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Friends Forever #28 Storytime
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Friends Forever #28 is out on iTunes.

Previous comics can be found here:
https://yp1.yayponies.no/book.php
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>>27263202
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It's shit
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Thanks for the dump as always. Shame about the art, hope the story isn't trash.
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>>27263219

>>27263213
Sucks that we even have to write off the art just by seeing the artist like that. At least the story could be cute.
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Let's hope it's better than the last one.
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>>27263219
There's no way that this wasn't the writer subtly shit-talking his artist.

>>27263228
Hey, it's pretty clear that he won't get better. Let's hope for the story, huh?
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>>27263247
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>>27263219
>more bipedal bullshit

>>27263238
>window reflection is literally a copy-paste of the panel above
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>>27263264
>>window reflection is literally a copy-paste of the panel above
This is the same artist who had to steal clipart for a cutie mark because whisks are too complex to draw. What did you expect?
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>>27263210
who are you?, i sure that you're the same faggot who replies all the thread with this same bullshit, fucking stop, you're not funny
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This artstyle is adorable
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>>27263296
no please don't let the comic be about OCs
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>>27263296
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>>27263304
illustrious Q pls
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>>27263282
>>27263291
>>27263296
>>27263306
>OCs

D R O P P E D
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>>27263304
Go away Q. You're never going to get a check from them.
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>>27263296
Aaaand here come the Whitley OCs.
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>>27263315
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>>27263317

come one, whitely OCs are better than the canon characters
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>>27263322
>zounds

what.
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>>27263322
>Luna's neck in the last panel
Please Fosgitt. Just go buy one of those "I CAN DRAW!" My Little Pony books. Please.
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>>27263340
just....burn this shit
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>>27263340
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>OC literally having all the attention

whitley plz
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>>27263352
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>>27263340
Those tears aren't even coming from her eyes. What the fuck?
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>>27263352
Luna's shoes look like socks with how bendable they're drawn.
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>>27263333
>zounds: Interjection expressing anger, surprise, assertion etc.
>Etymology
>Abbreviation of God's wounds, with reference to Christ's wounds before the crucifixion. Compare strewth, blimey, gadzooks, 'sblood, crikey.
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>>27263352
>uncomfortably moist
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>>27263361
>bipedal standing everywhere

Quit now Fogshit
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>>27263371
>random new creature shows up in the castle for plot reasons

good writing!
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>>27263371
>OC saves the day

WHIIIITLEEEEEYYYY
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>>27263388
That's all of it. Hope you enjoyed it /mlp/!

Link to archive:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/9776555754bx7aa/FF%2328.rar
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>>27263388
2 S P O O K Y
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>>27263388
uhhhhhhhhhhhh

Making the shit see-through, and thus "they're not gone", doesn't mean the reflectiveness is gone

wow this comic is down there on the pile of shit recently.
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>>27263315
Why is Luna suddenly wearing boots?
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>>27263371
>The OC saves the day
>The characters on the cover don't do anything

>>27263388
What the fuck even is this?
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How would you rate Friends Forever #28 out of 10 /mlp/?
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>>27263388
I don't get this. Her magic is x ray vision kind of. So the mirrorca reflected that magic. Except it still worked on it? Even if did work on it, shouldn't the mirrors still reflect magic since all it did was make them see through?
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>>27263412
trashthisshit/10
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>>27263398
3/10 terrible effort
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>>27263412

OCs ruin everything/10
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>>27263412
-2/10
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>>27263202
Someone should shop this cover so it says 'now with more filly butts!'
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Later this month we get Comic #42 featuring Pinkie Pie:

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic #42
>Katie Cook (w) • Andy Price (a & Main Cover) • Sara Richard (Subscription Cover) • Caytlin "Pixel Prism" Vilbrandt (Retailer Incentive Cover)
>Pinkie Pie decides to make her very own comic book! Pinkie’s version of a comic book might just be a little bit different than what you’re expecting!
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>>27263398

Thanks for the comic, i don't enjoy this comic in the writing or the artstyle, but i will enjoy complain about it.
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>>27263398
>Enjoyed it
Dumping pictures of literal shit would be more entertaining than this comic,
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>>27263407
>The characters on the cover don't do anything
Luna blasted it after the OC cast her magic, the CMC... gave the OC therapy?
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The fuck even was this shit? I made this though.
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>>27263412
-10/10 artist and writer should be fired right now
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>>27263433
And next month we get Friends Forever #29 featuring Maud and Rarity:

My Little Pony: Friends Forever #29
>Ted Anderson (w) • Brenda Hickey (a) • Tony Fleecs (c)
>When Rarity meets Maud Pie at a gem convention the two seemingly have little in common. But when Maud comes across an opportunity to make a name for herself in rock academia, Rarity may be just the pony to help Maud discover her inner enthusiasm.

