Waiting for Roko Poko

>>26623927
I've been busy with school shit for a while and went back to lurking. I just went into a week long break from my University so I can sit down and write soon.
Still think I should re write a few parts cause I think they are shit.

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Waiting for Without

wwaters

>>26623821
I haven't been around in months
Is loki still updating or did law school permanently take him?

>>26624011
don't get too caught up in rewrites I think

we got trouble alright

lurking bump

>>26623821
I thought it died for good.

>>26624595
He's not coming back. We're all in denial, saying that he'll make time eventually, but we know he's moved on.

>>26627891
Well at least law school took him instead of mexican riots like the last writefag I liked.

>>26627730

>>26628805

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>>26624595
sadly, as he was my single favourite writefag though I quite like most of the others too

>>26627901
Mexican riots?

>>26629773
A while ago we had unlawfully imprisoned anon threads. One of the writefags lived in Mexico, and a couple times he had week long absences due to rioting. And then he disappeared forever.

>>26630032
Cartel got him

Dying already, stop that

>>26630936
as you wish

>>26630043
lol

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>>26624102
Or perhaps he is waiting for you! I thought we was ded. Just re-found it. So if it does die again because it looks like everyone quit I'll ask /moon/ if they mind if I finish up there. And also to the Anon that asked if I go there, I lurk there.

p. 10 bump

asdf

>>26633229
No..u

got an update will post after eating

>>26623821
>marital problems
>oh but not cuckold!

If you're a big enough degenerate to write about marital problems with a cartoon character, then why not go all the way.

>>26635541
Good stuff?

Alright should've had this out hours ago but whatever http://pastebin.com/a72L4NMc

>Lilac whipped her head so fast you’re unsure how she didn’t manage to break her neck.
>”Excuse me, what the hell do you mean by that!”
>Oh no she giving you the “I want you dead” glare that every villain has given you.
>Too bad for Lilac, as you rank her under pretty much every single one of those villains.
“Ohh nothing, I’m just saying if any other mare who loved their husbands saw that he was slowly dying they might have done something about it.”
>You couldn’t contain the smug for your voice even if you tried.
“Buuut for some reason you’ve have completely ignored all signs of Anon’s declining health.”
“Not very spouse like behavior now is it.”
>Apparently you hit a nerve something fierce.
>Lilac volts over Anon’s bed, and tackles you into a nearby wall.
>Good thing you have a magic panic button, because hitting your head against the wall without a barrier might have hurt.
>Lilac didn’t give you much time to think however.
>Rising her hoof in an attempt to smash your face in.
>Crossing your forearms over your face, blocking the incoming blow, you deny her of the pleasure.
>It hurts tremendously, nearly numbing your arms in one shot
>Accursed earth ponies and their naturally high strength.
>Thinking through the pain, you try to wrap Lilac in a levitation spell.
>Unfortunately she manages to get two more hits in before it’s done.
>But the look of shock on her face was amusing to say the least.
>You pull Lilac off you, and slammed her a few feet away from Anon’s hospital bed.
>Living up to your title of Element of Magic, you multitask a force spell while you pin her down.
>When it finishes, you let up on the levitation spell, and you fire at will.
>The result is Lilac rolling until she is stop a wall, her spine and head collide into it with a loud bang.

>>26638146
>You slowly pick yourself up on shaking legs.
>Much like your adversary, you wasn’t going to stop after a few quick hits.
>Though you didn’t want to push it too far.
>A magical shock bolt on a novice level should be enough.
>As you were charging it up, you didn’t notice a white hoof rush towards your horn.
>Otherwise you would have been mentally and physically prepared when it grabbed it.
>The hoof yanks your horn quickly and violently backwards.
>Such an action makes you lose concentration and yelps in pain.
>”That’ll be enough outta you missy!” Nurse Redheart growls.
>Lilac manages to get through her aftershock.
>Opening her eyes, there was more than enough evidence to show that she wasn’t done.
>But before she could get up, Nurse Redheart turn to her.
>”And you better sit your little ass down before I put it in a room myself!”
>Well that halted Lilac’s movement, but it didn’t douse her fury any.
>”Now that I got you children to sit, what is wrong with you?!”
>Her head flicks back and forth between the two of you.
>”This is a house of healing, not an underground fight club!”
>Great now you feel bad.
>”Well I wouldn’t have to be so aggressive if some pony would keep their hooves off my husband.
>And now you no longer feel bad.


.

