>So what is this thread about?
Pretty much this thread is about anon owning a pony as a slave. He can do whatever he wishes, be it nice and not abusing or the complete opposite.
If you're going to be writing some green, please name yourself. It will be easier to keep track of your story.
Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/u/SlavePonyAuction
Complete stories: http://pastebin.com/82rCVh4j
WIP stories: http://pastebin.com/mfmaWQDc
HIATUS stories (inactive for 2+ weeks): http://pastebin.com/QgTRi8d0
Full story list: http://pastebin.com/cqLCYveb
Popular/Recent Stories:
Changing lifestyle (Changeling) by Fireking -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/CndZXCih
Broken Princess (Luna) by Jingle Jangle -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/NLP6dcMr
Gangster Anon (Lyra) by Unknown -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/t0b0q4LS
Fire and Sky (Spitfire) by Lurkernon -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/KDF26gwp
A deal is a deal (Applebloom) by twiligh/tg/ame_night -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/DK21fjWz
Blind Anon (Fluttershy) by JohnColt -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/0rmywwyB
No title (Minuette) by Dyslexia -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/PYNcYvC8
Previous thread: >>25860806
Merry Christmas!
>>25881533
Merry Christmas
>>25881533
The IRC is #Slavepone at irc.rizon.net:^|
>>25881557
>LEL OFFICAL STEAM GROUP MAYMAY
Fuck off
>>25881554
That's cute.
>>25881581
Waiting for more Ling.
>>25881659
Me too!
>>25881677
The only way to pass the time is to post more bughorsie
So... if Ling and Anon were to... could Ling actually have changelings?
>>25881752
>Ling gets so much love from Anon that she morphs
>Ling has evolved into Queen Chrysalis!
hope for more Ling, Skittles, Scoottalo and very more white knigths histories
Happy Holidays everyone
>>25881533
>Coffee Cream
Mah negro.
>>25881952
Happy Holidays!
Scoots-A-Lot will return after the new year, I'm going to be moving within the next few days so it will take a couple to get my internet up and running.
It's been nearly a week since Ponk was updated, pray for a Christmas miracle, folks.
>>25882026
take easy HeliAnon, take you time, enjoy this days and return with new material in the future
>tfw these threads go so fast I can't fucking keep up with them anymore
Also, OP's pic. hgnnnnhhh
>M-master?
>Where are you, Master?
>You said you will be be back soon, b-but...
>...it's been almost 3 days and you still haven't come back.
>Did you decide to... leave me alone?
>No, that can't be. You're the best Master I've ever had. You wouldn't ever do something like that.
>Maybe you did it because I was a bad pony?
>Always being so clingy, constantly wanting you to tell me stories and asking to "update" them.
>And then you just... left.
>Oh...
>Even when I annoyed you so much, you still couldn't bring yourself to hurt me.
>So you decided that I should learn this lesson by myself.
>I understand now, Master.
>I'll be a good girl. I shall patiently await your return.
>...
>*sniff*
>...no matter how long it will take.
>>25882196
Somebody deliver a Skittles shoop spinoff of Seymour waiting for Fry.
What are some goodlewdstories?
>>25882296
Hunter Anon... was pretty fucking badass.
>>25882344i personally thought it got cringey but that's just me
>>25882355
I can see that. The mane six went from "Everything we once knew is ruined" to "Life is better here, let's get fucked senseless by our new interspecies overlord for several hours out of every day" in a heartbeat.
But it was detailed and creative. Also ended on bathroom sex with Twiggy. So I pretty much had no chance of not loving it.
>>25881659
Not sure if going to update today. Busy day.
we'll see.
>>25882431
i dropped it pretty quickly to be honest.but now i have to check it out
>>25882344
>>25882431
I sure hope the anon writing that comes back
>>25882619
I think he explicitly said he was done writing it there, but I'm not 100% sure.
>>25882554
Take your time, no rush. Just saying that quite a few people are looking forward to the next part.
>>25882196
>>25882228
Please don't
>>25882626
>>25882619
I just checked the archive on desustorage and it seems like after the last green he posted, he just seemed to vanish. No word on whether or not he's done. Its a shame really, I enjoyed that story.
Guess that's another to the inactive list.
>>25882431
>The mane six went from "Everything we once knew is ruined" to "Life is better here, let's get fucked senseless by our new interspecies overlord for several hours out of every day" in a heartbeat.
BEHOLD, THE POWER OF D!
>>25882788
But can you withstand a cute attack from skittles?
>>25882865
>But can you withstand a cute attack from skittles?
Your attacks only make me stronger.
>>25882882
Shit, I just blew my load into the wrongthread
Mistook you guys for the trap thread.at least now the oppic matches the inner faggotry
>>25878434
>>>Fireking
>>Banning a whole species from a country seems like a bit much
at least ponies confirmed as non-cucks
Though I guess with the low number of changeling assimilating them andappropriating their culturewould be reasonable.
>>>Y..you touched NOSES
bugsecks when
>>25880908
>next thread keep me in recent stories, please
incoming update confirmed?friendo
>>25882238
>If it makes you feel better, Oh, look, a namefag. Your day is ruined was originally used...
I counted at least 4 of us including the latest attempt.
I was inspired when mods changed the default name to "=". Some anon didn't get it and panicked, convinced that he was surrounded by a pack of samefagging namefags.
>>25883158
>mods changed the default name to "=". Some anon didn't get it and panicked, convinced that he was surrounded by a pack of samefagging namefags.
Oh god I'm just imagining the look he had on his face and his priceless reaction
>mf right now
>>25882882
Then lets see if you can face this?
>>25883461
>>25882865
Did you draw those? If so they're pretty damn good.
Can you draw me a Luna and Anon pic? Pretty please.I'm shit at drawing
>>25883461
>TFW Sweetiebelle writefag vanished
He was among our first, and in my opinion among our best. Didn't even get a spot in the pastebin archive.
>>25883557
>spot in the pastebin archive.
I can arrange that if you would like.
>>25883538
These aren't mine, and I wish I could draw at this level, mine still look like shit. Hopefully, once I'm settled I can whip something up for you. But let me check my folders to see if I have something for you in the meantime
>>25882196
Sorry, your master will change by a Changeling, more cheaper, easier to feed and can change in the mare he wants
>>25883592
>not mine
Oh. I thought maybe they were yours because I've never seen them before and reverse image didn't find me anything
>once I'm settled I can whip something up for you
That would be lovely
>that pic
That's fucking adorable. Although I think her horn would just puncture his cheek.also adding it to my luna folder
>>25883647
Once archive heinessen went down a while back a lot of pictures were lost, a whole shit ton of content just went bye-bye so stuff like this wont turn up anything from reverse image search. Unless the artists posted them elsewhere.
>>25881533
>Gangster Anon
kek
http://pastebin.com/PA1KFGfy
>>25883688
I didn't know what else to give of a name for that story since the writer didn't have one. I figured it made sense due to the theme of the story. If the writer decides on a title I'll gladly change it.
That story gave me quite a few hearty keks.
>>25883661
>policing dead threads
>making sure that the newest of the new get to stick with the ride
Everyone, slob this man's knob. He has earned it.
>>25883728
Thanks m8.More Luna green later tonight
>>25883728
>>25883803
[Initiating knobslobbing]
>>25883803
>Luna green
Speaking of that, it feels more like a PiE roomie story than a slave one so far, except for the intro obviously.
>>25883868
Yeah, I sorta noticed that too. I guess I went with the more white-knight type story like most of the other stories in this thread.
I am planning to do an alternate version of the story where anon isn't a white-knight (same pony tho). I'll only start working on it whenever I finish the current story. Something a little clever I did was at the part where anon removes the shock collar, the story can go both ways so it will prolly start off there.
I want to torture Skittles by forcing her to wear pretty dresses and act girly.
>>25883969
I want to confuse Skittles with pancakes.
>>25883706
Aye. Should I just start namefagging for it?
>>25883969
i want to torture Skittles buying her a Turtle how mascot
Why a Turtle? why not?
>>25883965
It's less the way anon acts and more the way Luna acts.
>>25883868
>>25883965
>>25884035
I'm new here. What is PiE?
>>25884064
Pony in Earth.
It's like Anon in Equestria but the other way around.
>>25884064
>>25884013
Yes you should. Also if you have a different title in mind for your story just let me know and I'll change it.
>>25884035
I guess so but isn't most of the other white-knight stories like that too?
>>25884064
Welcome newfag! Have my favorite pic of Luna
>>25883965
will she get cake?
>>25883969
SkittlesAnon, if you're there, does she have a different way of styling her hair than Rainbow Dash? Or does she keep her trademark spunk?
>>25884115
Which hairstyle do you think she likes?
>>25884171
I figured since she wanted to disassociate from her identity as Rainbow Dash as much as possible she'd trim her hair to be more 'proper'. Kinda like the pic >>25883969 posted.
>>25884020
>buying her a reminder of her most loved pet that she will never see again
Now that's pretty fucking cruel.
>>25884109
I can make it happen
>that pic
Stop it, you're making my cute sensors overloadn-not that i would like more or anything...b-bakasaved
>>25884309
To change things up how about a drunk ponk.
>>25884244
How would I know? She has not told me anything about his life before reaching Earth and to have no desire to do so?
>>25881533
bump
I DINDU NUFFIN
PAGE 6 OSHIT!
First off, I'm the guy writing the White Knight Squad story thing with Anon, Tab, and Page.
Second, I might not be able to post anything today, because I got pulled as the designated driver for my drunk-ass family.
So, merry fuckin' Christmas, you faggots. Hope your holiday's been better than mine.
>>25885227
drive safe and happy kwanzaristmahanukaholiday
>>25885202
Oh no! Its the end of the world, we're all gonna die!
>>25885227
>White Knight Squad
Your story now has a new title.
