Revival Edition
>Be driving home from work
>See this
>You know the next bus won't be for another 90 minutes
>The temperature is steadily dropping
>It will be nightfall in less than an hour
>It's not a well lit road
>What do?
Strayanon Pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/uZpEN319
>>25254005
should we move to another general?
>>25254022
I really don't think you have much choice.
Eh, might be a good idea. I'll keep writing the story regardless.
Any suggestions?
Page 10 bamperooni
>>25254413
I would appreciate more child sexual adventures.
>>25255588
What he said.
>>25254005
Rather fondle Sleeping Belle.
>most of the people here are labeled on the sign in the top left
>le funny green arrow mee mee
>>25255588
>>25255609
Don't you worry, fellow Anons
There will be more to come
>>25256375
SPEAKING OF MORE LETS GO AAIGHT
"You're pretty awesome Dash, we should catch up more often"
> She shoots you a grin "If it goes like this? I completely agree!"
> You wave over to the kid behind the bar for a couple more drinks, and he nods, heading to the tap and sending a waitress your way
"So who all else is in your little group of friends?"
> Rainbow thinks for a moment "Well, There's me and Applejack, who you know, Rarity, you met her when she picked up Sweetie Belle"
"The prissy white one yeah?"
> She tries to hide a giggle "Yeah, that's the one, she runs a fashion line and can't stand being anywhere with less than 4 different clothing stores"
> You both share a laugh at that. Seems your first impression was right
> "Then there's Fluttershy, really runs an animal shelter and is studying to become a vet. Really quiet and jumpy"
> Your drinks arrive and you tip the waitress with a fiver
> "Twilight's a librarian in the next town over, kinda awkward and a serious egghead" Rainbow continues, starting on her next drink
> "And Pinkie owns a party supplies store, but she's been there less and less on 'confidential business' lately, it's weird"
> You too start your drink, putting the picture together in your head
"I've seen most of them come and go, don't think I've seen Fluttershy at the farm though"
> Rainbow snickers "Probably just didn't see her, she's like a field mouse"
> You enjoy eachother's company for a while, drinking late into the night before you realise the time
Also paste for this part because I'm a derp
http://pastebin.com/7vPz0fFt
>>25257596
I'm drunk enuff that i don't care what I'm tyoping, but keep it up, nigger. don't let the masses dictate urs tory. wirte what you feels good.
>>25257637
Thank YOU random anonymous poster!
>>25257596
> RD yawns, stretching her arms back and above her head
> You take the chance the world hands you, and take a quick look at her chest as she pushes it forward, hoping she doesn't catch you
> It's nothing super impressive, but as athletic and fit as she is, a smaller chest suits her even more
> You feel a stirring from below, and try to ignore it, finding something else interesting to look at
"Want me to drive you back home?"
> Rainbow blinks a couple of times, then smiles "That'd be great Anon, thanks"
> You both stand and head for your car, and you're silently glad you haven't been drinking too much
> It's really starting to cool down, so you make the trip quick and flick the heater on immediately once you're inside
> She sticks her hands up to the vents in your car, and you take off down the road, heading toward the bright lights from the stadium
> Rainbow gives you directions as you drive, and it doesn't take long until you pull up outside a small house on the street corner
> It's pretty plain, not too big, though large enough to have too floors, and the plain brick exterior fits the surroundings
> A brush of purple hair pokes up by the window, then the door opens and Scootaloo runs out
> "Rainbow, you're ba-- ANON?!"
> She stands there in shock, before running up and giving you a hug one after the other
> "What're you doing here?" she asks, looking you and Rainbow over "Have you guys been drinking?"
"Yes it's me, I'm dropping off Rainbow Dash, and yes we have been drinking"
> You give a summary answer before smiling at her
"Why're you still up Scoots? Shouldn't you be in bed by now?"
> She sighs, and Rainbow steps in and answers for her "She was probably waiting for me to get back. Doesn't like to sleep without someone else in the house"
>>25257701
> You decide not to ask about that, instead just ruffling Scootaloo's hair
"Alright, well you guys take care, give me a call if you need anything, Dash, you've got my number"
> You go to step back toward your car when Rainbow calls out to you
> "Wait up Anon, weren't you gonna let me copy your music collection?"
> Oh right, that's a thing
> You head off toward the house, following after RD and Scoot, who shuts the door behind you
> "I'm gonna go get changed, Scoot, try to be in bed at a reasonable time alright? Anon, just make yourself comfortable or something, I'll be about 20 minutes then we can see about grabbing that music"
> Rainbow's couch actually is pretty comfortable, though the place is a bit of a mess
> There's pizza boxes spread over the table and you can see a few crushed beer cans that missed the bin scattered across the floor
> You go to lean further into the couch when you see Scootaloo pop up next to you
"What's up Scoot?"
> She looks pretty nervous, which isn't surprising. This is the second time you've met, and you've already...
> You don't even finish the thought
> "So... Are you and Rainbow... Y'know..."
> You snort loudly, that's what this is about?
"Hahaha, no Scoots, definitely not. We just had a few drinks at the pub after collecting AJ"
> Scootaloo visibly brightens, jumping up beside you on the couch and snuggling up to you
> It's not unwelcome, that's for sure, so you wrap your arm around her
> She sighs happily, laying there against your side
>>25258197
Glad to see you continue, really enjoy your story
Good story
Oh fuck yes I finally found you StrayAnon!
Let the glory continue!
ayy lmao its STRAYA CUNT
>>25258197
daww
>>25258197
> A few minutes later she pulls herself up again, grabbing your hand
> You wonder why she's so fidgety, but before you can ask, she says "Hey, come check this out"
> She pulls again, and you're forced to leave your comfy spot on the couch to go upstairs with her
"What is it?"
> "Just come on" she insists, pulling you along the hall and finally into a room at the end
> From the fact the door says 'Scootaloo' on it, you're guessing it's her room
> You step inside and are immediately hit by the huge contrast between her personality and her belongings
> Everything is neat and tidy, bed made, shelves clean and sorted
> Christ, there isn't a single thing out of place in here
> "This is my room!" she says proudly, puffing out her chest
> You smile and take a seat, looking it over
"Pretty cool Scoot. What do you usually do for fun here?"
> She looks really excited to show you all the shit in her room, so you indulge her
> "Well, I spend a bunch of time on my computer, or reading, or playing music, or dancing, or singing, or..."
> Holy shit the stream of words flowing from her mouth seems to never end
> You zone out for a second, then come to as she jumps up right in front of you
> "Soooo, what do you think?" she asks, smiling at you
> Gods you can't say no to that face, it's too damn cute
"It's really cool Scoot, looks like you've got everything sorted out"
> You start to wonder if she's ever had anyone else in her room. Ever.