>>27263439
I decided a little while ago that I would go with the same ending lines every time and let you guys decide whether it's worth enjoying or not.
Always felt off when I changed it due to the mood of the thread.
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>>27263451
These two books should also be out in two weeks on May 17th. I'll try to have those storytimed that Tuesday morning.
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Celestia’s crown is supposed to match her hoofwear, not Luna

congratulation failing again fosgitt and new colorist
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>>27263463

Nice, it will be more enjoyable that this comic. I really love the luna book
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>>27263340
Luna covering the CMC is kind of funny if you ignore the tears somehow coming from behind that filly and the anatomy of Luna's wing to pull off that bend.
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>>27263388
>Jay "I don't know what wings look like" Fosgitt
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>>27263484
Berrow's books have been nice. Makes me sad that they'll never really get anywhere near as much attention as the comics.
Same goes for little stuff like that Flurry Heart book a few weeks ago.
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>>27263433
AKA the last comic Katie Cook will be involved with

Considering it's her last, you can be damn sure she'll go full meta on this one.

You have been warned
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>>27263448

This is now my new favorite thing.
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>>27263371
Now I don't mind the OC thing and I actually like the art, but WHAT THE FUCK
HOW DO YOU NOT SEE THAT THING
HOW DID IT GOT THERE WITHOUT NO ONE NOTICING
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>>27263501

No drama or pictures = not anons lurking in the thread

>>27263508

Also after this, jeremy whitley will be the main writer(or he already is the main writer) and like katie he would choose what to write first and his patner and assign the other plots to the rest of the staff.

Also like katie he can invite artist(katie invite fosgitt) and writer(katie invite ted anderson) to work in the IDW comic staff. Be ready for a new wave of SJW writers and artist in the comic in the future
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>>27263553
Usually I think you just shitpost, relicariox. Now I think you sadly might be right.
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>>27263403

Actually, it does. They've gone from being a reflective surface to a transparent one if she's actually altering the surface vs. cloaking it under something else.
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>>27263388
>Princess
>Killing animals
You can move the fucking moon, you can move the fucking whale that did absolutely nothing to you.
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Fosgittoutofmakingthesecomics/10
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>>27263388
This part right here fucked over the comic big time. Whitley's fuckin OC said that:
>"My spell makes skin and muscle see-through. They're NOT GONE, but you can see the bone."
Ergo, the reflective mirrors on the completely innocent Mirrorca aren't fuckin GONE. You just see its bones. Holy shit Whitley
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>>27263614
Don't question Whitley's plotholes, just love his superior OCs!
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>>27263282

What the fuck with those CM?

he just use paint or something?
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>>27263326

This guy is joking, right?
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>>27263636
Fosgitt is notorious for copy-pasting cutie-marks
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>>27263636
Yep. Which is fucking weird, since most cartoonists usually just scale thing like that this way, but she didn't for some reason. Also notice that some cutie marks are hand-drawn but others look pasted and scaled.
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>>27263614
Do you not understand optics?
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>>27263282
Are the cutie marks on the CMC copy pasted on there?
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>>27263836
Yeah just like on the show they are drawn once and copied to each scene.
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>>27263388
This OC power seems incredibly convoluted.
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>>27263855
She can be pony x-ray technician when she grows up. Also make great costume for Nightmare Night.
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>>27263940
The thing about the destroying the fish whale thing though, is that once she "unbones them", won't there be gore of mirrorca lying everywhere?
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This… doesn’t make any sense. It also might be one of the worst Friends Forever issues, it doesn’t make sense to introduce a monster in the last few pages, then have a new character be the reason it’s defeated. If they really wanted to use this "Mirrorca" in a comic with Luna and the CMC, it should have been a mini-adventure comic. They go on a short quest to find it, they do, and it doesn’t end with Luna killing it.

As it stands, it’s like a jumbled mess. It’s like Whitely was told to write about Luna and the CMC but instead wanted to make his own characters to focus on, and tried to do both.
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How much money do you get for putting on a blind fold and drawing ponies while copy and pasting cutie marks? I'm thinking of getting into the shitty art business myself. Here's a sample of what I've got so far, working on becoming more like my idol, fosgitt.
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>>27263985
Which is worst? This or FF#1?
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>fosgitt

What happen with jenn?

She never appear again since her first issue?
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>>27263855
I mean... the power itself is pretty clear-cut. It's just wide-scale X-ray vision.

What makes it confusing as fuck is how that suddenly translates to the stupid whale being vulnerable. For that matter, if Luna's chill with obliterating the thing in front of a bunch of kids, why couldn't she, y'know, impale it on the nearest pointy object? Don't need magic to deliver kinetic energy to something.