>>26638161
“What is wrong with you?!” “How could I possibly think about having an affair with Anon when he isn’t even conscious?!”
>For some untold reason Lilac has this deep rooted fear that you’ll ruin her marriage.
>Yes you still have some lingering feelings for Anon.
>But you aren’t so petty and jealous that ruining his happiness for a few fleeting selfish moments is worth it.
>Apparently Nurse Redheart could see her words have fallen on deaf ears.
>And instead of breaking up another quarrel she had a better idea.
>That’s when you felt that familiar I’m not where I used to be feeling that only happens as a result from a teleport spell
>Looking around your new surroundings, you realize that you’re outside the hospital.
>More specifically the southwest side of the hospital.
>You thought that maybe you should find Lilac and drop a boulder on her head.
>But then you remember how sore your forearms around, and would rather put an ice pack on them.
>Seeing as ice packs are better than wanton destruction, you warp back to your castle.

morning

P.10 bump

>>26638166
>forearms
this better not be EQG

asdf

>>26628268
I'd like green of this
Anon hitting on Velvet and actually getting her

>>26638166
Is there a reason Twilight isn't going to have Lilac arrested for assaulting a princess?

>>26641140
whoops meant forelegs this isn't a EQG green

>>26641814
Short answer "Because lol plot" Long answer because Twilight provoked the fight instead of stopping it and she continue the fight instead of disabling Lilac in a non violent way, not only that but court would not be held in Twilight's kingdom, it would be held in canterlot and Celestia would dish out harsh sentences to both of them. Honestly surprised you asked seeing how Twilight's been slapped, punched, got into a fight with Dashie, poisoned, and been hit with magical attacks and no one gave a shit

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> The otherworldly thin crecent moon hangs dramatically in the clear nights sky accompanied by glimmering stars that twinkle like tiny flickering candles.
> The silvery light it casts illuminates the picturesque landscape.
> Lush green trees sway with the kiss of occasional gentle breezes creating soft static whispers from their leaves.
> You are Anon
> Sitting on a home made looking swing, made of rope tied to a hanging tree limb and wood seat large enough to accommodate both you and Luna, you admire the portrait like scenery she created for you with your chin raised and a calm relaxed smile.
> The swing rocks lazily from your bare toes pushing into the soft earth
> You wish you could just stay here.
> Away from your problems.
> Relaxed.
> Happy.
> But even during your dream, your escape, you know that can't happen.
> Spikes words still stay with you.
> Along with the feeling that you failed him.
> The warmth of Luna's head resting on your shoulder reminds you that she's here to help you though.
> She always has been.
> You slip you arm around her while you keep your eyes fixed up at the starry night.
> There's no way you'll ever be able to fully express your gratitude to her.
> "We hope that this day wasn't too... troublesome, dear Anonymous."
> There she goes, pausing to find the best words to use
> You figure she does it when she feels uncomfortable, now that you think about it
"What's done is done. It's not your fault.." your words come out a little more bland than intended.
> Her eyes shift from you to the land scape with a small inhale.
> Thoughts might be nagging you, but she is the last one you could ever blame.
> The quiet steady creaks of the swing stressing the tree limb fills the lack of conversation.
> But your mind still occupies it self.
> Questioning your decisions.
> Wondering what those memories you were forced to see were really about.
> How you could explain something to Spike that you barely understand yourself.
> About home..
> Your family..

>>26642079
I don't call the cops on people I'm friends with either, but if it was someone I disliked or hated I would, even if I went to jail too, besides, Most places have some pretty nasty punishments for assaulting royalty, even insulting them could end with being drawn and quartered.

