>"Ms. Sweet, you got a visitor."
>she turns to see you then looks back at her hand of meds
>"Oh, hello Anon..."
Pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/7r8iCJ2U
previous thread:
>>26358538
Working on next update as I speak!
I will try to make it a priority to continue and wrap it up for ya'll.
>>26449885
Why must you disturb the dead Anon? Let it go.
>>26450256
Churro just said he's working on the next update, let him finish his green.
>>26450774
I believe Jojo Anon(s)?are also currently writing
>>26450825
>currently writing
ahahahahhahahahahahahhahaha
You overestimate my attention span/work ethic. Next chapter will happen eventually. Standanon works too, by the way.
>>26450825
I was pointing out how dumb it is to say something's dead right after a writer says he's still working on it, but you gave a point there were other writers who still have stories they might wish to continue.
>>26451564
Yup! I'd say we're far from dead, just a little slow at the moment.
Just as an aside,and to start a little conversation to avoid a string of 'bumps!', I'm curious. How do you guys imagine my story is about to end?
I already have the ending planned, but I'd love to hear what you guys are predicting right now.
>>26451632
Honestly I'm not sure how it's going to end, all I can hope for is that Anon and Sour Sweet are together in some form.
>>26450825
who drew that?
>>26452726
One of the Anon's in these threads did.
I'm pretty sure I also remember that Anon coming up with ideas for stands for the rest of the Shadowbolts, though no pictures
>>26452976
hope he finishes stand for the rest of them
i like his pic
>>26449885
god damn it bump
>>26453822
I never really planned to do anymore after the Sour Sweet and Basket Case, but I might start working on one to help this thread stay alive for more Jojo greentext.
>>26453822
I'd love to see the rest of the Shadowbolt Gang Jojoified as well
>>26455280
>OG JoJoanon is back
I'm gonna be more obsolete than Hamon.
So, wanna say there's aparallel universewhere a certain point determines whether it's your Anon or mine? We can either avoid that entirely, or just come up with something that affects absolutely nothing else.
Also I need to find my old Pastebin.
>>26455414
>>26455280
Im the guy that propose the current powers of the stands. If you have any ideas about what needs to be changed, then go ahead. Back then, I just tried to make each person had different tye of stand, so you got
>Sour Sweet
sentient stand
>Sugarcoat
object-bound stand
>Indigo
normal punchghost
>Lemon Zest
little-but-many stands (bad company, harvest)
>Sunny Flare
self-bound stand
Imo, Sugarcoat's stand needs a new name, since the old one had the same starting alphabet with Sour's (Black Cab and Basket Case) and Sunny Flare's I think needs a new power (but still the same stand type), and Lemon Zest ability could use a bit of tweaking.
>>26450825
AWAKEN MY MASTERS
>>26455467
I thought it was agreed that little-but-many Stands, like Bad Company, Sex Pistols, Harvest, and Pharaoh Sanders were Swarm Type. Or at least in 7th Stand User.
Though, this means Anon and Lemon have the same Stand type. They gon fug.
>>26451004
http://pastebin.com/SFzZAKrF Pastebin's done. I put in a note that acknowledges that Anon went from "somewhat apathetic with a bad attention spanSTILL NOT A SELF-INSERT I SWEAR TO GOD, but prone to getting pissed off about insignificant things" to "Coldsteel the 『Stand User』" in one post.Even though Anon wants better vision and I always pictured my Stand to be like Scan. But not Scan
Pic related is the first JoJo pic I found, apologies if you hate t/v/mblr memes.
>>26455519
>swarm
Oh I forget the name then. Also, I dont want to sound so sperg-sh, but I initially thought Monkey Business is something else. I mean, 6 gorillaz each with different powers? That sounded like anything but a swarm type stand.
Also, maybe Sunny Flare could benefit more form a Suit-Type stand? She rollerskates in the movie, so I think it can create a White Album parallel or some kind, and also limits her powers, which also should be new stand altogether
Sugarcoat, in all her honesty, could use simple songs and names like [ W o r k ] or [ A f f i r m a t i v e . A c t i o n ]
>>26455414
I think you've confused me for the other Jojo writer. I'm the one that drew the Sour Sweet and Basket Image that's used in these threads . Unless you think we're the same person in which no we are not.
