>You are Silver Shine.
>You were a local police officer when the war of the Great Sisters happened.
>Following the chaos of the defeat of Celestia, you had tried to maintain order among the citizens.
>But to no avail, Princess Luna...
>Nightmare Moon, took complete control of Equestria and plunged the world into eternal darkness.
>...At first.
>After a few months of her rule, Nightmare Moon's power craze had dimmed down to a sustainable level.
>She even saw how her subjects were suffering without sunlight, and now she allows a small, weaker sun, to shine for a short period each day.
>A miracle, even if it only got as bright as twilight.
>A few years have passed and the ponies were... accommodating to Moon's new rule.
>Equestria now farms nocturnal plants such as mushrooms and Dragon Fruit.
>Ponies now came out more during the night and slept during the day.
>Everything seemed stable.
>And that's when you came in.
>After what seemed like a minor assassination attempt from inside her castle, the royal guards were recruiting anypony with former law enforcement or military history.
>...You admit, being a mushroom farmer was not really your fancy.
>Nor did it pay well, so you signed up immediately.
>No brutal training was required, all you needed to know was how to fight with a spear and in a suit of armor.
>You picked up pretty quick, and soon you completed training.
>You had high hopes that you would be one of the roaming guard patrols, a sentry, or even right beside the queen herself!
>Yes, she prefers the name "Queen Nightmare Moon".
>But your hopes were soon diminished...
>You were posted right outside her bedroom chamber.
>On night shift, which was pointless since the queen stays in her throne room all night anyway!
>The only time you even see her is when she is returning to her chambers as the day starts, asking if anything suspicious happened.
>To which you always answered "No, your highness."
>Since absolutely -nothing- happens all night.
>Forced to Cuddle
>implying force would be necessary if beautiful moon queen wanted to cuddle
Anyways, proceed.
>>25619254
>Countless times you asked, even begged your commanding officer to switch your position.
>He always denied it.
>"No one else wants your place, plus you're getting paid, right?"
>Was always his excuse, and it drove you mad.
>And if you didn't mention before, you're an earth pony.
>Maybe that's why you can't move up in the ranks to a higher position.
>You swore any minute longer of standing outside an empty room for nothing would be the end of you...
>Oh! Here she comes now.
>NM:"Good day, guard Shine."
"Good day, your highness."
>NM:"Any suspicious occurrences?"
"None, your highness."
>NM:"Hmm. You are dismissed for the day."
>You bow as she enters her room.
>As soon as the door closes you take off your helmet and scratch your head furiously.
"Damn this helmet! It always pinches my mane..."
>Grumbling to yourself, you walk down the hallway and meet up with the day guard.
>She was a dark brown bat pony with narrow, yellow eyes.
"Hey Ellie."
>E:"Hello Silver, how's her majesty?"
"Peachy as ever."
>Ellie cocks her head.
>E:"Eh... what's 'peachy'?"
>You forgot a new generation of bat ponies were introduced after the uprising, so not many of them knew how things were before.
"Oh, um... it's an expression based on an old fruit called a 'peach', and uh... it's colors were vibrant, and it means 'to be cheerful'."
>Ellie still looks confused.
"But I was using this term with sarcasm, so..."
>E:"Oohhh! So she's -not- happy! I get it!"
>These new bat ponies were a bit slow, but at least some of them were kind to their fellow normal ponies.
"Yeah, well, I won't keep you waiting anymore. I gotta get home."
>E:"Okay! Nice seein' ya!"
>You were about to head off again, until the large chamber door swung open.
>>25619418
It's not everyday we see NMM writers here. I'm lurking, and definitely looking forward to wherever this goes.
>>25619418
>>25619418
>A rather cross Nightmare Moon loomed out into the hallway.
>NM:"Guard Shine!"
"...Y-Yes?"
>NM:"I require to have a word with thee in mine chambers, at once!"
>You swallow a lump in your throat with a *gulp*.
>You walk into her room and she slams the door with her magic.
>You could only imagine how Ellie was reacting to this.
>You could only imagine what you were in trouble for...
>NM:"I suppose thou art wondering why I has't called thee in hither, guard Shine?"
"...Yes, your highness."
>Nightmare Moon walks around her chamber, gazing at curios adorning her dresser.
>'Did something get stolen?!' was the first thought that crossed your mind.
>A worried frown quickly grew on your lips.
>The queen's eyes suddenly dart in your direction.
>NM:"I summoned thee because I has't a proposition for thee. "
>...huh?
"B-Beg pardon?"
>NM:"I knoweth how thee feels as mine personal quarters guard. The captain hath reported to me about thee wanting to changeth positions."
>Oh great...
>NM:"However, the truth remains. There are no other guards willing to beest thy replacement."
>You brow now furrowed, and you let out a suppressed sigh.
"And... why is that, your highness? If I may ask?"
>Moon turns towards you and starts walking slowly.
>NM:"The others art not willing to visage me."
>...
>You giggled, then chuckled...
"I-I'm sorry, did I mishear? The others are afraid to... face you?"
>The alicorn's long black body now hangs over you, her furrowed brow looking down at you.
>You immediately regret laughing.
>She stares into your soul for what seemed an eternity.
>Until she relaxes and withdraws.
>NM:"Other ponies would has't runneth hence by now. But I see more... courage within thee. "
"...Thanks?"
>Good answer.
>NM:"And I admire somepony with nobility such as you. Which is wherefore I cometh to thee with this proposition."
"What is... your proposition, your highness?"
>The queen does something very unexpected.
>She sits on her haunches and looks at you at eye-level.
>>25619653
Lurking hard here.
>>25619653
>NM:"Ere I pray, pardon me. I wanteth to apologize for being furious ere. I must keepeth mine appearance, thee knoweth?"
"...Oh! O-Of course, your highness."
>She was putting on an act??
>NM:"For years, I has't hath felt... dreadful. Ruling this kingdom hath taken it's toll on me. Both physically and emotionally."
>Setting your helmet down, you listen to her story.
