Welcome to this shitty CYOA.
This is my first try but I'm a quick learner so bear with me as I get the hang of everything.
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>You dun goofed.
>You were condemned guilty by a court of your peers and now you're on your way to jagged rock penitentiary.
>Try as you might, your lawyer was terrible. You were so close to getting into happy hooves, that'd have been nice.
>Now you're currently chained to the seat of a carriage in the sky sitting between two inmates without a roof pulled by pegasi while a bored and serious looking guard pony looks blankly at you all.
>On each of the doors you see a sign saying "No singing" and "No fun allowed"
>The signs don't crush your moral as much as the giant bubble in the distance surrounded by barbed wire fences and guards.
>The closer you get the better you can make out a huge ominous castle with a maze and several courtyards, it'll be a minute before you get there at most.
>The inmate to your left seems to be a young mare rocking back and forth slowly as if singing something in her head.
>You were all sentanced on the same day, it seems like they're trying to fill this prison up.. and that weirds you out as its fairly rare to /go/ to an equestrian prison in the first place.
>The inmate to your right is an awkwardly shrimpy purple Minotaur with a broken horn.
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But what matters now is who you are.
You can't escape from jagged rock if you don't know who you are.
Come up with a butt-tattoo (Special talent) and a quick concept.
A concept is like a short description, whatever you want. The character is yours 100% (Some samples)
>A zebra male-prostitute/non-consensual snuggler from the ghettos of manehattin
>A goth unicorn mare who's catchphrase is "Fucking conformists" and is inside for necrophilia and touching colts/fillies
>A black and red batpone named scrape and lick who's bent on world domination.
>>26667056
I'm no good with creation, but if no one decides, let's go goth unicorn mare, touched fillies
>>26667056
>A black and red batpone named scrape and lick who's bent on world domination.
Please tell me your joking. You're going to get shitposted out of existence.
>>26667056
How about unicorn mare, arrested for questionably legal magical research. You turn just a few test subjects into loaves of bread and suddenly it's "mad science" this and "menace to society" that.
>>26667183
I'm >>26667169
I had to resist, i'm /cyoag/,s batposter
>>26667056
Let's go with a cracked mad scientist zebra. Maybe a little bit cracked, in here for illegal testing of potions on ponies.
>>26667056
Unicorn mare, former accountant. Slept with a mayor's wife and got framed for embezzlement.
>>26667210 (me)
Nevermind this. Go with >>26667206
>>26667206
Going for this one
>>26667206
Okay, yeah, let's go wih this
Alright, almost done writing.
>>26667467
You don't have to tell us, just post it.
What color should mad science pone be? Radioactive green? Warning label yellow and black? Danger sign red? Chernikov radiation blue?
>>26667206
>I LIKE TURNING THINGS INTO OTHER THINGS!
Oh, this is going to be fun.
>>26667486
I'd be good with Cherenkov radiation blue.
>>26667559
I had to Google it, but I'm in favor too now. Hideously dangerous things can be surprisingly pretty.
>Noticing the shrimpy Minotaur meeting your gaze you sharply turn your attention back to yourself.
>Okay, so maybe you turn a few ponies into loaves of bread while experimenting with transformative substances, suddenly its 'mad science' and you're 'criminally insane' just because they didn't sign a waver.
>How could they sign anything? They were asleep when you took them to the lab!
>You solve world hunger by making furry loaves of bread and they thank you with 10 to life in a five star maximum security penatentiary that also happens to be a rock farm.
>With a sigh you blow a strand of your pitch black mane out of your eyes and look down to that dark lime green coat of yours, you weren't always green.
>Its the price you pay for progress, that and glowing urine.
>And cancer
>You're pretty sure the radiation fixed that though, that's probably what it does.
>At least you're in a GOOD MOOD for some reason.
Guard: "Look alive convicts, we're here."
>His voice is one of a stern stallion repeating what he's said for the fith time today.
Mare: "T-There was a mis"
>She's quickly interrupted with a grunt from the guard
Guard: "Please, can it."
>He shakes his head as your shackles are magically unbolted from the floor and a tingly sensation spreads through your body upon entering the magical field.
>You feel so.. violated..
>Seconds later the carriage docks and the guards all stand next to the door as it opens and he orders each one of you to file out.
>The shackles make it awkward to walk, causing you to stumble a little since you're not the most dexterous of unicorns.
>You can't help but be urged to move in the line unless you want to be carried out
>Actually that doesn't sound so bad, maybe you should make them earn their salaries.
