More Writefriends edition!
Previous thread >>25610218
Pones that like Anon. Not, LIKE like! Why would you think that?! B-Baka!
Current Writefags' Pastebins:
http://pastebin.com/u/RiggyRag
http://pastebin.com/u/Fruitanon
AnalplugAnon
Green and pictures welcome! Come join the fun! N-Not that we want you to or anything...
>>25690690
Here's my pastebin, friend.
B-but don't think I want to SHARE any of my stories with you!
http://pastebin.com/u/AnalPlugAnon
Woot New threads
TOUCHDOWN!
...I'm, uh...Here.
>>25690717
I'll make sure to include it in the actual thread description next time.
Welcome aboard! I really liked your story from before. I can't wait to see more from you!
I am currently in class, as a college student often is. I'll be writing when I return, though!
Man, I wish I had some ideas for stories.
I can write, yeah, but I haven't really found any inspiration lately.
I'll be sure to let you know if I come up with anything though.
In the meantime, have a picture of pouty RD.
RIGGYYYYYYY
>>25690790Write about a Rainbow Dash that really wants to be treated like a lady and wear dresses and shit, but she always tries to act macho around Anon because that's how they became friends in the first place. And whenever she tries to let her girly side out, she always aborts at the last second for catastrophic results.
You can use that idea if you'd like. That's first thing II got from your picture.
>>25690834
...Yeah, alright.
I'm not particularly experienced in Tsundere itself, but...I'll certainly give it a shot. Thanks!
tfw Riggy didn'tk-kiss you
Why even live?
>>25690866
So we can read his wonderful greens, while he dotes on us.
>>25690834
I'm on a roll with the story right now.
I'll upload the first part of it when it's done.
>>25691175
There ya go! I eagerly await it.
>>25690866Who could say know to dubs like those? Pic related.
>>25690723
>that pic
>>25690834
Based Riggy giving other writefriends ideas to try.
>>25691175
>>25691233
Aww, that's adorable~
>>25691233
U-um... i hope y-you liked that...yousmellkindanice
>>25691291
... O__O tf
How do I become a famous writefriend like RiggyRag and Fapman?
>>25691407
Hardwork my friend, when you put out greens, you shall be accepted as one, from there you must prosper and grow like nature around us. Grow my friend, and become famous.
>>25691407
>famousI don't think I count as famous. Fapman is a living meme. I just write junk.
>>25691464
>tfw he says his work is junk
If junk is what it is, consider me an avid lover of junk.
>>25691464
I'm addicted to this junk
>>25691494
This.
>>25691509
This.
>>25691464
>Fapman is a living meme.
H-hey! I am here, you k-know!
>>25691407
Nay, bro. I don't write, I justhorseshita lot.>mfw people think I write
>mfw people twink I write GOOD
>mfw I want to write but I'm too afraid of writing my shit because my grip on the english is minimal
I'm just hungry for... green?
>>25691464
And once again, you. You write good stuff and you do it well.Praise you.
>>25691494
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>>25691610
I might have phrased that poorly. What I meant was I just write stuff. I don't want to make it seem like I was fishing for compliments haha.
But, I don't think I'm famous yet.
One day, though...I might be. If I just keep working hard.
>>25691660
One day you and I will be the most popular lepers in the leper colony.
>>25691660
Riggy, you are one of the saints of /mlp/ don't knock yourself down.
>>25691233
This is the most homoerotic thread on 4chan.
>>25692159
I-it's not like we're gay for you or anything, RiggyB-baka
>>25692188
Y-yeah! Actually w-we d-don't really like you that much anyway, you s-stupid sexy writefag!
btw how old are you, Riggy? it's not like i-i want to form a mental image of you ooor something that stupid...n-no homo
>>25691769
What a day that will be!
>>25692101
Thanks Banny. It means a lot. I've said it before, but i save a lot of these kinds of comments for when I need pick me ups.
>>25692159
We're very loving and our passion boils close to the surface.I know mine does.Too much /fit/ does that to ya.
>>25692672
Turned 20 this past October!
I'll be in class for just a little while longer. Finals prep classes are super important.
Almost done with the first part of my story.
So close. Just a few more checks through.
>>25692748
You're /fit/ Rigster? T-teach me senpai.
>>25692940
What would you like to know? How to get started?
>>25692988
I want to r-run with you in the morning, and then... we'll t-take a shower... you know like t-togetherno homo
Finished. It's not my best work, but...I hope you like it.
>"C'mon, Anon, just a few more rounds!"
"Urgh. Fine. One more, OK?"
>It IS pretty sunny out.
>Then again, when isn't it?
>Considering Ponyvile has a team of pegasi from Cloudsdale dedicated to making the skies clear for ponies to enjoy.
>It's only your typical utopian society.
>They have everything, weather control, easy to live in conditions, pretty much no conflicts whatsoever...
>Everyone is friends with everyone, it seems.
>I guess the secret to making world peace a reality is simply; "Be a pony."
>You don't know why you're so bitter about this. It's paradise.
>Maybe too much of a good thing?
>Eh, whatever.
>Speaking of too much of a good thing, you're hanging out with Rainbow Dash while you're on your break.
>She's a close friend. Seems you hit it off from the moment she hit you.
>Full force.
>Crash landing.
>Ouch.
>You honestly couldn't think of a better first impression for what hanging out with Rainbow Dash would be like.
>But considering you're on your break right now, it's not as welcome a pleasure as it usualy is. You're already exhausted.
>It doesn't help that you're losing 3 - 0 to her at horseshoe toss.
>That's rounds won, not points.
>You check your watch.
>You've still got a decent chunk of time before your break is over.
>You don't understand how you've played this many rounds and still have time to spare.
>This is not the sort of activity you should be participating in, considering you work for Applejack.
>Well, you're not a whiner. You're a winner.
>You're definitely not going to back down from a challenge, expecialy if it's against Rainbow.
>You never considered yourself a particularly competitive person before meeting her.
>But her brash attitude and cocky swagger ignited something within you.
>You've been trying to get the better of her ever since.
>That's not going to happen though, unless someone retrieves those horseshoes.
>Or somePONY.
>You take a glance at your rival in question.
>She looks back at you, cocky smile slowly fading into an expectant look.
>She can't expect you to pick them up again.
>A whiner you may not be, but you're certainly not a slave.
"Go on."
>"What? Why should I do it? You're the one who lost."
"Well, what are you going to be doing after this?"
>"Heh! Well, I was getting pretty tired, so I was thinking maybe I'd take a nap."
"Take...A nap?"
>"You heard me."
"Dash, I WISH I could take a nap. Some of us, however have got jobs to get back to. Hot, sweaty and physicaly challenging jobs. Like my job, Rainbow. JOB. Ring a bell?"
>She looks away from you, head raised proudly.
>"I'm sure you can handle it."
>Damnit, Dash.
>"Besides, you shouldn't be making me do the work. It's not polite."
>You cast a bemused glance at her.
"Excuse me?"
>"I said, "It's not polite", stupid! Do I have to repeat everything?"
"I heard you just fine. But seriously, what? Since when have you ever cared about being polite?"
>She snorts, and suddenly shoots off into the air.
>She does an impressive - albeit unnecessary - shuttle loop, and hovers at your side, now at eye level with you.
>Guess she wants to make a point.
>"W-well, what do YOU know?"
"I know YOU, for a start. You're far from a "Prim and proper lady", Dash."
>"Can we just play the game already?"
>Well, that was an unexpected change of subject.
>Rainbow Dash is far from one to give up an argument easily, especially one as short as that.
>You hate to say it, but you're disappointed.
>There's only one thing for it.
>Time to tease.
"Sure thing, Rainbow."
>You smile a smug smile, and proceed to pick up the horseshoes, loading your metaphorical word pistol with newfound ammunition.
>Once all of the horseshoes are collected, you waltz back to her side, still smiling.
>She's pouting at you.
>Pouting? Her? Really?
>Wow. You feel like you've beaten her already.
>Mainly because that's her losing face.
>Her head follows you all the way back to the line.
"Well, then, let's go. Ladies first."
>She scrunches up her face a little more, a blush becoming apparent on her cheeks.
>You love it when she gets like this. It's one of your prime motivations for trying to win against her.
>"N-no, I won the last one, so you get the first throw."
"Thank you, Lady Dash. How FAIR."
>"Sh-shut up."
>The blush on her cheeks becomes progressively more fiery.
>All this exhaustion is starting to feel worth it.
>All the teasing in the world isn't going to win you the game, however.
>You begin to aim your horseshoe.
>You take a quick glance in rainbow's direction.
>She's looking at the sky, a red glow noticeable through her fur coat.
>You grin, and put your head back in the game.
>Swinging the horseshoe back and forth, you begin to generate momentum.
>Sticking your tounge out the side of your mouth, you concentrate on the game.
>Steady
>S t e a d y
>S T E A D Y
>"HEY!"
>CURSE YOU, RAINBOW DASH
>Fortunately, you were anticipating such sabotage, and the shot doesn't go far off course.
>And it still lands respectably close to the pole.
>Not too close, but a good starting shot.
>You glance at her, and your smug smile returns.
>She has a smile on her face too, despite her failed attempt to impede your success.
"Need something?"
>"Nah, slipped my mind."
"Huh."
>She begins to reach down for a horseshoe, but you pick one up before she gets there.
>You present the horseshoe to her, inches away from her mouth.
>She glares at you, and continues to as she slowly flutters down, grabs a different horseshoe and ascends once again, without losing face.
>This is fun.
>She then faces the pole, preparing to throw.
>Then, you notice something.
"Hey."
>She stops and looks at you.
>"Yeah?"
"Let's make it fair this time."
>She raises an eyebrow at you.
"You've got an altitude advantage. How about you stand on the ground?"
>"What?! But you're...You're tall!"