>Apparently she has been feeling lonely as she now has all the power in Equestria...
>With no one to share it with.
>But she specifically meant a lesser partner, no one equal or more powerful as her former sister.
>Someone she could claim at her right side.
>NM:"Although, if 't be true I wast to taketh a spouse, I ponder if 't would mean I'd appeareth weaker. Less controlling?"
"Well, no, I mean-"
>NM:"Spare thy words."
>Moon's magic closes your lips shut.
>NM:"I has't already hath found a solution, or peradventure... a treatment?"
"A treatment? ...Then what do you need me for?"
>For the first time, you see a color form on Moon's face that wasn't black or blue.
>It was bright red.
>NM:"In an effort to bringeth comfort. I hadst wondered if 't be true I only needeth one other to beest in the same sleep chamber with me? And not for coitus, mind thee."
>She emphasized on that last bit, now making your face turn red.
>In an attempt to communicate, you stammer like a broken record.
>NM:"At ease, Shine. I am not trying to seduce thee."
"Then what, your highness?"
>NM:"...Curses, I can only telleth thee blatantly."
>She sighs.
>NM:"I require thee to beest mine... c-cuddle partner."
---
tbc
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>>25619906
I was about to go to sleep till I stumbled onto this but now I'm awake and lurking. Like what I'm reading so far, please continue
>>25619954
well you can go on to sleep, because so am I
>>25619906
NMM is the best queen, and a way better ruler than Celestia.
>>25620148
>inb4 butthurt sunfags
>>25619906
I'M READY
I'M READY
Over so soon?
boop
>>25619254
>Forced to cuddle with NMM
>Forced
>Implying I need to be forced to cuddle with glorious dark Moonbutt
is this gonna be cute or lewd?or both?
>>25622903
>filename
hwut
>>25619254
I swear with every addition to the S1 designs they just keep making the character look more and more retarded.
Those vampire teeth look like shit. Those eyes look like crap. That perspective is shit. That expressions screams "Creepy autistic basement dweller". At least if they had gotten rid of the helmet that would have been an improvement.
>>25623227
Can't have her be too scary, the little girls who watch this show might piss themselves in terror.
>>25619906
I'M WAITING.
>>25619906
Lurking
>>25623227
>not liking the fangs
>the fangs that make her look cute
I'd cuddle any form of moon horse
>>25624473
She's a big pony, so she'll be taking the lead on any cuddling.
I want to be smothered by NMM!
>>25624928
>>25624900
I wonder how tall they really are.
>>25625019
Tall enough for optimal horsey cuddling.
>>25625036
So like in the 5ft range? Im pretty tall. I'd hope her head would be at my shoulder.
>>25623227
dude what
night horse a cute
CUTE
>>25625724
Not cute
Strikingly gorgeous, graced with immeasurable beauty.
>>25625036
They aren't cuddling in that picture
Ready for more?
>>25625803
It's close enough
>>25625814
Didst thou consult >>25622903 regarding thy heinous grammar?
>>25625870
aye, and I thank you
>>25619906
>...
>You were tempted to bust out laughing, but you remember the last time you did that.
>And from the look on her face meant she was very serious.
"I uh, well first of all. I'm flattered, your highness. And I thank you."
>Her ears perk up.
"But if I may pry, do you -really- need me to be a...cuddle partner?"
>Then they fall flat.
>NM:"*sigh* I kneweth t'would beest far fetched, so I guess I has't no other choice.
>You raise an eyebrow.
>NM:"If 't be true thou art not willing to beest mine cuddle partner, then I order thou to beest. "
"Wait, what?!"
>NM:"Unless of course, thou wish a dismissal from the guard corps. "
"No no no no! Of course not! B-But why me?!"
>NM:"Because-... Because, Shine, thou appeareth as one who eke needeth somepony to catch but a wink with at night. "
"Pardon my anger, your highness, but why do you assume that I'm lonely?"
>Nightmare Moon chuckles to herself.
>NM:"Has't thee forgotten that I am queen of the night?! I am a dreamwalker! I can see the thoughts and fears of those who slumber! "
>Her voice raised in tone with every sentance, which now was starting to make you nervous.
>She soon realizes and simmers down.
>NM:"Some nights as I dreamwalk, I venture to the same ponies who art mine most trusted jutty. I maketh sure that everypony by mine side hath no... controversing thoughts. "
"What do you mean?"
>NM:"Ever since the last attack on mine life, I maketh sure that no other guard is attempting to doth the same. I understandeth that is a guard's responsibility to protect me, but I doth tend to beest curious at times and must validate mine thoughts."
"By viewing ponie's dreams? Isn't that a little invasive?"
>NM:"Those who slumber doth not knoweth that I am thither watching. Which cometh back to thee, guard Shine."
>Moon stands up and motions for you to follow her.
>She opens the twin glass doors out to her balcony, which seemed like you could see all of Equestria from up so high.
>>25625914
>NM:"Thou has't no loved ones, thou has't no close friends. So I assumed thee would concur to this arrangement."
"*sigh* I am not sure, your highness."
>The dim purple haze glows as the small sun peeks breifly over the horizon.
"It is a beautiful day."
>Nightmare Moon looks to you.
"B-But not as beautiful as your glorious nights, your high-"
>NM:"I thank thee, Silver."
>You hold your tounge.
>Did she call you by your first name?
>NM:"And for now, thou may address me as Luna."
"Luna?"
>NM:"'Twas an fusty name I hadst, long ere I tooketh this form. But tis easier to sayeth in conversation, no? "
"Okay... Luna."
>She meekly smiles, but then fades.
>NM:"Art thou certain thither is tush to convince thee?"
"Your high- *ahem* Luna, am I really that worthy? To be your 'cuddle partner', or am I just the first pony you saw and was
desperate enough to choose me?"
>Luna now tilts her head, with a saddened look on her face.
>NM:"Thou bethink yourself unworthy? Why? "
>You shrug your shoulders as you look out to the dusky landscape.
"I don't know. I'm a lesser subject? I'm not really that special."