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>>26643669

> You are Luna
> Desperately trying to find something to say to help distract your dear Anonymous.
> He still seems so upset..
> You can only imagine how torn he must feel right now.
> Well.. not imagine.. you can actually see it since he is in your constructed dream after all.
> A dream you take some personal pride in.
> He actually seems to have a sort of deep appreciation for your work, and the intricacies in the night you build especially for him.
> Something that can't be said about many, and often goes unnoticed and unappreciated by all.
> It serves to keep at bay his self abusive nightmare of him failing a teary eyed and sobbing Spike.
> Those .. inappropriate.. ones of that brat, Twilight breaking his heart.
> Or... really anything involving her..
> You're sure he doesn't need any more reminders than he's already had from her.
> Even some frightful glimpses into a cold, cruel, alien world you would rather him forget entirely.
> Protecting him.. anyway you can from things he doesn't need right now...
> It was slightly energy consuming, but well worth it.
> Creek after creek of the tree limb enters your ears along with random chirps of crickets.
> Crickets!
> Why did you put them here!
> Right now they only serve to accentuate the silence reigning.
> ...Uhg!
> Think of something to say!
> Anything..
> Anything at all will do.
> You perk as your words begin to flow unfiltered.
"We think that Spike acted very bravely. He was very determined to help while you were.. um.. asleep?.. We mean.. while Cadence was.. um..." instant regret overwhelms you while your words trail off and you feel your cheeks heat to what must be a crimson blush.
> 'Of any topic in all of Equestria, you chose the one that picks the freshest scab. How entertaining! Sometimes your sister IS right! Haha, you need to think before you speak Luna.' The humored voice chuckles through its last words.
> You try not to scowl at the thought of your sister in the moment.

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>>26643701

> You can feel Anonymous deflate a little but still wear a soft, pained, raised cheek smile.
> "Yeah... He's a good kid.." his eyes still meet the sky.
> Kid?
> Your head drops in a tiny wince, biting your lower lip a little.
"We're sorry.. that was most..." You take a moment to think before you speak this time.
"Inappropriate?.. Um.. soon?." you look up to him for some sort of reply with your now racing heart.
> Oh stars!
> It's hard to get a read on him now!
> You didn't further upset him did you?
> But he simply surprises you with an even more genuine smile, before turning and leaning down to you.
> He plants a small quick kiss to your lips that you almost didn't have time to pucker back for.
> You weren't expecting that, but as he so masterfully does, he disarms your apprehension.
> Your body relaxes against him as your own wide curious eyes ask what that was for without words.
> His eyes accentuate his smile as he leans nose to nose with you for just a moment.
> "You never have to apologize for anything Luna. I owe you so much and more. You must know that by now."
He says almost surprised that you dont.
> You never took it as 'owed'.
> But before you could even respond you feel his fingers brush from behind your ear, down the side of your neck, and down your back between your tucked wings, where he rested an arm around you.
> His fingers idly playing with and lightly scratching the end of ur wing.
> It sent a small chill down your spine and warmth replaced anxiety.
> With a small hum, your widened eyes shut as you enjoy his caress now nuzzling into his neck.
> It still amazed you how simply his touch could make you feel so safe.
> So appreciated.
> So ...Loved...

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>>26643733

Survival update/ short update.
> Dassit
Live damn you, live! Anywho, hope short update is enjoyed. I'm gonna do things.... and stuff.

>>26641140
You really need to reassess your priorities.

>>26642079
>this isn't a EQG green
phew!
i didn't want to have to dump the story.

>>26643880
u really need to an hero
a good nohooves lover is a dead nohooves lover
filthy pervert.

>>26641683
fdsa

Bump for more than two writefags

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>>26644525
Ditto, faggot.

>>26645109

>>26643770
Thank you based WaN

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>>26633229
>>26643770
/moon/ will always be a home to you, Without

>>26647974

>>26647974
bumpen

>>26650347

Zootopia is a great film if anyone wanted to watch it.

>>26651395

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>>26647222
Ty trips anon.

>>26648464
Looking like it might be soon. Is ded.
> feels bad
Also pg 10 bump.

Eh I'll keep kicking this corpse around until Newly Wed is finished as it doesn't really belong anywhere else

>>26646675
Glad you agree!

>>26638166
>Once you arrive back at your castle, your emotions star to cool, and you start analyzing over recent events.
>And realize you messed up.
>You had let your emotions control your actions.
>To make matters worse this is the second time this happened.
>You’re a Princess for crying out loud!
>You should be a beacon for your ponies to follow.
>Not getting into fight with the denizens of your kingdom, disrupting the peace, and causing property damage.
>Princess Celestia always told you to keep your emotions in check during critical moments.
>The mere thought at Princess Celestia’s name chilled you to the bone.
>How would she react if she found out?
>She could sentence anything she wanted on you, and she would be rightly justified.
>But every punishment would pale in comparison to the look of disappointment she would give you.
>And this downward spiral keeps on going.
>You still don’t know what’s wrong with Anon, and the only who could tell you, you just so happened to throw against a wall.
>Anon’s life is hanging on by a thread, and instead of asking vital questions that could have lead you to finding out what’s wrong.
>You decided to pick a fight.
>All because you don’t have any fondness towards Lilac.
>Wonderful Twilight, you just killed Anon.

