It returns (again)
suppy's Martial ArtsAnon - http://pastebin.com/E5eYC9Xq
ZimZam's Revenge is Sweet - http://pastebin.com/08vZWsnR
(I can't find GSW's paste)
Original prompt:
>"Haha, you faggot can't even stand a hit from a girl! What you gonna do now, fuckboy? Cry?! Fucking nerd!"
Prompt #2
>"Hey, Anon! You should join the martial arts club! You know, /she's/ in it too!"
The thread rises once more once more, my brothers.
>>26898821
so I'm back on the green grind after doing a shit ton of work for another thread under a different trip, and I really want to finish this story (Martial ArtsAnon and Flutters).
I'm going to make Rainbow a likeable character in spite of her historical cuntishness. Or at least I'll try.
I'm sure you anons have scattered to the wind, but if any of you return, it's good to see you again! As for the future of this story, things are looking up. However, I am always considering migrating to fingerbang (even though it might drive some of you off) if it turns out that having a thread essentially dedicated to one green is untenable.
Keep in mind that is something I do not want to do, however!
Last update
"You're right. I'm sorry."
>Easily the first time you can remember actually feeling guilty over messing with someone like that
>"But it wasn't that bad!" the dick in the back of your head replies
>Hey, if it makes Fluttershy feel bad, it's no good.
>You rub her hand.
"Honest. Won't happen again."
>Her concern and embarrassment start to fade away, replaced by the pep and contentment you love to see
>Her eyes dart to the left and right conspiratorially
>When she's confident nobody is looking, she shoots forward and returns the kiss
>She seems amused and pleased with herself, even when she hides her face in the neck of her sweatshirt
>At least she has a sense of humor about it!
>She pulls a scratched-up tupperware out of her backpack and places it on the table
>Inside is a colorful variety of fruits and veggies
>She digs into the salad with a plastic fork and restrained excitement
>You recall last night
"Do you know a girl named AJ? Applejock or something?"
>'Uhuh! AJ's o-one of my best friends!"
"Cowgirl?"
>She nods
>Shit
"It's... you and her and Rainbow and three other girls, right?"
>She points at you with her fork laden with dressing and lettuce
>"Four. Twilight, Rarity, Pinkie, and Sunset."
>Sunset... Sunset...
"Oh yeah, baconhair! She hangs out with you guys now, right?"
>She snorts and drops her fork, desperate to cover her amusement, to no avail
>Like every one of her mannerisms, it's pretty damn cute
>"I-I'm sorry Anon... It's just that we call her b-baconhair too!"
>"She's right."
>There she is. 'Baconhair' in the flesh, leather jacket and all
>With four other girls, of course
>Cool! Fluttershy's friends!
>...
>Shit. Fluttershy's friends!
>And the cowgirl doesn't seem to happy
And I'll post what I've just written right before I head off to sleep, and then I'll hop back on most likely right after my classes + lifting tomorrow and before I head off to the fire department for the evening's training.
Feels good to be back, fellows! To thread comfy.
Also pls more writefags :9
>>26898821
>ZimZam
Fuck, that shook loose some memories.
Is it finished or not? Last I remember was anon blowing up rainbow's car with gilda.
>>26898966
It is finished, and in my opinion the ending is quite masterful.
>>26898840
>Their lunch trays clack loudly on the particle board lunch table in almost perfect unison
>They all nod, or say hello, or otherwise greet Fluttershy
>The one with the mountain of purple hair whispers "Ooh" and winks at your new girlfriend once she gives you a good look
>But the orange-haired cowgirl is leering at you suspiciously from her seat beside Fluttershy
>Her freckled face scrunches up, and you get the feeling she means to let you know just how wary she is of you
>"So y'all're Flutter's new beau? The guy who knocked the stuffin' out of mah best friend?"
>Her tone, though calm, is chillingly threatening
>Baconhair and purple-hair look like they're backing Dash
>The pink one just looks a bit sheepish
>How the fuck do you answer a question like that?