>NM:"Balderdash! Methinks thy position as mine chamber guard is very important to me."
>You scoff.
"And why all of this kindness so sudden? Pardon me Luna, but I thought you were supposed to be our all-powerful
queen of the night?"
>Her face turned sour, as if you told her the greatest insult of all time.
>Then she became very... very... sad.
>Almost to the point of crying.
"...Luna, I-I'm sorry I-"
>NM:"SILENCE!"
>>25625982
>She rises up, wings stretched out, accommodated by a thunderous crash of lightning from nowhere.
>You cower until she calms down and relaxes.
>NM:"I bethought that we might seek comfort within each other. "
>You turned towards her.
>NM:"How two ponies with similar problems may beest dealt with... together?"
>You sigh, and stare into her bright teal eyes.
>NM:"Please Silver, I am trying my best and not force you against your will-"
"I'll do it."
>NM:"...Wha?"
"I'll be your cuddle partner, Luna."
>NM:"R-Really, thee art certain?"
>You nod your head once.
"Anything for the queen."
>Her small grin transformed into the widest smile you had ever seen her display.
>She cackles greatly, then swoops you up swiftly for a giant bear hug.
>NM:"Marvelous! We shalt beginneth today!"
>Thank goodness you were still wearing your armor, otherwise Luna might have squeezed your insides out...
>When she lets go you take a minute to regain yourself as she trots back into her chamber.
>NM:"Apace now! No time to waste, Silver!"
"W-Wait just a minWOAH!"
>You're yanked inside by her magic as the twin doors to her balcony slam shut.
>>25626202
Liking it so far
>>25626202
It's not *too* bad so far, but overuse of Nightmare's old-timey dialect is kind of grating. Pull back its use just a bit.
Also, don't do the script format of putting the character's initials right before their dialogue.
>>25626854
Sorry, the initial thing is an old habit. As for the dialect you'll see a pretty big change soon.
bump
Page 5 Bump.
>>25627528
I wouldn't mind cuddling Nightmale Moon's cock.With my mouth.
>>25627967
I like the way you think.I bet his cum tastes like dark chocolate
>>25619254
Wait, a story with an OC and not some gay AiE attempt? Howdandy
>>25626202
hhngg
Page 7 bump
>>25628177
>>25626202
>"If 't be true thou doth not mind, I needeth to refresh in the bathroom."
>In a flash, Luna teleports away.
>You sit down to catch your breath, and start taking off your armor.
>*knock knock knock*
>"Uh... your majesty? Is everything all right in there?"
>Oh shoot, you'd better get that.
>Opening the door, you see a certain bat pony standing outside.
>"*gasp* Silver?! What happened to you?"
"Do I look that bad, Ellie?"
>"Kinda, you look winded."
"Eh, I'll be fine."
>"...What's happened? Did Nightmare Moon yell at you or something?"
"Uh, kinda. But listen, I'm... going to be staying with the queen tonight."
>"What?!"
"Shhh! Listen, you can't tell -anypony- about this. Not even the captain!"
>"But why? What's going on!?"
>...
"She's afraid for her life."
>"...Huh?"
"The queen is worried that an assassin is planning another attack on her, possibly while she is sleeping."
>"No way!"
"I'm serious! And apparently,"
>You pull Ellie's ear closer.
*We're the only two ponies she -really- trusts!*
>She gasps in shock.
>At least your little fib is working nicely.
>"T-Then what are we supposed to do?!"
"Simple, you keep your post out here, and I guard from inside her chamber. Making sure that he sleeps nice and safe."
>"Wow, I never knew how serious this was."
"It -is- serious, and I'd better get back to guarding her room."
>"Wait, Silver."
>You stop and look back to her.
>"Are you absolutely sure we can't report this to anypony?"
"Well think about it Ellie, if word got out that her highness doubles her guards around her chamber, then what if an assassin in hiding among us were to be tipped off? Then they might try something a little more... sinister."
>The bat pony shivers with fear.
>"I'd never want that to happen."
"Good, now stay out here and keep a vigilant eye out, as will I within her room."
>"Yes sir!"
>She gives you a salute before closing the door behind you.
>Good thing bats are easy to deceive.
>You didn't mean any wrongdoing, you just compulsively lie.
>>25620733
A smart man would not post.
I am not a smart man.
I am butthurt.
But there is no reason.
Factually, NMM is a better ruler.but not as radiant as the sun's smile and bright as her eyes, but it's a matter of preference, day vs. night, red vs. blue and warm vs. cold. Just opinions we should all respect each other for.
>>25630527
The true worth of a ruler is always up for debate between one who is loved and one who is feared etc. A ruler that provides material needs, but has none of the personal proximity that most subjects expect of Celestia maybe?
>>25625036
I think this is an optimal size for cuddling.
Nightmare Moon's speech is painful to read.
>>25630547
From what I understand, you guys want to unlock or see the caring serenity of moonlight in the harsh unknown and misunderstood night, where as sunfags like me like the ease of connection and deal with the real feelings, because the sun and say shine light and comfort easily, yet the core of the sun is chaotic hell making itself look calm.
You look for the eye in a hurricane, while I try to tear down walls of isolation and calmness to sort out the storm trapped inside.
>>25630686
I think you missed my comparison. I was referring to the debate between people who say that NMM is just as effective a ruler as Celestia given what we saw in the recent episodes.
>>25629559
>Anyway, you should be getting ready for bed.
>It's gonna be a long day...
>You were removing the last piece of your armor from your hindquarters just as Luna returns to the bedchamber.
>"Ah, I see you are making yourself comfortable."
"Just uh, don't want to scratch your bed sheets, Luna."
>A short giggle was heard, until she gasps in realization.
>"I almost forgot."
>A blue warp emits from her horn and the entire room is shielded in an aura.
>Then it suddenly vanishes.
"What was that?"
>"A silence spell. Now no one can hear us from the outside."
"What for? ...And, why are you talking differently?"
