>Previously idk
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/26817866/#q26817866
>This is the superhero thread, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as the Amazing Spider-Woman.
Feel free to post any green, art, or other mlp related superhero stuff here.
http://youtu.be/h2ASUOtvHBU
Ayy xdddddddddddddddddddd
Your thread sucks
And thus the wait for green begins.
Are you fucking serious?
>>26843447
>>26843473
It managed to get to #3
Obviously I'm doing something right
>>26843492
That's what I said about the Hemera threads and look how that turned out
>>26843492
As long as we get green we're good
>when u bump
>>26843069
>>26843069
My phallus is erect now so post moar fagits
>>26839220
>“My daughter. She’ll be entering Canterlot High soon. Says her current school’s too preppy for her. I agree.”
>Quick! Think of something fast!
“Oh really? Well, uh, I go to Canterlot High! Neat, eh?”
>“I know. I have your files.”
“Oh. Uh, guess I forgot?”
>The commissioner puts his glasses back on as he stands up with a yawn.
>“Look, I know you’re no troubled kid, alright? I’ve seen my fair share of troubled kids long, long ago in this City,” his eyes seem distant at that last part, “but I want you to stay that way. By staying out of trouble. Oh, and if you meet my daughter...don’t you dare hit on her.”
>You stand up with a nod of understanding.
“Yes sir, Officer Gordon.”
>He grumbles as he opens the door.
“It’s Commissioner Gordon, Anon…You and Sunset are free to leave now.”
>He smirks under his moustache.
>“Just try and make a better excuse for leaving school with her other than ‘she was down’, will ya?”
>You laugh carefully.
“Heh. Yes, sir.”
>He pats you on the back as you leave the place with him.
>“I’m kiddin’. Don’t worry about it, I’ll see what I can do. See ya around, son.”
Sorry for lack of content, will stay up late to write more if I cane.
>>26844231
We have no drawfags though ;_;
>>26844246
Why does that file image make my bat nipples erect?
Shocker anon here.
So, I might've figured out how Shocker hooked up with the Power Ponies in the previous thread.
Spoiler alert: it's most likely going to be a fucking cop out.
>>26844272
Because that's the iteration prtrayed by Bryan Dilf Cranston
>>26844274
I'm willing to look past it. You're stuff's been pretty good so far.
>>26844274
inb4 mind control
>>26844246
Cool Beans as always.
>>26843069
What are you guys doing right now?
I'm playing Bam Ham Asylum.
>>26844246
>no drawfags
fuck! my erection is half hard now
I would like to get in on this. Heroes have always been my thing, mind if I start posting some green later?
>>26843069
Bump
>>26844479
Alright alright alright
>>26844479
All are welcome Anon. Any characters are fine as well.
>>26844432
Rewatching Venture Bros. Man did they have weird villains that would fit perfectly in these stories.
>>26844479
No. All are welcome here, except you. Fuck off, this is /mlp/, we don't want your greenshit.
>>26844246
Goals for tonight:
>play Mortal Kombat
>Wank to green
>Get Beans to watch Colored Pebbles
http://youtu.be/-3ixfTKGG8A
>>26844542
I can either attempt to write on painkillers or watch Rainbow Rocks and try another review. What would you prefer?
>>26844570
Sit back.
Relax.
Make yourself some popcorn.
Watch the movie.
>>26844570
Out of sheer morbid curiosity, the review.
>>26844586
>>26844612
The review it is, then.
>>26844612
>>26844570
Do the funny screencap thing you did for the first few minutes like last time
>>26844637
>10 seconds into Rainbow and chill and she gives you this muffin
Power.
Was all I desired...
But all that grew inside me, was a darkness I acquirrred.
When I began to fall, and I lost the path ahead
That's when your friendship found me
And it lifted me instead
Like the Phoenix burning bright in the skyyyy, I'll show there's another side to me you can't denyyyy
>>26844772
I may not know what the future holds, but hear me when I say
That my past does not define me, cause my past is not todayyy.
>>26844791
Ambition. Was what I believed, would be the only thing to set me free
But when it disappeared and I found myself alone
That's when you came and guided me
And I felt like I was hoooome
>>26844834
Like the Phoenix burning bright in the skyyy
I'll show there's another side to me, you can't denyyyy
I may not know what the future hold, but hear me when I say
That my past does not define me, cause my past is not todayyyyyyyyyy
>>26844772
>>26844791
>>26844834
>>26844853
So would you guys say this little ditty was before or after Friendship Games, chronologically?Does Spider-Shim have access to this fancy firey magic form? Can she turn into Daydream Shimmer? Did the Friendship Games where shit went further south than the Antarctic even happen?
>>26844885
We've already divulged far enough from the actual movies to go back.
All friendship, magic, or whatever the fuck should just be thrown out of the windows because it would fuck with the story's original premise. Just have a modern setting where every character acts about the same as it turns into its own thing.
>The night had started off innocently enough.
>Sunset had introduced you to her friends, who, for some reason you couldn't quite put your finger on, seemed familiar.
>You waved that feeling off as just feeling slightly tipsy.
>She had business to attend to, no doubt of the kind you were already familiar with, but she left you with her friends to get acquainted.
>Several drinks later, you were yakking it up with them like they were already your best friends.
>You can't recall what subject matters you all broached, but you're certain you all had a good time.
>Pinkamena Diana Pie, or as she prefers to go by, Pinkie, seemed to be the "annoying yet fun to hang out with friend" type.
>Rarity seemed to be a stuck up fashionista, though she seemed to open up a much more compassionate and generous side as you talked.
>Applejack, probably the most straightforward and honest person you've met.
>Fluttershy was easily the shyest of the six, even after some alcohol loosened up her tongue some, and also the kindest too.
>Rainbow Dash, while a braggart, definitely had that tomboyish charm to her, and was surprisingly loyal to her friends.
>Twilight Sparkle, totally a freaking bookworm, yet the glue that held them all together.
>Next thing you knew, you were in your bed.
>But not alone.
>Sharing your bed with the six beauties from last night.
>And in costume.
>Very familiar costumes.
>From what you can barely recall last night before it became an utter blur, one of them suggested "costume play".
>For some reason, everyone, including you, were on board with the idea.
>You're weren't exactly sure what happened, but judging by the soreness of your dick, and their utterly blissful smiles, it wasn't too hard to puzzle out.
>Sighing, you headed into the kitchen to cook something up for your "guests". If you had to be in an awkward situation, you'd prefer it if everyone had their bellies full at least.
>>26845216
alcohol, the great equalizer
>>26845216
So, is Shocker going to tell their identities to the other villians?
>>26845275
Nah, aside from Trixie, he'll more or less keep his yap shut about their identities. As for Trixie, she was more or less being blunt about it, yet no one noticed until Shocker pointed it out.
Beans has been pretty quiet
>>26845341
Either he's still watching it, or typing out his review, which the last one was 7 posts long.
>>26845216
Please do more of this. I'm curious of what happens next
>>26845349
Last time he gave little updates in the middle of it
http://youtu.be/-E0oiKjLzTc
>"That's a cute outfit. Did your husband give it to you?"
You will never hear jokes like that in movies ever again
>>26845398
Honestly the best line of the film.
>>26845398
holy shit that's awesome
>>26845430
>not "You're the one who's out Gobby...out of your mind!"
>>26845475
>not "I have a father. His name is Ben Parker"
>>26845497
>not "ITSY BITSY SPIDER"
>>26845507
>not "I SURRENDAH"
http://youtu.be/Txnf4s7eWs0
Then there's scenes that tug at your heart strings without even using words
>>26845520
>>26845475
>>26845497
>>26845507
nope. >>26845398 That line right there.