"My name is Anon. Yours?"
>Trying civility can't hurt
>"Now don't y'all play that game with me like nothin' ain't happened!
>The cowgirl shoots out of her seat and shoves an accusing finger in your face
>Maybe you were wrong about civility. Looks like she's intent on being a total bitch, too
>Really? What the fuck is wrong with these girls?
"What /happened/ was your batshit friend ambushed me, lost, then threw down and got wrecked!"
>It comes out of your mouth before you can think
>Sure, you're justified, but you have no doubt that the situation just escalated
>"You BROKE the poor gal's damn JAW! Now AH'M gonna teach YOU-"
>The world freezes when AJ's fist cocks back.
>You can almost feel your body pulsing, nerves distributing panicked orders
>Every muscle tenses up, instinct scrambling to mitigate the coming strike
>But a firm hand lands on your shoulder as the eyes of everyone else at the table open in shock
>WHUMP
>"SIT DOWN"
>>26899041
Masterful is right.
Holy fuck, I just finished it. Now I'm kicking myself for missing the last (few?) threads it was in, I would have loved to see how everyone reacted as well. I'm just slack jawed here.
>>26898966
It ended, alright.
Shame we never got the alt ending he did one post of.
>>26899041
>>26899303
YE NIGS. So glad it all ended well.
>>26898821
I want to be kicked in the face by Rainbow Dash.
Bumpi
>>26900730
Interested
>>26900735
>>26900730
shitboi leffi ma trop
Boop
Still B.U.M.P.
Bap
post
>>26899047
GOD DAMN WHAT HAPPENED NEXT!?
>>26909070
Looks like he was one of many writefags to get a 24h ban today...
>>26909256
FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!
>>26898821
bump
Bump awaiting tomorrow
Beep
Zoop
Zeep
Anyone want a random song to induce nostalgia of giant fighting robots?
>>26914425
Sure
>>26915561
Fuck yeah here we go, found this again after looking at cartoon network stuff. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K-kYiDbG39s
>>26915584
Noice
post
Post to the promised land
Post to the promised land again
Guess who's back!
>>26919437
Perfect timing
>>26919437
Fuck yeah
>>26919437
Aight just finished a quick workout gon hit up some cleanliness real fast like and get writing.
Guess who's leaving again?!
>>26920899
wrong thread wrong trip
>>26899047
>Nobody dares to move
>Fluttershy has shot up from her seat and is now leaning over the table, one hand on your shoulder
>The other, a balled fist, has just slammed the table in front of the cowgirl
>Still and unshaken as solid rock, she holds her face inches from her friend's
>Your serene girl is visibly furious
>The object of her protection as you are, even you feel a bit scared
>The cowgirl's eyes bug out, and she carefully lowers herself into her seat, much like a fugitive would surrender to keep the cops from shooting them
>"Goodness, Fluttershy..." Rarity mutters from across the table, utterly shocked
>Her reaction is shared by just about everyone
>Including yourself
>"There's been MORE than enough fighting! AJ, If you have a problem with Anon, use your WORDS!"
>Fluttershy is now looking down at AJ
>And the cowgirl's practically sunk into her seat
>Hell hath no fury like a girl whose friends keep trying to beat up her boyfriend
>"F-Fluts, Ah-"
>"None of that!"
>Fluttershy plops down in her seat, taking your hand in hers
>While she glowers at AJ, her fingers absently stroke your palm
>Her touch would be calming if you didn't feel like the table was one wrong move away from a brawl
>"How could you, AJ? Can't you respect that Anon's my boyfriend and give him a chance?"
>"B-but Anon was fahtin' with-"
>"Do you really think I would like him if he hurt people outside of self-defense?"
>AJ really has nothing against that
>She sputters
>"Ah think he's done... gone messed with your head is what!"
>The rest of the girls don't seem to sympathize with that
>"Applejack, don't you think that's a bit far-fetched?"