"Fine. Move down to my arm. That way we'll throw from the same point, more or less."
>"B-but..."
"You telling me you won't be able to win from there?"
>The classic bait. Foolproof.
"I...I'm telling you t-that I'm...I'm...Grr..."
>She grumbles, and descends a few feet, blushing again.
>She's not resisting as much as you expected her to.
>Guess you've really gotten to her.
>She doesn't say anything to you, and gazes back at the target.
>You're not done with her yet, though.
>She swings back and forth, and then, just when it looks like she's about to throw it...
"Good luck, my lady"
>She just about stops herself from letting go of the horseshoe.
>"HrrrrrrrrrmmmmmMMMMM!"
>You laugh, loudly.
>"I-I-IDIOT!"
"What's wrong?"
>"...Don't you ever call me that again!"
"OK, OK. I'll stop now."
>You feel that she's had enough for now. You need to finish the game before you're late, anyway.
>"Good!"
>She starts building up momentum again.
>You just stand and watch. You don't care weither you win or lose now.
>As far as you're concerned, you're satisfied.
>She stops and starts a few times, obviously flustered.
>Each time she does, you can see her getting progressively more and more frustrated.
>You can't tell if her cheeks are heating up from anger, or from embarrassment.
>"RrrrrrAGH!"
>She just throws it.
>No build up this time.
>It goes far, and lands far away from the pole.
>She's going to explode, you can feel it.
>"...T-THAT DIDN'T COUNT!"
>Called it.
>Not high enough altitude, nor of enough patience to dive and get it, she simply drops to the floor and gallops full speed towards the horseshoe.
>However, doesn't take into account the terrain below her hooves.
>You hadn't been playing far from Apple Jack's farm, as she practically met you at the gate with the horseshoes and pole.
>You found some broad, flat area nearby to play on.
>Well, as flat as you could find it. It was still pretty bumpy.
>Her hoof catches on a dent in the ground, hidden by some grass.
>"W-Whooaaa-oof!"
>It was quite a spectacular fall.
>You'd laugh, but you've laughed enough already.
>Besides, that looked pretty painful.
>Without thinking, you run to her side.
"Are you OK?"
>Hmmmnn...It's nothing..."
>You can't lie, you would've let her get herself back up.
>She's recovered from worse, MUCH worse than what she just took.
>But for some reason, after all the talk about politeness, you just couldn't resist.
>You reach out with your right hand, and firmly grasp her right hoof, but not roughly.
>She reacts in surprise, and darts her head up to look at you.
>You find yourself staring into her eyes.
>She stares back.
>You're so used to having those eyes sneer at you, that you never really got a chance to...appreciate them.
>They're a sweet pink, although you only ever thought of them as red.
>She appears to be looking into your eyes too.
>You wonder what she's thinking...
>Your heart begins to race.
>Wait, What? Why are you so excited?
>She's done nothing but treat you like dirt since you got here, and you the same way, ever since you met her.
>You...Don't...LIKE her, do you?
>She has the brightest blush on her cheeks. Much brighter than before.
>"A-Anon...Thanks."
>Her voice seems...Tight.
>You start to worry about her being in pain again.
>You put your hand under the frog of her hoof and lift her up.
>Your sudden movement seems to snap her out of her trance.
>"Uh...H-HEY!"
>She quickly regains her footing and moves away from you, avoiding eye contact.
>She looks angry.
>You both sit in silence for a second.
>A mere moment however, and she quickly bounces back.
>"...Thanks for nothing! I got back up by myself!"
>Still blushing, still angry.
"Good."
>It's all you can manage to say.
>You're still trying to recover, yourself.
>You feel like someone is punching your ribcage from the inside.
>You try to look into her eyes again, but she avoids your gaze.
>"U-uh...W-we'll finish this later. You...YOU DON'T WANNA BE LATE!"
>She propels herself off the ground, and her blue colour is soon lost against the clear sky.
>What's her problem?
>...What's YOUR problem?
>What happened just now?...anon...
>You've been friends with her for years, and something like that...Never happened before.
>You suppose you've been busy lately, and haven't been able to compete with her as often as you used to, but...
>She couldn't have changed too much, right?...ey...anon...!
>You have time to work that out later, though. Right now, you should probably get to wo"ANON FOR PETES' SAKE!"
>Oh.
>"Come ON, ANON! If ah have to carry ya over here, you'll be doin' more work ta make up fer it!"
"I'LL BE RIGHT THERE!"
>...
>Well, it looks like your break just ended.
>Damn. Your back hurts.
That's about it, for now.Oh, god, I could've put this at the end of the last messageDamnitMy life is over
>>25693178
That was sweet af. I loved it! Thanks for writing Hellmiester!
You should make a pastebin.
>>25693346
Ah...!
...T-thanks.
I'll...I'll think about it...
>>25690690
No
is yandere
>>25692988
yah basically. your wisdom would be much appreciated
>>25693707
Well, okay. I just got out of class.
The first thing you have to know is, no matter what you do, as long as you work hard, you will become fit. That sounds weird, but it's very true.
The second thing you have to come to terms with is the fact that, in your current state, you're a lot weaker physically than the fit people that will be around you in the gym and stuff. They can lift way more, run way further, and look really good.
You have to just own up to that, embrace it, don't feel ashamed for being a beginner. I say this because a lot of people get demotivated by the incredible effort everyone around them puts forth for huge lifts, and then you're squatting with an empty bar.
Anytime you start to think to yourself, "What's the point? There's no way I'll ever get to that level." stop yourself and say, "As long as I do my work out every day, I'll get to that level in no time." and be proud of that!
Third, the technical stuff.
Figure out what you're going for: Weight loss, mass gain, or just getting fit.
The thing is, no matter what you're going for, lifting will always make you healthier, more fit, and get bigger.
Running and cardio are important to keep your heart strong and efficient.
So here is my recommendation for someone just starting out. This is what I did when I started about a year ago:
Do the 5x5 Stronglifts routine (http://stronglifts.com/5x5/), sticking to the weights very closely. Just because you feel like you can lift more does not mean you're actually ready for it.
Run once a day. I usually hit the treadmill before I lift in the morning, or I jog in the morning before my classes. Starting off with just a mile run is perfectly fine, just try to go a little further every day. Running hurts, but the calories it burns makes you look great.
When you can't get to a gym, or just don't have one nearby, do tons of bodyweight exercises! Pushups, situps, pullups, chinups, planking, scissor kicks, squats, crunches, bicycle kicks, etc.
>>25693907
That should be a good starter pack, I think. Go to /fit/ and check their sticky for grand advice: http://liamrosen.com/fitness.html
Also, that's a pretty old drawing from the first thread I ever wrote in. Enjoy it's terribleness. I hadn't gotten anatomy for pones down yet.
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>>25693227
Nice work so far, matey. But was your name maybe intended to be "Hellmeister"?
>>25694209
Uh...Yeah. It was.
I'll just keep it as it is. Instead of My-ster it's going to be me-ester.I can do that, right?
>>25694294
You can but it sounds kinda stupid. At least for me since I'm german.
>>25693925
was that theponies aroused by anons physiquethread? i never read it butit put the idea in my head to get /fit/
most important thing is never stop. as soon as you stop its the hardest thing to start again.STAY DETERMINED
>>25694311
Eh. I might as well keep it.
Thanks for the praise, by the way! I don't write often.
>>25693907
Saitama, what are doing on /mlp/? The city needs you!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FmHJCVExXG0
>>25690690
bump
>>25694553
I love me some One Punch Man, but Saitama is just my strength goal.My physique goal is this glorious man right here.
Just got back from dinner, cookin' up some green now.
>>25694321
Also yes, that the first thread I ever wrote for.
>>25694808
Good writes to you, Riggy
Best song to listen to while getting fit.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POkU70cjYI8
Motivates you and fills you with energy like no other.
>"Just sign here, please!"
>You've never gotten any mail during your time in Ponyville.
>It hasn't exactly been LONG since you've found yourself in the pony town, for sure.
>But you were surprised to find the grey pegasus mare outside the door to the little side shed on the Apple's farm that you called home.
"For me? I've never gotten any mail before."
>She rolls her lopsided eyes, a surprisingly cute feat.
>"Well, then I guess there's a first time for everything! But, if you could hurry- I've got a lot more stuff on my route..."
>She hefts the large saddles bags, stuffed with letters.
>Good lord, does she lift or what?
>You quickly sign the delivery slip, taking the brown box in hand.
>"Thank you!" she says, and begins to trot off.
>You shake the box a little as she goes, wondering what's inside.
>Not a single sound to give it away. Damn.
>You manage to tear at the tape a little bit, and unfold the top.
>CONFETTI EVERYWHERE
>In your hair, on your clothes, even a small puff of it comes out as you cough.
>A couple balloons and some streamers even fall out of the box, and there's a single letter inside.
>"Anon- happy monthiversary of you living in Ponyville! Thought I'd celebrate with a super-duper special letter, just for you! Lot's of Fun- Pinkie Pie!"
>Adorable. And also a very Pinkie thing to do.
>You pocket the letter, and notice a faint whistling sound.
>A sound that gets louder every moment.
>A sound definitely coming from above you.
>You hesitate to look up, and notice the same mailmare plummeting right towards the ground.
>"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
>The crash is loud, and you swear you see little muffins floating around your head for a moment before you shake yourself out of your stupor.
>The grey mare is lying on top of you, her eyes covered by an errantly launched streamer.
Still writing, and here is a Drawfag Funtime Winner's drawing: Twilight starts a fire while cooking for Anon.
I colored this one.
It took longer than expected.Sorry
>>25695197
>Tsunderpy
>>25694808
>mfw
>>25695197
moar plz
>>25695211
Ooh, toasty!We can just blame Spike, who cares if it's a different colored flame?
>>25695197
>"Help! I can't see! How am I ever going to see the addresses for deliveries now!?"
