>Great. Another general. What is it?
You better believe it's another fuckin general.
This thread consists of everyone's favorite human Anon, the only problem is that he's now a cute, green little filly.
>What should I expect?
Fillies, shenanigans, and usually a bitchy Twilight.
>Pictures? Pastebins?
Find them here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a4t08j9QfWYnKlivtEHxvvuxHddJy29JOPXuJeQijMY/
>I'm a writer!
Awesome! Just be sure to link your pastebin to the OP for Fauvra to add!
Old Mare Anon: >>25445214
>>25549842
>Still usin' the OP layout I left
Now I feel kinda bad for not writing, here...
>>25549875
>Now I feel kinda bad for not writing, here...
Is that a 'feel bad for not writing, here...' As in here you go have some writing I am currently doing at this very second?
Or just a, 'feel bad for not writing here...' with a mistaken comma thrown in and you just feel bad for not writing.
>>25549918
Option number two! It's hard to fucking see 4K things on a 15 inch screen, sometimes.
4th for filly not for sexual
>>25550065
Them 5th for best ship
>>25550099
Fucking....checked..holy shit
>>25550099
trip-dub-dubs confirm FillyAnon x ColtAnon for best ship.
>>25550099
I've been away. What's with the big one that looks like a guy?
I think pic related inspired a whole bunch of ColtAnon stuff.
>>25550295
its filly anon and colt anon. the new hot ship in this thread.
>>25550382
Is there a green for it?
>>25550417
ongoing. the writefag just posted a pastebin in the old thread, due to it reaching bump limit. http://pastebin.com/S24aZYPB
>>25550417
Someone started one right at the end of the last thread.
>>25550431
Sweeeeeet. Many thanks.
Well guys gonna write right now be back soon
>inb4 more delays
>>25550431
Fuck me that's actually really good. Looking forward to reading more.
>>25550699
Dubs confirm its best anon colt story
>>25550708
Isn't homunculAnon a colt most times? I'd say those stories are a bit better than mine.
>>25550875
In one of them he did, but I think he got turned into a filly in most of them.
>>25550099
>>25551748
>Not posting best version.
>>25551856
But I did.
bump
>>25551748
>>25550310
It's me. The faggot responsible for these abominations . What would his homonculus ability be? I'm thinking alchemy, also which versions of sloth and pride do you guys prefer?
Muscle or water?
Shadow shit kid or eyepatch mc stabby?
>>25551748
>>25552038
Good fillies sleep with their hooves above the blanket.
>>25550099
Best indeedenjoy your thanksgiving, don't drink and drive.
>>25552747
And i can't fucking spell
>>25552053
eyepatch mc stabby
>>25552844
Stabby stab?
>>25552053
Eyepatch McStabby please, Brotherhood was the shit.
>>25552960
Noble guards pony type I'm thinking. K that's pride done, what about sloth?
>>25552747
>>25552751
I'll forgive your typos because this is cute.THIS time...
>>25552986
Frankly, Sloth didn't get enough screen time for me to get attached to the Brotherhood incarnation and I never got that far in the other series, so I have no opinion. Wasn't Sloththe homunculus that resulted from the failed resurrection of Trisha?I guess you could do some byplay between her and Lust over what they've been teaching Homunculus Anon,
But Sloth, Lust said that this is how I should greet girls.
>"I know honey, but Lust is a whore."
>>25553005
Yes. Yes. I Like that. More cute mares for you
>>25552053
His homonculus ability could be to turn any sandwich into a bacon ham and cheese sandwich.
>>25553047
thats too much power for one man.
Yay! Nyx ship is dead
Guys I've made a terrible mistake...
um what color would best go with anon fillies coat? y'know that isnt green.
>>25553467
Black, grey, red if you want a Christmas feel, ????
>>25553529
red sounds good. yup.
>>25553529
Black like Nyx?
>>25554385
>"Get him Sis!"
>>25554398
>"SHUT UP!"
>"YOU'RE NEXT"
>>25552747
>that card
no brakes on the shipping train
im thinking of giving filly anon a different color pallete to colt anon. perhaps a lighter shade for her?
>>25554929
Maybe give her amber eyes too?
>>25554944
all in agreement with amber eyes say EYE
>>25554964
>>25554944
pick a coat color and an eye color.
>>25555124
E1 C1.
Lets make Lyra confused and think she somehow had a filly who thinks shes human.
>>25555155
oh god you were so close.mane streaks?
>>25555155
Holy shit son, I agree with those dangerous fives
But just one detail:LYRA IS NOT REAL
>>25555278
nice
>>25555278
Now I want to see Spike, Nyx and Anonfilly having a free for all with each other.Then Twilight comes in pissed as fuck.
>>25555384
and then they beat up twilight?
>>25555384
>>25555400
Still waiting on an update for that one story with Celestia babysitting Anon.