Outta the way small update coming through.
Continuing from:
http://pastebin.com/crUhxGkS
>One brief trip to the nearby McDicks later and you're loaded with piping hot pancakes.
>Truth be told, they're probably better than the ones you would've made.
>Fumbling with your key fob for a moment you find the correct one and open the door to your apartment.
>"Morning 'non."
>Comes Sunset's voice, albeit significantly more haggard than her usual cheery self.
>Looking towards the sound reveals Ms. Shimmer seated at the kitchen table, no longer wearing her ruined costume.
"Good to see you up and about."
>You say.
"Feeling better I take it?
>Sunset shakes her head.
>"Not really, I'd just feel awful if I spent all day making you look after me."
>She smiles lightly.
>"I'm a big girl now after all."
"Fair enough."
>Is your response.
>Placing the paper bag in your hand down on the table you pull up your own chair.
"I picked up some grub, figured something sweet would help perk you up."
>Sunset smiles.
>"Pancakes?"
>Asks the injured heroine before you.
"You know it."
>You reply as you pull the styrofoam serving trays out of the bag and set them down on the table
"Dig in Shim-Sham, it's not gonna stay hot forever."
>>26845637
>You are now Kingpin.
>The big bad Mother-Hubbard of this city's organized crime scene, and you are ecstatic.
>Not only did your diversionary bank robbery distract that meddling Spider-Woman from stopping your goon squad nabbing some very important military equipment down by the marina last night, but she also got her sorry ass beaten by Kraven the Hunter.
>He hadn't even been a part of your plan.
>He showed up of his own accord.
>No matter, his appearance still help advance your goals.
>Maybe you should send him a thank-you note.
>As if!
>But on the topic of an injured Spider-Woman...
>This could be your chance to get rid of the worrysome webslinger once and for all.
>No more hang-ups in your schedule, no more interrupted deliveries to your clients.
>Just you, and complete control of Manehatten.
>Yes, that sounds like a wonderful idea.
>Smiling wretchedly you lift your desk phone from its cradle and dial the number of a very special "acquaintance".
>The phone rings once.
>Twice.
>Three times before you hear the other end pick up.
>"Hello?"
>Says a voice like nails on a chalkboard.
>It's him all right.
"Good morning Mr. Wilson."
>You say loudly.
"I have a job for you."
>>26845652
This going to be really good or really bad. Either way HYPE
>>26845652
Not Mr. Wilson! He is gonna slap you in the ass in a major way.
>>26845637
>>26845652
These two were supposed to be part of last night's update, andivegot more in reserve that I'm hoping to post later tonight.
>>26845507
I'm scared to ask, buuuut.....
What do ya think of rainbow rocks?
>>26845985HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPS HIPSpatience, then I'll tell you
>>26846049
Hmmmmmmmm
Something tells me there's a lot of sexy hips in the movie
>>26846067
Well it does contain Adagio so...
>>26846105
Sunset's hips > Adagio's
Adagio knows how to move 'em, but she ain't got 'em as much as the Shim-Sham
>>26846105
>>26846138
You guys obviously haven't seen Rarity work dem hips
http://youtu.be/6C7D5Tr5Sj0
>>26845652
>1800 Fuck you
This had better not be who I think it is.
>>26846188
>>26846138
What fresh heresy is this
Web sling and chill?
Fokin ell, things are slow today.
>"Got to fight just, to keep them aliiive"
>>26847014
Keep in mind that the majority of posts in the previous thread was just random Anon's circle jerking over Beans and his EQG review.
He has posted little green and has yet to post his review of Fruity Pebbles, so there isn't much for people to circlejerk about.
>>26847120
I'm also waiting for more Shocker and Rommate Anon shenanigans.
And maybe some new spider-shim art
>>26844246
And here am I, trying to sketch Spider Shim/Doc Oct fight from previous thread. Sadly I cannot into action scenes or good looking spider hips T_T
>>26847154
>good looking spider hips.
Top kek f@m
>>26845216
>As expected, the talk, was, indeed, awkward.
>After some talks over breakfast, they had decided not to utterly wreck your shit for deflowering them.
>As a matter of fact, they were willing to give that another shot, under more sober conditions.
>Apparently, Sunny had been bragging about your prowess in bed, and you did not disappoint.
>Add that to you apparently smooth talking them last night, and now they're wanting to date you, and get to know you better.
>Fuck.
Bed boop
>>26847948
>>26843069
>"With great power, there must also come great responsibility"
>Those were Celestia's last words to you before she died
>Well, before you ran away
>But now you are both on good terms
>Which is good
>You admit, you don't have a very tragic backstory
>You were evil for a while
>Then you stopped being evil
>Some time later, you acquired the powers of a spider
>And here you are
>The Baconastic Arachnid-friend
>Thinking to yourself
>Or is it all exposition?
>You can't separate your thoughts from what seems to be an omnipresent voice
>It's been driving you insane
>It's been like that as long as you can remember
>It didn't used to be like this
>Luckily your arthropod early warning system is tingling
>Something is up
>Something...villainy
>You scan around from the top of the school building
>Because of course you'd be at school
>It's actually the center of the town
>Well, the parts of town that matter
>You see two young hooligans trying to steal a car
>You angel jump from the top
>And gracefully fall into some trees
>Some might think that was your plan
>Others may say that you are an inadequate super-hero (you prefer super-hero over super-heroin. It easier to say and doesn't take that much out of the context)
>To each there own
>It doesn't matter what other may think of your prowess
>All that matters here is that you are closer to the villains you slowly creep out of the trees. covered in the shadows of the night
>Like some pervert
"Carpooling tonight, boys?"
>"Whuh?"
>*SMACK!*
>You slug one of the kids
>He's out cold
>"W-wait!"
>*KABLAM*
>The other one is down
>You tie them up with your webbing
>You hear voices in the distance
>You jump towards the bushes
>You don't like to get praised, but you do enjoy seeing the faces of the people you've helped
>At least you think you do
>You are kind of new to this superheroing thing
>"We found your car keys, man! You don' have to break into your c-ca..."
>>26849033
>A group of kids stares at the two "culprits" you caught earlier
>Looks like it's time to make your dashing exist into the night
>You run out of the bushes into the opposite direction
>When you've gained enough momentum you jump and shoot your web
>It sticks to a nearby building
>There are always nearby buildings
>You aren't sure you've ever seen them before or what they actually are
>But you are thankful that they are there
>And so ends the first night of heroics for the newest protector of
>...
>um...
>your home town!
>The Phenomenal Wallcrawling Person!
>You are still thinking of a name
>>26849042
Likin it man
>>26849033
>>26849042
Bump idk
Bump for spider shim
Not spoder-sham but whatever.
>>26850283
still does the job
>>26850283
Now Shocker Anon has to deal with another Spider Girl. Wonder what Sunset, the Power Ponies and Trixie have to say about that?