> She beams from ear to ear, "Oh! Gimme your phone!" She leans forward and grabs it out of your hand before you can respond
>>25260264
"Hey, what are you--"
> "Shush a moment" she snaps, typing furiously
> She hands it back, and you look to see what she's done
> New contact: Scootaloo <3
> Huh, alright then. Scootaloo has a blush across her face and sits there twiddling her thumbs
> You jam your phone back in your pocket and stand up, stretching
> A door opens at the end of the hall, and you hear Rainbow calling down "Hey Anon, you can come up!"
> You step out of Scootaloo's room, and she follows you close behind
"Hey RD, Scoots got bored, so she showed me around her room"
> Rainbow's changed into a tank top and a pair of really, REALLY short shorts
> You gulp and try not to stare, which is made all the more difficult each time she moves and pulls the clothing tight against her
> She looks at you and Scootaloo quizzically before shrugging and opening her bedroom door for you
> "Fair enough, come on in, I've got the computer booted up for you"
> You step inside and see that her room is in about as clean a state as the loungeroom is
> Plates are scattered across the desk and another pizza box is laying open on her bed
> There's a distinct smell in the room, familiar, but you can't really place it
> Clothes and linen of all kinds lay in heaped piles here and there, and you pick your way across the room, trying not to stand on anything
> "Sorry about the mess, I don't usually have anyone over... ever... hehe..." she scratches the back of her head and smiles
> Well you can pretty clearly see why
> Scootaloo looks a little embarrassed, but doesn't say anything
Bumping this thread
>>25260641
Rainbow and her dirty bachelor room
>>25260641
> Copying the files doesn't take long
> Rainbow kicks back on her bed as you work at moving them across, playing some soft music in the background and flipping through a sports magazine
> Scootaloo's propped herself up on your lap and is just chilling out to the music
> You hear a flick behind you, and see Rainbow lighting up
> Ah, that's what the smell is
> Well, her house her rules. You say nothing as the smell of burning pot fills the room with it's gentle haze
> "Tonight was really awesome, Anon" she says, rolling over to look at you
> You turn your head, eyeing her as she lays on the bed, the joint slowly burning in her fingers
> "Wanna join me?" asks Rainbow, offering it to you
> You consider it for a second, before moving Scoot off your lap and taking it out of Rainbow's hand
> Hadn't seen any drug vans around for months, you figure you'll be safe on the way home
> You take a deep pull on the joint, exhaling slowly as the smoke fills your lungs
> Fuck, you haven't had any grass in ages, but even you could tell this was good shit
> You pass the joint back and continue copying your music across onto Dash's computer
> As the last file copies over, you unplug your phone and spin the chair
> Dash waves you over, moving out of the way and making space for you on the bed
>>25260994
YES!
I NEVER get a chance to use this pic
FINALLY RELEVANT
Sorry about the delay, I actually rewrote this just now because I wasn't satisfied with what I had
>>25260994
> You walk across and flop down, taking the joint again and sucking in more of the sweet smoke
> Scootaloo coughs lightly, then excuses herself, leaving and closing the door behind her
> "Scoot doesn't like the smell, don't really blame the kid either" says Dash as you pass the joint back and forth
"I didn't until I started smoking myself, now I really don't mind"
> You both lay there, the quiet music and smoke filling the room as you stare at the ceiling"
> "Scoot really likes you Anon" she murmurs "like, I don't think she's liked anyone this much since she used to idolise me in middle school"
> You think on it for a moment, then shrug
"Dunno why, I'm not that interesting, 'sides, nobody really likes me all that much"
> Rainbow punches your arm, "You kiddin' me? We've only hung out once, and I like you plenty. Hell, I'm sharing my weed aren't I?"
> Point taken, Joint taken, you both lay there in silence for a while, enjoying the company and the high
> Minutes pass, you finish the joint between the two of you and relax
"I should probably get going soon"
> At least, you'd like to, but you don't think you're in any state to drive at this point
> "You drive now, you'll run into a fuckin' tree. Just stay here"
> You concede the point, looking around before eventually just laying back
> "Fuck it, I don't smoke with other people often" she reaches down beside the bed and pulls out another, lighting it up
> "Let's enjoy this, eh?"
>>25261346
> You lay quietly, resting against eachother as you slowly get stoned
> It doesn't take long with stuff like this
> Rainbow rolls over and looks at you, resting on a hand
> "So, you like it? It doesn't cost me much because the guy I buy from backs our team"
> You nod slowly, watching her body move each time she does
> It's damn near hypnotic, and you snap out of it when you realise you've spent the past few minutes just staring at her chest
> Thankfully by this point Dash barely notices, flopping onto her back again
> At this point you notice she's definitely not wearing a bra, and even as small as her chest is, it's still noticeable
> Pass the joint around, it's really starting to get to your head now, and you try to stifle a giggle, which comes out as a snort behind your hand
> Dash grins at you, taking the joint from your fingers and giggling herself
> Now she sees you staring, and pokes her tongue out "Why don't you take a picture, it'll last longer"
> You share her grin "Maybe I will!"
> Or at least you would, if you could move your arms without feeling like there's a full second delay between moving them and your body actually moving
> The feeling is so strange you laugh loudly, coughing on some of the smoke as you unintentionally inhale it
> You and Rainbow lay there laughing to yourselves for a while before finally calming down
> This feels awesome, you think, and you try to grab the joint again, missing and flailing a little before giving up
> Dash snorts and puts it out, sitting up
> "Well, if you can't, then I will!"
> Maybe it's just the fact that everything is a haze, with the music slowly pumping in the background and a pleasant feeling washing over you, but you don't remember the rest of the evening very well
>>25261364
Eww, just noticed formatting errors. Will fix for the pastbin, which I'm updating now
>>25261374
Fun story. Small disconnect with the line about watching her hypnoticly since I was still under the impression she was just passing a joint. Otherwise nothing glaring. keep going
>>25261374
Noice
>>25261374
I am reading many new stories of new authors these days, and I must say that only yours is interesting so far, is nicely written, it's not too slow or too pushed, and characters aren't flat.
It's a very good plot with porn.
Boop
>>25261374
rainbro dash
Boop
>>25261374
>>25262005
Same here. I don't usually post here, but your story is really, really nice to read. It's one of the good ones coming from here, and I really hope you keep writing a lot more of it!
brump
>page 10
>>25261364
> You wake up in the morning and rub your eyes as the small shaft of sunlight that spills past the curtains falls directly onto them
> There's ash piled up on a tray next to the bed
> Fuck, how much did you and Dash smoke last night?
> Speaking of Dash, she's rolled over in her sleep and is laying across your chest, a line of drool running from her open mouth to your shirt, which now has a small wet patch on it
> Great, you think to yourself, That'll look and smell wonderful today.
