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Ubermensch Anon7: Holy shit I took too long edition.
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Ubermensch Anon started as a a single prompt about Anonymous being signed up for the pony triathlon against his will. A couple of green stories later and we have what is basically the ultimate form of man in Equestria. I'm not trying to toot my own horn or brag, so I'll let those unaware of the story read for themselves and decide if they want to get behind the thread. (Not really sure this counts as a general.)

Anons Traithlon (How it all started)
Compressed into one bin: http://pastebin.com/2Gjb7PFw
Broken down for an easier read.
Ch1. http://pastebin.com/NHDeYE0q
Ch2. http://pastebin.com/Nibu1qFQ
Ch3. http://pastebin.com/Ah7G5Hna
Ch4. http://pastebin.com/KnHCccc8
Ch5. http://pastebin.com/TYrFfkfx
Ch6. http://pastebin.com/mRMR8d25


Anons New Chapter (Ubermensch adventures)
Ch1. http://pastebin.com/Y6TVrzMM
Ch2. http://pastebin.com/kWg8r5LF
Ch3. http://pastebin.com/mRaGf5vh
Ch4. http://pastebin.com/eVa0Nex0
Ch5. http://pastebin.com/Bwp1sD9V
Ch6. http://pastebin.com/r4ynMuJ5
Ch7. http://pastebin.com/s8B3wD7N

Ubermensch Anon (Current ongoing story)
Ch1. http://pastebin.com/yKt1BryD
Ch2. http://pastebin.com/2xBzRgrB
Ch3. http://pastebin.com/JZREiyhi
Ch4. http://pastebin.com/K5AMrpsy
Ch5. http://pastebin.com/rBDSNYL2
Ch6 (Short little thing). http://pastebin.com/DAHAVupF

Okay, I will clear some things up in the next post.
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(This picture was provided by the awesome P.E Anon in my last threads, respect to you and the other guys who work hard on your drawings.)

Okay, the last threads are basically gone forever due to the lack of archive so anyway, I got some things about the story and myself to clear up.

Yes, I did take forever to get back to the guys who enjoyed my story, I'm sorry about that but a lot of shit came up. Right now I'm on a christmas so Ubermensch green will be plentiful for the next two weeks until school nips me in the arse once more.

As for the Semi-colons and other grammatical issues around the story... I tried the semi-colons as basically a sort of certain writing style for green.... I'm not too fond of it. I was goign to go through my paste and fix any issues as well as working on the Epub files some anons were requesting but like I said....school man.

And finally some things are going to finally come to fruitation among the story like so many of you had wished too see [/spoiler] Discord

Okay, as I have no pre-written green I will commence writing shortly.
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>>25823918
....I fucked so many things up in that post but whatever, If you guys see any major issues in the story please point them out, I'm working with broken glasses here until at least next week.

Also my schedule. (USA Eastern)
Today - I will be writing until probably one in the morning.
Sunday - 6:00 PM
Monday - 3:00 PM
Tuesday - 7:00 PM
Wednsday -10:00 AM
Thursday - 11:00 AM
Friday (Christmas morning boys) - I'll be on rather late but chances are there will be green.
Saturday - 10:00 AM
Sunday - 2:00 PM

I will start shortly.
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> Many things could be considered scary.
> You?
> Nah...
> Boy scouts couldn't be scary.
> Albeit a monster of one but still...
> Monsters?
> If there was something to fight them then no.
> The ocean and its vast array of mysteries could be counted as one.
> But mystery was the exact opposite, it was curious...not scary.
> So...
> Ba-thump
> Ba-thump
> Ba-thump
> You pop up with a gasp of air.
> Why were you scared?
> You had done many 'impossible' things.
> Another gasp of air and you whirl around, that same thick wall of fog covering the area in front of you.
> ...
> You straighten yourself and adjust your jacket.
> Wasn't this thing destroyed?
> To be honest since when weren't these things destroyed?
"Who's there?"
> Nothing.
> Suddenly the fog began to creep away from the area, revealing a thick area of forestry.
> You squint suspiciously.
> Overhead a rumble of thunder sounded.
> You ignore it as the fog began to reveal more and more of the area.
> Once it was completely cleared you found yourself staring at a withered husk of a castle just beyond the forestry.
> You raise a brow in response.
> What was this?
> Everything felt rather...vivid...
> “Find me...”
> That voice sounded familiar…
> But you couldn't place it…
> Suddenly the galloping of tiny hooves against the ground caught your attention.
> You whirled around just catching a glimpse of orange slipping into the forestry.
> “Help me!”
> Some twigs snapped behind you.
> You whirl back around with your fists ready.
> Time to punch more things into oblivion.
“Show yourself!”
> Another series of snapping twigs behind you once more.
> You whirl around only to be met with…
> You.

