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Wardrobe Malfunctions of Canterlot High
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Original Prompt
>H-hey anon....

You turn around to see Fluttershy crouching behind a trash can

>May I, uh, borrow some....spare pants?
>Why? Because.... Well....
>You know how Principal Celestia got the school a new elevator?
>Well, I was standing too close to the doors, and when they closed, they caught my skirt...
>I tried to get the door open again, but it was no use
>The elevator went up, tearing my skirt to pieces.
>I can't be seen showing off my p-panties!

You see the shy girl is wearing white panties, with hearts in them

>Please Anon, the gym's being used for volleyball practice, so I can't get my gym shorts
>and you...
>*gulp*
>you're the nicest guy I know
>please Anon! Everyone will laugh at me if they see me like this!
>All I want are some pants! I promise I'll give them back! I'll even wash them for you!

She's practically begging at this point
What do?

Writefags
This guy - http://pastebin.com/WMC8N5ue
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>>25410712
suck my own dick and tell her to fuck off thats what id do
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I want full blown public nudes to happen without a mountain of drama around it.
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>>25410712
do something nice
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>>25410712
Well I need these pants since I'm going commando, but you also need these pants, so we're gonna have to wear the same pair of pants. You wanna be in the front or back?
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>>25411841
And then anon proceeds to fuck fluttershy while they wear the same pants.
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>>25411867
What if Fluttershy chooses the back and turns out to be packing a bit more heat than anon thought?
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>>25411867
I never thought I'd see my fetish anywhere but in my head. Someone please write this one.
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>>25411912
Futashy and trapnonymous?
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So I'll be back in the morning and if this place hasn't died I'll see if I can make something happen with ol' futashy/flutterguy
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>>25410712
Their hair extensions is over 9000
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We need this guy
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>>25410712
The cute underwear they're wearing in the pic
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>>25410712
I want to grab two big handfuls of Fluttershy's hair.
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Good Morning
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Not today.
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Hey guys, I'm up so uhh, expect flutterassfuck green sometime.
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>>25415205

>Somehow ol' Butterstutters here made it into the gym without being seen and is currently hiding behind the bleachers near the locker room.
”Well I need these pants since I'm going commando, but you also need these pants, so we're gonna have to wear the same pair of pants. You wanna be in the front or back?” you say jokingly
>You aren't joking about the commando part though
>Anon jr. and the juice crew just don't sit right when you have sweat pants on
>But you don't really expect her to just climb on in with you
>That would just be just silly
>So you turn around getting ready to remove your all too large for even you hoodie so she can cover herself with it
>But once you've turned around you feel a sharp tug on the back of your sweats
>Sure they're pretty big cause you're a big guy 4 u
>But you're not sure if they're big enough for too
“Whoa flutters, hey...”
>But before you can voice your confusion
>You feel your sweats drop a little lower than you're comfortable with
>And a pair of slender legs step in behind you
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>>25415365

>Now momma 'Non didn't raise no faggot
>So when a girl walks in with an itty bitty waist
>and some round things on yo back you get sprung
I ain't even sorry
>But now is not the time for boner to assume direct control
>Now is time for glorious comrade to abscond to lockers
>You take a deep breath to calm your boner and beating heart
“Okay so, see I was joking about the whole getting in with me “ you say glancing around to make sure no one has noticed anything
“But we can make this work, all we gotta do is walk carefully backwards to the lockers, I've got spare clothes in there, alright?”
>”O-okay...”
“Alright on the count of three, put your right foot back, and then left.”
>You feel her nod her head behind you
“Okay 3, 2, 1...”
>”HEY, ANON!”
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>>25415371

>FUUUUUUUUUUUU...
>It's fucking Norman
>The guy's a total bro
>But god damn is he stupid
>Like he may actually be slightly autistic
>And if he sees whats going on, you're not sure you can keep his mouth shut
no homo
>”Hey, Anon, where ya headed?” he yells from across the court
>You can feel fluttershy's heart rate picking up gotta go fast
“I'm just uhh, heading to the locker rooms flash, I gotta go uhh do a thing.”
>You see him nod in understanding
>”I gotcha Anon, no worries, probably need more fiber or something.”
>Fuck you Norman I am perfectly regular
>But with that catastrophe avoided you can now once again make your ways to the lockers
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>>25415379

“Okay, Shy, let's try this again on the count of three.”
>Once again you feel her nod instead of saying anything
“3, 2, 1, go”
>You both take your first step backwards towards the lockers without issue
>But what you didn't notice before is that you can feel her panties on your backside
>And her huge breasts on your back me gusta
>You repeat the process and take another step back
>With each step you can feel both rubbing against you
>And each time, you can feel her breathing increase
>Her warm breath on your neck
>Boner plz not now
>You were too focused on the sensual feelings that you failed to notice a really important sensation

Be back to writing in a little while bitches
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>>25415386
I await.
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>The two of you finally manage to shuffle your ways into the locker room
>Even though your dick is hard enough to cut diamonds it isn't very noticeable
>It's the sweats I fucking swear
>I'm totally above average
>Wait why am I justifying this to myself
>You shake your head to break yourself from your musings
“Okay we made it, no ones in here, so if you don't mind hopping out really quick so I can get the clothes.”
>”I-if you're sure...” she whispers
>You feel your sweats drop once again past your comfort range
>Thank Jeegus you wore that hoodie that now covers your dangly parts
>You feel those slender legs slide out from behind you
>Once she's out you quickly make your way to your locker without looking back at her
>Cause that would be rude as fuck
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>>25415546

“Alright, Shy here's those pants you ordered.”
>You hold the pants out behind you so you don't stare
>The pants disappear from your grip and you assume she's putting them on
>But you don't hear the sound of rustling clothes
>In fact you hear the sound of clothes hitting the ground
“Hey, you uhh, almost read there?”
>”Sorry, Anon, I just can't help it...” you hear flutters say softly
>Before you get a chance to respond you feel your sweats drop dangerously low for the third time
>trips get
>You feel a hand wrap itself around your junk and her other arm around your waist
“Whoa! Hold up!” you nearly yell
>”I really, really need this, Anon, please?”
>Free hand job from cute girl?pic How could you say no.
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>>25415553
>trips get
trips gained
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>>25415553