>"*sigh* To be quite honest Silver, I only do the royal speech as a formality. Yet it does tend to become a bore after a while."
"I see..."
>You were trying to take off the last plating covering your back, but one of the connectors seemed to be jammed.
>The grunts and muffled curses seemed to grab the queen's attention.
>"Is it stuck?"
"*grunt* Yeah, I can't... seem-"
>A magical blue aura wraps around the stubborn latch and finally becomes free.
>You remove the back plate and set it aside.
"*phew* Thank you, Luna."
>She says nothing, instead she stares at your flank, directly at your cutie mark.
>"Silver, what is the meaning of your mark?"
>Your cutie mark was a silver five-pointed star covering a dark gray shield with two small wings appearing at the top.
"Oh, this? Well, from my great grandfather, the colts in my family all have been enrolled in some kind of police force. Our family slogan was 'Maintain Right.', and it always confused me until the day I got my cutie mark. "
>"Really? Fascinating. Please, join me."
>Luna motions her hoof to the bed, and you acknowledge by sitting on the edge.
>"What made you want to continue the tradition?"
"At first, I didn't. Being a cop didn't seem that interesting to me. Until one day, in my teens. I saw a robbery being committed. There was no time to alert the local authorities, so... I took actions into my own hooves."
>>25630893
MORE
>>25630599
Truth be told, any size is perfect forserving faithfully to your dying breath, may the Queen of the night and the stars bring peace upon those who pledge their hearts to her, and ruin upon those who stand against her.
>>25630686
Interesting way of looking at it.
>>25630779
I understood it at first, which made me mad, and diverted, which is terrible for conversation, and I apologize.
And yes, your point is very valid on how a great leader is different to everyone's views.
My misconception came from focusing on the descriptions of what each side look for in a waifu leader.
>>25630893
>A large smile spread across her lips as she envelops herself in your story.
"As I was pursuing the criminal, he kept outmaneuvering me around every dark alley of Manehattan. Jumping over dumpsters, making 90 degree turns, I was outmatched for him."
>"What did you do?"
"Well, I thought if I can't stay on his tail, I'd meet up with it."
>"...Explain?"
"I diverted from directly following him, made him think he lost me, and as he slowed down I caught up to him in a side alley. And them *wham!*"
>You clop your hooves together.
"Intercepted."
>"Amazing. That must have been very brave."
"It didn't, until I was praised by my family for doing such a valiant act."
>You look down at your flank.
"And for receiving something else..."
>"Oh! That's when your cutie mark appeared?"
"Mhmm. From that day forward I was enrolled at Manehattan Police Force, and was one of it's finest officers."
>"Such a noble tale, Silver. *yawn* But now I think it's time we rest, don't you?"
"Oh... r-right."
>Luna stands up from the edge of her bed and with a faint glow of her horn, her armor disappears.
"Wow."
>"Magical armor, more damage resistant and easier to wear."
>Her un-shielded figure was captivating...
>The wispy starred mane flowed freely aside her onyx coat.
>You stand by as she enters the bed first, then her large right wing lifts up the covers, inviting you in.
>You could feel your hooves tremble as you crawl up on the bed.
>Easy Silver, just... think of yourself as a Plover bird.
>Yeah, the bird that eats directly out of a crocodile's mouth.
>But don't worry, you're in no danger.
>The crocodile will not eat you, because it needs it's teeth cleaned.
>And the bird needs nutrition, since it's brave enough to peck clean a crocodile's maw.
>...Sometimes knowing random trivia did help calm you down.
>Thank you 10+ years of playing morning crossword puzzles.
>>25630893
>"I am not taking up too much space, am I?"
"No, you're fine."
>You say as you roll on your side away from her.
>"Well, good. I want to make sure you are as comfortable as I am."
"...T-Thank you?"
>Luna draws the covers over both of you.
>The satin material felt like heaven against your fur.
>What was more surprising was when she wraps her hoof and her wing around your chest.
>Her warmth was mind-numbingly blissful as she pulls you close to her chest.
>The length of her body was far superior to you, but you submit yourself to her cuddling.
>She seemed like a natural! Why did she really need somepony to cuddle with? You don't know.
>But that is a question for another day, your overactive brain needs to wind down.
>"Comfortable?"
"Uh-huh..."
>"Good!"
>She happily chirps as she wraps around you a little more.
>You wonder what a pony would offer just to be in your position.
>Serves your fellow guards right, they don't know what they're missing out on.
>You peeked your eyes open for a moment and see a waving sea of stars floating above you.
>With a relaxed sigh, you say:
"Good day, Luna."
>You feel her suddenly tense, then relax again.
>Then you feel her chin rest on top of your cranium.
>"Good day, Silver..."
---
tbc
>>25625803
damn, you found it out, darn snugglers trying to sneak into a cuddle thread, HERESY
>>25631532
noice
>>25623208
https://youtu.be/7mUTQKMRLYQ?t=328
>>25631532
Love it so far
Is lurkan
>>25631532
so cozy
I'd drink my queen's delicious moon milk
Did you guys hear about that restaurant Luna built on the moon? The food is excellent, but there's no atmosphere.
>>25633067
>>25633067
>You didn't mean any wrongdoing, you just compulsively lie.
Story of my life
>you will never have luna/nmm using her mane as a natural night light
why live
Good story so far
>>25630927
>Any size
>You will never serve a miniature horse-sized nightmare moon
>She will never stomp her hooves in a tantrum while ordering you around
Why live?
![solaire-of-astora-large[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/okvZ829.jpg "solaire-of-astora-large[1].jpg")
>What's this then ? I guess it's time to take out the trash.
>>25635364
>you will never have a miniature moon pone who likes to travel around in your shirt pocket
lunar bump
>>25636065
A little too small for me.
>>25637052
no smol is too smol
>>25637130
Too smol to give the dick is too smol.