> You suddenly jolted awake along with the train carriage.
> With a groan you roll out of your seat.
> Right…
> No more luxury.
> As it turned out the captain of that fine train was part of Filibusters little plan.
> When he heard what happened to her he opted to just give up himself and his crew.
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> Basically her plan was capture shit and sell shit.
> Simple really.
> On top of that he also gave away the location of the other captured ponies and you know...
> Fifteen bases all spread throughout Equestria.
> That wasn't right.
> You sit upwards and pop your back with a low grunt.
> Right...
> Still had a bit until you got back home.
> Then you would chill and spend time with your pseudo-family.
> It was a simple process that couldn't be interr-
> Suddenly the sound of a door sliding open filled the room, just audible among the rocking of the cabin.
> "Nooooony~!"
> You slide your hand down your face and groan.
"What?"
> "Come here and see this!"
"Why?"
> "Come on!"
"Why."
> "Awww Nonny why do you gotta be all grumpy, brooding hero type?"
"Pinkie."
> Suddenly her blue eyes were inches from your own.
"Hey!"
> The pressure of her sitting on your had seemed to be delayed until now.
> "Because it's a super important-"
> You reach up and snap her mouth shut.
> Effortlessly you pull her away from your lap.
"That's cool and all."
> You place her on the ground and pull away slowly.
> With a groan you wince in pain.
> Still feeling the effects of the last little fallout.
"But I'm trying to get some sleep. Did we not go over this before we got on the train?"
> Pinkie smiled brightly.
> "Of course!" She chirped.
> "But this is much more important then some silly sleep!"
> You pick at your dirtied and torn t-shirt.
"Oh yeah? How so?"
> "Come on! Just take a look! Next Cabin over. Right there... that cabin... the one behind you.... that one right there."
> Uh-huh....
> Something told you that they were trying to surprise you with another attempt at 'the process' as Twilight put it.
> The process of repairing a friendship.
> Now how could someone repair something that wasn't real from the start?
> It was cool Dash paid the fine and all...
> Okay, really cool, unless you called in extra favors then you would've been in debt forever.
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> But alas-
> You would never say alas again.
> But Dash was still...eh to you.
> Eh being you did not wish to talk to her or any of the others right now.
> Your everything hurt.
> And then there were those extremely vivid dreams you've been having.
> Hm...
> "-onny!"
> Oh yeah.
> Pinkie was calling you.
> You snap out of your funk and quirk a brow.
"Yes?"
> "Are you coming or not?"
> A smile simply disarmed her rigid, worried state.
"No."
> With the smile still on your face you plop right back into the chair, a creak of metal sounding throughout the cabin.
> Pinkie furrowed her brows.
> It looked as if she was trying her hardest to imitate you but simply came off as slightly amusing.
> "Come onnn!"
"Many people back where I'm from would love to hear you say that."
> Pinkie tapped her chin with her hoof.
> "What does that mean?"
> A brief image of certain...pictures flashed through your mind.
> You cough and wave a hand in the air.
"Nothing forget about it, I've got better things to do."
> "Like sleeping?"
"Relaxing."
> "Sleeping all day and night isn't good Nonny!"
> She began to bounce around the cabin.
> Singing...
> "When I was a little filly-"
> You pop up.
> No.
> Not this song.
> Fuck that.
> You loll your head to the pink mare with a roll of your eyes.
"Stop it."
> She hit a high note as she jumped into the air, throwing confetti and glitter everywhere.
> The sparkles and festive colored stripes fell over your silent, rigid form.
> ....
"Pinkie..."
> She somehow stopped mid-air, opening her eyes to get a good look at you.
> This needed to end now.
> You would never get any sleep like this-
> A pressure lightly touched your cheek.
> "Oh Nonny look, we're under the misletoe!”
> Oh there it was.
> Your vein popping forward.
> You slowly turn to look at Pinkie.
> She smiled brightly as she held the misletoe over the two of you with one hoof.
> “Would you like another?”
> Your vein pulsated in response.
"..."
> "..."
> She gave you a light peck.
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> In the next cabin over Twilight and her friends with the exception of Pinkie were hard at work trying to make preparations for their little 'gathering'.
> Save it wasn't for one of them but rather for an under appreciated resident.
> "Awww don't be like that!"
> Crash!
> "Get back here Pinkie!"
> The girls stared at the door just beyond them.
> "Waddya' think she' did t'go and get him mad?" Applejack asked turning the the others.
> "Upset." Twilight simply corrected.
> AJ rolled her eyes silently.
> "It matters not, all we know is he's going to be coming through those doors any second. Is our surprise ready girls?" Rarity turned to the others who gave her reassuring nods.
> "Excellent!" She simply chimed.
> "He's going to love this!"
> "I dunno..." Dash muttered. "This seems a little...strange to give to a guy, especially one like h-"
> "Nonsense!" Rarity growled getting right in her face. "He's going to love it!"
> Dash quirked a brow and backed away.
> "Oooohhh-kay...."
> "He must!" Rarity exclaimed.
> She stood on her hind-legs and wavered in the air. "We spent all night working on this!"
> Crash!
> "Oh Nonny! Come on we both know you can- Oh wait! Nonny NO!"
> Crash!
> The door bulged inwards.
> Suddenly it burst open in a display of splintering wood and a pink, shrieking blur.
> The blur collided with Fluttershy, the two of them disappearing from sight immediately.
> "Ah think you did a lil' too much..." Dash muttered.

> You grip the sides of the ruined door frame and step forwards, a grimace on your face.
"What!?"
> You freeze suddenly.
> Oh…
> The girls all stared at you silently with awkwardly contorted smiles.
> “Heeeeyyy….” Twilight muttered.
> “Did anypony catch the name of that Rhino who hit me?” Pinkie muttered raising a weak hoof in the air.
> ….
> What?
> You fold your arms over your chest and scan over the girls.
“What is this?”
> AJ was the first to step forward, peering at you from under her hat.
> “Ah… okay...”
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> You raise a brow as she struggled and stumbled with her words.
> "We decided that after all you've done for us and this land we would reward ya' with something other than a couple a' words and nonsense."
> She nodded to the others who silently smiled at you.
> It was weird.
"You now I don't want anything other than sleep right? Like seriously, that would be the best possible gift you could give me right now."
> By now Fluttershy and Pinkie were picking themselves up.
> "Yes we get that..." Twilight said as she stepped forward. "But we think something else is in order."
> You wait patiently as Rarity produced a small brown box.
> You raise a brow as they licked the box open.
> What was-
> A silver glow suddenly took your vision.
> "It's so beautiful..." Rarity blubbered as you peered past the glow.
> The others let out a series of 'ohhs' followed by gasps of aw.
> Save for Applejack and Twilight who simply shared a smile.
> A simple silver crown lay in the velvet lining of the box.
> You quirk a brow.
> Was that it?
> A crown seemed rather... pompous and pretentious but still...
> You simply scratch your head in response.
"k"
> "Wha-!" Rarity's mouth hung open in disbelief.
> Twilight and AJ suddenly stopped smiling.
> "N-No!" Rarity shouted.
> ?
> The box suddenly snapped shut.
> "Do you even understand what we're giving you!?"
> Not really no.
> You simply shake your head.
> "Oh boy..." Rainbow muttered. "Let it go Rarity."
> "No! This was such a pain in the flank to make!"
> "Rarity!" Twilight gasped.
> "No! Don't you dare! We put a lot of hard work into making this and all I get is a 'k'!?"
> She grimaced.
> "I can't believe thi-"
> Meanwhile you were already backing away and out of the cabin.
> Maybe you would find some other place to sleep for now...

> Crack!
> You poke your head out and look around.
> The feeling of the wind whipping against your face and the blur of a passing landscape was all that greeted you.
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> The train roared down the tracks, turning the world into a simple mash of colors.
> Right.
> They wouldn't find you up here.
> You reach up and take hold of the doors frame.
> You hop out somehow still holding onto the frame.
> The wind began to work against you now.
> Oh well.
> You throw your shoulders upwards in a burst of energy.
> Pushing off with your foot as well you soon found yourself gripping onto the roof of the train.
> You muscles tightened as you pull yourself overhead and roll onto the roof silently.
> Just laying against the cold roof and eltting the wind rush against you already felt more freeing than being stuck in there.
> You stare at the clear day sky as the train powered down the tracks.
> Hm...
> This would work.
> It was stupid yeah but it would work.
> You would simply sit here for the rest of the trip.
> It was either this or the girls would eventually find you.
> And that sounded less appealing than this to be honest.
> Besides you felt rather fre- what the hell was that?
> A couple of dots moved overhead in the sky, seemingly following the train.
> You furrow your brow.
> There was only one reason they would be following a train.
> And it wasn't any good.
> With a grunt you simply sit up and watch as the dots darted towards you.
> Yeah...
> You wait patiently.
> Here they come...
> Still waiting...
> One of the dots came just close enough for you to make it out as a dragon.
> The annoying teenager ones at that but still.
> He smiled brightly as he came towards you.
> You roll your eyes.
"Stop?"
> He stopped suddenly, flapping his wings frantically to come to a halt.
> You silently stare at him.
"I don't know why this stuff happens whenever I'm finally about to get what I want but please."
> You fall back onto the roof with a loud, hollow thud.
"Let me rest."
> "Uhh..."
> You close your eyes and take a deep breath of air.
> Reinvigorating...
> "We came to..."
"Rob this train and/or terrorize some ponies on board?"
> For the love of...
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> You simply pinch the bridge of your nose.
> All around you more thuds crashed onto the roof.
> You let out a long sigh.
> Maybe there could be a different approach to things?
> "...."
> "...."
> "...."
"..."
> You sit up with a groan.
"Let me tell you all a story..."

