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First for TRAITOR
We're still doing this CYOA thing with AN-0N right?
>>25974549
>May the hooves be with you
not
>May the Horse be with you
>>25974618
I hope so.
>>25974653
So drawfriend what projects are you working on this fine evening?
Somehow this fits Kylo's character.
>A Z6 baton seems like the perfect choice, you always did think the Sith were strong, and to be able to show your strength to them would be perfect, hell you might even be force sensitive or something like that
>It always did seem like some weird magic the force users had, but you never really questioned it. Seriously, if you could pick up something from a desk a mile away you wouldn't care if it's magic or if you grew an invisible tentacle
>Besides, this is what you wanted, a chance to be able to fight a force user and have more than a one percent chance at success! The stories of power and wit from them was amazing and you wanted to show that you: a simple-No a heroic Stormtrooper could easily defeat such a legend in their own form of combat.
>So you decided that this was it, the baton was right for you
>Captain Phasma's instructions said to meet at the hangar, a strange place to start training but training nonetheless you suppose
>After a few minutes you reach the hangar on the star destroyer
>"I see that the last of the cadets are entering now. Excellent then we shall begin."
>A number of strange tests were given to each cadet
>A few seemed oddly specific such as: Are you afraid of heights? Do you experience Vertigo? It pieced together in your head that they were searching for possible pilots, but you didn't want to become one anyway so when you weren't summoned in front of Phasma you weren't saddened
>Out of the fifty of us cadets, only 15 were chosen. You expected more but you guess that a fear of heights is larger than you thought for some of you
>"These cadets will be turned into pilots, see to it that they are properly trained." The Captain said this as she spoke to a pilot who apparently earned the name Spit Fire from rumors heard around you
>As she and her newly met cadets walk off you notice Captain Phasma's helmet turned towards you and your fellow cadets
>"Welcome to hell cadets"
>>25974618
>>25974653
Somewhat yes
>>25974687
http://i.imgur.com/wRm376W.png
If I told you you'dyou might get Partvand
>>25974799Is that Anon and master Luna?
>>25974838
That's what I thought too, but then I saw the filename said cmc lewd progress.
>>25974847
I'm kinda surprised they isn't a lewd between padawan Anon and master Luna yet.
>>25974780
>It hurts
>Training from Captain Phasma was going to be hard, you knew that from the start but this is almost impossible, hell one actual trooper decided to watch you and he was leaving by the fifth lap around the ship
>But you can tell it's paying off
>You feel faster, more alert, stronger and overall better
>Just the other day when you were tasked with cargo movement across the ship, you could barely make it half way without needing to take a break afterwards
>But this time you just needed a quick swig of water and bam you were already at the cafeteria before very other cadet. Except for one
>A female cadet with a mess of rainbow hair who probably put on her helmet anytime any one of higher status came along to hide the obvious rule breaking of both her color and length of hair
>RD42
>You never much cared for her or her way of rule breaking
>You approach RD42 and decide to ask her about this whole rule breaking act
"Not many cadets break the rules as much as you, let alone as nonchalantly"
>"What does it matter to you? You're probably just a hypocrite breaking more than I am."
>As your anger is contained it might be hard to keep it that way being around this "trooper"
>You leave her and her ways alone
>The next few weeks are a blur and all of the training as well
>Your body feels like you were cut into pieces and put back together again even better than before
>Your strength, speed and stamina have been increased significantly
>The weeks were unforgettable but this day was different
>As you finished training barely breaking a sweat the Captain approached you
>"AN0N, follow me for a moment cadet"
>All of the other cadets' eyes were focused on you, some showing anger, pity, admiration
>>25974549
I really like the rainbow Sabre
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oVSxoZ_Len8
faggots
Guys, how do you think the open world game that Visceral is making is going to be?
Here's what I'm talking about, if you're not aware.http://lmgtfy.com/?q=visceral+games+star+wars
>>25975332
>>25975323
>You walked with the Captain as she took you through halls of the ship and to the armory
>"You show promise AN0N, even some troopers can't keep up with you cadet. Your ability is being wasted where you already excel so I offer you something I haven't offered to any cadet in a long time. I want to personally overlook your training."
"But Captain, aren't you already doing that?"
>"If you can call babysitting training then I just might be overlooking. Most of those cadets will be in that training for years, but you. You're different like I was when I was a cadet."
"Really Captain?"
>"You're probably going to be a trooper faster than I did cadet, so what do you say?"
"I would be honored Captain."
>"Good, meet me here tomorrow four hours earlier than usual training"
>Four hours? Ugh
>At least you're being trained personally now
>It honestly doesn't feel much better than normal training
>It's probably just a label to show the prowess of your success as a cadet
>"Before you go cadet, I want to give you a welcoming present to my training."
"And what would that be Captain?"
>She points behind her and says something you've been dying to hear
>"Choose what you'll take into the war AN0N. I hope to see successful results from you."
>It's more than you could dream of. Weapons of pristine shape and maintenance all at your disposal
>"Pick something kid." An unfamiliar voice says
>You turn to see a trooper in full armor and a good old SE-44C pistol at his side
>You gawk at his very presence, most troopers are too busy in the fray, working or patrolling to even notice you, let alone talk to you.
>"Uh you alright kid?"
>You pull yourself together as you realize you're staring
"Uh yeah I'm great right now actually!"
>"Well don't just stand there. Pick something out."
>You look around and see heaps of weapons laid out everywhere for you to see and pick
>>25975520
>They all seem tempting but one seems to be more than the others
>A Z6 baton and shield
>You pick up the two in haste
>"Heh nice kid."
"I've always wanted one of these you know."
>You say as you hold the baton and give it a few swings
>"You know we're in a war right? I don't want to put a damper on you but you're going to need something long range for any enemy carrying a blaster"
>You hadn't completely thought about that
>"Tell you what kid, you can grab one of those blaster pistols and be on your merry way with three weapons on you"
"You're sure Captain won't mind?"
>"She sent me in here to make sure she would mind. She doesn't want you dead on the spot, otherwise she wouldn't offer personal training."
>You pick up the pistol and put it inside your belt
>One day this little guy will be in your holster
>You wake up much earlier than before to start training with Captain as soon as possible
>You walk to the armory and see Captain Phasma standing there waiting for you
>"A bit earlier than expected cadet, good to see your enthusiasm"
>You didn't realize the smile on your face until she sarcastically said the last part of her sentence
>She beckons you to follow her into a training room you didn't see before with other lieutenants training their cadets
>You notice six girls in total as the cadets training
>What you didn't expect was to see RD42 being one of them
>>25975784
That's all for now guys, please leave feedback and your thoughts on the story so far
>>25975796
No criticisms yet, keep up the good workand post more
>>25975796
It's going good so far, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
>>25974549
Will Sarge finally post in thread?
So, are there any ponies left that could use a lightsaber design?
>>25975874
Sarge died in the tornado anon.
May he rest in peace.
Post loyalty in honor of our comrade.
>>25974583
DID SOMEONE SAY TRAITOR?
>>25976059
>>25976059
Didn't he post in the last one with the star wars opening generator? So he can't be dead. Unless He became one with the force he is still alive
>>25976175
Yeah when he posted that he said more be coming soon. The question is how soon
>>25976205
>soon
Hope your skeleton is strong anon, because you'll be bones by the time soon come.
>>25976222
>>25975412
Hopefully something EA will have minimal influence on.
Alright I'm going to start up KOTOR 2 for the first time, wish me luck.
>>25977769
Good luck m80, and have fun!
Keeping the thread going
please serge please at least say something.
>>25974549
>>25977754
They've already fucked it.
>>25978815
Those are strange looking lightsabers.
>>25978878
i know they look to British dont they.
>>25978878
If you believe, anything is a lightsaber
Just believe, Anon.
>>25978948
>dildos
>fleshlights
Fuck you, Anon. Just fuck you.
If you had a lightsaber what color would you want it to be?
I would have it bronze.
>>25979484
I would like it in green or blue with some leather jacket on the side, becauseKYLE KATARN.
>>25979484
Silver Saberstaff. Or Red. Or yellow. Depends on my mood that day
>>25979513
>Kyle Katarn
My nigga.
>>25979484
Don't just tell us what color you want it to be.
Show us your lightsabers.No homo.
>>25980060
There's not that many pommels I like and no hand guardsnot Kylo type guards but just something to stop me from holding it at the bladebut here you go.So when are we posting our OC spacecraft?
>>25980307
When I find enough LEGOS.
>>25980060
Mine.
>>25981082
I made a lego Ebon Hawk once. It was sized for the lego guys, but the engines were held on by barely any parts and that made it really wobbly.
I didn't have enough brown parts either so it was just grey and black.
I also made one of the LAAT gunships because I didn't have the money to get the set. Doors on that fell off constantly though.
Good times, I wish I'd find the pictures of that Ebon Hawk.
Revan pone
https://i.4cdn.org/b/1451848562437s.jpg
Guys...why
>>25981693
>>661152589
>>25979484
Tough choice, but it would probably be just a standard hilt with either an aqua or silver crystal.