>With one hand working your shaft and another playing with your jewels
You're a wizard, Anonny
>You can feel her warm breaths on your neck
>You bite your lip to stifle any sounds coming from you
>All the while she's pumping your dick like a well oiled machine
>The other hand caressing your balls in a soft embrace
>You fight back the urge to moan and thrust into her hands
>”Oh, Anon, don't hold back.”
>She whispers softly, and nibbles on your ear
>You were not prepared for this, an all to familiar sensation building in you
“F-fuck, Shy, I'm about to...”
>She quits nibbling on your ear just to whisper into it
>”That's good, just let it all out...”
>With that she tightens her grip on you and pumps even faster
>it doesn't take much more than a few moments before you reach your climax
>You thrust your hips into her hands and finally let loose your seed
>Thick ropey strands of spunk fly away, some not going far and just coating her hand
>One shot turns into two, and two into four, before your balls feel a little lighter than before
>Your breaths are heavy and your mind is nearly blank
>But you can make out a pressing sensation on your backside.
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>>25415691

Alright guys gotta head out for class, be back later, so expect more shit from me later.
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Don't let this shit die you fucks.
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Hey d00dz, it's me, the creator of the original thread

Gotta say, I was not expecting something of this magnitude.

I mean, I was expecting a quick little green, but nothing like his

All I can say is: thank you for having faith in my thread

Have a classic WM prompt

>H-hey anon,
>Do you, uh...
>happen to have any...spare pants?
>Why? Cause...uh...
>well, I found some old jeans at the bottom of mah drawer, and decided to wear 'em to school.
> ah admit, they were a bit tight.
>but when ah bent over to pick up mah pencil...
>I, uh... ripped my pants.

She turns around, showing the backside of her pants slip wide open, exposing her pink panties

>please let me borrow some shorts, anon. Ah can't let anybody see me like this!

She's practically begging at this point
What do?
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Alright fucbois, I'm back and you know what that means?
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Bomp
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This guy better find the thread
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>>25418742
Found you
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>>25418910
Welcome back homie.
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>>25416537

'sup Cosmic Butt. I'm working on illustrating the prompt in the OP.
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Reps
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>>25418910
There is a God
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>>25418910
Hope you feel better soon man.
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So I did say I was gonna write some more stuff, but things came up. It wasn't fallout 4 So more tomorrow morning I guess because I'm off.
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>Be pool time in gyme class in EQG school
>all EQG grills wearin beekeinis and shit
>ellow EQG gill jumps of f dive board thing
>Her top come off
>it;s stucjk in skimmer
>trys ti hide it and get to looker room
>bottims get caught on latter
>yellow EQG grall now naked infront of everynoe
>she hot
>she run s hoome anx kills self
>Everybudy happy cause day saw tettes
>orggy hapen cause now horn
>the ennnd
:DDD

dis is mtyy seconf greenn taxt
pls no bully
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>>25421428
10/10 :^)
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>>25421428
ebin :DDD
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>>25419448
So you're doing this prompt AND the Applejack story?
Or am I missing something?
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>>25421428
it so bootiful, i cri evri teim

pres ef tu pai respekt 4 yellow EQG grill

f
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>>25423507
Did you have a seisure?
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>>25423829
Nah he's just speaking finnish.
Such a beautiful language.
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>>25423844
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>>25423507
fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
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>>25424431
>Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Post
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Nice guys
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I'm still feeling like crap but I should be back to writing in a couple of days. I've also been thinking, in my feverish state. I might scrap the ending with Fluttershy but still keep a couple of things to do with her in. I feel like I writ myself into a corner with telling the ending so I'm gonna change it up and keep it to myself. Thanks for keeping it alive Anons'.
until then, have some naughty Rarity
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>>25426095
Ayy, I've been sick too.

Now all I have left is this deep, nasty cough that feels like it's ripping my lungs apart.
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>>25426103
I've got something like that going on right now. With some added mucus, flem, achy joints and a headache that likes to crop up every so often to fuck with me.
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>>25426095
haha holy shit

she looks like a total fucking creeper
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>>25426201
Excellent, then the message is complete
>>25420986
So do I
>>25416537
Hey Cosmic, good to know you came back. I'm guessing that's Applejack in the new prompt.
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Bed Bump
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>>25426095
Knowing the final pairing usually leads to much lower suspense, so you're probably doing the right thing.
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>>25424860
>Ccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
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Alright everyone, into the pool!
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>>25430907
Adult Swim
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>>25430907
Cmon kids, get in the van! :D
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>>25432157
I'll explain later when no one can find your bodies!
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>>25432545
What about the severed heads?
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>>25434046
We'll worry about that later, dammit! Just get in the van!
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>>25435316
That poor cockatoo.
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JUST
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>>25435372
Don't worry, anon, this cockatoo got his revenge later.
>>>/gif/7701174
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Still Alive
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*pop*
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>>25434190
But the cheese! What about the cheese?!
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>>25436990
A wild Drawfag appeared. Shall we welcome it?
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>>25437011
SHIT! I completely forgot about that!

We'll improvise, I've seen Human Centipede and all the Saw movies. I'm sure I'll come up with something!
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>>25437021
Drawfags are always welcome.
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>>25437021

Oh that's not mine. That belongs to Evey.