Do you think Anonfilly would abuse his newfound adorableness to get some celestia and luna booty, or at least be able to go through their panty drawers with little consequence? I am assuming they would be unaware who anonfilly really is.
i made it for you sweet thread
>>25555714
are those butt freckles?
>>25555732
yes.
>>25555739
butt why?
>>25555754
because i like freckles carlos
>>25555739awesome
>>25555714
Thats pretty cute I gotta say.
>>25555714
>those freckles
I'm about to leave for the family dinner, don't do this to me right now.
>>25555732
>>25555739
thanks kinda hawt
>>25555714
Fucking love you.
>>25555781
gimme kiss
>>25555797
my next master piece (as if) shall be more on that homonculus pic
Happy thanksgiving guys, here have some green.
>Well here goes nothing.
"Luna I gotta ask you something."
>Luna:"Yes what is it nonnymous?"
"..why did you say that earlier?"
>Luna looks confused.
>Luna:"Nonnymous, what do you mean?"
"Well earlier..when we left the other room you said.."
>Luna:"Nonnymous, could you refresh my memory?"
>Fuck this is bad, your not sure if you should or not
>Kinda don't have much of a choice though.
"Well you said…um.."
"..…(Fucking bitch)."
>Luna:"Could you repeat? I did not catch that."
>Of course she didn't hear you, lets try again.
>You raise your voice a little louder this time
"…(fucking..bitch).."
>Luna:"You gotta speak up nonnymous."
>Your about to blow up on this cunt..
>I swear to fucking god if she doesn't get It this time, you raise your voice even more this time.
"You said…fucking bitch."
>…
>Luna:"Nonnymous please s-."
"FUCKING BITCH I SAID FUCKING BITCH OPEN YOUR DAMN EARS!!"
>Luna looks absolutely mortified at you.
>Before you could react Luna's magic is now engulfing you.
>Your lifted up into the air and your flank spun around towards Luna.
>You try to move but Luna's magic makes that impossible.
>In the corner of your eye you can see a paddle being levitated towards your rear.
>Fuck.
"*Smack*ow stop*smack*luna please*smack*."
>Luna ignored your cry for mercy.
>This goes on for atleast 5 minutes.
>Pretty sure you lost all feeling in your flank.
>Luna:"Now..Are you EVER going to use that language again?!"
"No Luna no I won't please just stop!"
>Luna:"Alright but if I ever hear that language again from you I won't be as gentle next time."
>Wait what?
>She's the one you heard it from and she's telling YOU to not use that language.
>>25556016
Why does everyone have a spanking fetish? And why is everyone so bloody mean to her?
Nyx and Anonfilly in aSTEEL CAGE CHUTES AND LADDERS MATCH AT WWE SUPERSLAM!
>>25556664
Didn't you hear? AnonFilly is for bully.
What happens when you boop an AnonFilly?
>>25557146
The curse is passed along to the one who does the booping. He who boops the filly, becomes the filly.
Anon steals twilight's clothes
>>25557929
stealing isn't nice though
>>25552747
>I Choo Choo Choose You
Pic related
Also, first time I read that, I read "I Ching Chong Choose you". Can someone do that?
>>25552747
>I choo choo choose you
>>25558021
Now i picture Fillyanon becoming a juicy girl
>Fillyanon hits puberty, becomes an absolute bombshell and has no idea how to handle the reactions she gets.
>>25559253
I like this idea I vote for it
>>25555278
>>25552500
>>25552038
>>25551748
>>25555124
>>25554385
>>25552747
>>25556016
>>25555714
>All this content when I get backAlso I hate Black Friday
>>25559253
This
>>25556016Secretly hoping for some kinky Luna x filly Anon secks
>>25559684
>you are anon filly
>sleeping in your filly bed dreaming filly dreams when princess luna bursts through your window
>shards of glass go everywhere and a few land in your filly eyes as the princess looms over your filly bed
>she unsheaths her monster 3 foot dick and presents it to your blood stained filly face and demands you suck it
>she used the royal canterlot voice, so your filly ears explode and everything goes quiet in addition to being completely black since there are shards of glass in your filly eyeballs
>you start to scream but as soon a you open your filly mouth the princess shoves her dick in
>it doesn't quite fit so it rips out all of your filly teeth on the way in and shoves them down filly your throat in front of her royal cock
>she fucks your filly throat hard and long, for maybe an hour before she blows her princessly load right into your little filly stomach
>little filly stomachs weren't made to hold princessly loads, and yours bursts from the pressure and floods your filly insides with glue like princess spunk
>your filly heart gets filled with royal dick juice and can't beat hard enough to get it out and you die>then princess luna uses her magic to heal you completely and gives you a sweet little filly hug>she's been in your filly dreams and knows all your deepest filly fetishes
>'Same time tomorrow, nonny?'
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
debating whether or not I should hit post or if typing this up was worth it or if this actually contributes to the thread in any positive way
>>25560325
>>25560325
10/10 I came buckets
>>25559648
>butt freckles
yessssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Anonyx is cute.
definitively
>>25553425
>having a FT Hyper Beast
>not even a MW
wew lad
![kamina[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/CSFbIef.jpg "kamina[1].jpg")
this or...