I always have a hard time deciding what to go with for the emitter though, sometimes with a shroud some days or without for others.
>>25981693
>>25981710
whats going on?
>>25981693
>>25981225
>>25981082
Thanks to 3D printers, you can pirate lego sets online. Your welcome.
>>25979513
>>25979607
Mah niggas.
>>25980060
This one is mine.
>>25980060
This right here.
If no lightsaber staff I write angry letter to lucas
>>25980060
Not sure on what exactly I want in a lightsaber, though this is close enough
>>25983769
Rip. You will be missed.
http://imgur.com/JN46AFV
shit
Alright faggots, I'm thinking of writing a story for the first time, but it won't happen until I repair my computer.unless you guys don't care about typos and shit, in which case, I can post from my phone.It SHOULD be fixed within the week, but life's a bitch and then you die, that's why we get high, because you never know when you're gonna go.
>>25983565
Looks like Revan's lightsaber from TOR.
>>25983925
I write all my greens on mobile
Go for it, just be a little more careful if you're that prone to making typos
>>25983925
You could type up a draft on your phone, then finish/edit the first set of posts on your computer.
>>25983793
Oh my... Well looks like it's time to make the bald man cry
>>25983793
/r/ing lewd of Anon and Master Luna.
>>25983793
>http://imgur.com/JN46AFV
>>25980060
I'm so glad this exists. I just couldn't help myself
>>25983793
Lewd of anon and master luna when?
>>25984437
With Luna "teaching" Anon how get rid of his pent up energy.
>>25983793
Could you draw fluttershy fucking aa kybuck next?
>>25983004
What about his welcome? :^)
>>25984261
>>25984281
Y-you too...
>>25984317
Pls it's just this once it won't happen again.
>>25984437
Monday. As much as I'd like too, I can't draw on Sundays.
>>25984513
>I already did necrophilia, pedophilia and bondage.
Yes
>>25984111
Check'd
>>25984179
I'll do this. I'll dump a large amount of green once I fix my computer.
>>25983793
I don't know why my dong is pleasedBut I like it
>>25984747
Hey drawfriend I have a few other ideas for your drawings if you're not too busy
Coco from sarge's being fucked by her training droids
Luna and sunset from sarge's story using an ancient meditation technique in their search for anon calledscissoringmeditationso yeah... pretty much just luna and sunset scissoring
A crossover between mando sunsetfrom solaire's story and coco from sarge's story having fun with eachother wearing nothing but their mando helmets
Fluttershy and Zecora from sarge's getting fucked by the force hunters when they were on felucia
>>25985886
kek
>>25985886
Nice. You gonna be updating soon?
>>25985942
Pretty soon. This update is exhausting to write.
>>25974583
Traya?
>>25983793
The only way the picture could get better is if Sweetie was actually doing something useful down there.
>>25985341
>A crossover between mando sunsetfrom solaire's story and coco from sarge's story having fun with eachother wearing nothing but their mando helmetsMY DICK IS FULLY ERECT
>>25983793
Have you ever considered drawing a porn comic based on one these stories?
I'd pay damn good many to see that
>>25987560
Money*
>>25987560
I have not. I know a little bit of theory on composing comic pages but I haven't actually gotten to it. I could try regardless. What's the best way to contact you?
>>25986913
Your right. I just got hung up on it. Sorry I may have been spending to much time on tumblr.
So, I've been nothing but a lying son of a bitch that's made promises of posting, then has failed to deliver, and I'm a total dick because of it. I'm sorry. I'm here now and I've got a good update ready. I'll post it in a few minutes.
>>25985341
>Mando Sunset and Coco
That sounds hot as hell.
>>25987887
>"what' the best way to contact you?"
Uhmm.. contact me for what? Im just some random horny anon that just thought he had an idea that might sound cool
>>25985341
Also Anon and Master Luna sound pretty hot too.It is just so forbidden.
>>25985116
Who is this waifu?
>>25988020
Sorry, I got a little exited when you said money. I thought we could discuss details for said porn comic.sorry anon I still haven't gotten payed from my last job
>>25987972
Deliver and all is forgiven; don't, and all is forgotten.
>You groan as your eyes flutter open and the light from above blurs your vision.
>You slowly blink a few times in an attempt to get everything around you to come into focus.
>You hear steady beeping around you, along with occasional mechanical whirring and clicking.
>A figure you don't recognize at first comes into view on your left and looks at you.
>It's talking, but you can't understand it.
>After a few seconds, you groan and blink again, and the figure turns into Twilight.
>"Anon? Can you hear me?"
>You take a deep breath and nod at her.
"Yeah... I can hear you..."
>She smiles and turns around to look at something and you shut your eyes.
"How long was I out?"
>"About two hours and forty-five minutes."
>You reach up and rub your eyebrows together.
>That's weird. Your fingers feel like cold metal for some reason...
>Wait.
>Your eyes shoot open again and you see your new appendage for the first time.
"Woah..."
>Your sleek robotic left hand seems to float in front of you as the fingers slowly move around, according to your command.
>You slowly sit yourself up and turn it around to look at the back side.
>There are a few gaps in the joints between the protective plates that allow you to see parts of the mechanisms inside that allow it to move, and all the way through it in a few places.
>Your eyes drift further up and you see that your entire arm is just as sleek and robotic as your hand.
>You slowly turn your arm around and look at it from as many angles as you can.
>"Do you like it?"
>You look up at a smiling Twilight for a moment before looking back at your new arm with a grin and a chuckle.
"Oh yeah..."
>>25988152
>It's a bit strange, you are giving commands to your new arm like you do with your right, but you cannot feel anything at all with it. It's almost like your arm is completely numb from the shoulder down.
>You bring both of your hands together and interlock your fingers.
>It feels smooth and cold against your flesh, and your nerves feel off-balance as only one hand experiences the sensation of touch. It will take some getting used to.
>"I designed it myself. Those plates that cover the circuitry are extremely durable. I figured that, in your line of work, you must see a lot of action, so I decided to help you out a bit. You'll be able to take and do some more damage with that arm."
"Well that will certainly come in handy. No pun intended."
>She giggles a bit at that and walks over to you.
>"I noticed on Sunset's armor that she has some extra gadgets and technology on both of her gauntlets, so I took the liberty of adding a few slots on your forearm for some extra auxiliary equipment."
"Well, my flamethrower was on my left arm. My dartcaster too. It would be nice to have those back."
>She thinks to herself for a moment.
>"Well, I'm not used to working on weapons. I wouldn't trust myself at first. I'm just a tech expert."
>So, she could probably figure it out if she had enough time.
>You want to get out of here as fast as you can though.
"Well, they were part of the same assembly that was hooked up to my suit. I have a couple spares aboard my ship. Do you think you could modify one if I brought it to you?"
>"I can take a look. It sounds doable."
>She turns around and you swing your legs off to the side of the table.
>The gyros and mechanics in your new arm whir and click softly as it does its job and pushes you up to a standing position.
>You take another look at it and grin as you turn it around a few times to look at it from all angles.
>You chuckle a bit as you look to Twilight.
>>25988175
>She's holding a small toolbox and a datapad, along with a few other pieces of equipment.
"What are you doing?"
>"I'm going with you to your ship! I figure it will be less of a hassle for you."
>She smiles at you and waits for your response.
>You give a little shrug after a bit. It couldn't hurt, and she's offering. So why not?
"Alright then. Let's go."
>She shows her teeth as she smiles wider and you both head out of the room toward the hangar bay.
>She walks right beside you as you head through the medical bay and into the hall, her smile never fading.
"Do you know where Sunset is?"
>"I think she headed back to your ship to get everything situated for your departure."
>Which means that she grabbed your armor and helmet from her room.
>You look down to your arm as you walk.
>In this light, it looks sleek and shiny. You can't help but smile as you watch it naturally swing back and forth with each step you take.
"You said you designed this?"
>"Yep. How does it feel?"
"It feels good, I think. I can't really feel anything at all, but I've got no complaints with it so far."
>She blushes a bit at your compliment.
>You continue through the hallways until you reach the hangar and your ship comes into view.
>Your beautiful, beautiful ship.
>Feels like forever since you've seen it.
>You head up the ramp and look around at the interior.
>Everything looks like how you last left it and you can't help but smile as you feel like you're coming back home.
"Sunset?"
>>25988210
>You walk into the main hold and see Sunset come out of the cockpit.
>Her eyes go wide as she sees your new arm and she starts to smile a bit.
>"Wow, shiny."
>You grin and lift it up to give her a better look.
"Yeah, it's nice. Twilight did a good job."
>Twilight gives another little giggle behind you and Sunset glances at her.
>"Uh, we're not taking her along with us, are we?"
"No. She's just here to make some custom adjustments to my arm."
>This isn't going to be another "Rarity" situation. You've learned your lesson.
"How are we looking?"
>"Everything looks good so far. I've got a few little things I want to look at real quick, but we're ready to go whenever you are."
>Sunset is just perfect in every way.
"Fantastic. This shouldn't take too long. This way, Twilight."
>You lead Twilight into the armory where you see your armor, helmet, and jetpack all laying on your workbench.