>>27263412
Idon'tevenhavewords/10

If I can run a comparison for a second, this entire comic feels like an awful, twisted version of Celestia's Micro comic:
>Event in canterlot hosted by a princess (dinner/sleepover)
>Foal OCs everywhere
>OC who can't fit in (Inkwell/Thestra)
>Spontaneous situation resolved by OC (animated food/Mirrorwhale)
>Secondary conflict resolved by use of the OC's talent (teaching/x-ray stuff)
Unlike Inkwell in that comic, however, 'Thestra' (the fuck is up with that name, by the way) is basically a case study of how not to use an OC. She has virtually no character aside from 'oh, woe is me for I can't fit in', saves the day singlehandedly in a contrived and pointless situation drawing attention away from the FF actual issue, and due to awful pacing issues doesn't even get introduced until halfway in.

It's like Whitley read the Celestia Micro and went 'hey, I can do that too!' and then wrote this without any reference for what actually made that one good.
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>>27263282
What did Luna "help" Scootaloo with, /mlp/?
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>>27263282
I can't
I just can't stand this art style
Their heads are so damn big and those copy paste CMs are SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIT

>>27263296
Jesus Christ those OC's are AWFUL.
I mean, I ask for porn sometimes but now I don't want porn, I want bleach.
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>>27263412
I dropped the damn thing as I saw the awful Oc's and how the art style was shitty
0.
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>>27263413
I'm going to assume that it's more of an x-ray affect bomb than a targeted beam, so it didn't bounce so much as get everyone in the area. But only living flesh apparently?

>>27263569
Well, it depends on how they work. Apparently magic travels in a wavelength that she gets rid of.

>>27263550
Flash Sentry was the only guard on duty. Hell there's far worse problems here, like the sleepover setup of the comic in the first place. Not enough beds in the palace, are you serious?
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What is it with IDW and their ocs? I Why the hell do they keep doing these bait and switch stories where it's supposed to be about canon characters interacting then all of a sudden they insert this oc and they steal the limelight?

I mean they almost always do this. At least with stuff like Siege we knew it would center around a OC but it's almost like IDW is afraid of including a synopsis that would include a IDW exclusive character most of the time.
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>>27264165
It's Jeremy Whitley, he does it quite a bit. Not every story he does, but a lot of the notable ones. Luna is also in there a lot, but almost never in an important role despite getting top billing. This is even true in the comics with few to no OCs.
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>>27263322
>Parts of the castle are dangerous and full of dark magics at night!

SINCE

FUCKING

WHEN!?
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>>27264032
Awful pacing?
The main 'issue' isn't even resolved until the second to last page.
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>>27264178

Since Jeremy Whitley headcanon
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>>27264197
And that main "issue" was introduced the page before.
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>>27263371
>Mirrorca

This is Random Encounter levels of lazy

>AW SHIT I-ITS COVERED IN MIRRORS SEE, ALICORN MAGIC DOESN'T WORK SO MY OC CAN SAVE THE DAY

I used to like Jeremy. Really I did. But jesus fuck how far has he sunken
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>>27264123
She helped her to overcome her fears about not being as tough as Rainbow Dash.
Do you even watch the show, niggolino?
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>>27263361
>it's a creature of chaos magic. Huge and terrifying and invulnerable to even my magic.

If the writing didn't get me, then Luna doing her imitation of Big Bird did.
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Just...what the fuck did I just read?

>Whitley

Wasn't this the person that was clamoring something something about lesbian ponies last week in some panel?
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>>27263412
nah man I just can't take this comic seriously because of art
art is important part of comic and Fosgitt fucked up huge here I don't care about writing I just can't

2/10
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>>27263238
What about the colts twilight WHAT ABOUT THE COLTS
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>>27263322
>parts of the castle are dangerous and full of dark magic at night
Anything dangerous in that castle is either in the armory or the basement and what's in the basement doesent care what the time is.
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>>27264386
I must admit that I told you guys line was good though
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>>27264326

Where is the edit anon when we need him?
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>>27263352
This makes no sense Luna is great with distressed children it's pretty much the only concrete thing we know about her.
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>>27263988
Step up your game, you have to get way more Fosgitt than that. Pic related, a real tribute to the Fosgod.
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>>27264408
I'm sorry, you seemed to have confused the writer with someone who won't bend the characters however he wants just to make his OCs look better.
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>>27264408

Maybe that only work in dreams and not irl
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>>27264419

Dude

Make that more pony and add a horn

I want to upload that in derpibooru
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>>27263371
I mean I know they already said dark magic but seeing it makes it worse
An interesting creature but considering the comics paint Luna as a monster hunter it's a bit silly she does not know a way to defeat it.

Or you know call the guards
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>>27263388
I auctualy really like this ponys talent it's unusual but it still has use. Perfect job for the cmc.