>got pulled as the designated driver for my drunk-ass family
Take good care of em anon and have merry fucking christmas too.you dip
>>25883614Also better pee scenes
>>25884073
this includes the fact that pie is basically a vegetable on life support
Soarin friend pls.
Do you think ponies like pizza?
>>25885655
Yes.
>>25885655
Dubs confirms ponies like pizza.
I don't think twilight realizes that it has pepperoni on it....
>>25885689
I don't think twilight cares that it has pepperoni on it.
>>25885655
vegetarian pizza maybe.
They have not thought that if the ponies can eat soy-based foods whose flavor resemble meat?
A long time ago, in a thread far, far away...
I did some stupid shit in this post: >>25822785, and now I'm rehashing it in a longer form. Happy Chrismas.
>You are Anonymous.
>And you are walking into what appears to be a fenced-in lot.
>You are here on a mission of pure curiosity.
>When you saw it while driving home from work, your curiosity was piqued by the sheer bizarreness of it.
>Proudly swaying in the wind over a closed gate, you saw a banner with the strangest of text upon it.
>Crazy Hassan's Used Camel Emporium.
>There was no way in hell this place actually sells camels, but you couldn't see through the wooden slate fence surrounding it, thus your curiosity nagged at you so.
>The sign nailed to the door is clearly labeled "OPEN", so you know it's open, at least.
>So you walk into the lot and you just can't believe your eyes.
>There are actually fucking camels here.
>Quite a number of them in all shapes and sizes you would expect of camels, and even a few you wouldn't.
>As you are captivated by the sheer butt-fucking madness in front of you, a voice and it's associated body sneaks up on you.
>"HELLO, GOOD FRIEND!"
>You turn to face him quickly and panically.
>"I AM CRAZY HASSAN, AND YOU ARE LOOKING FOR CAMEL, YES?"
>This Crazy Hassan is an arab man of unremarkably average build with a remarkably full beard surrounding a remarkably large smile, dotted with remarkably shiny silver teeth.
>"CAMELS ARE VERY GOOD, THEY LAST TWICE AS LONG AS HORSES AND DON'T REQUIRE DIRTY AND EXPENSIVE FUEL LIKE CARS."
>Crazy Hassan gets uncomfortably close and quieter.
>"And, just between you and me, I think they look very nice."
"Uh, I already have a car-"
>Crazy Hassan then switched back to the happy yelling he started with and took a step back.
>"AH, YOU ARE LOOKING FOR COMPANION CAMEL, THEN!"
>"I KNOW THAT FEELING, PEOPLE LIE AND TAKE ADVANTAGE OF YOU, UNLIKE NOBLE CAMELS!"
>>25885925
>"I HAVE JUST THE CAMEL FOR YOUR NEEDS!"
>He then disappears into the clusterfuck of camels.
>Several minutes later he comes out of the herd leading something along on a lead rope, presumably a "companion camel".
>You finally see what he has brought out to try and hawk at you.
>"YES, HERE IS JUST WHAT YOU ARE NEEDING!"
>Well, your mother always told you it was not nice to presume.
>What Crazy Hassan has brought out was definitely not a camel, even by the standards set by the strange camels that dotted his herd.
>Standing at a mighty 4 feet tall at the shoulder and roughly horse shaped with large and expressive eyes, it certainly brakes the mold in terms of camelology.
>And those large and expressive eyes are expressing infinite annoyance.
>"IS VERY GOOD CAMEL, NOBLE AND ALWAYS TRUTH!"
>"I told you, I ain't no camel!"
>And now it's talking.
>In a southern drawl, no less.
"Uh, Hassan, that "camel" appears to be talking."
>You make sure to emphasize the quotes around 'camel' to the nth degree.
>"YES, THIS CAMEL EVEN CAN TALK, NO EXTRA CHARGE!"
>The "camel" makes a very annoyed sigh, which Hassan seems to completely ignore.
>"IS VERY GOOD, YES?"
"S-sure, she is-"
>"GREAT, LET'S BEGIN DISCUSSING PRICES!"
"Wait, what?"
>And just like that, you are dragged off by the very giddy Hassan.
>>25885937
>You are Anon.
>And you are now the proud owner of a small, equine-like, talking camel.
>Though you aren't sure why or how.
>You walk out of Crazy Hassan's Used Camel Emporium, with your new used "camel" in tow.
>Well, time to break the ice with your most intelligent and all-knowing words of awareness.
>You turn to your newly acquired companion and open your sagely mouth.
"What the hell just happened?"
>"Besides you being tricked into buying somethin' you didn't want by a guy who don't know the difference between a camel and a pony?"
"Touche."
>You decide to quickly steer this conversation into more productive directions.
"Well, I didn't get your name when Hassan was, uh, haggling or whatever."
>"I didn't get yours, neither."
>Okay, now's your chance, save face with the coolest introduction you can think of, Anon!
"I'm, uh, Anon, and you?"
>Christ that was as basic and lame as it gets, and you're pretty sure your voice cracked, too.
>"Applejack."
"Well, Applejack, it's going to be a long walk back, you mind if I ask you a few questions?""
>You enunciate her name slowly and clearly, letting it move about your mouth a bit so you can get it just right.>Lewd
>"Go right ahead, 'aint like I have anything better to do."
Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/VHK1Pjtf
>>25885925
>>25885937
Oh dear lord
Luna green in an hour or so. Prepare your anuses and don't forget to bring the lube.
>>25885957
This looks interesting. I added it to the story list.crazy hassan is fucking hilarious
>>25886031
I'm eating a grilled cheese sammich in anticipation.
>>25886031
I feel so validated!
>>25886031
please, sex
>>25886133
>>25886344
Checked
>>25886344
Sorry to be the barer of bad news but this next update will not have sex.plz dont hate me
>>25886418
I'm just happy its coming.... giggity
>>25886418
>>25886418
DO IT
>>25886418
ADD SEX YOU BASTARD
>>25886418
But seriously though, you do you
No sex means no sexyet
>>25886469
>>25886470
>>25886501
Make me.
>>25886532
This anon gets itNearly done writing. Going to proof read and correct mistakes and then I'll post it. Give it another hour
I'm currently working on a rewrite of this: http://pastebin.com/dYbWGFU1
>>25884109
ftfy
>>25886750
Took me a moment to notice the different.
Kek
Late Merry Christmas everyone! No updates on either story tonight. I got on and ended up in a thread and got an idea spun into my head which became >>25886059 and goes for a few posts. And I'm still slightly rhyming from it.......
>>25886781
>All that rhyming.
You, sir, have my utmost respect as a writefag for putting up with that shit.
>>25877189
It's fukcing cristmass I just got home at 9 and finally got though your stuff. sgood mang. He really should have mentioned that she was a pony because of the turkey and ham. This could get really... awkward/sad.
Not even done with the last thread yet
Incoming green dump. Continuing from http://pastebin.com/v2j02fq3
>The next morning, after a restful nights sleep on a real bed, you find yourself back on the road, driving towards the San Rafael Swell once more.
>You are suprisingly, about 75% done with the mapping you were sent out here to do.
>Another few weeks and you should have collected all the data you need to build the updated map of the region.
>"So, Anon, how much of your time to you spend out in the field like this overall?"
Honestly, not as much as I'd like. I have to spend most of my time working in an office...
Paperwork, working with remotely collected data, stuff like that.
Assignments like this are a nice change of pace I try to take when I can get 'em, even if this one was particularly large.
>"I see..."
>You drive for a few more minutes.
>Maud isn't looking out the windows... She is staring forward at the dashboard, seemingly deep in thought.
You alright, Maud?
>"What am I going to do when we aren't doing field work?"
>You pause to think for a moment.
Well, that's somewhat up to you. I could try to get you to come into my office to assist me with projects there, if my boss allows it.
You could always just kinda do your own thing while I am at work.
>You think for a moment further.
A few times a month, I will do day trips, or single night trips to do some field work. You can always come assist me on those.
>You sigh.
I'm sorry, you might be kinda bored a lot if I can't get you into the office.
>"How big of a yard do you have?"
Meh... reasonable size for the area. Why do you ask?
>"I might be able to try my hoof at rock farming again... It was the family business."
>>25886750
She should eat her fruit instead then, cause you know.
Vitamins.
>>25887061
>Wut?
Rock farming?
>"Yes. Move rocks around. Grow gems. Mine useful materials for poni-..."
I... Dunno if that quite works around these parts. But, if you want to, you can try it. I'll get together any supplies you need.
>Fucking ponies and their wierd ass magic infused world...
>"Thank you, Anon."
>Maud then resumes her usual driving activity of looking out the window at the mountains that surround the vehicle.
>As you approach the San Rafel Swell, you think to where you still need to work.
>Cedar Mountain...
>One of the higher points, located at the far north end of the swell.
>You need to go take a detailed look at the Morrison Formation up that way at the very least.
>As you approach the swell, you take an early exit before the interstate rises onto the highland, and drive up the state highway to Castle Dale.
>This road takes you up a valley lying between the Western flank of the San Rafael Swell and the Wasatch Range.
>The road passes through several small towns, each surrounded by irrigated crops despite the arid climate.
>Dem mountains catching rain and snow.
>"How do you human's grow so many plants in a place like this without magic?"
Irrigation. The right kinds of crops. Careful management of the precipitation that falls up in the mountains and comes down to these valleys.
>"Interesting."
People have lived in this climate for a long time, even without our modern technology. If you are cautious and prepared, it's quite doable.
>>25887083
>Soon enough, you reach the small town of Castle Dale.
>Upon entering town, you drive into the first gas station you see before refueling for the last time before driving up into the wilderness of the swell.
>As you start pumping fuel, you speak to Maud through the open door.
There anything you can think of us needing before we head out into the wilderness?
>"The water jugs are full, and we have plenty of food. I think we are good, Anon."
Alright, sounds good.
>You continue pumping for a few more moments before the tell tale click of the pump stopping as the tank is filled.
>After closing the tank, you grab the receipt and jump back into the cab.