>>26656037
>You are Lilac Paradise.
>And today is just one of those days.
>You surprise yourself with how much restraint have right now.
>By the hells below why did those two have to make things difficult?!
>All the others at least followed the plan.
>No fuss, no hassle.
>And it was a quick get in get out.
>But not Anon, nope.
>”Waah Lilac I’m hurting.”
>”Waah Lilac I need to go to the hospital”
>”Waah Lilac I need to go see Twilight.”
>And of course he just had to make a scene right in front of the most inquisitive little shit on the whole planet!
>Fucking hell why couldn’t he just last long enough to ask for Luna, instead of passing out on purple shit’s door step?!
>That would grant you a few more feeding before you ended everything.
>Seeing as Luna’s dumb ass would only focus on one of Anon’s “symptoms”
>His nightmares.
>And the fucking cow would never figure out why she couldn’t see into his dreams.
>All thanks to the wonderful magic you’ve been blessed with since birth.
>And once the starving hamster finally gets around to asking about Anon’s physical being.
>You’ll be long gone.
>Maybe even off this multicolored shit stain of a world.
>But that’s what could have been, not what’s happening now.
>Releasing a pent up sigh.
>You need to start making a plan on how to get into the hospital without being detected.
>Tonight’s feeding is going to be a pain in the ass.

>>26656046
ooooo, the action begins!

bumping dead thread

>>26656046
ooh boy

>>26643770
Keep up the good work

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>>26655818
You should work on that reading comprehension. Wouldn't want anybody to think English isn't your first language.

>>26663873

>>26664173
NOTATION THAT YOU CREATE A VACUUM

>>26665524

I lost a lot of love for missionary

>>26667334

>>26623821
Gentleman I think it's time to discuss about moving to another thread so that it what has been created isn't lost. I believe that it is the best option.

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>>26672954
> Mfw.
This used to be a green place..

>>26672954
This thread is eternal.

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>>26673250
>>26673371

Gentleman its been an honor.

>>26674246
Threads dieing there'sno denying it. Writefags can continue elsewhere I suppose. Waifu threads, /sun/, /moon/, even AIE if they really can't find anywhere else. I just hope they check in to marital problems and post while the thread is still here, and if they decide to leave they let us know what their plans are.

>>26656046
TONIGHT

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>>26674552
> Dying thread.
> Mfw

>>26674552
>post while the thread is still here, and if they decide to leave they let us know what their plans are.
this
tho sadly i don't see that happening for loki, cause he can into propeller.
shame on fife too since he was such a stalwart for such a long time.

>>26678583
>propeller
I've been a part of these threads for a long time and I still have no idea where that comes from.

>>26678583

>>26680286
someone just explained it in the last thread i think... or maybe it was RGRE.
anyway, at the risk of breaking some kinda "only the in people can know" code... a story many threads back that one of the writefags was killed in a boating accident became an instant local meme. i can't remember who it was tho.

>>26680684

>>26673250
>>26677613
It was a good ride But it isn't over yet

{ñlkjh

>>26684161

WITNESS MY MAGIC AS I BRING THIS THREAD BACK FROM THE DEAD! BY THE POWERS OF ROCK AND ROLL I COMMAND THEE THREAD TO LIVE! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8P1wI6rwnFc

>>26685432
*Ahem* please don't let the thread die. I really like it.

>>26623821

it's either funny or sad when a big name writefag vanishes, the thread they were posting in dies

>>26685297

>>26687180
Better not go then.

>>26684161

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>>26677613

>>26689570

I actually came in here wondering how this thread HASN'T died yet. Is Fife still on here?

>>26690076
Haven't seen him in ages. Not even a check-in I mean. No story updates in months.