>>26455725
Hmm for sugarcoat maybe something the opposite?
Sweet Little Lies perhaps?
Update is just about ready
Will post when I get home in another hour or so
Alright, here we go!
>>26431191
>A few days pass by until you are ready to explain everything to Sour Sweet
>Its stopped snowing and the temperature has risen, so you decide that today would be a good day for the two of you to go for another walk together
>You cheerfully march down the halls of the patients’ dormitories and stop before her room
>A few knocks fails to get any response, and when you look inside you see that she is still asleep
>You scoff as you unlock her door and step inside
>Walking over to her bed, you crouch down and whisper
“Miss Sweet, it’s time to get up.”
>You put a hand over her shoulder and shake her lightly
>Sour Sweet groans as she turns her head towards you
>”Just another hour, please.”
“It’s beautiful outside, would you like to go for a walk?”
>Sour Sweet slowly lifts herself up to a sitting position, stifling a yawn with one hand while rubbing an eye with the other
>When she’s finished she looks over to you with a small smile
>”You aren’t too busy today?”
“Nope. I wanted us to spend the whole day together.”
>Her smile widened as she tossed the covers aside
>She certainly seemed to be awake now
>”I’ll get dressed!~”
>She hops out of bed and surprises you by shoving a hand down your coat pocket
“What are you—?”
>”Ah!”
>She tears out your pocketwatch and stares at the time
>Her smile falls apart as she grimaces back at you
>”You could have woken me up sooner…”
>You chuckle at her as you slip it back into your pocket
“I’ll remember that the next time you try to sleep in.”
>She scoffs at you as you turn away to step outside
>”Hang on.”
>You pause once more, and as you turn back to her again she gives you an even bigger surprise
>Standing on the tips of her toes, she reaches up and wraps her arms around you as she plants a kiss on your cheek
>”Good morning~.”
>Her kiss leaves you dumbstruck for but a moment before you graciously return her hug
“Good morning.”
>>26457865
>You stand outside her room and wait for only about five minutes before she comes out
>She’s fixed her hair up in a ponytail, slipped on a pair of boots, and is wearing the pink jacket you had bought for her
>When she joins your side, the first thing she does is glance around the hall
>”Is Nurse Redheart not coming with us?”
“No, just us this time.”
>You notice her perk up ever so slightly as the two of you walk down the hall together
>There’s a small bounce to her step as she walks with you through the halls, out the doors, and onto the grounds
>It’s still a bit cold out, with a brisk wind blowing by every so often, but the skies are clear and the sun is out
“Is that coat warm enough for you?”
>”Uh huh! I feel just fine.”
>As the two of you walk further away from the facility, Sour Sweet begins to saddle up closer to you and her mood seems to become more lively
>”This jacket looks really cute on me~.”
“Ha! I’m very happy you like it.”
>She nods her head happily before her smile fades away and she looks down at herself
>”I just wish I could get out of this damn uniform while I’m at it. These pajamas look so fucking lame.”
“Well I think you look very pretty today.”
>Her frown disappears as she giggles up at you
>”You’re such a sweetie~.”
>Walking by her side with your hands stuffed in your pockets, you quickly found an arm of hers wrapped up around yours
>Glancing back at your facility, you worried that someone might see the two of you
>Those worries of yours faded as the hospital drifted from view and Sour Sweet continued to nuzzle against your arm
>You sighed contentedly as you leaned over her
>It’s been too long since the two of you have gone for a walk alone
>>26457956
“Miss Sweet?”
>”Mhmm?”
>You pointed over at a wooden bench lying down the road
“Sit with me a while, there are some things I want to tell you.”
>”OK.”
>Sour Sweet remains comfortably latched onto your arm as the two of you take a seat together
>She looks as if she could fall asleep right by your side if you let her
>After a silent minute passes you by, she lifts open her eyes and smiles up at you
>”What did you want to tell me?”
“Well, there’s an important reason why I’ve been so busy lately…”
>Sour Sweet loosens her grip over you and sits up
“I’ve been speaking with Child Services quite a lot, and I was unhappy with what they had to say. So the other day, I told them that I want to adopt you.”
>You hear a gasp escape her lips as her eyes widened
>”Adopt me?”
