We are his faithful hands!
Our previous thread: >>25212766https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/25212766/
Human Superiority's Pastebin and Manos green part I and II:
http://pastebin.com/u/HumanSuperiority
http://pastebin.com/QBMRbrPv
http://pastebin.com/C3cq16me
Backgrounds of Fate (Manos Side Stories)
MedicalKrabbyPatty's (aka: A Black Hand) Pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/u/AMedicalKrabbyPatty
In this thread we wait for Human Superiority's return and the continuation of his green.
Heil Manos!
>>25378307
We are in his hands whether we live or die.
Heil Manos!
>>25378307
Why is Sithis a Nazi?
>>25378337
First of all it's called National Socialist.
And second, I don't fucking know what you are talking about!
>>25378362
>>25378307
>>25378329
thanks ms harshwhinny!
>>25378434
something something video games
>>25378307
>>25378329
thank you mistress
>>25378307
Thanks Harsh!
>>25378307
>>25378329
Thank you again Miss and noice flag!
Ah. I love that new thread smell.
Thank you for making this, Ms. Harshwhinny. I hope that we can become good coworkers.
Attention, Sons and Daughters of the hands.
I propose a new award for all loyal SA (brownshirts) members.
>pic related
I also have a Black Hand equivalent that I can post if I am requested to do so.
>>25379017
>pic related
It seems someone fucked up again.
>>25379017
Attention, Sons and Daughters of the hands.
I propose a new award for all loyal SA (brownshirts) members.
>pic related
>>25379051
Posting from my phone, please forgive me.
>>25379053
>pic related is the BH variant.
>>25379307
Let's give our last farewell!
>>25379344
You will be missed, even though you hold little in terms of notable content?
>>25379441
>that shitty smiley
I have no words...
>>25379522
>smiley
Where's the smile you speak of?
>>25378307
Thx Ms. Harshwhinny.
>>25379679
She really is something, isn't she? She even managed to get me to stop behaving in an unprofessional manner!
>>25378329
Ms. Harshwhinny, I was wondering why you post do rarely. I would like to have a conversation with someone, but so few people post regularly these days.
>>25379703
But where unprofessionalism is not, extreme faggotry took over.
It's over, it's gone...
>>25380065
>faggotry
Aside from my name, what have I done to deserve such an insult? (tbqh, you'll probably be able to find a few things)
>>25380088
But its memory shall live forever. Now, let's make NEW memories!
previous posts
>you are Manos
>you continue your walk down the R&D laboratories
>as you pass each room you take a glance inside
>both to look for Honor Bound and to see what new studies are being done
>most of the rooms are just ponies looking over files and papers scribbling scientific data
>but there are a few that catch your eye
>one room had a few ponies replicating ammunition for the weapons you currently have
>a few other rooms had ponies trying to build a copy of the vehicle you brought back
>they are getting pretty close, but they dont have a working engine yet so its just a pile of metal on wheels
>finally you find Honor Bound
>he and cadence are looking over the designs you recently made
>both the new weapon and the plans to adapt the older ones to ponies
"how is everything shaping up Honor Bound?"
>the two ponies turn to you
>"Lord manos"
>Honor Bound bows his head
>"everything is going smoothly, however i have a few questions about you new designs"
"go ahead and ask"
>you walk inside and take a look at the collected designs both yours and other scientists
>"this new weapon.. the ammunition used in it seems like it would be different from that we currently have replicated."
"yes, it uses a different ammunition, it would be very similar to the smaller ones you have studied but a few changes. it shouldnt be too hard for your scientists to figure out"
>"i will have a team start research and development immediately. the sooner we have this new weapon the better."
>you look over to Cadence
"and while i have you here Cadence, ive been meaning to ask you something, what have you been doing with my little pet queen?"
>Cadence smiles a little proud of herself
>>"as of a few days ago she has been assisting me with keeping changelings in our camps orderly, its rather amazing how those little parasites can suddenly become perfect laborers"
>you dont look nearly as excited as she seems to be
"you really think thats a good idea?"
>>25380097
I offer a challenge to anyone willing to take it, and no one responds.
So, I guess I'm NEITHER unprofessional or a faggot.
>see new name
>>25380363
>Cadence smiles and walks to your side
>"dont worry about it Manos, i have her under control. if anything starts to go wrong ill put a stop to it."
"if anything goes wrong Cadence, it will go very wrong. keep her on a tight leash, but make sure she thinks we are in the right."
>you turn your attention back to Honor
"i heard you have a test coming up for a new engine?"
>>"yes Lord, we have a few trials to run and we need to decide on an effective power source but if everything goes well then we should be able to produce them quite easily"
"just be sure they can me manufactured soon, the longer this takes the harder it will be for us to make effective use of them."
>you stand up and look to your designs
"everything needs to be ready soon. war is already here, and we cannot afford to lose anything"
>>25380363
He has returned! Heil!
new shit
>>25380377
>speaking of war, perhaps you already have a weapon to use in the front..
>one that is older than warfare itself, but still as effective as it was when it was created.
"if you two will excuse me, i could only spare a few moments here. there is still a battle going on"
>"of course lord. and dont worry about our projects here, i can assure you. everything will be up and running soon sir."
>you give Honor Bound a look
>a 'dont make promises you're not sure you can keep' look
>>"and ill be sure to keep that bug in line Manos, dont worry. you can trust me."
"if you two insist. i leave this to you then, but i expect to hear good news on that engine soon."
>they give you a sieg heil and you leave the labs
>time for another change to warfare in this little world
>you are Aryanne
>you wake up with your head on Manos' bed
>as soon as your eyes open you notice something is different
>you look to the bed
"MANOS IS GONE!"
>the sound of your shout makes Lyra awake and fall from her spot onto the floor
>she quickly gets back up and looks at you and the bed
>"WHAT where did he go?! and why didnt he wake us up?!"
"i dont know!"
>why are the two of you yelling anyway?
>you stand up and check the room
>everything seems to be fine, besides the absent Manos.
"you think he got enough sleep?"
>Lyra shrugs
>"he might have, but any amount of sleep would have helped at this point. he might be feeling fine now"
"even if he is feeling fine again, we should find him."
>you are his personal guard, and that does require you to know where he is
"come on lets check the war room first, i have a feeling he might be there."
>the two of you leave the dark bedroom
>>25380391
good to be back.
>>25378307
i like that flag. its a good flag
>>25378329
You are a true hero Harshwhinny
>>25379053
>>25379170
i might have to do that. those are very good knives
>>25380367
Because you said yourself that we could find plenty of things.
You WANT us to roast you? 'Cause we will.
>>25379703
>She even managed to get me to stop behaving in an unprofessional manner!
But you behave worse than before...
I can somehow relate though. I'm here since the prompt and with time going by the story and the whole human supremacy concept somehow moved something in me. I'm not good with words, I can't describe it all too well but something has changed inside me. Well, long story short, I started to workout. I've been following the Couch to 5K running plan for 4 weeks now, running daily instead of three times a week and even began dieting... I already lost a lot of weight, another 8kg and I'll reach my ideal body weight. I wasn't fat but had a potbelly and was generally a couch potato, it's ridiculous I even started to take better care of myself and my appearance and make sure I greet everybody I see when I'm outside...
Man, I'm finally getting fit and it feels awesome! Becoming really superior is awesome! Thank you HS, thank you thread and Heil Manos!
>>25380363
>>25380377
>>25380392
>>25380441
Fuck yeah welcome back!
>>25380367
>new name
you stupid fuck what makes you think you would be worthy to be a black hand?!
everything you do is garbage, manos would gas you right away, you unprofessional piece of shit!
>>25380363
>>25380377
>>25380392
Oh boy oh boy it's good to have you back
>>25380392
>you are Manos
>you walk down the streets of your Reich.
>many ponies give you sieg heils, which you return with a smile and a nod
>this sudden war will be hard on them, ponies are just not used to warfare... yet
>you take a moment to look up at the large castle in front of you
>it seems odd that you have been inside and out so many times but you never really looked at it
>the large towers of crystal reach to pierce the skies
>the large banners of red clearly visible even in the furthest of locations, demanding the attention of anyone who looks
>your marks, your banner, your Reich.
"this little kingdom is just the beginning.."
>now is not the time for day dreaming
>you enter your castle and make your way back to your war room.
>there is a battle going on, and every edge you can get is necessary.
>you are Aryanne
>Lyra walks next to you as the two of you make your way to find Manos
>every Black Hand you pass gives you a salute
>its not very often that the two highest ranking ponies are seen together.