I'm just posting pictures while I draw my own.
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>>25437053
>That unbuttoned dress
...Are you trying to seduce me?
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>>25437086

I think she's just unaware her dress buttons popped off.
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>>25436131
Kek
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>>25426136
Sucks, anon. I've been catching up on the greenfic today, also sick. It's keeping my headache at bay.
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>>25437118
Yes. Stuff like this makes my dick hard. Sharking videos too.
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What are some scenarios that people want to see in WM stories?
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>>25438961
Getting lost in the woods?
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>>25438961

-Getting clothes snagged in foliage
-Pants splitting
-Wind blowing skirts up
-Buttons popping off of shirts
-Bras breaking
-Panty waistband failure

That's just off the top of my head.
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>>25438961
I want to see holes in Dash's compression shorts, while she doesn't wear panties.
I want to see holes in AJ's shirt, while she doesn't wear a bra.
I want to see Fluttershy pranked with a dissolving swimsuit.
I want Pinkie, who didn't sleep all weekend just partying with her friends, passed out in exhaustion, her nips visible by looking down onto her cleavage.
I want Rarity to hang upside down while wearing a dress, and have everything exposed.
I want Twilight stuck somewhere, with her skirt over her ass, unable to do anything as she flashes everyone that passes by or cops a feel.
I want Sunset to have a huge cameltoe and forget she's wearing a skirt that day.
I want Luna blackmailed after her skirt flew up because of a strong wind, on a day she forgot to wear panties or a bra, as her erect nips make clear.
I want Celestia, pranked on April's Fools, to think it was "Wear Your PJs to School Day", and find herself the only person wearing an oversized shirt or something more revealing to school.

I want each and every one of them becoming victims of public humilliation and gangrape.
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>>25439465
I was with you the whole time up until that last line.
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>>25439555

Pretty much
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>>25440205
So, you here to do requests?
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>>25440714

I guess it depends on the request? I'm here mostly to pick and draw WM situations from the stories you guys post.

Drawing one thing takes me a long time, so I like to make sure it's good.
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>>25440799
AJ covering her ripped pants with her hat, blushing
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>>25441209

I'm already working on an AJ-related WM story, but I'll keep this in mind.

Anyways, here's a drawing to match the situation in the OP. Enjoy.
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>>25441590
Drawfag is based as shit.
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>>25441209
Fucking this. I want to see some sweet apple ass.
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>>25441590
that ass though
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>>25439465
>>25439555
>>25440205
Funny how a board that's so dedicated to >rape barely ever feeds its rape fetishists.
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What distinction is there, in your mind, between a wardrobe malfunction story and ENF?
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>>25441590
Oh yes!
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>>25443165
Since when have we been a board dedicated to rape fetishes?
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>>25439465
>>25439555
Same. Besides the last line this all seems like green I'd read
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>>25444126
since
>rape ?
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Waiting for Applejack's embarrassment.
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>>25415582
top kekt
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>>25444126
>>25443165

I would not encourage this particular fetish, is all.

>>25441209
>>25441684

But how are you supposed to see her ass if it's being covered with her hat?
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>>25446027
A little is peeking out.
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>>25446027
Supple apple ass can not be contained by a simple stetson or coat.
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>>25446080
You are alright Anon.
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>>25446115
Thanks fellow anon, you're a pretty alright guy/gal yourself.
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An hero
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>>25439105
I totally agree to that!
thats totally my favorite type of WM! ^3^
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>A proud southern bell who stood so tall now has shrunken in on herself
>She stays seated in the squat clutching her hat tightly, concealing her face from you
>Ambivalence contorts your emotions as you see her in this state, she looks so cute but a stab to the stomach makes you feel like you may have pushed too far
>AJ:"Why'd Ah have ta wear em today?"
>She mumbles diving her face deeper into her hat
>Searching for some kind of help you look to Dash who shrugs with a grimace
>Rolling your eyes at the clueless prankster you move to crouch next to the dwindling form of the cowgirl
"Look AJ...I can forget I saw them if you like?"
>Poking out an eye from behind the rim of the stetson she says
>AJ:"R-Really?"
"...No not really"
>Her sap green eye retreats back and a groan reverberates out of her
"But I'll keep it locked away in my memory for all my natural life"
>Moving in to help with the comforting Dash bends her knees slightly putting her hand on AJ's golden wavy mane
RD:"If you wanna wear stuff like that AJ, you shouldn't be ashamed of it. You know what, I'll say it too from one girl to another, they do look sexy, so be proud that you can pull off something like those"
>For a second you question if any of what you or Dash are doing is helping when AJ reveals her freckley face again
>AJ:"You guys really think that?"
>A soft smirk appears on your face as you give a small nod while Dash gives a full blown beaming grin
>RD:"Of course stupid, Anon's eyes practically fell out of his head when he saw em"
>Her bright green eyes slide over to glance at you
>Feeling a little on the spot you nod again to reassure her
"Yeah, and me and Dash will both keep our mouths shut"
>RD:"Well I don't know about that Anon. Rarity will definitely want to hear about this"
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>>25447510
>Shooting a hand out and yanking her down by her collar you keep your smile aimed at Applejack but menacingly stare up from under your brow at Dash and through clenched teeth say
"Both of us, right, Dash?"
>That might be the worst person to learn about what happened here
>Who knows what kind of twisted games she'll play with these two, or worse, you
>Eventually warming to your way of viewing things Dash agrees
>RD:"R-right"
>Placing her hat back on her head with a small smile she says
>AJ:"Thanks you guys. Ah'm kinda glad it was you that saw an not some other folk Ah don't know"
>Rising back up to stand tall she pulls you up by the arm with her
>AJ:"Now Ah reckon we should git a move on, we're gon' be late at this rate, let's go!"
>With some new found energy AJ jerks you along by the arm and grabs Dash as well
>You trip over your own feet trying to stay upright as you are towed by Applejacks strength
>She eventually releases you once she has set a pace and you are keeping up with her
>Oddly enough, she seems more chipper now
>A couple words of encouragement and she's acting as if her ass isn't hanging out of her jeans
>Her newfound confidence in herself shows with her striding ahead without a care if her butt occasional shows and her lips curved upwards into a cheery smile
>Taking a few turns AJ has a homing pigeon like sense of direction as she guides you past warehouse after warehouse
>Making a turn you see something unexpected
>A large group of people are heading your way
>Surprising to know that this route is popular and used by others
>But a short cut is a short cut, as long as no one is going to yell at you for being here, who cares ?
>Curious you ask them
"Other people use this route too?"
>AJ:"Ah always thought only me an Rainbow knew 'bout this?"
>RD:"Beats me, but so what? If someone else is using it then you know I'm just that good at finding the best routes to get anywhere" she announces
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>>25447524
>There is about maybe 15 or 20 of them in the group from a first glance.
>Quite a large number considering how empty this place feels
>And they look a few years older, possible in their early 20's?
>Each one looks more nasty than the last, some of them considering you and the girls with a causal glance before continuing with their own conversations
>Except for the only girl in the group
>She looks around the same age as you, long straight auburn hair that ends at her chest frames a face that looks familiar. But you can't put your finger on who she looks like
>A black leather jacket similar to Sunsets and gold chain hung around her neck jangles
>Under her jacket a black tube top around her waist a red tartan skirt and covering her legs stockings that lead down the length of her legs and into a pair of heavy looking punk 'fuck me' boots
>As your group meets with theirs she looks at you, and not just a small causal look, a full stare
>Her pale blue eyes squint ever so slightly as if she recognises you too
>Something doesn't feel right about this
>Every hair on your body pricks up and your stomach turns
>Unwilling to stick around you subtly latch onto Dash and Applejack's arms and pull them to move faster
>Being given a concerned quizzical look you speak before they can utter a word
"Don't ask. Move"
>AJ:"What the hey sugarcube?"
"Sugar-what-now?"
>Incredulously you ask before blinking your reason back
>RD:"Yeah what's the big idea Anon?"
>"Hey!" the girl amongst the group calls before shouting louder again with a little annoyance when you fail to stop "HEY! you three!"
>Stupidly Rainbow Dash and AJ stop in their tracks to respond, causing you to stick by them closing your eyes to hide the fact your rolling them
>AJ:"Ya talkin' ta us darlin'?" she kindly reply's
>"Yeah. I am. Where'd you get that hoodie from?"
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>>25447536
>Altercation occurs
>AJ's hoodie gets ripped off, applebottom for all to see
>New rumors spread about
Please let me be wrong
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>>25447844
Is that what you think?
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>>25443174
Little to none. The only difference is the girl doesn't have to be naked.
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>>25448044
someone sounds like they have a surprise planned
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Gang jump
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Derpy story when?
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>>25450350
They trying to put on boobie sweaters?
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>>25450943
I wonder what a "teat" sweater variant would look like for ponies. Don't judge me, I'm on the right board dang nabbit.
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>>25450350
Agreed I want a comfy EQG Derpy story.
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>>25451296
It would look like woollen underwear with an open gap between the teats and vagina.
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shitcraptittyfuck
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>>25446027
part two where??
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>>25441590
gonna need a front view when she is asking for help
BASED
BASED
BASED
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bed bump
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>>25453645