> You share another round of laughs with the dragons.
> They weren't actually all that bad.
> After you described the whole triathlon deal and how you got where you were now things went smoothly from there on out.
> You weren't sure why they were coming for this train in the first place but hey...
> At least you weren't doing some silly fighting over nothing.
> Well... not nothing but this was better.
> "Did you really punch her that hard!?"
"Yeah...."
> You simply shrugged.
"I don't know if they found her yet."
> They seemed to find this amusing as they let out another howl of laughter.
> You smile to yourself and lean against the roofs...floor?
> Eh it didn't matter.
> "Oh boy! I can't believe we almost tried to attack ya' man, that would've been dumb."
"I'm sure you can hold your own..."
> "Darron."
> Right...
> Darron...
> You smile at the sickly green, pudgy dragon who simply smiled back.
> You turn back to the sky.
"Yeah... which leads me here... bored."
> "Bored?" A stout grey dragon repeated with a hint of disbelief. "Dude from what you told us your life is nothing but exciting!"
> You simply shrug.
"I always win in the end, it's not really all that exciting when you know what's going to happen in the end."
> The others snapped their mouths and went silent.
> Eh...
> You pick yourself from the roof.
"Truth be told... losing would be pretty interesting... not something I want though, usually the stakes are high."
> You turn away from them and fold your arms across your chest, standing against the wind.
"Though I sometimes thought about what would happen if I lost."
> This seemed to get another rise from the dragons.
"That wasn't really a joke this time guys."
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> Another bout of laughter.
> You furrow your brows and turn around.
"Hey..."
> You stop suddenly.
> What had been at least five of them was now.... one.
> Almost one...
> The stout dragon continued to laugh almost manically as the others began to disappear in clouds of pink smoke.
> ...
> You lower your arms and take a more defensive stance.
> You step forwards and crouch low.
"What the he-"
> Boom!
> In an explosion of purple and more glitter you found yourself tripping against the wind.
> Whereas before you were able to hold yourself against it, it was now taking you.
> You take hold of the trains roof in a futile attempt to stay onboard.
> The world whipped and roared around you as you were dragged away from the 'dragon' and towards the end of the train.
> Suddenly the metal surface slipped from your fingers.
> You throw your arms out...
> And accept your fate.
> It wasn't long before your back slammed into a-
> You bounce from the squishy object with a heavy look of shock plastered onto your face.
> What?
> You peer down catching a giant jello cube keeping you in place.
> The hell....
> You turn back as the train let out a rip of its horn.
> It continued down the track, crossing from the green flora to a land of winter and snow.
> ....
"What!?"
> You glance down as your body began to sink deeper and deeper into the cube.
> “Oh give me a second…”
> Like usual the voice came from all around you.
> The green flower began to disassemble itself like a strange rubix cube of sorts, leaving you in a floating purple void.
> Random objects were scattered among the mess of a realm, namely consisting of childish whimsical things.
> ….
“What!?”
> With a grunt you flex your muscles and work against the jello.
> Within seconds it burst open, little droplets and chunks of red floating all around you.
> Bursting from the cube did little to help with the other problem though.
> What the hell was going on?
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> You continued to float through the void, arms held out like some kind of idol doll.
> ....
> When you figured out who did this you would really-
> Boink!
> You bounce off of what felt to be a glass surface.
> You shake your head clear and peer forwards.
> What was that about-
> Suddenly a large yellow and red eye came into view.
> You snap your mouth shut and glare ahead silently as it searched all around the void.
> Finally the eye the size of a building simply rested on you.
> "Oh there you are!"
> The world began to rock and shake as a massive talon came upwards.
> It pressed the index and thumb claw together as the eye seemed to 'smile' at you.
> "Hold on tight my dear boy."
> Before you could get another word out the talon flicked forwards... the massive finger slamming into you.
> With a scream that could put Micheal Jackson to shame you flipped and tumbled through the void.
> You kept on throwing your arms out in an attempt to adjust yourself but it did nothing to slow you down.
> Not one bit...
> As you rolled over yourself the same purple background filled your vision again and again.
> Until strange twisted landscapes and creatures took it...
> Just when you thought you had enough you suddenly slammed into a...
> Bed...
> The bed jolted as you bounced off of its mattress but otherwise stayed completely fine.
> Which was a feat considering your weight.
> With a groan you sit up and look around.
> You were now in a black area... the only place untouched by the darkness being the bed.
> Suddenly the blankets shot up and wrapped around your abdomen.
> Catching you off guard you found yourself pinned to the bed.
> Suddenly the bed shot forwards like a rocket, the wind stinging your face being your only way of telling.
> The sounds of rollercoasters with screaming children filled your ears as your bed began to make loops and twists among the darkness.
> Suddenly it came to a stop, the sound of a crank heralding your arrival.
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Holy shit nigger it's about time.
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> The bed jolted and shuddered as it began to raise upwards, making it so you were now in a standing position.
> The darkness crept all around you, seemingly holding no malice but simply mystery.
> Oh well that was-
> Suddenly a giant shadowy hand shot forth from the darkenss.
> As it wrapped its massive fingers around you and the beds frame a swirl of white and red ran up its arm.
> Here you go again…
> Half-expecting it and half just not wanting it the hand pulled you into the darkness is a flash.
> And suddenly you found yourself at a tea table splotched with random colors.
> You look back and forth at your co-attendants, a giant grayed teddy bear and a large 'raggedy ann' looking doll.
> The doll raised its arm and waved silently.
> You glared at it in response.
“Enough!”
> You reach across the table and take hold of the doll.
“Show yourself or she gets it!”
> The doll put its hands to its mouth in horror, silently screaming for help.
> The teddy bear just stared at you silently, that same sewn mouth plastered onto its face.
> You turn to it with a grunt.
> “Oh such a spoil sport...”
> Suddenly a flash of white took your vision.
> You found yourself in a large, chrome kitchen.
> A whittle and a bowl were simply in place of the doll.
> You didn't even jump, just simply letting the tools drop.
“With a sense of humor like that I can assume I'm only in one place.”
> A trio of 'tsks' followed by a disappointed sigh.
> “I had been hoping to continue the game on a tad bit longer.”
“It's stupid.”
> “But is it dumb?”
> You roll your eyes.
“Yes.”
> “Hm… Adjustments must be made… give me a second.”
> Suddenly a light brush of feathers tickled your rear.
> You jump in place and whirl around, a pony in a french maid outfit giving you a seductive look.
> She rolled the feather duster in her mouth and waggled her brows.
> “Get it? Maid!?”
> You growl to yourself and grab the pony by the scruff of the neck.
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“Out.”
> You toss her behind you, a series of pots and pans rattling in response.
> You turn back around to find yourself in a normal everyday house.
> ....
> Huh...
> That was unexpected.
> You turn back around to catch the staircase coming down from the ceiling.
> Now that you thought about it, things looked rather odd and out of place here.
> "Like me?"
> You turn around and nearly jump out of your skin.
> Some mish-mash of creatures grinned with eager as he hovered lazily in the sky.
> "I must say, been awhile since I've seen one of you."
> He waved a paw in the air dismissively.
> "Especially around HERE of all places."
> A cup of chocolate milk suddenly appeared in his grip.
> "Sit please."
> A pressure suddenly slammed into the back of your legs, sending you straight onto an awaiting couch.
> You fold your arms and simply don't question it.
"Discord."
> "Stating the obvious." He simply said with a loll of his head.
> The loll continued despite rolling well around his body twice.
> It suddenly stopped when he touched down against the ground.
> "Thought I would catch you alone."
"Why?"
> "Who."
"Discord."
> "Doctor."
"What?"
> ":^)"
> ....
> You were going to choke him.
> You were going to choke him and make sure he never saw the light of day again.
> "But then I would never see Celestia's beautiful sun again Anonymous."
> He strutted forward and booped your nose, a legitimate beeping sound coming from it in response.
> You glare at him silently.
"Are you reading my thoughts?"
> He shrugged.
> "No, you're simply saying them out loud."
"I am not saying-"
> "Shh! Enough of this silly little banter."
"I wouldn't call this banter."
> "You've helped gods before correct?"
> You roll your eyes.
"Can't you call Fluttershy and her friends for this?"
> "Uhhh.... No..."
> Once again with the brow furrowing.
"Why?"
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> Discord took a seat next to you.
> Though his was willingly.
> He put and arm around your shoulder and craned his incredibly long neck to get inches away from your face.
> The crazed look fit perfectly as his warm breath washed over your face.
> And it was rather fitting for what came next.
> "Because you're expendable."
> ...
> You smile and let your shoulders drop.
"Oh, that's nice."
> He smiled back.
> Suddenly you were on top of him.
> You reeled your fist back.
> Only to now find yourself holding a giant can of snakes.
> You growl to yourself and get back to your feet.
"Come on... I don't need this right now."
> 'Teleports behind you'
> You whirl around as Discord smiled manically down at you.
> You sent out another wild swing.
> He simply backed away.
> "I must say you're rather upset right now Anonymous."
> You simply pull your arm back up.
> This wasn't you.
> But everything about this guy pissed you off.
> You sigh and slam down onto the couch.
> On your own accord this time.
> "Are you finally done throwing a fit?"
"...."
> "Good!"
"What-"
> You stop and run a hand down your face.
> Were you actually really going to help him?
"What do you need from me? So I can finally get home."
> Discord's smile somehow widened.
> You didn't know that was possible.
> "Y-You're agreeing to help me!?"
> He squealed like a schoolgirl.
> "This is amazing! A creature of nearly unaccountable strength doing the God of Chaos's bidding!"
"I'm not doing anybodies bidding."
> You sit up and harden your gaze.
"Especially not some twelve year old's ideal villain."
> Discord frowned.
> "That hurt! I have much more character beyond that!"
"Like being a douche and nobody really likes you?"
> "Fluttershy enjoys my company."
"Fluttershy TOLERATES your company."
> "She does not!"
> At once the room seemed to dim as Discords eyes burned with a fury.
> You look all around you as he sneered directly at you.
> With a skeptical smile you turn back to him.
"What's the matter? Touchy subject?"
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>>25825705
Yeah I know, it was such a pain in the ass to get caught up.