![simon[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/RaGMWbi.jpg "simon[1].jpg")
>>25562497
this but with anon and twilight
>>25562268
Doesn't matter now its gone, its alright though I've made the value back already
>>25562497
>Anonfilly and Nyx
>>25559253
Aite I'm feeling this one, gonna write dat sheet
>>25563418
A little later ^:)
>>25563418
>>25563438
I'm hyp
>>25563773
Don't hype just yet, I'm incredibly shit at writing.Not that shit to not notice M.Kitten's FUCKING WOULD OF
IT'S WOULD FUCKING HAVE DUDE
>>25562639
>not betting your ST Karambit Doppler Black Pearl FN
>wew lad
Bump with a shitty Anon
>>25564341
Keep practicing, even over the past couple weeks I've seen improvement in my own doodles, become a drawfag.
>>25564353
I'm actually a writefriend, just found my old tablet and had nothing else on my computer other than ms paint.
>>25564502
So am I, though I want to keep both my writefag and drawfag names separate, which is why I'm posting anonymously now.
>>25564619
Eh, forgot to take the trip off from other thread, just rollin' with it
i should have done more on the other but i got distracted.
>>25564814
sorry for anyone bits, messy lines i fucked up.
Bemp
>>25563806
What's your problem, pal?
>>25565507
Really bugs me. Is writing "would of/could of" a habit at this point? The story's great so far
>>25565529
Make this simplier bit high to understand what u mean
>>25565553
Writing "would of/could of" is just wrong, even though it sounds alright. It should be "would have/could have"
>>25565584
Ohhh okay well ty for correcting me, first time write fag and need all the feedback possible so thanks
>>25565601
Uh, to be honest, your entire green could use some proofreading, but you're doing great for your first timealso "your/you're", this one and the previous are two of the biggest constant mistakes that make whole story hard to read
>Anon filly/colt develops a shell.
>detaching herself emotionally from all the other pones
>twilight has to go do a thing
>decides to bring anon with her to try and connect with her 'child' more
>>25565894
>anon develops a shell
he's preparing for the fight with rarity
>>25565894
"Come on Anon, we're going on a grand adventure!"
>"Sure, whatever."
"There will be Griffons, and Dragons, and Ice cream..."
>"Okay."
"Is there anything you want to bring?"
>"Can I bring someone else to go for me?"
>>25565894
Nyx can get into her shell.
What should I read first in the google doc?
I just found this.
>>25566377
Whichever one takes your interest. Personally, I was enjoying ThatGuyM8's story, but I'm so far behind. Last part I read was when AJ talked to Spike.
Dayum
>>25567004
>"You're not Nyx!"
>>25567004
"How many times do I have to say that I'm not gay!?"
>>25568253
>"I didn't say you where. I just told you come out of the closet."
>>25567004
"God dammit, Sweetie Belle, there's nothing here! Nothing but comically large pink bows!"
>>25568253
>Nice...
Oh, I'll make her want it... That filly is gonna be so used up by the end of the day...5 neckbeardsbecause that's all /mlp/ could ever muster to meet anywhere at any one timeall take turns having their way with anon filly in both holes. 3 1/2 minutes later they are all passed out on the floor and anonfilly is left severely disappointed and enraged. Commence revenge.
>>25567004
Was this a recolor from an episode?
Looks cute overall
>>25565894
>Twilight's abuse had only lasted a few months, but it had been enough.
>Everypony's constant refusal to refuse to acknowledge Anonymous the human, and their insistence to treat him as Nonny the filly only made things worse.
>As days turned into weeks, and weeks into months, all that Anonymous had left was his stubborn refusal to give in and let Twilight win.
>This manifested itself as an emotional shell from which he could find escape.
>If he simply refused to acknowledge anything around him, then it would be like the abuse never happened, right?
>You know the expression "the lights are on but nobody's home"?
>The lights are on, Anonymous is home, but he's hiding in the basement until his guests go away.
>Twilight would never have the satisfaction of being proven right; of having her reasons for breaking Anonymous justified.
>Anonymous's abuse only lasted a few months because Ms Cheerilee noticed his strange behaviour in class.
>She sent a desperate letter to the Princesses, begging to help an abused filly.
>Two days later, both Princesses arrived with twenty guards and three psychiatrists.
>Turns out that even as an holder of an Element of Harmony, you're not above the law.
>Especially in cases of foal abuse.
>When the evidence came to light, the residents of Ponyville had reacted violently.
>The Golden Oaks Library had been burnt to ash within three hours of Celestia's announcement.
>Some suspicion and anger was directed at the other Bearers of Harmony, but nothing ever came of it.
>Pinkie Pie took it the hardest. She had spent the most time with "Nonners"; she felt responsible because she hadn't seen the signs of abuse.
>>25568896
are you implying any horsefucker would acutally not be intimidated enough to acutally do something?