>>26846138
>when u write a review
>>26849042
>You are Sunset Shimmer
>Also known as The Exceptional Webweaving Avenger
>You are still working on the name
>After your first night as a vigilante, you didn't have much to show
>You beat up two honor students designated drivers who had lost their car keys
>The school newspaper, the weekly trumpet, is calling you a dangerous degenerate
>The students go around always in groups, just in case you strike again
>It was just an honest mistake
>Tonight will be different
>You put on your make-shift red and black suit and jump out of the window of your room
>Your room is on the first floor so it isn't as exciting as you hoped it would be
>You start running through the neighborhood
>It just occurred to you that you live in the suburbs and there aren't tall buildings around
>You walk back home
>>26850569
>You take off your mask and put your jacket over your red anorak with a crude spider drawn over it
>You put your mask and wallet in a bag pack
>You leave your house through the door this time
>You walk to the bus stop and sit
>
>Half an hour late the bus arrives
>After a twenty minute drive, you are reach Canterlot High
>You climb to the top of the school and sulk
>Waiting for crime
>You are very convinced that sulking is a major part of the super hero business
>20 minutes later, you feel something
>Your danger spotting sense is tingling
>UMPF! You love it when that happens
>You take off your jacket, carefully fold it and put it in your backpack
>You leave the backpack where it is
>You put on your mask and jump
>This time webswinging from the school building
>Going in circles, trying to find the culprits
>And there they are
>Vandals, defacing school property
>Graffiti artists is the more politically correct term
>You let go of your web and jump right behind them
A little late for artistic endeavors, isn't it?
>The hoodlums turn in surprise and you smack them both in the face
>Easy
>Just like last night
>"WHAT ARE YOU DOING?"
>huh?
>You turn around and see 3 students there
>With cameras
"I...was stopping vandals from defacing public property?"
>"THEY WERE PAINTING A MURAL FOR THE GIRL THAT DROWNED SAVING 13 TODDLERS!"
"Ah...well...b-but"
>"THEY HAD THE SCHOOL'S PERMISSION!"
"I...see...in that case...I better be going"
>You jump and climb the gymnasium
>After that you once again climb back to your sulkspot
>That's enough crime fighting for one night
>You look around for your bag
>It's not there
>You didn't stick it with your webbing
>The wind must have blown it away
>
>You don't have any bus money on you
>You climb down, take off your mask and turn your shirt inside out
>So no one can see the spider and realize your true identity
>You walk home
>Ten minutes into the trek and it starts raining
>>26850719
>You put your hood up, but it barely makes a difference
>It took you about an hour to get back home
>One hot bath and this night will be behind you
>You walk into your room
>It's full of raccoons
>You forgot to shut the window
>You also haven't thrown the trash in 3 weeks
>You close the door and you take a shower
>You walk into the living room and fall face first on the couch
>Tomorrow
"Tomorrow will be a better day"
>>26850283
Not gonna lie:
That's sexier than spider-shim.
>>26850569
>>26850719
>>26850748
Don't worry sunset
Parker Luck might mean the world takes a dump all over you whenever it can
But all the hotties will fall for you
>>26850983
Guys or girls?
>>26851048
why not both?
>>26851072
I was thinking the same thing but who would Sunset get?
>>26850447
Painkillers made me fall asleep. Will have to continue tomorrow. To make it up to you guys, I shall sing to deliver in some way or form like I did yesterday.
Oh, and more green coming today.
>>26851103
What part of All the Hotties was hard to understand?
>>26851248
Ok you have a point.
>>26850283
>>26850415
>It has been months since you more or less officially started dating the Power Ponies as well, god help your soul.
>Much like Sunny, they would tend to prevent your crime sprees by promises of a good time.
>And every time, you would fall for it, hook, line, and sinker.
>Thankfully, they would also come to you one member at a time.
>You're pretty most of the men of New York would try to murder the shit out of you if they saw you going out with six girls.
>Much to your surprise, they actually took you out on actual DATES, and only afterwords they would do the deed.
>Guess they were serious about the "getting to know you" part.
>Much to your surprise, Sunny and Trixie are okay with you also dating the Power Ponies.
>Then again, they probably figure six more girls to please was punishment enough.
>All in all, you were having a good time, foiled crimes aside.
>And then she showed up.
Also,
>>26850569
>>26850719
>>26850748
God dang.
>>26851222
Trips confirm good things are cumming
>>26851222
I meant to continue reviewing it tonight. Sorry.
What can I do other than post more green to make it up to you all?
>pic related, proof I was working on it
>>26851323
And don't worry, I promise you all will see the review tonight
>>26851323
>confusing orange with purple
Sheesh, I can tell I was on painkillers writing this.
>>26851323
Equestria Hips 2: Taco Tuesday
>>26844246
>Walking into the school was refreshing…in the way that it wasn’t at all.
>The hallways were quiet as you entered--probably because they heard what happened with you and Sunset yesterday.
>It’s alright, you think the silence is nice.
>It’d be nicer if you weren’t mad at Sunset, but nooooo!
>She abandoned you! Left you for dead!
>You bet Spider-Woman wouldn’t leave someone they cared about behind, especially after that deep talk the two of you had!
>YOU BOUGHT HER LUNCH, GODDAMMIT!
>If it weren’t for Spider-Woman...
>...Spider-Woman.
>You sigh at your locker as even Flash and his friends back off for once.
>You rest your head against it.
>My god, you haven’t crushed on someone so hard since you first met Shimmer.
>It’s getting really bad now, you’re obsessed with her…
>You remember how she looked perfect from right down to her perfect hair to her amazing hips.
>Last night was a great fap thanks to this imagery…
>Her attitude, her voice, and her body are all so fucking perfect!
>One thing that sticks out was the moment where she saw Doc-Ock get away, though.
>During those few seconds, it was like her whole demeanor changed from a witty web-slinger to a guilty and depressed girl with a hint of longingness.
>That irks you.
>You thought that seeing Spider-Woman even more closely would make you see some answers...but you only have more questions.
>Why was she so down?
>What are her reasons?
>Another thing that stuck out was what she said to you before zipping away via web-slinging.
>Calling you a cutie, bending over and blowing you a kiss…
>By god that was like a second sexual awakening.
>You’re not one to have fully-fledged fantasies over girls, but you have been, and it’s making you feel...weird.
>>26851407
he's going to feel like such a fucking asshole once he finds out they're one and the same, and I will laugh my way through it.
>>26851407
is there a pastebin for this?
>>26851407
I sense a disturbance in the.....
Speed Force
>>26851449
The Pastebin has just been updated to the latest green.
>http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Hips
Spoder
>>26851535
Im about to go to sleep, or schould i stay up another hour or two?
because bored
>You are Sunset Shimmer, well right now your Spider Woman but you get the point.
>It's not easy being a hero, super or not, but you have to admit, your job has been a lot easier since the newest villain moved into town.
>Usually you'd have to deal with Rhino or maybe the Green Goblin, now however they're too scared to leave their hideouts nevermind commit crimes.
>Now you might be wondering why that is, well its a long story, but i'll tell you the basics.
>This all started when venom, an alien symbiote (Did i spell it right?) Attacked my school Canterlot high, it was looking for me, but anyone who got in its way was a target, eventually it bonded with my friend twilight, and it corrupted her, it awakened powers hidden deep within her, and began a rampage that leveled a portion of the city before i could stop it, i assumed that venom had been killed, it wasn't.
>About a year after that venom returned, stronger than before, he crushed the Power Ponies with ease, and was on the verge of killing me.
>that's when he arrived...
I might add more later.
>>26852829
>add more later
you barely added anything now
>>26852829
im interested
continue
>This one is weak.
>Weak, yes. Weak.
>The first one.
>The only one.
>There are more.
>Just like the others.
>This one is getting empty.
>Already?
>Already. Weak and empty.
>A new one is what we need.
>One to fill us up, yes.
>To feed us.
>A strong one.
>A full one.
>Where?
>Who?
>This one is not finished.