>well.. until recently
>as you walk you check every hall and room you pass just in case manos might be inside
"i cant believe he didnt wake us up"
>"its not like he cant take care of himself."
"you saw how he was acting before. how do we know he has had enough rest? what if he is chasing ghosts?"
>Lyra doesnt seem to share your concern and just shrugs
>"I have faith that manos will be fine. he has survived much worse than a few days without sleep."
>thats true.. but still, his safety is YOUR priority
>>25380546
I like all kinds of humor! Bring it on!
>>25380553
You need to step up your game and do paramilitary sports!
>>25380887
That gives me an idea. I doubt that Equestria has political parties, so Manos could use his Reich to introduce ponies to the concept of CHOOSING a leader. Ponies in Equestria would see this and public dissent in Equestria would increase as the ponies want to be able to choose their leader.
>>25380832
Ain't no humor here. Just the cold, hard truth.
>Changing names constantly
>Asking for attention (making the 'uniform')
>Asking for changes to the story
>Pretty much flooding the place with samefag-iness
>>That's me, btw.
>Talking shit about HS and pulling of a 'lol, jk'
>Not learning when to just become an Anon
>Pushing ideas nobody wants
>>Blackshirts.
I'd spend more time finding things, but quite frankly, you ain't worth much of my time.
>>25380932
This brings up another question. What would Manos' political party be called?
>>25380759
>your thoughts are interrupted by Lyra tapping on your shoulder
>"there he is."
>you hurriedly look to the direction she is pointing
>and sure enough there is Manos, walking down the halls escorted by several Black hands and a R&D pony
>you quickly check your uniform and snap to attention giving a sieg heil
"HEIL MANOS!"
>Lyra bows her head with a soft smile on her face
>Manos and his company come to a stop
>>"sleep well you two?"
>he returns with a small seig heil himself by raising his hand slightly above his shoulder
>>"i hope you are rested because we have a battle to win in Ponyville"
"Yes sir. lead the way."
>Manos' tall form slowly walks to your side and then moves to the direction of the war room
>you follow close behind the current ponies behind him giving you space as well as now protecting Lyra
>as he reaches the doors he waves over the R&D pony who hands him a small box
>>"thank you. let us get back to the task at hand. taking back the capital of our movement"
>the doors slowly open and the ponies inside all take a moment to look to the new arrivals
>once they see its Lord Manos they all give a sieg heil and most return to work while the organizers all gather for orders
>>"get me communications with all commanders."
>"yes lord!"
>You are Rainbow Dash
>so far the plan has gone well.
>you have made it down most of the hall to the final doors
>"alright pony."
>the large griffon takes a position next to you keeping low
>everyone here is nervous
>this will most likely be a one way trip for most of you
>"whats the final move?"
>your pegasi take positions around the last stretch to the large security door just a few yards away
>just beyond that door is the hive
>the hive that somehow was created without a queen
>the words from the Scientist keep repeating in your head
>"id like to find out why" "this nest could be a great boon to our research" "simply close the door with the griffons inside"
>the more you think about it the better the idea sounds
>>25381019
KEK! Keep going! I'm dying here!
>>25380441
>You are a true hero Harshwhinny
I live to serve, my lord.
Welcome back!
>>25381066
Ms. Harshwhinny, this guy, unprofessional as he is, doesn't deserve to be bullied, does he?
See >>25381019
>>25381046
>how can you think that?! youre the element of Loyalty! and you made a promise to the griffons.
>the griffons.. those birds that have been destroying your home
>that killed that pony in the woods who was no threat
>he was already gone before they got to him.
>you look over to the griffon
"give me just a second."
>the bird gives you a glare
>"alright but hurry it up. the longer we wait the more likely we dont get out of here."
"yeah. i know."
>you crawl over to some of your own pegasi
>they all await your orders.
>"commander?"
"theres been a slight change in the plan.."
>you are loyalty and you made a promise that you intend to keep.
>a promise you made to yourself.. to the citizens of ponyville, to that pony in everfree, to manos
>You are Rainbow Dash. the Element of Loyalty.
>and now its time to prove it.
"here are your orders."
>you give the orders to your pegasi
>they all nod their heads with a determined look on their faces
>"as you command. heil manos"
"heil manos"
>you return to the griffon and his remaining force
>"get everything settled then?"
"yes everything is ready, here is the plan from this point onward."
>you motion for the griffons to come over and hear
"how much flying have you birds done recently?"
>the griffons look to one another before coming up with a quick estimation
>"not much, we got here a few days ago so not since then."
"good that means you will be much faster than we are... what im going to ask you will depend on a lot of trust though."
>"and what are you asking?"
"im going to need you to go in first and create a distraction to pull most of the changelings away from the furthest door"
>you are quickly cut off by a few protesting griffons
>but the griffon you have been talking with previously stops them
>"enough!.. we will do it. she made a promise to get us out of here when this is over."
>he looks back to you
>"and i believe she will keep it."
"alright. so are you ready?"
>>25381285
Huehuehue. Dis gun' b gud.
food time. ill be back soon, hope that my vacation didnt weaken my writing too much. ill get back into the swing of it
no music in this thread yet? ill fix this!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z8fswp_17YM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ykaQb9gEgcU
HEIL MANOS! HEIL THE REICH!
>>25381285
>you are Manos
>you stand in the center of the room with the crystals all connected to various commanders
>you nod your head to the ponies in the room signaling you are ready to begin
>"your connected lord. you have the attention of all active commanders in the field"
"my faithful ponies... today i have a message for you all."
>you are Marble sunset
>and Manos is speaking over the communications
>"i have a message for you all.."
>you quickly and quietly move back to the campsite so the other ponies can hear
"silence everyone, manos is speaking to us all."
>the others make their way over to you and gather around the crystal
>"as you are all aware, ponyville is lost. but we will take her back."
>you are Rainbow Dash
>and you can barely hear the muffled voice of manos coming from your bag
>its too quiet for anyone else to hear but you can hear it clearly
>"the griffons have taken lives of innocent ponies, of foals and elderly ponies."
>you listen in a bit getting a little distracted from the situation
>"they are monsters, they deserve no mercy. from us, or from anyone."
>you look to the door just as the griffons charge inside
>as soon as they do there is a very loud wave of buzzing and clicks from the room
>soon to be followed by screams and the sounds of battle
>you and your ponies move in, standing just outside the room
>you can see the other door across the hall leading to the hive
>its clear, for the most part, and you get ready to move in on it
>you look back to your pegasi, then to the door again.
"im loyalty.."
>Manos' voice again comes to your attention
>"they have tortured and killed hundreds of your family and friends. and for what?.. for something as trival.. as greed."
>you hesitate
>"they are no better than the changelings in our camps.. no, in fact my ponies, they are far worse."
>you gently set your hoof back down and look to the door..
>"they killed for greed and fun, at least those beasts in our camps did it to survive."
>>25382005
>you are Marble Sunset
>you continue to listen to lord manos
>"but these griffons are not beasts, they can think, they can decide. just like we can."
>you look to your ponies and they have various looks on their face
>some determined, others sad or just calmly listening.
>"and they decided to become monsters.. think about that.. they chose to kill, murder, and burn. for no reason other than a few bits."
>you look to see one of your ponies spit in disgust
>"some of you might be asking what we fight for.. to those i say look to ponyville. look to the once proud city. its in ruin! bodies litter the streets and fires still burn! we have innocent ponies trapped inside being tortured! thats why we fight!"
>you are Manos
"we fight for our own protection! because the world looks down on us! they see us as weak little creatures they can walk over without a fuss!"
>there are a few ponies in the room recording what you are saying
>others continue to work just more determined than before
"they will learn otherwise. every day we grow stronger. with new weapons, new tactics, and the promise of Valhalla awaiting us."
>now that you have them wrapped into your speech its time to push it further
"but, there is another enemy besides the griffon that wish to prey on us. to keep us weak while they remain strong."
>though the ponies listening cannot see it, those in the room can.
>your face becomes more serious and determined as your eyes fall onto a letter waiting for you
>sealed with the royal mark
"The Royalists. the Sisters of the Sun and Moon..."
>you wait for a moment, before continuing
"for over a thousand years they have remained in power. now when a new way of life has been shown they suppress it, i myself have been arrested several times, accused of crimes, and have had been personally insulted by the sisters for what ive done. and what have i done my ponies? what crimes have i committed?"
>you take the letter and read over it
"well, i have a letter here.."
>>25381727
https://youtu.be/3iaEUWHVI2Y
>>25382295
OH SHIT IT'S ON NOW
>>25382295
Oh shit nigga! Deyz gun' get rekt!
>>25382295
Will anything happen to the ziggers?