> You gently roll Dash off you, and she mumbles something before grabbing a pillow, staying fast asleep
> You hop up and turn off the stereo, which has apparently been playing all night, and strip off your damp shirt, hanging it on a chair
> There's noise coming from downstairs, so you open the door and head down, poking your head around the corner
> "Oh, mornin' Anon!" Scoot says, smiling
> She's standing by the stove, adding pancakes to a large stack
> You restrain yourself from salivating
> "Want some breakfast? Figured you two might be hungry since you didn't come down last night"
> She doesn't comment on your lack of shirt, but does stare for a moment before snapping to
> You nod dumbly and walk over, and she drops three pancakes onto a plate for you
> The table's too far, so you sit down at the kitchen counter and dig in, pouring syrup over them and biting down
> So god damn fluffy, it's like biting a cloud. A warm, delicious, syrupy cloud.
"Scootaloo I could kiss you these are fucking amazing"
> You manage to say between bites as you shovel them down
> Where the hell did she learn to make pancakes like this?
Bump for plowin' Rainbow while Scoots secretly watches!
>>25268066
>Not plowing Rainbow and Scoots at the same time
Come on man, use your imagination.
Boop
>>25266529
oh no
its happening
theyre slowly transforming into housewives
>>25269196
Shit, where's the sports emergency stash?
>>25268066
Bumping for this
>>25266529
> It's only after you finish the last one that you notice her standing right up next to you
> "Well?" she asks, a wicked smirk on her face
> Oh that's unfair!
> Still, you're a gentleman, and would never keep a lady waiting
> You lean over a give her a quick kiss, grinning like an idiot
> "Want more?" she asks, winking, and you sit and stare for a moment
"Uhhhhhhh"
> "Pancakes you dolt" Scootaloo laughs, rapping the top of your head gently with a fist
"Oh. Right. Yes. Please."
> She shakes her head and sighs, dropping another two onto your plate and flipping the one in the pan
> You start eating when you hear a loud thud from the top of the stairs, followed by a slow, moaning "ooooooooooww..."
> Rainbow comes down the stairs, looking bedraggled and exhausted, plopping into a chair beside you
> One of the straps on her top has fallen down and her hair has exploded outward like it's the 80's
> "Mornin' Anon, Mornin' Scoot. What's on the menu today?" she asks drowsily
> "Pancakes!"
> Seems that Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash are polar opposites in the morning
> Rainbow grabs a plate and starts eating slowly, pausing for a moment to look you over
> "What happened to your shirt man?" she asks after a while, and you try not to sigh
"You drool in your sleep"
> "Oh" she says blankly, before returning to her pancakes "Sorry"
> Scootaloo looks questioningly at you, but you just wave an I'll-tell-you-later to her and she shrugs, grabbing her own food and wolfing it down
> You finish off your plate and lean back, belly full of delicious pancake
"Careful Dash, if Scoot can cook like this every day, I might just steal her from you"
>>25269901
> You intend it as a joke, but both Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash look at you with what looks like surprise
> Rainbow looks back over to Scoot, swallows her mouthful, then says "Well kid, looks like you got the invitation you wanted"
> What?
> Scootaloo grins, "I ashked Rainbow if I could come shtay with you shometime" she says through a mouthful
> She finishes it off before continuing, looking a little ashamed "But she said it wasn't nice to invite myself over to other peoples' houses"
> Oh.
"Well like I said, I'm happy to keep an eye on you whenever. Don't want you out in the snow like the other day, huh?"
> You and Dash share a look, and Scootaloo looks away, blushing
> "I don't know how you do it man, but she's never this close with ANYONE. Even I can't convince her to cook willingly"
> She gives you a stare, which is uncomfortable to say the least "Hey, Anon, can I talk to you for a moment?"
> You nod, and Scoots hops up, dumping her plate in the sink and heading off upstairs to her room
> Dash sighs loudly, "Okay, you can't be that dense. Scoot has a crush on you doesn't she?"
> There's a touch of frustration in her voice, but you try to play it cool
"I don't know why, I really haven't done that much for her"
> She continues to stare
> "You're a terrible liar, but I won't pry. That kid does what she wants, and I won't judge her, I mean, look at me, I'm a slob who spends her free time getting stoned"
> That last part sounds almost bitter, and you try to think of something to say to calm her down
> "Ah forget it. Just don't break the kid, alright? If you're into that stuff, I don't care, but if she gets hurt... well, then I care. A lot."
> The cracking of knuckles under the counter is loud through the quiet room
> You can't help but wonder what kind of upbringing she had to say these kind of things to you, but you just nod dumbly in response
>>25269917
so dash knows and/or accepts?
gotta admit, my boner is kinda disappointed
>>25269917
> Just don't break the kid...
Seriously!? She's actually cool with this? Damn!
>>25269917
> Better to keep the peace, right? Besides, you have a feeling she wouldn't be nearly as comfortable with it as she lets on if she knew what actually happened
> "Of course, I don't think you'll actually do anything, that'd be a bit weird honestly, especially since..." she trails off, pausing for a moment and looking grim
> It's only for a second though, then her face softens and she grins broadly at you "Besides, if she wants you she'll just go for it. I should know, I practically raised her"
> She reaches forward and flicks your abs. You hate to brag, but plenty of farm work has left you with a pretty well toned body
> "Not that I would be interested, of course. Definitely not. At all. Ever."
> You would believe her if she could tear her eyes away from your torso for more than half a second, as it stands her attempt at hiding it was just making her go red
> Permitting yourself a smirk, you excuse yourself and head back up to Rainbow's room to grab your shirt
> It's pretty much dry, so you pull it on and grab your stuff, heading down stairs
> Scootaloo has rejoined you, and she and Rainbow are actually getting some cleaning done
"Alright, I better head off. Thanks for letting me crash here Rainbow"
> "No problem dude, thanks for bein' awesome" she responds, grinning
> Scootaloo runs over and wraps her arms around your waist "Seeya Anon! Come over again sometime, yeah?"
> You ruffle her hair and step out the door
"We'll see, kid"
Also:
> Captcha is Pancakes
>>25270070
>"Of course, I don't think you'll actually do anything, that'd be a bit weird honestly, especially since..." she trails off, pausing for a moment and looking grim
and boner is excited again
>>25269917
I just forgot that it's a sequel with older sister to be pleased. Jesus. I love your characterisations.
>>25270233
This. Dubs of truth.
I wish more new writefags would be able to write like you. *tips Stetson*
Boop
Bed time bump
Boop
>>25270070
>thanks for bein' awesome
Rainbro Dosh is best bro.Now, fuck!
LIIIIIIVE
>>25270070
He gotta get her outta the house and outta her slump.