That said it makes no fucking sense that making the mirror see through makes the creature vulnerable. I do have some more to say on this I will write it out once I have finished the comic
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>>27264419

https://derpiboo.ru/1146068

How many time until this get deleted?
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>>27263412
6.5/10
A bit of Polish in the dialouge and a difrent artist and it could have been good
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>>27264427
on it
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>>27263412

>Fosgitt
>suddenly OC that steal the spotlight
>suddenly monsters that make the princess useless
>that new OC actually know a spell to stop the monster and help the main character

Just like a shitty fanfic or a generic Chinese shonen cartoon
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>>27263451
>>27263451
Somebody should have told them there was a maud and rarity episode coming up already they have had enough time together to know they have little in common
Also that line about enthusiasm makes me worry the writer might not know that she's just dull not emotionless.

Still some focus on mauds academic side could be great
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>>27264427
Here you go friend. Don't go stealing my original design though, okay?
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>>27263553
So we are going from management that can't hold back the writers sjw tendency's to ones that encourage them
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Ah, I see the new issue of Jay Fosgitt' s Down Syndrome Babies is out.
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>>27264405
Sorry guys, but the comic is so crappy that not even I can do much to mock it more than fosgitt already did.
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https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/20603630/#20607822

So I met Jay today, and we had a two hour conversation about general shit and the comics.

1) He said that Hasbro/IDW didn't send him any bibles so that's the reason Ponyville doesn't look right. He had no idea what it was supposed to look like. I informed him and he said he would work on that.

2) When he was sent the script for this issue he was told that the children and Dash/Spitfire were in a 'gymnasium' and that he didn't know it was supposed to be made of cloud. Again a bible would have helped him.

3) His next pony issue is going to be Wrestling related. (Do you smell what Boulder is cooking?)

4) Spitfire was his favorite character to draw.

5) On the sub cover that he drew, the pony eating Spitfires hair has a cutie mark of one of his original characters. (Bodie Troll)

He was really nice, and I for one loved the issue. He told me to keep trying to draw and fav'd me on Deviantart so I got that going for me I guess. Foot in the door with him and Katie Cook.

>This guy didn't even improve
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>>27264173
I think he did a pretty good job at balancing the rate of Luna to cmc here and if anything there was to much Luna.
Not like dragon town at all (of course lunas absence was only about 1/4 of the problem there)
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>>27264513

Here

https://derpiboo.ru/1146079
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>>27264318
Whats fringe pony
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>>27264530
The only thing worse then not improving is not improving after saying you will
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>>27264454
OK I lied food first
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>>27263388
I'm pretty sure Luna has had nightmares
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>>27264529
>the orca is deader than idw's borads!
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I'm feeling actually physically disgusted.

The writing is shit. The art is shit. I can't even derive any ironic "oh god this is so bad that I want to laugh at it" kind of enjoyment out of it anymore. It's just fucking irredeemable at this point.

If they took the Powerpuff Girls route and literally hired some fan artist from Tumblr, the art would be at least somewhat tolerable. The fact that this clown continues to stay employed is fucking despicable.
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>>27263636
Reminder that warping a layer literally takes less than a second in Photoshop.

>Ctrl + T
>Ctrl + click and drag a corner
>you're done

And he couldn't be bothered to do THAT.
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>>27264564
Some reference to something that Katie Cook makes sure is in every one of her comics.

Occassional references are nice, but boy, do they do things to death.
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Why they didn't hire Jenn Blake?

She already made a comic for idw and her artstyle is better than Fosgitt?
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>>27264679
She's working with Whitley for more comics, so I've heard.
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>>27264679

Read carefully this thread >>27264530

He is a good friend with the lead writer of the staff, Katie Cook.
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>>27264529
https://www.derpibooru.org/1146080
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>>27264686

That make sense. Whitley is the new lead writer and Jenn is a raging lesbian that want rarity horsepussy
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>>27264454
Alright at first I feel it makes a bit of sense her magic stops the reflection of light from skin and musle (wait then where the fuck are there veins (and there organs for that matter)) the orca appears to reflect spells back like light that's not that far fetched.
Where it goes wrong is in trying to fix 1 plot hole another is made.

If she just casts her spell at it then you have the question of how the spell used to make it vulnerable was able to get past.
To fix that the orca instead copy's spells cast in its vicinity but that makes the mirrors just a representation or source of its power not auctualy just a reflective surface for magic which means this shouldent make it vulnerable.
And also if it was just copying it why did she need to cast it on all of them my best guess is it's an aoe which at least explains them all getting it.

Honestly though I think he wrote himself into a corner the sensible ending would have been for Luna to run it through with a spear but that wouldent fit the story he was writing
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>>27264772
Of course how Luna dident think to try some self target spell is not clear
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>>27263340
>the tears aren't coming from the eyes
how the fuck did this get past anyone?
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>>27264530
>1) He said that Hasbro/IDW didn't send him any bibles so that's the reason Ponyville doesn't look right. He had no idea what it was supposed to look like. I informed him and he said he would work on that.
I call bullshit, I bet he just never bothered to look.
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>>27264772
Wait I just worked out how to fix this comic.