>Well, most of it. The left gauntlet and shoulder pad is gone.
"Set your stuff here."
>You grab it all and set it down on the ground beside the workbench. Twilight puts her toolbox down and exhales.
>It looks heavy. Maybe you should've offered to help her carry it.
>She takes another deep breath and smiles as she looks through her toolbox.
>"Okay. Why don't you find your spare gauntlet and let's see what we can do."
>You turn around to face one of the footlockers on the ground and open it up to see the various pieces of extra equipment you've stored.
>It's always good to be prepared and plan ahead.
>After rummaging through it for a few seconds, you produce an extra left gauntlet. It's unpainted, but it has the attachment for a flamethrower and a dartcaster already installed.
>You bring it over to Twilight and she picks it up to inspect it for a moment.
>>25988251
>"Alright... Yeah, I can do this... Um, is it alright if I use some of the metal from this gauntlet as scrap?"
"If you can make it work, then by all means."
>She grabs a device from her toolbox and uses it to take off the armor plating covering the internal hardware in your gauntlet.
>Once the covering is removed, she takes your arm and tampers with the internal circuitry just above your wrist.
>You just silently watch her as she does her work.
>After exposing a few wires in your arm, she reaches into her toolbox and grabs a small welder and a pair of goggles.
>She was really lugging all this crap in there?
>She puts the goggles on and you look away, knowing that it will produce a bright light.
>A few seconds pass when you see the light create a flickering shadow of you on the wall. You squint your eyes as it reflects off the wall and into your face a bit.
>You can only hear her work now. Every few minutes, another flash of light appears as she turns on the welder again, so you keep your eyes off of her.
>Another few minutes pass, and you hear her set something down and exhale.
>"Alright, I think I've got it."
>You look back to see your left arm fitted with a piece of your armor covering the flamethrower and dartcaster mechanism in your old gauntlet.
>It looks fairly close to your old gauntlet.
>"I used some of the metal pieces to create a makeshift hardware attachment for you. It will operate just like your old gauntlet and you can remove it whenever you want to just like this."
>She takes the mechanism and slides it down your arm a bit before it just comes off. She slides it back on a moment later.
"Looks simple enough."
>"It shouldn't get knocked off in combat or anything, but you'll be able to take it off with ease whenever you want."
>You reach over and slide the flamethrower attachment off before putting it back on.
"Very impressive. I like it."
>"Thank you. I'm glad you do."
>>25988283
>She smiles again and you slide the flamethrower off and on a few more times before leaving it off and placing it on the workbench.
"Well Twilight, I appreciate you helping me out like this. You've taken a huge burden off of my shoulders."
>"Oh, it's the least I could do. You helped save my life. I wouldn't be here if it weren't for you and Sunset."
"Well then, I guess I can count this as my good deed for this week."
>She giggles again and begins gathering up her stuff and putting it back in her toolbox.
>Once it's all full, she moves to pick it up, but you stop her and reach for the toolbox yourself.
"Here, let me help with that."
>You pick it up and head down the ramp to your ship with Twilight walking beside you.
>There's a bit of an awkward silence between you for a moment before she speaks up.
>"So Anon, do you enjoy being a bounty hunter?"
"Well, it's never boring, if that's what you're asking."
>She gives a little giggle at that. "Well, I'm sure it's not. But do you enjoy it?"
>Why?
"Yeah, it's a nice little setup. It pays well, and Sunset and I get to make our own hours."
>She gives you a little hum as you head back into the hallways of the cruiser.
>She takes the lead and guides you back toward her office.
>"How did you get started?"
>Ugh, you hate doing backstories.
"Well, Sunset and I were both born on Mandalore and were trained to fight when we were kids. We kept training as we kept growing. Then we fought in a few relatively minor conflicts with other 'groups', I guess you could say, which lasted a few years. Pretty soon, we were old enough to do our own thing. So we worked small jobs chasing people down, or doing whatever, as long as it paid well, until we scrounged up enough money to buy a ship. Now we're some of the best in the business."
>Twilight hums as you finish.
>"It must've been tough growing up in an environment like that."
>>25988314
"It was tough. That was the point. Our reputation as the best warriors in the galaxy means nothing if it isn't enforced. If we want to continue to be the best, we need to learn to fight as early as possible."
>You arrive at Twilight's office and she opens the door for the both of you.
>"Confrontation and violence doesn't solve anything though, Anon. It just makes things worse."
"Confrontation alone doesn't solve anything, you're right. Victory does. The violence, conflict, and collateral damage all stop when victory has been achieved."
>You set her toolbox down and turn back to her.
>"Do you ever get tired of being a bounty hunter? The risks must be awfully high."
"Sometimes. Too much of anything is bad, so I'll need a break every so often. I'd never get tired of this job altogether though. It's tough, but it's necessary, and I happen to enjoy it."
>You give her a shrug and she gives you a small smile in return.
>"Well, I'm glad you're enjoying it then, Anon. It seems a bit too violent for my tastes, but I'm happy for you all the same."
"Thanks."
>You just look at each other for a moment before you clear your throat.
"Well Twilight, I appreciate your willingness to share your technological expertise with me."
>You raise your new arm in front of you and she smiles again.
>"My pleasure. I hope we get to see you again."
>You both say your goodbyes to each other before you head back toward your ship.
>Along the way, you bump into Applejack and Master Maud again.
>Applejack whistles when she sees your arm.
>"Lookin' pretty snazzy, Anon."
>You grin and look at your arm again.
"Yeah, Twilight really knows her stuff."
>"Where are you headed to next, Anonymous?"
>You look at Maud for a moment.
>You know you shouldn't, but you still hate it when she asks you anything.
>You can't help but be suspicious. She is a Jedi after all.
>>25988343
"Not sure. We're probably going to head back out there and see if there's any work to do."
>Money isn't going to make itself, and you'd like to see this arm of yours in action.
>"I see."
>You both silently stare at each other for a moment.
>She's probably using the Force right now, trying to snoop around in your head for something.
>She's had time to talk with her Jedi Council about this whole thing.
>Is she just as as suspicious of you as you are of her?
>She should know by now that you aren't with the Sith.
"So you guys are going to handle this business with the artifacts and death sticks?"
>"We will be sure to keep tabs on everyone and everything involved with both. Any information is welcome at this point."
"Good. The less of that crap there is in the galaxy, the better."
>She nods her head slightly, breaking eye contact for a moment as she does.
>"Thank you for your assistance, Anonymous."
>She gives you a slow bow and you just nod your head in return.
"Always a pleasure to meet a Jedi."
>You turn to Applejack and bid her goodbye as well.
>You and Maud exchange another glance before you turn around and head back to your ship.
>Damn Jedi.
>Maud was a huge help before, and you're glad she was there. You'd all be dead if it weren't for her.
>At the end of the day though, she's still a Jedi.
>The Jedi cannot be trusted.
>You take another deep breath and make your way to your ship.
>When you finally get there, you remember that you needed to do something.
>You don't see Sunset anywhere in the main hold, so you head into the armory and close the door behind you.
>You turn on the communicator on the screen above your workbench and open up a private channel to Cato Neimoidia.
>After a couple of rings, you see Rarity's face appear on the screen.
>>25988387
>"Anonymous! Thank goodness it's you! I heard about the whole thing with the Rakghouls and I've been worried sick about you ever since! Sunset said you were injured! Are you alright?!"
"Woah, woah, Rarity, I'm fine! I'm alright!"
>"Are you sure?! I've heard about those dreadful creatures! Nothing bad happened to you, did it?!"
>You pause a little bit at that.
"Well..."
>Don't lie, Anon. She'll never forgive you.
>You reluctantly hold up your robotic arm for her to see and she gasps and covers her mouth in response.
>"Oh my goodness..."
"Look, it's not that bad. I'm fine, alright?"
>"How did it happen?"
"How do you think? I was infected. Sunset had to amputate my arm to save my life."
>It takes a few minutes, but you recount your entire story of getting captured by the Republic after turning in Trixie, then how you got wind of the Rakghoul-infested cruiser that was threatening Mandalore, then how you destroyed the ship, rescued Twilight, and only lost your arm in the process.
>She listens intently as you do.
>"Well, your mission was a success. I heard that Mandalore picked up the explosion on their scopes, but they couldn't identify anything about who the ship belonged to. It was completely vaporized when they got there."
"That's good. I heard that we destroyed it."
>"Have you spoken to Sunset at all since you've been up?"
"Not really. I haven't had the chance, and she seems a bit down."
>"Well, I'm not surprised. She's been through quite the ordeal."
>Oh, she's been through an ordeal?
>>25975796
Keep going AN0N
>>25988414
"Excuse me, but who lost an arm here?"
>She folds her arms and gets defensive.
>"You did, Anon. But who had to cut off an actual appendage of someone close to them in order to save their life?"
>You say nothing and she continues.
>"Who had to remove something that someone close to them has had since they were born? Who is going to have to live with themselves for the rest of their life with that knowledge? Who is probably racked with so much guilt about it right now?"
>Wow...
>You never really thought of how Sunset is taking this.