>>25270070
> It's around midday when you get home, and you're pretty tired
> After stepping inside and throwing your keys and wallet on the counter, you immediately head to the shower to clean up
> No good smelling like pot all day, and you don't really want to stink up your house
> You blast the hot water and step underneath the shower head, soaking up the steam
> Rainbro is actually pretty cool, and she seems pretty chill about letting Scootaloo do what she wants
> You still wouldn't dare tell her what happened
> That shit stays private
> You're just starting to step out of the shower when your phone buzzes at you
> Something something no rest for the wicked
> Pick it up, new text from an unknown number
> UNKNNOWN: 'Is this Anon?'
> Who the...?
> You text back 'Yes? Who's this?' then get dried off and dressed, taking a look in the mirror
> The phone buzzes again, and you glare at it in frustration before softening at the response
> UNKNOWN: 'It's Applebloom, I got your note :)'
> Right, that makes sense. You're silently glad that Big Mac or Applejack didn't find it first
> You add her to your contacts, then shoot back 'Awesome, What's up kid?'
> AB: 'Not much, Applejack's out for the afternoon and Granny's asleep, so I'm bored'
> There's a picture attatched of Applebloom sprawled out across her bed
> Her hair's a mess and it looks like she's just woken up, mostly due to the fact she's still wearing pyjamas
> 'Well, what are you gonna do then?' You text back, saving the photo somewhere on your phone. You'll move it elsewhere later
> Wait, what was that?
> You open your gallery to the camera roll, and try not to freak out
> Seems sometime while you were getting blazed out of your mind, Rainbro took some photos for you
> She's kneeling on the bed, shirt off and winking at the camera
> You have to admit, Dash is actually really fucking hot
> The picture is taken really well too, putting shadows in all the right places
>>25274529
> Boner chooses this moment to deploy, and who are you to deny?
> You decide that this photo is best kept somewhere that isn't your phone, so you wander down the hall to your room and jam it into your computer
> Navigating to where you put the three girls' photos the other day, you add Dash to the collection
> Some people might call it creepy that you have all these nudes of girls you know, but you don't care, it's fucking hot
> Boner continues assaulting your pants, and you have to try and calm yourself
> Phone buzzes, it's Applebloom again
> AB: 'Dunno, maybe I'll go visit Sweetie'
> It takes you a minute to remember what you were talking about, but you get it eventually
> 'Cool. I'm gonna go take a shower. Again. Talk soon.'
> You figure that should stop her for a while
> Stretching, you stand and head back down to the kitchen
> Sundays are great, you don't have to worry about shit
> You grab a drink and sit at the counter, whiling away the hours and watching TV
> It's about 8 or 9 when you wake up. Must've dozed off at the kitchen bench watching something
> The unmistakeable sound of your phone vibrating violently against your desk echoes down the hall
> You grumble and stand, wandering down the hall to pick it up
> You get there just before it stops ringing and hit the answer button, not even checking who's calling before clicking it onto speaker
"'llo?"
> You mumble loudly, still slightly groggy from your nap
> "Uh, Hi Anon" an accent calls down the phone
"Hi Applejack, what's up?"
> Feels like grains of sand are in your eyes, and you rub them, plopping down into your desk chair
>>25274535
Now is DEFINITELY the time to panic.
>>25274529
>>25274535
Moar?
>>25274562
No need to panic. NO NEED.
>>25275722
>writefag is kill
>no need to panic
>>25276417
shh. I'm busy not panicking
>>25274529
>> Seems sometime while you were getting blazed out of your mind, Rainbro took some photos for you
>> She's kneeling on the bed, shirt off and winking at the camera
l-lewd
Don't worry dudes, not kill, just rebuilding my backlog
I jumped ahead a bit to post for you so I want to get to my 100 lines ahead again
>>25277902
writefag isn't kill!
>>25277902
God speed Strayanon
>>25274535
> "So ah just wanted to apologise for yesterday evenin'. Ah know ah shouldn't've been that wasted and ah really hope ya don't think badly of me for it"
> 28 HIT COMBO
> You barely manage to separate each word from the next as she blasts them out one after the other
"Really AJ, it's fine. You would've done the same had it been me. You alright though? You sound nervous as hell"
> It's pretty obvious she's worked up over something, AJ couldn't hide an emotion if it was painted brown and taped inside her hat
> She lets out an audible sigh down the phone line
> "Ah was just worried what you might think o' me after seein' me like that" AJ says slowly, clearly relieved
"Pshh, nothing to fret over. What time do you need me at work tomorrow?"
> Applejack cheers up quickly at the mention of work, taking her mind off her drunken behaviour
> "7 O'clock sharp! Ah need some new barrels made, and the last batch you made worked a treat"
> You frown at this, that doesn't make sense
"If they worked fine, why do you need more? Just prep the old ones for the next batch"
> "We've got more apples through this season, so Granny wants us to double up our Cider before Cider season starts"
>>25280080
> Ah, that makes sense, but it would mean a ton of work on your part
"Alright, I'll see you tomorrow AJ"
> You go to hang up, but stop when AJ yells "Wait a sec Anon!"
"Hmmm?"
> You can practically hear the red on her cheeks through the phone line
> "Uh, that is, ah heard you went out with Rainbow after droppin' me off" she slowly says, pausing every now and then
"Yeah, we had a few drinks and I crashed at her place"
> "That is, uh, y'all didn't... yanno..." Applejack just sounds flustered at this point, clearly uncomfortable with the conversation she started
"What? Hahaha, No!"
> You laugh and Applejack lets out a nervous chuckle
> "Hehe, yeah, 'course, sorry ah just worry about that girl sometimes. Nearly never hangs out with guys her own age"
> Interesting, but you figure there's a reason for everything
> "Anyway, ah gotta get goin', seeya tomorrow Anon!" she says, and hangs up before you can say anything else
> Oh Applejack, you get freaked out over the smallest things
>>25280086
> You wake up refreshed the next morning, having finally managed a good night's sleep
> Jamming yourself into the shower, you have a quick rinse before stepping out and getting dressed for work
> Your bowl of cereal for breakfast makes you miss Scoots' pancakes, and you down it with a mug of coffee before running out the door
> You don't think you've been this cheerful in the morning in years
> It's weird, you don't like it
> You pull into the farm at a quarter to 7, hopping out of the ute and stretching
> "Mornin'"
> JESUS FUCKING CHRIST
> You nearly shit yourself as Mac greets you, having wandered up behind you while you were stretching
> He may be huge, but he's like a giant ninja. A giant red ninja that could crush your larynx if he was so inclined
> You remember that fact and put on your cool face, turning to greet him
> Mac's muscles ripple under his shirt and he glares at you a moment, before trudging off to the orchard
> It was only a moment, but you understand exactly what was intended by that glare
> 'You touch her, you die'
> You're very glad Big Mac tends not to be viole--
> There's a loud crunch, and you see him tearing the branches off a dead tree with his bare hands
> Well then. You take back what you were about to say, and wander off toward the shed you normally work in.
>>25280335
More?
>>25280335
>> 'You touch her, you die'
Does this mean that I can touch you?