>>26690978

>>26656046
>You are Twilight Sparkle.
>And for the last few hours, you’ve been sitting on your throne with ice packs laying across your forelegs.
>The good news is that they no longer hurt.
>The bad news is you still have no clue how to save Anon.
>You thought of transfusions, to natural healing methods, to asking Zecora to a look at him.
>Transfusions was shot down by obvious reasons.
>You don’t know how much herbs would be need before they would take effect.
>And you don’t know if Anon would last if you went and got Zecora, or if she could find anything wrong with him anyways.
>Every single time you thought you had a solution, you found some reason on why it wouldn’t work.
>There just too many unknown variables, and you have too little information.
>But you can’t give up!
>As Princess and Anon’s friend you must find a way to save him!
>”You know you could just watch over him for tonight.”
>Your head was pulled out of your thoughts at the sudden disturbance.
>You notice Spike, sitting next to the map of Equestria, his back leaning against it, as he rotates a small ruby in between his claws.
“Huh, what, watch over who?”
>You weren’t prepared for anyone to interrupt you, so you still a little scatterbrain.
>Spike just gives you a deadpan stare.
>”Really Twilight we’re playing the Pronoun game right now, you know who I’m talking about.”
>TwilightOS Reboot at 97%, 98%, 99%, 100%.
>TwilightOS successfully restarted.
>You violently shake your head to clear it.
“Huh, um yes I do know who you’re talking about, but how do you know what’s wrong with Anon, and what would watching over him do?”

>>26693759
>Spike smirks at your question, and stands up.
>He flicks the ruby into his mouth.
>His chewing only takes a sec or two, before he swallows.
>”Alright now I’m going to answer your questions, but I’m going to do so out of order.
>”First off I’m small, adorable, and ponies see me as a toddler.”
>”This means that I can see things without anyone noticing, eavesdrop in plain sight, and everyone, including you, will think I’m too young to understand, and lastly if I do get caught, ponies just go “aww he’s so cute”, and leave me alone.”
>”For instance, earlier I saw Anon pass out at the castle’s stairs.”
>”I saw Lilac come to see if Anon and you were still, I also saw the guard tell Lilac where you two were before he bailed.”
>”Later today I heard the same guard complain to his friend about him leaving him with a monster dressed up as a mare.”
>”And just now I heard you mumbling about how bad Anon is doing right now.”
>You stare at Spike for a moment, as you take in what he just said, and you realize how right he is.
>But you do not mumble!
>”And to answer your second question.”
>”If you watch over Anon tonight, you can see if he gets worse as the night goes on, or if anything happens to him during the night”

>>26694084
>TwilightOS is currently processing new information.
>TwilightOS has finished processing.
>You ecstatically jump from your throne, dropping the icepacks on the floor.
>You quickly fly over to spike, and scoop him into your arms, as you fly to the center of the throne room.
“Yes!”
“Thank you Spike, you’re the best dragon ever!”
>His smile grows wide with your complement.
>”Yeah yeah I Know, now what are you waiting for?”, “Go put my brilliant plan in action!”
“Right!” you say with authority, as you float down, and put Spike back on the floor.
>But as you turn to leave, you remember that you left the hospital on bad terms.
>”Alright, what’s up?”
>He sounded a little impatience.
“Um yeah, you see I got into a fight with Lilac, so I might not be welcome there for a while.”
>You can hear the facepalm that Spike made.
“Not a problem my faithful assistant.” You say, as you turn back to face him.
“I’ve snuck into the hospital after dark before, tonight shouldn’t be any harder.”
“And beside what’s the worst that could happen?

>>26693693

>>26694086
Thx TLA!
Gotta say, I'm enjoying this story more than I expected. The way it opened i thought it was gonna be meh. And while it seems semi-obvious, i didn't see your twist coming. Curious as to where you're going to take this.

asdf

>>26696524

>>26695886
you're welcome, and I'm glad i mange to keep some form of mystery. I always got a chuckle when people guessed Lilac was a changeling, but now I have to kill that theory.
>>26694084
>You are Anon.
>And once again you’re running.
>But this time it feels different.
>It feels like the first time you started to have these nightmares.
>But strangely enough nothing else has changed.
>The same old emptiness.
>The same old sounds.
>The same old whatever is chasing you, throwing the same threats at you like last time.
>Quite frankly this is boring.
>How was it that you were afraid of this?
>There isn’t even anything here to fear.
>Well not until you fall anyway.
>But why keep running if you know it was going to happen?
>In fact, stop!
>For the first time ever, you start to slow down.
>Your speed dropping, until a few more steps is all it take, before you’re completely at rest.
>Wow was it always that easy?
>Now that you defied the natural order already, why not do it again?
>As you start to turn, you feel some kind of force pushing against you, as if it doesn’t want you to see what’s behind you.
>But fuck whatever is trying to stop, for two week you’ve been running from!
>Overpowering the unknown force, you turn around to see.
>Nothing.
>Literally fucking nothing.
>For two weeks you have been running from nothing.
>Are you fucking serious!
>What kind of sick bastard would do that?!
>What was once fear turned into boredom has now turned into an inextinguishable rage.
>So much so, you decide to do something that makes no sense.
>You run head first into the darkness that once chased you.
>Your left fist is raised, and you giving your best war cry.
>Even if there is nothing to hit, you just feel the need to punch something!
>You run for an unknown amount of time, before you feel it just right to throw out you punch, and.