>>25569321
Yes
>>25569431
Hah, probably right. Well, even assuming she asked nicely, even begged, the result would be about the same. That is if they were to actually do as they were asked instead of just drop their spaghetti.
>>25569303
Yeah, it's scoots
Can someone post the cutest filly anon pictures that you have please?
>>25570595
>>25570595
>>25550099
>>25552747
Starlight Glimmer's time stream fuck up spectacular soon, this thread likely won't survive whatever shitstorm occurs so say your goodbyes now
>>25571743
>"little green foal who are you?"
"Twilight there isn't much tine!"
"My name is anon and I'm from the future"
"In order to save the world, you must ss with me"
>>25571743
oh well it was fun while it lasted.
I havent watched any mlp stuff in a few weeks and I will probably just say goodbye to any MLP sites for a while, until I watch everything. maybe I will look this thread up then.
I got a lot of fun and good green out of it, thank you drawfags and writefags.
ive been thinking.>>25571949
i might make like either a mini-cyoa or just do some comic panels based on the homonculus anon ideas.
>>25572115
You should
>>25571346
I wonder if it's possible to convince him to do nyx and anonfilly.
>>25573010
>not AnonFilly and AnonColt
>>25573106
>Not all three
And Spike is there too.
want to do a cute. ideas?
maybe, like spike, nyx and all the anons together
>>25573570
Hold the gun, perhaps watch the finale and see if you or us can get any ideas from that.
>>25573617
ah right. yeah good idea.
Did the homunculus fillyanon story ever go anywhere?
>>25574006
nope.
>>25574093
Probably for the best, it was getting kind of rapey
>>25574153
eh? how so.
>>25574168
iirc there was something about twilight doing an experiment on anonfilly, aka testing out her new orifice with ambiguous consent and a giant cock.don't worry though, it was just a dream!
What is homunculus?
>>25574396
in context of the word being used here, a homonculus is an artificially created sapient being made with alchemy.
page 9 save
Well, now that the Hiatus is on, I guess traffic might be slowing down a bit. If the threads die, I'll make a new one and if they start 404ing before bump limits, I'll try to make a thread each month to see if there's still any interest.
But as always, the ride never ends.
What is with this equal sign bullshit?
>>25579204
Happening.
That's what
>>25579204
>Board dedicated to a show
>doesn't watch the show
fan of the fandom pls go
>>25579204
>being a fan of the fandom
>ever
Absolutely Disgusting.
>>25579262
>>25579284
>>25579463
Sorry, guess i have a little catching up to do on the show, if i remember right the breezie episode was next on my watch list.
>Fillyanon hits puberty, becomes an absolute bombshell and has no idea how to handle the reactions she gets.
Here goes ya hoersfeckers
>>25563418
>Be Anonymous the Human of Hate
>For some goddamn reason you're stuck in Equestria, the Land of Talking Horses
>You live for a bit with Princess Twilight, the Bookhorse and the Princess of Friendshit at the same time
>Who the fuck cares about friendship anyway?
>You haven't seen it your entire life (which is pretty damn long by poneh standarts), why should you accept it now?
>Ponies asked you about your homeworld
>Stupid horses, they couldn't even fathom how a species with no friendship, so chaotic nature can survive for that long
>For them it'd be like a whole country of Discords
>Utterly terrifying
>You thought it'd be fun
>You really should meet Discord, the Draconequus of Chaos for once, you heard he's a good guy now
>Back to ponies
>You are now sitting in Tweleght's HolyMoly SuperCastle
>She said something about "Her new experiment™!", and "Anonymous, I really need you at my ca-blahblahblah"
>Whatever, nothing interesting as always
>Wasn't the first time she invited you over for ponyflix and chill
>You hear a muffled voice from behind the door
>"Anon, are you still there? I'm finishing up the potion!"
"Yeah sure Twalot, I'm ready."
>She always gets pissed when you call her Twalot/Tweleght/Twiman/Booklight
>You knew it was just friendly banter, she took it pretty seriously though
>Approaching hoofsteps catch your attention
>Now to see what she's got and get out of this place
>as part of her learning process, starlight has to find the mysterious and elusive ' feral pony' and teach them the magic of friendship.
>>25581547
Holy shit why do I like this idea
Mind if I use it?
>>25581683
Sure bro im not doing anything with it.
>>25582062
Thanks bruhSome green in 15 minutes or so
>>25581547
>feral anon refuses to come with starlight
>Not taking no for an answer she goes to force him to come with her
>Angry, anon tells her she shouldn't have done that.
>Now shes gonna have a bad time
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IQBqSt15Vi0
>>25569321
>Rainbow Dash, ever-loyal, refused to believe that Twilight could EVER hurt a foal.
>When the library was destroyed, she left for Cloudsdale and never returned.
>Applejack would cope by refusing to acknowledge that Twilight ever existed.
>Any mention of Twilight was met with silence.