>Thank you baconhair, voice of reason!
>The cowgirl out for your blood leans over the table and points a finger at you while looking at Sunset
>"Ah think it's a bit far-fetched that Fluttershy's suddenly enamored with some two-bit thug!"
>>26921185
Fuck you to Applejack, your just jealous of Fluttershy.
>>26921185
>"Applejack!" Fluttershy cuts back
>She keeps going at Sunset
>"This Anon character beat the stuffing out of Rainbow and she's just OK with it?"
>AJ pauses for effect
>"Ah think she's just gettin' taken for a ride, and it's our duty as her friends to /help/ her!"
>Her tirade is cut short by a loud sniffle
>Wrapped up in AJ's angry rant, you failed to notice that each word stabbed at your girlfriend as it came out of her mouth
>Warm creeks of tears trickle and meander down her now-wet face, and her lips quiver uncontrollably
>"A-AJ... h-how *sniff* could you say that?"
>Applejack's eyes widen as she realizes too late just what she's done
>"Fluttershy..."
>It's too late now
>Your girlfriend leaps out of her seat and walks out of the cafeteria, tear-stricken face buried deep in her hands
>You and AJ stand up at the same time to follow her
>When she moves to follow her out, you extend an arm to block her path
>"Ah'm going to help her."
>You look back, just barely concealing your anger
>She's taken aback by your glare
"I think you've helped quite enough."
>AJ turns around and looks to her friends
>They're all between "deer in headlights" and "shocked bystander" right now
>They'll probably have words while you help Fluttershy get it together
>Poor, poor Fluttershy
>You're almost flattered...
>She was that hurt by YOU getting badmouthed?
>...
>And after that stab of guilt subsides, you exit the cafeteria and look both ways
>You spot that beautiful pile of pink in an instant
>Its owner is using it as a shield while she bawls her eyes out against the wall
>You walk up to her and place a gentle hand on her shoulder
>"Hey..."
>You almost stumble when she flings herself into your arms, apparently happier to sob into your chest than the plaster
>Your arms automatically wrap around her back
>>26921336
>"I'm- *hic* I'm- *hic"
>Her words are caught up in little hiccups of sadness
>"So you do what comes naturally
>You guide her chin up with your fingers so you can look her in the eyes
>...and you almost regret it
>Those hypnotizing things, lost between sky blue and ocean green
>So round and sad...
>It feels like a punch in the gut to see her like this
>She glances down and screws her eyes shut
>"I-I'm sorry you h-have to *hic* see me like this A-Anon..."
>You guide her chin up again
"Look at me, Fluttershy."
>She sniffles a few more times before complying
>You fight the urge to let yourself fall into trance at the sight of those watery limey-blue orbs
>Leaning in, you lock her in a deep kiss
>The hand you once held below her chin moves to cup her cheek and stroke her hair
>It feels like an eternity, yet an eternity far too short when you part with a quiet *smack*
"You don't need any excuse. What Applejack said was hurtful."
>Fluttershy's breathing is a bit calmer, and the sobs have been replaced with ragged breaths
>You hold her precious head against your collar and rest your chin on her flowing pink locks
"She didn't mean to hurt you. It was stupid and misguided, but Rainbow lied to them."
>Fluttershy looks up at you, her sweet face quietly begging for another kiss
>And you oblige, chastely brushing her lips for a few moments more before continuing
"It was wrong of her, but she said it because she cares about you. Just like I care about you."
>She sighs
>"I-I know... It's just... I h-hate that m-my friends sometimes think I c-can't take care of myself..."
>This time, she comes straight to you, planting her lips on yours in a long, soft kiss, as if she cannot stand for them to be apart too long
>Her tears cease to fall and her breathing returns more-or-less to normal
>"And I w-want them to know j-just how wonderful you a-are, Anon. It m-might not hurt you when AJ s-says things about you, b-but it hurts m-me."