“Yes. I want to make sure that when you are healthy enough to leave that you will be going somewhere you can be happy. But it’s more than that, I—“
>”You want us to be together?”
>You watch as a huge smile forms on her lips
“y-Yes…. more than anything really.”
>”Oh Anon!~”
>Sour Sweet nearly knocks you out of your seat as she enthusiastically embraces you
>”That’s wonderful! i-I didn’t want to think about what would happen to me after I left… w-will it work out? Can I really live with you when I’m better?”
>You shuffle back up as you gently grip onto her arms and smile down at her
“I’m in the screening process right now, but I think it will work out. I didn’t want to tell you until I was positive, but I felt you deserved an explanation.”
>”i-I thought that… oh this is so wonderful!”
>Her joyful grin alone is enough to melt your heart
>You knew she would be happy to hear this, but to actually see her reaction was something you were not prepared for
>Still, you feel you can’t just stop here
“There’s something else you need to know…”
>>26458050
”What I had been thinking about lately, what I thought would be best for you, was if I could give you a family.”
>Her smile falters as she tilts her head and stares up at you
>”Give me a family? What do you mean?”
>You run a hand through your hair as a bitter wind blows by
“I thought I could help you best if I became like a father to you and… and I wanted to give you a mother…”
>Sour Sweet’s brow furrows as she looks away from you
>When she gazes back your way, you can see she is worried
>”I don’t understand. w-What do you mean by all that? i-I don’t love you like a father, and… mother?”
>You sigh as you steel yourself for what comes next
“I was going to propose to Miss Redheart.”
>Sour Sweet stares at you at first as if you had said nothing at all
>Then her blank face becomes transformed by dread as her jaw slowly opens wide
>”h-h-How could yo—“
“I was ashamed. I thought that my feelings for you were selfish, so I endeavored to give you something more.”
>”THAT’S BULLSH—“
“I KNOW! I realize that now!”
>You grapple onto her trembling body as she glares at you
“I was being incredibly foolish, running away with preconceived notions that only fed into one another. It was only when I spoke to you the other day, when you told me that you were afraid that I didn’t love you the same way that you loved me, that I realized I was lying to myself.”
>You lowered your head and whispered in as soft a voice as you could muster
“I could never be a father to you, because I feel exactly the same way about you as you do about me.”
>”y-You do?”
>You nod your head as her trembling calms down
“If I had gone through with my plans, it would have only made us all miserable. I won’t lie to myself anymore. I love you, and I only want to be with you.”
>>26458095
>A numbing pain fills your heart when you look down at Sour Sweet and see tears well up in her eyes
>Then her face suddenly contorts in anger and she snarls
>”You’re such a fucking idiot!”
“I—“
>She sobs as she wraps her arms around you and wails
>”Please don’t leave me! Oh God!”
>You return her embrace as you choke back tears of your own
“I’ll never leave you! I love you Miss Sweet, I love you!”
>The sound of her crying hits you hard, and the knowledge that you were responsible for it all is almost too terrible to stand
>If she was not here with you, if she had not made you realize just how terrible things were about to become…
>Were she not here with you right now, you would have fallen apart completely
>”i-I love you too… I love you Anon.”
>Those words alone sustain you, keep you from the brink of madness
>Her love is everything to you
“Please forgive me.”
>”I do…”
>The two of you hold each other close until your tears are dried
>You continue to embrace each other long after this heart wrenching pain passes you both by
>Silence falls over the landscape while the two of you huddle up against each other
>”So when I’m adopted, I can move into your home with you?”
“Yes, you can. Or we could move back into your own home. We could even get a new home together, some place that is close to my institution and your school.”
>”What about after school, and when I’m older? w-Will we be together then?”
“Of course.”
>You slide a hand behind the back of her head as you gaze deeply into her now gentle eyes
“When you are old enough, I will ask you to marry me.”
>She lets out a soft and joyful cry as she nestles her head against your chest
>You smile as you hold her close
>It feels as if everything is right with the world
>>26458135
>The passage of time becomes imperceptible to you
>You feel as if this moment, with Sour Sweet lying in your arms, could last forever
>It could for all you cared, and it takes only a small glance down at her for you to see that she feels the same way
>In time though, it must come to an end
>Your eyes widen as you perk your head up
“Miss Sweet? Sour Sweet.”
