>>26906476
Who's Nyx's father already?
>>26906476
>Nyx AND FO:E in one fic
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jbck2VnDJwM
jesus fuck, all that autism...
>>26906526
>>26906535
>>26906824
wish me luck lads I'm going in
>>26907066
DONT
YOU GOT SO MUCH TO LIVE FOR
I LOVE YOU ANON COME BACK
>>26907083
SOMEONE HAS TO AND I'M NOT LETTING ANYONE ELSE GO THROUGH THIS HELL!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tYLHPX6yVLU
>>26907066
>>26907144
ANON NO, YOU DON'T HAVE TO DO THIS!
>>26907160
it's too late I have already begun and I can't stop now
save yourselves
>>26907228
My god, man. You're insane.
>>26907245
I'm doing it so others won't have to
>>26907245
>>26907160
>>26907083
oh god, I just finished chapter 1. Nyx talks like an edgy 15 year old faggot and was a royal guard, the edginess burns!
>>26907368
You don't have to keep going, Anon.
>>26907368
Fun quotes?
>>26907368
don't listen to >>26907378
I want to see what happens
>>26907378
yes I do its for science
>>26907388
I'll try to find some it's boring as fuck >>26907405
I will continue to suffer on
>>26906476
>140 thumbs up
Kill me.
>>26906476
is this the singularity? the one incredibly dense piece of autism that finally destroys everything we hold dear? there's like five layers of fanfiction in there, I don't think you could pack in more autism if you tried.
celestia help us if this work ever gets printed into a physical existence, for surely that would bring about the end of times
then I began to notice their cutie marks, and it disgusted me. Each one was of things like a pipe in a pony skull or a knife sticking through a leg. How did they get those, I didn’t know and quite frankly, dear reader, I did notwantto know.
2edgy4me
>>26907574
....Good fucking god, don't tell me this is a quote from the fic.
>>26907459
On fimfiction, you have to look at only the right third of the ratings bar to get an idea of how good a fic is, since 70% of the users of the site are fourteen year olds who have never held and read a real book in their lives and thumb up everything they see.
So then, by excluding the left two thirds of the like to dislike bar, the fic gets 29 likes to 27 dislikes. which is likely a much more accurate rating.
>>26907609
copied and pasted it exactlyI just got to the fight scene, you don't want to see how edgy and Mary sue it is
>>26907676
>don't want to see
Oh, but I do.
Is there rape? All I care about.
>>26907715
Bet you 5 (You)s there's a gang rape scene.
>>26907687
you asked for it
AUTISM INCOMING
What I didn't know, at the time, was that there was a seventh raider right behind me who leapt onto my back and stabbed his knife deepinto me, just above my shoulder. I let out a loud scream of pain as the blade sunk deep into my flesh. It was only after he took a second slash into my body that I was finally able to buck him off. While he was in mid-air, I turned and punched him with my left forehoof, sending him flying into a nearby wall.
Two of the other ponies ran behind me and slashed into my hind legs, causing me to collaspe to my knees. Growling in pain, I reared a hind leg and kicked one of the ponies in the face. I then spun around, bringing my right forehoof against the side of the head of the ponies'partner. I then slamed an elbow against the skull, sending the pony down to the ground unconsious.
I was to distracted to hear the ponies armed with guns cock their firearms and fire at me, scoring two hits on my shoulder. I let out a scream as one of the bullets cut through my shoulder, making a trail of blood travel down it. Letting loose a small growl, I concentrated my magic through my horn and made it crackle with lighting. Keeping my eye on the one on the left, I sent out a bolt of electricity from my horn to knock him out. Sadly, this left room for his partner to send out two shots at me. I barely managed to dodge one bullet,but the other hit me dead in the hind leg as I rolled to the side. This left for his two friends to slice at my back and side, barely missing my wings. Squinting hard, I tried to concentrate for another another bolt, but the stallion in front of me cut in front of my chest before I could get another shot off.
>>26907732
is it the unholy spawn of the PH rape scene and my immortal?
>>26907758
Fuck me pal, you're either the bravest or the most foolish man I've ever met
>>26907760
Oh, man, thanks for reminding me of that scene.Guiltiest boner of my life, I'll tell you that.