>>25382295
"a letter, from the sisters, for a request to become a equal ruler as them, and for equestria to be stabilized and have any conflicts come to an end, what is their response to this offer? denied.. 'Manos, my sister and I have discussed your proposal for your prince hood of equestria an continual ruling of the Crystal Kingdom. im afraid this cannot be accepted as we fear you have ulterior motives and a desire for world conquest which Princess Luna and myself cannot allow."
>you forcefully smash the letter down so those listening my hear.
"even after all we do. after a chance for peace for an equal distribution of power amongst us so that we cannot become more powerful than the others. i am denied. we.. and our Reich have been denied. to even go as far as to not refer to our Reich as its own nation.."
>you then look to the reports that you have been given from marble sunsets updates
"but thats not all the royalists have done.. and, i wish this part wasnt true, because it leaves little options for me. i have, multiple reports.. and accounts from my own personal guards, as well as accusations from loyal guards that the princesses have been kidnapping, arresting, and torturing ponies who are associated with our Reich."
>you set down the reports and walk over to the maps
"she has already started a war with our small nation. in every sense of the word. she just hasnt declared it yet, so my ponies. here are my next orders... you are to enter the city, and remove all of our enemies. be they griffon.. or Royalists. we shall get our ponies back, we shall give the princesses the war they have already started..."
>>25382638
>you are Rainbow Dash
>you stand with your ponies just outside the room
>you can hear screams and pleas for help inside along with the noise of changelings biting and ripping apart the griffons inside
>then you hear the door slowly close with a loud clang
>"commander the door has been sealed shut"
>loyalty
"then lets head back, those ponies are still held up in that room waiting for the all clear"
>as you and your command start to walk away you can hear the voices of the griffons inside
>"you killed us!" "you damn pony traitors!!"
>you calmly respond as you continue to walk
"my loyalty to the Reich, and to manos, not to animals like you. heil manos"
>the others in your command all respond as one
>"Heil manos! heil the Reich!"
>>25382638
Ok everyone, form a neat orderly line. No pushing and shoving. There is room for everyone in the happening bunker.
>>25382717
>"my loyalty to the Reich, and to manos, not to animals like you. heil manos"
This is so fucking great!
>>25380553
wow im glad my story has changed someone so much.
i have a few things i have to do to be ready for work tomorrow. but im glad i got to write for you guys again.
as always constructive criticism is welcome!
Enjoy my other shit! (or dont idc)
http://pastebin.com/u/HumanSuperiority
pastebin will be updated soon
Feel free to discuss the story, ill be around for a while to answer questions
and Remember: You're human. Be proud, be Superior!
>>25382542
i'm sure manos has plans for all the dirty vermin that dwell in equestria
>>25382638
>>25382717
unf i'm hard now
>>25382893
can't wait hs
it's fucking awesome to have you back!
>>25382956
thanks its good to be back.
>>25382964
pastebin has been updated.been a while since ive said that!
>>25382893
>oops.png
Kek, assblasted Jewmod was assblasted.
Thank you for this superb new green HS! Till tomorrow then.
>>25382893
>>25382974
Thanks HS see ya tomorrow
Imagine if the stuff that happens in the 3rd Equestria Girls movie allows Manos to expand the Reich onto Earth.....
>>25382638
>>25382717
>>25382893
Wow that was lovely!
I kinda like corrupted loyalty cunt. I wonder if she can still use her element?! Because don't we need all the original six elements of harmony to nullify Manos' chaos elements and create perfect harmony? BTW how many chaos elements and bearers do we have already? I only remember Sombreros black crystals and as potentially bearers, those hot twins and candybutt...
>>25383255
>Earth
Ridiculous! That's not earth, it's just a sorry excuse! Manos said so himself.
>>25383312
Okay. We'll call it Skim Earth, because it's like the skim milk of Earths.
>>25383276
>those hot twins
i want to do lewd things with them especially the elder tomboy sister
>>25383386
God, the way you guys talk about those Gestapo chicks reminds me of the porno "Ilsa, She Wolf of the SS".
>>25383417
honestly i was thining of that when i first started writing Cadence.snapple fact
>>25383432
Oh god, you've seen that?
>>25383460
maybe...
>>25383417
>"Ilsa, She Wolf of the SS"
>Producer: David F. Friedman
I'm not even surprised.
>>25383432
>>25383460
>mfw I saw it for the first time.
>>25383511
>>25383511
Last bump b4 bed. Heil Manos!
Am I the only one who gets a xenomorph vibe from the Changelings?
>>25383825
yes and no
>>25384116
Explain
heil manos
bump b4 bed
boop
Page 10 guys. Don't let this happen.
>>25386763
page 8 bump
Bump b4 skool.
I'll just leave this here before I go.
>>25387471God I hate those wings!
boop
>>25388472
Just fuck off you subhuman faggot and never come back!
>>25388472
why are you even here?
>>25382893
I have a little request HS. Some threads ago you gave us a small hierarchy chart for the different organisations under Manos rule, which I found quite informative!
If you can spare the time, could you make a list with all the important and semi-important characters, alive and deceased, that have been given a name and have encountered Manos or mentioned in the story so far? I'm sure you already have something like that, to keep track of those many characters, if so, could you share it with us please? I hope it's not too much I ask for?! Anyways, keep up your awesome work, love your story!
"Persuade, change, influence." -motto of the United States Army PsyOps
>>25389339
Sure thing. It would be a pleasure, I've been meaning to make one for myself so I'll get right on it when I get home
>>25389428
Thank you most kindly HS!
I just realized something. If Manos is at war with the Griffins, he should focus on developing pic related.
For Anti-Infantry, use this.
>>25389880
>>25390104
didn't we have this panzer I and II conversation before?
anon, these are pone scientists that somehow try to copy some small arms, a shotgun, some ammo, a fucking hummer and two sketches from manos of a landship and a mg 42...
so please, don't expect too much of them.
>>25390269
I'm not saying he should use THE tanks in the pics, just have tanks yo fill those roles. An anti infantry and an anti air tank would be the two types he needs most at the moment.
boop
http://pastebin.com/2iFWvgSe - character sheet.
currently a WIP but i wanted to share what it has right now. ill be working on this for a little bit still
>>25391205
Marvelous it's even better than I'd hoped for!
Thank you HS and please do keep working on it!
>>25391205
very nice could you add the genders as well i always forget them especially with minor characters...don't forget those lovely delicious gestapo twins please!
>>25391326
>>25391420
thank you. and of course i wont forget the characters just wanted to upload what i had currently. like i said im still writing it out
>>25391205
>>25391440
More story lore, excellent!
Bamp
>>25382717
>walking back from the halls you notice something a little strange
>you cant quite tell what it is.
>"commander. now that the mission has been accomplished whats next?"
>you look to your pegasus ponies
"first we get back to those held up in this castle"
>you continue to walk as you speak
"we tell them the griffons and the changelings are taken care of and that any active military ponies still here are now under my command. we will search this castle from bottom to top for any survivors as well as clear out any changelings or griffons we might find."
>you happen to look down and see there is some changeling carapace stuck to your uniform
>you brush it off without a second thought
>"yes commander."
>you are manos
>and you have finished your speech to your black hands in the field.
>now come their next orders.
"to any able unicorns, this is your next mission. you are to amplify the sound of my voice coming from the crystals to be as loud as you can, i want the whole city to be echoing my words"
>there is a slight pause in actions in the room, mostly from curiosity
>you look down to the map that has the current positions of your forces
"you should each be surrounding the city in a blockade. once you have the areas i have previously ordered properly secured you will being to amplify my voice and defend your positions until i give any further orders. is this clear?"
>a series of affirmatives are given
"let me know as soon as you are ready and able to proceed, Seig Heil"
>"SEIG HEIL!"
>you set down the crystal and look around the room.
"could someone please fetch Cadence for me? she will be needed for this next part."
>>25392008
>fetch Cadance
Oh boy...
>>25392008
>you are Cadence
>even with the current situation in Ponyville the Changelings still need to be looked after.
>currently you are doing your daily routine of checking the output and removal rates of each of your camps
>you always get a warm fuzzy feeling whenever you see the removal rates.
>"Commander Cadence ma'am"
>you look up from your desk to see a Black Hand giving you a seig heil
>you look back to your desk and reports
"yes? what is it?"
>"Lord Manos has requested your presence in the war room. he said you are integral to the next phase in his current operation."
>you get up from your desk and look out to the main guard tower
>from here you can barely see Queeny looking out over the camps with two Black Hands by her sides
>she makes the perfect guard.