"Sunset..."
>You know she cares deeply for you, as you do for her. She probably does feel horrible for what she had to do.
>You've just been so selfish that you didn't see it before.
>"Girls are more sensitive by nature, Anon. Regardless of whether or not she is a Mandalorian, she probably feels extremely guilty that she had to do what she had to do. I'm sure she's overjoyed that you're alive, but I bet she's never had to do anything like this before in her life."
"She hasn't..."
>She takes another deep breath as she looks at you.
>"You need to talk to her about this , Anon. She wont. She probably feels like she can't."
"Why would she think that? We've been together forever."
>"Because you're always about business, no matter where you go. It's not good. You never stop and talk about anything except for work. 'Who's the next target? What's the next job? Where do we go from here?' You need to slow down and understand her feelings and thoughts about things every now and then. This was a hard thing for her to do and you need to make sure she's okay. Prove to her that you're not just a machine, Anon."
>You shrug a little as you hold up your arm again.
"Well, not completely."
>She doesn't smile, even a little bit.
>"Anon, I'm being serious."
>>25988463
>You take a deep breath and rub your neck a little.
"Maybe you're right."
>"No, there's no 'maybe' here. I am right. If you want to make sure she's really happy and that she really knows that you're there for her the way she is for you, then do as I say and talk to her. Have an honest heart-to-heart with her about this."
>You nod a little.
>She is right and you know it.
>You haven't been fair to Sunset outside of work.
>You take her for granted, and you really shouldn't. You feel like a total ass now that you know about it.
"Alright... I'll talk to her right now."
>Now she smiles and nods at you.
>"Good. Talk to her, let her know how much you mean to her, then let me know how it goes. I like to stay in the loop with these things."
>You chuckle a bit.
"A gossip to the very end."
>She giggles a little at that and you shut down communications after saying goodbye.
>You just sit there and ponder to yourself for a moment.
>How should you start?
>You press the intercom button on the wall after a while.
"Sunset, I'm here. Get us into orbit around the planet."
>"Alright."
>You stay where you are and think a bit longer.
>After a few moments, the ship hums and whirs to life before you feel it move around as it exits the cruiser's hangar.
>You get up and head to the cockpit.
>Sunset's sitting in her usual spot, in the pilot's seat and you sigh as you enter. Kashyyyk is right outside the window in front of her.
>"So, where to?"
"Uh, let's decide that in a second."
>She looks over to you as you sit down in the co-pilot's seat beside her and take a deep breath.
"Can we talk for a bit?"
Alright, that's all I've got so far. I'm sorry I took so long to post again. The holidays were here, I've got conflicts going on with my family that are grabbing my focus, and I've been dicking around with my work friends on Destiny to unwind in that time. I'm going to try and make a better effort to be here more often in the future.
I said it before and I'll say it again; I love writing. It's so much fun and I want to do it more. Life just gets in the way too much sometimes, you know?
I recently got an email that my jetpack for my Mando armor is on its way. It should be here tomorrow, so I'll post some pictures of it here for you guys.
Thanks again everyone.
It's good to have you back solaire
>>25988588
It was a pretty good update. Anon's new arm is real cool, I love the idea of a mechanical arm that can be outfitted with new detachable weapons depending on the situation.
Also enjoyed the Mando/Jedi hate going on with him and Maud.
>I said it before and I'll say it again; I love writing. It's so much fun and I want to do it more. Life just gets in the way too much sometimes, you know?
I know exactly what you mean m8. Don't sweat it.
>>25988588
Nice. Can't wait to see that armor.
>>25980060
this took longer than i thought.
>>25989171
I saw your question in the last thread. Sombra's not really a 'Sith Lord', he's that special kind of Sith that only pops up every thousand years or so, like the Ganondorf of the Sith people. He's king of the Siths and is regarded as the new Sith'ari so his followers refer to him as lord.
Boy this is turning into a bio.
He caught Palpatines attention when he once again reunited his people under one banner and raised an army constituting millions, given that the Sith hunger for power the emperor offered Sombra new weapons and fighting styles if he pledged his armies to be on friendly terms with the Empire. Sombra and Palpatine have an uneasy alliance since both are vying for control of the galaxy, Sombra only tolerates the deal because he feels he must bide his time.
I'll post the story now.
>>25989940
>Back on Moondancer's ship, dubbed the 'Sophist', the newly acquired passengers were just sitting down to dinner
>The girls had long since made a friend with M1-A5, Moondancer's security droid
>Though polished to a gleam the Droideka had mismatching parts
>A remnant of the war was now re-purposed to serve drinks to its guests
>'Patches' was his new nickname given by the children who were now thanking him
>'D00T D00T'
>"Why can't he talk?"
>Moondancer picked up a roll
>"He doesn't need to. He serves his function well enough without communication, unlike others..."
>Flash rolled his eyes
>"You were the one who said she didn't mind any extra work that might come our way. Something about a rainy day."
>"Fugi-"
>Moondancer had agreed not to use that word
>"High-detail transport wasn't exactly what i was referring too."
>"The money was good."
>"The money wasn't the issue."
>You look up from your bowl of mystery meat to fetch a spoonful of mashed something
>"Hey, friend. That's for paying customers only."
>Flash was a bit irritated for losing such a big haul
>Moondancer had absolutely refused to take any of your money when you explained the situation
>Though not exactly for the reasons you were hoping
>'If i take your money' she said 'I would be implicating myself. If the empire boards it'll be simpler to admit you're stowaways."
>"Then i guess you can't have any either."
>Flash Sentry had been living on Moondancer's ship for a while, long enough to forget when he had boarded at least
>He met your gaze as you nonchalantly plopped the spoon on your plate
>Moondancer explained she needed a people person, someone who wasn't afraid to strike a deal, bargain, or haggle
>Before she relied too much on the droid to get a job
>Intimidation didn't suit her all too good, neither did haggling
>Too often she would lose a job to someone else who was deemed more capable
>Then one cloudy day on a backwoods port she met Flash
>>25989950
>She felt comfortable enough around him to appear brave as she had just shown
>"The salad Mr. Anonymous?"
"Oh, sorry."
>As she served herself Moondancer couldn't help but cast a sideways glance at Gilda who focused mainly on her protein
>She didn't bother offering
>"So, how are you all enjoying your second 'night' so to speak, on my ship?"
>You sipped from your cup while the girls chimed in with their enthusiasm of being a ship where they weren't confined to their room
>"And you..?"
"It's alright, I suppose."
>"Please, elaborate."
"Well, for the past eight years or so I've traveled to many different planets. I've seen magnificent sunsets, heard the shrillest songbirds, and smelled the sweetest flowers on the wind."
>You pause to wipe your mouth
"On this ship all i have is a wall of musty old books and deafening quiet..."
>Moondancer seemed offput by your comment
>Even Gilda stared at you
"Don't get me wrong though, it just means i forgot what it feels like to have four walls and a roof. It's actually put me quite at ease."
>You continue to eat to Moondancer's delight
>Since there hadn't been a live, conscious, passenger besides Flash in the past she had converted two rooms on her ship into makeshift libraries
>You were fortunate enough to be assigned the most spacious of the two
"I've also forgotten how fun it was to read."
>Moondancer beamed
>Gilda snorted, covering her mouth
>"I didn't peg you for an egghead."
>She teased though it was true
>Back at the academy you spent all your free time in the library instead of practicing with your friends
>It was where you formed your strongest opinions regarding the order of the Jedi
"I read one book."
>"Are you reading it again tonight?"
"Yes."
>*Snort*
>"Egghead"
...
>>25989954
>After dinner the girls stayed at the table to play a game with Moondancer and M1-A5
>Gilda went off sit at one of the turrets in the cargo hold to be alone
>And you were just on your way back to your room, it wasn't for sure that you'd read, but you would definitely sleep
>You heard a fast approaching set of footfalls behind you and let yourself be taken by Flash
>He grabbed you by the neck and twisted your arm
>Throwing you against the wall he leaned in real close and whispered harshly
>"Hey 'Jedi', don't think i don't know what you were doing back there."
"Is this about the money? Not my fault she wouldn't take it."
>You grunted as he twisted your arm
>"Don't play stupid! I saw the way she looked at you when you first stepped aboard."
>Moondancer's face lit up when she first saw you
>"I had to work my ass off day and night to get her to show me the smallest bit of decency. Before you came along she was an ice queen, now she just looks at you with those big puppy dog eyes."
"Really? I hadn't noticed."
>Flash twisted your arm again
"Agh. Hey it's not my fault the girl has a crush on me!"
>"I want you off this ship as soon as we land on Naboo. Understand? Otherwise you'll have more to complain about than a sore arm."
>Flash pushed himself off you and walked away
"You know you don't have to be jealous."
>You say rubbing your elbow
>Flash stopped in his tracks and veered around
>"What did you say?"
>He started back at you and grabbed you by the collar
>Gilda appeared around the corner, a toothpick in her mouth
>Flash gripped you harder before he let go as she walked up
>She towered over the both of you
>"Problem, boys?"
>>25975332
In any other situation it would fall under donut steel.