>>25280335
> Applejack is waiting for you as you approach, leaning against the doorframe smirking at you
> "Y'all right Anon? Mac didn't scare ya again did he?" she asks, and her smirk grows into a small grin
"Yeah, Ha ha. Let's get to work, before he breaks my arms and I can't"
> She snorts and steps inside, motioning for you to follow
> There's a stack of already made staves laying in one corner and a pallet of sheet metal in the other
"Alright, so how big do you need the hoops?"
> "Same as the last batch, 50 ought to do it for today" AJ says, tossing you some gloves
> You step over and fire up the furnace, opening the large windows that dominate the side walls of the shed
> Pretty grateful for them, it'd be a million degrees in here if they weren't there
"Fair enough. I'll get to work, see you at lunchtime, yeah?"
> She smiles and nods, walking back out the door "I'll make somethin' nice for ya"
> You watch her hips as she heads off toward the house
> God damn you know exactly how Rainbro feels
> You shake your head and get to work, the hoops aren't gonna make themselves after all
>>25281788
> It's about 1 O'clock, and the heat in the room has long since built up past the point the windows can clear it out
> Doesn't help that it's boiling outside
> You stop to see how you're doing, and are pretty happy with what you see
> Only a few more hoops to go
> To be fair, hammer welding and circularising a hoop takes a lot less time than beating out a horseshoe
> You go to grab another piece of metal when you hear a cough from the door
> Applejack's leaning against it again, watching as you work
"How long have you been staring, exactly?"
> You figure it's a reasonable question, you haven't been slacking off, but you haven't even noticed her up until this point
> You've been too absorbed in your work to notice much else
> "Long enough. Y'all were pretty absorbed in your work, ah couldn't bear to stop ya" she says, eyeing you up
> You chuckle and walk over, grabbing a towel from the wall and wiping off the thin sheen of sweat that's built up on your body
"Lunch time?"
> She heads off toward the main house "Sure is, come on stud"
> Did she just call you...?
> Probably meant nothing by it, you ignore the remark and follow her toward the house, pulling your shirt back over your head
> You spot Applebloom waving at the pair of you from the window, and you give a wave and a smile back
> Applejack steps inside, and you follow her in, letting their dog run inside before shutting the door
>>25281807
> "Hiyya Anon! Ah've been helpin' make lunch!" Applebloom says proudly, bouncing over to you and grinning
> You drop a hand onto her head to ruffle her hair and smile back
"Awesome, what'd you make kid?"
> "Pie!" she says, and hops up to the table, offering you a seat next to her
> Applejack raises an eyebrow, but says nothing, pulling up her own seat on the other side of you
> "So Anon, what've ya been doin' today?" Applebloom asks, leaning back to let a plate be put in front of her
> Granny walks around the table serving everyone
> She likes you so you get an extra piece of pie, and a wink
"Not much kid, just making barrel hoops. Metal don't hammer itself after all"
> She beams at you "Can ah come watch? Ah'll stay outta yer way an everythin'!"
> You glance over at AJ, and she shakes her head
> Applebloom hadn't been allowed in that shed since she almost burned it down with her friends a few months back
"Sorry AB, you know the rules"
> She looks crestfallen, but nods "Awww, alright, ah'll find somethin' else to do"
> To be fair, you're kinda glad she isn't going to be in there watching you
> You have a feeling it wouldn't end well if she was
> "Well, ah finished my work out in the orchard for the day, so ah'll be in there with ya sortin' out gettin' the first few barrels goin'"
> Applejack smiles at you
> She's always had a thing for being able to alongside you on whatever it is you're doing around the farm
> At least there's some security in that, knowing you probably won't lose your job if she was so keen to work with you
"Sure, it'll be nice to have some company in there anyway"
>>25281828
gonna get juicy. keep up God's work, writefriend
>>25281977
This.
Boop
>>25254005
> Be School Nurse Anon, on the way home after a long day of wiping runny noses busting students trying to feign illness
> Long hours of listening to their heart beats, close enough to smell them, touching their skin
> God I love winter
> See Scoot, AB, and SB on the sidewalk in the middle of a blizzard
> My heart skips a beat at the chance of a lifetime
> I run my tongue over the layer of grime upon my upper teeth, adjust my combover, wipe the beads of sweat from my brow, as I slowly pull up to them
“You girls need a ride?”
> I say it as friendly as I can, but I can see in their eyes the immediate fear and revulsion at the very thought of interacting with creepy old Mr Anon
> My groin quivers with their disdain
> Its obvious, they don’t want to get in the van but they know they don’t have a choice if they want to get home, they smile faintly as they submit
> AB and Scootaloo quickly seize what little space in the back isn’t packed with my possessions, forcing Sweetie Belle up front with me
> “My favorite!” I think as she reluctantly straps herself into the seat
> I start down the snowy road, unable to keep from licking my lips
> Shortly after starting off Sweetie Belle very meekly says, “Thank you for driving us home Mr Anon.”
> A sudden rush of blood engorged my flaccid rod to a painful level of stiffness
“It’s no problem at all Sweetie,” I grinned happily, “I’m just glad I got to you before some sicko.”
> They all laughed awkwardly, “Y-yeah.”
> Things were uncomfortably silent for several minutes
> I could smell their breath slowly filling the van, here their bodies writhing uncomfortably under their damp clothes
> I had to say something before I lost control of myself and blurted out thew first thing that came to mind
“So I hear you girls have been trying to get your periods.”
>>25284531
> Almost at once I heard their breathing grind to a halt, the air seemed to chill slightly
> None of them responded, each diligently avoiding my gaze
> The van was utterly silent, their palpable disdain pushing me over the edge
> If things didn’t get back to a normal level my pants would soon fill with liquid joy
“You girls shouldn’t try n grow up too fast now,”
> My eyes glazed over as my thoughts became a haze of panties, bloomers, and swimsuits
“You’re perfect just the way you are.”
> I could feel a warm damp ooze slowly soaking into the front of pants, forming a visible wet spot
> I looked down hazily at the stain on my pants, and then over to Sweetie Belle
> I caught her staring in horror at the very same stain, she looked up at me and our eyes locked for a moment, her expression seemed to swell with terror, and I crude smile cracked across my face
> Almost immediately her head snapped the other direction, fixing her gaze beyond the window, but it was too late
> She had “Seen” me, and in that moment I knew, she was the one
> I sped the car up a little and began to chew on my bottom lip in anticipation
> We reached Applebloom’s house first, she gave a half-hearted “Thanks,” before bounding off into the snow
> Scootaloo didn’t even pretend to be greatful, only saying goodbye to Sweetie Belle before running home
>>25284542
> At last Sweetie Belle and I were alone, beads of sweat began to run down my face
> Every few seconds I found myself looking at her out of the corner of my eye
> Finally I broke the silence
“Hey, Sweetie, that was really nice of you not to embarrass me in front of your friends.”