I know It's kind of dickish of me but I have to stop here for the night, see my schedule here >>25823977
for when I will continue... if the thread's still alive, /mlp/ is alive as hell tonight.

Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/5wEQ15YM

Though it's a lot to ask for I hope others who like the story will keep the thread alive until my next writefag time.
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>>25823867
HOLY SHIT GOT ONE LIVE! Yay.
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>>25823867
bump
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ULTRA BUMP
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Page 9 bump.
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HUGE!!!
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>>25826198
oh you returned, nice
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Running late courtesy of my mother. I'll be starting in 40 minutes
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>>25823918
Just want to let it known that it was a drawfag named P.I that made the picture, not P.E.

>>25826133
> Discord furrowed his brow.
> “If you MUST antagonize further yes it is a rather touchy subject.”
> In a flash of light he was suddenly massaging your broad shoulders.
> “Though I think we can look past our differences- URK.”
> Before you had even realized it you were already grabbing hold of his mismatched digits, squeezing them tightly.
> Tightly enough that it was actually causing him to wince in pain.
> You didn't like this one bit and the prospect of helping this guy didn't sit right with you.
> You had heard the stories.
“Send me back.”
> Discord suddenly pulled away, his mismatched appendages popping from his arms.
> “Unhand me this instant!”
> You simply pull the appendages forward before dropping them in disgust.
> Discord slipped each one back on like gloves.
> With that he simply cleared his throat and straightened his posture.
> “As I was saying earlier… I need your help.”
> Welp…
> You weren't getting out of here anytime soon.
> And despite your muscles screaming for medical attention and the fact that you were in…
> You look at the mess of a house around you.
> Here… wherever this place maybe… was enough proof that helping this guy was your only option.
> You turn back to Discord and grimace.
“Okay… I guess I have no choice.”
> He bounced up and down in place like an excited child.
> You simply raise a brow as he danced around you, singing some sort of catchy yet silly tune.
> Suddenly he stopped and composed himself once more.
> “Perfect. Perfect, this won't be a complete waste of your time though my dear boy.”
> ….
> He cleared his throat as if expecting you to say something.
> “Rrright… well… if you can help me complete this task then I can show you what it would be like if you had lost ONCE.”
“Really?”
> Discord nodded with vigor.
> “Among other less significant things.”
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> You sink deeper into the couch.
“Well, that would be rather interesting.”
> His smile widened, seeming to grow darker.
> “Yes it is. You can't tell me you're not curious? Especially since that little moment on top of the train back there correct?”
> You simply give him an annoyed hum.
“Okay. Enough with the playing around then. What do you need me to do?”
> Before you could react a bang followed by a white flash of light appeared before your eyes.
> When your vision cleared you found a small burlap sack the size of your fist in your lap.
> It's as simple as doing my laundry my dear boy.”
> Why did he keep calling you that?
> You curiously poke at the bag.
> “Don't open it- ANON!”
> You were already pulling the string away.
> A flurry of clothes burst from the bag, instantly taking the room in a tornado of different colors and fabrics.
> Discord simply slumped in disappointment as you pulled the tutu from the crown of your head.
“Uhh...”
> Really?
“Really?”
> You drop the tutu and turn back to him with an incredulous gaze.
> Was this for real?
“You want me to do you laundry?”
> This can't be real.
> “Yes… though cleaning all of this up is going to be a KILLER now.”
> With a snap of his fingers a doorway suddenly appeared in the middle of the room.
> You simply watch with disbelief as the door burst open, being kicked off the hinges.
> A large man wielding a machete walked into the room, glaring at the clothes from behind his dirtied hockey mask.
> The clothes all… screamed before hopping up and bouncing into the burlap sack.
> All of this happened in a matter of seconds.
> Discord simply let out a disapproving hum as he snapped his fingers once more, the creepy man and the doorway disappearing at once.
> “Yeesh.”
> …..
> What the fuck!?
> “Now Anonymous, things may get strange from here on out.”
> You simply glare at him.
> Like they weren't now.
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> "But I have faith that you can complete this task with ease."
> Still glaring.
> Discord cleared his throat before continuing.
> "I'll explain in in a second."
"Wha-"
> "Shh!"
"I really-"
> "Shh!"
> ...
> "Okay there we go."
> A purple bang and you found yourself sitting in a stiff chair, staring at another row of chairs across from you.
> The familiar but almost forgotten sound of a helicopters blades whipped and chopped through the air above.
> The metal ground jolted as Discord popped his head out from the pilots seat.
> A camo cowboy hat adorned his head followed by silver aviator glasses and a wicked redneck beard.
> "Okay! We'll be at the LZ in five minutes, t'aint nervous yet are ya' boi!?"
> You were in a helicopter... with Discord.
> You reach down and struggle against the surprisingly strong seatbelt keeping you in place.
> Fuck Discord ex machina.
> "Let me get some things clear hure." Discord started, his voice rather unpleasantly clear over the power of the Helicopter.
> "One, yur bout' to hit the strangest part of the chaos zone!"
> Another Discord appeared next to you, decked in what looked to be an armor resembling an American paratrooper.
> "Two! Things ain't the same in there boy."
> The Discord turned to you and stared into your eyes with an intensity unmatched by any other.
> "I've...seen some things..."
> "Three!!!!" Pilot Discord shouted.
> The paratrooper split in two.
> "I've got no control over what happens next! Good luck to you my dear boi!"
> He didn't explain one thing!
> The paratrooping Discords gripped your chair.
> With no effort they ripped you and your chair from the ground.
> They turned around as the other end of the helicopters cabin began to slowly open up, revealing a white sky with blue clouds.
> They gave a warcry and charged forward.
> The world bobbed as they white sky began to grow in size.
> You struggled against the seatbelt.
> Nothing.
> Your hands slipped and fumbled as they came closer.
> Come on!
> Nothing still.
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> Your hands fumbled and slipped.
"Come-"
> The world suddenly stopped bobbing, flipping and turning over itself.
> They had successfully chucked you out of the helicopter.
> You screamed and gripped the sides of the chair as gravity pulled you...
> Upwards.
> You couldn't see it but you could definitely feel it.