>You lightly jostle the young lady in your arms
>She might have actually dozed off in your grasp
>”What is it?”
>Your eyes narrow as you look down the path
“Someone is coming.”
>Sour Sweet quickly disentangles herself from you and looks up the path as well
>A figure comes into view and waves down at you
>By his uniform, he appears to be an orderly
>You don a friendly smile and wave back as the figure jogs down and meets the two of you
>”Dr. Anonymous!”
“Hello there.”
>”Sir, I think someone is here to see you. Some kind of social worker.”
“A social worker?”
>You steal a quick glance at a bewildered Sour Sweet before frowning at the orderly
“I don’t have a meeting with a social worker. Is it Miss Harshwhinny?”
>”I’m not sure, it was a woman in a dark blue dress skirt with blonde hair.”
“That sounds like Miss Harshwhinny to me… but why is she here?”
>You rise up to your feet and sigh down at Miss Sweet
“I’m afraid we’ll have to end our walk early.”
>”What’s going on?”
“I don’t know, but I’ll get to the bottom of it.”
>Sour Sweet frowns and grumbles to herself as she hops up to her feet and joins you and the orderly
>The three of you walk back to the institution, your mind racing all the while
“Odd…”
>>26458177
>When you return to the facility, you have the orderly escort Miss Sweet back to the dormitories, after promising to check up on her later, while you head over the front lobby area
>As you turn around a corner and approach the lobby, you spot her
“Miss Harshwhinny?”
>She turns toward you and instantly scowls
>You swear you see her mutter something under her breath as you approach her
“Hello? I was not expecting to see you today. What brings you here?”
>Miss Harshwhinny briefly bites her lower lip before taking a quick breath and properly addressing you
>”Hello Dr. Anonymous. I’m afraid I’m not here to see you.”
“You aren’t? Then are you here to see Miss Sweet?”
>”No, not exactly.”
>You narrow your eyes at her, put off by her strange behavior
“Would you care to explain to me why you are here then?”
>”I’m working on your case for adoption. I decided to come here personally to speed up the process as quickly as possible.”
“Did you have any more forms for me to sign?”
>”No, nothing like that. This is part of your…”
>You feel yourself becoming more and more frustrated the longer she hesitates
“Part of my what?”
“Your background check. You weren’t ever supposed to know that I was even here.”
>She mutters something under her breathe about this being ‘unprofessional’ while you balk at her
“Why all this secrecy then? How were you going to conduct a background check on me here without ever even seeing me?”
>”I am here to conduct an interview with a close confident of yours.”
“A close confident? Who are you… wait.”
>Your eyes widen as you suddenly realize what is going on
“You’re here to conduct an interview on whether or not I’m an acceptable candidate for becoming Miss Sweet’s legal guardian. a-And the person you’re interviewing… she must be—“
>You look behind you and see Nurse Redheart standing at the end of the hallway
>>26458228
>Your eyes lock with Redheart’s as the two of you stare each other down
>She seems confused, likely wondering why you appear so shocked to see her
>Then her eyes widen as she looks past you and sees Miss Harshwhinny by your side
>”Ah excellent. Miss Redheart! We will have to conduct our discussion in a more private setting. Please set aside a room for us.”
“Wait!”
>You turn around and face Miss Harshwhinny before she can walk past you
“t-This is— I find this rather ridiculous!”
>”Hmph, as do I. However, background checks are an essential part of this process. Now if you’ll excuse us…”
>You give Miss Harshwhinny an exasperated frown as she marches past you down the hall toward Miss Redheart
>As you stare back at Miss Redheart, you wonder if she even realizes what is going on
>You feel your heart sink as you watch Nurse Redheart give you one last nervous glance before Miss Harshwhinny drags her away
“s-She’s… the only one…”
>Your body begins to shake as you feel your breath quicken
“The only one who knows the truth about Miss Sweet and I…”
>This was something you had never foreseen happening
>Your original plans never accounted for this at all
>You never intended for her to learn about your plan to adopt Miss Sweet, at least not like this
“If—when Miss Redheart discovers what I’m trying to do…”
>It is all you could do to keep yourself from running down the hall after them
>You want to shout out for them to stop, to pull Miss Redheart aside and try to explain everything to her in the sincere hope that she would understand, but now it seems too late
“For the love of God.”