>Yes, we will wait then.
>Wait. A new one soon.
>”Shut the fuck up!”
>>26853149
>The two men cast a dubious glance towards their partner.
>”Uh, boss?”
>One of them, the stouter one, shines his flashlight on ‘boss.’
>”Everything okay?”
>The second partner, bald skinny, chuckles.
>”Ya’ think he don’ lost it?”
>The stout one shrugs. “Dunno’.”
>”Shut up, dumbasses.”
>The third man speaks for the first time after his sudden outburst, his previously frantic and deranged tone now a cool and concise.
>”Just get back to work. I’ll keep watch on the door.”
>He turns back towards the door with a click of the tongue.
>The stout man keeps his light pinned on the boss for a moment longer before returning his partner. He mouths something to the balding man before returning to his work.
“Alright… that’s enough.”
>You briefly scroll through the twenty-odd pictures before setting the camera aside.
>Time to get down to business.
>You slip through the small skylight, sticking to the roof, and crawl over the two men currently stuffing everything in sight into large duffel bags.
>Attaching a string of web to the ceiling, you start to let yourself slide down head-first while using your feet as a grip.
>You stop once you’re eye level with the men, right behind them.
“Hey.”
>They freeze and turn their heads simultaneously.
“How’s it hangin’?”
>...
…
>...It sounded funnier in your head.
>The balding man strikes first.
>He swings his fist downward in an arc aimed right at your face.
>Thankfully, his swing is slow and untrained. It gives you plenty of time to dodge, swing back, flip, and then use the momentum of the web swing to send a powerful kick right to the man’s forehead.
>He flies through the air, knocking over a couple of stands before slamming into the wall.
>With a heavy thunk, the man slides down to the floor in a defeated lump.
>...Now for the fat one.
>>26853171
>When you turn to face the second goon, you find him cowering behind the ‘boss’ from before.
>Your eyes widen at the sight of him.
>Close up, the boss looks like shit.
>His hair is frayed and greasy, his skin is pale and wrinkly, and his beady, sunken eyes seem to stare at your own.
>”Fuckin’ bitch!”
>He doesn’t waste any time in making his move.
>He dashes towards you, raising a pipe wrench high above his head.
>When he gets within your reach, you spring forward and grab at the wrench, but the only thing to meet your palm is the cool night air.
>Huh?
>All the sudden, something heavy is sent right into your unprotected right side.
“Guh-!”
>You’re knocked breathless, and flat on your face.
>The boss capsizes on the opportunity, rushing over to swing the wrench right into your forehead, but you roll over just in time.
>You pull yourself off the ground as the boss readies his weapon for another swing.
>Clearly, he wasn’t one to underestimate.
>Not on the same level as some of the more ‘unique’ people you’ve squared off with, but not your average thug either.
>...Who is this guy?
>The man charges again, raising his Wrench just as he did the last time.
>This time, however, you slide back and send a strand of web right into the man’s face.
>He yelps, dropping the pipe and cupping his hands over his face.
>You lunge out and send a powerful punch right to the man’s chest. He’s blown back against the wall, much like the balding man before.
>>26853183
>What is this?
>What is this?
>It is losing.
>Losing?
>Losing, yes.
>Losing to another of its kind.
>No, not the same.
>Not the same?
>Not the same. It is a spider.
>It is a human.
>It has the blood of a spider.
>How?
>Indeed.
>...It is stronger.
>Yes, strong. It should make for a good meal.
>A spider to feed on?
>A spider.
>Spider, then.
-----
>The stout man offered little resistance. He went down rather quickly.
>You have to give him some credit, though. Not running away when he had the chance was pretty ballsy.
>It also made your job a whole lot easier.
>You currently have all three of them tied up in a ball of web in the corner of the store.
>The the two henchmen lay silently within the entanglement, but the boss will stir or moan every now and then.
>Resilient, he is.
>You shrug your shoulders and sling a web at the fire alarm.
>We’ll see how resilient he is behind bars.
>You exit the mess of a store just as the alarm starts to blare.
“‘Wonder what they’ll call this one…”
Sorry if it's a bit rough, didn't have much time to go back through it.
>>26852898
Better than nothing though.
>>26852902
Alright dude.
>>26852829
>Here you was, about to have your head ripped off by a very pissed off Venom and your backup was strown about the park, hell you wasn't even sure if they were even breathing.
>You didn't think it would end like this, your body burned, it hurt to breathe, bastard broke a few ribs for sure, and maybe your leg you couldn't tell due to how much everything hurt, and this was gonna be it, that hurt worse in a way, knowing that Venom was gonna kill you, then the Power Ponies, then the rest of Canterlot.
>You watched as Venom grabbed a manhole cover and began walking over to you, hissing and laughing, he knew he had won.
>taking position over you, he lowered the Cover to your neck, taking aim, he was gonna crush your neck, and you had no fight left in you, this was it.
>he lifted the cover up over his head, ready to finish you, you closed your eyes, tears began to escape as you awaited your fate.
>but instead of hearing your neck snap you heard something else instead...
>The most terrifying shriek you had ever heard ripped through the park, Venom turned and through the cover at something, you couldn't see it properly, whatever it was.
More in a bit.
>>26853214This is perfect
>>26853243
>It took you five minute to muster the energy to push yourself up, and another five to make your way over to where Venom was, your leg was definitly broken, but you had to fight Venom, somehow.
>You made it across the park, what you saw shocked you.
>Venom was beaten, maybe even worse than you, he was struggling to keep his form together, while also watching around for whatever had beaten it, you saw the look in Venom's eyes, they had the same look of fear you had not too long ago.
>you yourself was kinda worried, Venom wasn't really the one you'd see cowering in the corner.
>Just when you was about to strike Venom saw you, fear was instantly replaced with rage as he began to sprint towards you.
>"YOU..! YOU SENT MONSTER TO KILL VENOM! VENOM WON'T LET YOU! VENOM WILL CRUSH SPIDER!"
>He didn't get to finish before he was torn in two... you nearly threw up after that, you watched as Venom's body began to dissipate into a nearby drain, you looked for the monster Venom mentioned, but you couldn't see anything, as you turned around to go check on the Power Ponies you found "him" inches away from your face...
Coninued in a bit.
>>26853391
It shines.
Like rainbows.
Beans and Roommate Anon pls
>>26853834
I accidentally deleted 16 pages I wrote today. They were shitty anyways, but I'm writing as we speak.
Also, never write on painkillers, because your writing turns to shit.
>>26853541
>You wouldn't lie, you were scared right now.
>It was almost identical to Venom, apart from a few features.
>he was green, almost completely green, except from two black spots on his face, sorta looks like a question mark.
>he also stood differently, Venom was more animal like in his movements, Big Green here however stands like a human, he looks more human all together actually.
>He raised his hand and placed it on your shoulder and you instantly tensed up, instead of being ripped apart by The Big Green he patted your shoulder, it was strange, hell it was way more gentle than what she was expecting, and then he spoke.
>"Little Spider is okay now?"
>you blinked behind your mask, slightly amazed and also a little curious, his voice was... odd, it was like static, yet you could detect more, like a tone, it... it sounded worried?
>"Little spider is still scared? Do i scare little spider? I don't want Little spider to be scared"
>you noticed that he began to frown, he didn't have eyebrows so you couldn't be sure how you knew, but you felt a little bad that this... Green Venom was worried about you, you could almost sense its... Worry?
"I'm fine, thanks to you, who are you?"
>he looks at you, no longer frowning, instead he has on the most intense poker face you've ever seen.