>As far as she was concerned, Applejack had never met Twilight, and had ALWAYS been a quiet farmer.
>The first few days were the hardest on Fluttershy.
>With open hostility thrown her way, she retreated to her cottage and never came back out.
>She had found even less reason to go down to Ponyville, and often sent her animal friends out to purchase the essentials.
>Rarity was the only pony to benefit from Twilight's horrible acts.
>She grew closer to her sister, determined that she would NEVER make Sweetie Belle feel afraid or in danger around her.
Hypothetically speaking, it's possible that the Nightmare Moon future was a universe where Nightmare was defeated, Nyx was born and Nightmare Nyx won in the end.
Nightmare Nyx with Anonfilly when?
>>25583685
Never.
>>25583685
stop it.
>>25583829
No I'm having fun.
Bumpers
>>25566477
So I'm almost done reading this, but is the story actually complete? It doesn't seem like it will get wrapped up in the last 5% to go.
Has it been abandoned?
>>25584604
I honestly have no idea. I've been busy with other things and haven't paid as much attention to the thread, which is why I've fallen behind on every green in here. I want to say he had posted in the last thread, but I can't be sure.
>>25573570
>>25573639
Fuck. I still haven't got any ideas. Maybe a timeline where Nyx and Anonfilly exist?
>>25580970
Is anybody acutally reading this?
I'm fuckin' tired and out of ideas
>>25585375
A lot of people will be avoiding /mlp/ because of spoilers.
>>25584966
Eh? Oh right yeah that. I got,
>a rock
>a alternate timeline where the homonculi pones win
>an abuse timeline where anon was never rescued
>multiple villain scenario
>anon filly the princess timeline
>>25585375
I'm reading it anon. Keep going sugar and I'll do art for you tommorow
>>25585388
I guess I have some time to actually regain my writefag mana and have a life at last>implying a writefag could ever have a life
Are ya continuing?
Or did you join the rest of our writefags as a filly in Equestria?
>>25585480
<3
First time writing for a general and not a prompt one-shot
lmao
>>25584729
Hmm. Well I just finished and it's not done, and possibly abandoned because it hasn't been updated since Oct 5th. Tragic because it was a decent setup.
>>25587293
>not updated since October 5th
If you hover over the (Edited) mark on the Pastebin, it says it was last edited November 22nd. So I doubt it's dead.
It really sucks when a good story dies without resolution too. I'm a writefag and a lurker from /ptfg/ and my all time favourite story only had three chapters before the writefag vanished. He said at one point he'd continue, but never did.
http://pastebin.com/u/captain_scrappie
I was really enjoying it, too.
>Anon filly in earth
So is Nyx some random faggots personal OC or is it just some just kind of general OC that people just kinda use whenever/where ever?
>>25588273
It was a famous OC from 2011 and it's kinda turned into the latter.
>>25588291
Huh, okay. Is the guy who made it still around? Is he one of those people who angrily tries to control who can or can't use his shitty OC?
>>25588681
He's called Penstroke or Pen Stroke. He's not very clingy to his OC although he has stated he doesn't wish to see explicit content (e.g. porn) of her but even if that is to happen he doesn't really care.
>>25550431
I want more of this
>>25587494
Hmm didn't know about the alt hover text thing.
I'll read the thing you posted.
Thanks.
>>25590132
The one I posted there was the one I was talking about liking and the writefag disappeared. If you hate stories that never get concluded, don't read it.
>>25590478
Meh, i can live in the moment every now and then.
Head cannon is a bitch.
>It's been years since your last beating, but the fear is still alive inside you.
>You know what will happen if you set one hoof out of line.
>If you're anything other than the perfect filly to act as the daughter of the perfect Princess.
>The most confusing part is the way she's training you, now.
>You've gone from obedience and behaving to interpersonal relationships.
>"Nonny! Come here, please!"
>Oh god, what did you do wrong?
>You woke up at 7 AM, exactly
>You prepared ate your breakfast (the same breakfast you've had for the last four years) of plain oatmeal
>You cleaned up after yourself PERFECTLY.
>You went to your room and sat on your bed until Twilight would call you for dinner
>You didn't act out.
>You didn't make a mess.
>You were the perfect filly for her.
>What does she want?
>What fresh hell awaits you?
"Coming, mommy!"
>Make sure to sound happy and eager.
>Don't you DARE sound reluctant.
>Do NOT backtalk her.
>Get up from your bed IMMEDIATELY and speed-walk out your door and through the halls.
>NEVER run in the halls.
>Approach Twilight's bedroom door.
>Knock firmly (but not too loudly) in the exact horizontal centre, exactly three times.
>Wait for a response.
>If no response is given, then enter after five additional seconds.
>"Come on in, Nonny."
>Open the door.
>Enter the room.
>Do NOT make eye-contact yet.
>Turn around and close the door.
>Make sure to turn your back on her. She told you that it's a sign of trust.
>Mistrust would look suspicious.