>you see her gesture to a shack and soon there are several guards and changeling enforcers entering it
>they soon come out holding several changelings to the ground in the middle of the yard
>from here you cant hear what is being said by the parasites
>but you dont care, this is your favorite part.
>"Cadence ma'am? are you ready to go?"
"yes yes, one moment. i just want to see these last few moments"
>just as you finish your comment a group of weaker and starving changelings are assembled in orderly rows
>if you concentrate you can hear Queeny's voice in the distance
>"you disgusting parasites have been hording contraband as well as slacking in your duties. you are unfit for labor in my camps!"
>you see her nod once to the enforcers in the yard
>soon they approach the changelings being held and start to rip chucks of their chitin off of them
>the high pitched screams fill the air from each chuck being removed.
"im starting to really like that queen.."
>you look back to the guard.
"alright, lets go. im sure im leaving this place in capable hooves."
>>25391326
>>25391420
quick side question. would you guys want me to add in characters from the side stories?it would have its own section of course
>>25392261
>>25392261
what the captain said
>>25392261>it would have its own section of course
Then I would have nothing against it.
>>25392261
Add Shia Lapone.
alright sorry about that. went to eat and updated the character page. ill post some more green now :)
>>25392738
>>25392738
you're doing gods work with that character page hs i fucking love it!you also should add that candybutt and our damn hot twins obviously want manos hot monkey di wonder who else has a crush on our lord? aryanne, lyra and little league maybe, luna and celestia probably...when this first war is over we should do some romancing!
>>25392836
i am serious.
>>25392246
>you are manos
>even if Cadence is not here you can begin this operation
"commanders are you ready?"
>"yes lord, everything is just how you asked, our unicorns are ready to amplify the communications"
"then the light is green. begin the spells."
>you wait for all of the correct signals to be given that the spells have been cast and are maintained by at least three able unicorns
"Griffon invaders.. this is lord manos."
>you are marble sunset.
>you are one of the few commanding ponies that are not part of this operation.
>you were told it would give away your position and make your current mission useless
>turns out that would have been the case
>in the distance you can hear the voice of manos
>"this is lord manos. you are unwelcome here. you are far away from home and cut off from any possible escape."
>this is strange
"what is he doing?.."
>"you are trapped in a land that is not your own. with no way of escaping. your commanders do not care if you return or not."
>you can see other ponies in your unit listening to manos' distant voice
>"what hope do you really have of making it out alive? here we are without number. even those inside the city are with us. and for each one you kill that only will bring the wrath of more."
>there is a silence for a moment then a new voice speaks
>its distinctly more feminine and it takes a moment for you to recognize it
>>"I can assure you griffons. that the ponies in the black hands and in the royal guard are more than able to remove you from the city i have been a member of the Black hands long enough to know how effective they are as fighters. have you heard of the battle of Ardennes? it was a battle of around three hundred black hands under the command of lord manos, against thousands of Sombras ponies"
>manos voice returns
>"does Sombra command you too? then you should know that he wasted thier lives. for after the battle only a few hundred remained what hope do you have?"
>>25392949
Aah some good old psychological warfare
>>25392949
>>25392899
glad you like it.
>>25392949
>you are manos
"you are far from your friends and families. you are trapped inside a city, is that what you call a victory?"
>cadence takes her own crystal and continues to speak
>she caught on quickly to what you were doing
>"for those of you who do not recognize my voice. i am princess mi amore cadenza. or princess Cadence. my voice speaking along with his should be proof enough of his reach"
"she has willingly given up her station as a princess of Equestria so she can continue to serve in my new Reich. surely that is something to be admired. perhaps you can do the same?"
>"lay down your weapons and come out peacefully, we can promise you will be treated well until we find a way to return you home."
"what other choice do you have? you can surrender to us or to the royals. and i can assure you. we have plenty of records of the way they treat THEIR captives."
>"we do not wish for war, and only desire peace. please lay down your arms and come out peacefully."
>you hold the crystal away from you so your voice doesn't get sent out
"Cadence, your voice might carry more weight than mine here. ill leave this to you for now, when you need a break let me know."
>Cadence continues to speak now with a rather cute smile on her face as she starts to enjoy her handiwork
>your approval must mean a lot to her
>you look over to a guard stationed at the door
"we will need water, and ponies willing to continue to spread these messages once we cannot. a constant stream of this should make things easier in the long run"
>>"yes sir, ill return soon with your water."
>you hand your crystal to Lyra
"lyra once Cadence is done you are to go next, either give hope and reassurance to the ponies inside or put the fear of god into the griffons"
>Lyra takes the Crystal in her magical grip with a slight bow of her head
>>"of course lord. im sure i can think of a few things to say about you."
>she is your hand of faith, no one could do this job better.
>>25393127
>>25382717
ONCE MOOOORE THE PONIES SHALL RUUULE EQUESTRIA. -Andd, we shall have... Peace.
>>25393127
>we can promise you will be treated well until we find a way to return you home.
Yeah, return them home, in body bags!
>>25393272
Kek.
>>25393272ah good to have you back Sheev
>>25393127
>you are Rainbow Dash
>you and your team are searching every corner of this castle looking for anything that moves.
>right now it is you and only three others in this current group
>and some have been ordered to help escort the civilians out safely and secure a evacuation point
"keep your eyes peeled. for those of who who don't know, changelings arent called that for the fun of it"
>"yes commander"
>there is a sudden crash in the corner of the room
>you and another pegasi quickly take to the air above the floor to get a height advantage
>while the other two ponies slowly move in to investigate
"come out, do not resist and take a quick test and you will not be harmed!"
>you see a very slight green glow before a pony in a black uniform steps out of the shadow
>he speaks to you in a frightened yet relieved tone
>he even has the right facial expressions
>>"thank goodness you found me! ive been trapped in here hiding from those damned parasites for days!"
>if it wasnt for that green glow you saw earlier you would have bought this story.
>that is a little worrying.
>you land in front of him and look him in the eyes
"what is your name Hand?"
>>"Noble Scribe ma'am!"
"alright Noble, mind if i ask you a few questions?"
>he gives no sign of worry
>"of course commander. ask away"
"while you have been here you must have come into contact with griffons, what have you heard about the current situation with the Zebras?"
>he scratches his head for a moment
>>"i heard about them taking ponyville. those damn Zebras, my brother was killed in the first battle with them"
>there is a sudden sound of metal piercing hardened flesh
>you continue to look him in the eyes as the pegasi you remained in the sky retracts her blade from his skull
"they must not know much about what happens outside the castle, good"
>the body falls to the floor there is a slight burst of green flame
>and a changeling corpse is all that remians
>>25393320Wouldn't miss the grand coup for the world
>>25393346
Yeah. Me neither, considering I was involved in the Harshwhinny Coup......
>>25393462
I named Manos.
>>25393478
Do you not know who I am, Sheev? I have been here for millenia, watching, waiting....
>>25393320
>you are Lyra Heartstrings. the hand of faith
>and its now your turn to speak
>you move the crystal to your mouth and speak softly
"my faithful children of fate. i know you must be scared and afraid right now, but there is no need to worry. you will be free soon. as i speak Manos' forces are amassing in the thousands to take back our city. this is our home, we know every street, every alleyway, and every blade of grass. we will have you freed soon."
>you look over to your bag and pull out a tome that you have been reading from in your sermons
"for those of you who are of the faith please. join me in a prayer, He is the lord of fate, and we are his faithful hands."
>although you cannot hear it, you can almost feel the response from your brothers and sisters of fate
>we are his faithful hands
"we shall not fear the dark, nor be blinded by the light, for he is here to guide us."
>"we are his faithful hands"
>you smile as you can only image what the griffons could be thinking
>they have not come into contact with a faith like this before
"he shall guide us to a new world. a world of peace and a world without fear."
>"we will stand by him"
"for he is the hands of fate"
>"and we are his faithful hands"
"for those griffons out there who dont know, Manos has done incredible things. he has predicted events, he has ended wars, and he has liberated nations."
>a few ponies in the room chime in with a few moments
>you make sure their voices can be heard
>"the return of nightmare moon" "the ponyville riots!" "the battle of ardennes!" "the parasprite infestation!"
>they keep repeating them over and over while adding more into the mix
>it must sound like hundreds of ponies voices
"and he can end this fight with but a word. if he ordered it we would all gladly give our lives to take yours. but he has given you a chance to live! surely he is kind, what have the royalists done? they have attacked and battered your forces. while we have given you a chance at life"
>>25393499
we all know who you are mr. unprofessional... and most of us filtered you
>>25393462
>>25393499
at least you stopped namefagging you unprofessional cunt
>>25393545
>>25393547
BINGO! Fear not, my little ponies, I wouldn't change for the world.