>>26697715
>Your eyes flash open, as you feel your hand connect with something that feels like skin.
>Wait, skin?
>Apparently you had put more strength into that punch than you thought, because whatever you hit moved off your bed, and manage to go some distance before hitting the floor.
>In the process something was forcibly removed from your chest.
>And it was follow by an indescribably amount of pain.
>You quickly rise up into a sitting position, you reach your right hand, and grasp at your chest.
>Along with the pain, you’re also having coughing fits and inhaling deeply when you are not coughing.
>”Oh come the fuck on, can nothing go my way today!”
>Okay what the hell was that?
>You turn your head to the sound of the voice.
>what you see can be described, you just have no idea what you are staring at.
>It is pretty tall from what you can see, as lays on the tile floor.
>Skin looks like the color of blood.
>Two long, lanky arms are attached to its body, the hands are tipped with three claw like fingers.
>The legs are also long, but with a little more bulk on the thighs.
>the feet, if you can call them that, have three talons each.
>Two wings are folded against its back.
>A tail lays curled on the floor, it’s tipped with an arrow head.
>And lastly its face, staring you down with one large eye, the iris is just a long narrow slit, and atop its head is a horn that stands straight up.
>Now that you’re done analyzing the monstrosity across from you.
>What the fuck is that thing!
>Whatever it is take notice of your confusion, and smiles.
>It shows nothing, but a row of fangs.
>Similarly like the ones at the end of your nightmares.
>”Aw what’s the matter Anon don’t you recognize me?”
“N-no.” (Cough) “Who, or what are you?”
>”Hmm alright then.” It says, as stands up, proving you right that it was tall.
>”It’s me you loving wife, Lilac Paradise

>>26696524
ah ffs. always miss the deletion cutoff.

h8k-

>>26697715
huh, i thought you WERE suggesting changeling. Well now I'm really surprised.

>>26699454
I never suggested Lilac was a changeling, a few anons got that idea after seeing her ultimatum, I just took the carrot and drag it along.

>>26702076
"suggested" in that it was implied (by default) by your "last feeding" comment.

>>26701158

>>26699454
everyone's a changeling on the internet

Waiting for Without

>>26643770
Call me when the plot starts moving.

>>26705663
underkekked post

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>Be me, eurofag
>watching MP a long time now, waiting for MNM to return
>bored as hell
>want to read a decent story and start lurking
>TLA and FreeTheSoul still writing their storys, lost track some time ago, gonna catch up on them later...maybe...
>WithoutAName
>wonder what his story may be about
>go to his pastebin: Twilight's Secret
okay, may be interesting. Hope it's not some cucking story like MNM's cause that shit gets me angry as hell.
>Start reading
>Anon has a lot of friends, Anon is happy.....too happy.....shit
>Anon catches Twilight getting pounded by FUCKING FLASH SENTRY
>>"oh FFFUUUUU.... yyeess fill me up. Harder *pant pant* OH YEESS"
SHIIIIIIIIIIIIT, NOOOOOO
>keep reading
>that shit is pretty decent though
>keep reading and reading
>Anon at the disco dancing with Luna, twilight pretty jealous
nice
>Barn is burnt down
well fuck
>Anon at the hospital, twilight visits him
>Anon starts hearing a damn clever voice in his head telling him twilight is a bitch
~sweet
>Some pretty cool shit happens
>Anon keeps hearing that creepy voice and starts acting strange
>'...If you insist on naming me Anonymous.. You may call me, Sombra...'
and you ruined it...
I mean Sombra? Anon possessed by sombra or wat?
still decent story tho
>after some more exciting and heartbreaking moments later the story ends

All in all, awesome story thus far
can't wait to start reading part 2
keep up the good work I like the way you write

>pic related, it's my tribute to you o holy Without

>>26702624
That didn't suggest Lilac is a changeling, it suggests that she feed off her husbands like vampires, mosquitoes, and parasites. Don't worry though I'll go into detail with Lilac's monologue

>>26705663
Yeah man, I hate it when my mare ugh just lies there too.