>>26907806
Fishy is a sexy pone
>>26906476
I see ur nyx
and i raise u one
>autistic hedgehog
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/100369/sonichu-and-the-autism-that-pierced-the-heavens
>>26907806
Wat scene was this?
>>26907758
AAAAAAAAAARRRRGGGGG
THE EDGE
IT'S KILLING ME
SAVE YOURSELVES, ANON'S
>>26907866The one where they fug in my immortal.
>>26907758
That would not be the case, sadly, as I watched the last member of the group walk over and pick up one of the knives, “Really mean, uni. Guess I am to have to make it slow and painful as I carve my initials into your cute little belly while I thrust my-”
I barely let him finish as I moaned, “No, no. NO!” Looking around, I used my telekinesis to pick up the nearby gun and aimed the barrel.Now, as much as I hate using guns, that did not mean I didn't know how to use one. With a terrified scream I pulled the trigger and closed my eyes. As the rapport went out, I heard the death rattle of the stallion as he went down. Looking up, I watched in utter horror as the stallion fell down, a pool of blood surrounding him as the fluid leaked out of the hole in his skull, “Oh, Celestia. No, please, I’m sorry,” I whimpered, “I didn’t mean to, I had no choice. You were going to rape and kill me, I-I-” It’s true that I was used to the idea of death on the battlefield by now, but this was the first time that I had ever taken a life, or even thought about it. I was taught by my mother to always respect life. Just to see a body, one that I killed, laying there began to make me tremble.
>>26907758
>>26907799
I think I'm foolish
>>26907860
but that one is ironic, and thus, lower on the autism scale
>>26907880
I never got to that part. I couldn't bring myself to ever actually read past the first couple of pages. I am so weak, anon.
>>26907908
I wonder what he was going to thrust...
>>26907908
>Really mean, uni. Guess I am to have to make it slow and painful as I carve my initials into your cute little belly while I thrust my-”
Sweet fucking lord
>>26907908
The edge.
It hurts so much.
>>26907942
well I know I want to thrust a knife into my chest when reading this
>>26906476
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>>26907974
oh great just started chapter 3 and now she has a voice in her head
>>26907924
I was actually talking about the boat rape scene from Project Horizons
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BiTCyxcBF_nf_ZVXpmPYGqydHo17mPqaiY9uc9rDBbs/
page 32
Man, how did I take over 33 chapters of that edge?
>“Celestia, I had two kids by the time I was 21that shouldn’t have happened.
>Then the skull suddenly changed into the face of the pony I had killed earlier, his face was slowly decaying with a dangling eye looking at me, blaming me. I nearly dropped the skull in horror as I tried to wipe the image from my head
Jesus fuck op you're a saint
“I am afraid that the goddess’s order to bring you to Maripony was not a request, it was an order,” the alicorn said, her voice deepening with a low growl.
“Well, I am afraid that you are going to dissappoint your superior officer,” I stated coldly as I unfurled my wings.
“That is not an option,” she said, her horn beginning to glow. “ I am afraid that I must insist.”
I looked back at her as I heard this, and smirked defiantly “You can try,” and upon saying this, I took off into the sky. I flew higher and higher, away from the alicorn, I turned my head to my shoulder to see if she was following me. To my surprise, she wasn’t. Curiously, I began to look around the area for my pursuer.
“As I said, you are coming with me,” the alicorn said, as I let out a gasp of surprise at her appearance.
“How did you-” was the only thing I could say before the alicorn wrapped her forelegs around my neck and tightened. In the air I struggled for a few terrifying moments, trying my best to get air in my lungs to prevent blacking out. Deciding to take a lesson from Rainbow Dash, I drove my hind leg into her groin.
A satisfied smirk appeared on my face as the alicorn released her hold on my neck, allowing me to breathe. Not wanting to let her recover, I bucked her in the chest spun around to face her, and delivered my left forehoof into her muzzle. As the blue alicorn tried to recover, I slammed both of my forehooves into the stomach I then backed off and flew away from her to get my bearings. As I turned to face her again, I let out a gasp as I saw her gone. “Can she teleport?”
No sooner had I asked that question when I felt a bolt of energy hit me in the back. I turned around to find where it came from, but was taken by surprise when a small barrage of rocks came up from the ground to hit me, barely giving me a chance to dodge. I winced as I hovered for a few moments, feeling the pain of the rocks that managed to cut into my side.