>You calmly pluck the offending piece of paper off the pegasus' face.
>She blinks, realizing the ridiculousness of her outburst.
>She blushes a little, turning away from you.
>"I-I didn't need any help!"
>You cough a little, nodding.
"Of course- just trying to be neighborly."
>She scrunches her face, and quickly hops off of you.
>"I just was- uh- just needed to- I mean..."
>She shifts on her hooves uncomfortably
>"I can take care of myself just fine!"
>You nod again, never having disagreed with that statement.
>She puffs up her cheeks.
>"A-anyways um... thank you for, uh, helping... Even though I totally had everything under control!"
"It's no problem- helping around is what I do."
>She reddens quite a bit more, lightly shoving you.
>"Well I dont- I don't need it! So there!"
>Before you can respond she's already gone- taken off into the sky almost as fast as Rainbow Dash.
>Who'd have thought such a cute mare could be so damned tsun-tsun
Is there a story where anon thinks a pony is being tsundere, but it turns out that they actually do hate him?
>>25695699
Just the idea's giving me feels.
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>>25696293
There'd better be some kinda crazy happy end is all I can say. Like Anon gets bummed out because of tsunpone but ends up happy with overlooked best friend pone who was there all along.
>>25696360
Or-or, Anon gets bummed out, kills himself, and just ends up being reborn, so to speak, having all the mares flock to him and treat him like the best nigger ever.Or in another Equestria.
Because the ride never ends.
Sorry for the delay everyone. I've been working on the update while working on a final due on Wednesday. It's hard to budget my time, but I'm still getting a little out.
>>25690690
>Your new shoes clack against the stone stairs of the castle.
>Even though you live in the back yard of the castle, you almost never go into the main cooridoors.
>Of course you know your way around, you have to bring certain iron creations to different areas of the fortress.
>But you usually stick to the less public areas of the castle.
>Hiddin halls and secret chambers that you use as short cuts.
>Seems like only guards and staff use them.
>They're more efficient for getting around, but there's only one way into Twilight's study.
>Straight through the giant main halls, up the stairs on the left, last door at the end of the hall.
>You remember well. This isn't your first trip up there.
>Though it is the first time you've been called up there for something so severe.
>Any other time was either to talk or because you had forgotten to do something. Nothing like deliberately breaking the rules.
>At least you were breaking the rules for your friends. That'll make whatever punishment you recieve feel a little better.
>You pause as you reach the top of the stone stairs leading away from the main hall.
>The shining magnificence of the castle's interior is not lost on you.
>Sometimes you have to remind yourself just how beautiful this building is. You see it so often that you've become accustomed to it.
>But here in the main halls that you tread so rarely, you can find a bit of the awe you once had for its crystal architecture.
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>You start to wander down a long, darkened, purple cooridor.
>The floors are polished so much that you see your reflection staring down at you.
>What an odd angle to see yourself from.
>You continue walking through the still hall, lit by purple crystals that stick out from the walls.
>You have an odd flashback to elementary school when you were sent to the princpal's office.
>The halls are big and scary, you're all alone as you walk so you can reflect on your stupidity.
>But you're pretty sure your principal didn't have an overwhelming crush on you.
>And if they did... well that's another problem all together.
>You finally make it to the large wooden door at the end of the all.
>Well, large is a relative term. Compared to ponies it is rather large.
>For you it's just like the doors in the human world. The door to your shack might be larger actually.
>You raise your curled fingers facing towards you, protruding your knuckle towards the door.
>You certainly have a new perspective to the upcoming conversation.
>And you can't seem find a strategy to use.
>What are you supposed to do?
>What CAN you do?
>It's better just to get in there and get it all out of the way.
>Let whatever happens, happen.
>And under no circumstance will you let her know that you know.
>You don't want to break her heart if she thinks you're not interested, and you don't want her to think you're interested when you're unsure..
>It's going to take a little while to figure this all out, so to minimize hurt feelings you'll just pretend to be oblivious and unassuming.
>Which, admittedly, you would probably be naturally had Rainbow Dash and AJ not pointed out.
>You take a deep breath
>Your knuckle clacks against the wooden door.
>There is a moment of shuffling behind the door before you recieve a response.
>"Come in!" Twilight shouts in a muffled voice.
>You sigh.
>Here we go.
>>25696751
It's happening yo!
>>25696751
IT'S HAPPENING.
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>>25696751
Riggy delivers haremanon for our pleasures.
>>25690349
These were rad
>>25693178
I'm digging this
>>25696751
AM I READY?
>>25695323
Getting more of this?
>>25696751
>here we go
Riggy is gone.
Why live?
>>25697331
I'm here, I'm here. Nearly done with the next update. Switching between 3D modelling and writing is hard.
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>>25690690
bump
>>25697362
speaking of art, do you have the one thanksgiving pic. I missed the thread that was in. It was the marble or limestone serving turkey.Not that I want it or anything...B...Baka.
>>25697526
It's next on my list. Between homework, writing, and studying for finals, I draw when I can. That twilight drawing took me awhile because I was getting used to my new painting software.
>>25697541
That's fine man. I just panicked for a little, you know? I realized I hadn't been on the thread in two (or so) days.I wasn't panicking about you or anything.
>>25695247
more like yanderpy
>>25697596
>Derpdere
ftfy
>>25696751
>You push the wooden door in slowly, letting you ease yourself into the situation.
>You take a good look around the room.
>There are book shelves upon book shelves in this large, and well lit room.
>There are couple of half-levels where you have to go up a small set of stairs to reach the next level up.
>The stairs go directly down the middle of the room, with shelves on each level pertaining to different subjects.
>The ceiling is littered with skylights of varying colors, giving the entire room a pastel glow to it.
>And at the end of the stairs, surrounded by the mirrors casting the morning light in, is a small wooden desk.
>It has some paper work spread across it, and a plentiful supply of quills which are replenished often.
>And sitting behind the desk is a pretty little purple pony who stares down at the paper she is writing intensely on.
>She glances up at you in a very deliberate way.
>"Come up here, Anonymous." she says properly, still writing on the paper.
>You start to climb the stairs, feeling dwarfed by the immense book cases and high ceilings. It isn't often that the pony world makes you feel so small.
>Twilight doesn't look at you directly, still focusing on the document she has been scribbling on.
>On occasion, however, she does steal a quick look out of the corner of her eyes.
>You noticed these glances before, but now they are charged with much more meaning.
>You catch yourself staring, and you face feels a little warmer.
>Such raw emotion.
>It's humbling to say the least.
>Even with the flustered feeling you have right now, you could never imagine what she has been going through.
>To say you were oblivous is an understatement, you were actively dissmissive of the notion of ponies taking a romantic interest in you.
>You're surprised she's still interested in you after such a long time.
>>25697923
>You find your way over to her desk in the silent study.
>She looks up at you standing in front of her desk, almost at attention.
>A beat of red rolls across her face as you look into her eyes.
>"S-sit down, Anon." she says as assertively as she can muster.
>You nod and take a seat in the comfy chair she has by her desk.
>It's a little small, but at this point you've gotten used to scaled down furniture.
>That's just a part of life for you.
>She looks back up at you.
>"So what happened down there was... a little hectic, w-wouldn't you say?" she says, trying to keep this strictly professional.
>She must be trying to do the same thing as you; just get through this.
>It puts your mind at ease.
>Suddenly you realize something.
>The best way to hide your knowledge is just to ignore her emotions entirely again.
>It might be a bit cold, but she isn't aware that you are aware, so it won't hurt her feelings.
>And judging by the way she's treating this conversation, there won't be any funny business.
>It won't be difficult to keep your wits about you, thank goodness.
"Yes it certainly was. I was hoping you wouldn't mind my guests, but I was being dishonest so..." you say, emphasizing the fact you had RD and AJ with you.
>You don't want to focus on the underwear thing.
>That's probably what she was most embarrassed about.
>So you'll just pretend you forgot it.
>She nods.
>"Y-yes. I was quite surprised by the p-presence of other ponies with us," She begins before taking a deep breath, "I hope you realize that you were in direct violation of your contract, Anonymous." she states plainly.
>You nod back at her.
"Yes ma'am. At the time, however, they needed a place to stay. I was just trying to be a good friend. Surely you understand that?" you say, explaining your logic.
>>25697937
>She is the princess of friendship, so this should all hit home for her.
>And the way she feels about you probably doesn't hurt your chances of getting a less severe punishment.
>"Y-Yes, of course I understand. Breaking the rules to help a friend is often the responsible thing to do..." she says with a slight blush, looking away from you.
>Well this is going well.
>Twilight was always reasonable, so she'll probably let you off with a war-
>"But still, breaking the rules warrants reprimanding!" She suddenly shouts in a very official sounding tone.
>Your heart sinks, and you grip the arms of your chair.
>This can't end well.
>You scratch the back of your head nervously.
"Oh... of course. I suppose I DID break a rule, and your policy must be very strict-"
>Your words are interrupted by a rolled up paper slapping down on the desk in front of you.
>"Yes, v-very strict Anonymous. And you broke one of the few stipulations I made upon your living quarters."
>You take a deep breath.
"Yes, well, I figured that the rule had been put in place for other reasons, and-"
>She slaps you in the face with the paper as she walks around her desk.
>Her face becomes more read each time she does it.
>"I-I don't want to hear your excuses Anon! N-Now listen up!" she stutters a little unconvincingly.
>>25697949
>You sit up straighter reflexively.
>The way she's talking to you right now is triggering some habits that Rarity smacked into you while making clothing for you.
>A slap with cloth on the face or the ass to tell you to straighten up. Originally you thought it was because she was impatient, but the blush on Twilight's face makes you think it was for a more... carnal satisfaction.
>She smiles at your sudden obedience reflexively.
>You can tell she was taken a little off guard by how quickly you shut up.