>>26707089
ok

>>26704128
Except for me

I want a divorce

>>26708982
there are no divorces in horseland

>>26710008
Only a blissful existence

>>26707089
I got that in the next post of course, it was just such an obvious assumption after the "feeding" line.

>>26710447
>love in equestria is magic, just like friendship.
>it is always perfect
>the magic of love means couples never tire of each other, never get annoyed with each other, keep the same goals and values, and always get along
>but anon is not from equestria
>his year old marriage to his horsewife is not doing well
>all the classic problems couples on earth face
>plus extras cause cross species & culture
>pones don't know what to do as this is unprecedented

>>26712422

>>26712422

>>26711893
interesting

>>26711893
go on

>>26712422

>>26713184

>>26715492

>>26716200
>26716200

>>26717317

>>26697738
“W-what?”
>The laugh that erupts from Lilac’s lungs is filled with malicious glee.
>”Ooh, I’m sorry baby, don’t like what you see?”
>”Here let me fix that for you.”
>A blackish red aura started to form around Lilac until it covered her entire body.
>What happens next could never fit under “need to see it to believe it”
>Lilac’s body started to shrink.
>Hands and feet became hooves, while her arms and legs changed form to better suit their new appendages.
>Her skeletal structure changed to accommodate for the loss of height, and to change her from a biped to a quadruped.
>Lilac’s horn, wing, and tail was sucked into her body, and shortly after a pony’s tail emerged to fill the void.
>Once everything had changed, the aura dissipate, leaving behind the Lilac you thought know.
>”Now is better my love.” She says with a chuckle
>This bitch is mocking you.
>Well she doesn’t did for long, as she drops the disguise.
>Not much point in keeping up now.
>”Alright Anon I just know your pretty little head is drowning in questions, so ask away, I mean it’s not like you’ll be alive for much longer anyways.
>Oh she’s not just a bitch, she’s a smug bitch.
>And if you learn anything from good guys vs. bad guys.
>It’s that smug villains love to hear themselves talk.
>So let the monologue begin!

>>26718097

>>26623821

>>26719751

>>26721857

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So I decided to crawl from under a rock and read the original AT story (and the epilogue). I didn't know to expect.

I was not prepared

>>26721857

>>26723496
You mean Fife's? It was really good at beginning but lost its quality because Fife didn't know what to do with plot.

>>26724117

>>26724417
Yeah. It was running in circles in the middle, and the ending was a bit weird, putting a lot of characters OOC, but damn the feels.

The rainbow streamer in epilogue killed me

I don't think I want to read the coin thing at the same time though. Hell, I'm not even sure if I liked the nature of the final portal, especially since Rainbow's mention of how better it would be if they never met to begin with

>>26724940
>putting a lot of characters OOC
Bro this thread exists because characters are OOC. In fact none of the greens posted here have characters acting like they would in the show

Alright niggas, I ain't been here in a few months.
What stories would you recommend?
And I need a bit of help remembering a certain writefag.
Story began with Flash beating Anon when he first arrived, then when he caught them he beat him within an inch of his life.
Know the pastebin?

>>26725634
http://pastebin.com/qkzvmQcF
you mean this one?

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>>26725676
Yup, that would be it.
Thanks senpai
Have a sandnigger

>>26725451
I mean OOC in the scope of a story. For instance I felt like Celestia's attitude was not really well set up, especially with her refusing to talk to Twalot before. I still enjoyed the story even if I regret reading it now because muh feels.

>>26725717
>Vanilla ISIS
with his hit ISIS Baby

>>26725780
True that, also where did it say why Celestia hated Anon before the meeting? I might be blind, but I couldn't find it when I reread it

>>26726814
See, me neither. Even if I read it only once, all that I got was that there were some issues when Anon arrived (also related to his dreams), but after that there was nothing. The only mention of her was when she refused to talk to Twilight, which for me was a huge sign of Sunbutt being disappointed in her, and by proxy taking Anon's side. And then she went full CK2 and tried to assassinate someone she had 100 relations rating with (like all my vassals seem to do in that game).

Bump4TwiH8

>>26727144
bump in general

>>26727144

>>26727144
I fucking knew that's all these threads were for.

Where's Without?