> You were being pulled upwar-
> THOOM!
> Spittles and clumps of grey dirt flew around you as your seat made contact.
> Your body screamed in pain from the impact but everything seemed to be fine aside from that.
> You had gotten good at telling what was wrong with your body and what wasn't.
> Out of curiosity you try the seatbelt once more, the small silver strap sliding away with no effort this time around.
> You roll your eyes and push off of the seat.
> With a groan you stumble forward, landing in the grey dirt.
> The taste of sour candy filled your mouth.
> You spit out the dirt and pick yourself up.
> Even though you had been pulled upright, you were standing just the same.
> Undisturbed if you will...
> 'Okay Anonymous, listen carefully to me.'
> You look all around you for any sign of Discord.
> You had something to give him.
> A fist to the face came to mind...
> With a grunt you reach down and scoop up the fixed burlap sack.
> Right...
"Yes I can hear you jackass." You growl.
> 'Goodie! Okay, right now you're on some random island...'
> You look around, seeing that you were indeed on what was most likely an island.
> It was just a chunk of grey rock.
> You walk over to the edge and peer down, being met with a literal reflective surface of some kind of mirror like liquid.
> Huh...
> 'Step away from the mirror water!'
> The urgency in his voice did not sit well with you.
> You leap backwards from the surface, a large creature resembling a piranha bursting forward.
> It chomped its giant sickles of fangs downwards before slipping back into the water.
> You adjust your sack.
"...."
> Well...
> Good thing you weren't any slower.
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> If you were any less mature adjusting this sack would have different meanings.
> But it was literally a brown burlap sack, get over it.
> 'Good, good. Listen, step into the water.'
> You straighten up and smack your lips.
"No."
> 'Listen to me-'
"Nope."
> You drop the burlap sack and plop down, the island rocking against the water under your weight.
"If this was all some clever ploy to trap me then understand I will find a way out."
> 'Oh wow I'm so scared.'
> You simply roll your eyes.
> 'Just do as I say, things should be smooth sailing from here on out.'
> Yeah you bet.
> You sigh and grab the sack, slinging it over your shoulder.
> Slowly but surely you creep over to the edge.
> 'Jump in now!'
> ....
> You couldn't do it.
> You just couldn't.
> That thing-
> Oh hey, here it comes.
> The creature burst forth from the water once more.
> Time seemed to move in slow motion as it leapt into the sky, droplets of silver water spilling all around it.
> Your gaze met its own predatory gaze.
> Kick in now...
> The creature suddenly darted forward, time resuming normally.
> An ungodly shriek accompanied its descent.
> And your response?
> You cock your fist back and shoot it out.
> The force, kick, and crack of your connecting with the creatures jaw all commenced at once.
> The creature became a monotone blur, splashing back into the water with a defeated shout.
"Huh..."
> You open and stretch your palm, letting your knuckles get a rest.
"That was easy."
> A small splash caught your attention.
> You turned back just in time for another creature to burst forth.
> Exactly like the giant piranha its massive body slammed into your own, knocking both of you to the ground.
> The world flew outwards before you back slammed into the ground, knocking the wind from your lungs.
> The creature already worked its way to you, snapping its jaws hungrily.
> With a growl you throw your arms up and grip both sides of its jaws.
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> The creature let out a wheeze as it worked to snap its jaws shut.
> No.
> Not one bit!
> You silently shove it away, the creature slamming into the grey ground and flopping around.
> Before it could adjust itself you run up and kick it back into the water.
> 'Anon! Now! Trust me!'
> For the love of-
> Another splash.
> You turn around just in time to catch a tail dipping under the surface.
> Okay.
> Okay…
> You turn back to the silver surface, the reflection of the sky stretching for miles and miles.
> Okay…
> Okay, okay, okay…
> You take a deep breath and sprint forwards.
> Ignore the feeling of regret already welling in your chest.
> Ignore the fact that your survival instincts were screaming at you angrily right now.
> Ignore the fact that you had just listened to DISCORD of all other things.
> You hit the surface with a splash.
> And found yourself crashing into a thick bush.
> The branches cracked under your weight as you came to a stop at the top of the bush.
> Oh…
> This wasn't a bush.
> It's a treetop.
> A creak and everything snapped out from under you.
> Branches and leaves whipped against your face as you crashed through each and every one on your way down.
> You let out a series of curses as the pain refreshed itself with each crack.
> Suddenly you burst from the treetop, crashing into the ground below.
> With an unsteady groan you roll over being greeted with a pink sky.
> A couple of wheezing gasps later and you finally pick yourself up.
> Things… were not going well tonight.
> With a grunt you right yourself and shake the pain off.
> You had no idea what had just happened nor did you care.
> All you knew was that you were safe…
> An overhead shriek interrupted your thoughts.
> You gaze up catching what seemed like hundreds and hundreds of those piranha creatures swimming around among the pink sky.
> You take a step back cautiously.
“Discord what do I do now?”
> Nothing…
“Discord!”
> Nothing from the other line.
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"FFFF-"
> One of the creatures spotted you.
> With another shriek it darted forwards, becoming a blur in an instant.
> You stop and drop the sack.
> All of this nonsense.
> Just to do someones laundry.
> When he could easily do it himself...
> By now the others were swarming around you overhead, forming a cyclone of writhing, angry bodies.
> When it came down you would be torn to shreds.
> And if you knew how they hunted, when that one rushing you made contact.
> The real swarm would come down.
> Screw it.
> You throw your arms out.
> Let it come.
> Come on...
> If you could time this right...
> The blur was just a couple feet away now.
> Come on...
> Three feet...
> Let it-
> Suddenly a beam of white light cut through the air.
> It connected with the blur, knocking it out of the sky.
> The swarm overhead suddenly broke away, the creatures falling to disarray.
> You lower your arms.
> What?
> “Over here!”
> You whirl around and catch a hooded figure just beyond the thick shrubbery.
> Well, just a good time as any for help.
> You sprint towards the figure, snatching up the sack in the process.
> Pushing past the shrubbery you suddenly found yourself in a clearing.
> With a giant red target being the ground…
> This area didn't strike you as the safest place all around.
> The hooded figure poked its head from the bushes.
> “Come on!” It hissed.
> Another shriek overhead was all it took to encourage you further.
> Without hesitation you take off after the figure, the hooded stranger darting and ducking under bushes.