I have gift art to draw, so I'll start on it after that.

>>25453662

I'll see if I can work this in.

Pictured: really really REALLY old art.
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Hr
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vas
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>>25454959
Far Cry
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God dammit
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>>25454203
YES
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Abuse
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Eight
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>>25458052
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>>25455612
That's Vaas tho.I think >>25454959 was trying get someone to write "ta" afterwards (Hrvasta).
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B
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>>25446027
Nice to see you back. I believe that pic was based off my story, and I too would be happy for a part two.
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>>25450350
http://pastebin.com/pi7HAcyr
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>>25458803

You're Write it Right?
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>>25458853
Eh, no. I was one of two who used that scenario with the same jeans idea.
http://pastebin.com/svuz87de
Regardless, I would support a continuation.
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>>25459334

Oh that's right.

I got you confused with a different writefag.
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Anyone else lurking?
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>>25461112

I always keep this thread open in a different tab while I do other stuff.
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>>25461191
Oh good, I was starting to get sleepy.
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>>25458850
This is the ideal story for me. Decent prose, good buildup leading to humiliation, no self-insert anon, and no forcedly written sex at the end.
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>>25461269
Check the rest of the stories by that author then, because there's a few more wardrobe malfunction things in there.
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>>25438961
A lot more panty exposure from the girls. Too many stories with anon doing this and that and not enough panties.
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>>25463064