>She's not used to being stern.
>At least, not in such a demeaning way.
>"G-Good." she stutters with a little sigh.
>She walks around back to her chair, satisfied with your behavior.
>"I don't want you breaking anymore rules, Anon." she says plainly.
"I won't. This was a one time thing." you say quickly.
>She makes eye contact and blushes.
>But she doesn't look away.
>This time she keeps staring.
>Her purple eyes shining with a new confidence.
>The same confidence has when a cat corners a mouse.
>You're starting to get a little nervous as to why.
>"Oh, I'm sure you won't... but..." she begins.
>You can feel your hands clench.
>She's making a move here.
>You can taste it.
>"... I need to make sure. And protocal dictates that I would put you on probation, letting my officers keep an eye on you and accompany you while you work."
>Probation? You can deal with probation.
>But... what's the catch?
>You know there is going to be a catch.
>>25697967
>There is no way she would put on this big show without-
>"BUT, because you are a unique species and such a dear friend, I will take it upon myself to..." she says, fading near the end.
>She stares into space for a moment, coming to terms with the words about leave her mouth.
>Her confidence has spilled away, and her anxeity has come back full force.
>It seems like coming to a decision has shaken off her facade.
>"I-I'll take it upon myself t-to..." she stutters before looking at you, her royal eyes large and filled with a kind of nervous wonder, "Spend the day w-watching you... Watching OVER you, rather..." she corrects herself.
>You sigh.
>This makes things a lot more complicated.
>And you should have realized she would spin this to her advantage.
>You can't give in, however.
>You need to remain neutral.
"Oh! Well that isn't so bad. I like spending time with you, anyway." you say politely without thinking.
>Her face lights up and turns so red she might pass out.
>SHIT.
>That came off as flirty didn't it?
>Or at the very least, abnormally nice.
>You are still being punished afterall, and you just disregarded everything and went right for the compliment.
>>25697980
>She opens a large book to cover her face, but she does a poor job of covering her excitement.
>"Great! I'll m-meet you down at your forge as s-soon as I finish reading this b-book." she says without looking up.
>It's at this point you notice the book is upside down.
>Rainbow Dash is right, she is terrible at hiding her feelings.
>You feel pretty silly now, to say the least.
"A-Alright. I'll just get my work clothes from my shack and meet you down there then..." you say, seeking an exit strategy.
>She nods quickly behind her book.
>You stand up and thump down the stairs to the door.
>After all that, you're starting to believe remaining neutral isn't a possibility anymore.
>As you walk through the doorway another thought related to Twilight's obvious hints wanders in.
>That 'friend' you're supposed to be getting dinner with on Wednesday...
>They're just Twilight... right?
>You sigh, a little bummed.
>Not because it was Twilight after all, but rather because the surprise had been spoiled for you.
>You wonder if she even remembers, heck you barely did.
>Oh well.
>You don't have time to dwell on that stuff. You need to focus on this perfect trap Twilight has snared you in.
>You'll just have to do your best to seem normal. That's all you can do for now.
>>25697995
I gotta tap out for the night. Early class tomorrow, and I'm meeting with my professor in the morning. I'll catch up with you fellas tomorrow afternoon!
What a wonderfully productive day today was for the O'hana. So many names, so many stories, plenty of content flowing through. And that was all just today!
I think this'll be a lively little chunk of /mlp/ that will give us some warm feelings during these colder seasons.
So, with that, I say goodnight to my lovely O'hana. We're getting bigger every day.
>>25698407
Nighty Night Rigsters
>>25698407
Riggy, i hope you live a long and prosperous life for this wonderful stuff you bless us mortals with. Praise riggy.
>>25698679
bump
>>25697995
Actually rooting for book horse, notting against fashion horse, but Twilight is my fav.
>>25698679
Riggy is a god confirmed.
>>25694321
Huh. Funny thing, I'm going to revive that thread tomorrow or in this week...maybe is going to die but I want to give it a shot because I'mDETERMINED
I have some pastebins of the thread tBh
>>25698679
Witnessed
>pic not related
>>25698407
Keep it up riggers
>>25699510
>riggers
My brain read niggers. Kek.
>>25690690
bump
>>25690690
bump
Moar green from the green god
>>25693121
>She glares at you, and continues to as she slowly flutters down, grabs a different horseshoe and ascends once again, without losing face.
AHAHAHAHA
>>25693161
Dude, that's cute.Far too cute.
>>25693178
More?
>>25693907
Nice how to get /fit/ instruction.
>>25698407
More.Call me a fag, but a small speed up for pace would be appriciated.
>>25690690
bump
I'm awake! I'll be going to college in a little while, so I don't have enough time to write.It's British college, so times are different
>>25700743
E-eh...Well I guess I could write more if you really want it.
I'll start on the next part once I have time.
I'll also post this adorable cat gif in hopes that it gives someone diabetes
>>25700932
Take it easy and come back soon. we'll keep the thread warm.
I'll, uh...Give this thread a bump before I set out.
Just to be sure.
>>25701230
I'll keep it here, I have a vested interest in this thread a well as a few others, for reading material. bump
>>25690690
bump
>>25700932
Boop
>>25690690
bump
>>25700743
There's actually going to be a pace increase soon.This is the slow buildup part.
I'm in class, have work after class, and have a lot of homework. I probably won't be writing until later, but when I get to writing it'll be some solid development.
>>25702140
Good luck there riggersyou don't even need it
>>25702140
Then it sounds like another exciting installation of everyone's favorite CYOA: RIGGYQUEST!
The CYOA where we will get senpai to notice us. We will. For
>YOU ARE ANON
>The best shitposter
>That's what your mug says
>And Riggy was being a butt and trying to save you, but not notice you while saving you
>You could tell because there were no sparkly bubbles behind him when he addressed you
>That's how you know if you're being noticed!
>But that was then and this is now
>After saving you he gave you an ice cream and was scooped up into the sky by some birdpones
>So you've lost the trail
>But you are filled withDETERMINATION
>So you will pick a Riggyspot to spot riggy at
>But you only have time for one
>Do you stalk-
>eer. STRATEGICALLY BUMP INTO Riggy at:
(1) Riggy's Class
(2) Riggy's Work
(3) Riggy's Home
(4) Goatmom's Home
(5) The Internet
>>25702396
(5) Internet, I-it's not like w-we were waiting for you to get back s-senpai.
>>257023961. Class
Must assert dominance, especially around his peers.
>>25702473
1Must keep rivals from catching senpai's attention
>>25702396
>>25702473
>>25702884
>Class is the only reasonable option
>Obviously you need to make sure no other dirty anons take the gaze of your perfect riggy away from you
>You also have to make sure to establish dominance over his teacher, to ensure he has good grades!
>It's important he gets high marks in...uh...
>Dangit
>You don't know which class he's in
>Sneaking from bush to bush, you follow the object of your desire to a large, imposing brown building
>There are a bunch of letters infront of it, but eh
>reading's for chumps
>And you're not a chump you're an autist!
>And glass doors will not stop you! Even if they have a mirror finish and some other stupid idiot on them looking at you and making mouthwords at you an-
>So you quietly and gently open the door like they do in superior nippon
>Gripping the handle you pull hard to the right
>This, of course, being in inferior America, causes the door jam to shake, the door itself shattering as you rip off the handle
>Door = Opened
>Now there are three possible rooms to pick:
(1) Industrial Fightonomics
(2) Transcendant Aquaculture
(3) Homeopathological Mechanics
>>25702946
3. Homeopathological Mechanics
Because Riggy saves the world one anon at a time
Alrighty, one and all, I have returned.
Sorry for the wait. I'll start writing the next part of my story posthaste.
>>25702946
This >>25702965 is the only correct choice.Unless we have secret option (4) Men's Room. Even based Riggy would need to use the bathroom eventually, right?
>>25702986
Huzzah, the Poutmiester has returned!
>>25703270
...T-that's...H-Hellmiester...B-baka...
>>25702946
>>25702965
>>25703270
>You gently caress the door handle
>Up and down, up and down... squeezing it's hard sh-
>"Would whoever is outside PLEASE stop rattling the handle?"
>You whisper "No homo" as you spread open the door, pushing yourself deep into the warm class
>Mmmm. Higher education...
>"Excuse me? Sir? You need to take a seat - or, wait..."
>The anon at the podium knits his eyebrows as he scrutinizes you
>"I don't... think this is your class?"
>You're not paying attention, though - you gotta find Riggy
>"Hey. If this isn't your class you need to leave - now!"
>Uh oh. Podiumaster is getting jiffy
>And you don't mean like the smooth peanutbutter you cover yourself in at night
>You mean the chunky angry spread that destroys the bread of justice
>You gotta see if Riggy is here - and quick! Do you:
(1) Sing out Riggy's name and break into interpretive dance. You know he can't resist the air guitar
(2) Pocket Sand! Although you're in Homeopathological Mechanics, you definitely know Industrial AND Agricultural Fightonomics. Time to school the professor - nothing personnel, kid.
(3) Deploy the senpai bubble screen - you can't find him, but maybe he can notice you!
(4) Renegade option: revoke tenure and state funding!
>>25703554
4. Obvious choice.
>>25703554
2) just because of Coldsteel
>>25703554
2-pocket sand is preferred by 4 out of 5 dentists in situations like these
Page 9 bump
Next part of the story is coming along nicely. It's going to be a RD POV.That was so abbreviated I almost said overover
Well, I'm done. Hope you like it.
Meanwhile...
>...
>Hmm.
>Is it something she'd like?
>Well, you'll find out soon enough. She should be arriving any minute.
>Well, SHOULD.
>For one as quick as her, she almost always turns up late.
>We'll work on that, though. She's still learning.
>...Hrm.
>...
>Oh! Tea's done.
>Now, how did she like it...?
>She didn't particularly like earl grey last time she was here.
>Maybe cinnamon?