>"I do not know..."
>>26853927
Is anyone liking this so far? cause if not i'll stop wasting posts and wait for the others to do their thing.
>>26854035
there a bit on the short side but overall im enjoying it so far
>>26854035
Literally what >>26854053 said.
>>26854035
It's ok. Post a bit more
>>26850748
>You are Sunset Shimmer
>Also known as the Botsching Spider Failure
>You are still working on the name
>It's day three of your heroic life
>The alarm rang but you haven't left your bed
>You'd just rather stare at the celing than go out
>But you don't have much of a choice
>You slowly get up
>You walk to your room
>You crack the door and peek in
>You can't see any raccoons
>You creep right in and open one of your draws
>You take a shirt and a pair of socks and exit
>This time, closing the window
>You put on your clothes and look for your bag
>You remember that it got blown away
>You rummage around the house to find a replacement
>An old courier bag
>Ripped up
>Holes
>Filled with trash
>You clean it as much as you can and put your books in it
>On the way to the door, you see your masking drying over the heater
>With your hand on the doorknob, you ponnder if you take your costume
>After last night, you don't think you should ever put on that costume
>Who are you doing it for any way?
>The people?
>Apparently not
>The memory of your fallen mentor?
>She's still alive
>Are you trying to validate yourself in a way?
>Not so much guide by the virtues of good, but by narcissism
>You bite your lip
>Maybe it would be a good idea to give yourself a break
>Just for today
>But somehow you don't seem comforted by these thoughts
"Everybody makes mistakes, Sunset"
>You grab the mask and the sweatshirt and stuff them in your bag
>You leave the house with a faint sense that you have conquered yourself
>You head to school
>Tonight it will be different
>>26854035
I'm enjoying it, keep it up.
>>26853834
>There are people who actively enjoy my story.
Masochism is unhealthy Anon.
That said I'm writing at the moment. Update soon.
>>26854104
>"Villainous Vandal Victimizes Volunteers! Read all about it!"
>The front page of The weekly trumpet
>Twice in one week
>You are sure that's not how weekly newspapers should work
>The article tells the story of how two volunteers were attacked by a masked criminal while they were painting a murrel
>It is a pretty accurate depiction of the events
>There is even a picture of you
>A grainy one
>Unfocused
>Bad choice of the lens
>You could take better pictures than this guy
>Could you?
>No...
>You decide not to dwell on this idea any further
>You have classes to get to and a night watch to plan
>>26854119
>It's 8 o'clock
>You are at the usual sulkspot
>Your mask is off
>The wind is messing up your hair
>But it feels good
>Today will be the day
>You have everything figured out
>You will carefully observe the area
>You will not engage unless you are certain that a crime is occurring
>You will anounce your presence so that there won't be any more hiccups
"Third time's the charm"
>Let's hope it won't be a hat trick
>You breathe deeply
>You are great
>You will make it
>You are
>The Adventurous Rooftop-sulker
>Still working on the name
>You smile to yourself and you put on the mask
>You angel jump, this time swinging from a web
>Off to downtown
>>26854125
>You've been swinging from buildings and jumping on rooftops for about half an hour
>Nothing exciting
>This is good
>That means that everyone is safe and okay
>As you jump over an alley, you get an erogenous sensation through your spine and back
>The insectoid danger clock
>Something is up
>You look down in the alley
>A man with an above avarage build, a woman in a fancy coat and a little child
>Most likely a family
>There's something else
>Someone is following them
>You stick on a wall you crawl towards them all
>The guy at the back looks suspicious
>But you can't pounce yet
>You can't stop a crime if there is no crime
>He yells something to the big guy at the front
>He turns
>The "criminal" walks towards him
>You hear them talking but you can't make out what they are saying
>Maybe he just wanted the time
>Or he's a bum and wants a buck
>Just because someone looks suspicious doesn't mean they are
>Right?
>You hear a gunshot
"Oh no..."
>Your heart starts racing
>Time slows down
>The big fella is falling on the ground
>The man has a smoking gun
>You leap from the wall towards them
>The gun is aimed directly at the woman
>You web the shooter's hand and pull it upward
>He fires in the air
>The bullet scratches your mask
>You fall down, hand curled into a fist
>One hit in the jaw and he's down
>You quickly web him up
>You turn towards the family
>The woman is in shock
"Where is the nearest hospital?"
>She snaps out of it
>"10 blocks from here."
>You grab the wounded man and lift him over your shoulder
"He'll be alright. I promise."
>You jump and swing
>>26854146
>It's harder to swing around with one hand
>But you have no choice
>Everything happened so fast
>Why didn't you act sooner?
>The one time you had to act on impulse and you didn't
>Now a man could die because of you
>No
>He won't die
>You'll get him there on time
>"H-hey...Land us on a roof, would ya?"
>You are surpised he can talk
"I can't do that sir. I need to get you to the hospital"
>"Don't worry, I am a doctor"
>Surprsingly, his words calm you down
>You land on a nearby building
>You lean him against a chimney
"Do you need anything? What should I bring you?"
>He slowly turns his head to you
>"I...need a lighter"
>A lighter?
>Maybe he wants to disinfect the wound
>You rummage through your bag
>You find a lighter
>You click it
>It works
>You hand it to him
>He takes out a cigarette and lights it
>Your eyes widen
"Sir, we have to get you to the hospital! You have been shot!"
>"Yeah...I have. The bullet is right next to my heart. I can't be saved. No matter how much they try"
>No
>>26854155
>You can feel your eyes watering up
"Sssir I-I m-must take y-you t-t-to the h-h-ospital"
>You start to stutter
>You reach out to lift him, but your hand are shaking
>He sees this and grabs your hand gently
>This completly breaks your heart
>You take off your mask and start and burry your face in your hands
>You start crying loudly
"I-I s-s-h-sh-sho-uld ha-a-ave done s-s-something!"
>The man looks at you
>He again takes your hand
>"You did do something, kid. You saved my son and wife. If it wasn't for you, the three of us would have been dead now."
>He's barely breathing
"I-i-i pro-o-mi-i-sed to bring y-ou ba-back safely"
>He smiles a bit
>"You shouldn't make promises you can't keep, kid"
>He looks at his cigarette
>"I promised my wife, I would stop smoking. Look at me now"
>He start laughing, but his laughter quickl turns into a cough
>He pulls out his cigarette box and hands it to you
>"You look like you can use one"
>He smiles
>He has the warmest smile you have ever seen
>You take the box, but you don't pull out a cigarette
>"You shouldn't be sad, kid. Sadness doesn't fit a pretty face like yours"
>Your cheeks were already red, but you feel them blush
>"You shouldn't be sad. I know what it's like to feel responsible for someone's death. I also know what it's like to save someone. Instead of thinking that you lost one life tonight, thinking of it like...
>He starts coughing violently
>"...you saved...two"
>He falls on his side
>
>This is your darkest moment
>>26854165
>You lift his body
>You walk towards the edge of the roof
>The hospital was around the corner
>Why did you listen to him?
>Another set of tears start boiling up
>You look towards this man
>He's as large as an ox
>White hair
>Fancy suite
>Aside from the blood
>A doctor even
>He had a family
>A wife
>A son
>This man lived a good life
>You saw it with how content he was in his final moments
>And yet
>It's still sad to see a life go
>No matter how good it was lead
>You examine his chest, where the wound is
>Your eyes widen
>He's moving!
>He is still breathing!
>There is time
>You jump off the building and swing towards the hospital
>You land right in front of a nurse
"This man has been shot! Help him!"