Agreed. Also keep the stories relatively succinct. The current one with the anon is going on for waaaaaaay too long, methinks.
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>>25443165
Different strokes for different folks. I'm not a fan of gangrape, just seems so impersonally compared to regular >rape.
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>>25463104
Yeah, I think I've bitten off more than I can chew here.
But if I don't finish this then I'm a hypocrite.
And I've always believed that you should always see a project through to the end, no matter how shitty it is or how bad you feel about creating it.
I'm gonna dedicate today to writing, to try and speed things up and posting it at the end of the day.
Apologies for quality.
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>>25463682
Do what you feel is necessary, though I didn't see a decline in quality from your story.
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Ready
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>>25463104
>>25463682
I think this story is pretty cute. Stick with it.
But also spend a little less time and detail on the fight scenes. I'm starting to wonder if you primarily write action fics because these scenes go on for pages and pages.
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>>25465186
Indeed. I'am more inclined to writing fights. In one of the previous threads I mentioned that I wanted to try different things with this story. But conflict/fights are something I enjoy and know how to write, to a certain degree.
Would you prefer if I did a kind of '5 minutes later' type thing?
Skipping some things?
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>>25465613
hell no, keep writing the style you have been, I enjoy this because its not your average green, most is just straight up secks and such but this anon isnt some tit hungry fuck
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>66665
>5
Oooohhhh... So close
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>>25465613
No keep it the same.
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>>25447536
>The large gang of 20 something's have all taken pause with their headed direction to stayed accompanied with the auburn haired punk girl
>Some of the look just as confused as AJ and Dash when she asks about the hoodie
>Applejack looking slightly more abashed again when remembering what the hoodie is wrapped around to conceal
>AJ:"Well er Ah erm Ah can't remember exactly." Leaning close to Dash she whispers "Dash, where'd ya find this hoodie?"
>Whispering back Dash jogs her own memory
>RD:"I didn't find it Anon gave it to me after Alex ripped my shirt remember?"
>AJ:"Oh yeah that's right! Ah thought you were gon' give him this thing back?"
>RD:"I was!" she agitatedly says back "But I haven't had the chance to yet, and he hasn't come to collect it so I thought I'd just wear whenever"
>Keeping an eye on the girl in the gang she sneers in displeasure
>"Oi ! What're you whispering about?" Her tone sounds to be becoming more truculent the longer this interaction carries on "If you've got something to say say it so we can all hear you"
>Apprehensively laughing AJ tries to keep up her friendly attitude towards the transparently growing vexed girl
>AJ:"Pardon us fer that, Ah was just askin' mah friend here where she found it. Thing is she's kinda borrowin' it fer tha time bein', so we don't know what store this particular item is from. Sorry darlin'."
>Regarding you all with a icy chilled look she doesn't look pleased with that answer
>After saying sorry the polite farm girl makes a start to get back on the original plan of going into town
>"That's what I want to know, who did you "borrow" it off of?"
>This girl is sending all kinds of bad signals
>Pausing for a moment Applejack is about to take a breath to tell her when you butt in
"Why do you want to know?"
>She regards you with scornful gaze
>RD:"Anon let's just go man" Dash says before whispering to you behind your back" This girl is giving me a weird vibe"
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>>25467267
>"Because it just so happens that a person I know got robbed of their hoodie and beaten up. By someone named, Anon..."
>Dash's eyes widen and her pupils become the size of pin pricks, realizing the mistake of saying your name out loud
>"I want that hoodie back. And you, me and my friends here need to have a little chat"
>The gang's once confused state has now focused in on you
>A low murmur sounds from within their group as you can see them begin to unsettle and stir
>Swallowing the lump in your throat a your body is alight with a very primal fear
>Panicking won't do any good
>Trying to run in this place that's unknown to you will more than likely lead to you getting cornered
>Even if the girls help you out or guide you through this place there's still too many of them to handle at once
>Who knows what they'll do if they get their hands on any of you
>You need to get away from this situation without getting the girls caught up in it, if possible
"You have left me with quite a disadvantage, you know my name but I have no idea who you are"
>"If that's a fancy way of asking my name then you can call me, Shiv."
"What kind of a name is 'Shiv'?
>You reproach
>Shiv:"What kind of a name is 'Anon'?" rebuking you she cockily grins
"...Fair enough. Look, "Shiv", if you want the hoodie back fine, just let my friends go and get out of here, and I promise I'll have this little "chat" with you, no bullshit. "
>Laughing with mirth she jeers you
>Shiv:"Look at you trying to act like a big hero hahahah. No no no, I've been looking for all of you for ages. Ever since you hurt Alex we've been on a man hunt. Especially for you though. We already knew about the girls but we wanted to find you the most. And now you're all together and in the perfect place for some long overdue payback"
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>>25467286
>Your heart starts to pound in your chest and your legs shake, telling you to run to move. But you stand in place. Refusing to heed the call of survival
>The gang now begin edging forward inch by inch wolf whistling at the girls and taunting while the Shiv folds her arms and grins wickedly
>All you wanted to do today was see Fluttershy and hang out like a normal person
>Why does shit have to be overcomplicated
>Standing by your side AJ and Dash appear to be as ready for this as you are, visible shaking and their breath becoming heavy
>Without taking your eyes of the now encroaching group you lean back and talk in a whisper from the corners of your mouth
"Dash, when they make a start for us, run."
>She looks at you with horrid comprehension
>RD:"What the fuck are you talking about!? I'm not leaving you two here on your own!"
"You're not leaving AJ, she's going with you"
>AJ:"What in the hey? Don't be a darn fool Anon! let's all run!" she suggests
"That's not gonna work. They'll be on us in no time flat. You two know this place better than me, go find help and come back with it. I'll try and hold them back for however many seconds I can."
>RD:"That's stupid. You're stupid!"
"You think I don't know that?!"
>Arguing back Dash switches her gaze from you to the gang moving in closer and closer
>Shiv:"What's the matter? Saying some last words before we kick the shit out of you?"
>Hearing AJ take a deep calming breath she speaks resolute and unwavering
>AJ:"Dash yer tha' fastest one outta the lot of us. Go git the others and bring em back here. Ah'll stick with Anon"
>Looking over to each other they share a glance
>AJ:"Don't worry nothin', if yer quick about it, me an' Anon we'll be alright"
>They both have determined looks on their faces as they give a small nod
"Go with Rainbow, AJ. You won't be able to do much with your current attire the way it is"
>Taking up a fighting stance AJ seems insistent on staying
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>>25467307
>AJ:"Jus' 'cause Ah'm a gurl Anon, an mah breeches are split don't mean Ah don't know how ta open a can o' whoop ass on these fellers. Have a lil' faith."
>Glancing back to Dash she playfully berates her
>AJ:"Ya still here? go on an git the others already"
>RD:"Okay geez fine, I'll be back in a flash." Turning around Dash looks back to both you and AJ" Try not to get hurt you two"
"That seems like an impossible feat"
>Not waiting for the group to get any closer Dash turns and runs into a sprint like you've never seen before
>Before you know it she's gone and out of site
>Guy1:"Hey one of 'em's getting away!"
>Guy2:"Who gives a shit. The other two stayed"
>One of the boys casually strolls up to you
>Before he gets too close you tell AJ quietly
"Don't do anything yet no matter what happens. Just wait."
>AJ:"Wait fer what?"
"You'll see"
>The boy now standing near meters away and bearing down
>He's a little taller than you, wearing a blue collared shirt over a grey t-shirt and jeans.
>Hair short black and spiked up, he reminds you of a certain rocker from back at school
>Guy2:" You've got some balls on you to stick around, where's ya friend going? I was hoping to get to know her better"
>The fact he's walked right into fist flying range means he's either putting up a brunt to show off in front of his friends or he knows what he's doing
>Guy2:"Silent type huh? You reckon you can take all of us on do ya? Or are you just shitting yourself and you're too embarrassed to speak?"
>He gets really close to your face pressing his forehead into yours
>This shit stain has no idea what he's doing
>Swinging both your arms up you slam your open hands into his temples causing him to recoil away
>Before he can stumble back you swiftly pull his arms down and simultaneously wrap your arms to lock around his back
>Using all your strength you lift him up with a grunt and fall into a suplex, making him meet the ground.
>Face first
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>>25467325
>A bone chilling smack claps through the air
>Your legs bent and your arms locked together around him, you remain in the bizzare looking position holding him into the earth.
>Making sure he's out
>...
>Guy1:"...Holy shit!"
>A chorus of 'ooo's' and sucking in air through their teeths sound from the majority of them
>When you are certain he won't be getting back up you relax and roll out from under him quickly getting back on your feet
>AJ looks down at the body of the knocked out shit talker mouth agape
>The rest of them wear similar faces, seeing one of their friends go head first into concrete might have perturbed them from going in all at once. Hopefully.
>Your heart is still pounding in your chest, adrenaline kicking in, replacing your fear with excitement.
>This is going to be different than the last few times. It will be different
>Nothing held back
>And a lot of pent up energy craving release
>You want to shout at them "Come at me!"
>But with AJ here and all of them still out numbering, you know better than to scream taunts at overwhelming odds
>Keeping a straight face and clenched jaw you imposingly glare at the rest of them tilting your head ever so slightly to get that satisfying pop noise from your neck
>Shiv:"What the fuck are you all doing?! fucking kick the shit out off them!" Shiv commands from behind them
>Guy1:" But he just wrecked Kevin, didn't you see that shit? He doesn't even look phased by it!"
>Shiv:" I don't fucking care!" she chides " Get in there and beat the ever loving christ outta them! There is more of you than them!"
>The curly haired boy shakes his head
>Guy1:"Nah fuck that man, I'm out. Deal with him yourself, I'm not gonna go near that freak"
>Some of the more worried looking members voice their agreement and begin to back off with the curly haired guy
>The more serious looking ones stay, with fixed stares looking straight back at you while they crack their knuckles and ball their fists
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>>25467342
It is a terrifying move.
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>>25467342
Then Randy Orton and John Cena helps Anon.
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>>25467342
This gon' be good.
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>>25467307
If anon was such a little criminal why the hell isn't he carrying a piece.
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>>25469399
This. At least a knife. He knows what he's going to get into and he's been in deeper shit.
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>>25467342
Fuuuuccccckkkk
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>>25469399
fluttershy will solve the problem, she is smart like me and never goes anywhere without glocky
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>>25469516
You shouldn't carry a weapon unless you intend to use it.
Going around with a lethal weapon like a gun or a knife means you accept that you may take someones life.
That might not be something anon is willing to do.
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>>25470781
it's something I've been willing to do since I was a little kid
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>>25470781
You better be shitting me right now.