>>25393547
What about my namefagging?
>>25393651
Yes, what about his namefagging?
>>25393513
i have to stop here for tonight. tomorrow shit is going to get real.how will griffons deal with psych warfare?and how will the royalists react to the things said by manos and Cadence?
as always constructive criticism is welcome!
Enjoy my other shit! (or dont idc)
http://pastebin.com/u/HumanSuperiority
http://pastebin.com/2iFWvgSe - be sure to check out the character sheet. (still WIP)
pastebin will be updated soon
Feel free to discuss the story, ill be around for a while to answer questions
and Remember: You're human. Be proud, be Superior!
>>25393651
youre good sheev. i approve of you. im sure the others agree.
wonder what ArmAnon has been up to.
>>25393691
Yes we like him very much.if you know what I mean.
>>25393651
As we could prevent you from it...
Just don't become a pesky idiot like that unprofessional faggot!
>>25393677
Thanks for the awesome green HS and see ya tomorrow!
>>25393691
>>25393677
Goooooood. Heil Manos.
>>25393725Good. I just happen to be into that sort of thing
>>25393651
you're quite okay in my book sheev
>>25393778
Yes, he's quite good in my but- book too.
>>25393677
Until tomorrow then
>>25393822
>>25393677
Finish the guns and tanks please.I need this in my life
bump b4 bed
>>25394132i know you want your gun and tank porn.
>>25394271
HS, what ever happened to Discord? Will he ever be released?
>>25394316
hopefully only when we destroy his statue.
>>25394316
good question. he has been messing with manos' head recently.
>>25394377
Then he'll either be released as a last-resort weapon against Manos, or he will probably try to manifest himself through Manos' power. Either way complicates things.
>>25394377
Discord's an odd character. He embodies unpredictability, yet he was trapped in stone, as was p-r-e-d-i-c-t-e-d.
Talk about a walking contradiction.
>>25394474
but doesnt that suit him?..
>>25394499
MIND FUCK!
>>25394511
>>25394499
>>25394474
>>25394473
>>25394377
>>25394345
>>25394316
plans upon plans upon plans upon plans
>>25394536
HS! Take note of this cerebral shit!
>>25394499
Dubs confirm it suits him.
I can imagine Discord is the kind of troll to know when someone will kick up more chaos than he will. All the unintentional upheaval Manos is causing suits Dissy just fine and he's just kicking back to watch the mayhem. That's just my take on it.
On the note of tech innovation, I hope to see >pic related
>>25394555
>>25394777
all i can say is.. witnessed
>>25392899
>>25393499
>>25393677
>>25393822
>>25393844
>>25394377
>>25394499
>>25394511
>>25394555
>>25394777
Man just noticed all the digits we've achieved. If this isn't a sign, I don't know what is! We walk the blessed path as the faithful hands of Manos
SEIG HEIL! HEIL MANOS!
page 9 bump
Page 10 bump! You stupid niggers.
Boop
Boobs
>>25318115
>The both of you flinched when you heard thumps on the roof above you.
>You could see the shadows of two griffons perched on the building you were taking cover behind.
>Cloud puts a hoof over her mouth and you roll your eyes.
>You weren't stupid enough to make a sound.
>"Nice view isn't it?" you hear one say to the other.
>Cloud Chaser moved to get closer to the wall.
>"Yeah. You know I've been here before all this," the other replied.
>"Really now?"
>The only thing you could really do was stand there and wait for them to go.
>"Yeah, it was a long time ago though. The town was different then. I like what they've done with the place."
>You just closed your eyes and prayed they would leave.
>"Doesn't matter anym- wait a minute."
>You blood ran cold.
>Your sister readied herself and quietly unsheathed her dagger,
>"Do you see that?"
>Please go away please go away please go away please go awa-
>A scream on the street makes your wish come true.
>A mare gallops down the street with a two griffons already in pursuit.
>The two on the roof take off to join.
>You make a move to run that direction.
>There was no way in tartarus you were going to let her d-
>You nearly made it out of the alley when one hoof went over you mouth and the other draped itself around your chest pulling you back.
>Cloud can't do this!
>You struggled and yelled into her hoof as she held you tight.
>She had to let you go!
>You couldn't hear that pony's pleas for help anymore.
>Cloud made you look at her and she solemnly shook her head.
>You understood that nothing could have been done but that wasn't the point.
>The both of you used the distraction to cross the street and moved another couple of blocks before your anger boiled over.
>You suddenly let out a scream of frustration and bucked the nearest thing to you which happened to be an over turned cabbage cart.
"Dammit dammit dammit! I'm tired of watching ponies die!"
>Each word was punctuated by another solid buck.
>>25398567
>You didn't care if the fucking griffons heard you or not.
"Why are they doing thi-"
>You nearly fell when you hooves smashed through the wood.
"Stupid cart! Stupid griffo- g-get off of me!"
>Cloud Chaser tried to pull you away but you shook her off.
"I'm fine. Let's just go,you," you huff and start walking, not giving her a chance to say anything.
>You both duck into the next alley and so on and so forth until you stumble across another brown shirt all alone.
>The mare was just sitting out in the open staring off into space!
>Quickly you pull her into a building despite your sister's protests.
>Cloud kept watch while you looked her over.
>The good news was physically she was fine.
>The bad news was that she was not all there at the moment.
>If the blood spatter on her face was any indicator, she saw some things.
>The fact that she was unresponsive left the both of you with a difficult choice.
>"I say we make her comfy and leave her as much as I hate to say it. We can't really sneak out of the city lugging around dead weight."
"I'm not just going to leave her here for the griffons to find her!"
>"Then what do you suppose we do with her then, huh? Take a look around you, Flitter! Ponyville is burning. Our neighbors are dead in the street. We dont have a lot of options if we don't want to end up like them."
"I'll figure something out but I'm not just going to leave her here! It wouldn't be right!"
>"You don't think I know that? It wouldn't be right but I just can't see us getting out of this alive with her to worry about."
>Instead of responding you start rooting through the house for something annd you here and exasperated sigh.
>"Flitter, please don't make me do it. I don't want to have to it an order."
>You stopped rooting through the cabinet you were going through and looked to your sister in shock.
"You can't actually mean that," you stated.
>Of all the things you expected from Cloud Chaser, this wasn't it.
>>25398595
Who are you,
>>25398611
>You are Flitter.
>>25398639
No. Who are YOU? Are you a faget?
>>25398595
>However she made no effort to deny it and held her desperate look.
>S-she was serious.
>Completely serious.
"You're unbelievable," you said quietly in disbelief. "Absolutely unbelievable."
>"Flitter, your being unrealistic about this."
>Unrel-
>You?
>Being unrealistic?
"It doesn't matter if it's unrealistic or not, Cloud Chaser! It's not right and if you order me to do it I won't comply!"
>"Flit-"
"No, don't 'Flitter' me. I didn't join the brown shirts for something like this! I joined to help ponies and by Fate itself I will do just that."
>You crossed the distance between your sister and yourself, putting you muzzle against hers.
"And. I. Will not. Have more dead ponies on my conciseness."
>With that you turned and finished what you were doing.
>Cloud didn't bother after that and just silently kept watch as you fashioned a leash of sorts.
>It was for the best.
>If she argued any more, you might have said something you'd regret.
>The silence let you calm down a bit while you finished your craft.
>The way you saw it, the white mare at least trotted with you when you pulled her inside.
>Albeit with some difficulty.
>You figured you could lead her on with a leash.
>It wasn't the best thing but t would have to work.
>And besides, your little group didn't have that far to go.
>To make sure it worked you tugged on the leash and the mare followed you to the back door.
"Cloud we can get moving now."
>The mare hopped off the windowsill and joined you in the back.
>"Are you sure this is a good idea?"
>You grimaced.
"It doesn't matter," you reply testily. "She won't be here for some griffon to find her."
>You knew it was a terrible idea to be walking around with the mare on a leash.
>Never did you say Cloud Chaser was wrong.
>Your sister chose to go ahead and lead on instead f offering more of her opinions which would undoubtedly lead to more arguing.
>Your little group went out the back door and move forward a couple of blocks.
>>25398671
See and thoroughly read >>25378307
>Are you a faget?
Who bumps the thread with content? Yes.
>>25398709
>Eventually you get to a point where you could see the school house.
>It took you another hour just to get to this point but you were close.
>You weren't too far from the forest now.
>Ideally you would cut across the school yard and into the treeline beyond it but there was lot of open ground between the school and the forest.