>With a small hint of a smug smile you stand in line with the other three and a blue mare in a formal looking jacket that says "Warden" in yellow letters makes her way out in front of your line.
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Warden: "Atteeeeeeention!"
>The way she calls out makes you want to stand straight up as her voice booms loud enough to visably move the air
Warden: "Welcome to jagged rock convicts! You're here because you're the worst of the worst!"
>You disagree, you solved world hunger.. kinda.
>Its not like hairy bread can get hungry.
Warden: "You're all rank three, that's teetering the line between solitary and allowed out of your cell so do not, I repeat do not break any rules."
>She starts to go on and on while your eyes dart around and tunue her out.
>You don't really feel like this is the end to your career, perhaps a new beginning or a vacation.
Warden: "And don't forget! No roughhousing, arguing, fighting, stealing, bullying, contraband or smiling! Do I make myself clear?"
>She's stopped in front of you, glaring daggers when you realize your lips are curled.
>Thinking about hairy bread never fails to amuse you.
>Maybe the snickering while they were showing evidence of your experiments is what landed you here.
Warden: "... You think I'm playing around inmate? Wipe that smirk off your face or your pudding privileges are revoked tonight, and believe me you're going to need all the comfort food you can get after I put you in the room with the rudest, dirtiest, low down mud covered villain I can find for making light of my introduction!"
>Wat do
>>26667627I didn't see the posts about color. Your color can change fairly easily.You'll probably change a lot of things.
>>26667627
>green
Can we do that neon blue?
Sorry lady, just was thinking of something. So what kind of amenities this place have? Exercise room, library, what?
>>26667627
Proceed to smile more
>>26667670
You can just cast change color as a free action after the conversation.
I'll include that.
>>26667670
This
>>26667627
My apologies, I wasn't laughing at you, I was just thinking about hairy bread. That pudding you mentioned...
...are we allowed to experiment with our food? Just a little, maybe?
>>26667844
>>26667670
Both of these, please. We're not even trying to piss her off, we're just too preoccupied with SCIENCE to realize that she doesn't give a shit about our amenities.
>She's pushed up against your face
>Her breath smells like spearmint, she probably ate a whole pack of gum before this.
>What if she's nervous? You want to ask her if she feels in charge.
>Why would you take someponies pudding away before throwing them in prison?
>You're on the fence on how much harder you should smile, this is almost too good to stop.
>You're not really sure you want to have prison pudding taken away or make her even more mad at you yet.
>With a bit of effort you shrug your shackled hooves before you speak.
You: "My apologies, I was just thinking of hai-"
>She leans back a bit and interrupts you, rude.
Warden: "You think on your own time funny-flank, and you will address me as mam. No pudding"
>Funny flank? Really?
>And does she expect you to force mam into every sentance? It stops being a word after like, four or five times!
Warden: "So! Who out of you lot is innocent huh? Come on now, just raise a hoof."
>She sounds noticably more cheerful as she backs away from the lot and looks all of you over, the minotaur from earlier raises a hand and the warden smirks.
Warden: "Sleepy."
>She turns to a guard standing straight next to her, his eyes have noticable bags under them as he looks to his right.
Sleepy: "Mam?"
Warden: "Escort tall, dumb and skinny to the rock mines. He starts early without pudding, we don't like liars here."
>You can see his lip quiver as the guard trots up and slides his hoof into the minotaurs hand.
Sleepy: "This way big guy, you've got work to do."
>He seems nice.
(1/4)
>>26668037
>She orders you all to follow her on a tour of the prison as you speed up in your clunky shackles and finish your question.
You: "So what kind of amenities this place have? Exercise room, library, what?"
>She stops abruptly and looks at you before pointing a hoof back towards the sorrow looking mare you arrived with.
Warden: "Back. In. Line."
>You groan a bit, line? There's two ponies, you can't have a line with two ponies.
>But the mare seemed to have moved the line back to you as she continues.
Warden: "You're all level three, you are to awaken at dawn and take care of yourselves. Then you have breakfast and free range in the cafeteria after roll call. Then you have 'exersize' period. For exersize you are to carry rocks, split rocks, push carts and do whatever you're told, then you shower. For free period you're allowed to join a club or spend your time socializing, Then you're off to whatever jobs you have and then dinner. Don't get caught outside of your designated area during this time do I make myself clear?"
She looks at you all and the mare next to you nods her head fairly fast.