Britbong?
Commiefornian?
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>>25471154
I think you misunderstood. I love guns. I've yet to get one myself because my budget is so tight that I can't justify spending extra money on one.
I just meant that you should be willing to use a gun if you carry one.
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>>25471336
it's your life nigga, everyone is trying to fuck it up, you gotta protect it
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>>25471383
That's what I mean. You should be willing to use a gun to defend yourself, lethally if need be.
Someone who doesn't want to kill might be uncomfortable with carrying a gun.
And yes, I know that you do not have to fire your gun every time you draw it. Usually just pointing it at someone is enough to make them back the fuck up. But if they try to call a bluff and your don't have the stomach for it then you are screwed.
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>>25471405
Pointing at an unarmed person is the stupidest thing ever. Drawing a weapon on someone means you need to use it, not threaten someone.
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>>25471462
You do NOT need to use it every time you draw, that is idiotic.
And yes you CAN threaten to shoot someone if they are threatening you, armed or not.
Not drawing your gun and letting someone attack and possibly hurt/rob/disarm and kill you with your own gun simply because they didn't have a weapon too is the stupidest thing I've ever heard.
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>>25470899
>Only willing
>Not being convicted for murder
What a casual.
^:)
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>>25471604
I'm white though
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>>25472789
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>>25471604
Normies right?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qdhYQJrXlDg