>Not so much between you and the school but just enough to make you and your sister think twice.
>The less open ground you had to cover the better but this was the quickest way out.
>You voiced you opinion.
"I don't think crossing here is a great idea."
>"We've only been lucky this far not to be spotte- wait... Flitter look! We're saved!"
>You couldn't make out what Cloud Chaser meant until the the sun reflected off of their golden armor.
>Three flights of armored ponies flew overhead.
>You were going to be okay now.
>The Royal Guard was here.
And end greeny bump. Find out what happens next time on dragons ball PP.
>>25398727
YOU DIRTY NIGGER! TAKE THIS!
>pic related
>>25398567
>>25398595
>>25398709
>>25398769
Ah finally the continuation! I hope your injured hand is okay again ABH?!
>>25398611
>>25398671
>>25398926
You dirty subhuman Jew hoe newfag, how dare you to call second best writefriend a nigger! Imagine the Luger projectile between your eyes please.
>>25398769
>>25399879
No.
>>25399516
>>25399879
>>25399516
He's a dirty nigger who must be lynched.
>you are Fervent Blue
>and your home is currently in ruin
>luckily you were able to get out in time.
>griffons tore the place apart from top to bottom looking for any sign of pony life
>they are animals.. but animals only unleashed because of the chaos that Monster from tartarus created.
>him and his Black Hands..
>"daddy.. where is mommy?"
"shes going to meet us in canterlot sweeite.. im sure she will be ok."
>you give your daughter a loving nuzzle and hug
>"daddy.. im tired. and my feet hurt."
"alright baby. here climb on my back ill carry you for a ways."
>you lay down on the grass so your daughter can climb onto your back safely
>she is all you have left in the world now.
>her soft yellow mane and aqua fur a constant reminder of her mother.
>she wont be meeting you in canterlot like you said...
>you just dont have the heart to tell her yet.
"you all set sweet tea?"
>"yes daddy."
"alright uuuuup we go!"
>Sweet tea giggles as you quickly stand up straight making her bounce slightly on your back
>you start to trot putting a bump into each step, as you do you say
"brump bu bump brump bu bump"
>in a childish tune to keep your daughter spirits up
>she giggles and enjoys every moment
>you wish you could be a child again, to so easily forget troubles with a single moment of fun
>but you arent a child.
>as you walk on you keep yourself from looking back at the place you once called home.
>all you would see there is death..
>you whisper to yourself
"goodbye ponyville..""and buck you.. Manos.."
>>25400696
>Buck you Manos
U FOKING WOT M8?!
>>25399516And yes. MyBlackhand is better now. It was only because of my stupidity that I shot myself in the first place so don't feel bad for me senpai. Also painkillers are wonderful.
>>25400696
Very nice. Write more, friend.
>>25400696
Curse you royalist scum that's undermining of military morale!
>>25400696
>its been hours since you left ponyville
>and canterlot is still far in the distance, but its closer than it was before.
>you look onto your back and see your daughter fast asleep
>you cant help but smile at how peacefully she sleeps
>you reach back into your bag and pull out her small blanket
>with a bit of effort you pull it over her and lift up your wings slightly to keep her from falling off your back
>she likes to turn in her sleep..
>you softly whisper to your little filly
"goodnight girly. we will nearly be there when you wake up."
>you look back to canterlot just in time to see a force of pegasi in royal armor take flight towards ponyville
>you cant help but smile
>for all you know your brother might be in that unit.
"go get em guys..."
>you start again on your trek to the safest place you can think of
>the only place where you KNOW you will be safe from the chaos Manos and his 'Reich' might cause
"and be safe, loyal ponies seem to be in short supply these days"
>at least Lunas night is just as beautiful as when you were a little colt
>with the comfort of the night princesses sky you continue on
"ill never understand why the ponies left such beauty for such chaos."
>>25400696
this >>25400846nonetheless continue please
>>25400696
>>25400849
hope you guys liked that mini green. thought it would be nice to occasionally post some from the other sides perspective
>>25400696
>>25400849
So much work to do for our Crystal Gestapo. Mass executions of traitors can't come soon enough!
>>25400874You have done well friend! I hope you will deliver more in the future!
>>25400874
You are the second biggest nigger here, next to that nigger black hand.
Let HS do the writing, faggot.
>>25399516
>Imagine the Luger projectile between your eyes please.
kek
>>25401013
seriously? you want a thread dedicated to just one writefag? when you could have a thread with many, all giving you free content, in a 'universe' you are interested in?
>pic related
>>25393513
>you are Cinnamon Pop
>you and the rest of the team have a very important mission
>and that mission is
>"nothing! we have been sitting here in this barracks for days now!"
"calm down Comet. with everything going on and Manos needing to be overseeing operations how much could we REALLY do?"
>Comet is going on one of his rare, yet over the top stampedes of anger.
>"oh! i dont know! ANYTHING!?"
>you turn the page of your dirty magazine
>there hasnt been an inspection for a while so you happened to.. procure one from one of the crystal rookies
"we are his shield.. and when his shield is not needed we wait."
>you happen to get a look at Comet starting to stomp his way over to you when a pillow collides with his face
"nice shot."
>>"give it a rest you two, we all want to get out of this barracks, but until we get orders here is where we stay"
>you give a calm response
"Almond has a point Comet."
>>25401013
As long as those background stories don't interfere with the main story or violate canon lore I see no problem here.
>>25401045
Welcome back HS!
>>25401045
>you are Comet Glow
>after removing the puffy projectile from your face you get back to your hooves
"fine. you two can sit here and enjoy each others company. in the meantime im going to go do some PT"
>"whatever you say Comet!"
>>"be sure to be back before we get a mission, otherwise we might leave without you"
"nah, you two would miss me too much if you left without me"
>you can hear a dry chuckle from Cinnamon as you leave the barracks
>you walk down the halls casually, you never intended on actually working out.
>it was just an excuse to get out of that bunk, though you doubt you needed one.
>"excuse me sir!"
>you look to the voice speaking to you and standing there is a mare in a black hands uniform
>"are you Comet Glow?"
"yes i am, whos asking? i mean, besides a pretty face."
>the mare is unimpressed.
>"you are needed in the war room. Manos informed us of one of your past experiences in Canterlot that we could use in his new operation."
>you are quiet for a moment
>"ugh, just come with me..."
"ill follow a pretty mare anywhere."
>the mare rolls here eyes and gives a general look of annoyance as she walks you to the center of operations
>she quickly opens the door and motions for you to enter
>"here we are. luckily for me thats all i needed to do."
>the mare starts to walk off and your eyes make sure to enjoy every second of it
>"if you ever want to meet up sometime just call"
>she doesnt respond
>>"Comet. so good of you to join us, and i see you still have a way with the ladies.."
>you quickly snap to attention and give a seig heil
>you would recognize his voice anywhere
>>"well comet. now you need to say a few words about your previous date, specifically the one in canterlot. im sure you remember that lovely night"
>you smile a bit rolling with Lord Manos' humor
"of course i do sir, how could i forget such a great conversationalist such as her."
>>25401164
>"of course i do sir, how could i forget such a great conversationalist such as her."
nice i hoped we would see her again
>>25401164
>you are Manos
>you lead comet over to the battle map
"so here is what is currently happening, listen close because im only saying this once"
>comet nods
"we have encircled the entire city of ponyville. however only this half is under MY control. the other is royal guards"
>you tap the center of town
"here we believe is the location the largest concentration of griffons and captives are located, can you see how this location is a problem?"
>comet looks at the map for a time
>"it is the center of town, it connects every street, road, and building. the only way to take it would be to go straight in"
"while that is true, thats not what i see. what i see is a choice, they know they cant get out by fighting, or at least most are learning. but now they will have to choose who they would rather surrender to once fighting is out of the question."
>you move your hand to the royalist forces
"and i dont want them to get my ponies, or my possible new sources of intel."
>"so what is the plan sir?"
>you point to Lyra as she continues to speak about you into the crystal
"to educate those who need to learn which side is the right one."
>you take a moment to listen to Lyra
>>"Manos only desires peace in equestira. peace for all, why do you fight against that--"
"you understand now?"
>comet nods in affirmation
>"yes sir, i do. you want me to describe the royalists little QnA session with me."
>you smile at the clever little pony
"yes i do. and i want you to not spare any detail on how 'horrible' and 'scaring' it was."
>you stand up and begin to leave the room
"ill be back shortly. i believe Honor has a few new toys that are about to be finished."
>you hear a simulations sieg heil as you make your way to the labs
"i might be able to get a proper field test after all"
WTF page 9 bump...