Ditch the mirrorca and make the monster something with an big flat armored skeleton beneath it's skinn have her use her power to call out the unarmored spots to Luna while she fights it.
Then you can give the cmc a bit more of a role they know what Teresa's power is they talk to her about it she feels a little better about herself then they fight the monster.
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>>27264772

>Luna to run it through with a spear but that wouldent fit the story he was writing

They would use the cliche of the "voice breaking mirror/crystal" with the luna royal voice. That would be in characte
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>>27264802
There's no quality control. Fosgitt copy/pastes cutie marks, some of which are just stolen clipart. Multiple issues from other artists have anatomy and coloring issues or continuity problems. You think anyone gives a shit?
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>>27264864

Who the fuck is the comic editor?

How he/she would allow those mistakes
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>>27264882
Bobby just does not care about mlp comics
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so guys, is this comic better or worse than the EqG annual?
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>>27264903
definitely eqg
this was horrible but not THAT horrible
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>>27263451
>Always felt off when I changed it due to the mood of the thread.
I gotta admit, it does get a bit disheartening when the person dutifully dropping these for us is vocally buying into the echochamber narrative set by the majority posters in the thread.
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>>27263451
Not your fault. You are a gentleman and a scholar for allowing us to read it. Not your fault the creators deserve the lesbian bed death
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>>27263202
>Fosgitt

Why the fuck do they still hire them? They're shit at drawing ponies.
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>>27263398
So

Am I projecting here or, did Jeremy actually find a way to inject more SJW bullshit into MLP comics?

>Who needs to feel more valued than the strange, the creepy, or unusual?

Reads like a pretty fucking clear allegory for lesbians which he's on 24/7

Maybe I'm reading too much into it?
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>>27265252

... YES you're projecting you fucking idiot. "People who are weird and socially ostracized need love too," has been the theme of like every single fucking cartoon for 30 years.
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>>27265185
>implying they care about pony comic
no matter how bad it is
it sells well
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>>27263412
Just put me to sleep/10
godawful Fosgitt art, now completed by a completely retarded OC-tastic story. You can't get much worse than that.
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>>27263388
>if I can't see the reflective skin then it doesn't exist
WTF?
Also, since when ponies kill animals?
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>>27263412
Holy fuck, this time the nonsensical writing was matched with the awful artstyle. Pure garbage 0/10
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>>27264564
Ever seen Fringe? Do you know the bald guy in a fedora who appears in the background of most episodes? Price draw a pony version of that guy in almost every issue he draws. You can see him in issues 1, 2, 3, 4, 9, 10, 11, 17, 20, 25, 27 and others, plus Rarity and Luna micros, Rarity/AJ FF and the Sunset Shimmer comic in the Equestria Girls 2013 annual.
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>>27265252
Now youre just being autistic. If it was LGBT it would be less about little kids and skull cutie marks and more about adult lesbians
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>>27263314
i dont think thats fair it kind of has to have ocs almost every child in the show lives in ponyvile it would have looked a little silly if there was an oversized ponyvile contigent
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>>27263412
Ugh/10
Fosgitt just shouldn't be on this franchise. I mean I've seen his other stuff, he's actually good, but you can so tell he doesn't give a shit about this gig. And since no-one tells him to do a better job, he just wings it and calls it a day.
Can we get an editor on this who actually gives a shit?
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>>27263412

>oc save the day
>fosgitt artstyle

2/10
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>>27263412
>Fosgitt
>Withley
You don't even have to read it to know it's shit.
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>>27266658
I really hope that from now on Fosgitt and Whitley always work as a combo until the end of the series.

That way we always will have one concentrated shit comic per month instead of two .
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>>27263412
Not really a fan of this one. It features bare minimum interaction between the CMC and Luna (which is the point I would figure of a CMC/Luna FF) and instead chooses to focus on a fairly uncreative concept for an OC ("Waaaaaah I Can't Fit In") that gets to save the day for being so special.

Luna feels very OOC. She has such difficulty with children after spending three CMC episodes interacting with children? Not to mention Luna Eclipsed? and she's STILL harping about her experience as NMM after all the in-show development? How is a princess of sleep that looks into the dreams of children nightly so alien to the concept of a sleepover?

The final few pages come the hell out of nowhere (evil creatures roam Canterlot Castle at night? Since when, this is Final Fantasy random encounter levels of lazy writing, not to mention what a brilliant creature idea as a 'mirrorca') and serves to make no sense (If magic is reflected, just summon a hammer and smash it, this fails entirely to at all be dramatic or suspenseful). I mean, why have fillies sleep over in a castle that is apparently filled with monsters at night? Where are the guards, why didn't anyone tell the kid 'hey don't go this way monsters are afoot'?