Also is this the average /mlp/ user?
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50 States
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>>25474225
New Mexico
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>>25472177
So am I.
Didn't stop me from killing the punk when I was 12.
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>>25474848
Nebraska
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>>25467342
>Shiv:"At least some of you a competent enough to help me out" She snidely remarks
>Guy1:"You said it was just a dude and two girls we needed to take care of, not some fucking psycho who can pick up Kevin and smash his face into the ground."
>Shiv:"Don't be such a fucking pussy! If you're too afraid to take him on then at least go for the girl"
>He looks Applejack up and down, sizing her up
>Remaining on the spot AJ stands with her arms folded
>AJ:"Ah reckon that's a bad idea iffin Ah ever heard one. But yah more than welcome to try"
>The curly haired coward wriggles a wide grin onto his face with a clear despicable intent behind it
"Applejack don't egg em on, try and stay out of this as much as you possible can"
>A soft smile appears on her lips as she tries to put your concerns at ease
>AJ:"Ah appreciate the incentive, sugarcube. But Ah wouldn' be much of a friend if Ah just stood by an' watched mah friend get beaten up"
>While some help would be more than helpful at this point, you'd rather she did stay out of this.
>After all, you were the one that started this domino effect of problems. Getting someone mixed up in this shit stack is something you'd rather avoid
>While you were looking on at AJ the coward has stepped forward heading for the farm girl
>AJ: 'sides, tha Apple family ain't no pushovers"
>Steering away from you the curly haired guy confidently strides up beside her
>Guy1:"I wouldn't want to mess up that pretty face of yours babe so how's about you and me just leave these guys to do their thing so we can-"
>Creepily reaching a hand out towards AJ she captures him by the middle finger and bends it back on to force it to meet with his knuckles
>Grunting in pain he tries to wrench his hand back from her, only to jerk in place without any success.
>Eventually forcing him to his knees AJ's face had completely changed to a impassive expression from her once gentle smile
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>>25476376
>Winding her other arm back with a tight clenched hand on the end she rockets a punch straight and accurately into his face
>Letting go of his fingers at the same time to send him catapulting into a warehouse shutter door with a heavy impacting rattle
>He lands in a slump on the floor, out cold
>The door couldn't be more than 10 feet away
>At a loss for words you can hardly believe how much punch this cowgirl can pack
>She doesn't need your help. You need hers.
>Turning back to you all smiles again despite the horrifyingly overpowered punch she just launched
>Lifting her arm she flexes and puts her hand on the bulge of muscle, she sort of resembles the J.Howard Miller's "We can do it" poster girl
>From day one of meeting these girls you always knew they were strong, but this goes beyond what you thought they were capable of
>AJ:"Us Apple gurls can handle ourselves" she boasts triumphantly
>Dazed and still processing her unbelievable right hook a surge of confidence wells up in your chest
"Great, think you can do that a couple more times?"
>Rolling her arm she used to punch around in its joint she winks at you
>AJ:" Ah reckon Ah could give it a shot"
"Suits me just fine"
>A maniacal smirk widens of your face as you turn face to see your opponents
>Crazy as it sounds you feel unstoppable with AJ by your side
>Good thing she did choose to ignore you and stay behind
>This might be the first time you win a fight, even against these numbers most of them are backing off except for a few who remain in place, defiant and ready to meet you
>Shiv:" ALL OF YOU! Don't even think about running away!" Screaming at the guys backing off behind her
>Guy3:"That girl isn't right, there's something fucked up going on here" one of the boys say with a wobble in his throat
>Shiv:" IDIOTS, do I have to guide you by the fucking hand myself? Rush her there's no way she can take you all on!"
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>>25470369
I recognize that gun. That's the model used for the pistol in the Tell Tale Walking Dead games.
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>>25477650
Neeeeeeeeerrrrrrrd!
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>>25477650
>i recognize that gun
>not recognizing 3Danon´s work
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>>25475666
Idaho
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>>25479491
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>>25479611

Whoa there buddy. Take it easy with the knob polishing.
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>>25480576
k
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>>25478466
Alabama
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>>25481741
New York
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>>25482186
California
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>>25482616
Alaska
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>>25483138
Virginia
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>>25483725
US Virgin Islands
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>>25483998
British Virgin Islands
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>>25484574
British Virgin? Nice try Mohammad.
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>>25483725
Oregon
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>>25485290
Someone say The Oregon?
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Where are you guy?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DnfSoaJxe3Y
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>>25476397
im getting a 'grrrrl pwr' vibe from this
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>>25486263
Is that not literally the entire point of the show and movies?
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>>25476397
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aI8j5WiySss
>On command a wave of them head directly for AJ
>Acting on pure instinct you rush in to meet them
>The end of your shoe finds its way into one of the boys stomachs making him collapse before he could get near AJ
>The rest of them get past you swarming her
>Shitshitshitshit!
>You can't see AJ among their rabble as the crowd around her
>You can only hear her struggle, grunt and cursing in her censored way of speaking against the insurmountable odds
>Running up to one of them you wrap an arm around his neck jerking him away
>He shakes you off and a sharp swift crack connects with your cheek from his hard elbow
>Grimacing you go to reach back for him when you are pulled back by what seem like a dozen hands
>Throwing you back from the gank on AJ and ripping at your shirt
>Lashing out you swing yourself around to tackle one of the bodies tearing you away
>Pushing them back until you ram them into a solid wall
>Delivering an elbow of your own into the socket of his eye you feel the soft tissue of his skin smack against the hard point of your elbow
>In a beat you launch your knee into his soft stomach and grab his head and smack it has hard as you can into the wall
>Hearing the crack hollow thud of bone against wall
>Swivelling on your heel to throw him concussed and rag dolling into the myriad of the gang members
>Snapping a glance to see what AJ's condition is you are blindsided by a fist
>The knuckles thwacking against the right side of you temple
>Another punch acquaints itself with your belly causing you to double over as you legs go weak and you feel the rise of bile try and escape your throat
>Leaning your back to the wall behind you
>You raise your head to see another one of them swing at you
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>>25486533
>In the time it takes to blink you tilt your head to avoid the hit as it clips your ear lope and unites with the wall
>Adrenaline and endorphins cause you too quickly recover from your gut punch
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>>25486543
>Seeing a chance in his pained response you hook you hand around the back of his neck and plant your knee cap into him
>Then swing him into the wall behind you for his face to kiss the hard wall
>All you see is 5 of them, semi-circled around you
>Cutting you off, trapping you from helping AJ
>This is not how it's going down, not like last time, not like back at that lower circle of hell excuse for a school
>Sucking in air from your nostrils you ready yourself to break through
>Two of them charge at you before you can make a start
>Anticipating the closest ones hook coming in from the right you side step out of harm's way and catch the left ones punch under your arm
>Either being in this much danger or desperately trying to get back to AJ causes you to attack in quick succession
>Launching a flurry of jabs into any soft part of his body while you lock his other arm under your armpit
>The first one comes back only to receive a kick in the chest to deter him and his friend gift wrapped with bruises to fall on top of him
>Another comes in kicks you back to the wall a hollow echo resounds in your chest as you hit it
>He attempts another kick so you grab it and lift his foot into open air to watch him slip on his heel
>Using his leg as leverage you hold it and jump in the air to stamp on his chest
>Nothing held back
>Twisting his leg sharply with a jerk, you hear a crack
>The unknown guy cries out in agony before you brutally stomp again on his head to shut him up
>Moving on to the next target he comes to you
>Ducking under his first swing you jet a right and left punch into his kidney
>And within milliseconds of drawing back drop your elbow onto the back of his leg making him take almost take a knee
>Rolling under another one of his flailing swings kick up your leg and bring it back down on the back of his calf
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>>25486551
I see this playing out in my head like and assassins creed fight
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>>25486551
>Launching a flurry of jabs into any soft part of his body while you lock his other arm under your armpit