>...She doesn't seem like someone who would go for cinnamon.
>Ah! She's here!
Rainbow Dash's POV
>Stupid, stupid, stupid, stupidstupidSTUPID!
>What was that?!
>...Why do you feel guilty about it?
>Argh...
>Whatever. As long as Applejack didn't see him holding your...
>Y-your...Hoof.
>Every day, it'd be; "How's yer prince doin'?" and "Where's lover boy?"
>You'd gladly nose dive right now, if she knew.
>...
>...Nah, she probably didn't see it.
>You swear, if she so much as mentions him, you'll...
>Forget it.
>You bonk yourself on the head a few time with your hooves.
>...You can still feel where he touched it.
>It's still tingling, and thinkin' about it...
>...No, you're not thinking about it.
>You've got to meet up with a friend, anyway.
>At your speed, you make it there in around 2 minutes.
>Not bad, but not a record.
>You'll cut more corners next time.
>Alright, there's her house.
>Time to...
"Wait, what the hay?"
>There's a door on her roof.
>Why is there a door on her roof?
>There wasn't one there before.
>Why?
>...You bet you know.
>You check the plaque screwed on the wood.
>"Built to honor the endeavors of Rainbow dash, a noble pony who made this exact hole her common entrance to the abode of Rarity, owner of this establishment. Please knock."
>...Wow. You didn't think she cared about you busting through her roof all those times.
>Feeling somewhat stupid, you reluctantly knock the door.
>How is she even going to open the-
>A magical aura materializes around the frame of the door, and it opens by itself.
>Oh, yeah. Right.
>"Welcome, Rainbow Dash! Please, make yourself at home."
>Grr.
>You fly through.
>The door shuts behind you.
>"Do you like the door?"
>You entered the stupid door, and you won't give her any further satisfaction.
"Where's, uh, the dress?"
>She blinks with a pensive look on her face.
>"Rainbow Dash, please. It's polite to answer a question when it's addressed to you."
"Y-yeah. Exactly. S-so...Where is it?"
>She doesn't look particularly pleased.
>She stares at you in silence, still not leading you to the dress.
>Why does she have to make this so difficult?
>You sigh.
"...It was...Thoughtful of you to put a door up there for me."
>She smiles.
>"Good. Now, I'll answer your question."
>She walks in the direction of her studio, and you follow.
>Rarity...Is cool.
>Well, for the most part, anyway.
>You'dve thought since she disliked Applejack at first that she wouldn't like you, either.
>But she's always been so...Encouraging.
>She came up with the idea for your friends to see your performance, that one time when you were nervous.
>Admittedly, she also stole the show for a while with her stupid butterfly wings...
>But you ended up saving her butt when things went wrong, so it worked out in the end.
>Besides, she only did it 'cos the success went to her head.
>You...Can understand that.
>Guess it's one of the few things you have in common.
>She's not usually one for competition, though, so you never really...Hung out.
>But then...He happened.
>You've really had much interest in romance before. You thought it was gross.
>Many guys hit on you in the past.
>And you gave them all the same answer.
>"Sorry, I fly solo."
>Thinking back on it, that sounded kind of...Dirty.
>Whatever.
>...You never even had a crush on anypony before.
>Emphasis on "before".
>He just...Staggered into town one day.
>No pack of supplies, just the clothes on his back and a watch.
>He didn't have any idea how he got here. He was kinda scared of us at first.
>But after a while, he opened up a little.
>Of course, you only met him after he had gone through all of that.
>But that wasn't your fault.
>...To think, if that trick worked, you may have never even met him.
>...Eh, he got around. Pretty sure you'd get caught in the loop eventually.
>But...The way you met him was so...So...
>Perfect.
>Couldn't ask for a better introduction.
>That wasn't what won you over, though.
>He...Just worked for you.
>The way he tried to win with everything he had,
>The way he'd let you win sometimes,
>That tell-tale smile he gave when he had a plan,
>He was stupid, and goofy...But now...
>Well, he's still stupid and goofy.
>Nothing changed with him, but...You guess...YOU did.
>All of the stuff that was irritating before became...Charming.
>When you trash talked him, you almost wanted him to give one of his retorts.
>Sometimes you wanted him to win, just so you could make him happy.
>Suddenly, he stopped being just a friend you hung out with.
>He become the only friend you hung out with.
>Every last one of his personality traits gradually became more and more desirable...
>Eventually, just standing near him was enough to make you flare up.
>You flat out avoided him for a while. You needed to get yourself straight.
>You'd spend some nights without any sleep, thinking about him.
>It wasn't anything about him in particular, it was just...Words.
>Things he said to you, things you said to him, things you used to describe him...Either in your head or to his face...
>They became some kind of chant inside your head. Not making any sense at all.
>Fortunately, cider season came round.
>A lot of it was blurry, so you probably drank too much.
>You remember waking up at Rarity's house, though.
>She scolded you for what you did, and asked why you did it.
>Without any hesitation, you caved in and told her everything.
>Every last detail.
>You'd normally hate expressing yourself like this, but it...really hit home this time.
>After you had finished, she nodded, and said that she would do anything she could to help.
>That was it. You were friends before, but this...You couldn't thank her enough.
>You had no idea what to do. No experience, no preparation.
>It came completely out of nowhere.
>You set your pride aside, and accepted that you needed her help.
>Before she even began helping you, letting her know about how you felt really helped.
>You could hang out with others as normal. Even Anon.
>...Well, maybe not "as normal" in Anon's case, but you tried to act the same way you did before.
>A part of you was really mad at him though. Still is.
>He made you go through all of that, and he just smiles and acts how he usually does.
>Taunting you.
>...You can't even tell him about it.
>"Well, here it is, darling."
>You snap out of it and look at the dress.
>Wow.
>It looks similar to the one she made for you for the gala, but it had a shorter skirt. Looked more like a striped bowl this time round.
>...Not really the sort of thing you'd EVER wear, but it's a pretty good effort.
>"Do you like it?"
>Is this a test?
>She's testing you, isn't she.
>Alright, I guess...Be polite.
"It's...I...Thanks. Rarity."
>Geez. You DO need practice.
>She giggles.
>"Well, I suppose it's a start."
>She walks over to it, and stands proudly in front of her creation.
>...
>She can't expect you to put that on, right?
>"...Right then, let's see what it looks like on you."
>Damnit.
"Uh...No offence, Rarity, but..."
>"Oh, come on, don't be like that."
>...OH, CRAP NOT AGAI-
>She uses her magic to hoist you out of the air and over to the dress.
>All you can do is vainly struggle as you attempt to free yourself from her grasp.
>"Come on, Rainbow. Are you going to do this every time you put on a dress?"
"NO, I'm gonna do this every time you MAKE me put on a dress!"
>...
>"Please don't slouch, Rainbow. You'll wrinkle the dress."
>You can't help it.
>You couldn't care less if you wrinkle the stupid dress.
>You sit up, though.
>Rarity is sitting across the table from you.
>Today, she's going to help you work on your table manners.
>As much as you don't want to do this, a part of you wants to be more like her.
>You can't tell if it's respect, or because you think it'll make Anon like you.
>You're doing it, anyway. Doesn't mean you'll have to like it.
>You stare at the table.
>Silverware is lined up on her side, as due to being a unicorn, she can actually use knives and forks.
>You have a plate, and a teacup, and so does she.
>There is a teapot on the table, handle facing away from both your and Rarity's side.
>You're having a tea party.
>You, Rainbow Dash, are having a tea party with somepony.
>Never,
>EVER,
>Have you thought this would be something you'd do.
>E V E R.
>You take a deep breath, close your eyes, Exhale slowly and open them again.
>Yep, still at the table.
>Still with Rarity.
>Dress has not disappeared.
>Teacups still on table.
>Guess what?
>STILL AT A TEA PARTY.
>What did you ever do to deserve this?!
>Rarity clears her throat.
>You learned from the last time, when she whipped you on the back of the head with a magically suspended tape measure, that you should pay attention.
>You keep your eyes peeled for any objects in the corner of your eye that shouldn't be floating.
>"Now then, what's the first thing we do when seated at the table?"
>Um.
>Damnit, what was the answer.
>You really don't want to get whipped again.
"Uh...Greet...The other guests at the table?"
>Rarity pauses for a moment.
>...
>WAS I RIGHT OR NOT?! GIVE ME A SIGN!
>"Not bad. That would be acceptable."
>Phew.
>It seems she's giving you some credit.
>"Alright, now at this point, one should try to make polite conversation with the other guests. What would be an appropriate topic, Rainbow Dash?"
>She half closes her eyes, raises her head slightly and looks at you from behind her nuzzle.
>OK, that's not too bad.
"Uh...How has your day been?"
>I dare her to tell me that's wrong.
>"Good example. Well done."
>As if you ever doubted yourself.
>You can't help but smile a little.
>"Ah, good. A smile is very important. Not too forced, just wide enough to be friendly."
>Not even trying.
>You rock at tea parties.
>...
>OK, maybe...Not "rock", specifically...
>...Yeah, that's lame.
>"Alright, now we move on to the manners themselves."
>Crap, you suck at this part.
>She lifts the teapot with her magic and pours tea into both of your cups.
>Yours first, then hers.
>...Damn, she's good.
>"Alright, now I'll demonstrate how to drink tea without using magic."
>She casts a knowing glance at you.
>Gulp.
>"First, clasp the cup between both your forlegs. Like so."
>She skillfuly picks up and holds the teacup using her front knees.
>Again, she's good.
>You're not going to screw up this time though.
>Showing your inexperience, but with determination, you mimic her actions as best as you can.
>This time, you didn't knock the teacup over, staining the teacloth.
>Nor did it slip out of your grasp and break on the floor.
>You're actually holding it.
>The liquid inside is rippling menacingly.
>Please stop.