>>25637188
>not wanting to fit as much of it as you can
>not wanting to watch her squirm in pleasure on you
>not wanting to bring her to an orgasm with her fully filled by you
>not wanting to feel her spasm and cling to you as she rides one out fully filled with your length
>>25637188
>not wanting to cover her entire tiny body with your jizz
>>25637188
>not wanting a moonhorse small enough to use your dick as a stripper pole
Small Moon horse is okay, but I'd rather have full size Moon horse.
>>25637654
What's the gun for?
>>25638095
It's an older pic, I was cleaning it at the time.
>>25638095
Probably home defense/concealed carry.
>>25638130
>home defense/concealed carry
HAHA, not in this country.
A crack legal team to defend me against falsely laid charges of improper storage and/or aggravated assault with a deadly weapon is the last thing I can afford right now.
>>25638124
>>25638150
Where are you, /k/ bro? And how many guns do you have?
>>25638170
Ontario, thankfully far enough away from the cesspool of AIDS and liberal faggotry known as Toronto
I own 3 and half funs. Got a Remshit 597, P226, an SKS, and a chinkshit AR lower that I'll get an upper for later.
>no pic of NMM with guns
back again, u rdy?
>>25638439
Continue.
>>25638439
I'm ready.
>>25631532
Loving it so far, a calming, cute, snuggle story.
>>25638206
Another leaf in the thread, eh?
I'm also in Ontariojust outside GTA #NotAllTorontonians
>>25620891
I would cuddle the shit out of that
>You wake up from a pleasant sleep with a small yawn.
>The lack of body heat next to you made you raise up from the bed.
>A very small bed...
>Wait, you're in your room.
>At your house?
>How did you get here-
>You notice a vanilla envelope sitting on your night stand with the name "Silver Shine" written on the front.
>Taking it you open it and pull out a letter.
>"Dear Silver Shine, I am glad you agreed to our arrangement last night. It was the most relaxing slumber I've had in the past few weeks. I am looking forward to seeing you at the end of your next shift."
>"Sincerely, Nightmare Moon, or Luna"
"Aw."
>"P.S. I'm sorry I had to teleport you home, but I imagine you and I would not want to be caught in the same bed together. At least, not yet..."
>..
"W-wha... Noooo...?"
>Geez, is it getting hot in here?
>Throwing off the covers, you find your suit of armor resting on it's mount next to your bed.
>You carefully assemble each piece onto your body.
>You still never could get quite used to the metal chilling you to the bone when you fist put it on.
>But you make haste and put your helmet on last, then head out the front door towards Nightmare Moon's castle.
>>25638757
>"P.S. I'm sorry I had to teleport you home, but I imagine you and I would not want to be caught in the same bed together. At least, not yet..."
>>25638757
>At least, not yet..
I like where this is going.
Best story in a while. Keep going.
>>25638757
>After checking in, you make your way down the vast hallways of her majesty's castle.
>Until you round the corner and see something that almost made your heart clench with fear.
>Nightmare Moon was talking with Ellie.
>Pleasepleaseplease don't be-
>You worry as you quickly trot towards them.
>"So he said-, hey Silver!"
"H-Hello Ellie, your highness."
>"Greetings guard Shine. Guard Ellie was just asking me about her... special assignment."
"Special what?"
>"The one which I only trust her, and thou alone."
"Oh. And what -was- she asking, your highness?"
>The alicorn's eyes squint, as if she had figured out your tall-tale, courtesy of the brown bat pony.
>"Only of how long this assignment may last, to which I answered that I am uncertain."
"...Huh?"
>"I only asketh the both of thee to keepeth this with utmost secrecy. Otherwise, guard Ellie, thou art dismissed for the night. "
>"Thank you, your majesty. Seeya later Silver!"
>Ellie flaps her wings and takes off though one of the many exits near the roof of the castle halls designed for pegasai and bats.
"Uh, Luna-"
>"Shh! Don't speaketh that name hither!"
"Oh! Sorry."
>"No matter, I trust thee hadst a valorous day's rest?"
"Uh y-yes, I did."
>"Splendid. If 't be true nothing else needeth be discussed, valorous night, guard Shine."
>Nightmare Moon makes her way down the hall, leaving you behind.
"Wait, your highness?"
>She pauses and turns her neck to see you.
"...Um, V-Valorous night to you too."
>She grins a small smile, then gives you a quick wink.
>>25625793
>implying she can't be both
>>25639214
WHERE IS THE GREEN
>>25619254
>>You are Silver Shine.
Stopped reading there
>>25639673
at least it's not another shitty AiE story
and shouldn't you be your general thread anyway?
>>25639703
>ranking OCs above self-inserts
>both not equally ranked in the shittiest of shit tiers
Found the autist.
>>25639836
>being this far up your own ass
I too have found the autist. Ain't that a hell of a thing?
>>25630893
>>25631368
>Your cutie mark was a silver five-pointed star covering a dark gray shield with two small wings appearing at the top.
>'Maintain Right.'
>"Intercepted."
>Manehattan Police Force
holy fucking shit storm
>>25639864
The legitimate irony of this response is fucking gold. Thanks for the giggle, m8.
bumpo
>>25639971
Not seeing any irony here.
>>25624928
>remember lewds?
>"lewds, man! fuckin lewwwds!"
>>25639673
>Stopped reading there
Identified yourself as faggot right there.
>>25619254
This is nice. But I would advise you to work on two points:
Your grasp of the old english pattern of speaking is rough to read, and at times, comical. It's trying too hard. Ease up on it. Better yet, you may wish to drop it since she doesn't talk like that in the show. At all.
Don't use the script-like format of including the character's initials prior to all of their speech. The readers can guess who's talking, provided you give us enough queues as to who actually is. Especially in the greentext format, where the reader's character is un-greened, a one-on-one conversation is very easy to follow without the NNM: silliness.
Keep going, though. Loving it, baby. Loving it.
>>25640375
>doesn't see the irony of telling someone else they have their head up their ass while simultaneously spouting elitist bullshit
Sure thing, friend.