>The nurse barely has time to assimilate what is happening but she yells out for a doctor
>You leave the victim in front of her
>You vanish in the night
>>26854165
the feels are real
>>26854174
>You open the door of your home
>You take off your mask and look at it
>There is a little graze near the eye
>One side is covered in blood
>You throw it on the ground
>You don't have it in you to deal with this now
>You take off your bloodied sweatshirt, bundle it with your mask and throw them on the floor
>You take off all your clothes and sit on the couch
>You space out
>No actual thoughts have crossed your mind
>You look around
>You see the remote control and web it to yourself
>You turn on the TV
>You start searching the channels
>Nothing but soap operas
>Everything looks the same
>Channel after channel
>"Local millionaire dead"
>You stop
>You go back
>It's the late night news
>"...shot in an alley. He had a night out with his family to the cinema and was shot. Wife says A masked person jumped out of nowhere and knocked out the shooter, after which the vigilante took Tobias Kaine and brought him to the hospital. Sadly, he didn't make it. Tobias Kaine was known for his..."
>You stop listening after that
>You start grinding your teeth
>You could have done something
>Why didn't you do something?
>You kick the table with full force
>It crashes into the television set and breaks it
>That just makes you more angry
>You web the TV and throw it against the wall, destroying it completely
You stand up, lift your couch and throw it against the kitchen door
>The door and the couch are in ruins
>You see the bundle up mess that is your costume
>You throw it in your fireplace
>You reach for your bag in search of a lighter
>But you find something else
>The Tobias' tobacco box
>You feel yourself calming down
"You didn't lose one life tonight, but you saved two."
>You take out your costume
>Now covered in ash and blood
>You put it in your laundry basket
>You walk towards your couch and take your blanket
>You sit on the sofa and cover yourself
>You barely fell asleep that night, because of the raccoons
>>26854165
>"You shouldn't be sad. I know what it's like to feel responsible for someone's death. I also know what it's like to save someone. Instead of thinking that you lost one life tonight, thinking of it like...
>He starts coughing violently
>"...you saved...two"
Fantastically written. No joke, that's great. But god is it sad...
>>26854232
Thanks
Somehow the idea of a spider powered sunset really got my muse burning
I haven't written so much green in one day since the story request threads were still going on
>>26853927
>>26854035
Alright guys, and as to why its a bit on the short side, i'm using an xbox one, it's pure hell...
>You are Spider woman, and it's been a week since "The Green Spider" as everyone is calling it made its home here in Canterlot, right after it killed Venom and Spoke to you, it seemed to be almost lost in a way, like, he was only seeing everything for the first time, like a deer caught in the headlights?
>after you spoke he was suddenly attacked by the Power Ponies who took one look at the Green Spider and asumed the worst.
>he looked so scared when they attacked, like a child being scorned by its mother.
>you tried to stop them but it was too late, he ran, and managed to escape after taking a few bad hits.
>afterwards you went home, had a shower, tended your wounds and made yourself some food.
>you sat there most of the night trying to figure out what the Green Spider was, why it saved you, why it ran when it could of killed all of the Power Ponies... Easily...
>>26854281
Same happening with me. First time I've written green as I go along for a long time...
>>26851407
>You can even picture it now: after swinging off, she swings you up with her and takes you to an abandoned roof, makes a few jokes, then…
>“Anon, why weren’t you at the steps today?”
>Your thoughts are cut off as you startle off your locker.
>Sunset stands with a worried look on her face.
>You have a scowl on yours.
“Oh, I dunno. Guess I just left you there, huh?”
>You grab your books from your locker and promptly leave.
>You start to stride off until she rests a hand on your shoulder.
>“Anon, what’s wrong?”
“It’s obvious.”
>She sighs and follows you down the hallway.
>Shouldn’t she be heading to class?
>“Look, Anon, I’m sorry, but I swore you were right behind me!”
“Oh? Then why didn’t you nudge me before running off? Why didn’t you tell me to follow you?”
>“I did!”
>You scoff.
“When? Right after I said you were crazy for wanting to get out from our spot and we should hide where we were?”
>She falters.
“Look, Sunny, I’m not mad at you for abandoning me, what really hurts is that I did that all for you, THEN you left.”
>“Anon, it’s not like that.”
>She grabs on to your arm desperately.
>Damn what a strong grip…
“Oh? What was it like?”
>“I already told you!”
>You yank your arm out of her hands.
>It was oddly difficult though, like your sleeve was sticking to her.
“Look, unless you start talking to me about why you’re so secretive, and start actually communicating with me! Got it!?!?”
>>26854337
>You’re up in her face at this point.
>“Why do you care!? If I don’t want to talk about it, then why can’t you leave it alone!?”
“I can’t believe that you still don’t get it! Everyday I see you come to school, battered and limping with bruises all over, and when I ask, you never talk! Never! Then, right as you cry on me, I take you out to get food because I want you to feel better, and I hate it when you’re so sad every morning! I CARE ABOUT YOU! I LIKE YOU!!!”
>Her face goes from angry to shocked.
>“...Oh my god.”
“And every time I try to push those feelings to be your friend, I CAN’T! You’re always putting so much responsibility in things you won’t share! Why!? How can we even be friends if you don’t tell me how you feel!?”
>Your eyes start to stream tears as an audience forms of students in the hall.
“Can’t you just talk to me!? Tell me how you feel, let me help you, anything! I care! I don’t know what makes you think it’s wrong to tell me about what’s happening, but I care, Sunset!”
>Sunset’s head hangs low as her hair covers her face.
“Please! Just talk to me! I...I’m worried about you.”
>She looks up at you, eyes watering.
>Wordlessly, she quickly pulls you into a hug.
>“I’m sorry, Anon, but I just can’t.”
>She walks off, hands covering her eyes.
>Your heart aches.
>Badly.
>>26854104
>>26854119
>>26854125
>>26854146
>>26854155
>>26854165
>>26854174
>>26854197
>>26844737
fucking hell, keked harder than i should have, "share coke with uncle ben", KEK
>>26854337
>>26854373
Why must you hurt me in this way?
>>26854165
>>26854373
Feels. Everywhere I look I see Feels.
>>26854448
BECAUSE WE HAVE NO PICTURES OF SPIDER-SHIMMER AND THAT MAKES ME MAD
>>26854197
http://youtu.be/zzYs11rfYkg
(In case you weren't feeling enough
>>26854480
This man for New Princess S6/2016
~M.A Larson~
>>26854197
Well at least Shim saved Bruce and Martha
(You thought I didn't see the reference?)
>>26854510But Larson's my Princess...
>>26854373
All this time we've been having funny and sexy stories.
Now you guys start punching my heart.
You lovely bastards
>>26854550
Spill the Beans:
Is Twilight going to be Oracle or Batwoman?
>>26854610
Batgirl*
>>26854337
>>26854373
>>26854576
I already have Barbara Gordon.
See >>26844246 the posts before it on previous thread
>>26854197
>>26854337
>>26854373
>>26854550
Magical Alicorn Larson Thanks You
>>26854480
I'll make you spider-shim pictures on one condition.I get to make Anon venom
>>26854550
Is the multicolored stones review finished yet?
Is this the feelsiest thread on /mlp/?
Because it feels that way
>>26854956
This thread shot web on my heart.
>>26854885
SON, YOU JUST GOT YOURSELF A DEAL!
>>26854933
No, the "Horse Women 2: Rainbow Boogaloo" review is not finished yet. I'll get to it soon though.