>>26921470
My heart wasn't ready for these feels, I am surprised AJ didn't know Dash was full of shit.
>>26921470
>She smiles that delicate, loving smile. Its warmth reminds you of everything good, and for that moment you feel no worry, no concern. Simply an expression from your darling that she is content, and so priceless to you at that.
"Wow..."
>You run a hand lazily through her hair, tracing down her back and coming to a stop at her tailbone, where you let it rest on her hips
"What did I do to deserve you, 'Shy?"
>And she giggles
>Gods above, she giggles!
>"You know Anon... sometimes I ask myself that, too!"
>Her sorrows forgotten, she beams at you, and invites you to walk her back to the table
>You drape an arm over her back, and she leans onto your shoulder, placing a hand on your chest
"Thanks for saving me from getting knocked in the head again."
>You chuckle, realizing how the tables had turned. Now she was the one protecting you
>"W-well it's just that your face is so h-handsome..."
>You look at her with a brow raised in surprise
>A rather bold compliment. And a joke, at that
"You really are the only girl for me."
>She just nuzzles your chest a little bit more
>"...yay."
>When you return to the table, your loving embrace stands in stark contrast to the somber attitude among the girls
>AJ looks up for a moment, only to cast her gaze back down in shame
>The other girls are visibly nervous
>You and Fluttershy sit next to each other, holding each other's hand below the table
>Your girlfriend smiles at her ashamed friend, waiting patiently for her to look up
>The air calms down, and solemn, downcast faces around form relieved smiles
>Your girlfriend starts to blush a storm
>Well, at least someone's back to normal!
>"I-I'm sorry I yelled at you, AJ"
>Her friend says nothing in reply
>She just sighs and continues to look down
>>26921759
>>26921759
>Just a second ago she was ready to cave your face in
>Making Fluttershy cry hit her hard
>And from the way you felt just seeing her in tears, not having caused it,
>How could it not?
>Knowing that you made her cry must be a punishment worse than torture
>Hell, it probably feels like torture
>"Fluttershy... y'ain't got a lick of a reason to be apologizin' to me."
>She musters the will to raise her head
>Her simple, sorrowful eyes plead forgiveness
>You can hear the true depth of remorse in her voice
>"Ah'm so sorry 'bout what Ah said. About you, and about Anon here."
>She looks over at you
>"Ah knew what Dash said was a bit fishy, but I jus' didn't want to believe she's gone and started another fight again. And if y'all're datin' Anon, well there must be somethin' real good about him that I don't know yet."
>Fluttershy jumps out of her seat and scrambles around the table to hug her friend
>"Oh Applejack, I'm so glad!"
>She hums with joy while half squeezing the cowgirl to death
>"I completely forgive you. Bygones are bygones."
>"Aww!" the rest of the table coos in unison, joining in the hug
>You don't feel it would be proper to pile in, but that doesn't stop you from smiling ear to ear like an idiot
>"Now come on, y'all..." AJ wheezes out, coming dangerously close to death via make-up hugs
>"Ah can't accept yer forgiveness, at least not yet. Ah wanna have all all y'all over at the farm tonight for cider and a movie. That goes for you in particular, Fluttershy..."
>She looks up, regarding her friend warmly
>"And you too, Anon. Ah wanna make it up to ya."
"I'd love to, AJ."
>You had to hand it to her. She was handling this like a champ
>The pink one started to look at you with mischief. Or was it malice?
>"Come on, Anon! It's a GROUP hug!"
>She doesn't let you make your own decision
>She detaches from the hug swarm and pulls you over the table, wrapping you in the ball of warm feelings
>Trapping might be a better word. But you can't complain.
Pastebin updated.
http://pastebin.com/E5eYC9Xq
I'm gonna chill and do some reading before I burn myself out all at once. I may post more in a bit.