In one way, I agree a great deal with the anon who said this feels very similar to the Celestia Micro: coming to accept others for their weirdness, only without any of the same charm and with more off-putting plot.
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>>27266692
I like the way you think anon.
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>>27266734
Art is typical Fosgitt laziness (check the skulls in the middle panel: it's literally the same asset copy-pasted three times / mirror flipped) and unappealing with its looney tune aesthetic, not much more I can say to that affect other than for the love of goodness stop copy-pasting. You're supposed to be a professional.

Can't say I enjoyed this one. Moral was good but a good moral doesn't save a story especially when that same moral's been done better. There's a little bit of witty dialogue here and there that I liked and to the writer's credit he nails Luna better than Cook does but the primary focus being set on an OC seems to break the concept of a good FF: the two main characters (or, four in this case) actually developing off of each other, which I feel was totally missed in this issue. Out of almost 100 panels in this comic, the CMC and Luna (the stars) exchange words with each other on roughly 12 of them.
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http://www.equestriadaily.com/2016/05/mlp-friends-forever-28-released-today.html

> Meanwhile at Shillestria Daily...
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Made a thread about it yesterday but didn't really get an answer, anyone know if this comic will actually be worth anything?

Seems a bit much to pay an extra $10 for a physical edition of 2 comics, one of which I already own but it has a fancy cover and is exclusive
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>>27265252
>implied norm
What's implied?
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So wait, explain this to me, /mlp/.

The little girl's spell just makes everything but a creature's skeleton invisible. She's basically destined to be a doctor or something.

When Luna shoots the whale, its skull visibly shatters into pieces and bones fly everywhere.

Shouldn't Luna, the children, and the entire hallway have been caked in mirror shards and blood when the spell was turned off?
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>>27266810

Just cover exclusive, nothing new or special. Don't worth it
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>>27266916
Thanks lad
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Can anyone help me check if there's any differences between the comic volumes with the individual issues?

I've checked the ones from the 2nd bundle and I've found out some of the extra comics at the end of the individual ones from the 1st bundle (or back ups some call it?) are missing from the volumes.

The ones I've found are:
Friendship Is Magic: Volume 1
-Added "How Much is That Pony in the Window" comic from the physical issue #1 but is the quality crappier than the individual files from the first bundle?

Friendship Is Magic: Volume 3
-Missing Big Mac's scrap book from end of issue #10

Pony Tales: Volume 1
-Missing "The Trials of Hayseed Turnip Truck" from end of the Rarity Micro

Any other differences I've missed (besides missing pages as well)?
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So, a sleepover in Cantorlot Castle with Princess Luna. And she didn't pull out her shared dreamscape power. I can't be the only one who was waiting for that to happen. right?
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>>27264529
why boner
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>>27263412
I didn't even bother. I've cancelled my subscription, which I should've done earlier but OCD collector autism prevented it. But seeing how I haven't enjoyed a single issue for a whole year now, I'll just stick to the show.

Only thing remotely good about the comics still are Hickey's art and Richard's covers.
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>>27267370
Your good friend Illustrious Q is still shilling this shit like the desperate loner he is though.
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>>27267370
Isn't it sad how low the comics have fallen since they've started? I only really buy the physicals I like nowadays, and that's not many.
I have too much fun storytiming to stop doing this though. Plus if a good comic comes up I want /mlp/ to be able to see it. Silly as it is, I always hope that some change can come and maybe the comics can go back to being decent to good.
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>>27267396
I guess it's hard to be objective when you're wannabe horse-famous. But what do I know, I'm a tripfag.

>>27267398
The first year seemed very promising, but looking back the warning signs were already there in Cook's writing in those first arcs. What makes it even worse is that now I'd take Cook's flanderized character-assassination bizarro-Equestria over Whitley and Anderson's holier-than-thou social agenda preaching any day.

It just baffles me how IDW and Curnow can put out a fanatstic quality series like TMNT out and abjectly fail at MLP:FiM at the same time, in a way that goes far beyond the typical 'nobody good wants to work on an all-ages series anyway'.
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>>27267398
Their lastest sales figures were barely scratching 12K per month.

Curnow destroyed IDW's boards to never again having to face any criticism, and the results are showing- if you don't care about your customers, your customers will not care about your product.
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>>27267433
>>27267435
I think the sales will have to slip below 10k, or whatever that profitability threshold was, for anyone to start changing things for the better around there.
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>>27264738

This is true. Jeremy is the new lead writer? how this would affect the comic? What are the duties of the lead writer?
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>>27267515
There is no lead writer. They all pitch ideas to Hasbro and do whatever gets approved.
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I'm amazed Fosgitt finally managed to draw unicorn/alicorns using their fucking horns for what they are supposed to do.
Took him long enough.