>>26855055
Before I start writing the review, check the pastebin for my green
>http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
>>26854373
I have an idea for how anon will take his first steps into superhero-hood (and maybe find out Sunset's identity)
http://youtu.be/1YSohrrP0VY
It's that time again.
Time for me to post my painfully mediocre attempt at green to while we wait for the good writers to return.
Continuing from:
>>26845652
>You are the Spectacular Spider-Shim, and you are in love with these pancakes.
>Perhaps it's because you're hungry, or because you haven't had time for a decent breakfast recently, but either way they're exactly what you needed.
>Across from you sits Anon, preoccupied by his own plate of golden-brown deliciousness.
>The two of you eat in near silence.
>The only real sounds being the ear piercing shriek of plastic cutlery against the polystyrene plates, and the smacking of lips in between mouthfuls.
>Honestly it's nice to be able to sit down and share breakfast for once.
>Between school, work, and time spent prowling the city for troublemakers you don't have as much time in your schedule as you'd like.
>Most mornings you get up too late to have an actual meal so you end up starting your day with little more than a breakfast bar and some orange juice.
>>26855306
I just read Anon the pirate from your pastebin
I died just at the way you wrote the narrative
Someone should make a list of superheroes that anon could reasonably become and make a poll or something.
>>26855460
Stop whining you are one of the good writers.
>>26855476
Was going to do this myself till I volunteered to review all EQG movies. If someone made this, it would be great.
>>26855460
>painfully mediocre
Yeah, that's why your green is being read more than mine, right?
You're not mediore, you're good.
>>26855461
Ye be makin fun o' me writin' style lad? I'll has ye know I's graduated top o' me class in the seven seas! Argh!
>>26855476
My suggestions:
>The Flash
>Scarlet Spider
>Daredevil
>Agent Venom
>Captain America
>>26855554
I'll make the straw poll.
Anyone got some more suggestions?
>>26855614
We also have to consider villains
These threads have shown that The Shocker anon is popular
>>26855633
Got any suggestions?
>>26855633
morbius
Fucking captcha, goddamn.
>>26855460
>"So..."
>Anon is the first to break the silence.
>It doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure out what's on his mind.
>"About last night."
>He says, the trepidation in his voice is obvious.
>"I'm not going to ask how you got your powers, because it's probably scientifically impossible."
>To be fair, he's not wrong.
>Radioactive spider bites should give you cancer, not superpowers.
>Not that you're complaining mind you.
>"What I want to know is why?"
"Why?"
>"Yeah. why do you do this?"
>He asks plainly.
>What possesses you to dress up in coloured underwear and swing around the city roughing up crooks all night long?"
>You look away and sigh.
>There's the question you dreaded most.
>Not because it was a hard question, no, you dread it because it is far too easy for you to answer.
>You take a deep breath in as all the memories come flooding back.
>Your time at CHS, Twilight and the others, Celestia, your home, Equestria.
>It's all coming back.
"It's a long story."
>>26855659
Well there's the obvious
>The Shocker
But there's also Venom, possibly caused by a mistake Shimmer made
>>26855683
>Your voice is low and you can feel the guilt rise up in your chest.
>"If you don't want to tell me... It's fine."
>Anon says.
"No."
>You reply.
"It's just..."
>Deep breaths Sunset.
"When I was a little fi- Girl, I had a mentor."
>You begin.
"One of the first things she told me was that 'With great power, comes great responsibility.'"
>Another deep breath.
"Somewhere along the line I forgot about that, and I did a lot of things I'm not proud of."
>Anon's face softens from determined curiosity to genuine concern.
"In highschool I was the worst person you could imagine, I lied, I manipulated people, all for my own gain."
>"Sunset, I..."
"It wasn't until someone else who knew my mentor reminded me what she had said that I realized what I had become."
>As you continue your recollection of the darkest days of your life you can feel the tears fighting to free themselves.
"When I got these powers I... All I could think of was what she said to me."
>>26855614
Punisher
Mr. Freeze
Batman
Deathstroke
Bllue Beetle (either)
Mastermind/Mysterio
Green Lantern
All I can be bothered to think of right now.
>>26855691
>>26855672
Added.
>>26855633
>Venom
>Chameleon
>Electro
>Sandman
>>26855696
>The tears start to leak down your face.
>Anon reaches across the table and rests his hand on your forearm.
>"Sunset, it's okay."
"No, it's not."
>The words sound more like sobs than proper speech.
"I finally had the power to help others, not just tear them down."
>You clench the tablecloth in your hands tightly.
"It's my responsibility to help this city now, so I can make up for what I did, for what I tried to do."
>Anonymous gets up from his seat and wraps you up in a hug.
>"Why didn't you tell me?"
>He whispers quietly as he holds you.
"I-I didn't want you to get c-caught up in t-this."
>You say as you bury your face into his shoulder.
"I p-planned to move out when I first became the Spider-W-woman so if anyone out who I was, they wouldn't end up hurting you by g-going after m-me."
>Anon squeezes you gently.
>"Good thing you didn't."
>He says with a hint of mirth in his voice.
>"I wouldn't have been there to patch you up last night."
>Anonymous pulls away from you and gives you a smile.
>"Then how would you protect Manehatten?"
>>26855707
last one.
>>26855715
>His smile proves infectious and you can't help but smile back.
"Thanks for that, the first aid I mean..."
>"Don't mention it."
>He says as he pats your head.
>"You pay half the rent, if I let something happen to you I'd be homeless in a heartbeat."
>Despite the circumstances Anon's half-joke compels you to laugh.
>A second later he joins in, and you both share a hearty bout of guffaws and giggles.
"Thanks Anon... For everything."
>"Anytime Bacon Bits."
>With that Anonymous releases you and returns to his seat at the table.
>"Now."
>He begins.
>"How about we finish these pancakes before they go soggy?"
>>26855718
Crud, I also thought Ant-Man would be a good suggestion
>>26855700
If anon became the Green Lantern I think it would be funny if instead of the ring choosing him for representing the traits associated with willpower, the ring chose him for representing the traits associated with 4chan. Discord would take the place of the guardians
>>26855633
beetle
gravitonwould be pretty op though, also an avengers villain but i just like him
green goblin
spot
>>26855734
Ant-Man is now Other
>>26855728
>You are "Mr. Wilson" and you have just been given a very big task.
>Find and kill the Spider-Woman.
>It's not the kill part that's hard, it's the find.
>Secret identities are secret for a reason.
>But for the kind of dosh that Kingpin was offering you were more than willing to go to any length to find her, even of it means checking the wardrobe of everywoman in Manehatten.
>Hey, best case you find Spider-Woman, worst case you add some more panties to your collection.
>Speaking of which, you wonder what kind of underwear the web-slinging wench wears.
>With hips like hers, they've gotta be those high waisted hip-huggers.
>Damn, that's a hot mental image you've painted for yourself.
>File that one under "U" for "UNF!"
>You'll come back to that later, for now you've got to get ready to canvas the city.
>Pistols?
>Check.
>Katanas?
>Check.
>Deep emotional scarring from years of parental neglect and abuse?
>Double check.
>Que stylish Bodyslide to outside of your apartment
>Watch out world, Wade Wilson is on a mission!
The poll is up, and remember Other = Ant-Man
http://www.poll-maker.com/poll630236xB4b14148-26
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zrxt1JMunnY
>>26855783
Just so you know, I've made it clear multiple times I wasn't going to do Agent Venom, and stated that I'm not making him the Scarlet Spider. I know I won't make him Carnage for a fact, but regular Venom is a possibility a bit later on. I would've posted this earlier, but I'm writing a review for EQG:RR at the same time.