>You toss the receipt in with the others after noting the mileage.
>Gotta keep track of that for the accountants back at the office, or they will rip your head off.
Let's hit the road then, Maud. We are gonna start up at the top of the mountain and do some measuring, then see what we can get from the bottom.
>You pull out back onto the main road, and drive just outside of town before you turn onto a rough country road.
>The further you move from the highway, the worse the road surface becomes, before it turns completely into a gravel, and the hills of the swell rise before you.
>Behind the nearest hills, you can see Cedar Mountain itself rising.
Right, so while we are driving up onto the top of this mountain, let's discuss how we are gonna take care of studying these tall cliffs.
You are gonna have the simple job, Maud. You get to stay at the top, and I will talk to you on the radio with what I need you to write down.
I am going to repel down the cliff off the whinch cable, and when I get to the bottom, you will have to turn the whinch on to pull me back up.
>"Sounds simple enough. How tall are these cliffs?"
Roughly 1000 feet from the top of the ridge to the valley floor... But, the rope I have attached to the winch is only 500 feet.
That ought to cover the actual cliffs though, so this should work out fine. We should be able to reach the rest on foot from the bottom.
>"Alright. You'll have to show me how the winch works, though."
Oh, that's easy enough. You should have no problems with the controls.
>Maud nods, and looks as excitedly as she seems to be able at the large mountain as you approach.
>Despite the high point of the mountain being 1000 feet above the valley below it along a precipitous cliff, it's suprisingly easy to get up on top of.
>Cedar Mountain sits along the northwestern most edge of the surface expression of the San Rafael Swell, and the large cliff gently slopes up from the valley Castle Dale sits in.
>You eventually arrive on top of the large plateau around lunch time.
>Up here there is actually some developed camping, near a large overlook.
>A few campsites are maintained, and there's even some fucking toilets.
>Vault toilets, but still.
>This time of year, the camp looks to mostly be empty.
>Too hot for most folks, though the elevation here will make it much more pleasant than places you've been staying.
>>25887103
>You park next to a picnic table, and drag out some stuff to make a nice hardy lunch.
>Beans and rice. And some hot dogs, because you need to eat that shit quickly before your ice melts.
>Maud drags out the chuck box, while you grab and set up the stove.
>She is the best damn assistant you've ever had.
>Seems to like the work more than most grad students.
>More competent too.
>Though you still feel... awkward about having her forced into working with you.
>She said she didn't mind, that this is the best thing she could have imagined awaiting her in this world.
>Sadly, this kind of work doesn't keep up.
>Hopefully, your boss might be able to find stuff for her to do around the office, and maybe net you a pay raise.
>You worry that such work might not be so fulfilling for her.
>Field work like this is rare...
>Most geologists find themselves chained to desks in places like Houston, sitting in front of big work stations sorting through data.
>As you are cooking, Maud interrupts you.
>"Are you alright, Anon? You look... Deep in thought. And kinda worried."
>You sigh.
I'd say both of your observations are correct, Maud.
>"Is everything alright?"
>>25887113
That's gonna be all for tonight. Hopefully more to come tommorow.
>>25887068
I'll have to buy many bananas from today
whatever by the Best Princess
>>25887150
Or donuts.
>>25887171
>Donuts.
>No Ponuts.
Sir,
LurkMore, please.
>>25887176
If you wanted lewd Luna all you have to do is ask.
contined from >>25878573
>be Anon.
>You noticed the bugpones eyes widen slightly when it saw your old Pikachu plushie.
>When you set it down in front of it, the bugepone gingerly picked it up, and held it like it would disappear if it let go.
>You smile.
>Its ears fold down when you approach, but it otherwise remains docile.
>You decide to remove the muzzle now, and the bugpone watches your hands intently, but otherwise does not react.
>Once the muzzle is removed The bugpone yawns, letting you get a good look at its fangs.
>Cool, a snake tongue.
>It spends a minute working its jaw muscles, before speaking a feminine, trembling, 'voice of legion'-esque tone.
"T-thank..."
>She seems to be struggling to get the words out.
>You save her the trouble.
"It's okay." >You reach over and pat her on the head before running you fingers through her mane.
>Her hair feels.... Ew.
>You pull your hand back, and see some white, and blue, dried up liquid stuck under your fingernails.
"Did I just find what I think I found in your mane?"
>>25887185
And now we can all confirm Ponut is still a thing.
Now I'm gonna head my ass to sleep, this family-feud-filled christmas has tired me out.
>>25887171
Chessecake is best
I wonder if she sleeps during the day and stays awake at night
>>25887113
awesome view
>>25887222
I think she just stays up as long as possibleaided by coffee of course.
Alright guys. I'm about to post a fuck ton more green. So if you're about to post some green yourself, just hold back a bit until I'm done.
>>25887130
Think your story is getting to the point of climax, we must fear the worst?
Continuing from >>25876940
>The next morning arrives with great speed
>You took a quick and satisfying shower and shaved your morning stubble
>As you were brushing your teeth you seen Luna exiting her door
"Merry Chrtismas Luna!"
>Luna eyes a still adjusting to the light in the hallway
>"Merry christmas to you to anon"
>You rinse your mouth and Luna gives out a big yawn
>"We thought you didn't celebrate christmas"
"I haven't in over twelve years but since I have someone- I mean somepony else with me I might aswell"
>"But you don't have any of the decorations you talked about"
"Don't worry about that, we aren't celebrating it here"
>Luna looks at you curiously
"Well I'm done with the washroom Luna, you can go ahead and take a shower... or a bath. Whichever you please."
>You show her how to function the cleaning facilities which is pretty straight forward enough
>As you head back to your room to pick something better to wear, you hear the shower turn on giving you the answer to which she picked
>Once clothed you head to the living room
>You take a seat and turn on the news to kill some time before you leave to George's place
>After about 10 minutes you hear hoofsteps coming from down the hall
>"Well that was certainly refreshing"
>You turn your head towards her and give her a smile
"You ready to go?"
>"We don't think that we need to bring anything with us so we're ready whenever you are"
"Alright then... lets go"
>You turn off the TV and get up
>You make your way to the entrance to your apartment and put your shoes on
>As you grab your leather coat the leash that you got from the auction is revealed hanging off the wall
>You freeze
>Its too late because Luna definitely sees it
>"You're not going to use that again... right?"
"N-no... I don't need to"
>"Are you sure?"
>>25887307
"Well.. technically its not socially acceptable to be walking around with you in the streets without a leash but since its christmas nobody will be around to see us and we'll be going in the car anyways."
>"Okay"
"Let's go"
>You and Luna head down to the elevator to the lobby and take a backdoor that leads out to the parking lot next to the apartment
>You're taken by surprise by the sheer blindness as you open the door
>It takes a few moments for your eyes to adjust but you finally are able to see why you just got blinded
>Snow
>And its everywhere
"Well then, it seems like it must of snowed last night"
>The icy coldness of the air enters your lungs
"And the temperature dropped significantly"
>You make your way to your car with Luna right behind you
>Fuck your hands are freezing
>You struggle to unlock your car with your keys
>Eventually you reach success and get in the car
>You open the glove box to get... you guessed it, gloves
>And a toque too
>You put them on and reach behind your seat to grab a big brush made to clear snow of cars and to scrub office if need be
"I'll be right back Luna. I need to clear the snow off the car"
>Luna nods in acknowledgment
>After several minutes you are satisfied with the job you've done and get back into the car
>You grab your keys and place them in the ignition
>Thankfully none of the fluids in your car froze so the car starts on your first try
>You drive through the down town area since George lives on the other side of the city
>Surprisingly the city streets are nearly completely empty with few cars and pedestrians out and about
>"This city looks surprisingly very similar to Manehattan"
>Manehattan?
"That sounds a lot like Manhattan"
>"Are we in Manhattan right now?"
"Nope... most major cities these days look all the same... high density population in a small area. Plus Manhattan is only one of 5 boroughs of New York city"
>>25887320
>"How many do cities of this size you think are there total in the world?"
"Hundreds atleast. The city we're in right now, Toronto, has the highest population city in the country"
>"How does it compare to New york?"
"New york crushes Toronto completely in terms of population with the second highest in the whole world"
>"That is really impressive... do you know the population of your world?"
"A little over 7 billion I think... and by the way we call our planet earth"
>"That's a silly name to call a planet"
"Tell that to the guy who came up with the name"
>You two share a laugh together
>The rest of the ride to George's is mostly quiet
>Finally you arrive at George's place
>He lives in a higher class neighbourhood due to the position he has at the job
>You park your car in his driveway and head to the door
>You quickly check the time on your phone, 8:47
>A little early but that's no problem
>Luna looks at the house with a wide open smile
>"Oh my... this house is very well decorated!"
>You walk up to the door and prepare yourself to ring the doorbell
>Luna is next to you
>George is in for a big surprise
>Pic related. Its George's house. Imagine it during winter.
>>25887336
[NOTE TO THE READER]
THIS SCENE CONTAINS MULTIPLE CHARACTERS SPEAKING AT THE SAME TIME
> = LUNA
>> = GEORGE
>>> = MICHELLE
* = NOISE/SOUNDS/TV PLAYING
[YOU MAY CONTINUE READING]
*Ding dong*
>It takes a few moments but you see blurry movement behind the glass panes of the door approach
>A click is heard behind the door and then the door opens
>Holding the door open is George
>"Hey anon, come on in! You must be freezing out there"
>You and Luna enter the house
>Luna closes the door behind her
>>"Its so good to see to see you anon"
>He gives you a good ol man hug
>>"And merry christmas"
"Merry christmas to you too...You know you can always just come see me every day at the office right?"