>"Nice work, Rainbow Dash. Now, bring it to your mouth, like so, but don't tip it."
>She brings the cup to her mouth while keeping it level, takes a sip, and returns to the previous position.
>She makes it look so easy.
>"Alright, Rainbow Dash, don't be nervous, otherwise it'll shake."
>Don't be nervous.
>Yeah, you're not the mare who's about to get her head smacked again.
>You look at the cup, and as steadily as you can, move it to your mouth.
>A drop falls from the cup and lands on the dress.
>You wince.
>Rarity looks ever so slightly annoyed.
>This is going to be a long day.
That's all for now. Thank you for your patience.
>>25705123
Thank you for this glorious green gift.
>>25705022
>The door
Kek
>>25705042
I like your Rainbow Dash.
>>25705053
I really like your RD.
>>25705070
I read her thoughts with her voice, good job.
>>25705102
>You can't tell if it's respect, or because you think it'll make Anon like you.
>... Not knowing that Anon likes her true self.
Typical; go on.
>>25705123
>She lifts the teapot with her magic and pours tea into both of your cups.
>Yours first, then hers.
>...Damn, she's good.
Kek.
>You're actually holding it.
>The liquid inside is rippling menacingly.
>Please stop.
Kek.
MOAR.
>>25705140
This.
>>25705123
Before you wrote this, you said you weren't very good at writing.
I expect you to apologize for lying to me. This story is extremely well written and I loved every second of it.
I'm still at work, but with green like this being written while I'm gone, I'm not too nervous about the thread. This is some quality shit.
>>25705346
>>25705123
Reading this I can't get Rainbow from pic related out of my mind.
>>25705419
>>25705346
>>25705226
>>25705140
...Wow. Really wasn't expecting all of this praise.
Thanks, guys. I'm not sure if I can keep this quality up, but...I'll try.
>>25705507
You're great; just keep being yourself.
>>25690690
bump
>>25705507
You are good.
Do your best, glorious writefriend.
>>25690690
bump
>>25690690
bump
I have to go to college first thing I wake up tomorrow, so don't be surprised if you don't hear from me in a while.I've really got the story in my head now. I hope I can juggle work and ideas at the same timeI'll also try to get a pastebin
>>25706137
We await eagerly again Miester
>>25706137
Should probably let you know that its spelled meister.
>>25699236
JUST.
DO.
IT.
Do you have the prompt? I think I have it but my stuff is disorganized. Maybe some generous Anon have the entire prompt!Also: bump!
>>25691769
>Anal
Are you going to write a Pinke tsundere story?
>>25705011
bump
>>25690690
bump
>>25707797
>>25707940
>>25708052
Stop bumping every 10-20 min you idiot. Theres no point.
>>25708178
Do you know you basically made a bump... do yuo?
>>25708252
You just did too good sir.
man this thread is really starting to get "bumpy"
![0b361ebc5cebccb842ddd116fef4ec9ff4f2d56d[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/9vmHZxq.png "0b361ebc5cebccb842ddd116fef4ec9ff4f2d56d[1].png")
>>25708533
woah you're giving me "goosebumps"
>>25706860
Sorry I can't find the prompt
Need help Anons! Someone have it?
explain to me what a prompt is
>>25709245
A writing prompt is simply a topic around which you start jotting down ideas. The prompt could be a single word, a short phrase, a complete paragraph or even a picture, with the idea being to give you something to focus upon as you write.
>>25709091
/r/ this! I want that thread back...
>>25698880
Niet, Fashion horse is best.
Based Riggy,
I await your return with bated breath. No green has ever satisfied me the way yours does. How I long for the words, excellently crafted by your magnificent hands. How I ache for the story, brilliantly dreamed up by your wonderful mind. How I lust for your responses, ever so kind and pleasant to others. Riggy, oh based Riggy! I think it obvious that I speak for everyone in the thread when I say that we love and miss you.
Yours always,
~Anon
>Day Canada in Equestria
>You are Anon, and you hail from the frozen wastes of Canada.
>Specifically, the city of Winnipeg.
>The same city that got a small plot of land on fucking MARS named after it because it was so goddamn cold.
>It's ponychristmas time, and you were happy to be back in your natural habitat.
>However, ponies ain't SHIT since they control the weather.
>Seriously, the coldest you've seen is -30*C with the wind-chill.
>Needless to say, you're sweating up a storm right now.
>You've got your sweater on and a thin pair of gloves, and that's all you need.
>Fucking ponies, you swear to god.
>It isn't natural that you can walk around with exposed skin and NOT get frostbite in under ten minutes.
>These snow drifts barely reach your waist. If you can see over the snow drift, then it ain't winter.
>Just sayin'.
>You have half a mind to walk right into the Everfree forest just to get some proper cold weather.
>You're jarred out of your thoughts by a shrill scream by your least favourite marshmallow pony.
>"Anonymous! You get your tall, monkey flank over here RIGHT. NOW."
>>25711030
>Oh.
>Good.
>HER.
>You don't know why, but Rarity despises you.
>She was pretty chill back when you first arrived in Equestria, but the more you talked, the more she disliked you.
>Oooohh, she has it out for you.
>There was that one time she yelled at you to stay away from her sister and to not "seduce her with your rugged charm".
>Problem is, that outburst was at a dinner at the Apples'. The CMC were there as well as their siblings/mentors, and you.
>You're pretty sure that Big Mac still thinks you're a filly fooler or something.
>"Anonymous, I won't repeat myself again."
>You sigh and turn around, waiting to see what fresh hell Rarity has in store for you.
>...and you are promptly weighed down by several articles of clothing magically appearing on your body.
>On top of your regular clothes, you're now also wearing a heavy, fluffy jacket; a winter scar; a thick hat (with ear-warmers); and what feels like fake leather gloves.
>Rarity glares at you as she magically adjusts your hat so that it's extra-snug.
>"I can't believe you're stupid enough to just go out into the cold without wearing any proper clothing. I've spoken to Twilight about your biology, and it's obvious that you'll freeze without a fur coat."
>She stands back and admires her work.
>"Not to mention, you're setting a poor example for Sweetie Belle."
>She stomps up to you and pokes you in the groin with a hoof.
>"And don't think I didn't catch that veiled insult of yours. That you would rather freeze to death than go to moi to get some proper winter-wear."
>She spins on her heel (hoof?) and walks away without sparing a glance in your direction.
>"I had better see you later this week for a proper jacket measurement, Anonymous. Thursday, Five PM sharp. Do NOT be late."
>You utter one word as you watch Rarity walk back to her boutique.
"B-Baka..."
>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25711041
Tsunderity
I must have more
>>25711030
Canadanon's attitude toward cold and winter makes me hate him with every fiber of my being.
>>25711030
>when motherfuckers think shit's cold when it hits 20*C
>>25711041
>when motherfuckers think you need to wear a mammoth to not die
Hasn't even gotten that tsundere yet and I still want more.
>>25712320
I honestly like the guy, though neighbor bias probably has something to do with it.
Allrighty, I, am, BACK.
...I'll start writing now.I also corrected my nameDon't know if you noticedb-baka
>>25710645
Yeah, sorry about going AWOL yesterday. That final project got out of hand. I passed out as soon as I was given the opportunity to.
Fortunately, my work load is a lot less tonight, and after my meeting I should be able to provide all of you with some writing. Sorry that I couldn't do it yesterday.
>>25709938
>>25709091
Yeah that thread was a load of fun. That's where I got my start! I tried looking for the prompt in the screen cap of my first story on that thread, but i couldn't find it. Sorry guys.
>>25690690
Our based writefags have returned, and the lord said let there be green. bump
>>25690690
bump
>>25712320
>>25712328
>>25712331
>>25712337
>>25712357
All these posts in the 18 minutes.
>>25712712
Oh, hi.
>>25712742
Just trying to read myself to sleep, got 6-7 other threads open right now
>>25712755
Y-you too?
Well, that's not that weird. Having many tabs opened and lurking more than one, two, three threads is a common thing, as I heard.
>>25712779
More like lurking 8 threads for the last 3 days
>>25712793
Have you found something good enough to share with me?
>>25712755
>>25712779
Wow. It's bed time over there?
It's still afternoon over here in Britain.
...Which is great, 'cos I can give you some green to wake up to.
I'm not too sure about the part I'm working on now, but it's getting there. Should be up in the next couple of hours.
>>25712800
Well everything quiet at the moment am just going through the Slave pony thread. A writefag made a chris redfield that rescues/adopts the main 7. id post link but am a newfag and haven't figured it out yet.
>>25712863
nope its like 10:34 here. my sleep schedule is nonexistent. am the one that's been bumping the threads posting all the green religiously all weekend.
>>25712800
Tell me how to post the thread links and ill provide the posts
>>25712863
17:40
>>25712924
O-oh.
You can post the digits to the post you want to show, like:
>>25712923
One before you.
>>25712946
25650336
>>25712946
>>No.25650336
>>25712946
not quiet getting it but does this work
>>25713008
I shouldn't be laughing, sorry.
You just put double ">" in front of the post's number. Just the number, nothing else.
>>25712991
>>25713005
>>25713008
Kek.
Put two > before it, and just after the double > put numbers.
The format should be exactly like when you just connected your posts to mine.
>>25713025
>I shouldn't be laughing, sorry.
This.
Why aren't you writing?: 3
>>25713027
...I-I am.
I just have this thread going on in the background.
...H-here, have a tsundere Luna.
>>25713027
I have no writing talent or drive for it, I have a rather extreme reading problem if im interested or very board. Waited for the harry potter series to finish the books the read them all in a week. I just figured out how to post sue me
>>25713043
Good... GOOD... BUWAhaha!
>>25713071
>I have no writing talent or drive for it
Then we are two.
>Waited for the harry potter series to finish the books the read them all in a week.
I couldn't just wait, it would kill me.