>>26855838
Fooey
>>26855838
i honestly think we should have just waited on you to do it so we know what we can and cant have
or just wait for who you choose if you already have an idea
>>26855767
And that's it for now.
I know Deadpool can be a bit of a touchy subject for some people because of his more recent depictions as a one-man 4chan replacement, but I feel that having him, Spider-Shim and Kraven squaring off would make for an interesting dynamic, and I intend to have act more in line with his older depictions largely as a sadistic psychopath with a very dry sense of humour with only minor amounts of meme-spewage.
Of course you can feel free to let me know why you think this is a bad idea and I'll be more than happy to consider changing it.
I have yet to update my pastebin, but I'll get in that shortly and throw it up when's it's up to date.
As always comments, concerns, and general feedback/insults are always appreciated. Help me be the best faggot I can be.
>>26855838
Feel free to make a new poll if you want to.
http://youtu.be/TVX-cUJGdxs
>"I believe there's a hero in all of us. That keeps us honest, gives us strength, makes us noble. And finally allows us to die with pride. Even though sometimes, we have to be steady and give up the thing we want the most, even our dreams"
>>26855783
Oh, and I also have plans for the Flash.Two of them, but maybe a third if voted enough
Here's the thing about this poll though, I see what you guys want, and this will help me form ideas.
I'll be honest, I'm only less sure of what to make Anon since yesterday, but this poll DOES give me a clue as to what you guys want.
I say keep making polls if you want! They help me, but I can't guarantee that the results will be what is most voted.
>>26855861
were probably gonna have to see how you handle it first before we can give you criticism on deadpool
What type of spider suit should shimmy wear?
>>26855964
The classic one--or a variation thereof. Maybe the Ben Reiley one. I usually picture her hair coming out from her mask.
Gonna' close the poll in 15 min.
>>26855890
Fair enough, I just sort of meant it as if you really don't want to see Deadpool in this at all I would be able to just pull the plug and write him out right now so that you don't get stuck with a character you don't want to see in the story.
But believe me when I say that I absolutely despise the (post) Daniel Way era Deadpool and the cancerous preteen fanbase that latched onto him.
>>26855964
spider gwens is great
>>26855990
Seconding Spider-Gwen
>>26855990
>>26856032
Completely against this
>>26856040
As am I.
>>26856040
>>26856049
>Not liking Spider-Gwen with a Shimmer twist
>1990+26
![Spider-Man_510x300[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/YjLSJ88.jpg "Spider-Man_510x300[1].jpg")
>>26856049
The real question is, does the suit have web armpits?
pic related
>>26856081
Artist's choice?
>>26856071
I think we should keep Shimmer focused on the original Spider-man, not one of the many others that Marvel shills out, be they good spiders or bad.
Poll results:
Venom 5
Agent Venom 5
Ant-Man 4
The Flash 3
Scarlet Spider 3
Sandman 2
Blue Beetle (Reach) 2
Punisher 2
Captain America 2
Electro 1
Chameleon 1
Blue Beetle (non Reach) 1
Batman 1
Carnage 1
Daredevil 1
Morbius 1
Mysterio 1
>>26856095
I second this.
>>26856081
>webbing in the armpits
but why
literally what purpose does that serve
>>26856116
They help Spidey fall slower so he doesn't die.
>>26856120
I was about to call bullshit
then I remembered it's a comic book character and that probably works despite there being no air resistance gained from it because it's just a bunch of strong string and not an actual piece of cloth
>>26856120
Didn't he also use them like a wing suit in one of the early comics?
>>26856131
I don't think so, but maybe?
>>26855861
Pastebin is up to date for anyone who wants it.
pastebin.com/crUhxGkS
Whew...so maybe I won't finish the EQGRR review tonight. I have a lot to say about it I guess. Like, the whole Equestria Girls review I did yesterday was seven pages long.
...I'm only eighteen minute in Rainbow Rocks, and I've more than five pages already.
There's no way I can finish this tonight and not be good enough to go to my cast party tomorrow. Sorry guys, if there's a way for me to make it up to you, please, please, please tell me.
>>26856195
Hold up....
You got five pages out of 18 minutes?
>>26856195
Make Anon Agent Venom
>>26856140
did some searching and found pic related, not what I was thinking but close.
>>26856217
Fuck that noise. Blue Beetle.
>>26855974
It's shitty
>>26856263
I can fap to this
>>26856261
I think Ant-Man fits better with his personality
>>26856263
Keep it up. It's the only way to get better.
>>26856209
I watch the film, pause and write a bit, myb thoughts on it, then re-watch the scene again to make it stick in my head. Then I watch the movie again as well. It takes a while and a lot of work to do it, and I try my hardest to summarize the movie...all the while talking and posting/writing green, doing my voice over projects, and pre-writing greens months in advance.
THEN I get to do homework from my classes, make myself dinner, talk to friends on the phone and deal with my stalkers. Oh yeah. I have stalkers, by the way.
And even better is I have a cast party tomorror to celebrate a play of Beauty and The Beast I partook in for children. (I was Gaston).
Kill me.
>>26856263
GLORIOUS. GETTIN' MUH LOTION.
>>26856293
You were Gaston, so someone already did kill you
>>26856263
I wish I could draw as "shitty" as that
>>26856308
Nope. Kid's version. Beast lets me run away as I'm forever shamed by my cowardice.
>>26856321
Technically the Disney version is the kids version
And they still had him die
>>26856290
Thanks. I'll keep practicing for this thread
>>26856293
What a coincidence. An acquaintance's acquaintance of mine just did the same thing. He even played the same part. You in Florida?
You in
>>26856344
Nope. Northern Kentucky.
>>26856352
Thank God. I hate that fucker. I honestly couldn't enjoy this if he was writing it
>>26856293
Where is your free time...?
>>26856411
Writing green IS my free-time, and if I don't deliver green, I'll do something else to make it up.
Kinda like how I sang yesterday because I had no new greens: http://vocaroo.com/i/s13cV8mAs9Dj
>>26856116
They make Spider-manlook cool
>>26856426
God speed you fucking Renaissance man
>be beans
>be strolling down the street minding your business.
>Spider-shim being thrown into a car makes you nearly shit yourself.
>She's battling Venon. >At least you think it's a battle.
>They're doing questionable things to one another.
>Spider-Shim tried to bronco buster Venon, landing squarely on his elongated tongue.
>You think she moaned.
>Venon tears her top off revealing spider nipple pasties.
>He bear hugs her from behind but it looks suspiciously like he's banging her.
>Onlookers are fapping
>Beans face when
>>26856476
Stop. It hurts.
>>26856476
The funny thing is I'm actually a big fan of Venom. I just don;t like Agent Venom as much. That and I'm way to early into my story to make Sunset fight a symbiote. Wouldn't she have to be a symbiote first, and then go through all that black suit shit? I'm barely even getting my story established. Hell, Spider-Woman in my story is barely established!
I do have some plans involving the Flash though. More than one, actually.
>>26856516
That's the thing. You can go in any direction. I've seen three different variations of venom. The symbiote, as a project to cure cancer and a smart liquid made by a mad scientist. You can go anywhere
>>26856545
It's too early though, and I know what I'd do with the symbiote if I write it. Just I'm not sure if now is the time, or if I will.
Bump for more pictures of spider-shimmer
>>26856516
But Agent Venom is badass and has an inspiring backstory