>>"Yeah but I'm always too busy around the office.... everytime I would ask you how you were doing you'd just say: Oh you know, just the usual"
>He tries to imitate you when you give him that response
>You chuckle a little
>He looks next to you and he looks surprised, as you had predicted
>He must of been too busy with you to notice Luna
>>"So this is your friend you told me about"
"Eh... yes"
>Luna extends out her hoof to George
>"Our name is Luna. It's a pleasure to meet you George"
>>"Nice to meet you too Luna" George says as he shake Luna's hoof
>At least he doesn't spill spaghetti everywhere like you do
>You take your shoes off and place your coat on the coat hanger
>>"Right this way you two"
>George leads you and Luna the kitchen where you see Michelle busy preparing breakfast
>As you enter the room George's wife, Michelle, takes notice of your presence
>>>"Oh anon! It's so good to see you!"
>Michelle has her arms wide open and gives you a big, strong hug
>She's squishing you much more then George did
"Yeah you too and merry christmas"
>>>"Merry christmas anon"
>After letting go of you she notices the dark-blue mare behind you
>Just like George, she wasn't expecting that
>>>"Oh hello there"
>"Greetings"
>>25887357
"Oh right.. eh Michelle this is Luna... Luna this is Michelle"
>Michelle gives a warm genuine smile to Luna to which Luna does same
>>>"Have a seat at the table dears, breakfast will be ready soon"
>You take a seat at the end of the rectangle table with Luna to your right while George is on the other end sipping his coffee while reading the newspaper
>>>"Anon my dear, would you like some coffee?"
"Sure"
>>>"How would you like it?"
"Black please"
>>>"And you Luna?"
>"Two cream, one sugar and with a little honey please"
>Michelle nods and grabs two coffee mugs and proceeds to make your coffees
>You noticed that neither George or Michelle have been phased by the fact that Luna refers to herself as "we" and "us"
>Nor by the fact that her mane and tail are pretty strange but cool at the same time
>Maybe because they're older that they're more understanding and tolerable
>Michelle comes by the table and drops off you and Luna's coffee
>"Thank you Michelle"
>>>"You're welcome Luna"
>You just give her a nod with a slight smile
>Michelle smiles back and heads back to the kitchen to make breakfast
>A few minutes in George folds his newspaper and places it on the table
>He just looks at you and Luna while you both are sipping on your coffees
>Is... is he getting ideas of... y-you and L-luna?
>You had never even considered that yourself
>>"Hey anon"
"Yeah?"
>>"Mind if I have a word or two with you... in private?"
"Eh... sure I guess"
>He probably is getting ideas
>You and George head out of the dinning room into the living room far enough so that you don't think Luna will hear you
>He just stares at you quietly
"What?"
>>"Tell me what you want to tell me"
>He's giving you the chance to explain why you have Luna
>George just keeps staring at you until you spill the beans
"Okay okay, fine you win"
>George smirks in victory
"I bought her a few days ago at some slave pony auction"
>Pic related. Its what I Imagine George looks like
>>25887378
>>"Well she doesn't seem to be treated as a slave. Plus if she was, I don't think you would of brought her"
"Yea... well...."
>You just let the sentence hanging in the air
>>"Why did you buy her?"
"Well you see... its kind of a long story"
>>"Don't tell me your fucking it..."
>SERIOUSLY GEORGE?
"WHAT! Of course not! Who do you think I fucking am?"
>>"Well I don't know. I barely ever see you and you've always been very lonely and depressed since... you know..."
>The accident
"Look... I'm not too sure why I bought her myself, I guess just so that I could have someone do some cleaning around the apartment and keep me company"
>>"Clearly it seems more to keep you company then cleaning"
>You let out a sigh
"Yup"
>>"Hey anon, you're a good kid you know?"
"I'm 24 George, you can stop calling me a kid you know"
>>"Whatever you say kiddo" he teases back
>Both of you head back to the table and resume sipping on your coffee's quietly
>Thankfully your coffee is still hot
>Luna just looks back you
>She gives you a smile
>You smile back
>Michelle walks over the table with a plate in each hand
>She places a plate infront of you and then another infront of Luna
>>>"Belgian chocolate chip waffles with banana slices topped with whip cream and strawberries coated with maple syrup. Enjoy"
>Both you and Luna say thank you at the same time
>You both blush a light shade of red
>Michelle places two more plates for her and George
>You all begin eating your breakfast
>This is the shit right here
>It's so damn good
>It's been forever since you had this meal
>Atleast 6 years since because you moved out as soon as you turned 18
>Taking a look to your right, you notice that Luna is actually eating with a fork using her magic
>Man she's recovering mighty fast
>The auctioneer that sold you her did tell you she needed to take the magic suppressants every other day
>Guess they wear off fast if she can use her magic much better already
>>25887336
Yeah, here is my high quality snowy winter edit of that house.
>>25887386
>>>"So Luna"
>Michelle don't you fucking dare
>>>"How did you meet anon?"
>Cunt
>You would of spit out the coffee you were drinking if it weren't for the fact that you would look like a complete asshole
>Luna who appears to be caught by surprise finishes her bite and levitates a napkin to wipe the whip cream off of her mouth
>"Well.... it's a sort of complicated"
>>>"Oh please, do tell"
"Michelle, I don't think its a good ide-"
>>>"Is your name Luna? No? Then be quiet and let the lady speak"
>George just shakes his head telling you not to even bother arguing
>Michelle is a bitch sometimes but she doesn't do it purposely
>You just keep your mouth shut and hope Luna plays it cool
>"Um... well... we didn't really meet... more like.... p-purchased... as a s-slave"
>>>"You certainly don't seem to be treated as one, else you would still have that little ring device thing on your horn and a harness over your wings"
>You decide its time to step in
"That's because she's not a slave Michelle. She's just as free as you and I" you say with a serious tone
>>>"Oh.....I..um... I did not mean to be rude or intrude. My apologies Luna"
>"No worries"
>George decides to finally step in and change these subject
>>"Man these waffles. Can you believe them?"
>"They are delicious, thank you for this lovely meal"
"Yeah these are great. Thanks"
>>>"Thank you for the lovely compliments you guys"
>Michelle blushes slightly
>You all continue to eat in silence
>Once you are all done Michelle clears the table of the dishes and starts placing them into the dishwasher and cleaning the counters
>George tells you and Luna to wait in the living room because he's got something to give to you
>While waiting you've realized that you don't have any gifts for neither Michelle or George
>Same goes for Luna
>It's not your fault tho, it was pretty last minute and all the stores are already closed
>You'll have to get them all something at a later date
>>25887403
>After a few minutes of waiting, Michelle comes into the room and offers some green-tea to which you decline
>On the other hand, Luna accepts some
>Michelle leaves and comes back a few minutes later with a tea-cups in each hand
>Just moments later George is finally back with a medium sized box that is appears to have been just recently wiped of dust
>>>"So it was in the attic dear?"
>>"Yup. It was buried behind a bunch of other boxes in the back"
>George hands you the box
>>"Merry christmas anon"
>George backs away and takes a seat next to his wife
>You make a detailed inspection and analysis of the box
>You've come to the conclusion that the gift wrapping on the box is ancient
>If George had been storing it in the attic then it means he's been waiting for a very long time to give this to you
>The box is also surprisingly light for its size
>Your rip the gift wrapping from what you presume to be the top of the box
>You grab your switchblade from your pocket and cut the transparent ductape holding the top of the box closed
>Who the fuck cares if switchblades are illegal because you sure don't
>Placing your knife away, you open up the box
>Its full of gift tissue paper of various colors
>The box is mostly empty
>However you suddenly feel something
>Something flat and square that is taped to the inside of the bottom of the box
>You struggle to get a good grip on it but you finally succeed
>Once properly gripped you tug at it will all your strenght
*RIIIIP*
>You managed to got rip it off of the box
>You inspect the item in your hands
>It a CD case
>You remove the surrounding tape from the case and pry it open
>A slip of paper falls out of the CD case but you pick it back up and flip it over
>It reads
*To my son*
>Your face goes pale
>You recognize the handwriting
>Your father's
>>25887413
INCOMING FEELS
Also had to delete the previous post since there was a very obvious spelling mistake
>You look at everyone in the room
>They're all watching you silently
>You get up and place the CD in the DVD player for the TV
>You grab the remote to play the CD
>You sit back down and hit play
>Your dad appears on the TV
>He appears to be in the garage of the house you had lived in with him
>The camera is shaking around as he tries to adjust it properly
>*Come on, stay straight camera... there we go*
>He stands back and takes a seat on a stool
>*Hey anon. It's dad*
>You're leaning forward as you sit down with full attention devoted to the TV
>*If you are currently watching this video*
>He pauses and lets out a big sigh
>*It means something has happened to me and I am no longer alive*
>*I don't know how long you're seeing this after my passing but I want to say that I love you very much and that the day you were born was the single happiest day of my life*
>*I couldn't be anymore proud of you anon*
>All of a sudden you see a 6 year old you come into the room
*Dad, are you coming to play?*
>*I told you to wait for me for a few minutes*
*But I was getting borrrred*
>*I'm nearly done, if you got wait a little longer we can go pick up some icecream!*
*Okay!*
>6 year old you runs out of the room to go wait for your dad
>Your dad chuckles and gets up
>He proceeds to look back at the camera and picks it up
>*I love you anon. Never forget that*
*Comon daaaad!*
>*Coming!*
>Your dad fidgets with camera again and then the screen goes black indicating the end of the recording
>>25887460
>Your eyes have been practically full of water the whole video
>But now it feels like a tidal wave is imminent
>You look around the room through your watery vision
>George and Michelle both have several tears flowing down their cheeks
>So does Luna
>Finally you open the floodgates
>A tsunami of tears trickle down your face
>You're mouth is wobbling as you try not to cry out loud
>All that comes out of your mouth is whimpering sobs
>George and Michelle both get up and stand infront of you together
>You also get up and embrace into a group hug
>After about a minute or so you've calmed down
*sniff* "W-why did you *sniff* w-wait so long to give me that?"