>>25641233
Thank you, the 'initial' issue has already been addressed here >>25626854
As for ye olde english, the idea of this is based on the AU in the finale where NMM has taken over, and she even explains it here >>25630893 "I only do the royal speech as a formality. Yet it does tend to become a bore after a while."
As for moar green, I'm working on it. Along with a little something else...
Something mostautistic
>>25639876
Was hoping I wasn't the only one witnessing this.
>>25639876
>>25641509shit, my ruse has been exposed
>>25639214
>You had been cursing yourself for a few hours.
>Why didn't you ask her about the letter?
>You knew why... right?
>Was Nightmare Moon, the most powerful being in Equestria, -interested in you-?
>But it was only one night, and there was no sexual implication.
>Or, was she on a more romantic level?
>You ponder on for a while until a passing guard grabs your attention.
>"Hey, Silver."
"Huh?"
>"You're being summoned to the throne room. Don't know why, but it sounds important."
"Oh, thanks. I'll be on my way I guess."
>The tall doors to the throne room swing open as the guards allow you inside.
>Pillar upon pillar is adorned with dark drapery adorned with studded gems for stars.
>One white unicorn was tending to one of them, you managed to hear a muffled "Confounded old things!" as you passed by.
>You approach the queen sitting upon her throne, you also see the guard captain by her side.
>You kneel and bow your head to her.
"Your highness."
>"Rise, guard Shine."
>You do so, and remove your helmet."
"You had me summoned?"
>"Indeed. I has't been discussing the request thou hadst madeth to thy commanding officer."
>"Quite so, and I believe we have come to an agreeable term."
>"We cannot grant thee position as a night guard."
>You ears fall a little...
>"Instead, we art promoting thee as mine own personal bodyguard."
>A quick rattle of your armor showed your shock.
"Uh, I-I um... I'm... honored, your highness."
>Better not screw up now, just go along with the act, Silver.
>Moon lets out a small chuckle.
>"I kneweth thou would beest."
---
tbc
Anyway, here's thatautisticthing I was working on before sleep.May god have mercy on your souls
>>25641706
While the use of Pony Creator is indeed autistic, this simple illustration provides a better mental image for me to visualize the protagonist.
>>25641706
I can taste the spaghetti through my computer
Captcha: pasta
>>25641741
>>25641818
If only I could draw, sadly these hands were made for writing instead.
>>25641894
S'okay, f.a.m. I know that feel.
>>25641706
I'd imagine him with a short mohawk, like the one Dash had in the finale, but that is fine too.
>>25641706
good LORD
night bump
>>25641706
Needs more red and black.
Really enjoying this story. Please continue!
Moony has the greatest buns
>>25641692
I like where this is going.It's cute so far.
bamp
>>25644308
This is why we have nice things. Because of people like you, OP
This is a nice thing
>>25643336
Wouldn't ya like to put the marshmallow filling in that moon pie?
Are you doing more? Also ill just picture Butterscotch with a grey colors
>>25643336
https://derpiboo.ru/1032687
>>25644730
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zkrNlgqzNIA&feature=youtu.be&t=32
Moar?
OP probably won't be posting until this evening (U.S. time).
Great stuff though! More please!
This story is pretty good, can't wait to read more! Keep it up!
Uunf, suspense for sexual, growing just like my boner
WOAH NOW PAGE TEN
WRITEFAG STOP SUCKING DICKS AND COME BACK
>>25637431
That's a pretty fat stripper pole
>>25647105
I have this thing called a "job", and I gotta do it or else no internets thus no story
so stop whining
>>25643389
I was bored
Never cared for Nightmare moon before. But now she's starting to grow on me.
>>25637431
You and me, we're the only ones around who arn't complete fools.
>>25648121
>deletes his comment
>doesn't fix the arn't when he reposts
Ya blew it
>>25648539
Check your native English speaking privilegeI'll look like an ass if English ins't your mother language. But i'm willing to take my chances.
>>25648791
>ins't
well shit.
get hype
I'm hype
>>25641692
>"Just remember, being the queen's personal guard is a high distinction. So don't go and blunder it your first night."
"Yes sir, you can count on me."
>"Well, get to it then."
>The captain leaves Nightmare Moon and pats you on the back on his way out.
>"And don't worry about your old position, we're finding a replacement."
"Oh... Thank you, sir."
>Looking back to the queen, she had the most pleased look on her face.
>And by pleased, you mean proudly smug.
>Oh well, nothing you could do about it...
>You walk up to her throne and stand next to her.
>"Grand, isn't it?"
"...What is?"
>"This kingdom. -Mine- kingdom. I has't all the power of Equestria in mine hoof and can useth it in any way I please."
"And you chose to appoint me as your body guard?"
>She cackles, but not in an evil tone...
>"Thou seemeth disappointed? I'd bethought thou would beest excit'd! "
"Well, I'm just surprised. To be honest, your highness."
>"Hmm, thou has't quite the unusual way of showing gratification. But don't fret, thee wilt beest accustom to this eventually."
"Aren't I just a normal guard?"
>"No, bodyguard Shine. Thy responsibility is to beest in mine presence at all times. No matter whither I wend, no matter what I doth. For security and safety."
"Oh. I understand."
>"Excellent. For now, at ease."
"Yes, your highness."
>You don your helmet and take your spear in one hoof
>Looking around the throne room, observing the vast walls and draperies.
>You could get used to this...
>>25648934
god damn trip
MMMMMMMM THIS IS SO GOOD
>>25648934
>The night goes by fairly quick.
>A few ponies came into the throne room for hearings with the queen, some were approved, some disapproved, yada yada.
>But during the moments of quiet, Moon had some interesting conversations with you.
>You both asked each other about yourselves, telling intriguing stories, anything to pass the time.
>You learned quite a bit about how she feels about being the ultimate power of the land.
>She learned how... belittling you made yourself sound, which she tried her best to dissuade you while trying to remain authoritative.
>All for the act of course...
>As the night ended, you followed Moon back to her chamber, not leaving her side.
>"Thou has't done well for thy first night, bodyguard Shine."
"Thank you, your highness."
>"I am curious to how you will behave this day."