> Whenever you ran time seemed to hold no value.
> It wasn't a waste but it wasn't beneficial either.
> All you did was move.
> The two of you ran down a clear cut path, the stranger huffing and wheezing for air.
> They had lasted long enough…
> Before they could react you suddenly powered forwards.
> Skidding to a stop in front of them you whirl around and fold your arms.
> The stranger halted as well.
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> Now that you got a good look at the shape...
> You had a pretty good idea who this was.
"What are you doing here?"
> You grimace.
"And how did you even get here? Celestia."
> Celestia threw her hood back and frowned lightly through her gasps and wheezes.
> "Hold...on..."
> She keeled over and struggled to regain her breath.
> You don't blame her, the two of you had probably cleared at least twelve or more miles.
> You brush your shoulder off and wait patiently.
> "How are you not even slightly winded?" Celestia gasped from the ground.
> You shrug.
"Twelve miles is impressive but if you lay off the cakes then you could do so much more."
> She glared at you from the ground.
> "Don't start... but a mortal shouldn't be able to outrun somepony like me."
> You simply hum with disinterest and lumber over to the nearest area to rest against.
> A twisted golden tree.
> With a grunt you plop down and rest your back against it.
“I don't mean to ignore you but really… why are you here?”
> Celestia plopped down as well, letting out a long relieved sigh.
> “I had called for Discord and he didn't appear.” Celestia let the robes sag over her large frame with a shake of her head.
> You raise a brow silently.
> She sighed again though this time not out of relief.
> “Okay… I had some issues appear recently… and Discord is the only one I could think of who had answers.”
“What about Zoa?”
> “I tried summoning her… she never answered our call.”
> Something about that didn't sit right with you.
“Okay… so why are you...here if you were looking for Discord?”
> She grimaced.
> “Normally he would come to me if I needed him but I figured I had to play on his terms.”
> …
“What? Why?”
> Her grimace deepened.
> “Have you met him? Only way I could truly get information was if it was on his terms and besides… what are you doing here Anonymous?”
> You grimace as well.
“Fucking laundry.”
> She have you a confused glance before shaking it off.
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> "I don't really understand."
> You sigh.
"Discord wanted me to do his laundry... so he snatches me up at the most inconvenient time and forces me to do his dirty work for him."
> You emphasize your point by holding up the burlap sack.
"You wouldn't happen to know where the drycleaners is would you?"
> Celestia shook her head silently.
> "I'm afraid not, I was thrown into this area of the realm against my will... the portal seemed to... short out if you will."
"Ah."
> The two of you sat in silence for a couple minutes before she sighed.
> "This whole place just feels wrong..."
"Eh."
> You pick yourself up and dust yourself off.
"I've got to find my way out of here, I've got something important on the line here."
> Celestia raised a brow.
> "Is Discord blackmailing you!?"
"What!? No!"
> She suddenly jumped up, a concerned look plastered on her face.
> "Is he holding somepony dear hostage!?"
> She suddenly lurched forward, coming inches from your face.
> "Why are you helping him!?"
> A furious blush suddenly overtook her white cheeks.
> You could practically feel the heat radiating from her at this close.
> "Are you two... lovers?"
> You reach up and silently push Celestia away.
"What the hell?"
> She shook her head rapidly and grimaced.
> "I'm sorry Anonymous... this place is getting to me..."
> You hum and remove your hand from her withers.
"Uhh...stick with me then... and chances are after I get what I want you'll get what you want."
> Celestia hummed in agreement.
> You turn around and scan the area.
“Any idea where we are?”
> “No...”
> You frown and shoulder the sack one more.
“I guess we're going that way.”
> You step forward and towards the small clearing in the shrubbery.
> With no effort on your part you split the bushes even wider allowing the two of you to make your way through without any hassle.
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> Snap!
> Crack!
> You throw your arm forwards, breaking through another sheet of branches.
> This area seemed to be the most 'normal' one out of all the others.
> Just dense forestry.
> Reminded you too much of the Everfree but hey.
> If you remembered correctly the Everfree was Discords doing…
> Celestia let out a muffled shout as she tripped over something.
> You turn back to her with a raised brow.
> “Sorry… I'm not usually like this...”
“I'll say.”
> She stared at you silently.
> And kept on staring.
> And kept on staring.
> Eventually another red blush fell over her cheeks.
“Uhh… hey.”
> You snap your fingers in front of her face.
> She instantly snapped out of her state, jolting awake and turning to you.
> “Sorry.”
“Uh-huh...”
> You had to see something.
“Do you want to lead?”
> “I think I can make a path from here if you need to rest.”
“Mhm.”
> She stepped in front of you as her horn became enveloped in a white light.
> You didn't really need rest but you were morbidly curious.
> The robe hid her flank but you had to do this in the pursuit of science.
> Or psychology or whatever.
> You reach down and flip the robe up, catching a glimpse of a red hand print on her flank.
> “Anon!” Celestia shouted attempting to cover herself.
> You freeze.
> …
> The first chuckle broke through.
> And then the floodgates opened.
> In what felt like the first time in years you began to laugh hysterically.
> Your laughter rang throughout the air as Celestia uncharacteristically blushed furiously from embarrassment.
> “So it was you!”
> You throw your head back and laugh even harder.
> “Anonymous stop this instant!”
> Celestia stomped a hoof against the ground.
> “I don't know how or why but that was absolutely childish and completely indecent! Luna and I have never felt so...violated!”
> You stop and hold your gut, the pain of your body flaring with each hitched cry of laughter.
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>>25834729
noice. good to see you again.
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> You manage to right yourself.
"I was trying to get your attention!"
> Celestia grimaced.
> "What does that even mean?"
> You roll your eyes.
"Keep moving, this is a long story."
> Celestia grunted as she blasted through a curtain of vines.
> "So you were there..."
"Yes..."
> You suddenly grimaced.
"Also, I heard you and Luna talking about me and my 'rage'..."
> Celestia went silent.
"What's the story with that?"
> She continued to stay silent.
> "Anonymous... I'm afraid-"
> Boom!
> The rumble of an explosion moved in the distance.
> You and Celestia stopped in your tracks, looking all around you.
> Boom!
> What was that?
> Celestia went silent.
> "I think we're in trouble Anonymous."
> You turn back to her and raise a brow.
"Why?"
> Boom!
> Thud.
> Thud.
> "Well... we've been dealing with nothing but forest for the last hour or so..."
> Boom!
> Thud, thud.
"Celestia..."
> "G-Golemn..."
> What did that mean?
> A large shadow suddenly fell over the two of you, blotting out the blue sun.
> Celestia seemed to give up as she went slack jawed.
> Golemn?
> BOOM!
> The deafening explosion echoed all around you.
> You cringe and hold your eyes, keeling under the sheer force of the stomp.
> With a grunt you whirl back around coming face to face with a mountain.
> Oh no wait...
> The giant stony creature let out a boisterous roar as it tossed its head back.
> The whole world rumbled and shaked as the moving mountain let out its bellow.
> Celestia muttered something.
> You didn't care.
> You drop the sack and fold your arms.
"Right..."
> The mountain turned a giant glowing, green eye on you.
"Of course..."
> Your scowl became deeper than it ever had been.
"This makes total sense..."