>>26908334
Taking a quick look around me, I got the sight of another rock being thrown at me from the side and moved to dodge out of the way quickly. As I flew below the large projectile, I looked up to watch a faint shimmer of magic in front of me. “Invisibility?” I gasped aloud to myself as I watched the shimmer fade, throwing two more bolts of energy at me. “SHIT!” I hate to cuss, but this was special. After I dodged a few more rocks and spells, I began to realize what she was doing to me. She was trying to lure me into a corner and hit me with a big spell to knock me out of the fight. Deciding to change tactics on her, I looked up to the sky and flew into the cloud barrier.
As my head and body breached the barrier, I kept myself inside the clouds and flew through it as if it was a small lake. While I kept on swimming, I looked over my shoulder to watch as the alicorn did the same thing, looking like she was enjoying this. As if she was on the hunt and was relishing coming at me. After a few minutes of doing this, I dived back down under the barrier and waited for the alicorn to come out. “Question,” I asked as I watched her fly out.
“What is it?” the alicorn asked as she decloaked.
“Do you know what clouds are? Answer: water vapour,” I said, silently charging my horn. “Pegasi use the water from towns to condense the liquid into small pockets of ‘fluff’ known as clouds that pegasi then use for weather or building. This is why earth and unicorn ponies can’t touch it without magic.”
“What is the point of this little lecture? To stall, or to show off?” the alicorn asked.
“A little of both actually,” I said, keeping my horn charged with lighting. “See, when Rainbow Dash took me and Scoots flying, she always told us to dry off if we flew in the clouds for a while, because the water would condense on our wings.” I slowly raised my hoof, as if I was in class, “That is why you dry off afterwards, don’t want to have ice on
>>26908367
ice on your wings when you are one-thousand feet up. Now, last question.”
“Final one, then I take you in,” she said, pointing her horn at me.
“What is a really bad thing to be in the middle of a lighting storm. Answer: wet,” I then lowered my horn at her, the electricity cascading on my horn like a wild snake. “And look at that, you are are soaked. What a shocking twist,” I said calmly as I fired my lightning bolt at full power into the alicorn.
There was something of a sick, satisfactory smile coming to my lips as I watched the alicorn get electrocuted, the bolts of energy zigzagging their way over her body, and fall to the ground. Being an alicorn myself, I knew just how much lighting that an alicorn body could take, and it is definitely more than any normal pony, otherwise I wouldn’t have unleashed my full power at her. As I landed, I looked at the charred body and breathed a sigh of relief as the chest rose and fell with her breathing, “Unconscious, but her regeneration should fix her up soon. Until then, what am I-” I stopped speaking out loud when I noticed where we had landed, near stable sixteen.
I want to die
Why are you posting excerpts? I thought you took on this so we wouldn't have to!
>>26908443
I posted some quotes but I took a break from the autism >>26908419
this is another anon
>>26908419
>What a shocking twist
CARLOS
>>26908199
Can you paste rape scene?
is it bad that I enjoyed fallout equestria?
>>26908567
yes
>>26908528
I'm not gonna be the guy who posts a ten post long rape story, but have a pastebin.
http://pastebin.com/DGGF111h
I remember it being much more detailed though, I think they changed it. Maybe Somber realised it wasn't so great after his boner went down.
CAN'T WAKE UP
>>26908728
>She's been stabbed! With dicks!
I wish there was more detail.
>>26908814That was me.I couldn't help myself.
>>26908199
Because it was a fun ride but then it kept getting worse and worse
>>26908996
That's true for so many things.
>>26908728
>I think they changed it
Really?
>this fucking thread
>>26908443
Good point, though these are entertaining
>>26909189
Well, I definitely remember her taking a couple loads in her mouth and that doesn't seem to be in it anymore. I wouldn't be surprised, though, the author liked changing stuff around retroactively. I recall at one point he decided Blackjack's magic should have a different color and went ahead and changed that in every chapter released up to that point.
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>>26908367
>“SHIT!” I hate to cuss, but this was special.
>special.
Oh, so true.
>>26908567
No, the original was actually pretty good as are a bunch of the side stories. The problem, like most everything, is when you stare back at the really crap stuff or associate it with the good.