>Your footsteps echo down the hall as you walk away
>>26458440
>In your state of panic, you retreat back into your home
“Why did I not see this coming!?”
>You should have known this was going to happen sooner or later
>Conducting a background check on you would have entailed Child Services investigating you by interviewing those closest to you
>Miss Redheart was your only friend, it made perfect sense that they would have contacted her at some point
>You march aimlessly down your hallway as you ruminate over what will happen behind closed doors
>Miss Redheart was the only one who knew how you really felt about Sour Sweet, and after everything you had endured together you had become convinced…
“She loves me too, I’m certain of it.”
>Your anger at yourself heightens in intensity as you wonder how you could have known her for so long and never realized it
>She knew so much about you, she had served you faithfully after all these years
“HOW!? How have I only realized this now!?”
>Your voice carries out across the empty halls and rooms of your home as you storm into your study
>Stepping into the room, you grasp your head while looming over your desk
“I am a fool. An utter FOOL!”
>Your fist crashes against the desk as you shout in anger and horror
“Miss Redheart, what are you going to do?”
>Just after you ask yourself this question, you are startled by the sudden opening of your window
>A bitter wind breezes into your room, blowing several papers off of your desk as the chill barges inside
“Blast it.”
>You rise up to your feet and walk to the open window, closing it shut and tightening it against the wind>”Isn’t it obvious Doctor? How do you think she’s going to react?”
>>26458498
>You twist around and gawk at your empty study
“No, not this again.”
>Your eyes scan all over the room as you hear a distorted voice echo around you in a snide laughter
>“What a cruel man you are, ignoring her all these years. Who could blame her for selling you out?”
“y-You don’t… you’re not real!”
>You grasp the sides of your head as it’s terrible laughter rattles around inside your head
>”Why are you angry at me? I’m not the one who’s about to reveal your dirty little secret~.”
>Glaring about the room, you try to find where this monster is only for your eyes to fall upon your desk
>Inside the cabinet, underneath a pile of papers, lies your gun
“No… you don’t really exist. It’s all just in my head. You’re. Not. REAL!”
>”When Nurse Redheart tells Harshwhinny how you really feel about Sour Sweet, that’ll be it! After all, if Redheart can’t have you then why should she let anyone else!? Much less someone so much younger and prettier than—“
“THAT’S ENOUGH!”
>You stand tall, your voice booming throughout the room
>A breath of hot air escapes your mouth as you glower
>It’s almost possible for you to imagine the Shadow standing behind you, whispering it’s evil words into your ears
“I won’t listen to this, I won’t entertain these fears anymore.”
>Your hands ball into fists as you stand proud
“Miss Redheart has always been a friend to me, has always been loyal to me. I know this time will be no different.”
>”If you think—“
“I KNOW this. I know Miss Redheart better than anyone else. These fears, this doubt… they will no longer hold power over me .”
>Calmly turning around, you see absolutely nothing behind you save your windswept window
>No inner demon to hound you
>You are alone once more in your study, the room so quiet that you can imagine your watch ticking inside your pocket
>Brandishing it, you calmly inspect the time
“This interview must surely be over soon…”
>>26458575
>You march back into your facility, feeling ready to confront anything that may come your way
>As you approach the front lobby, you spot a figure in the distance exiting through the front doors
>Judging by the dark blue clothing, you are able to identify Miss Harshwhinny
“The interview lasted just under an hour… hm?”
>You come to a halt as you see Nurse Redheart round the corner
>She comes to a stop, and your eyes lock together once more
“Miss Redheart.”
>”Dr. Anonymous.”
>When you meet her, its as if you could see a flicker of flame her eyes
>As she approaches, you calmly stare back at her
>Each footstep’s echo resounds around the hall while you wait with bated breath to hear what she has to say
>When she finally stands in front of you, the intimidating look in her eyes appears to be gone
>Your own gaze softens as well, and the two of you are merely left standing awkwardly with one another
“i-Is there… was there something you wanted to tell me?”
>”Yes. I just want you to know one thing.”