All I can do for the night, I will post the pastebin shortly.
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>>25835132
>>25831635
Ah, thanks boys.

Pastebin here: http://pastebin.com/5wEQ15YM
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>>25835174
thanks senpai
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bamp
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>>25835174
doing good work
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>>25836695
one more for the morning
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>>25823867
Time to work on a movie poster-type thing!
The man is back and it's time to draw!
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>>25838043
T-thank you Anon...

>>25839208
Sup Strange, I must say I admire your PiE work by the way. Also did PiE die for good this time? I heard talk about them merging with AiE.
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Unexpected update because my schedule was just completely flipped.

> The Golemn let out another thunderous roar.
> This creature the size of a mountain suddenly dropped down, its hunched back cracking and popping as rock slide against rock.
> The grating of its joints took the forest as you watched in awe.
> Well and anger.
> And a small tinge of excitement.
> “Anonymous! Come on!”
> You turn back to Celestia and frown.
> As if you could really get away from this thing.
> If you ran as fast as you could all it had to do was slap its hand down and you, a sizable amount of this forest, and Celestia would just be flattened against the ground.
> A comical image of you and Celestia as practical pancakes plastered to the ground filled your mind briefly.
> Heh… that was amusing.
> Another earth rocking roar.
> The Golemn was focusing on you as it pulled away from its roar.
> “Anonymous!”
> You whirl back around to Celestia who was urging you along.
> Right…
> There was no you were fighting this thing.
> Fuck that.
> You snatch up the bag and immediately break into a sprint.
> The Golemn lifted a massive platform of a foot.
> BOOM!
> Thud, thud.
> The two of you ran side by side, the world whipping and snapping as the two of you pushed your way through foil.
> You bounded over a log and nearly tripped as something snatched at your legs.
> Which were screaming for a reprieve.
> You would not let them have it.
> Each muscle flared with pain as the two of you worked to force your way out of the forest.
> The Golemn let out an unintelligible string of nonsense before reeling the flat of its palm back.
> With another roar it began to bring its palm downwards.
> The shadow of your impending doom fell over the two of you.
> “Look out!”
> Celestia suddenly broke from her gallop and tackled the two of you to the ground.
> She gave you a panicked stare as the sky turned to a descending rocky surface.
> And that was the last you saw before everything went black.
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> The heavy patter of rain roared outside.
> You slowly open your eyes, no longer finding yourself under the heavy weight of a creatures palm and your demise but rather staring at a darkened cave ceiling full of stalactites.
> The pressure on your chest shifted with a heavy sigh.
> You glance down, catching Celestia slowly pulling away from your chest.
> You sit up with a groan and push yourself against the cave wall.
> Celestia grunted before rolling onto her back, her wings and mane spilling out against the caves floor.
> A sickly sweet smell filled your nostrils.
> The two of you weren't deep into a cave but rather right next to the entrance.
> You gaze to your right looking out at a sheet of colorfully blue rain pouring down.
> You turn back seeing that you were rested against a conjoined stalagmite and stalactite.
> Silently you turn back to Celestia who's chest heaved heavily as she simply stared up at the roof of the cave.
> Ignoring her you pull yourself up with a grunt, the burlap sacks strings loosely gripped in your fist.
> Moving towards the entrance you peer out at the rain curiously.
> You stick your hand out and catch one of the blue drops, a liquid like paint pouring over your hand.
> Pulling it up you simply lick it.
> Tasted like a jolly rancher back home.
> With a disgusted grunt you pull your finger away and shake it off.
> You were not going to walk in that.
> Moving back into the massive mouth of the cave you take your normal spot.
> The two of you would simply have to wait it out.
> Some shuffling caught your attention.
> Celestia picked herself up with a muffled groan.
> You ignore her and sit cross-legged, your arms slumped over your legs.
“You look terrible.”
> With that you simply rest your cheek against your fist and watch as she gave you an annoyed glare.
> “Please...”
> With a groan she struggled to pick herself up.
> “Not now-”
> She collapsed against the ground.
> You perked up with a quirked brow.
“Are you alright?”
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>>25839996
PiE never dies. It waits.
Thank you btw :)
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> She waved a dismissive hoof in the air.
> "Fine, fine. I just teleported us far, far away.. took a lot out of me."
> With wobbly legs she got up once more.
> When she managed to actually stand up this time she gave a content sigh.
> "It matters not, we're safe now."
> You turn to the deeper, darker pits of the cave.
"Yeah, I don't know about that."
> A crack of thunder followed by a howl of wind.
"And we're certainly not moving out in that."
> Celestia peered out at the heavy rain and thick clouds for a second before slipping back in.
> "We're in a different realm..."
"Yeah, I kinda got that."
> "But you don't get it. This is Discords realm! A whole other world that he should have complete power of..."
> She grimaced and plopped down across from you.
> Her violet eyes met your own.
> "He should have been able to come in at any moment and rescue us."
> You shift and sink lower against your pillar of rock.
> By now the pain was finally setting in, your body finally working towards the rest it had wanted for so long.
"He said he has no power over this part of the realm..."
> With a grunt you pop your neck.
> It was rather chilly here a jacket or coat would be wonderful to have at the moment.
> Another rumble of thunder.
> The wind began to continuously howl as the pressure of the storm asserted itself.
> Celestia sighed.
> "I would claim it was a lie but I hardly understand how his world works...”
> You shift in your spot.
> Some thins didn't sit right with you.