"...Why?"
>A devilish grin forms on her cheeks, along with a small chuckle.
---
got to go for now, I'll be back later
>>25649967
WHERE MUH GREEN NIGGUH
IS DIS IT
IS DIS ALL DA GREEN YOU GOT FO ME
>>25649974
Mr. Dindu, please calm down.
An urgent matter has come to my attention and I must attend to it immediately.
I will return at a later time tonight, most likely an hour, and deliver you some more greentext.
bopp
>>25648934
>thee wilt beest accustom to this
jesus christ
>>25649967
>Outside Moon's room, you see Ellie talking to a guard with a slightly-lighter-shade-of-brown than her coat.
>He was a pegasus, had a large arrow for a cutie mark, and he was showing her some kind of device on his right forehoof.
"You must be the new night guard?"
>"Hm? Oh, I am. Bronze Arrow, nice to meet ya."
>He says in a grizzly voice.
>"Hey Bronze, show Silver your crossbow!"
"...What's a crossbow?"
>"Oh this? Just a little new invention straight from Fillydelphia."
>He shows you and the queen how quickly he could load a miniature arrow into the slot and prime the weapon.
>"More efficient than your standard bow, easier to use too."
>"Very impressive, guard Arrow. Peradventure I should armeth mine own army with these 'crossbows'."
>"Sorry my queen, but this was made custom for me. And the pony who made it said it was only one of his better prototypes."
>"Hmm, another time then. For now, I groweth weary. Cometh, guard Shine."
>Moon opens the chamber door and you follow suit after saying goodbye to Ellie and Bronze.
>>25650780
oh wow, thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix it in the pastebin
Any more NMM greens to pass the time?
>>25650961
>After one silence spell, you start taking off your armor.
"One heck of a day, huh Luna?"
>"Hm? Oh! Oh, yes of course. *yaaawn* I am dreadfully tired."
"...Oookay?"
>Luna clears her throat and performs the spell that removes her armor.
>You were beginning to take off your shin guards when you notice how she was watching you.
>Her narrowed pupils stared at you with anticipation.
>You decide to ignore her and keep taking off your own protec-
>*poof!*
"What the?!"
>All of your armor disappeared from your body!
>...And now every piece was sitting nicely near your side of the bed.
>"Sorry, I-I'd really just like to get to bed."
"Are... you feeling alright?"
>"Certainly! Why do you ask?"
>You stare at her for a moment, then get under the covers.
>Luna giddily hops into bed and spreads out.
>"Come on Silver~"
>That sound a little off to you...
>But your conscience was more concerned about getting some sleep, so you start to roll over.
>"Wait."
"*sigh* What?"
>You strain your neck to look back at her.
>"Can you, erm, face towards me?"
>She asks you with a red glow on her cheeks.
"Um, o-okay."
>Rolling back to your other side, you come face to face with the night queen.
>Despite her dominating figure, she did, in her own way, look beautiful...
>You wanted to say something, but all you could muster was:
"Good day."
>Then Luna did something completely unexpected.
>She kisses your forehead.
>"Good day~"
>While you were dazed, she pulls you into the crook of her neck and nuzzles down on your head.
>She might have gone off to sleep quickly, but you were still wondering what the Tartarus just happened.
>>25639703
>He hates OCs, so he must belong to AiE!
Or OCs are just shit. Is that too hard for you to comprehend?
How romantic might this story be?
>>25651327
It'll devolve into freaky, kinky hoof holding, no doubt
>>25651165
This pleases me greatly.
Continue at your leisure.
>>25624900
UUUU.
>>25651646
>>25651767
>767
I'm crashing your plane. With no survivors!
>>25651166
Technically Anon is an OC
Sorry I'm gonna have to cut off here.
I shall return
>>25652396
Will bump till you come back. Good stuff though
Farewell, writefag. I remain here, and await thee.
Thanks for the update Storm. Good story so far!
>>25652396
dammit storm we'd better get some groping action at least in the next part
>>25652396
God damit I expected cringe tier story, now I'm interested!
bumpin
B-unf
Cheat on emo-luna with that cute bat outside.
Bat ponies are sexy!
>>25654103
>Being disloyal to Moon Queen
You disgust me.
>>25651165
hrng
>>25654103
In the dungeon you go.
>>25651165
Cute
>cuddles
>facing each other
>she kiss
kiss back
make out, french kiss
wrap legs arround hips
relationship confirmed and exposed
Lennyface.(s)tiff
Rockhard.jpg
Bumperino
^
>while OP is away
>>25656986
Nice.
Babump
pmuB
Bump for our only true princess
PG 9
>>25654103
Talk about bat-shit crazy!
Gonna be a while before I post the next part after this, but I'll be back
>>25651165
>Until an idea popped into your brain.
>A rather... daring one to test these waters.
>You extend your hoof around Luna and embrace her.
>A happy little sigh confirms your theory as she wraps her wing behind your back and hugs you tighter.
>Any more so and you would be smothered, but she left just enough room for you to breathe.
>You could smell a light scent of Casablanca Lillies, maybe she used some perfume beforehand.
>The heat from her body was so soothing, a rhythmic heartbeat thumps from her chest.
>An unexplained urge washes ove ryou, and you give in.
>Luna lightly gasps as you clutch onto her, nestling your head gently against her neck.
>She exhales again and softly rubs your back.
>Good gods did this feels incredible...
>In what way were you worthy enough for this?
>You don't care, you were enjoying it, and so was she.
>As your own body began to relax, you look up one last time at her flowing astral mane.
>Before drifting off to sleep...
~~~
"Hey Ember, what's a six letter word for 'hazy'?"
>"Uh, 'opaque'?"
"O-p-a-q... yeah, that's it. Thanks."
>"Sure."
>You took another sip of your coffee as you filled in the blank spaces on your crossword.
"Slow day, huh?"
>"Yep, but it's better than chasing down criminals."