>Turn on the spot. NOW you can make eye-contact.
>Smile pleasantly.
>Do NOT smile too happily. This might be misinterpreted as you mocking her.
>Hold your position until further instructions are given.
>It's hard to stare her in the eye, you know. But you have to.
>You HAVE to maintain eye-contact at this stage.
1/2
>>25591336
>Don't move.
>Don't blink.
>Don't breath.
>Wait.
>Quickly, assess the situation.
>She's smiling at you, and it isn't her "public" smile.
>No signs of anger in her face, no sinister glee in her eyes
>Maintain eye contact and smile.
>"Hop up on the bed with Mommy."
>Obey IMMEDIATELY.
>Walk at a pleasant, sedate pace towards Mommy's bed.
>You may now break eye-contact.
>Do NOT lose your smile.
>Do NOT express displeasure at carrying out an order.
>Stop at the edge of the bed.
>Jump on up, just like you've practised.
>Be careful not to scratch or damage the fabric of Mommy's bed.
>Be very careful not to fall back down.
>That would imply that you aren't used to visiting Mommy.
>That would imply that you don't have a close relationship with Mommy.
>That would look suspicious.
>You do not want anything to look suspicious.
>Sit on the edge of the bed and look at Mommy's face.
>Smile pleasantly, but make sure that your smile is warmer than it was before.
>Crinkle the corners of your eyes.
>Wag your tail in excitement.
>Make sure you look affectionate.
>You love Mommy, and Mommy loves you.
>And it has to HAS TO show.
>Wait for further instructions.
>"Come snuggle with me, Nonny."
>No punishment.
>Do NOT express your relief.
>Do NOT give any indication that you expect punishments from Mommy.
>Ever.
>Walk CAREFULLY over to Mommy and crawl into the designated cuddle location.
>Make sure your head is firmly under her foreleg and your back is pressed against Mommy's tummy.
>Do NOT tear the blanket with your hooves.
>Do NOT walk on any papers or books that Mommy has with her at the time of cuddling.
>Maintain pleasant smile.
>She can still see your face.
>NEVER give any indication that you do not enjoy your time with Mommy.
>Because Mommy loves her filly, and you love your Mommy.
>And it has to show.
>Always.
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>>25591336
>>25591368
This sounds like what my parents expect from me, minus the occasional snuggling/happy thing.
>>25591449
>>25591368
>You are a terrible, terrible pony.
>It took you years of brutality to realize this, unfortunately.
>Two years of beating and destroying an innocent stall-man.
>An innocent MAN.
>You just wanted him to stop.
>He was always so horrible to you.
>You tried to reason with him.
>You begged and pleaded and YOU TRIED.
>But it didn't work.
>You lost your temper, and then there was no Anonymous.>There was only Zuul.
>Just Nonny, your daughter.
>That was what the public saw.
>Your perfect, adopted filly.
>Anonymous wasn't happy to be turned into a filly, and he was even less happy when he found out of the role he had to play.
>But you made sure he never deviated from your script.
>Even in private, you made sure that he was the perfect filly.
>For the perfect Princess.
>If he made a mess in the kitchen? That shows that you haven't taught Nonny to clean up after herself.
>That's a beating.
>If he ran down the halls? That shows that you don't enforce any rules and you just let her run wild.
>That's a beating.
>If he looks at you in disgust or contempt? What kind of daughter looks at her mother hat way?
>That's a LONG beating.
>At first, all these rules and treating him like a filly was just revenge for how he treated you.
>But somewhere along the time, you apparently forgot that.
>It started being real.
>Nonny was your idea of a perfect daughter.
>You moulded Anonymous to fit that mask, even if progress cost him a pound of flesh.
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>>25591808
>You remember the day you realized what a terrible pony you were.
>Two years ago, and two years into Anonymous's imprisonment.
>Nonny did everything you asked her to do perfectly. You left the castle to do your business, and you were gone for nearly the entire day.
>When you got back, you found her standing right where you left her, hours after you'd last spoken with her, waiting for further instructions from you.
>She smiled just like you taught her when you entered the room.
>She said, "Hi, mommy!" and you would have believed that she loved you, if you weren't the one who "taught" her exactly how to say it, and WHEN to say it to you.
>For the first time, you REALLY looked at Nonny.
>You could see how rigid and perfect (and hollow) her smile and her posture was.
>She twitched her tail just like you told her to.
>Despite her best efforts, you could see the raw, unbridled terror in her eyes.
>In ANONYMOUS's eyes.
>You had broken him.
>From that day on, you dedicated your life to him.... her?
>Both of them. Anonymous and Nonny.
>You never laid a hoof on them ever again.
>Not in punishment, and rarely in praise.
>Even when you hugged her for a job well done, you could still feel her shaking.
>It was there, but only if you were looking specifically for it.
>It's been four years since Nonny was born.
>Two years since you saw what a monster you really were.
>You've been trying to re-introduce the idea of being touched out of affection instead of punishment.
>It's slow going.