If you get past is being Nyx the writing isn't half bad honestly
>>26908607
is it even worse that I cried like a bitch at the end?
>>26910317
yes
>>26910317
Consider Sudoku
>>26910891
>>26907758
>>26907908
>>26907908
CRAAAAAAWWLING IIIIN MYYY SKIIIIIIIIIIIIN
As an experienced faggot with over 200 stories and 30,000,000 horsewords under my belt, I can assure you this is the edgiest thing I've ever experienced.
>>26907758
This hurts me physically. D-don't stop!
>>26912454
I didn't know that shortskirts(???) browsed 4chan.
>>26912454
That would make for a great banner.
>>26912795
His blogs aret filled with Disney Princesses. He's obviously moot.
>>26912454
>only 200 stories
>only 30 million words
I HAVE SEEN THINGS YOU WOULDN'T BELIEVE
>>26906476
>OP can no longer make fun stories on /mlp/
>OP now has to resort to posting pictures of a story on a different site for fear of being banned for doing anything remotely creative from within /mlp/
nice i'm looking forward to the times ahead sounds like it will be fun as hell
>>26913978
If your idea of fun stories is "anon fucks character with op's given setting", then a bad fanfic on another website would provide as much if not more entertainment for you
>>26910317
Eh, it's alright. I don't think I cried, personally, but I can see why you would.I cried hard on My Little Dashie so I'm in no place to judge.
>>26907066
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9532463/1/Sonic-s-Ultimate-HaremFuck off mods. Chapters 200-205 are horse related. It counts fuckers
>226 chapters of Sonic x [female character]
>730,000+ words total
>has pony chapters
>still ongoing
Have fun.
>>26914341
I teared up at the end of my little dashie too
>>26914585
>>26914341
I didn't cry at that, but I did at the end of Background Pony. Fuck that fucking ending, it was too good.
>>26915167
>I did at the end of Background Pony
You waited the end before tearing up.
You have no heart, Anon
>>26907144
Your a hero anon godspeed
>>26906476
I really should read that first nyx story how long is it it's 8pm here and i have to leave for work at 7.15
>>26915204
203,000 werdz.
>>26915218
Oh it may take a while then
Oh well the library still hasent gotten gift of the Magi in for me yet may as well read something while I wait.
>>26915167
All I knew was tears after this one
You look at the premise and expect it to be shit but by the end I could barely see the words through the tears
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/85834/1/a-goddess-sorrow/you-were-to-be-my-dawn
>>26915167
I need to read that one of those days.
the only thing is,
>432,377 words total
>>26915241
It's only like a fe days worth of material.
>>26915259
Oh yeah, sure, that's just a bit under Lord of the Rings, that's like one afternoon probably.
>>26915229
>they updated it for new seasons
Why
>>26915236
Wait shit wrong link
>>26915286
I have a reading speed of 1400 words per minute and a lot of free time. It only took me two days to read. Just sit down and read, it, it's rewarding.
>>26915300
I'm really fucking confused last time I checked it was just the one story you were to be my dawn now there's all this extra shit that had been added in the last week or so and the Google result now links right to the story and the comments are all difrent and none of this makes sense
>>26915320
Ah I worked out the problem I got the title confused with one of the lines
I should have known the fucking title I have looked it up dozens of times and always remembered it why did I fuck up so badly here
Anyway here's the real link
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26320/my-night-will
I must now comit sepuktu for my failure
>>26915305
I just checked with some shitty 1000 words fic and my reading speed is about 360 words per minute,which makes me think you're one of those speed reading wankers,which means It would take me just about 20 hours of reading, in full concentration mode, so if I want to read for about an hour before bed that's just under three weeks total.
Yeah, it's a bit hard to get into that sort of thing.
>>26915367
That's still good, average is 250 words per min.
>>26915539
Well, in your face, mom, I AM good at something.
>>26915167
I cried for a couple of days for that. I read it for the start of my college's summer break, and it broke me for a couple days.
>mfw Alzheimer's is claiming my old adopted parents already
>mfw this story made me realize why sometimes Dad would call me twice a day instead of once and would say the same stuff
>>26915167
FUCK! That goddamn story! I love skirts so much. His sad stuff is too fucking good.