> “Uh,” She said uncomfortably, “D-don’t mention it?”
“You’re a very kind person Sweetie Belle.”
> “No really,” She insisted scooting as far away as her chair would allow, “I’d prefer if we didn’t talk about it, at all, please.”
> I panted heavily, beads of sweat rolling endlessly down my neck
“Such kindness, needs to be rewarded.”
> I began to reach across, slowly penetrating her space with my meaty arm
> She recoiled in terror as I sputtered breathlessly
“I have a special treat for girls like you to suck on!”
> “No!” She cried out as I opened the glovebox exposing my hidden stash of lollipops, warheads, and taffy.
“You can help yourself, as much as you’d like, within reason.”
> She looked from the candy to me with confusion and asked, “R-really?”
“Yeah, I have a sphincter disorder that causes random seminal discharge in stuffy environments, all the people packed in the car triggered an incident. It’s really embarassing so I’m grateful that you pretended not to notice.”
> Sweetie Belle perked up happily, “Oh, okay then, and it’s no trouble at all.”
> I dropped her off at Rarity’s house, watching happily as she bounded across the snow, I stepped out into the snow to see her off and waved to her one last time as she went inside
> Then I threw a grenade at her house and masturbated on the ashes
>>25284531
>>25284542
>>25284551
Shakespeare would be jealous.
>>25284531
>>25284542
>>25284551
What have you done with my sides, Anon?
>>25281828
>applejack wants anon
>keep chuckling at the fact that applebloom got fucked by him before applejack
>beat by the younger sister
>>25285003
Inb4 Anon calls out Applebloom's name by mistake while he's fucking Applejack.
page 9 bump
>>25281828
Wait...
Did Granny Smith wink at him?
What!?
>>25284551
>“Yeah, I have a sphincter disorder that causes random seminal discharge in stuffy environments, all the people packed in the car triggered an incident. It’s really embarrassing so I’m grateful that you pretended not to notice.”
Sure. Let's go with that.
>>25288396
Granny just wants loadsa grandkids, anon.
She don't give a shit about who gives them to her.
>>25254005
Holy shit, you fucks are still live? I never finished reading the first thread. Guess I may as well go back and catch up.
>>25291561
Worth the read. highly recomend
>>25281828
> You turn your focus to the food in front of you, and munch away, eating quickly so you can get back out and back to work ASAP
> The conversation rolls around you, and you go as far as answering when someone talks to you directly, but no further
> About 20 minutes later, lunch ends, and you stand and head toward the door
"Thanks Applebloom, that pie was awesome. You comin' AJ?"
> She nods, smiling "Sure thing Anon, ah'll be out in a second"
> You leave it at that and wander out toward the shed once more, ready to finish off the last of your work
> The wave of heat that hits you as you walk back inside has you stripping your shirt off once more
> You knuckle down and get back into it, pushing another strip of metal into the fire
> 10 minutes later the door swings open again and Applejack enters
> "Hey Sugarcube, just let me know if ahm in yer way, alright?" she says, waving
> You just nod, and she walks over to start pulling staves from the pallet
> "So Anon, ah just wanted to say thanks again for the other night" Applejack says quietly
"Really AJ, it's fine. I really don't mind"
> Why was she still going on about it? You don't think she's ever been this hung up on getting drunk before
> "Ah just feel like ah owe you an apology for it 'sall"
> You take a breather for a moment, then walk over toward her, sitting yourself down on a pallet and motioning for her to join you
> When she sits down, you take a deep breath and ask
"What's on your mind AJ? You've been really caught up in this whole thing and it's had you worked up all day today. You okay?"
> She shakes her head, smiling "Ah can't hide nothin' from ya, can I Anon?"
"Well you're a terrible liar, so no, not really"
>>25293159
> Smiling, she leans against you "Ah just don't want y'all to have a bad impression of me is all"
"Really? That it?"
> The smile turns to a frown "Well, uh, maybe. Look, why don't we talk about this when we're done for the day? Ah'll let ya into the brewing shed and we can chat"
> You nod. If she's got stuff on her mind, you want to be able to help
> AJ's been a good friend to you ever since you moved here
> You get up and help her to her feet, but before you can go to start working again, she pulls you into a hug
> "Thanks though, Anon. Ah appreciate you lookin' out fer me"
> You're taken by surprise by the sudden gesture, but accept it none the less
"No problem dude. Come on, let's get these barrels done"
> It takes you the rest of the afternoon to finish work, but you get it done, and set about cleaning up your tools
> Applejack yells that she's going to clean up as she heads out
> The room finally starts reaching a reasonable temperature, and you dry yourself off, walking out to your ute
> It's good you expected the heat, because you brought a spare shirt
> You pull it over your head and feel miles better, stretching
> Another day's work complete
> Applejack comes back out and waves, having gotten changed herself
> "So uh, did you wanna... yanno... head out?" she asks, rubbing the back of her head nervously
"Look, if it's gonna be a bother for you, you don't have to talk to me, I'm just concerned about you man"
> Her eyes widen "No! Uh, ah mean, no, ah wanna chat. Ah'm just nervous is all"
> YOU DON'T SAY?
"I noticed, come on, I'll drive"
> You put on a smile and pop the passenger door for her, climbing in the other side
> "Alright, let's do this"
> You start the car and turn around, heading out the gate and off down the road
> You spot Big Mac in the orchard as you leave, and he definitely spots you
> Let's hope he doesn't get the wrong idea
> For your sake
>>25293165
> You drive in silence the whole way
> Applejack finds something interesting to look at out the window every time you look over
> It's really fucking uncomfortable, but before long you're staring at the old barn
> "Ah'll go open 'er up, you wanna park under the shelter in case it rains?"
> You nod, and she hops out, leaving you to pull up around the corner
> The small door is open when you come back around, and you step inside the cool shed
"Yo AJ, you got the lights dude? Can't see a damn thing"
> There's a grunt from above you "Just a second, the damn switch's jammed"
> In the gloom you manage to spot a ladder, and Applejack on a ledge above the door fliddling with a power box
"Be careful, aaight? Don't want you hurting yourself"
> "Honestly Anon ah'll be fine, how many times d'ya think ah've done this?"
> There's a sound like scraping metal, and the lights lining the shed spring to life, illuminating the stacks of barrels on either side with a dusty glow
> "See? Piece a cake!" AJ calls, jumping down
> It's not a long drop by any means, but you still flinch forward a little as she jumps
> "C'mon, let's get comfortable" she says, walking over and pulling up a bench near the middle of the room
> The further in you go, the stronger the smell of brewing cider is, and you can't help but feel comfortable in the dusty room smelling like apple booze
> You flop down onto the bench next to her, and she passes you a bottle
"Drinks? At this hour?"