>>25401923
>>25401311
>you are Honor Bound
>and right now is the moment of truth
>"we are ready to begin!"
"proceed"
>you stand behind a safety wall with a pair of goggles on as two ponies enter your new device
>"applying first crystal!"
"understood!"
>click...
>...
>"first crystal failed not enough power. preparing second trial"
>there are a few moments of waiting as they switch out the power sources
>"beginning test of second crystal power source!"
>there is a click then a loud rumble in the room
>"device is powered!"
"carry on with the next stage!"
>you can feel your heart racing
>after days of testing and many failures you may have got it
>"power level is stable! moving now."
>you can barely contain yourself as the machine begins to roar to life even more
>it slowly starts to move forward, the large treads picking up speed as it goes
>"beginning the course"
>the machine at its full speed charges towards a set of obstacles in front of it
>at a specific distance the crew is supposed to turn and avoid hitting it
>"lowering power to left side treads!"
>as they do the machine starts to turn, barely avoiding the makeshift wall
"hold position!"
>it takes a few moments but eventually the machine stops.
>it continues to run
>"prepare weapons test!"
>this is your favorite part, however its usually where things dont work out
>the top of the machine opens up as a unicorn takes control of the long barreled weapon on top
>"loading primary weapon!"
>you observe as the pony slowly loads the device with a projectile belt
>"ready to fire on command!"
>targets are set up on the far side of the yard
"fire!"
>>25402230
IT'S HAPPENING!
>>25402230
Finally! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AwW31u6wYvE
>>25402230
>there is a click
>"weapon malfunction! clearing weapon!"
>the unicorn lifts the belt out and clears the weapon then reloads it
>"ready to fire"
"fire the damn thing!"
>you hear a racking.
>then there is a series of loud cracks filling the air.
>you look to the targets at the end of the yard
>the ponies aim is either off or the device is firing too high
"lower the weapon! projectiles are too high!"
>you see the holes in the wall slowly move down to the targets
>CRACKCRACKCRACK CLANK!
>"weapon jammed!"
"for the love of manos! what keeps messing up!?"
>you get out from behind the wall and march over to the warmachine
"move aside!"
>you hop up onto the machine and inspect the weapon
>gripping the casing in your magic you remove it from the receiver.
>you pull out a few from the belt to compare them
"Manos damn it!"
>you throw the shells to the ground
"if i said it once i said it a thousand bucking times! make sure all the shells are the same bucking measurements!"
>you grip the projectile belts in your magic and toss them to the nearby scientists
"go through and double check each and every one. failures like this are made from simple laziness, i will not have lazy ponies under MY command!"
>"yes sir Honor!"
>you see the ponies rush back inside with the projectiles as you take a seat on top of the warmachine
"its simple measuring, you can make a device from another world run.. but you cant bucking measure.."
>"lord Honor sir?"
>you didnt even notice one of the ponies came back over to you
"what is it?"
>"L-lord Manos is here sir."
>great
>>25402382
>you are manos
>you are observing a select group of ponies try out your new weapons
>considering they didnt have much to work with you are surprised at the variety of devices on the table
>an all to eager unicorn scientist explains each and every one to you
>"with the plans you gave us for these new weapons we have been improving and experimenting with our own ideas!"
"such as?"
>the unicorn takes one of the more simple looking weapons
>"this one for example. a simple lever is used to fire the device, much like the ones you brought with you, only larger"
>he lifts up one of his hooves
>"for obvious reasons. however it also requires you to be balanced quite well since.. it requires two hooves."
>he sets it down
>"as you can imagine, it failed as a useful way to fire on the move. so we made this"
>the scientist motions for a pony to come over.
>a Earth pony walks over and soon is being hooked up with a harness for the weapon on his shoulder and back
>"if mounted on his back a 2nd pony may fire the weapon from a stable position OR! if its attached here on his shoulders like so."
>the pony walks over to a firing range
>the weapon extends just far enough ahead of him for him to grip the "trigger" with one hoof
>it fires off a short burst then another each one being controlled by the earth pony
>he then starts to slowly walk and fire
>however the projectiles are getting further and further away from the targets
>"he can fire and move, to an extent, but at the cost of his accuracy."
>the pony has the weapon removed and moves back to the others waiting on the side of the room
"that seems like it wouldnt be very effective.. how would he load it?"
>"im glad you asked lord! we found--"
>the doors behind you suddenly open as Honor Bound walks into the room
>>"forgive me lord. i was preoccupied with another test."
"i hope it went well."
>Honor nods his head
>>"i can honestly say everything mechanical is working as it should.. just a few user errors are left"
>>25402571
>"i can honestly say everything mechanical is working as it should.. just a few user errors are left"
nah nah don't you fib copp... honor bound
bump b4 bed
>>25402571
>the pony looks far more nervous now that Honor is in the room
>uhm.. yes well.. as i was saying.."
>Honor gives him a even look
>>"yes please. go on with the demonstrations."
>"we found it was best used with a team of ponies. groups of two or three being the best fit. with at least one unicorn."
>Honor cuts off the scientist
>>"a unicorn is better suited to firing this device, since they have magic steadying the weapon and reloading it is made trivial. however we needed to make it usable by all ponies in case of emergencies or in situations where a unicorn is not present"
>"exactly, so a team of around three ponies would be a best fit, one to fire one to load and one being able to do both."
>you look over to the table at the smaller weapons laying there
>they look very odd.. like a regular gun but with a grip on the side rather than the bottom
"and what of these? i assume they are held by the mouth?"
>"yes as you can imagine they are quite hard to aim.."
>Honor speaks up
>>"we quickly tossed that design out"
"and replaced it with?"
>Honor bound walks over to a metal crate on the far side of the table
>>"with this"
>he opens the large crate and pulls out a helmet
>>"this was something that we thought of after looking through some of my.. predecessors designs for armor"
>he levitates the helmet onto a nearby pony
>>"have him geared up"
>several scientists move to the crate and pull out various pieces of armor
>after having all the armor applied two of the machine guns are attached to his shoulders with a hard click
>>"since unicorns wouldnt need to have any gear to operate the weapons from their magic we thought of playing to a earth ponies.. strengths"
>the last part is a red crystal that is inserted to the back of the armor powering it
>>"and i mean that quite literally. only earth ponies will be able to operate this due to the amount of muscle needed to move, the crystal powering it will make most of it easy but if it fails then its all up to the pony"
>>25402818
>pone power armour
we're going to rule this fucking planet!
>>25402571
>User errors
>>25402818
"i quite like this, no i love this"
>you approach the armored up pony and examine the armor
>you can hear a hum emanating from it
>"what you are hearing is pure magic being pulled from the crystal into the armor."
"this must be rather complicated. im surprised you had time to make this."
>Honor Bound speaks up
>"to be honest sir, most of the planning was done a long time ago, it was intended to be for stealth armor much like Blackouts"
>you stop feeling the armor..
>the warm hum of its power source suddenly losing is charm
"blackout.."
>"lord manos?"
>you take your eyes off of the armor and look to Honor Bound
"nothing. its well designed."
>"and very complex and hard to make.. while i would love to see all our ponies equipped with this, its simply not feasible in our current state."
"we need more resources?"
>"and factories, and laborers, and time."
>you look back to the armor
"has it been tested yet?"
>the silence is the room is all the answer you need.
"good. have this and any others you might have created shipped out. its getting a trial by fire."
>the same scientist from before speaks up in a worried tone
>"b-but lord! it has no field tests at all, the most we know about it is it moves properly and the weapons can fire"
"hm seems like thats plenty of testing to try it out."
>"Lord manos' sir.. I"
>you turn back to the pony
"WE ARE AT WAR, perhaps you havnt grasped that idea yet?! there are both civilians and soldiers out there in ponyville in danger, now have this armor ready and in the field as soon as possible or you will be out there in its place! is that clear?!"
>the pony looks to have shrunk a few sizes and is stammering and shaking from your outburst
>"y-y-y-yes lord. r-r-right away!"
"Honor, whatever errors you still have can be overlooked for now, get those tanks moving. ive waited long enough for my city to be taken back and i wont wait much longer."
>you hear no protests as you storm out
>this is war, time is a commodity.
>>25402939
And now Honor is fucked.
Wait, if they are based on Blackout's armor, are surgical modifications needed for the user?
>>25402957
>based on the armor
its not an exact copy. and instead of being fused into the pony and running of their inherit magic it uses an outside source...
i probably should have explained that in the story.. i had that thought in my head as i was writing it.. oops..
>>25402974
Lel, stupid nigger.