>When you call her into your room to cuddle (like a mother SHOULD, dammit!), you can still see the rigid motions you've taught her to go through.
>You don't know if Anonymous is even in there any more.
>And if he is, if he's capable of saving.
>Or if any of the damage you've done can be reversed to any degree.
>But you're doing your best.
>You've got to.
>For him.
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page nine ain't fine
first time doing this so yeah i hope it goes well if its like maybe i keep it going.---
> My name is anonymous and my life is shit, dealing with my fucking boss is a pain in my ass, the only comfort I > have is to be in my home to play some games and watch some tv shows and read some histories on the web, > my boss is a fucking bitch but I need to keep going I need the money to survive without it means no food, no
> house, no nothing.
> One day I was watching cartoons of ponies different colors and I thought this is gay but I keep watching it and it > wasn’t bad at all I keep tracking of every episode that I could found on the web I was very entertaining whit it
> and I say to myself pony’s right!!!
> After watching firs season I was very happy not bad at all this ponies really did some friends, too bad that
> doesn’t exist in my world and this twilight was very smart and nerdy especially pinki was crazy as shit but very > funny the rest are great too I’m enjoying this so far since I don’t have work tomorrow I’m going to watch the
> next season as well.
>>25592914
> A week pass by.
> Feeling better I don’t see my work as a fucking curse anymore I starting to enjoy it and I give a shit about my
> boss I just agree and its fine, later on my house, tired of my job i decided to take a very and good
> sleep…….hours pass by…..and I wake up…. WTF where the fuck im.
> Looking around a fucking forest dark forest WTF is this shit, I look down this can be fucking real hooves no
> fucking way, wait wait looking to my side left right this must be a fucking bad dream, I’m a pony this can’t be
> real and not an earth one a pegasi, I look up a horn???? What the fuck is this shit I’m an hybrid and then I
> remember the tv show friendship is magic, I was blank I couldn’t focus my thoughts and then I realized that I’m > in the everfree forest oooh shit I need to get out of here right now I don’t want a fuckin manticore to find me
> delicious ooo I walk straight and I found a village, I remember this place Pony Ville? Shit really I I’m here this
> can be real ooh I need to wake up now I slap myself and im still here, shit that hurt hooves right…..
>>25592914
>>25592927
This reads like something on fimfiction
>>25592927
Kill yourself.
yeah if its not to like i can kill it now lol
>>25591819
I was one of the anons who originally suggested that anonfilly would be mind broken back in the original thread (hell, I might have been the first I can't remember) and I just want to say that this is EXACTLY what I've been thinking of and hoping for with these threads. I love you ApA.
>>25592978
Hey, there's actually a lot of good stuff on fimfiction. This reads like the really bad stuff on fimfiction.
>>25592927
>>25592914
>spaces after arrows? Check EleGiggle
>bad grammar? Check SoBayed
>doesn't know how to use greentext? Check 4Head
>picrelated
>>25568357
Did I already say this is fucking cute? Because if I didn't it's fucking cute.
>>25567004
Made Anon a bit less contrasting with the background, his mane was a bit too blacknot racist
>>25594332
You made the outlines a bit too thick.
>>25594345
I know, still looks better than colors of the previous one though
![700[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/w9NRRIB.jpg "700[1].jpg")
all this green
>>25580970
>Wrote a shitload and everything got deleted
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU~
>"Now Anon, are you /sure/ you're ready?"
>Twilight comes out of her basement lab with a half-full bottle levitating beside her
"Of course I'm ready, why wouldn't I be?"
>Gettin' cocky there, eh Anon?
>"Well then, let me explain what we're going to do."
>Twilight plops down in front of you
>Her tummy is getting a bit curvy, you're the only one who noticed it seems
>An hour passed
>So alright, Twilight made a trasformation potion
>A-and it's gonna turn you into something
>"That sums up what we're going to do. Of course the effect is temporary, you'll be back in your original form in..."
>A week? Two?
>"Three months."
"What?!"
>pic yfw
"Twalot, I know it's a serious experiment blah-blah, but I've got unfinished stuff I'm really close to accomplishing!"
>"Like what?"
>You pull out "The List of Stuff Anon's Gotta Do While In Horseland™"
>You point at the unchecked things on The List™
"Cum inside Rainbow Dash, fell that Apple rump, get sum CP of Applebloom and Sweetie Belle, gift Rarity my gem, throw a party in Pinkie's ass, petplay with Flutterhorse, teach Cherilee a couple of things..."
>"OK Anon, first off — gross, second — why am I not on the list?"
>She tops it off with the cutest smile you have ever seen a pony being capable of
>You put "become 'friends' with a Princess of Friendship" on the list
>Right after the other three
>"So we got that out of the way, now, are you ready to drink the potion?"
>[violent shaking of the potion in front of Anon's face]
"No, I gotta clear one more thing up before we do this, sweetie"
>You shove the bottle away and get as close as possible to her face without actually touching her
>Since when Twilight's fur is red?