>Up the stairs and down a hall you're taken through a few doorways before you get to housing block 3
>The doors are fairly large looking with locks on the outside anypony can turn,
Warden: "This is where you'll reside, I don't care where but you'll pick a room and stick with it."
>As she leads you past the open rooms she stops abruptly and whispers to the guards, your ear perks up and you can hear what she whispers to him. "Make sure the green one gets a hard time" He nods
>>26668037
It's ma'am, by the way.
Short for madam.
>>26668047
>Before you know it she's put you in a waiting room to get your physical and walked off to do 'important crap'
>You don't like her at all, nor do you like her obsession with revoking pudding.
>You might be able to grant a large enough blob of pudding sentient, maybe.
>You might be able to use said blob of sapient pudding for revenge
>Irony > Pudding
>You have a brilliant idea, she told the guard to give the green one a hard time.
>Looking up you can see the tip of your horn glow before closing your eyes and concentrating
>A cute green mare poofs into your vision as you focus on yourself and slowly turn her coat a nice cool radiation blue
>A tingle surrounds you as your coat changes colours with ease and you pop back to attention. Nice.
(3/4)
>>26668057
How about that? We're awesome.
>In a few moments a stallion steps out followed by a mare in a nurses hat, she gives you a wink before the stallion points at you and calls you inside.
>You follow inside as the grey unicorn stallion with a gem on his head waves you inside.
>The nurse flanks you and you can hear a slight rustling inside the closet.
Stallion: "You can call me doctor.. who w-.. who.. hooves. I'm doctor hooves and we're here to begin your check-up and magical sealing."
>You instinctively back away, nopony is going to take away your ho-
>That's when you feel a prick and your entire body goes numb.
You: "Hookalawah..!"
>Your speech comes out completely jumbled as he levitates your limp body and you do your best to make your horn work and cast a spell on him.
Nurse: "Doctor!"
>The mare gives a salute as the doctor smiles.
Dr.Hooves: "You'll thank me when this is over, trust me."
>Thank him?
>You'll buck him into next week! The bad way!
Dr.Hooves: "Hammer! Scaple!"
>He begins listing off random tools and impliments, half of them aren't real surgical tools and ends up putting a dull red gem under your horn and hitting you with a wooden mallet in the face and then the gem, nailing it in.
>You don't feel anything, but you probably will when you regain your motor skills!
>You gurgle angrily at him and the nurse leans down towards you and whispers
Nurse: "We gave you the broken gem~ You're welcome."
>You're fairly sure she bit your ear as she backs off and pokes her tongue out
>Out of the corner of your eye you can see the closet burst open and a tied up and gagged white unicorn with three gems nailed into his head rolls out, spitting the gag free.
Bondage enthusiast?: "Guards! Guaaaaaards!"
Dr.Hooves: "It was just a prank!"
>Things start to go dark as running happens and everything seems so distant.This is just the opening, afterwards the posts will be much more usercontrolled and faster, I'm just setting everything up and all that.
(4/5)
>>26668366
Day 1.5
>You can't help but groan as you sit up on the bed and a familiar looking nurse walks to your side and calls for the doctor.
>The man in bondage from earlier makes his way into view while you sit up, still groggy with a headache.
Doctor: "Don't sit up too fast, you took a knock to the noggin there."
>He has a fairly gentile voice when he's not screaming for the guards like a weirdo in bondage.
Doctor: "You can call me doctor patchwork and I'm very sorry for what happened.. usually.. those are supposed to be attached more gently."
>What.
Doc patchwork: "I can see your.. confusion, so I'll tell you in more detail. You've been asleep for three hours and bescides some minor bruising you'll be fine.. somepony just beat one of the suppression gems into your head, every inmate with magical talent gets one."
Nurse: "Oh it was horrible doctor! He held me against my will too!"
>The unicorn simply nods as she comes up to your side and places a hoof on your bed.
Nurse: "I hope you're okay! He hit pretty hard on the head didn't he?"
>She pouts a bit
Doctor: "She'll be right as rain in the morning, in fact she's past due to pick a room and receive her uniform."
Nurse: "Oh but doctor! Are you sure she should be walking around alone her first day? Completely disoriented and lost?"
>She exacerbates every single word like she's in a play.
>The doctor takes a moment before leaving you both alone to do doctor things.
>That's when the nurse pulls the curtain shut with her mouth, just the two of you inside as she turns to you with a grin and holds a hoof to her mouth.
Nurse: "Shh, I'm broken heart~ The nurse and rank one inmate! Nice to meet you! The madmare herself!"