IWTCIRS™
>>25989962
>Flash smiled at her
>"No problem here. Right Anonymous?"
>You smiled back
"Right."
>With that the smile disappeared from his face and he walked away up the ladder to his cabin
>"Don't think you can fool me Dweeb."
>Gilda stared down her nose at you
"Really. There wasn't a problem. Guy just can't handle a little competition."
>She gave you an unsettling smile
>"Can you?"
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Alright that's it for now. Also i've notice my pastebin was added to the list in the general. Should i trip? At first i didn't want to in case i flaked on the story, but looks like you found me.
>>25985886
Whatever those Pinkie Pie-lookin' things are, they're both creepy and something I want
>>25990134
They look like slippers, do they not?
>your jaw hit the floor as your two companions strode off towards the three Jedi fighters
"You're kidding."
>"We're not. I've always been a fan of hands on learning, kid."
>you scowled at the blue-haired Jedi as she clambered into one of the fighter's cockpits
>it was rather similar in design to her speeder, with a ton of blue and silver shine catching your eye
>the excitement that you remember watching police cruisers soar overhead while you were on Naboo began to well up inside you, clashing with the apprehension of actually flying
>still, if you took it fairly easy for your first time, what could go wrong?
"Um, okay then. So where are we going?"
>Octavia wiped her nose, fighting a smile off of her face
>"Our first stop is an asteroid field in the Unknown Regions."
>what
"What? Why would we ever want to go to the Unknown Regions, especially to an asteroid field."
>Vinyl shot you a thumbs up from her fighter
>"Because that's where you're going to learn to fly!"
>you cast a pleading look at Octavia, hoping that Vinyl had come up with this idea by herself and your dark haired Jedi would be the voice of reason that you had come to expect
>instead, she gave you a small shrug and headed to her own fighter, leaving you standing alone in the middle of the hangar
"Great..."
>you pouted furiously in the direction of her mustard-colored ship before turning on your heel and heading to the third fighter
>it was a simple, standard fighter, but you were kind of caught off guard at its edgy gunmetal gray and red paint job
>you noted with interest that the ship was already outfitted with a rather eccentric-looking droid
>it was decorated with seemingly endless hues of pinks and blues, making it stand out and clash with the much darker look of the fighter
"I see my ride is kind of colorful."
>>25990307
>Vinyl looked up from rifling through her cockpit and grinned
>"Sorry kid, both the droid and the ship were sitting in storage until a few days ago. I'm not really sure where either of them came from originally, or why they look so crazy."
>you hummed inquisitively, approaching the ship
>the astro droid looked to be one from the R2 series, and it beeped inquisitively at you under your inspection
"Hello little friend. What's your name?"
>while you were far and away from understanding the series of beeps that came from the droid in response, you were able to read the letters emblazoned on it's body
>it read PINK 2.0
>you smiled at that
"You certainly match the name, don't you?"
>the droid twittered, almost like a laugh
>as you vaulted into the cockpit, another string of beeps came from the droid, with an inquisitive tone to them
"Sorry Pink, I don't understand astromech."
>there was a brief pause, then a display panel inside the cockpit lit up, and a string of words scrolled across it
"Oh, you want to know my name? I'm Anon. Nice to meet you too."
>happy beeping
"Okay then. You're going to have to help me out, you know. I'm new to this whole flying thing."
>the distinct sound of a headset crackling to life came from above you, so you reached up and fit the piece into your ear
>"Are you done introducing yourself to your droid there, champ?"
>heat rushed to your face as you readjusted the comm piece to a more comfortable
"Eavesdropping on people isn't very polite, y'know."
>"Good thing I never claimed to be polite."
>another voice murmured in your ear
>"Truer words were never spoken."
>"Hey!"
>>25990317
>you sighed and dialed down the volume, setting the friendly bickering at a dull roar
>cracking your knuckles with nervous anticipation, you scanned the console of the cockpit, catalouging the more obvious of the controls
>the steering and throttle controls seemed pretty simple, with a two-handled control set up in front of you
>you flicked the controls in the four main directions experimentally, feeling the soft groan as the engines swivelled to match your ministrations
>you clicked your tongue in satisfaction at the ease and fluidity the controls allowed
"Seems easy enough."
>amused twittering came from your droid companion as you scanned the other knobs and switches
>some of them made vague sense to you, while the purpose for others flew over your head completely
>and for the life of you, you couldn't find anything that resembled an ignition switch
"Hey, Pink. Can you help me out with turning this thing on?"
>the response came in the form of a large blinking light directly above a thick silver button
>pushing it yielded the satisfying noise of the engines thrumming to life
>you smiled and settled into your seat
>it wasn't a royal blue police cruiser, but at this point you'd argue that this was even better
>you reached up to you earpiece and adjusted it so you could hear your two companions again
"Isn't there a piloting simulator in the Temple? Shouldn't we have started with that?"
>Vinyl's voice crackled through in reply
>"Normally, yeah. But it was a four month waiting period to get in it. Ain't nobody got time for that."
>Octavia's voice also pitched in
>"It was cleared to give you a more hands-on instruction. Besides, given your gung-ho personality that you've seemed to have inherited from Vinyl, we figured you would enjoy this more. That is, unless you're scared."
"I'm not scared!"
>"You will be."
>>25990327
>you grumbled in reply, which drew more laughter from the two Jedi
>"Time's wastin', champ! Let's get rolling!"
>you rolled your eyes as Viny'ls custom fighter flew out of the hangar, closely followed by Octavia's yellow one
"We don't even have wheels..."
>you nudged the control sticks gently, feeling the fighter lift up off the ground
>okay, so far so good
"You're putting a whole lot of faith in me to not wreck everything on my way out the hangar."
>"Just try not to even envision that as a possible outcome."
"Yeah, easy for you to say. Pink, where's the throttle?"
>blinking lights pointed you to a singular floor pedal
>brief experimentation told you it was both throttle and what you could only assume were inertial dampeners, as easing off the pedal brought you to a stop
>you cautiously made your way out of the hangar and into the open Coruscant sky, thankful for the restricted airspace around the Temple
>"See? You're a natural, kiddo. Let's make our way to the hyperspace rings."
>you nodded before remembering that no one could see you, and sped up to catch the two Jedi ships in front
>the controls were fluid, but not overly sensitive, and you quickly found comfort in the pilot seat as the three of you left the atmosphere
>soon, three blinking metallic rings came into view
"Hyperspace rings?"
>"Yep. These little fighters were designed for manueverability and quickness, so the engines are a bit lacking in FTL heft. Fortunately, we have these rings. There should be a little display lighting up on the console."
>sure enough, a little screen had flickered to life, giving you a digital readout of the ring you supposed was yours
"Uh-huh."
>"Just tap it to auto-pilot your ship in for attachment."
>obeying Vinyl's instructions, you lightly tapped the display with your finger
>a soft jolt went through the ship as you briefly surrendered control, and you floated towards one of the rings
>>25990340
>"Oh, and we'll send you the coordinates we're going to. That's kind of important. Your droid can plug them in."
>moments later, a set of numbers flashed across your main display, which made very little sense to you
"Okay, Pink. If you'd be so kind."
>someone snorted across the comm, which sounded like a rush of static
>"Pink?"
"That's the droid's name. Did you even bother to look at what you 'gave' me?"
>an odd silence stretched between the three of you for a while, and you scrunched your face up into a scowl as your ship locked into place with the ring
>"Ready for this, kiddo?"
>Octavia groaned
>"I've done this hundreds of times, and I'M never ready for it."
"Ready for what?"
>"You'll see. Making the jump to hyperspace in three...two...one..."
>it was difficult to describe the feeling as your ship lurched into the aether
>visually, you were in awe as the stars went from small pinpricks of light to thick lines that shot past your cockpit
>at the same time, you felt every particle of your body tingle at the massive acceleration it was going through
>you felt stretched, taut almost, as if any stress would snap you in half
>then everything snapped back into place, and you felt solid again
>the space outside of you had become a swirling mass of deep blue plasma, and your display indicated how much time you had before you reached the coordinates
>and by the constant static in your ear, you guessed that any communication would be snatched away before it could make it to its intended target
>the display told you that you had a bit of a wait until you reached your destination,, so you leaned back and closed your eyes
>Saphina's ethereal voice spoke up quietly
>'I don't like it in space much.'
'Why?'
>'It's too dark, too empty, too...lifeless.'
'Mmm. Peaceful, though.'
>'As peaceful as a wasteland.'
>with that, she withdrew, leaving you to your own silent thoughts
>>25990346
>a few minutes later, a series of loud beeps from Pink jolted you out of your reverie
"Huh? What's up?"
>you scanned the dashboard, realizing you were a few seconds away from arriving at the coordinates you were given
>your muscles tensed, and a few seconds later, an uncomfortable jolt shot through you, and you were once agains subjected to the uncomfortable stretching sensation
>a few jarring, queasy seconds later, you found yourself outside of a sizeable asteroid field
>Octavia and Vinyl hopped out of warp moments later, with Octavia letting out a small moan of discomfort
>"Hey champ, did you vomit?"