> She hesitates, and looks at you with a puzzled expression
"I'm not complaining, I'm impressed"
> You chuckle loudly and take the bottle, cracking it open
"Cheers man"
> "Cheers"
> You and Applejack get started on the drinks, and you lean back, enjoying the relaxing atmosphere
>>25293165
>inb4 they both get hammered
>inb4 applejack says I like you you can come over and fuck my sister
>inb4 anon says he already did
>>25294169
Holy shit why did I not fucking think of thisI love you
>>25294160
"So, tell me what's going on man, you've been driving yourself nuts"
> No point beating around the bush, you need to get this girl to talk
> She stays silent, instead chugging on the bottle until it's empty
> That can't be healthy, this shit's pure Apple jack
> After finishing the bottle, she turns to face you, a frustrated expression on her face
> "Anon, whatever ah tell ya here, ah don't want you tellin' NOBODY, ya hear me? Not a single one"
> What the hell's been bugging her so badly that she's that desperate to keep it a secret?
"You know me man, I won't tell a soul if you tell me not to"
> You take a swig from your own bottle, the strong, bitter spirit burning your throat
> She sighs, tossing her own aside and leaning on her elbows
> "Well, you know how protective Big Mac is, yeah?"
> You nod, having witnessed it first hand today
> "Ah feel like ah can't get close to nobody because they're all too dang scared of him"
> Oh, that's what this is about?
"Have you tried talking to him about it?"
> She nods sadly "Ah have. He says it's for mah own good, but even if ah told him ah wanted to see someone, he'd never have it!"
> You frown at that, even for her brother, that seems more than just a little overprotective
"Yeah, he's been giving me death glares all day today"
> Applejack's head snaps up "What? Did he say anythin'?!"
"No, no, just glaring and general I'll-break-your-spine stuff"
> She relaxes again, leaning up against you
"So is that what's been eating you up? Your brother being super overbearing?"
> You mean it jokingly, but she shoots you a look that says it was taken all but
> "That's not... everything..." she says, trailing off "But ah'm not sure ah wanna talk about that just yet. Let's just relax a while"
> Fair enough, you won't object
>>25294196
> You sit on the bench, the cool, dusty shed atmosphere making you drowsy as you drink
> A light rain starts outside. Just a drizzle, but the sound of it on the roof only adds to the comfy environment
> "So how're ya feelin' about work at the moment?" Applejack asks, turning an ear to listen to the rain
"It's not bad, keeps me in shape at least"
> You chuckle and Applejack makes a show of looking you up and down "Ah'll say!"
> Both of you have a laugh, and you put your own bottle down
"Well if you say so. You're in pretty good shape yourself"
> She blushes "Uh... buh... yeah ah guess"
> It's fucking adorable that she's so flustered, and you can't help but want to push her buttons a bit more
"And what a fine shape it is! Do you work out after work? Or do you just look like that naturally?"
> Her jaw hits the floor and she goes a perfect cherry red
> You've managed to render her completely speechless
> A second later she clears her throat and looks away "Now Anon, ya can't go sayin' stuff like that, you'll give a girl ideas"
"Oh? What kind of ideas?"
> She shifts uncomfortably "Well, uh... Ah'm gonna go get another drink!"
"Hold on a sec!"
> You put a hand on her arm as she goes to stand, but having had most of a bottle of almost pure apple spirit, you're not exactly seeing straight forward
> She twists under your arm, and starts to tumble back, pulling you down with her
> "What the- Oh shit!" she yells, flailing and hitting the ground with a loud 'oof!'
> You're wrenched forward out of the seat and fall on your face, catching her knee in your gut
>>25294204
> Winded and disoriented, you roll onto your side, trying not to puke in your mouth
> Applejack scrabbles to her feet "Oh shit sugarcube you okay? Anon?!"
> She's freaking out as you groan on the floor
"Ooooow fuck"
> You manage to wheeze out before finally managing to catch your breath, swallowing a small amount of bile that had made it's way to your mouth
> AJ kneels down and rolls you onto your back, pulling up your shirt
"I'm alright, I'm okay, I'm... okay I'm not alright"
> You try to put on a strong face, but that knee to your gut really fucking hurt
> You open your eyes at last, looking up at Applejack
> "Lemme take a look at you hun" she says, checking over where she hit you
> Her hands run gently over your torso, and you can already feel warmth spreading where you're sure there's gonna be a bruise
"Really, AJ, I'll be alright in a bit, just let me rest a moment. You have a really solid knee"
> She sighs, "Well, if ya can make cracks like that, I'm sure you'll be alright, but you're gonna stay layin' there until ah say, got it?"
> You mock salute her, which is really awkward from your position on the floor
"Yes sir!"
> Applejack just smiles "That's ma'am to you hun"
> She packs up the crate of drinks, then walks back over and checks on you again
"Care to join me? The floor's nice and cool, and I'm not going anywhere"
> She smirks and raises an eyebrow "With an invitation like that, how could ah resist?", she then slides down beside you, getting comfortable
> The sun's starting to become orange outside, and the sound of the light rain keeps a steady beat on the roof
> It's really comfortable, and right now you feel relaxed, despite the soreness
> Hell, you barely even notice it now
>>25294169
>69
has spoken
>>25294204
> A light rain starts outside. Just a drizzle, but the sound of it on the roof only adds to the comfy environment
It's just his realm, his turn-on thing.
>>25294209
>All this time Anon calls her man/sir/mang/dude
>She says to call her ma'am
We all know how will it end, and we all eagerly await.
>>25294209
Gimme the Aj pussy b0ss.
Very good
>>25294209
>>25294325
No! No AJ pussy! No! Bad!
Let's have something unexpected, instead. Like Rainbro Dosh fucking Applejack, Yeah. Howabout that? AJ confesses to Anon that she's gay for RD. Then, Anon gets them together and they,RD and AJ, that is, go out on a date,then fuck, with Anon, maybe watching, maybe joining.
>>25294425
Isn't it?
>>25294451
Rainbro and Applejack are scissoring while Anon's dick is between them.
>>25294471
YES!!!But not after some massive drama first.Personally though, I prefer seeing some CMC/Anon tag-teaming action going on. But, you know, whatever writefriend choses. I am sure, he's got something awesome in store for us soon enough.
![[Metal Noise].png](https://i.imgur.com/jkrZB06.png "[Metal Noise].png")
>>25294471
>tfw
>>25294471
>>25294169
fucking this please
>>25294471
>>25294471
Please do this. Or at least make a non canon side story.
>>25294471
>implying it won't be a Haram of the mane six and the cmc by the time it's finished
>>25295120
>Haram
Okay. Let's go with that.
>>25294209
more please
>>25295120
we can only hope
>>25294565
yup
>>25294471
how2ruin a story
noncanon side chapter
>>25296031
Just a thought.