>>25593049
You need a lot of work.
It felt like bait.
If you are looking to improve I'll tell you this.
>Write it out first on word to catch spelling and missed spaces, as well as times you should have started a new line.
>only use the ">" symbol at the beginning of each line.
>when telling the story you want to show what is happening instead of telling what is happening.
>greentext works pretty good with second person, you might want to use that. "You sit down on the couch" instead of "i sit down on the couch"
>read the story to yourself out loud, if it sounds awkward you may want to revise it.
Also some of the into seems like it is useless information. It's Ok to start the story a little into the action.
>>25594733
>works pretty good with second person
It /should/ be second person, no?
>>25594763
That was what i was trying to hint at.
Though there is no real "rules" to greentext, so it doesn't necessarily have to be. It just doesn't seem right or of second person.
>>25594800
Alright, Mr. Dubs
>Anon: The villain.
>>25595488
Anon is Prickly Jack?
>>25595490
Who?
>>25595490
IT'S CACTUS JACK!
>>25595495
He's the villain in the Arnold Schwarzenegger comedy, The Villain
>>25595488
Checked
>>25594714
feel*
Gonna put it in a pastebin after this one and fix all this stuff
"Will the ponies know me as Anonymous the Human or will you give me another identity?"
>You grab your pal Twalot and quietly whisper into her warm, fuzzy ear
"Maybe Anonymous the Undercover Agent?"
>She lifts her wings, pushing you back and puts the bottle with slimey purple liquid in your face
>"Whatever you want Anon, just drink it already."
"Aite b0ss."
>She looks at you like you're retarded
>Even with ponies, that filipino accent never fails
>You open the bottle
>Steam instantly comes out of it; it was just from the oven
>Just the way you like it, hot and slimey
>Drink that shit
>Oh yeah, drink it
>"Anon!"
>Magic shoves the bottle away from you
"Hey! I was sitting here for 2 hours, a man gotta drink you know!"
>"The more of the potion you drink, the younger you become, asshat"
>This was the first time you heard Twilight swear, and it was for a reason
>You look at the bottle, fear firmly planted on your green expressionless face
>It's almost empty
"Well,buck."
>You fall backwards and hit your head on the bench you were sitting on
>"Nonny!"
>And then everything went black
>>25595557
is he gonna be a baby or some shit now?
>>25595660
>almost empty
Also the prompt is
>Fillyanon hits puberty, becomes an absolute bombshell and has no idea how to handle the reactions she gets.
>>25595710
http://hydra-media.cursecdn.com/dota2.gamepedia.com/e/ee/Nyx_kill_17.mp3
>>25595772
>>25595557
The pastebin's ready
http://pastebin.com/Tg39Y32g
When did this go from being the AnonFilly thread to being Nyx general?
>>25596301
Not long ago
>>25596301
I'm not sure what's worse, the people posting or the people complaining.
>>25595891
Added to the Google Doc
>>25596301
When the biggest faggots decided to take the cocks out of their mouth. It's pretty much just shitposting. They're even posting in /ptfg/ now.
Hide Nyx threads
Ignore Nyx posts
Do not reply to Nyx posters
>>25596355
I can't tell who is and isn't shitposting so I'm just going to continue liking both fillies.
>>25596355
I think you're over reacting just a tad, you're posting in both threads and it's making you look dumb.
>>25596519
How so? I see people in both threads complaining about Nyx, so I'm commenting on it. Maybe the Nyx posters are genuine, I don't know. It just seems like shitposting to me which is why I said it. I had been mostly ignoring Nyx posts until I made those comments and I'm going to go back to ignoring them because they just don't interest me.
Besides, I kinda need to get back into /ptfg/ since I abandoned it when the AnonFilly threads popped up. I think I can handle writefagging for two threads at once.
>>25596355
>Do not respond
>Clearly responding
Fauvra come on man.
>>25596571
True or not true labeling something as "shitposting" makes you sound ignorant. Even if it is genuine.
I'd rather not speak on behalf of anyone, but it appears with those few images that have cropped up that some generally were okay with it, maybe liked it.
>>25596583
Answering a question about Nyx, not a Nyx poster.
>>25596601
Alright, fine. They're genuine. But the advice still stands for anyone who dislikes the Nyx posts, just ignore them. That's what I was doing until I made those comments and that's what I'm going to start doing again now.
>>25596492
For fucks sake i'm really regretting making that now.
>>25596645
Don't let a vocal minority ruin something for you.
>>25596650
too late senpai. i'm already dead inside, because y'know vocal minorities control everything now.
the fuck happened while I was away? is it not possible to like an oc from 2011 or something
>>25596645
Don't regret it. Keep drawing the pictures you want and telling the stories you want.
I assumed Nxy posting was shitposting, I was very clearly wrong. I honestly didn't think anyone genuinely liked this OC, again I was wrong. You want to draw or write Nyx, do it. Don't let faggots like myself stop you.