I'm probably picturing this wrong, but I was honestly expecting something like an uppercut to armpit with the other hand. You don't even have to hit too hard to disable someone like this. With Anon going all "nothing held back", one of his hits there, and the other dude wouldn't get back up over the pain in his arm. Less effort than a flurry of jabs, much more impressive, and a lot more satisfying.

In any case, can't wait for the rest. I wanna see what happened with AJ.
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>>25486551
I'm sure AJ's fine...
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>>25485290
Kansas
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>>25487482
Arkansas
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Washington
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>>25489094
Florida
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Bukovina
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>>25489645
Colorado
>>25490235
Europe
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>>25491315
Arizona
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>>25491705
Szolnok
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>>25491705
Wisconsin
>>25491933
Hungary
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>>25492408
Ruthenia
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>>25492408
Massachusetts
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>>25493009
Georgia(country)
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>>25493028
Tbilisi
>>25493009
Pennsylvania
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>>25493452
North Carolina
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>>25494050
Nebraska.
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>>25494060
That one has been done.
You lose. You must now spank yourself.
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Wyoming
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>>25494699
Nevada
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>>25495198
Khazan
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>>25495455
Iran
>>25495198
Vermont
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>>25495669
,Islamic Republic of
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>>25486551
>His head now level with your thigh you shift all of you weight into a kick that topples him over
>Feeling something on his face break as your shin meets his nose
>With no time to even glance over to see how well AJ is doing someone locks your arms, forcing you into a full nelson
>You try to put up a fight against the grapple but you can hardly even wave your arms as he tightens his grip
>Resorting to trying to stamp your heel onto a tendon in his foot you fruitlessly only hit is hard ground
>Another one of them makes a start to approach you from the front with wiping some blood the cuff of his sleeve to expose a manic smirk
>A dread fills the entirety of your being and a tremor courses through you as he draws closer
>Your useless flails to escape make him cackle
>Now desperately trying to whirl the guy locking in place around he stands firm and resolute agianst your squirming
>A flash of white knocks your vision to one side and pain erupts on the side of your face as you are battered by the manic guy
>Each attack cracks into your head send jolts of explosive pain followed by a dull ebbing and throwing your sight about
>You can feel your own blood tickle you, trickling down the side of your head
>Taking a breather he says "Not such hot shit now huh? You little fucker!"
>Defiantly glaring up from under your brow you try to regain some sense and stop the world from spinning around you
>Your face feels swollen, pulsating with twinges of an aching agony
>"What? you want more?"
>Shaking his hand he readies to wind back into another assault
>You spit a red gloopy string of saliva into his face causing him to cringe as it lands in one of his eyes
>And in pained panted breath say
"Fuck you"
>Outraged and blinded in one eye you strain yourself to kick both your feet up as he comes back in
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>>25496007
>Clamping your legs around his head and twisting your whole body making all three of you plummet to the floor
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>>25496013
>Landing on your side you make quick work of the guy who had you locked down by slamming the back of his head repeatedly into the ground
>Feeling the other one clawing as your legs you kick out into his head before turning your attention back to the first
>Raising a fist in the air and slamming it back onto his face feeling his skull bounce between your hand and the concrete
>Scrambling to your feet you are tripped back to the floor by the same guy again
>Furious you kick him in the head several more times until he lets go
>With what power you have left you push yourself up off the floor and groggily back onto your feet
>Looking up, you despair at the sight that lays before you
>Most of the group is strewn about knocked out or groaning, but another 5 of them still remain
>One each disabling a limb of AJ's, while the last one wears her hat and holds a knife pressed against her throat
>In a scuffed and dirtied black shirt and jeans her wears a cocky toothy smile
>She looks as worse for wear as you
>Her green gilet gone and her shirt torn and ripped revealing her body
>Red bumps and bruises coat her torso and face.
>You can't see if she's conscious or not as her head looks down, but the rise and fall of her chest tells you she's still breathing
>"Was wondering when you'd finally decide to notice, although I was having fun watching you struggle"
>The voice in your head screams "Let her go!" but all you can do is breathe heavily
>"Like my new hat? Your girlfriend here was really reluctant to give it to me. But I managed to persuade her...eventually"
>They are far enough that if you bolted for them they would hurt her far worse than you could ever dream of fixing
>"Gotta admit you're both a pair of little scrappers, I'll give you that. If our girl didn't want you pretty much dead I wouldn't mind going toe-to-toe with you myself, but c'est la vie"
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>>25496022
>As he says that you feel a sharp punch in the small of your back
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>>25495770
Pakistan
>>25495669
Rhode Island
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>>25496026
>>25496026
And ? And?!
Oh god don't do this to me man!
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Just finished the this guy story so far in the pastebin
Nigga better not let rarity ruin everything with flutters
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Please god don't let this end in rape
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>>25496026
Time for Anon to use his limit break, "The Chicago Way"!
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>>25496026
Seriously, why doesn't the fuckwit have a gun.
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>>25497085
Michigan
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What about Paris? That's a nice place, right? :D
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>>25500106
Kentucky
>>25500815
As long as you paid the debt, sure.
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>>25501760
Perrysburg
AKA Northwest Ohio
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