>I just figured out how to post sue me
Everyday we learn, today how to >>, to-morrow how to sue someone via internet : ^)
>>25713103
I also went through a small library and broke their computer from how many books I've checked out and returned.
>>25713116
What, how, why?!Twilight, stamph!
>>25713103
>25684528
>>25713126
I was bored and they rebuilt the place, I read very quickly when I want to
>>25713126
also the other thread is doing pretty well at the moment
>>25690690
bump
And I'm done. YES.
Alright, here we go.
Rarity's POV
>Why, oh WHY did you put her in that dress.
>In hindsight, it was an terrible idea.
>You knew were going to try and teach her how to drink tea properly.
>You knew what happened the last few times.
>Of course it was going to get stained.
>...
>Be calm, Rarity.
>You can't get angry at her about it.
>You suppose you may have thought it would've given her some incentive to succeed.
>To not spill the drink.
>Prehaps it's your fault.
>...Poor thing.
>You know that she doesn't like sitting still,
>That she's not a big fan of tea,
>And that she's probably quite uncomfortable, all things considered.
>...But she's trying ever so hard.
>She really wants to impress Anonymous, but she has no idea how to do it herself.
>You won't be able to teach her EVERYTHING, but...
>...It's the least you can do.
>You take a sip of your tea.
>It's not bad. A little on the dry side, but still, rather nice.
>...
>You look at her again.
>You force a smile in an attempt to reasure her.
>...Good. She seems a bit calmer now.
>You'll watch over her progress and see if you can provide a few tips for her technique.
>Admittedly, however, she still needs a LOT of help.
>...No, NOT ON THE DRESS-
Anon's POV
>...That's all the tools you'll need.
>Phew.
>When you first applied to work at the farm, you were feeling confident.
>You've got a fairly decent physique, and it seemed like the sort of job you could get behind.
>Of course you didn't know at the time that the ponies KICKED the apples out of the trees,
>But regardless, you think that you've still been a pretty good farmhand.
>Mainly due to all the other farmhands not actually having hands.
>It seemed like a family business at first, but they were welcome to volunteers.
>Befriending your soon-to-be-boss didn't hurt either.
>Soon after meeting Rainbow for the first time, meeting Applejack was all but assured.
>They're really close friends, and you seemed to have a lot in common.
>You even got to have a few 3-way competitions.
>Between Rainbow's speed, and Applejack's strength, it wasn't easy at first.
>But eventually, your "fairly decent physique" had developed into something more...Herculean.
>You lost one of her little bets, though.
>That's how you came to work here full time.
>You didn't even make the bet. Rainbow just used you as a chip.
>You've continued to work past the time that you were originally supposed to do it for, but she didn't mind.
>It just became a thing.
>Speaking of your boss...
>The orange bundle of horsepower is heading your way.
>She has a bunch of apples in buckets attached to her saddles.
>You can hear the sound of trees being pounded in the distance.
>They've started already?
>Guess they can't wait for you all the time.
>Oh. Right. You've just been leaning against the barn.
>That's probably why she's heading your way.
>"RISE AND SHINE, SLEEPYHEAD!"
>Pft. Same old Applejack.
>She always gets so bossy when you're and work.
>...Probably because she's your BOSS, jackass.
>Still though, she's a joy to hang out with.
>You haven't really been able to, lately. You've been busy with the harvest.
>Well, THEY have. there's not much you can do when you've got a bunch of self-aware horses with superhuman strength as your co-workers.
>Or should that be superequine? You're not sure if what they're capable of is "super" in comparison to what other equines are normally capable of,
>But they're still physically superior to humans in almost every way.
>Almost. They're still tiny.
>Sometimes you find it difficult to take them seriously.
>This time is no exception.
"Hey, Applejack. How's the harvest going?"
>"If ya came over here an' helped us, yew'd find out. Git!"
>She spanks you on the rear.
>The force of it pushes you off of the barn, but it still makes you laugh.
"Alright, alright. Geez."
>You grab the wheelbarrow filled with tools, and follow Applejack to the orchard.
>It looks like quite a walk, so you decide to start up a conversation.
"So, how are you doing?"
>She shrugs.
>"Fine, ah guess. How're you?"
"Pretty good. My ass hurts."
>She chuckles.
>"Well, maybe you won' be just sittin' on it next tahm."
>You sigh a sigh of mirth.
>A moment of silence passes.
>"...How's Rainbow?"
"What? You mean you don't know?"
>She stops walking for a second so she can scratch her ribs.
>"Eh, well..."
>She sighs.
>"She uh...Hasn't really been hangin' out with me as often as she did."
"...Really?"
>"Nope."
>She looks away wistfully.
>You scratch your head.
"Well, I don't know why that would be."
>"...Ah might have n' idea..."
>Huh?
>She spoke a lot more softly than she usually does.
>Wait. She's been with Rainbow Dash a lot longer than you have.
>...Maybe she knows why she's been acting...differently.
"Applejack, has anything about Rainbow Dash that seemed...Odd, lately?"
>She raises an eyebrow at you.
>"Like wut?"
"Like...I don't know, different. Less like...Her. You know?"
>She pauses for a moment, still looking a little...down.
>"...Well, she ain't tellin' me nuthin', that's fer sure."
>So she has noticed something different.
>But...Why wouldn't Dash tell her anything?
>Did they have an argument or something?
>Whatever it is, she isn't happy about it.
"Do you...Have any idea what it could be?"
>She seems to think carefully about what to say next.
>"Well...No offence, Anon, but...I think it has sumthin' to do with...Yew."
>What, you?
>Why you?
>Does she have a problem with you, or something? Did you go too far with the trash talk or something?
"What do you mean?"
>She sighs again.
>"Well, Anon, she...Seems to be talkin' about you a lot. Whenever I get t' see her, that is..."
>...Is that what she's so down about?
>So, let's get this straight.
>Dash is acting...Differently around you...
>She's talking about you a lot behind your back...
>And to top it all off, she's preferring your company over AJ's?
>If it was just the first two, it could've been that she some kind of issue with you...
>...No, she could still have an issue.
>She must be focusing on you because she's trying to work it out without hurting your feelings.
>She never was good with words.
>...
>Well, however it is, you hope she's OK...
>"...Tell 'er I said hi, next tahm y' see her, y'hear?"
>Damnit.
>Now you feel guilty.
"...Sure. Applejack. I...I'll talk to Rainbow dash. See if we can all hang out together again."
>She perks up a little at that.
>"Y' sure?"
"Well, yeah. What are friends for?"
Time passes...
Rarity's POV
>You've finished with tutoring Rainbow Dash for today.
>You're walking with her as she exits the boutique.
>...Through the front door, this time.
"That wasn't too bad, Rainbow Dash. You're definitely getting better."
>She's scowling.
>"Yeah, yeah."
>She doesn't seem convinced.
>Darn.
"I really mean it, you know. You'll be a true lady before you know it."
>You hope you don't sound too pretentious.
>...You swear you could hear the sound of a trombone playing a short, tragic tune, far in the distance.
>It's probably Pinkie Pie.
>You've learned to accept that she simply just works that way.
>...Wait, is she implying-
>"...I guess I'll just keep practicing."
>Ah, Wonderful. You can work with that.
"Trust me, Rainbow, you'll be fit to dine with royalty once I'm done teaching you."
>She smiles, but she still looks a little sad.
>...If only there was anything more you could do to cheer her up...
>Oh! Right!
>"Well, I'll catch you later, Rarity. I've gotta meet up with Anon."
"Wait!"
>...She stops, mid-take off.
>Her legs are splayed out in odd positions, bringing to mind a dog wanting to play with it's owner.
>You stifle a giggle at the likeness.
>"Yeah?"
"...Do you have a brand of tea you like? I never asked."
>She pauses for a moment. Still in the position.
>It's impressive that she's able to hold all of that potential energy.
>"...Do you have cinnamon?"
>Oh. Who knew.
"Yes. Uh...Thank you, Rainbow Dash."
>And...she's off.
RD POVABC, 123
>That could've gone better.
>She's right though.
>If there's anything you've learnt from your time flying, it's that practice makes perfect.
>Yeah, it's just like flying.
>...Well, you were good from the second you got in the air.
>Maybe it's a little different. Like actually learning to fly, instead of being awesome right off the bat.
>None of that matters now, anyway. You're meeting up with Anon.
>You can't wait.
>Whatever he's doing, he's going to drop it.
>You want to be with him, and you want him now.
>...Y-you'd better not say that to his face.
>You're gonna give him a crash landing better than the first.
>...All feelings aside, you were crushing him at horseshoe toss before you bailed.
>Because you were late. Not anything else.
>...You're not lying to yourself.
>OK, that was a lie.
>You sigh through your nose, not opening your mouth so you don't get a bug in there.
>Nopony likes bug breath.
>...Why don't you just tell him?
>I mean, he knows who you are.
>If he says no, well...That'd be stupid.
>...OK, maybe you want to wait.
>You can't just tell him that...ANYWHERE.
>...
>You're pretty sure he's interested though.
>The way he looked into your eyes back then,
>The way h-he...held your hoof...
>T-the skilful w-way he put his hand u-u-under, and-
>OK, FOCUSING ON FLYING
>Shoot. You almost crashed, there.
>You sometimes forget that wings are particularly expressive when it comes to pegasi body language.
>You're lucky that never happened when Anon was watching.
>...While you were near him, sure, but...
>He didn't see it...
>...Right?
>...Whatever. He's gonna get it.
>You have your stallion in your sights.
>And you're not going to let him escape.
>You brace for impact.
And, I'm done.
>>25713724
Woooooooo waitin for more
Just made a Pastebin.
Here it is, all current parts of the story are on it already.
http://pastebin.com/u/Hellmeister
>>25712328
I am straight-up from Canada, friends, and it isn't winter if I'm not walking home from work in -40*C weather.