I feel the story might be moving a bit slowly. Is it? I have a couple of ideas that may slow or increase the pace.
beboop
zoop
>>26921185
>While she glowers at AJ
>glowers
all I can think of is pic related.
keep it up good sir. Glad to see this thread up and running again
>>26922133
Goddamn this is fucking cheesy
I love it, don't change anything
boobpa
bum
Waiting for suppy
>>26925732
Dude, I already told you I'm not into guys.
zorp
>>26925732
Damn I wanna suck those perky little titties and jizz on her hard flat stomach.
10
bumparoo to recover of glory
edge of bumpfinity
Someone died today. But I've recovered some of my inspiration and I thought of an obvious way to get out of a corner I unwittingly painted myself in (it's a small and stupid thing but I've been hung up on it). I very much hope to writefag for you all as soon as possible.
>>26898821
bump
I bumped myself
today
>>26898821
five more minutes, i dont want to wake up yet goddamn.
>>26933985
>>26933985
alright, lets write an edgy alt ending, shall we?
I should be able to start tonight and continue periodically like before. Like always let me make coffee and get to it later.
its not canon, but it is edgy and it is the alternate.for some reason it's been pretty hard to write after RiS, i follow a prompt and drop it cause it doesn't feel right. Maybe writing this would let my subconscious let me get to writing some other stuff. Closure maybe? Fuck if I know.
>>26934052
What are you talking about, didn't you finish? Or are you having Dash come back with a vengeance from prison.
>>26934052
Please don't we had a happy. if cliffhangery ending.
>>26934082
No, there was my ending and i had an idea for an alternate i was saying i would write. Some people that added me on steam and IRCed with me wanted an edgy ending and then people were asking for it. So i meant to write it but i used to have really bad internet if you were around for the threads. So it never happened. The original ending is in the bin Suppy gave along with the whole story..I'm glad this is here again. I can write this thing and finish it once and for all. The alt im hoping gives me some closure for me to move on to my other stories i have in like 3 generals.
>>26934124
Ok so can I assume the edgy, most likely Dash getting out and getting revenge is non cannon right?
>>26934135
eyup
>>26934315
Ok I might cry like a bitch, but lets see where this goes.
>>26922070
>You have to admit to yourself that these girls really weren't half bad
>Considering most of them were friends of Rainbow Dash, it wasn't hard to assume they were total bitches too
>Guilt by association
>It was relieving to see this wasn't the case
>Fluttershy's friends seem supportive and affectionate
>Loving, even?
>You look over at your girlfriend
>She looked to be once more at the edge of tears
>But her eyes and smile betray that this was rooted in joy, not sorrow
>Yes, loving
>But that raises the million dollar question
>How the fuck is Rainbow one of them?
>The turbocunt who goes around sucker-punching people, challenging them to fights and losing,
>And then lying about it?
>As much as you want to say you hate her, she's irredeemable, all done...
>That couldn't just be the whole story, could it?
>A shitbag who just happens to be in a friend group like this one?
>You don't believe it
>Or is she really just a good liar?
>AJ fell for her tricks. Fluttershy seemed to doubt you at first
>Is it too much of a stretch that the Rainbow they know is not the real Rainbow?
>You banish it from your head for the rest of lunch
>And when the bell rings, you tenderly embrace your pink-haired girl
>"Meet m-me after school in the parking lot?"
>Craning with her, you close your eyes and take in her sweet scent
>Aah, airy coconut...
"Mhm?"
>"AJ's farm isn't t-too far. It's only a half-hour from here... an hour from the c-city."
"Cider and a movie with my girlfriend and her friends at a real live farm outside of Canterlot?"
>She hums and nods when you rub her shoulders, ready to part
>"I'm l-looking forward to it."
>The second bell rings
>You'll be late soon
>You share a quick kiss before separating for good, and you dispatch a cocky smirk at her before disappearing around the corner
>BRRRRRIIIIING
>Only a few hours later and school is out for the day
>Your schedule is clear for the day. Plenty of time to party with "Shy's Five."
>>26934788
Moar?
>>26935818
Already got this pic. Anything better?