>She holds out a hoof
Broken heart: "I hope you enjoy keeping most of your magic~! Curtsey of us, you're not a nark are you?"
>Madmare?
>Wat do
It didn't post the gif. RIP
>>26668379
Smirk at her and assure her that we're not.
We'll be sure to make good use of it.
>>26668379
No, I'm not a nark, I'm a transmogrifier! A twister of forms! Giver of life to the inatimate, and reshaper of that which already lives! A master trasmutationist of the highest caliber and--
Continue like this until she tells us to shit up.
>You can't help but smirk as you ignore her hoof.
>You're fairly sure she called you a madmare but you should be used to it by now.
You: "Me? A nark? Of course not! Nonono! I'm a transmogrifier!"
She gives you a strange look, scooting over a bit so her mane flows in the fan as she speaks.
Broken heart: "Transmogrifier? Oh my, it sounds scary! Whatever do you mean?"
You: "A twister of forms! Giver of life to the inatimate and reshaper of that which already lives!"
>You proudly puff out your chest, you're the best there ever was.
>You're theoretically the best theoretical transmogrifier there ever was.
>Mostly because you made it up, kinda.
>Okay you saw a comic in the hay daily newspaper that gave you the idea to call yourself that.
>You enjoy rightfully getting attention and asserting yourself in a dramatic way, she started it and its rather fun to keep going.
>She gasps lightly before allowing you to continue for a moment more
You: "A master transmutationist of the highest caliber am I! A rea-"
>You're suddenly cut off as a hoof fills your mouth and she looks back, the curtain pulled open as patchy, the unicorn with gems jutting out of his face tosses a red jumpshirt onto the bed.
Doctor patchwork: "The number on the back, 3357, that's your new number."
>Your mouth is stuck open for a second.
You: "You mean I'm the three thous-"
>He shakes his head and interrupts you like a dick
Patchwork: "You're the three hundreth and fifty seventh pony who's rank three."
>This place must be a lot bigger than you imagined.
>Gee.
>At least its not that huge.
>You shrug and pick it up with your maw while he nods.
Patchwork: "Miss heart will show you to the chambers then report back to hers."
>You feel a pair of hooves wrap around you
Broken: "Yay~! My very own redshirted friend! Lets go~"
(1/2)
>>26668722
>You both end up walking down the hall as she slows down to walk next to you.
Broken Heart: "I'm sure you're all excited to pick out your room aren't you~? You're here for life after all! I wouldn't mind showing you around later during free-time.. if you want~ Ask anything that comes to mind though! Like about any of the super villains who live here.. oooor about mwah!"
>You're a little curious how she knows about you.
>And what a redshirt means.
>Your trial was a big deal but it was only a day ago.
>Also you were sent here for ten to life, not life.. she seems pretty pessimistic for someone so energetic.
>You feel like its almost twice as hard to do simple magic but its not too big of a deal since you're awesome!
>Wat do during walk?
>>26668732
So how do you know about me?
Its fairly late, I didn't think I'd put it on pause so soon but I'm getting tired and I'd rather not have that reflected in the writing.
Hopefully the thread is still here when I get back.I hope its interesting so far
>>26668732
Bring up those questions you mentioned and ask her What the pudding is like.
>>26668906
I'm interested and i care
That character name thing might turn people off, but i'm not a turbo autist so it doesn't bother me
>>26668972
I was about to have her ask you your name when you get inside your room.
>>26667056
Uh, we already have a Anon I pone prison.
>>26668732
>rape
>>26669000
This isn't anon in pone prison.
>>26669000
Now we have pone in pone prison
We made it better for you
You're welcome
>>26668722
Considering rank 3 is probably fairly uncommon that's still probably a lot of ponys
>>26668732
>so redshirt is that a good thing or a bad thing
>>26668732
What do the ranks mean?
>>26669002
But how?
>>26670100
If there's a will there's a way
>>26669570
How good does it sound?
I'll give you one bump.
>>26669168
Yeah, you're not making it better. I'm ashamed to see out beloved Cookies being used in this monstrosities Header.
>>26672060
Call the cops
>>26668982
When i say name, i mean this
Broken Heart:
>>26669168
We need to go deeper
Pone pone in pone pone prison
Or prison in pone prison
>>26676959
Ahhhhhhhh
>>26676959
So it's a pony that's been sent to a prison in a pony a pony that is also a prison that has been sent to prison in a pony that is also a prison?