What's up, my ice-brother?
>>25712320
Y'all just salty you can't handle the cold. I'll bet your schools actually shut down sometimes when you get some heavy snowfall or a cold snap.
>>25714069
Wish I could live in -40*C weather.
But no, I get the fucking desert.Though, wearing scrubs in the winter is hell. It's like covering yourself in 1 ply tissue paper.
>>25714069
icebretheren unite!
or some autistic shit like that
>>25714160
National pride is the only thing I am willing to tard-out over.
>>25714138
You'll have to be more specific, friend. Anything south of my city is what I consider a desert.
>>25714308
Rio Grande.
>>25714346
Ouch. My sympathies, friend. Lord knows I would have sweated myself to death if I were in your place.
>>25713702
>>...You swear you could hear the sound of a trombone playing a short, tragic tune, far in the distance.
>>It's probably Pinkie Pie.
>>You've learned to accept that she simply just works that way.
>
>>25713709
>you want him now.
Eau mai...
>>25714069
Mainefag actuallytechnically Floridafag but that was born, not raised, though for most intents and purposes it's fucking close enough. Pissed as hell we haven't gotten any snowfall yet even though last year shit started back in October.
>>25714346
>Rio Grande
You poor, poor bastard. I can only imagine the sheer pain of slowly evaporating just by existing.
Lonely bump
So was it just me, or did 4chan nose dive for a little while there?
I just got back from work and have to do homework for a couple hours. Afterwards, however, I'm totally free to write!
>>25716357
T'was offline for a while.
>>25716357
It was down down down.
>>25716357
asleep
Not quite done with homework, about a half hour left, but I just remembered something.
>>25697526
Here's your Drawfag Funtime reward you lucky duck, you! Limestone Pie with BONUS Marble serving the viewer anon some delish rock soup.
Alright, I'll be back in like 30 - 45 min for the writings.
>>25717272
Bump
>>25717272
...I now require green of this. The Pies all fighting for Anon's attention would be absolutely wonderful.
Especially Maud's.
"..."
>"..."
"W-why are you staring at me?"
>"I'm staring into your eyes. They look like sedimentary rocks."
"Oh, uh, I-"
>"-I like sedimentary rocks."
>>25717348
"You like... sedimentary rocks? So you like my eyes?"
>"No."
".... okay, I gue-"
>"Yes I do." she says, a minor blush showing on her stony visage.
"... c-cool."
>"I don't like you as much as sedimentary rocks."
>You nod slowly.
"That's... okay?"
>"I lied, I like you more than sedimentary rocks."
"..."
>You've never been so confused, intimidated, and flattered at the same time.
>>25717348
>>25717272
I love you.N-not like that B-baka!
>>25717444Perfection
>>25717444
>you have never been more scared in your life for the dangers of sexual abouse.
>you are pretty sure you read in some book that thing like this are sings of potential emotional abousers.
>you are okey with that.
>>25717659
>abouse
This sounds adorable.
Nearly done with my homework! One more paragraph!
>>25717705
And done! Writing some fresh green now!
>>25717875
WOOOOOOOOOOOO
>>25717875
IT BEGINS
>>25717875
ITS HAPPENING
>>25718252
Fuck yeah
>>25716357
>>25716434
In a burning ring of fire~
>>25717272
This is delicious.
>>25717348
>>25717444
Also delicious, especially those trips.
>>25690690
bump
>>25697995
>He closes the door behind him, halting it just before it slams and tenderly shutting it.
>He's always so considerate, even in leaving.
>Your heart pounds into your ears with intense strength.
>His words replay in your head.
>"I like spending time with you anyway." You imagine him saying with a shining back drop.
>You were punishing him, and he seemed... happy about it.
>And before that, when you were interrupting him and barking orders...
>You were just trying to be more intimidating at first, but after he started acting so obedient and so nervous it... it felt...
>It felt... delightful~
>He was actually nervous, but obviously not uncomfortable, or at least not in a bad way. He wouldn't have been so cheerful to spend more time with you if that were the case.
>Usually you can't get much more than a smile out of Anon, but you just made him anxious...
>So for the first time, you were actually getting to him.
>Needless to say it went to your head, and you went a little overboard near the end.
>And if you're totally honest, there was a lascivious motivation behind it as well.
>You're just a little pent up, in that regard.
>It's not a problem, you can control it.
>But... if you had been wearing his boxers...
>You sigh at the mere musing of it.
>This was a huge step forward in your relationship.
>And as long as you stick to your plan, it should be-
>"What the HECK was THAT?!" a shrill voice echoes through the empty library.
>You jump three feet in the air at the unexpected question.
>You nearly snap your neck when you turn to see a blue pegasus swooping down from the open skylight above you.
>Oh no.
>She's the last pony you wanted to see here and now.
>>25718732
>You brace yourself for the incoming onslaught of jokes and prods.
>Look into her eyes as she lands, expecting her normal jabbing smirk.
>But instead, you're addressed by a stern stare.
>Rainbow gets extremely close to your face, until your noses touch.
>"You think you're gonna win that idiot's heart like THAT?!" she yells into your face.
>Her outburst is hard to register at first, but you force your brain to react.
"What are you- WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?!" you say, adjusting your emphasis to reflect your emotions better.
>Rainbow Dash puts her hooves on your cheeks, shaking you a little.
>"Ya can't get a guy like Anon to notice you unless you really go for it! You've gotta give you're 110% percent!" she yells.
>You shake your head, trying to grasp the situation better.
"What!?"
>Rainbow Dash starts to pace around you.
>"He's gotta notice you for the awesome, nerdy pony that we all know and love." she says, as she steps back in front of you.
>She puts her hoof against your muzzle again.
>"But you need to really gotta push that princess stupendousness you've got! You need to learn how to flaunt that AWESOME." she says
>She's going too fast for you to collect your thoughts properly.
"I don't understa-"
>"Fortunately for you, my book-reading friend of mine," she begins, wraping a hoof around you and pulling you close, "I'm the best tutor for awesomness this side of Equestria."
"I never asked for-"
>"Geez, Twi. You don't have to beg me, I mean what are friends for?" she says with a kind of cockiness that only Rainbow Dash can have.
>You groan loudly.
"You can't just butt in on this stuff!" you yell finally.
>She looks at you with a deadpan expression, followed by a simple smirk.
>"Fine, if that's what you want. I guess Anon is just too much to ask for a dork like you to handle." she says, nonchalantly inspecting her hoof.
>You feel your face burn with overflowing passion.
>>25718741
"I just- How do you know I want to go after Anon?!" You ask, having a hard time disguising your flustered state.
>Rainbow Dash raises an eyebrow.
>"Twi, after what I saw in Anon's shack, it was OBVIOUS." she says with a laugh or two.
>Your face turns crimson.
>There are few other times in your life where you've felt this embarrassed.
>Rainbow once again wraps her arm around you, pulling you against her.
>"That was ROUGH. But hey, it landed you a love coach like me, so it's not a total loss!" she says, walking over to your desk and sitting in your chair.
>She lifts her hind legs onto the desk, sitting back and relaxing as she does.
>"Unless, of course, you don't need me."
>Almost every fiber of your being is telling you to kick her out of your office and deal with her at another time.
>But something about her offer seems... beneficial.
>She does spend a lot of time with Anon away from work.
>Maybe she knows something you don't.
>You fight your automatic reaction, and attempt to swallow your pride.
"W-What sort of coaching d-did you have in mind?" you ask through grit teeth.
>Sometimes your passion bubbles a little too close to the surface, and it's hard to reign in.
>She smirks, satisfied with the reaction she has gotten out of you.
>"Let me tell you something, Sparkle," she says, soaring back over to you from your chair, "A guy like Anon, he isn't gonna fall for just ANYpony. He's one in a million!"
>For a second her eyes shift away from you, and she seems momentarily distracted.
>"One in a..." she whispers.
>She looks back into your eyes, quickly snapping out of her trance.
>"ONE IN A MILLION!" she repeats.
>>25718748
>You nod at her, still puzzled about how you feel about this.
>"So you need to really hit him with some good ol' fashioned confidence." she finally says.
>You tilt your head.
"I just did! Didn't you see the way that he listened to me when I gave orders? What else is there to confidence?"
>She shakes her head.
>"Not that princess kind of confidence! You're too modest, egghead! Would it kill you to show off every once and awhile?!"
>You start to feel nervous.
>Does Anonymous really want somepony who is confident? Somepony who brags about themself?
>You've never held your crown as a sort of trophy, after all you never asked for it.
>Maybe showing it off a little wouldn't hurt...
>It certainly would give you a leg up on Rarity.
"Do you really think Anon will respond to something like that?" you ask slowly.
>Rainbow Dash nods immediately.
>"Heck yeah he would! Trust me Twi, I'm one of Anon's closest friends. He's the kind of guy that likes a gal with some CONFIDENCE!" she says, flexing while hovering in the air.
>You roll your eyes.
>She is a close friend...
>You nod.
"Okay. I'll let you coach me." you say finally.
>She smiles and drops down, pulling your face to hers.
>"GREAT! With your princessness, and my awesome coaching skills, we'll win Anon's love for ourselves!" she says, extending her hoof out in front of the two of you.
>You turn your head a little, but your cheeks are still smushed against eachother.
"You mean, for me... right?" you ask slowly.
>Her face turns a little pink, but her cocky smile never leaves her.
>"Yeah! That's what I said, Egghead!" she yells, not looking in your direction.
>You could've sworn...
>Then again... maybe not.
>You'll just let it slide for now.
>There are more important matters to deal with.
>>25718732
Yes
>>25718756
Thank you based Riggy. I have classes earlier than normal tomorrow so I need to get some actual sleep.I hope you h-have a good night too!
>>25718756
Moar?
>>25719106
Yep, just writing it still.
>>25719126
Yay