> Why was she here? You felt as if she didn't explain nearly enough for it to be justified.
> There was only one way to know for sure.
> You give her a warm smile as the 'rain' continued to drone on outside.
“Celestia...”
> She stopped and met your gaze once more.
“You know you can tell me the truth right?”
> “I am telling you the truth...”
> You simply nod silently and turn back to the ground.
> With a stumble and a light pained stupor you pick yourself up and yawn.
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> You work against your stiff muscles and began to give yourself a massage.
“Well I'm just saying. You know I know about somethings going on, so you might as well let me fully in.”
> “Anonymous-”
“And I've been running your errands for what? Nearly a year now? Would be kind of messed up to leave me out of the loop.”
> “Enough!”
> Celestia popped up and stomped her hoof down.
> You simply stopped mid-massage and gave her a disinterested look.
“Ah… so there it is.”
> You remove your hands from your shoulders.
“You are hiding something.”
> Celestia frowned and sat down with a sigh.
> “Okay… fine, but whatever I tell you next you must promise you won't be upset.”
> You simply shrug and lean against the pillar.
> A twinge of pain ran along your spine.
> Uhg, you must ignore it.
> Celestia sighed.
> “Okay… After the Wendigos latched onto you Luna and I had come up with a couple of plans...”
“Plans?”
> “Contingency plans… we weren't completely sure the Elements could stop you… we were pleasant surprised they did.”
> Okay…
“So that's cool but you and Luna are way stronger then me. Taking me down would be no problem for the two of.”
> “That's what we assumed as well yes… but something is different about you. If it had been anybody else then we would not be worried.”
> Celestia paused as if waiting for a reaction.
> You didn't have one.
> “Anyway… Luna began to go into your dreams as per my request. Every night I would have her search and destroy any ill thoughts or intent.”
> She frowned.
> “There weren't many… but the presence of your will alone was enough to force Luna out everynight… but she got hold of something eventually.”
> You raise a brow.
> “You were harboring an incredibly powerful rage, we feared that it would eventually break through.”
> Where was this going?
> “Luna had been able to seal it away using a spell and a magical containment box but… it was stolen.”
“So?”
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> “So? This is very important, because your raw fury is now in the possession of one of our enemies!”
> Hmm.
“That's cool.”
> You pick up the burlap sack.
“Looks like the rain is about to clear.”
> “A-Anon!”
> Before she could react you whirled around suddenly on her.
“I don't care about that. Sure I'm annoyed you two went behind my back but as far as it goes, I know why you're here now, I know you're also lying to keep you and Luna out of trouble.”
> “I-”
“You two are like little kids or something.”
> Her glare cut straight through you.
> “Kids!?”
“Kids.”
> “We're far older than you! We have more wisdom than you will ever hold, more knowledge-”
“Oh throwing a tantrum...”
> You lean down and pat her head, nearly forcing her to the ground.
“Like a child.”
> “A-Anonymous!”
> The force of her shout was nearly enough to end you flying from the caves maw.
> “You do not get to call US the children!”
> She flapped her wings and took to the air, her mane and eyes pouring power forwards.
> You simply reach up and pinch her snout.
> She let out a muffled whine of pain as she suddenly broke character.
> She fell under your grip as you rolled your eyes.
“You're not going to do anything but yell and scream at me.”
> You pull her closer.
“Like a little kid. Now buck up and take some damn responsibility.”
> You let go of her nose.
“I'm not mad about all of this but I am disappointed. I'm tired of drama and stuff so would you kindly please tell me.”
> Your frame seemed to tower over her prone form.
> Helplessly she stared up at you with a look of disbelief.
“Are you ready to get out of here or not?”
> She snapped her mouth shut.
> “Yes.”
“Good. We will deal with the other issues later.”
> You grip the sack and sling it over your shoulder.
“But we need to start moving now. This rain isn't going to let up so I say we go there.”
> You point past her at the wall of darkness that was the caves throat.
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> "What in your right mind makes you think that is a good idea?"
> You simply shrug.
"I don't know, but this whole place is completely out of whack. Maybe that's safer or something."
> Celestia gave you a look like you were absolutely insane.
> Which you might as well be.
> It was time to stop taking things so seriously.
"Look at me now. If I want something I'm going to take it, If I don't want something, then I will make sure it isn't relevant to me anymore."
> You smile broadly at Celestia.
"No more worrying about others Celestia. We're here right now and we're going to win right now."
> Your smile dropped and was replaced by a hardened gaze.
"And if you want to worry yourself over trivial matters than you are welcome to but please do it on your own time."
> You adjust the sack and strut past Celestia.
> She silently watched as you headed towards the throat of the cave.
> Oh for the love of god please let her join you.
> There was literally no light in there.
> You would look incredibly stupid if you pussed out here.
> "Okay! Okay fine... I guess we can just worry about getting out of this messed up world."
> A flash of light followed by a low hum of her magic and the pitch black wall was cleared away in front of you.
> Revealing what seemed to be hundreds and hundreds of resting green skinned creatures.
> One by one they began to awake, shuffling over each other.
> You turn back to Celestia who gave you a 'really' look.
"Uhhh..."
> Okay...
> So maybe some mistakes were made.
> Nobodies perfect.
> One of the creatures pulled up, revealing a large maw of razor sharp teeth.
> Throwing its arms up it revealed yellowed claws so long they were comparable to knives.
> 'REEEEEE!'
> You slowly smile blankly.
> You were going to die horribly.
> lol
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Okay, that's it for the time being. When I get home around 9:00 or so I will continue for a little bit. Going to try and get this arc out of the way hopefully today or tomorrow, then it's right back to the usual.

Though please let me know if you're enjoying this adventure or not so far. I like to hear what you guys have to say negative or positive.
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