>>"Your father told me to only give you this on christmas and only when I felt that you were ready to receive it"
>He gives you a light smile
>>"But I never even had the oppurtunity to give it to you since you never wanted to celebrate christmas after his passing"
"I'm sorry for closing myself off from you two after the incident"
>>>"It's okay anon. You wanted to be left alone so we did. We understood how you felt"
"Thank you. Both of you. This has been the best *sniff* christmas I've ever had... I really mean it"
>>"Us too anon"
"I'm sorry I couldn't you two some gifts. It was so last minute and all the stores were closed I didn't have the chance to get something"
>George grabs both of your shoulders
>>"Anon... just having you here with us is an incredible gift. It's all we ever wanted"
>>He smiles at you with a couple of tears coming out of his eyes
>You hug again
"I'm going to go for a walk... this is just so much to take in and I just need to think"
>>"We will be here when you get back"
>>>"Would you like some hot chocolate ready for when you get back?"
*sniff* "Y-yes please"
>You head over to the main entrance and put your shows and coat back on
>Alongside your gloves and toque
>>25887470
>You open the door but as you are about to leave you notice that Luna is right behind you
"Stay here Luna. I want to be alone for a bit"
>"Okay"
>You head threw the door frame and close the door behind you
>You can see the glistening of Luna's mane through the glass panes of the door
>You let out a sigh and head towards the sidewalk for your little walk around the neighborhood
>For once in a very long time, you feel happy
And that's all for this update.
Enjoy all that green guys. I had quite a hard time writing the feels part myself without getting a little feelsy. Now its time I get some much needed rest. Maybe more green tomorrow but I may take a break.
And as always, feedback is appreciated!
>>25887401
And thanks for the pic Strumstar!
>>25887477
Awesome update
>>25887196
>Be Chrysalis.
You flinch back expecting some form of punishment, despite feeling no ill will towards you.
>You do, however, feel a slight bit of mirth, and when you open your eyes, you realize you were holding onto the stuffed rodent even tighter than before.
>You sigh.
"It's exactly what you think it is..."
>You don't like remembering how often your previous owner 'used' you, nor how harshly you were disciplined for even the slightest transgression.
>The human tenses slightly, and you feel anger coming from him.
>you quickly realizes you are also feeling the undertone of sympathy directed at you, and the anger was thankfully also not directed at you.
>he promptly straightens, before walking over and unclipping your leash from the anchor.
>You grip the rodent tighter, not sure what was going to happen.
>he begins leading you inside.
>Yet another surprise, the inside was actually kept clean.
>You are lead down a hallway and eventually into a room
>it's a bathroom.
>the human wraps the end of the leash he was holding around a towel rack, before clipping it to itself.
>it's long enough for you to stand anywhere in the bathroom with pulling it taunt.
>he looks at you and blinks
"Already attached to Pikachu, huh?"
>You blink.
>You had carried it with you without realizing it.
>He coaxes it from you grasp and places it on the sink countertop, and then has you stand in the bathtub.
>you were not prepared for the water to come from above you, instead of from a faucet.
(like always, feedback appricated)
>>25887682
ay nigga
ay where yo pastebin at
>>25887697
http://pastebin.com/0X18Gr3R
>>25887706
its still so short
you gottafill it up
>>25882026
>an entire week from now.
I guess it can't be helped. I'll be looking forward to seeing more..... in like 5-6 threads.
>mfw I'm still not even half way through the last thread
I am experiencing genuine nausea in my haste to catch up with you writefags.
>>25887836
pretty much this. jesus it seems like 4 threads in twice as many days. I have holidays to worry about.
>>25884115
Considering the amount of "spunk" she got from her previous master. I wager she was probably looking pretty disheveled. But it should grow back if she lives long enough.
>Soarin writebro said he would write overtime
>No word since
Ow.
>>25887993
Feels bad
Let's say your pony charge was starting to put on some weightnot that there's anything wrong with that.Would you exercise with them or make them exercise alonewhile observing for science?
>>25887502
What a waste of a spermen egg.
>>25888428
Maybe make them run in place or wrestle with me a little before meals or showers. I could be totally sincere when I excuse it by saying I want them to be healthy. But my ulterior motive would be tohear my pygmy pony panting like crazy while they look up at me.So hot.
>>25888428
Exercise together. It would be more fun that way, plus we can both get in shape.
>>25888458
So you want to see her looking at you like this?
headcannon time: do you anons think that the green band around a changeling queens barrle is senstive?
>>25888663
Sure, why not. Are you thinking of making it an erogenous zone as well?Or was Chrysalis just conditioned to get aroused when stimulated there by her previous master?
>>25888663
I hope it is. Just sensitive enough to make her laugh uncontrollably when tickled.
>>25888686why does everybody assume pone is for sexual?
So how did the humans enslave pone?
War?
Surrender?
Treaties?
>>25888705
pone can be for many things some like sexual, I take it a bit further withtender loving cuddles and boops
>>25885957
rip sides
>>25888705
Because Chrysalis is. It says so right in her dossier - "Queen Chrysalis. For sexual. Queen of the Changelings…" yadda yadda yadda.
Perhaps you need to reconsult your guide to pone?
>>25887502
Was pretty good. And I did feel, though I normally like my feels to involve ponies.
I just hope old George doesn't spill the beans at work that he's the one that bought Luna.
>>25888736
I'd live with you celestia
>>25887682
I don't care for changelings. But you are still tickling my white knight bone something fierce. and I can't help but want to see her being treated kindly.
>>25888838
dont worry, more coming, working on it right now.
You also gonna get to see an interesting headcannon about why changeling queens orns are so big
>>25887682
>Be Anon
>You chuckle when she yelps at the shower head spraying her.
>She looks curious when you remove it from its holder, before a look of realization sinks in as she stares at the hose connecting it to the wall.
>You grab the shampoo, a brush, and a cloth.
>She lets you begin washing her without putting up a fuss. You decide to initiate conversation
"I uh... Never got your name... and I never gave you mine either for that matter. Name's Anon
>she looks hesitant, bet eventually answered.
"Chrysalis."
>You hum in approval.
>After shampooing her mane, you began working on washing out those... stains in her hair.
>She makes this odd, buzzing hum/purring noise as you do so.
>Its actually kinda cute.
"So uh, about your horn..."
>Brain, y u do dis!?
>Because it amuses me.
"It's not as bad as it looks, compared to a unicorn at least. It was actually going to happen sooner or later with how big it was getting."
>Bullshit.
"The way you reacted when I grabbed the stump says otherwise."
>She makes a frustrated grunt.
"Past a certain length, its basically just dead chiten, its only real purpose is to amplify magic and serve as a weapon..."
>She shudders
"The break was past the dead part, thankfully not far enough down to do permanent damage..."
>Her whole body sags in defeat.
>You think you know what broke it, but bringing that up might not be a good idea.
>You confirm her mane is now clean.
>You begin using the brush to clean the dirt and grime off her shell.
>That shade of black hides it really well, you didn't even notice it until it started coming off in the water.
>>25888719
war is probably the most common here
>>25888894
Feedback always appreciated
>>25889017
Just keep going.
We always need more lovebugs.
>>25888894
In my honest opinion you should differentiate who's speaking a little better.
Something like this:
"This is my green text and it's from my point of view."
>"Yes it is, I am a different character portrayed in your story."
If your story focuses on a lot of dialog it will help the reader know who's speaking. But other than that it's good in my opinion.
>>25889061
ill take that into consideration
>>25888894
>Still Anon
>Washing the dirt off Chrysalis’s shell.
>She’s been making that purr/hum/buzz noise the whole time.
>You finished her neck, face and back, and you were now working on her barrel.
>You try to scrub the dirt off the green band in the middle of it.
>She flinches and tenses.
>you immediately stop.
“Something wrong?”
>“Cou- could you be gentle there?”
>You switch to the washcloth.
“Better.”
>You really hope that you didn’t touch an egregious zone.
>The washcloth elects not further reaction.
>You eventually finish her barrel and legs too.
>Turns out those holes dampen the sound of her hoofsteps.
>There was just…
>”Is something troubling you?”
>She said that, and she hadn't even been looking in my direction.
>2spooky.
“As a matter of fact, there is. Judging by what I found in your mane, I have a feeling you’re going to want to, uh… clean up down there.”
>You blush and hand her the washcloth.
>She doesn't seem the least bit fazed by it.
>Dat poker face.
“Just uh… let me know when you're finished.”
>You turn around to give her some privacy.
(feedback ALWAYS aprricated)
>>25887836
>>25887954
Lol, hope you guys don't mind but.. Minuette story update.
>>25879914
>It's still early when you and Minuette arrive at the grocery store, so the place is relatively empty.
>And while that is nice, it does little to ease your nerves.
>There are still far too many people here for your liking.
>You can't shake the feeling that something is going to go horribly wrong.
>Having Minuette with you isn't doing much to help.
>It's nice to see her so cheerful, but shopping with a pony is attracting a lot of stares.
>You can feel the sweat on your palms.
>Minuette tosses a bag of carrots into the cart and turns to you.
>"Is everything okay Anon? You seem a little bit on edge."
>That might be an understatement.
"J-just nervous. Everyone staring at us doesn't help either."
>Minuette pauses a moment and looks around the grocery store.
>Her light giggling really does wonders for lightening the mood.
>"I really don't think anyone is looking at us Anon, I think you're just a taaad self conscious. Try to lighten up!"
>Minuette playfully tosses some more miscellaneous greens into your cart.
>Maybe things will be alright.
>Deep breaths.
"T-Thanks for coming along, Minuette, I don't know if I'd have been able to do this w-without you."
>"Hey, it's no problem! I'm actually enjoying myself a lot."
>This trip was nothing, in hindsight you feel a little silly about worrying yourself over this.
>You turn the corner to the next aisle.
>Oh no...
>You try to back your way out, but it's too late.
>"Hey! Anon! Is that you? It's been forever man!"
>>25889169
>You've been spotted.
>You knew this was a bad idea.