"Uh, no?"
>you could easily envision Vinyl's shit eating grin
>"See 'Tavi, you just have a weak stomach."
>Octavia groaned again
>"This is why I hate flying."
>giggling, Vinyl sent her fighter into a roll, positioning it right in front of yours
>you noticed that her detached ring was floating away, so you coughed an unspoken question
>"Oh, yeah, just tap the screen again to detach the ring. It's programmed to orbit nearby."
>you raised your eyebrow as your own detached ring began to float away
"Nearby where?"
>Vinyl tutted
>"In good time, young one. In good time. For now, let's have a bit of fun while 'Tavi recovers from her space sickness."
"Er, alright. What kind of fun?"
>"Just a little race."
>you cocked an eyebrow reflexively
"In an asteroid field?"
>"Why not? Obstacles make it fun! Besides, these asteroids are mostly gas and ice."
"That doesn't do a very good job of assuring me we won't die."
>before you could say anything, Vinyl's ship flipped in a tight roll and barrelled towards one of the nearby asteroids, laughing the entire time
>with a stunning explosion of ice crystals, her fighter collided with it and blew straight through, seemingly without a scratch
>>25990356
>"See? They're not very solid, so any impact will mostly be absorbed by your deflector shields. Just try not to run into the entire field."
>you rolled your eyes, biting back a witty comment, and guided your fighter up to the edge of the field
>"Take it slow at first, get a feel for it."
"Yes mother."
>gritting your teeth and fighting off some nervous jitters, you began to guide your fighter into the field
>fortune seemed to be with you
>none of the asteroids were particualarly large or fast moving, so dodging them was fairly easy
>you were even starting to enjoy zig-sagging your way through these floating hunks of ice when Vinyl's ship came zipping past in uncomfortable proximity
>"Jeez, you fly slower than Master Rinkle walks!"
"Maybe that's because I've only been flying for what, half an hour? I don't even know how fast Master Rinkle gets around!"
>"Excuses. Speed it up or you won't catch me!"
>her ship darted off into the deeper areas of the field, and your hands tightened around the control sticks
>pride began to override fear, and you chased the Jedi's ship
>"That's more like it. Try and keep up!"
>the two of you ducked and wove between the asteroids, playing an odd game of cat and mouse
>"First one out on the other side wins!"
"You're on."
>your game continued, with the two of you growing ever more bold and reckless
>you began to take turns around the asteroids much closer and much sharper, disturbing what little atmosphere the rocks had managed to collect and kicking up ice flecks
>your eyes widened as your two ships came upon a particularly large asteroid with a hole in the center
>beyond, you could see the vast stretches of empty space
>the race was quickly drawing to a close, and you were still stuck on Vinyl's tail
>as she banked to swerve around the asteroid, you had a crazy, hairbrained idea
>you didn't mirror Vinyl's turn, and instead aimed for the hole in the asteroid, increasing your throttle
>>25990362
>"Uh, kid, what are you doing?"
>your grip tightened even more, turning your knuckles white, as you replied
"Winning."
>"Wh-you'll never fit through there! Turn around!"
>in spite of yourself, you smiled
"Watch me."
>as it turned out, Vinyl was right
>sort of
>a screeching noise filled the cabin as you entered the hole in the asteroid, your wings digging into the walls
>it wasn't enough to stop your fighter, though, so you gritted your teeth and kept going
>a quick scan of your dash told you that the power to your shields was quickly dropping, causing your droid copilot to beep worridly
"I know, I know. Just a bit farther."
>tendrils of fear began to worm their way into your mind as the gap stretched on longer and longer, and beads of sweat began to form at your brow as your shields kept dropping
>finally, as your shields were nearly gone, your fighter burst from the other side of the asteroid in a fantastic shower of ice and dust
>you grinned as your ship pulled clear of the field, seeing Vinyl's ship just now cresting the edge of the asteroid
"What are you doing all the way back there?"
>"Not being suicidal."
"Funny. I don't feel dead."
>you got a chuckle at that
>"Hopefully it stays that way. At least Octavia didn't see that little stunt."
>"What little stunt?"
>you didn't need the Force to sense Vinyl's grin
>"Oh, hey 'Tavi. Feeling better? All caught up and such?"
>"Caught up? I'm waiting for you two in orbit!"
>"Ah, right. Follow me, kid."
>Vinyl's ship veered off, and you fell in behind her
"So what do I get for winning?"
>"A nice pat on the back and maybe half my dessert when we get back."
"How valuable."
>Vinyl's tone was in mocking imitation of Octavia's
>"A Jedi shouldn't concern themselves with possessions."
>your protest was lost in your choked back laughter as a small blue planet came into view below you
>>25990368
"Where are we?"
>neither Jedi offered a reply, so the three of you sat in silence for a while, floating above the planet
>you steadied your breathing, becoming more mindful of the Force, and slipped into your meditative trance
>there was something that they wanted you to find before anything else happened, you were sure
>you closed your eyes and opened your mind, and immediately understood Saphina's complaints
>back on Coruscant, life was always nearby, providing a colorful and noisy background of emotions that you had come to take for granted
>out here, the normally shining beacons of light that were Vinyl and Octavia were mere spots, glowing faintly against the vast, empty blackness of space
>you recoiled back into yourself, loathing the sensation of nothing, before remembering where you should be focusing your senses
>you reached out to the planet, trying to glean what you could, and the sensation that greeted you filled you with wonder
>there was a notable absense of lifeforms, but that wasn't what drew your attention
>the planet itself thrummed with the Force, and as you reached out towards it you were filled with emotions that were not your own
>pride, joy, accomplishment, and elation were all present, but there were darker strands of anger, resentment, and dejection woven among them
>Vinyl's voice drew you out of your trance
>"It took me by surprise the first time, too."
>you were unable to speak for a while, and when you could your voice was barely more than a whisper
"What is this place? It's unbelievably strong in the Force..."
>Octavia's voice was calm, if a little distant
>"Welcome to Ilum, Anonymous. Come, what we need is on the surface."
>her ship dipped down and started towards the planet, with you and Vinyl following closely behind
>one smooth reentry and a brief tutorial on how to land later, your fighter touched down on the surface, and you realized why you were advised to dress warmly
>>25990379
>the surface of Ilum was a frozen, white wasteland, with snow covering every visible inch of the landscape
>the sky surrounding you was a clear, icy blue, but you could see dark clouds billowing in the distance, and the wind howled ferociously against your ship
>you double checked everything on your belt, ensuring it was all in place before grabbing your cloak
>your fingers lingered on the apples emblazoned on the belt, before shaking your head and opening the cockpit
>the cold air hit you in the face like an icy bucket of water, and you hissed with disdain as you vaulted out of your ship, wrapping your cloak around yourself tightly
>"Lucky for you the atmosphere is breathable. Did you even check?"
>Vinyl had already disembarked her ship, and was looking at you with amusement in her eyes from under her hefty parka
"Well, you seem to be fine, apart from your intelligence, so I figured that I would be fine."
>"You're a little shithead sometimes, you know?"
>"Enough."
>Octavia's reprimand was quiet, barely audible above the wind, but it was enough to render you both silent
>she was wrapped in her own light brown cloak, and althoug her eyes were fixed on you, they seemed far away
>Vinyl grew uncharacteristically morose, and drew her parka around herself tightly
>you mimicked her actions, bracing yourself against the relentless wind
"So, what are we doing here?"
>Octavia turned and began to make her way through the snow, beckoning for you to follow
>"Ilum itself is a somewhat dull planet. It's in a constant winter, with blizzards raging on its surface at any given moment. In spite of this, Ilum used to be considered a good staging planet for exploration into the Unkown Regions. And yet, the system is unnoccupied."
"I'm guessing there's a good reason."
>Vinyl picked up the story
>"The Jedi have prevented any attempts to colonize Ilum, and the construction of any bases in the system. The Republic disagreed, at first, but the Order can be rather persuasive."
>>25990381
"I can imagine."
>"In leiu of sanctioning it outright, due to the concern for it becoming a haven for vagabonds and outlaws, the Republic has quietly convinced investors to just... not."
"And of the vagabonds?"
>Vinyl grinned the wild grin that she usually saved for fights
>"Sometimes the negotiations can be considered agressive."
>Octavia picked up again
>"The obvious question is "why". I know you were about to ask, and the answer is about what you should expect."
"Well, if the Order had a hand in hiding it, I would imagine there's something here of interest or import to us, though I couldn't find it in any of my studies."
>"It's in the part of the library you don't have acess to yet. Hopefully, when we return, that will change. Look."
>you upturned your gaze to be greeted by a massive structure looming in front of you
>you stood in silence as Vinyl drew even with Octavia, nudging her gently
>"It's been a while, hasn't it? Ever since Master Atma-"
>she cut off abruptly with a small grunt, and it took you a second to realize Octavia had hit her friend
>the dark haired Jedi strode off toward the building, leaving the two of you dumbstruck
>Vinyl's voice was quiet as you caught up to her
>"I forgot how touchy of a subject that was with her."
"What subject?"