>>25402981
well.. not much i can do about it now.i could always add that into the pastebin though
>>25402974
Eh. That's one of the advantages of using this medium for storytelling. Your audience gets to ask for clarification.
>>25403011
well its my fault for not typing it out. i just instead thought it in my head and went, oh yeah that makes sense, and kept on writing without explaining. that is a writefags job after all
bump. enjoying all the green
>>25402939
My wish has been granted. Thank you based HS.
>>25402818
>>25402939
its time.. we will cleanse the world with fire and faith, only the pure will survive.
Heil Manos!
>>25402939
Thanks for the green, sir. My hype for the next part can't be described.
HEIL MANOS!bump b4 bed
boop
Lel, you're all a bunch of faggots who can't get laid.
>>25405944
thanks for bumping our thread with fancifully humorous content mate
>>25405944
But anon, I got laid over the weekend...
Can I still be a faggot?
>>25405944
>Lel
Back to leddit with you, you dirty subhuman!
burp
Boobs
>>25402306
Such a satisfying sound.
You're all assholes. Go to /trash/.
>>25408121
And you're a dirty Jew. Go to thegaybathhouse and gas yourself.
>>25408121
Thanks for the bump.
>>25408121
>>25405944
its very nice of you to show up whenever we reach page 8 or 9 to 'insult us' :^)
>>25408661
No problem,asshole
>>25408691
>>25402818
>"and what of these? i assume they are held by the mouth?"
>"yes as you can imagine they are quite hard to aim.."
>Honor speaks up
>"we quickly tossed that design out"
Kek, fuck you FOE!
>>25409166
One could say, the design got/trash/ed
page 8 bump
Page 7 bump
Wow, you all really ARE stupid if you can't say anything other than "bump". Even those nigger writefags contribute more.
>>25410242
>Keeping a thread alive while writefags are doing something else
>Stupid
Do you lurk the thread for fun? because the IP counter hasn't changed
>>25409166i actually like FOE, but the guns just dont make sense
>>25402939
>you are the earth pony in the armor
>"ive waited long enough for my city to be taken back and i wont wait much longer."
>you turn your head to see lord Manos leave the room as Honor Bound just closes his eyes and takes a breath
>the hum of the magic engine on your back is the only noise in the room before Honor bound clears his throat
>"ehhum. well.. that could have gone a bit better."
>you dont even recognize the sound of your own voice
>the armors voice is a deep and emotionless tone, almost soulless
"when am i shipping out?"
>"Manos' orders were clear. you will be shipping out as soon as we are able."
>Honor Bound walks over and inspects the armor
>without the armor you would be around eye level with him but in this he is a hoof or two shorter
>"at least this project has come out with little flaws."
"what about the 'tanks' manos was referring to?"
>Honor bound takes a step back and looks to his papers
>"as i said, just a few minor issues to work out. most of them user based.."
>you're not sure if you believe it. but it is unwise to question a superior
>after a few more moments of silence you are given orders
>"find the other operators. and inform them of our upcoming.. trials."
"yes sir. by the will of manos i serve."
>"heil manos"
"heil the Reich"
>>25410333
He's probably unproffesional faggot.
>>25410345
Armor voice sound:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ecB6Eh7f3l8
>>25410358
Bitch, that asshole is a nigger, but not as big of a nigger as you! I lurk because I like to troll you faggots. If the Unprofessional guy shows up, he'll get his.
>>25410345
>you are Aryanne
>you have been guarding the war room since you and Lyra have arrived
>not much else you can do.
>Comet walks over to you as he waits for his chance to speak to ponyville
>"commander."
"Comet"
>"im going to be honest commander. we have been getting restless just sitting around in the barracks. not that we dont enjoy R and R."
>its to be expected. after weeks of constantly being in the front or in other operations doing nothing must be worse than being in danger
"im sure it wont be much longer until manos has another idea that requires our personal touch."
>Comet chuckles
>"of course he will. its just boring waiting around here.."
>you walk over to the map leading Comet to view it with you
"i can only imagine what change this one battle will cause. we are on thin ice with the princesses.. and they with us. its only a matter of time before we might be fighting our own.."
>you dwell on that thought for longer than you would have liked
>"its a scary thing to think about.. commander. thats for sure. but i think in the end we are on the right side."
>you smile
"of that i have no doubt."
>you both take a moment to listen to Lyras final words to those in ponyville
>>"we are his faithful hands.. fate is on our side. what could be on yours?"
>you are Rainbow Dash
>after a few more hours of clearing you have found a handful of black hands and almost double the amount of brownshirts and civilians
>its time for you to get out of the castle
"alright everypony, we are leaving the castle. for those of you who dont know me i am commander rainbow dash, and a personal guard to Manos i am in command here, once we evacuate this area we will be linking up with a larger force just outside of everfree. keep your eyes peels and weapons ready for any griffons or beasts that we may run into. with our larger numbers stealth will be hard to maintain but i ask you all do the best you can."
>you turn to the guards you positioned at the doors
"lets move out"
>>25410362
"It is better to die for manos than to live for yourself"
I wonder if copper gonna pull a deus ex machina and come back.>"Even in death, I still serve."
>>25410508
>you are Blackout
>everywhere you go ponies give you salutes and smiles
>some even go as far as to compliment you with things like "your passage to Valhalla is more assured than anypony else"
>Valhalla
>you dont necessarily believe in an afterlife, but its nice to think you have a 'free ticket'
>"Blackout!"
>you turn your head to see a group of young stallions and mares running up to you
>>"woah it really is blackout!"
>"are you really a earth pony? i heard you can do magic with that armor"
>you have a bit of trouble finding your voice
>or rather, words to say.
>"hey can i have your signature?"
"uh.. sure?"
>the pony holds out a piece of paper
>you calmly sign your name on the page
>Little League.
>the stallion grins and looks to the paper when his face turns a little confused
>"this says little league.."
"thats my real name."
>you let your helmet close up over your face so the small crowd can see the armor work
"and im Blackout."
>"thats cool... but.. can i get you to sign 'blackout' too?"
>your heart sinks a bit
>but you push that aside for now
"uh, sure."
>you take back the page and sign 'Blackout' below your name
>"thanks blackout! this is so awesome. it will be a great thing to show my comrades."
"comrades?"
>is he in the military? hes barely a stallion
>but, youre still a filly.. technically.
>"yeah! i signed up just a few days ago. i start training in a week"
>the others gawk at your armor and your signature
>you look at all their young faces
>you hope they will be able to smile like this in the future.
>"what about you? are you going to be kicking more badguy flank?"
>you dont respond
>how can you respond
>youre a hero to them for the things you have done
>the things that still give you nightmares..
"y-yeah.. yeah ill be getting more badguys soon.."
>>25410642
NO! Don't create any more storylines until you finish this war shit!
>>25410686
calm down. its just to update you on blackout
>>25410695
Just please give us some green of Celestia vs. Manos tonight.
>>25410642
>you are Manos
>and you are tired of waiting.
>you dont have the time to wait around for everything to be perfect
>sometimes you have to roll the dice and make the best of what you have
>and what you have is more than enough
>you walk out to the field in front of the labs
>you can hear the sound of ponies rushing in and out of doors and metal on metal
>after a few minutes of waiting the main gate opens up
>you hear dull thuds of lumbering suits move out of the yard
>five ponies suited in the armor that was shown to you walk up to you and come to a stop
>"our armor is but a tool of your will, heil manos"
>you rise your hand calmly
>then the sound of engines come to life and a set of three armored tanks roll out of the yard closely behind them
>they too come to a stop, just behind the armor
>a nice little company of armor.
>five suits of combat armor and three tanks
>you feel a smile come to your face
"what are we waiting here for?"
>you walk up to one of the tanks and climb up onto it
>looking to a black hand door guard you shout to him
"tell aryanne and those under her command to meet me in ponyville, ill be needing my bodygaurds once i arrive."
>"yes sir! right away!"
>the messenger rushes off
>you tap the top of the tank and the lid opens up revealing a unicorn driver
"ponyville or bust."
>"yes lord."
>the unicorn does his best to make room for you inside the small space
>its not enough for you to sit inside it, your top half sticks out of the top
>at least you can see everything clearly
"armor operators hitch a ride on the tanks, you will slow us down if you walk."
>>"yes lord"
>the lumbering suits climb onto the tanks doing their best to evenly disperse themselves across them all
"forward.."
>the engine begins to roar as the tank lurches forward and begins is travel
>you cannot wait to see how they preform in the field.
>>25410823
IT'S HAPPENING!
>>25410823
Lord Manos should requisition his own suit of power armor and his own battle tank.
>>25410841
Manos = Wittmann