>You silently swear to yourself to never run the risk of going outside your home again.
>Maybe you can run, or maybe just pretend you didn't hear him, or...
>Minuette nudges into you a little and speaks in a very hushed but sweet tone.
>"Let's go say hi. Trust me, everything will be fine, I promise."
>She gives an encouraging wink and makes her way further down the aisle.
>You follow closely behind her.
>Okay, got to think of something to say.
>Just words.
"H-h-hey Adam, h-how's it h-hanging?"
>Pathetic.
>Adam's face falls a little bit.
>You need to get out of here ASAP.
>"I didn't peg you for a pony owner Anon."
>His gaze shifts from Minuette back up to you.
"W-well, I... uh"
>Minuette interrupts you, well, if interrupting pointless stuttering even counts as interruption.
>"Hey, I'm Minuette, Anon's roommate! Nice to meet you, are you a friend of Anon's?"
>Minuette extends her hoof and offers a rather physically awkward handshake.
>You'll have to thank her later for providing you with a socially acceptable opportunity to remain silent.
>"Adam, nice to meet you. And yeah! Anon and I were on the chess club together in High School."
>You cringe a little bit.
>Minuette giggles.
>"Anon, you never told me you play chess! We need to play sometime."
>"Be careful, he's good!"
>The attention of the conversation shifts back to you.
>>25889171
>"So Anon, how's college been treating you so far?"
>Great, time for your inner degenerate to shine through even more.
>Everyone is looking at you, you need to answer.
"I d-dropped out."
>Adam laughs, you must amuse him, like some kind of monkey in a zoo.
>"Oh man, really? Me too! Guess college isn't for everyone."
>That's actually pretty surprising to you, Adam was always a pretty decent student in High School.
>Then again, you were too...
"Y-y-yeah I guess."
>Adam speaks up again.
>"Hey, it's been good talking to you Anon, we should hang out sometime soon, but I got to get going."
>Hanging out is the last thing you want to do.
>Getting out is much higher up on your priority list right now.
"S-sure, I'll catch you later."
>Minuette chips into the conversation.
>"Nice meeting you, Adam!"
>"Good meeting you too. It's nice to see a happy looking pony for a change, I'm sure Anon treats you right..."
>You take the opportunity to start slowly backing away from the conversation to your cart.
>"Totally! He's like, the best roommate ever."
>Luckily your back is turned the other way so that neither of them can see you blush while they share a laugh.
>>25889181
>You and Minuette finally make it back to the house.
>Safety at last.
>That was a total disaster.
>You can't help but think of how badly you spaghettied during that conversation while putting away the groceries.
>You're really lucky Minuette was there to deflect some of the attention away from you.
>You really need to thank her for carrying on that conversation for you.
"H-hey Minuette?"
>Minuette moves away from the refrigerator to look over at you.
>"Yeah Anon?"
>You're still a little nervous, but you really are starting to feel comfortable talking with Minuette.
"I-I just wanted to say thanks helping me with that conversation in the store. I k-know I embarrassed myself but having you there helped a lot."
>Minuette finishes putting away the last few groceries before responding.
>"Do you really think you embarrassed yourself, Anon?"
>You recall talking with Adam and simply nod.
>"I don't see why... I mean, he just seemed glad to see you."
>You don't have a way to respond to that.
>Luckily, Minuette continues talking, but this time in a little more serious of a tone than you are used to.
>"You know, before I came to earth, I used to be a dentist."
>>25889194
>With that she got your undivided attention.
>You've actually been curious about Minuette's past but have been way too nervous to ask.
>You would have never guessed that was her occupation though.
>"I knew that ponies hated going to the dentists and I'd always been very social. I figured to myself, hey, this is a perfect way to meet lots of ponies and maaaybe if I'm nice and friendly I can make it so that they don't hate coming to see me. It seemed like a perfect fit!"
>Minuette pauses for a second and sighs.
>You let her continue to speak.
>"I hate to toot my own horn, but my office was very successful. Ponies actually told me that they looked forward to coming to see me! I still really miss it..."
>You can see a hint of sadness in her eyes, but none the less she continues to press on.
>"Point being, when you talk to so many people, you learn how to read them very well. And I know that this may be very hard for you to believe, but I want you to try. I think you are a well received person, Anon. You just seem very likable, well, at least to me... You should really try to nurture your social connections, not severe them."
>Silence fills the room as you try to process her words.
>It seems very unlikely to you that what she said is actually the case.
>But at the same time, you... trust her?
>Maybe taking her advice would be a good idea.
>>25889199
"H-how can I do that?"
>Minuette stops to think for a second.
>"Well, one thing that I used to do to keep in touch with everyone I knew was I would write down all of their birthdays. Then, I'd check my calendar and wish ponies a happy birthday. That way you have to talk to everyone you know at least once a year!"
"T-that's actually pretty clever."
>Minuette smiles a little.
>"I can't take complete credit for it, I actually got the idea from my friend Pinkie Pie... Anyway though, most people like it when you talk to them. Is there anyway you can easily talk to some people you know just to remind them you haven't forgot about them?"
>There's always the internet.
>As much as you hate to think about it, you do have a facebook.
>You just haven't used it in several months, and well, you never really liked that normie bullshit anyways.
"I-I guess I could talk to some people on Facebook..."
>Minuette gives you a confused look.
>"F-facebook? Where's that?"
>It takes a moment for you to realize the possibility that she doesn't even know what that is.
>You figure it is probably easiest to explain through demonstration.
>>25889215
> * * *
>It's been a while since the last time you laughed, but Minuette's reaction to the internet is just too much for you to handle.
>You don't know if you've ever seen someone so genuinely excited while using a computer.
>"Wait, so you are trying to tell me you can use this box thingy to talk to ANYONE in the WHOLE world instantly?"
"Yeah, pretty much."
>"ANON! This is the most incredible thing I've ever seen! Do you realize the networking power you have here?"
>You just nod.
"It really is incredible, I guess I'm just used to it at this point."
>Minuette giggles giddy with excitement.
>"This is going to make things so much easier! If only I would have had this 'facebook' in Ponyville. Oh Celestia, the possibilities!"
>You refrain from asking what a Celestia is.
>Logging into your account, you're surprised to see several friend requests and what you'd consider to be a large amount of unread messages.
>"Look at all the people who want to talk to you, Anon. This is great!"
>They probably don't actually want to interact with you, but you figure you might as well humor Minuette, you'd hate to somehow spoil her good mood.
>>25889220
>The two of you pass the afternoon sending pointless messages to a few people you hadn't talked to in a long time.
>Minuette was definitely enjoying herself.
>The reactions you did receive are fairly small, but positive.
>Minuette had left your room to go make the two of you pasta a while ago, so you are currently browsing on... well, other sites.
>You hear the sound of hooves in your hallway approaching your room.
>Better close those tabs out.
>Just as you make your way back to Facebook, you hear the loud sound of glass shattering.
>That can't be good, you better make sure everything is okay.
>Minuette is in the hallway, looking pretty panicked standing over a large pile of shattered dishware and food.
>It's relieving to see someone besides you spilling spaghetti for a change.
>You are about to take a minute to appreciate the joke you just made to yourself, but Minuette starts speaking.
>"I'm sorry! I'm sorry! I'm sorry, Master. Please don't hurt me!"
>Fuck, this definitely is not good.
"Minuette, please don't worry about it, I'm not mad at you."
>You move closer to try to comfort her, but she quickly backpedals away, whimpering a little bit.
>"I'm sorry! I d-d-d-didn't mean to!"
>You bend over a little to try to pick up some of the larger pieces of glass, but move a little too quickly.
>Minuette darts into the other room.
>Fuck, you need to find her.
>You head into your living room to try to she where she ran off to.
>You look into the corner of the room to find her curled up in the back of the same kennel from the day she first arrived.
>You need to do something, fast.
"Minuette, it's Anon. Everything is okay. Relax, I promise I'd never do anything to hurt you."
>You stop to think for a second in the silence to figure out how to approach this situation.
"I'm going to sit right here on the couch. I'm here for you, whatever you need, but you need to come out of the kennel. Take your time if you need to."
>>25889231
>Minutes crawl by slowly.
>You swear you can hear a clock ticking somewhere.
>You really hope Minuette can pull through this, but you know you need to give her some space.
>Much to your relief, she comes out of the kennel.
>She looks like a mess, but you've seen her worse.
>Wordlessly she hops onto the couch next to you.
>There is a brief moment of tense silence that is broken when she leans her head into your shoulder and starts crying.
>You don't know what to do.
>Well, you feel like you know what you need to do but have trouble bringing yourself to do it.
>You need to help her through this.
>You tell your inner beta to fuck off and gently run a hand through her mane.
>Her sobbing subsides and you can feel her relax as you awkwardly do what you can to comfort the mess of blue pony leaning on you right now.
>"I-I'm sorry for f-f-freaking out. My old m-master..."
>She stops speaking and cries again for a minute.
"It's okay, if you don't want to talk about it you don't have to."
>Minuette gulps but continues to work through the thought.
>"I-I dropped his dinner just l-like that one night, and h-he was not happy. I b-begged him for mercy a-and..."
>You continue to run your fingers through her mane while she pauses between soft sobs.
>It's incredibly soft.
>"H-he beat me. I mean, he did that a lot, b-b-but that night was h-horrible. He did e-everything, he'd kick me down then order me to stand b-back up, then b-beat me to the ground again u-until I c-couldn't stand up anymore. T-then when I was on the g-ground he b-brought out a h-hair s-straightener and j-just... I-I-"
>You honestly can't bear to hear anymore.
>You gently quiet her, the only sounds in the room are Minuette's gentle crying.
>After what seems like hours, Minuette finally speaks up.
>"H-hey Anon?"
>It's very encouraging to her the relative calmness in her voice.
"Yes?"
>"Is it o-okay if I sleep with you tonight? I w-want you to be there if I have another episode."