>She takes a step closer to you, such that you can feel her breathe against your own face
>Her voice drops to just above a whisper as she utters the words that would reveal your fate
“Go on then.”
>”Dr. Anonymous…I hope you two are happy together.”
>>26458676
>Your jaw falls open as Nurse Redheart stands back and regards you with a sombre frown
“Miss Redheart…”
>”I should get back to work. I decided I’m going to start using some of that vacation time, starting next week. I… I can really use a break from here.”
>You shake yourself out of your stupor and regain a small sense of composure
“I understand. Take as much time off as you need.”
>”Will you be OK around here for a while without me?”
“I’ll manage, you… you’ve done more than enough.”
>You wonder what else you could say or do for her at this point, but before you can think of anything at all it is too late
>She turns her back on you and walks away
>When she leaves your sight, you muster the only words you could have given her
“Thank you, my friend.”
>You turn around and walk down the hallway in the opposite direction
>Eventually, you find yourself back inside the patient dormitories standing outside Sour Sweet’s room
>You look inside and see that the room is lit up and your patient is awake
>A few moments later, her gaze falls upon the door and she spots you
>Grinning, she hops off of her bed and opens the door for you
“Hi Doctor~.”
>”Hello Miss Sweet.”
>You step inside and quickly close the door
>Her bright smile falters as she looks you over
>”d-Did it go OK? Is everything alright?”
“Yes, everything is more than alright.”
>You renew your smile and wrap an arm around her waist
“As long as we’re together, how can things not be?”
>She giggles as the two of you step aside away from the door
>”As long as we are together…”
>She wraps her arms around your neck as she leans up closer to you
>”Then let’s stay together, forever.”
>Cupping a hand under her chin, you lift her head up and press your lips against hers
>This moment you two share is pure bliss, and though it must end you are certain that nothing will stop the two of you from having many more like it
>>26458735
Happy Valentine's Day everyone!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LaSw4rVJy08
>>26458777
I'm so happy to see this get a happy ending.
>>26458735
thanks for finishing this up, Churro Anon
>>26458735
Oh thank god, it ended well. Except for Redheart, but still good otherwise. Gud shit, m9
>>26459195
I'm happy with it as well! It feels pretty great
>>26459560
No problem at all. This story was a blast, I had to see it through to the end
>>26459826
Thanks Anon! Redheart's ending was bittersweet,but not without hope.
I have to say I fucking loved writing this story. It was a pleasure to have written it for ya'll.
If any of you have questions for me about any of it at all I'd be more than happy to answer them as best I can.
All in all I can say that I am largely satisfied with how things have ended.
>>26460023
all in all, I never expected my pic>>26449885
would get the /mlp/ prompt treatment and was somehow spark some chain into the point where we are today. Have this, Churro Anon, a pic that I think needs to be done, something to close the first picture.
>>26460079
forgot pic lol
>>26460079
>>26460091
Wow
It's beautiful Anon,actually brought me to tears
Thank you very much, and thanks for creating the original picture and starting this all. It's been quite an experience for me, and I'm very happy I could have shared it with you all.
Sour Sweet a Cute
>>26458735
>>26458777
I'm glad we made it.
Gonna watch some capeshit, no update for a while.
>>26455725
Monkey Business is a part of Gorillaz,which is a Swarm Stand like Specials, as seen here: http://7thjojo.wikia.com/wiki/Specials
So yeah, itjustworks. Sorta.
>>26456206
My bad. Thanks for drawing, mate.
>>26460677
of course you gotta make your stand.. stand out with 6 specials super powers..
yeah..
this is why I quit the Jojo fandom and just came back once in a while only to look at pretty pictures. Im not really blaming you my friend,its just the setting is just full of OP bullshit eventually the randomness just cant sell it for me.
>>26460961
Aside from maybe the Clint Eastwood gorilla having guns there hasn't really been any evidence of the others having unique super powers.
>>26453822
Here's a picture of Lemon Zest in a Johnny Joestar pose. Consider it the next in a set I may or may not finish depending on how lazy I get.
>>26458735
Fucking awesome mate, thanks! Loved the ending.
Maybe I'll try to write something about her later. I can characterize bipolar people quite well, I think. (I'm the bipolar anon from a few threads ago.)
