge of the psychological well-being of those working on highly secretive, and I have-”
“Dr. Zecora? You’ve written a few papers on people with ability, and... how it affects others.”
>Your gaze goes to Dr. Flim, but returns to Dr. Zecora quickly.
>“Yes, this is correct.”
>She seems happy to be recognized.
>“I assume having abilities yourself my work could have sparked an interest in you?”
>You nod slowly.
>“Hydra... now I only heard rumors about the real thing, but I can imagine you’re being very afraid, and reasonably so.”
>Last thing you need is to be psychoanalyzed now.
>“I’m here as an intermediary to avoid conflict, this is not solely about you, Mr. West. How do you think Dr. Flim feels, what is he thinking right now? And forget this Hydra for a second.”
>What?
>“One of his employees has /abilities/ and went out to... fight crime?”
>You look to Dr. Flim who in turn is looking at Dr. Zecora, angrily so...
“Well, right now he’s kinda pissed at you for bringing him into this.”
>The corner of his mouth twitches as if to smile, then he turns to you.
>>27328188
>His eyebrows are slightly narrowed and he’s observing you.
>Your mind goes one or the other places before you say your hunch, talking very slowly.
“You feel like... you have to repay the world a debt for the things your brother did. You were really close to him.”
>Judging his expression and the little twitches on his face correctly you continue.
“You’re ashamed... of yourself for not stopping him?”
>Gosh, why does this psycho-stuff has to be so complicated.
>You can analyze human courtship while practicing it when you’re drugged out, but this is hard.
“And now I, an employee of yours, is going out there and making a mess of things.”
>He frowned at that.
“No... You... want me to do that stuff..?”
>What? No.
“You think if you help a ‘superhero’ it’s like you helping out the people ‘I’ save too? I’m not a-”
>“I don’t want you to endanger yourself. I don’t want anyone to get hurt.”
>He exclaims, shutting you up.
>You don’t know how exactly to respond, so thankfully Dr. Zecora picked up the conversation.
>“These feelings don’t necessarily have to be based on logic.”
“Oh, what good is logic when we can’t use it on the choices that matter? Because I don’t even know what type of question he should form without it getting a serious ‘no’ in return!”
>Your voice was oozing with cynicism again.
>“Will you let me help you?”
>...
>You take a breath to start answering but stop.
>Fffffuck
>You look away.
>Dr. Mason, Dr. Octavia, and the other doctor who’s name you didn’t even know look kinda awkward.
>The security guard which had already been in the room as you entered look like he didn't hear a thing.
>And the hot security guard who brought you was lent back against the wall by the door.
>She looked as if the whole thing was a very trivial matter.
>You eventually returned your attention back to Dr. Flim.
“How could you help me?”
>He smiles.
>>27328190
>“How would you like me to help you? Money – you probably won’t take.”
>You shake your head, confirming his assumption.
>“You said earlier you want to become stronger. Do you want training?”
“My aunt taught me Krav Maga.”
>“Krav Maga won’t help you climb buildings and fight at the same time.”
>It’s the hot guard, who said that... you turn around.
>“I can teach him a trick or two.”
>“Chrysalis?”
>Dr. Flim says (what you believe is her name) skeptical.
>She shrugs.
>“You? Yourself?”
>You don’t quite understand Dr. Flim’s concerns.
>And shouldn’t he be the one to order around his employees?
>Not them doing whatever they liked.
>“Yes, why not? He seems to be fun.”
>You’re... fun?
>“Okay...”
>Dr. Flim doesn’t seem all too happy about that, but takes it.
>“While you work here you are now under Dr. Octavia. You are to use your own arms and continuously improve them. You’ll have to pay for it yourself and the research for it will not be on company time.”
>“You are, however, free to have materials delivered from any of our suppliers and you can do your research here in your spare time. Just stay legally away enough from her arms for us not to get into trouble when people ask about your vigilantism.”
>This... sounds... good, actually.
>“You are also have to have regular appointments with Dr. Zecora to check on you. And Chrysalis... I don’t know- how do you want to train him?”
>You turn to the object of speech respectively.
>How would Chrysalis even train you?
>“Some old fashioned super hero team-up would do nicely. You’re gonna be a sidekick, Spider-boy.”
“S-sidekick?”
>Just as you wonder what she means by that she goes up in flames.
>Green flames.
>No, that’s not the proper way to describe it.
>A green fire starts from her feet and makes it’s way up her body, diminishing immediately after having gone up another inch.
>What’s left behind is still her but in... a costume?
>>27328193
>It was way more revealing than the business suit she had worn just a moment before.
>Plus she has wings now.
>“What do you think of my costume idea? I’ve never worn one in my times...”
>She takes a spin.
>The costume is almost all black, but it has a bright red cross on tramp-stamp height, like a...
“You’re black widow?”
>“The name hasn’t been chosen as a reference to actual spiders. But now we get theme-ing bonus as Spider buddies.”
>You’ve only heard rumors. Just like you did with Hydra, and the things you did hear were not good ones... better than Hydra though.
>She sounds way too gleeful.
>“I didn’t see it clearly on the security tape before you went out in an explosion, but you had a spider symbol on your chest, right? And you have a thing for Spider-Woman, don’t you?”
“I- ahh... I mean...”
>Dr. Flim interrupts you.
>“Chrysalis, is this really what you... want to do?”
>She looks at him with serious determination.
>“I do have my reasons, Flim.”
>You feel tension between the two.
>Whatever it is, you know it’s not about you. Just like Dr. Zecora had said earlier.
>But it’s not just about Dr. Flim either. There is more going on.
>You just hope it’s not related to Hydra...
>>27326625
We're the only sane people here.
Well, sane-ish
>>27326603
>"Revenge is not the Jedi way"
"I am no Jedi"
>>27328195
pastebin updated immediately, yay
http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
10$ to the first who points out that nothing about Chrysalis makes much sense.
>>27326603
that's odd...
>>27327454
Hi Fapman!
>>27328210
Nothing about Chrysalis makes much sense.