>>25889240
>Wow, that was not the question you were expecting.
>It's not something you'd normally be comfortable with, but you want to be as supportive as possible.
>The answer comes to you quickly.
"Of course, that's fine."
>The two of you make it back to your room and waste no time climbing into bed.
>You make an effort to take up as little space as possible on the edge of the bed.
>There is a silence that you feel is more heavy and awkward than usual.
>You feel the need to say something.
"H-hey Minuette?"
>She turns over to face you a little and scoots closer to your side of the bed.
>"Yes Anon?"
"Thanks a bunch for everything today. I don't know... But you've made me happier than I've been in a while. I j-just thought you should know."
>Minuette smiles and moves a little closer.
>You can feel her pressed up against you.
>So warm and soft.
>You feel the need to move back, but fight against it and stay in place.
>"I-I feel like I should be thanking you. You're the best thing that's ever happened to me. You s-saved me from a living hell. I-I know it's in your p-power to do anything you want to me, but you treat me so well."
>Minuette breaks the tension in the room by giggling.
>Ever since the first time you heard her laugh, it's been one of your favor sounds in the world.
>She moves even closer to you.
>"If you were any sweeter to me you'd give me cavities."
>You feel yourself blushing.
>You definitely can't think of a response for that.
>>25889245
>Silence momentarily fills the room again.
>You can feel yourself getting nervous, you just don't know what to do in this situation.
>You can't scoot further away and neither of you are talking.
>Maybe you should find an excuse to get up.
>"Hey Anon?"
>You hope you didn't do something wrong.
"Yeah?"
>"You're still comfortable around me, right?"
>Not right now in this moment, but you can't say that explicitly.
"Y-yeah, but sometimes I s-still just don't know what to say or do."
>Minuette giggles a little at your expense.
>"Can I give you hint?"
"Yes, p-please do."
>Minuette presses herself up even closer to you.
>You feel tingly, she's unbelievably warm.
>Every inch of your body that is making contact with her feels absolutely incredible.
>She looks right into your eyes and gives you a soft look before speaking.
>"Hold me close and tell me everything is going to be okay."
>You work through your nerves and comply, wrapping your arms tightly around Minuette.
>You can feel her melt in your arms as she sighs and lays her head on your chest.
"Everything is going to be o-okay, I'm here for you."
>You've never been so comfortable in your life, even the silence of the room does nothing to bother you.
>"And I'm here for you too. Goodnight Anon."
"Goodnight Minuette."
>With that, the two of you fall into a gentle sleep in each others warm embrace.
>>25889255
That's all I got for tonight. I feel like this update took a lot of work but I think it came out very nicely. Hope everyone enjoyed and is feeling extra cozy, Merry Christmas faggots.
Pastebin can be found here:
http://pastebin.com/PYNcYvC8
Let me know what you think of the story so far!
>>25889271
Damn thats a lot of green.
>>25888894
>Be Chrysalis.
>Never in your life where you more grateful for having blue blood.
>Or clear sometimes.
>All you remember is some mumbo jumbo about it changeling from colorless to blue when oxygenated.
>But either way, your blush was already muted by the thin chitin of you facia plates, the color only made it even harder to notice.
>You tried not to think about the feeling of that brush on the exposed part of your barrel.
>It was like talons on a chalkboard, even thinking about it made you tense up and shiver a little.
>You were also shocked when he admitted he was reluctant to wash your privates.
>Your last owner had tied you tail up so that they were exposed all the time.
>You honestly had no idea how to properly respond to this.
>Even before equestria was invaded, every race hated your kind.
>This was the first time a non-changeling had genuinely cared for you.
>You felt relieved at finally feeling clean down there.
“Anon? I’m finished now.”
>Anon turned around, and shut of the bathtub, before drying you off with a towel.
> “I’m just going to give you a few minutes to use the toilet.”
>He then walked out and shut the door behind you.
>You sit on the toilet and contemplate your predicament.
>If you wanted to, you could probably break that towel rack and escape out the window.
>Your eyes turn to the ‘Pikachu’ plushie her gave you.
>You remember Anon so far has not caused you any harm beyond shocking you when you refused to cooperate, and even then you could sense his reluctance.
>He kept you fed and safe, and all he really asked for was you obedience.
>Not unlike the relationship between you and your drones before the humans invaded.
>You think you could live with this.
(feedback always welcome)
>>25889115
like your story, chrys feels like a little washed out verion of herself; or maybe shes like that because of her previous owner. keep up the nice work anon have a banana sticker
>>25889393
well, yeah, she actually being treated halfway decently instead of used as a fucktoy, and changelings where universally hated even BEFORE humanity invaded equestira. She has NO clue how to act iin this situation, and shes afraid that if she slips up it will all dissappere.
any anons still on here?
>>25889469
Yes.
>>25889271
My warm fuzzies quota for the day has been filled.
Many thanks, writefag.
So, out of curiosity, how do you think chryslais would react to a burgler?
>>25889271
Love it. Keep it up
Skittles update when?
Come on, SkittlesAnon, I really don't want to suffer from abstinence syndrome.
>>25889485
>see's burglar is indifferent goes back to sleep
>see's burglar take the pickacu attackpony.exe
>burglar is actually a changing wut.png
all i can think of
>>25889600
...lowut.wmv
>>25889600
>pickacu attackpony.exe
>>25889624
Attackpony.exe
>not Murder.Bat
>>25889271
That hit the spot so damn well.
>That cute little pony gently taking advantage of his submissive nature.
Yes please. Thank you.
>And her acting normal while scarred inside.
Hopefully by only the memories and not also a hair.. stra.... I can't even fucking type it. And it makes me sick to think it.
but over all i love it. excellent job with the characterizations.
Only problem I can think of is how is he paying for anything with so little income? hopefully with 2 mouths to feed they don't both part starve. and I can't imagine Mini being alright with most of the food budget going for her. May be hard times ahead.
And with that I realized how few images I have of this pony despite really really liking her.
>>25855234
>and... well, I... I can't help myself. Remembering how much my old master enjoyed that kind of stuff... I thought you might too, and I WANT to make you feel good.
>Skittles starts with innocent kissing
>Takes things further and further each time
>Eventually begins to force her old master's fetishes on Anon
>story turns into a piss fetish fic
>>25889907
>dong expanded x64
>>25889600
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0ETg9cgE3ru
>dong expanded x64
>x64
>>25889964
>64
>>25887706
Added your story to the changeling thread paste. Keep up the good work.
>>25886781
>Bunch of rhyming
That story was pretty rad dude. Maybe you should do a zebra story here whenever you're done with your 2 other stories.
>>25886865
Yeah seriously. Props to him.
>>25887550
Thanks! Anything else you want to add? I'm not saying that I don't appreciate you saying you enjoyed it but I'd like to know why!
>>25888443
?
>>25888786
Thanks! I don't think he will tho.
>>25889271
Nice update. Really liking it!
>>25889327
Added your story to the story list.
Gonna start writing again soon.
>>25890827
>Thanks! Anything else you want to add? I'm not saying that I don't appreciate you saying you enjoyed it but I'd like to know why!
The character development. Most like to gloss over the fact that the characters being written are human. And so are capable of feeling sadness and happiness like seeing things from family members who are no longer with them. Though I'm not saying its any one writer, but sometimes we tend to focus on moving the story forward and simply let characters feel not as developed, at least I do.
>>25882634
this makes me happy to know
I'm alive, barely but I'm here
I need a nap
Skittles is truly dead. I guess we didnt love her enough
>>25891322
>skittles and soarin are dead
>>25891322
>>25891341
Don't forget applejack from both Jessi's and NoSpoon's stories
>>25891322
>>25891341
Be patient, the wait seems longer because these threads move ridiculously fast. Besides it's the holiday season, and the writer may not have time to post or even write at the moment.
Pic has nothing to do with this, but I find it funny.
Back and writing!
I sorta want you guys to also have a deciding factor in some minor things in the story so here's what I'm looking for:
In this scene I'm working on, Michelle is reading a book. What is she reading?
>>25891359
Sure hope they'll return one day.
Not sure when, but expect some weed-infused green about three weed-infused rich kids sometime today.
>>25891769
Mein Kampf.
>>25891832
XDD nice meme!
Seriously tho, I ain't picking that.
>>25891831
>pic is my reaction right now
>>25891769
The history of the Antics
>>25891855
or "The history of Equestria"
>>25891855
Antics?
>>25891897
I don't think a book about that would be readily available since Equestria was inslaved so there would be no reason to keep any history of it.
>>25891769
The communist manifesto
>>25891918
I don't believe their history would be thrown out the window just because they were enslaved, it wouldn't be seen as awfully important but I bet there would be scholars or some such interested in it, just to keep it if nothing else
>>25891918
50 Shades of Chicken.
>>25891769
This classic
>>25891918
"la divina commedia"
>>25891769
>>25891922
>>25891933
gotta decide between dubs.
>>25891832
>>25891922
>>25891933
>>25891938
>>25891939
>>25891948
Don't change /mlp/
At this point I've come to the realization that it wasn't the best idea to let you guys chose. So I'm just going to pick myselfsince you degenerates can't pick something serious and fitting for michelle
>>25891939
>>25891956
check 'em
>>25891787
Speaking of Applehorse, here is Anon recovering from having exposition crammed down his throat by Applehorse.
>>25885957
>By the time you make it back home you've been beaten half to death with exposition.
>Well, not exactly beaten half to death, but that pony you bought sure had a lot to say.
>Evidently, your used companion was an apple farmer before ending up in the good old US of A.
>And, you know, pretty much being enslaved.
>She hails from a village called Ponyville in the magical horse land of Equestria.
>You can't make this shit up.
>You would laugh at how utterly generic of a name that is for a land of horses, same for the generic name given to what is literally a village of ponies, but that would be rude.
>Ponyville itself, following her description, seems to be a cross between Tennessee, Dungeons and Dragons, and LSD.