"Look, I know you're a rook. I get it. But you need to understand that-"
>*Crrsh* "All officers report in. This is MPF command with an urgent message. Code Black, I repeat, Code Black!"
>Your radios echoed the same message, and you both look at each other in horror.
>"This is not a drill, all officers are needed! Code Bla-"*Fzzzzz*
"What the buck?"
>Then, a defaning tone started wailing outside.
>A warning siren only used during bad storms.
>But it wasn't raining...
>You and your partner rush outside of the diner you where you were having breakfast, and both of your mouths drop open.
>The very blue sky that welcomed each day was overcome by darkness.
>Citizens along the sidewalks were panicking and screaming.
>A loud, evil guffaw rang out.
HE RETURNS
>>25659636
IT IS TIME
requesting a gentle, loving hoofjob from Queen Moon while in bed and spooning
>>25641390
>implying I was the same anon talking to you and I didn't just pop in to put you in your place
>>25659530
>The next several images seemed to change every time you blinked.
>Night-troopers invading Manehattan.
>Riots, hysteria, destruction...
>The last time you saw your partner and best friend, Ember Spark, alive...
~~~
>Your eyes pop open while you shudder.
>You're still in Luna's embrace, but now her face is at your level.
>It seemed like you were moved upwards, or perhaps trying to get away...
>The thought of being this close, this intimate, with a creature so -evil- as her.
>But, that was years ago.
>And as strange as it sounded, you knew she had changed.
>You roll onto your back and stare up at her flowing mane.
>Your eyes tried to follow every floating sparkle as they danced along her hair.
>Suddenly you feel a shift in the bed as Luna looks up at you.
>"Mmh, Silver?"
>You don't respond, you just look into her eyes.
>They didn't seem as threatening as usual, concerned almost.
>"Are you alright?"
"*sigh* Yeah."
>"You didn't seem to be."
"...You were watching my dream, weren't you?"
>"...Yes, I was."
>You groan, and roll away from her.
>"Silver-"
"Luna, I just-. I don't want to talk about it."
>"Silver I had no idea what happened to you when I took power."
"Yeah. Let's just drop this, please."
>You felt a warmth growing on your chin, then notice a blue glow around it.
>It gently pulls you back around and face Luna.
>"I am... sorry."
>>25660452
Go on dammit. I love these moments
>>25660452
I was not ready for these feels
>>25660452
Further proof emo-luna doesn't deserve him. Sneak outside and rut the little bat guarding the door!
>>25660269
>still this assmad so long after the fact
>>25630893
>Five pointed star
>Shield
>Wings
>>25660452
God fucking dammit
>>25660452
>You now had to sit up in your bed in disbelief.
>"I am sorry... for your loss."
>Dear gods, Nightmare Moon has sympathy?
>Now your feelings were conflicting, but you say one thing that equally surprised her.
"I forgive you."
>Her expression was absolutely stunned, she wasn't even able to reply.
>With words at least.
>Thank goodness for her silence spell, otherwise her whole castle would have been woken up by the painful cry of her sadness.
>"I DID NOT WANT THIS, I NEVER ASKED FOR THIS!"
"Luna, LUNA!"
>Through her sobs, she pulls you back down and lays her head down on top of your chest.
>"ALL THOSE YEARS... ALONE! IT WAS NOT FAIR!"
"...You mean your banishment?"
>"GODS DAMN MY SISTER! I HOPE SHE ROTS IN TARTARUS!"
"LUNA."
>You had enough of this, you pick up her face with your hoof and look straight in her eyes.
>You're starting to tear up now.
*It's okay, it's okay...*
>Was all you managed to whisper as you pet her head.
>"*sniff* H-How can you f-forgive a monster?"
"...It wasn't your fault."
>Luna didn't move, but you could tell her expression was confused.
"*sigh*, she was crushed under some falling rubble."
>"That I caused?"
"...It was painless."
>"For her, but not you?"
"Luna."
>...
>"I-I'm sorry, was that too much?"
"No, it's okay. I -forgive- you."
>"But... why?"
>She asks with a strain in her voice, almost as if she's lost it.
"Sometimes when an old wound opens, the best cure is to rub salt in it."
>"...What?"
"You need to grieve, even when it happened a long time ago."
>"Then why don't you? If you're cure is to cry on old wounds-"
"I don't need to."
>She looks up to you, visibly bewildered.
"You're more than enough."
>Better go all in at this point, right?
>You lean forward, and kiss her.
---
tbc
>>25662358
>leaving us there
Good stuff though
Bumping for more high quality feels
STOP WITH THE FEELS
>>25662358
Don't kiss that murdering bitch. Rut the bat-guard outside!
>>25654103
>>25661130
>>25662917
treasonous batfag please go
> Be a cute bat guard outside
> Hear a strange sound from queen chambers
> rushing inside
> see your friend has been gobbled by queen
What to do, batchan?
>>25662358
Muh feels ;_;
>Make her free celestia
>dissapear with NM
>Then have make up sex for all eternity.
I am positive this is the best course of action
>>25663566
Nmm says "i hope she rots in tartarus"
im pretty sure that means she's dead senpai
>>25663590
I assume that the universe this fic plays out in is the one we saw in the season finale. There she was merely banished to the moon.
Plus, tartarus is a physical place.
So my guess is that she's alive.
Storm, pls confirm.
>>25663116
hey shiny, buddy, how's it hangin man? i got you a mango
Bump
Bumpmare moon
>>25664186
She's not in the moon, nor dead.
She's imprisoned in Tartarus.
>>25667029
Right now she is Tirek's and Cerberus' bitch
bump bc nmm is my goddess
>>25667345
Celestia x Tirek x Cerberus rapefic when?
Bump bump suger rump.
bumper dumper
Nightmare Moon is a pretty lady.
>>25662358
I think I know where this is going...
>>25669976
I expect pic related
>>25669976
>>25670184
The thing I love most about BfED is thatit takes place during S2.
4:20 bump it
Friendos I'm sorry but I've been dragged out two hours away from home to afuneral of a relative I barely knowand I'll be late getting home.