>Vinyl shook her head
>"A story for another time, and probably best told by her. C'mon, she's leaving us behind."
>with more questions than answers, you quickly followed in Octavia's wake, Vinyl close beside you
>she had paused at the foot of a grand stone staircase, gazing up at the structure serenely
>"The temple on Ilum, a place of enormous importance to all Jedi, especially those in training."
>her words were soft, but she spoke them with such weight and presence that it seemed even the wind turned silent to hear them
>"There are several areas like this throughout the galaxy, all similarly strong in the Force, but this temple is the largest and most sacred within the Order."
"What kind of area?"
>>25990390
>Octavia didn't respond, instead turning and making her way up the stairs with Vinyl again at her side
>you quickly followed them, resolving to get an answer to at least one of your questions sooner or later
>at the top of the stairs were a set of large, ornately carved stone doors
>Octavia paused, putting one hand up as if to touch the figures that were engraved on the snow covered surface
>with a small wave of her hand, the doors began to rumble and swing inward
>the three of you stepped inside, and with another wave Octavia closed the doors behind you
>the room you were in was a large hall, with several towering statues depicting Jedi Knights of old, their lightsabers pointed towards a large, frozen archway
>you were so caught up in observation that Octavia's voice made you jump
>"This temple houses and protects the largest known deposit of crystals used in the construction of our lightsabers. The time has come for you to find yours."
>you were stunned
>with all your training, with the years you had spent in the Order, you should have expected something like this was going to happen
>but you still found yourself at a loss, needing a few moments to absorb what was going on
>Octavia pointed at the archway encased in ice
>"Beyond there, caverns snake and wind beneath the surface. You'll find what you need within."
>you shivered slightly
"At least you guys know the layout, right?"
>"We cannot go with you. You must complete this task alone."
>you took a few tentative steps towards the arch and gulped
"So I just find a crystal, and I'm done?"
>the unmistakable hum of a lightsaber filled the air, and you turned to see that Vinyl had ignited her weapon
>>25990395
>"I guess you could find and use any old crystal. You could use it to construct your own lightsaber, the symbol of our Order, and carry that mediocre weapon with you everywhere. But every single member of our Order will tell you that there is something that calls to you, a feeling that you will get when you find the right crystal, to produce the brightest and most vibrant blade. Otherwise, the blade just seems dull and weak, and the weapon itself will feel...lifeless."
"So, not just any old crystal then."
>Octavia smiled for the first time since you landed
>"That would be wise."
"What will you two do while I'm inside, then?"
>the Jedi duo spoke simultaneously
>"Meditate."
>"Spar."
>you chuckled
"Try not to kill each other while I'm gone."
>Vinyl waved her hand dismissively
>"Go on. Try not to freeze to death."
>you gave the blue-haired human a very suggestive hand gesture, which was met with a laugh and a wink
>you turned back to the frozen arch and gulped again
>this entire place gave you an odd feeling
>it wasn't bad, just off-putting, making you want to glance over your shoulder with every step you took
"No time like the present..."
>with that quiet mutter to gather your courage, you stepped beyond the arch and into the cave system beyond
That's all for now. I'll try and keep my update in large chunks like this, though hopefully I'll get around to posting them a bit quicker in the future
Who is the best Jedi waifu and why is it Sunset?
>>25990403
I feel like I'm missing an update somewhere, and your pastebin is still from when Anon fell unconscious.
>>25990953
That's a weird way of spellingyou're right
>>25991144
Whoops. I think the update before this is saved as "temp" in pastebin. I'll update it now.
>>25991144
Okay, everything's up to date.
>>25990403
This was great and worth the wait; And I'mma let you finish but why did you make pinkie into a droid?
>>25991309
Ah ah ah, that's Pink 2.0. Spoilers spoilers spoilers.
>>25991337Is there going to be /ss/ in your story
>>25991406__________________________________spoilers______________________________________________________
>>25991437
So is that yes or no?
>>25991493
There won't be any canon lewds in the story.That doesn't mean I'm not going to write them, they'll just be separate.
>>25991522
I wouldn't have it any other way.
>>25980060
I really like the way the weathered looked with the leather, although I'm having mixed feelings about the colors amber and blood orange.
Anyone of you know where Serge vet
he hasn't posted in a long time.
>>25992262
He posted in the last thread, saying that a new update would be out 'soon'.
Soon is however long you think 'soon' is
I just played KOTOR 2 for like six hours. It is a good game.
>>25984437
>>25984476
http://imgur.com/HDDtXnR
Is this alright?
>tfw you still suck
>>25993453
>http://imgur.com/HDDtXnR
>tfw you still suck
Over the course of these threads I actually think you have improved a great deal. Don't be so hard on yourself.
>>25993521
I have, but I still feel my process is slow and the resulting image isnt good.
>>25993453
I need more for uh education purposes.
Also you don't suck at all.
>>25993521
>/ss/ Luna
>>25993678
Meant to reply to >>25993453
>>25993647
sketching the fluttershy one now.
Also check the end of the imgur collection on the pastebin.
Is MLPG seriously this ded?
>>25994682
It's the hiatus man
>>25994682
Yes.Obi Wan never told you what happened to your MLPG.
So, um, any feedback, or suggestions? Critiques?
>>25995982
Yeah, write more.
http://imgur.com/HKEQl1V
>>25993647
Second. I want more padawan Anon and master Luna lewd.
>>25996062
She should be using more of her hands. Pretty great tho, gave me a semi.
>>25996062
>>25995982
No complaints on my end
Astromech Droid Pinkie is oddly very cute
Also>>25996062
>>25995982
Thanks for the pastebin. I was indeed an update behind.
I don't have any real criticisms. All I can say is that I really like your writing style. I know you're setting up for something, and I can't wait to see what it is.
>>25996587
It'll all come together. I haven't put an irrelevant piece of information in the story.
>>25996062
>>25993453
She's a big girl.
>>25975796
Update inbound
>>25995982
Love it. Love everything about it. I was perplexed as by the lack capitalizations and periods in some places, but that's a minor detail.
I love your writing, and encourage you to keep up the good work
>>25997275
is spike's attraction to rarity a canon acknowledgement of interspecies relationships?
are there any in mlp?
>>25997191
>The girl looks back at the Captain and you with a glare
>You return the look with ease
>You follow Captain Phasma further into the room to find a sparring mat
>This might get painful
>The day continues with you doing basic hand to hand combat for the next 4 hours
>You look bruised, beaten and all around dead but the progress was real
>Even Phasma was surprised at the speed of your learning, which surprises you more due to her earlier words of your potential
>You might just be able to become the next Captain if you keep this up
>Then again that will still probably take years to accomplish
>But it gets you excited that's for sure
>The prospect of ruling over troopers, leading them into a battlefield of blood and rising like the ashes of a Phoenix in victory
>You have a huge smile on your face as you daydream
>You've always found battle beautiful and disgusting
>It's a bit contradictory but knowing you've own is such a rush
>But on the other hand if you fail the overbearing thought of death will drive someone mad
>For you it's never been about the loss
>You'd fight over anything to get the natural high of being alive any day
>The ecstasy of battle running through your mind and veins
>The enemy's blood as the drug
>Your weapon as the syringe
>You as the addict who can't get enough
>Your first battle is always on your mind
>During the first exams your goal was to make it through an obstacle course which was slightly lethal
>The only rule was to make it through as fast as you could
>When you shoved that cadet out of the way
>You'd done it to other cadets
>But when you heard that scream
>It made something click
>Seeing his blood
>Being the fastest to the end
>Almost like a dog given a treat
>You didn't notice it then but looking back at it you were disgusted at the thought of seeing it as a reward
>You still hate it
>But something in your head won't let it go
>It's clawing at you from the inside, like a beast trying to be released from a compound cage
>>25997689
No, its not. No, there are none.But we can try to have them here anyway
So it's been three weeks since the force awaken came out. When is it okay to talk about it without using spoiler text?
>>25997805
That's sadly all I have for now
I wanted to be able to give a bigger update but I don't have as much time to write now
I'll keep the updates flowing but they might be slowno bully pls
>>25997863
According to what we agreed here >>25901095 it was new years. You're good to go
>>25997898
Ait
I liked the movie i really did. The new characters were pretty cool, it had some funny moments and it was great see OT cast again. But the movie kinda felt like a rather big rehash of episode 4.
>Movie begins with one of the main characters hiding valuable information inside a droid.
>The main characters escape from a desert planet on the millenium falcon
> The bad guys have a giant weapon in space and they blow up a planet
> an old man, a wookie and a young guy infiltrate the super weapon to save the female character
> The old man has a history with the masked villain
> The masked villain kills the old guy he knew
>X-wings and Y-wing go blow up the space weapon
Like i said i liked the movie it had some good moments, but come on J.J.
>>25998150
Well, look at it from a production point of view. You've gotta weigh the risk of bringing entirely new content and having it flop vs playing it safe and using an algorithm that has been proven to work in the past. What VII is doing is testing the waters to see how this next trilogy should take shape. I guarantee that the next couple of movies are going to have some pretty adventurous twists, since VII was generally received well
>>25998250
>>25998150
hes doing the same formula to show that the fans can trust him to not screw up like the prequels
>>25998150
After the shit that was the prequels I personally think this is a good way to introduce the new characters and it shows they can make a good Star Wars movie.