Still shit comic, 0/10
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>>27267433
What SJW messages? I stopped mostly because of Fostgitt. Whitleys comic with Blueblood was the only good comic this year.
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>>27267704
Granted, most of them aren't as much in the comics themselves as in Twitter drama. But this one was one of the first major ones.
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>>27267515
No lead writing. Ideas get approved by Hasbro, and then technically they should have been edited by Bobby to fit the tv series. Howeverm since he literally don't care and don't watch the show, he gives writers 100% of freedom when it comes to art and OC and original "subplots" (Celestia's romance, Cheerilees sister, killer apples etc)

Hasbro is allowing it as long as it doesn't contradict the show but they probably laugh at these stories and people who think that they going to reference them.
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>>27267718
His Spike comic was literally the only that mostly just sounds like SJW soap boxing. And even then i can probably agree with what Mina is saying.

What really bring IDW down to the bottom is
>shit art
>boring slice of life stories (even more boring than tv series)
>writing that doesn't make sense or is too cartoonish (those talking apples)
>focus on uninteresting OC's

Out of entire IDW pile, Whitleys wriitng was actually the only that made IDW interesting. I would probably skipped their every comic after Refelction arc.
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>>27267515

The lead writer only choose what what ponies want to do first, only that. That explain why Katie and price monopolize all the chrysalis comic and more than the 70% of the rarity and applejack comic.

I want to know how the others writers handle chysalis or applejack/rarity comics
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>>27267802
>And even then i can probably agree with what Mina is saying.

That isn't the point. The point is that he completely ignored FiM worldbuilding, making dragons something they were not in some black chinatown analogy just to push his sjw opinions in the work, all because he hated Dragon Quest.
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>>27267822
I hated Dargon Quest too. And based on Gauntlet of Fire, those midget dragons do exist like in that comic.
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>>27267844
I doubt Whitley even watched GoF.
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>>27267850
but it explains why Hasbro approved the dragon town
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>>27267864
I'm sure he would have preferred to write a story like GoF, except a lot more soapboxing. He wouldn't be able to avoid a strong independent princess but probably hates that she didn't actually win and that Spike brainwashed her or something.
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Go away, Whitley.
You are drunk again.
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>>27267810

>chysalis writed by Whitley

He would write her like a black anti-hero, after all the black(and female) people/ponies can't be evil because that is racist
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Holy shit, Illustrious Q really uses the word "Adorable" to shill and defend Fosgitt's crappy art.
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>>27267941
Whitley would give her a black daughter.

Hell, chrysalis is already black colored so Whitley already wants to make her a misunderstood member of a opressed race or something.
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Can someone please explain to me how IDW can be such a mixed company? Their Transformers series is pretty good, I'd expect it to be terrible because of how they treat pony.

>Hasbro has them introduce toys, they do it relatively well without making it shoe-horned in
>They communicate with Hasbro about the source material
>Hasbro packs in comics, and will modify toys to be closer to the series
>The series actually wins awards
>Overall good relationship with the fandom, the people working on it also enjoy the series
>Very minimal use of SJW preaching (I can only recall one instance where "mansplaining" was said)
>The canon characters don't have to step aside for OCs, with only one OC who is pretty decent who is at the center of a lot of things.

Yeah, sometimes they make drastic changes to characters, but compare that to this
>Barely anyone checks the source material
>Several writers are getting sick of the series, Andy Price doesn't like working with Hasbro
>Those who aren't sick of the series use it as a soapbox to say what they want
>Whenever a OC is introduced, all side characters take a back seat.
I have doubts that when GoH is introduced, IDW won't do much with it despite Hasbro telling them too, and they'll probably want to do their own thing.
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>>27268043

It's because the Transformers comics are done by people that have been fans since their childhood and care alot.

Meanwhile MLP is done by people that don't give a shit and honestly no one worthwhile will give a shit since FIM isn't anything special or amazing and people that grew up on it aren't adults in the industry so autistic they put their blood and sweat into it.
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>>27267963

Nah, she is evil because she born in that way since the friendship is magic and all those Katie and Price twitter.