>>26728331

>>26732205

bump update in a bit

>>26718514
“Okay “loving wife” what is that you want with me?”
>You needed a way out.
>You see your heart monitor to your right.
>That Could come in handy.
>”You see my dearest, like all living things I need to eat, and the life force of other living is just the best meal.
>Lilac starts to walk towards your bed.
>”And imagine my surprise when I found you, a human in a world were none have existed before.”
>”You humans have one of the tastiest life force.”
>She reaches your bed, and bends down, staring at you with her one eye.
>You swing your legs off the bed, pulling out the sheet that were once tucked in.
>”Too bad I couldn’t have found you sooner, then I would be in this mess.”
>She doesn’t sound too happy.
“Okay then, sweetheart mind telling me how you manage to get said life force with killing anyone.
>Lilac moves her tail into view, dangling the arrowhead tip in front of your face.
>”Life drain is such a helpful spell, and comes with the add benefit of distracting the target mind in some way so they don’t feel a thing, well until the spell finishes that is.
“Wait magic how the-.”
>Yes yes your immunity that was a tough nut to crack.” Lilac so rudely cuts you off.
>”But as I found out not too long into our marriage, your magic immunity is only skin deep, so I had to wait for you to fall asleep and I had to get a little more physical then I used to.
“Uh huh.”
>Questions answered, time to act!

>>26734421
>You quickly go for a halfcocked left straight, but Lilac catch it with her own left hand.
>”Really Anon that’s the best you can do?”
“No, but it’s a good thing you’re bending over.”
>Before she could think about what you said, you kick you right leg out.
>Your foot collides with her stomach.
>Yeah she’s probably understands what you mean now.
>You follow up with a right hook, slamming your fist into her cheek.
>Lilac’s left hand loses its grip on yours.
>You pull your left arm back, and strike out with another hook.
>This time the blow send Lilac to the floor, she barley manages to catch herself.
>You quickly get off the bed and reach for the heart monitor.
>You pick it up, thankful for the long cord, and with all your might, you slam it across Lilac’s head.
>Figuring it would take too much time to remove your I.V, you pick up the pole they’re attached to, and make a mad dash for the door.
>You reach the door and turn the knob, but before you could open it, your left leg is pulled from underneath you.
>In her attempt to pull you away from the door, actually get it open.
>You hand loses grip on the knob however, your vision goes from the door to the celling, as you feel your back and head hit with a loud thud.
>You start to black out, as you feel Lilac’s claw grab you throat.
>”Where do you think you’re going I’m not-.”
>It was this time Lilac was cut off.
>But not by words, but by a large purple beam of magical energy.
>The last thing you heard before losing consciousness was someone calling your name.

>>26732881

>>26735616

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>>26733628
>>26734421
>>26734524
you are the writefriend this thread needs

>>26734524
BBBBBBBBBBBAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDD

>>26734524
awesome

>>26736263

bamping

morning bump

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>>26706284

>>26742621

>>26743458

>>26743458

pre-marital dating situations welcome here?

>>26744538
Don't see why not, there was a widow story here once

>>26744267

>>26746470

>>26742668
me too

>>26747325

>>26749393
And so it begins.

Don't second guess yourself...

Head is the answer

>>26752040

p10
n-no

>>26754899

>>26755754

>>26756944

>>26759309

>>26760891

>>26752118
can I first guess myself?

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drawfag bump for Without's return

>>26762027

>>26765065
Bumperino.

Bump, update soon

>>26765874

BTW it's been a few threads since I've posted here. What's Marital's stance on forgiveness? Surely not EVERY story in this thread follows the chain of "pone cheats on Anon > Anon is mad > pone cries and apologises > Anon says no"

I want to say right now that I'm not down with that pussy shit. I'm only asking because all these threads and all these greens must have something unique to them. Every story can't just be the same thing, right?

>>26769521
Not every story floating around right now is about cheating, but yeah majority of them is about cheating, and this thread is pretty much against forgiveness

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>>26764659
>MFW i realise i can't draw

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mad bump for writefriends

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>>26764659
>>26773076
This pleases the Wan.
Anywho! Checking in. I'm alive. Unfortunately I didnt come bearing an update. But I'll get on it. M-maybe. I do want to get on that Crystal war RD story. Butttt I guess I'll finish this first.

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>>26773454
>Wan

>>26771669

>>26769521
>What's Marital's stance on forgiveness?

Depends on how well it's written and how grievous the betrayal was.

>>26775175

ffffffffffffffffffffff

>>26773454
plz

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>>26777555
Check em'
WaN must now return with more Luna

holy shit, i'm gone for a week and you marriedfags kept it going. Good on ya anons! Especially given only 2 little TLA updates thanks namefag!

dead

>>26779223
necro