>>26462836
Looking forward to what you can come up with.
>>26458777
Bravo! I'm glad i was here for this ride (and my laptop battery didn't die this time) I'm glad for a happy ending. Wouldn't mind an epilog set like ten years later or even more as old man Dr anon thinks back looking at pictures of him and Sour through the years but thats just me being green-greedy.
This was a great one Churro, thank you man.
It ever astounds me that some of the best short stories i've read in the last few years have been born of multicolored horses (and their spinoff humans) on a animu image board.
Makes me wonder if in a few years time someone stepping up to get a Hugo award or even a Pulitzer will think back to his or her time turning spamed prompts into delicious green for the freaks on /mlp/
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>>26458735
Did you plan for this to end on Valentine's Day? Because that was sweet as the chocolate strawberries I ate.
>>26464449
I have a feeling that when he realized how close he was to the ending with Valentines right around the corner helped push him to finish in time for Valentines.
>>26465159
>>26464449
Fuck Valentine's Day, it's my birthday. It's a shitty holiday anyway
>>26465176
I don't think I've seen anyone as bitter towards Valentine's Day as you are.
>>26449885
bump
Bump?
>>26449885
bump
>>26460677
I'm glad too.
Looking forward to more Jojo when it's ready!
>>26462622
Noice
>>26462836
Thank you man! I'm very happy you enjoyed it, and I'd be interested in seeing what you'd be able to come up with if you write.
>>26463863
I'm touched that you thought so highly of my story anon. Truth be told, I considered writing a short epilogue of sorts earlier but I feel so satisfied with the ending I've written that I don't really think an epilogue is neccessary now. It's a nice thought though.
I don't personally see myself winning a prize or anything like that, but it makes me very happy to see that you all enjoyed the story so much.
This story is always going to be rather special to me.
>>26464449
>>26465159
>that was as sweet as the chocolate strawberries I ate
Aww well thanks man.
Having the story finish on Valentine's Day was mostly a coincidence, but I was quite happy to realize I was finishing it up when the day was near. Made me want to proofread it and touch it up when I honestly should have been sleeping, but it was completely worth it.
>>26449885
bump for our fuck up of letting the last thread die early.
Someone should redo the opening post pic. Her neck and hands look odd to me
>>26469645
I kind makes me wish there was something like an option that would make a sound if watched threads got to a specific page to serve as a reminder to bump, but I could see that being a terrible idea in execution and why it will likely never happen.
>>26472228
Considering that so few people actually use the thread watcher, I don't see it being a problem
Damn, I really like that story.
Except the fact that anon is at least 32 years old. At least!
What the fuck.
>>26449885
bump
>>26473276
It is old fashioned but at least Anon was willing to not pursue it until he realized how emotionally devastating it would be to her if he didn't.
>>26475168
It's still a little creepy
>>26476687
It's not like he really had a choice in the end. She was ready to snap at the first sign he would leave her. And by snap I mean at least one person would have died, although it's be anyone's guess who
>>26476951
Now I kind of want a yandere Sour Sweet story.
>>26439691
So it was brought up in the last thread not long before it died, but would anyone be willing to take a crack at making a Not Doing Hurtful Things chart next to go along with this one?
>>26473276
I'm glad you liked it!
>>26477756
>Yandere Sour Sweet
I can get behind this
>>26478738
I would imagine a Sour Sweet "Not Doing Hurtful Things" chart would have a progression similar to pic related.
>>26478738
Fuck, I was banned until now but whatever, thanks for the story Churro, it was really enjoyable and is probably one of the few, if not the only good green about a shadowbolt I've read since the movie aired.
>>26479369
I can definitely see that. Something like that would be pretty cute.
>>26479435
I'm happy to hear that you liked the story so much anon!
>probably one of the few, if not the only good green about a shadowbolt I've read since the movie aired.
It may just be me, but it does seem like the Shadowbolts have been getting a bit more attention lately. I'm hoping we can continue to get more green about them soon, as I have grown a bit fond of the Shadowbolts lately.Maybe even a Shadowbolt General revival sometime soon.
>>26480171
I would love a shadowbolts thread revival.
We, the Anons of the Shadowbolts Thread, welcomes you
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