Price will never allows that happen
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>>27268080

*fiendship

Fucking cellphone
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>>27268043
I would be very surprised if the pack in GoH comics aren't mostly just written by Vogel or something.
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>>27268080

>black
>born evil

Whitley wets dreams to make a fixfic to promote his #blacklivematters
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>>27268135

Probably writed by Vogel and the artist will be Amy. After all she has experience with official merchandise like the flurry heart book or the design for the eqg minis dolls
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>>27268190
That seems incredibly likely given how that team did a Flurry Heart book. Given the other choices that they have to write what is an incredibly important series for Hasbro, the start of a brand new spinoff, I doubt they would let Whitley, Anderson, or Rice touch it.
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>>27268190

Nigga that is kawai as fuck. Why they don't use that style for the eqg comics?
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>>27263398
2/10
The general idea behind the plot was ok, but the writing was terrible. So was the art. And the ending. And the cutiemarks. And OCs. And friggin orcas.
And I'm usually generous in rating comics.
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>>27264558
They removed this for breaking "rule #3 : don't upload unrelated content" . I am aghast that they would remove my MLP oc which was also a tribute to the comic staff and a piece of MLP fanart. Very much related.
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>>27268415
EqG Minis are bizarrely seemingly a separate thing from EqG itself.
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>>27268512
fucking disgusting

>borderline CP is okay
>unrelated memes are okay if they have horse art
>offending anyone related to the show is not okay, even if it directly concerns show-related material

i want tumblr to leave derpibooru
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>>27268525
Foalcon's isn't just there to piss people off and be an annoying faggot. That's why it's allowed and trying to force drama and upset people isn't.
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http://www.equestriadaily.com/2016/05/lets-review-friends-forever-28.html#more
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>>27263412
Fosgitts art makes me want to vomit/10
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Come on guys.

How you can hate Fosgitt artstyle? it's cute and adorable
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>>27263202
that suble lewd blush on their cheeks
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>>27269225
>All things considered, I view this comic as a fun and strong story. It shows the Crusaders being more mature and can serve as an example of why so many fans flock to Luna's persona. There are questionable moments that have a lot to do with Canterlot’s setting but it's not enough to undermine the entire tale.
Who can genuinely believe this? Really?
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>>27269441

Equestria daily, after all shill Q only recommend Quills to make Comics articles
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>>27269287
>it's cute and adorable
Fogsitt mimics (or rather, mocks) the Looney Toons style because he doesn't have an idea of how to draw.

The animators behind the Looney Toons were consistent with proportions and followed a character sheet to ensure that. Then they would stretch certain features to exaggerate an emotion so kids could more easily grasp what was going in the character's minds without exposition or dialogue.

The only thing Fogshit consistently does it give his characters long necks, contorts them into freak show proportions, and copy paste cutiemarks. He uses the Looney Toons style as a crutch so he can hide his shoddy workmanship instead of as another tool to make his art better.

It might be "cute and adorable" if you don't look at it for very long, but if that was the case you really shouldn't be here.
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>>27263255
this is nice
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>>27268190

2animu4me
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>>27263388
kek

>>27263412
3/10
They killed without gore.
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>Fosgitt and Whitley comic
>already dead thread

Even the hate for Fosgitt isn't enough to keep alive this thread
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>>27272127
Nobody wants to non-ironically shill for them.
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Welp, my favourite artists Jenn Blake was corrupted by the LGBT agenda of Whitley

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2016/05/babscon-interview-jenn-blake-mlp-comic.html

>That's what I love about his stuff. There's LGBT. There's people of color. He really brings diversity to comics which is sadly lacking in the big two. There's a few characters here and there but they’re not the main focus a nd they don't get the best stories. They don't get the best writers or artists all the time. It's great someone like Jeremy is doing these characters and that some of us get lucky enough to work on. Hopefully that can be brought to more people and eventually bring the masses to see these great characters that young girls can look up to; young girls of color and the LGBT community. He's doing so much and it's really fun to be a part of it.


It's funny how shill Q is promoting that Whitley comic princeless in EQD(already 2 articles) since Katie Cook leave the staff. He really want to be a writer of the comic
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>>27272368
>Don't get the best writers or artists all the time

Pretty true, I mean they do have Jeremy Whitley and the goddawful artist he works with.
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>>27272368
>Jenn Blake was corrupted by the LGBT agenda of Whitley
>Jen Blake
>The lesbian
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>>27272368
>It's funny how shill Q is promoting that Whitley comic princeless in EQD(already 2 articles) since Katie Cook leave the staff. He really want to be a writer of the comic
Actually, is not funny.
It's just SAD.

And as usual, they are already labeling people as "haters" if they don't like this fucking trainwreck.
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>>27263208
>Art by: Gay Faggot
I can stop reading the thread here
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>>27266896
possibly
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>>27272572
>>27267259
>>27267320
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>>27263228
Is Celestia posing for a "The Thinker" sculpt?
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>>27272684
she is takin a shit
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>>27263282
jesus the marks aren't even pasted well
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>>27263388
/x/ pony
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>>27263388
I dunno, but this reminds me of Jurassic Park
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>>27266491
>>27264032
>Complaining about OC being the star of a CMC story
>CMC's main reason of existing is helping new fillies and colts discover what their talent is

I bet you complained when the dancer colt at AB's recent episode existed.

On the side note, I'm having a hard time taking the dolphin as a credible threat.
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>>27268522
Hasbro has no confidence in the new dolls compared to...what EG had as official merchandise.
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