>Somewhere between her life on the farm and right now, some trans-dimensional crimp shanghaied her ass onto Spaceship Earth and left her with no memory as to how.
>And then she was shanghaied AGAIN into being part of Hassan's herd of camels.
>She couldn't give any specific time frame for everything after that.
>That's understandable, LARPing as a used car probably isn't a pass time that makes each and every day a memorable and distinct experience.
>Not that you'd know.
>A lot of this was ringing not many bells, of course, but they still rang a few, which was quite irritating.
>Damn information, stop ringing my bells and get off my fucking lawn.
>But, irregardless, you still want to look more into this later.
>And speaking of later, you have run out of memory and are now operating in the here and now.
>This is far too pretentious for your liking, so you shift your mind immediately to the scene in front of you.
>You are looking upon your fabulous abode, with a whole one bathroom and possibly two bedrooms if you believe hard enough on a towering single floor.
>Rustic decayed wood siding and rusted porch door sold desperately.
There hasn't been any super whiteknighting where Anon smuggles horses back to Equestria or similar,has there?Outside of the ending to that Vinyl one.
>>25891956
Alright, in all seriousness, I want a Communist Manifesto reading Michelle. Fuck you.
>>25892309
I wonder what equestria looks like post war and slavery, I doubt the humans need or even would want to take the entirety of the pony population so those that remain are probably amassed in a few places under guard
which might also mean there could be groups of ponies hiding or traveling loose in equestria that evaded capture
>>25892610
Sounds reasonable enough. I think I said a few threads back that you could also have it as a sort of free for all where noone really cares about it anymore.
But that was just a possibility for a PirateAnon with a horse/human gang story. Would probably work for the smuggling too.
>>25892740
>a sort of free for all where noone really cares about it anymore
this could be an interesting idea
Humans capture or kill the princesses, the guard is basically destroyed/broken and probably a few million ponies are just taken to earth, equestria would become a major ghetto free for all, cue anon going there for some reason or another
>>25892740
>Crimson skies
I remember playing the living shit out of that game when I was younger on the original xbox. Loved that game. The blimps were so fucking cool.
>>25892810
My air piracy suggestion still stands. That or just Anon and horse exploring the ruins.
>>25892821
>playing the xbox version
You disappoint me.
>>25892846
I was a peasant back then. I also didn't have my own computer at that age.plz dont hate me
>>25892309
>>25892740
>>25892810
>>25892821
>>25892846
I'm actually thinking of writing a story based off the video game. I don't want to start a new story without finish my current one first but I'm getting a bunch of ideas. Going to write them down someone on notepad for a later date.
>>25892890
The Xbox one was alright, but compared to the PC version it just lacked a ton of stuff. The PC version allowed customisation of your aircraft based on the boardgame rules, much like the Mechwarrior games.
>story
You go ahead and do that, sure as shit can write better than I do.
My idea at the time was to simply have stupid air adventures, messing with the bickering powers that were still around and doing the regular pirate stuff.
More or less just based on the fact that a lot of pirate gangs took in slaves as new crew every so often.
>>25891769
1984 or Brave New World.She would then comment on how disturbingly close to reality human society is described in these books.
Cue my daily post containing bitching about how these threads go so fast and how I can't keep up, followed by some asskissing to the writers who make it all happen.
>>25888638yes
>>25891359
>>25891787
I think Jessi has left because he ran out of steam and didn't know how to continue his story.
At least that would explain why near the "end" his fic became so focused on describing Skyrim/LotR.
>>25892740
>>25892810
>>25892846
>>25892890
>>25892935
Alright guys, heres a very rough and EXTREMELY short version of the story that i have in mind. This is just a brainstorm and changes may be made.
>The backstory is same as the video game but with added "portal between equestria and earth thing".
-It takes place in the Crimson Skies universe, set in an alternate history of the 1930s. In this fictional setting, increasing sectionalism within the United States of America has caused the country to splinter into numerous sovereignties. These nation-states are in a constant state of war with one another, and thus an interstate highway system never developed. This in turn caused the primary means of transportation to shift from the car and train to the plane and Zeppelin; consequently came the formation of air pirate gangs who plunder aerial commerce over North America.
As a result of the events surrounding the world of Crimson Skies, advancements in technology within the game universe proceeded at a faster rate than actually occurred in the same era. Certain designs and technologies were created specifically for the game, some beyond the scope of actual 1930s technology, examples of which include remote-controlled rocket launchers, magnetic rockets, weather control devices, and a Tesla coil-like weapon.
(Above is taken from the wiki)
>you are Nathan Zachary, leader of the fortune hunters
>story starts off after you've retaken your zeppelin, the pandora
>you overhear in a bar about the portal and the sentient species
>portal was built by main bad guys (Die Spinne, nazi like faction)
>there is no policing gorverment so nobody really bothers to stop the enslavement
>people actually start to use them for their man power
>you also overhear that theres a zeppelin transporting a bunch to the local city to be put to work or for sale
>>25893652
>you fucking hate the idea of slaves, everyone deserves freedom
>you had been a slave when you were younger but were freed by the fortune hunters (the actual story behind nathan zachary is unknown so this is made up from scratch)
>decides to go intercept the zeppelin the next day
>free slaves
>among them are the mane 5 (no twilight)
>they convince you to help them find twilight (you had only indended to free them but not take care of em)
>the other pony survivors of the zep wreck offer join the crew of the pandora and help free their captive families
>discuss to the human crew of the pandora on whether or not to help
>everyone agrees to help
>go on an adventure to find twilight
>many battles ensue and more ponies are freed
>the fortune hunters grow bigger in size as you save and recruit more and more ponies (other humans join in to help too)
>eventually need more zeppelins
>the fortune hunters finally become a fully fledged faction with a powerful army
>lotsa character development of the mane 5 (maybe some smut scenes)
>Rainbow eventually ends up looking alot like the s5 finally sombra timeline
>She's a pilot with her own pimped plane
>Applejack is also a pilot
>Rarity is the tech engineer and weapons expert (since she's probably the smartest of the mane 5 + she's a unicorn so magic)
>Fluttershy is a medic that recovers downed pilots
>Pinkie co pilots the pandora but eventually pilots her own
>story follows onlong the main game storyline but with drastic alterations and new adventures
>nearing the end of the story is the final battle vs bad guys (similar to the ending of the game but in a different place)
>massive superweapon is revealed by the badguys at their HQ
>superweapon of the badguys is powered by the magic of all 4 princesses (celestia, luna, cadence and twilight)
>awesome ass battle between hundreds of planes, dozen of zeppelins and the super weapon
>ends with a victory for the the fortune hunters
>princesses freed and mane 6 are reunited
>>25892309
Anon and his saved slave pony have fallen in love. war ends.
Government requires all ponies to be return home.
She don't want to go
They make love the night before.
She is gone forever.
Bad end.2 years later pony is allowed to return.
Comes back with small filly with oddly human coloring. because equestria magic. Anon and pony get duel citizenship and decide where to live.
>>25893660
>twilight is discovered to be pretty messed up because she was the element of magic so the device permanently damaged her both physically and mentally
>thousands of ponies freed from the badguy base
>as the base is being explored/salvaged for tech you discover the portal room
>the portal is wrecked, having been blown to bits (the portal is about as large as a a two story building)
>after many months of hard work the portal is rebuilt
>sadly its only temporary due to (insert reason here)
>all ponies return to equestria but many other ponies (including the mane 6 stay)
>the other princesses return to rule equestria
>goodbyes are made
>portal closes forever
>end
Let me guys know if you like the idea because for whatever reason just the mention of crimson skies and air pirates inspired the living for out of me.
>>25893681
*inspired the living fuck out of me
Also gimme a reply to that post with a +1 if you want to see it happen. (This will mean i'll put the Luna story on hold)
>>25893681
Do it
>>25893652
>Die Spinne creating portals
Given how overboard they went with the pulp in Highroad to Revenge that sounds like a thing they'd do.
>Zachary's history
He was a gypsy as a kid, went to war for the Entente in WWI, got captured by the germans, broke out of prison and escaped with a few others, helped the Russians fight back the Jerries by building their air force, helped spark the Russian Revolution with Fassenbiender, started to really hate what the Commies were doing there, started to evacuate whatever Russians were not with the regime and then ended up back in Colorado when the nation broke up, built his gang after having to defend his hometown against a couple of pirates.
Personally I still suggest just using Anon.
Sounds like a good enough plot for an adventure otherwise though. I like it.
But so far I think I was the only guy replying, so make of that what you will.
>>25893678
I didn't need that Anon.
>>25893696
it's alright. I never played Crimson Skies so i don't feel any connection to it. Not really a fan of hurting twilight like that either.(not even a twifag)
>>25893774
>Zachary's history
I didn't know he had a history. I was too lazy to bother looking it up.
>Personally I still suggest just using Anon
I can always change that
>But so far I think I was the only guy replying, so make of that what you will.
I think I'll go for it anyways. I kinda want to go with something different other than the general white-knight saving a pony and it becoming very PiE. Not that I don't like my story tho (luna is waifu, thats why I made the story)
>>25893799
>i don't feel any connection to it
Do you want an air pirate story? You don't need a connection to the game to want a story revolved around air pirates.
>Not really a fan of hurting twilight like that either.(not even a twifag)
Like I said, its all just a rough idea of what I would like. I'm not twifag either but the reasoning of why I chose what happens to her is a surprise.
>>25893878
>History
It's in the books that were never properly finished.
>>25893878
>air pirate story
I see.
Don't let me discourage you. I am just here for the feels though.
>>25891430
>author suddenly disappears without a trace and doesn't show any signs of being alive for 4 days
Nah, at this point I'm sure he's dead and our only hope for his return is a Christmas/New Year miracle.
>>25893998
We can hope.
>>25891969
moar applehorse
>>25881533
bump
Is wanting OP's pic in my lap a prerequisite for being straight?