>>25998280
>>25998150
I feel like it was meant as more of a tribute, not to try to copy the original. He referenced many things, but to me it felt like only references. You can point out similarities between apples and oranges, but they are still two different things with two different flavors.
Besides, at least the acting was great. Even the original trilogy didn't have the greatest acting.
>>25998351
oh ya the cast was fantastic.
>>25998150
I bet that was to satisfy the Lucas so he wouldn't mess with the production.
Even then the story was alright, I liked it.
Rey transitioned well enough from damsel in distress to jedi hopeful, maybe a bit fast but I liked her any way, Some people say she's a Mary Sue but I don't see it; She's the protagonist so she can kick ass and her struggle isn't easy so its not like shes much more different than luke in episode IV . The movie could have ended with Rey just leaving in the millennium falcon the encounter with Luke was quite unnecessary.
>>25998386
The actor for Kylo Ren was a great pic
>>25998551
I felt it was a bit weird how apparently MArk Hamil was getting really in shape for this movie when he only howed up at the end for a few moments and didn't even say anything.
Is he just going to keep working out and shit and become super /fit/ by the time Episode VIII comes out?
>>25980060
Here's one I just made today. I figured I'd prefer something club-like, and I figured it would work well as an emergency weapon even when the saber wasn't working for some reason. I also really liked the body grip, looked like it wouldn't be hard to keep hold of at all.
>>25998634
I hope so. It would be terrible if they said fuck it and made a 3D hamil for the action scenes because he's too fat.
Also, what was your favorite scene from the movie? The millennium falcon escape from Jakku was pure sex.
>>25999433
>Old SWOL Luke Skywalker duels Snoke in crazy lightsaber fight
I would shit a brick
The Falcon escape was pretty great, I loved seeing it smash through all that sand and get banged up.
My favorite part of the movie had to be that duel at the end. You could see how clearly off his game Klyo Ren was, and watching Rey come back after Finn got messed up was awesome. It really felt like I was watching a real fight where getting injured and getting tired were things that actually mattered. I was completely enthralled by it all!
>>25999634
>>25999433
Death star trench run 2.0 was my personal favorite. IMO it was the most tasteful nod in the entire movie.
>>25999849
One of favorite moments was when Poe was destroying Stormtroopers and Tie Fighters left and right in his X-wing doing tricks and shit.
>>25999914
>tfw you smiled when Fin goes: "that's one hell of a pilot."
>>25974549
>You will never be chosen to be the newest member of Jedi academy.
>You will never be shy and lonely as you try get used to being around people and aliens you don't know.
>A blonde human girl named Applejack will never introduce herself to you and help you get out of your shell.
>She will never learn beside you and teach what she has learned.
>The years will never go by as you two became inseparable friends and passed the Jedi initiate trials together.
>You and Applejack will never have a secret romantic relationship despite being strictly prohibited by the Jedi code.
>>26000736
Good.
>>26000848
>You will never be harassed by senator Starlight.
>>26000736
Why anon? I thought we were friends
>>26000736
make a green about it.
>>26001131
I wish but I am on mobile and my computer is being retarded. Anyone is welcome to write a green based on this.
>>26000968
>You will never overthrow the corrupt Republic with Supreme Chancellor Trump
Alright senpai, I can post another update tonight. It would be pretty substantial, since I've had a pretty good inspirational streak tonight, but it won't be as meaty as the last one. Opinions?
>>25998634
>I felt it was a bit weird how apparently MArk Hamil was getting really in shape for this movie when he only howed up at the end for a few moments and didn't even say anything.
They film all three movies consecutively/together.
Would ya'll like to help me come up with a name for Applebloom's lightsaber in my green? I'm pretty satisfied with the name that was suggested to me for Anon's lightsaber, so I figured I'd see if anyone had any ideas for hers.
a description of it from my last update goes like this
>The long brass hilt reflects what little light that is in the room as you pick it up
>It’s a heavier saber than most, an intentional design characteristic that you chose
>You were hoping that having a heavier weapon would force you to bulk up a little like your older siblings, and the design did seem to give your strikes a little more weight to them
>Picking up the saber, you activate it
>The bloodred saber is almost too long for one of your height although it does give you a great deal of reach
>It had only taken you about a day to put it all together, but you were always quite proud of how well it came out
>>26002010
Sounds sweet!
I'd love to read some more so soon after the last one.
>>26002038
Really? I was not aware of that...
>>26002185
That shit looks suspiciously like electrum, and that's reserved for only the best guardians, like Windu-tier guardians.
>Be playing Jedi Academy
>Force powers are kind of skewed use wise since heal is the only useful light side power and Lightning is the best Dark Side offensive power in the game.
>Decide to fully rank up Lightning, Grip, Drain, and then also get heal.
>Get fucking scolded by Kyle and Luke for meddling in the dark side.
>Go on some missions with Kyle.
>He cackles as he kills men with lightning.
>mfw
>>26002507
That game pisses me off with how stingy it is with checkpoints.
>>26002539
I'm more angry that the mod I got for dismemberment also applies to dark jedi. Since they can one hit kill me. It really highlights the fact that all the ranged weapons are useless since they can reflect or dodge literally all of them and most basic powers like push or pull do nothing.
Okay, I'll post this update tomorrow. It should be pretty sizable, but sleepy writer is sleepy.
I can't be the only one that thought Adam Driver was mediocre
couldn't they get someone better?
>>26002769
His acting is fine. A couple of his deliveries felt off. At least,in my opinion.
>>25980060
obligatory comment on your choice of browser, items on your toolbar and operating system
>>26003212
angry response, defending previously stated choice of browser, implying you get off your high horse and tell us what you have if you act so smart
>>26002736
Please.
>>26002185
Aay'han. A word unique to the Mandalorian language that means "The bittersweet moment of mourning your losses as well as remembering the joys of life".
>>26003550
Are we doing writing prompts like this now?
>>26003550
wait are you posting something after this
>>26002185
Let's see. Brass-like lightsaber. Being used by Applebloom.
I'd call it Ragnarok.
>>26005063
Not bad.
>>26005083
I didn't make it. There is also one of Nito's saber, but I don't have it.
>>26000736
Can someone make a green of this?
>>26005063
What happened to the anon who made those sabers?
>>25974549
This is the worst thread on /mlp/. Worse than fuckin' vore general.
Why do you do this?
>>26005811
>filters
Go on now. Shoo.
>>26005811
No one is making you come here.
>>26005769
Still here, just lurking though.
>>26005292
Here it is.
>>26006085
Sweet thanks a lot
>>25986780
Sorry, you don't get to bring Jedi
>>26006085
Is that the one I edited because I thought it was too thick?
>>26006459
The length was adjusted in the original file to match the edited one if that's what you mean.
GMing a starwars tabletop game for some friends soon, I really hope this stuff doesn't finds it's way into my game.
>>26006588
Isn't anything fine as long as its not blatantly mlp of MAGICAL REALM territory?
>>26006760
*or
>>26006588
I rolled up a Force Adept Togruta that we're going to start playing soon. I'm really looking forward to it.
Getting real tired of this whole court run around. I'll have the update ready for you guys when I get home.
>>26007285
>Court run around.
What did you do...
>>26007285
>>26007343
Didn't you know? He killed someone.
>>26006085
I forgot how much I hated this design. It's seriously some hot topic tier shit.
>>26007343
>>26007363
Ha ha, I didn't know you ended up in traffic court for killing someone.
Is sarge gonna come back anytime soon?
>>26008183
I've learned by now that soon for Sarge is about a week, give him a little more time.
>>26008183
Quality over quantity, frend
>>26007370
That is whats so great about it. Sith are edgy faggets with a fetish for black and red and Jedi are self righteous moralfags. Anon even gave his lightsabers names. Face it, hes a giant dork.
>>26008458
Just like us.
So guys, what is your favorite lewd drawing made by the drawfriend so far?
>>26008719
His dick.
>>26002235
I was honestly not aware Electrum was a thing. Interesting though
>>26003472
ooh I like this one a lot, I can definitely work with this. Mandalorian language has lots of really cool terms.
>>26004077
Ragnarok is kind of fitting as well for such a strength based weapon.
>>26007380
I am currently waiting on traffic court as well. Good luck with your shit mang
>>26008458
>Not naming your weapon
>Not talking to your weapon
>Not forming friendship with your weapon
>Not being completely fucking nutsONLY MY WEAPON UNDERSTANDS ME
>>26008719
I'm still in love with the lewd drawing of Midnight Sparkle and Anon that was made a while back. It captures pretty much how I imagined she would look like so well.
>>26008719
Probably the Luna and Anon drawing.
>>25980060
>>25980060
>>26008183
Do not pray for quick greens Anon pray for stronger writefags.
>>26009718
Don't know whether to like this or notbut a green cometh
>>26009718
Did you just quote JFK?