>page 10
Actually sitting here thinking of where I can jam that "Come over to my house and fuck my sister!" line into the story.
But I have to now, no choice, it's too perfect.
>>25298853
Private Joker.
I like you.
>>25294209
please come back
>>25298853
Oh God. How could that possibly end well?
>>25298853
You're welcome it was my pleasure
>>25300368
Jesus Christ how horrifying
>>25298853
Maybe Big Mac says it.
Strayanon senpai notice me,
Bring green.<3
>>25300962
And then you end up fucking applebloom, Mac find you two doing it then, with a blank face, says "ah meant th' other one, dipshit"
>>25294209
>>25301067
> Something drips against your head, waking you rudely from your slumber
> You look around, and realise you're still in the barn with AJ
> Must've dozed off at some point, you guess
> Seems you were woken by a stray droplet from a hole in the ceiling
> The pain in your stomach has subsided, and you can only assume there's a nice bruise to show for it. If not, you're secretly Superman, and that's awesome
> There's a thin blanket pulled over you, and you recognise it as the one you usually keep in your car
> Did Applejack go and grab it?
> Speaking of, you start to wonder where she is before you notice the warmth against your side, and pull away the blanket enough to see what it is
> Applejack is fast asleep, pressed up against your side with a hand up on your chest
> She's wrapped herself around one of your arms, with her head resting just below your shoulder
> She actually looks really cute like this, and you smile to yourself as you lay back
> Applejack stirs the moment you move, but doesn't wake up
> "Nnnnn... Anon..." she mumbles, squeezing your arm with her legs
> Is she dreaming about you? Seriously?
> You opt for the not waking her up option and instead decide to see if she says anything else
> Her face is flushed, but she doesn't really say anything for the next few minutes, until you hear "j's jam 't in... mnnn"
> Okay, what is she dreaming about? You gently shake her awake, and her eyes slowly open, locking onto yours
> "Huh? Anon? Where are... oh" she says, looking about
> Did she fall asleep accidentally too?
> "Ah was just dreamin' about you" she says, a smile coming to her face
>>25301245
"Really? What kind of dream? Hope it was a good one."
> You gulp, this could go one of two ways, and right now you're not sure which is better
> Applejack's smile turns to a smirk "Well... Ah'll tell you soon. Probably"
> No fair!
"Aww, come on, what's the harm in telling me?"
> In an instant, her face is millimeters from your own, and you feel her warm breath tickling your lips as she stares into your eyes
> You stay like that for a moment, just staring at eachother
"Uh... A-AJ?"
> "It was a dream, aaight? No need to get... worked up" she breathes, just loud enough for you to hear
> Another gulp, you can feel her pressed right against you, and her proximity to you is starting to really have an effect
"Well, uh, I... uh..."
> You can't even words
> This kind of situation isn't meant to happen in real life! It's meant to be exclusively in video games and movies and greentext and shit!
> "Oh screw it" she says, and presses herself down, kissing you
> Well okay then. This isn't exactly what you had in mind when you left, but you can roll with it!
Got a party to go to, will dump sometime tomorrow
<3 all, keep thread alive plz
>>25301263
>>25301245
>> Her face is flushed, but she doesn't really say anything for the next few minutes, until you hear "j's jam 't in... mnnn"
Pfff
>>25302006
>you want me to jam it in? ok
>>25301263
Im ready for some AJ lovin
>>25303062
RESIST!
>>25303084
No anon
AJ needs a good dicking
>>25301263
Time to plow that field!
>>25304746
>>25301263
Dick demands moar
>>25305555
AAAAA!
>>25301263
> "Oh screw it" she says, and presses herself down, kissing you
Those exact words are how I got a girlfriend.
>>25254005
Leave them out there like the stupid shits they are. Who the fuck wears a miniskirt in the middle of winter. Bitch you gonna learn today.
>Picture unrelated
Bumpbump
Inb4 Applejack's pussy smells like lemons.
Captcha = Bananas
BAMF!
>>25305895
how I got an std
>>25308157
Oh my. Rotten luck ol' chap. Better luck next time eh?
>>25308346
>British pony
>literally a fucking half caste
Are you trying to start shit?
>>25308771
If it keeps the thread alive till the Writer returns, then yes.
>>25308346
>>25308771
I don't know what half caste means, but that shit's fuckin' funny!
>>25309084
An insult for someone who's parents are of different races.
>>25308346
We Don talk like that ya fukkin cock garglin bumbder.
>>25310091
Clearly you don't. Allow me to translate and offer a rebuttal
>>25308346
Translation: Lol
>>25310091
Rebuttal: Oi mate, chill would'ja? Fuckin' 'ell.
Page 10 bump
>Hi, Anon
>Wanna come sit with us?
>>25312378
No thanks, I can already hear the accusations.
>>25312378
>retarded robot inquiring as to the macrocephalic conditions of the subjects.png
>>25312378
>those stockings
2cute
>>25310115
Ayy mate I was jus jinglin yer bells there sun. I'm pukka. No worries
>>25312378
how about you come sit on me.
>>25313176
Anon...
>>25313343
you know you want my hot monkey dick, my little fillies.
Unf!
death nears
>>25301263
Strayanon said he was going to a party.
He must have had one Hell of a hangover.
>>25315268
I was playing Rock Band and Crabs Adjust Humidity until 3 AM.
I drank most of a bottle of rum, and at least half a bottle of bourbon
I will post in an hour or so, just want to die for a bit
> Pic Related
>>25315305
Holy shit dude!
> You lean into the kiss, and after a few seconds, she breaks off, pulling back
> She stares at you, a deep blush on her cheeks, and you look back at her, smiling
"Well that was unexpected"
> You casually say, and her eyes widen sharply
> "Oh god Anon ah'm so sorry ah don't know what came over me ah just, you were there and ah was thinkin' about it and then ah was"
> You swing a hand up and press a finger over her lips
"Shhh. Now, just nod yes or no, okay? Is that what's been on your mind?"
> She looks confused for a second, then nods
"Alright, and you've been worried about it?"
> Nod
"Because you didn't know how I'd react?"
> She goes to say something, but quickly shuts her mouth again, nodding
> You give a smile, and sit upright before kicking yourself to your feet
> "Anon ah swear if ah upset you ah didn't mean to at all!" She blurts out, looking absolutely panicked
"Applejack, calm down alright? Seriously, do I look like that made me upset?"
> She slows down for a second, taking a deep breath "So..."
"So I'm not saying no, I was just surprised is all"
> You wander over to the door, looking out
> There's a rustling sound behind you, and you feel Applejack press herself up against you
>>25315938
> She's warm against the cool breeze blowing inside
> "Ah just didn't know how to say it, y'all a been nothin' but nice to me, even tolerated Big Mac's crap to keep me smilin' at work"
> Her arms wrap around your waist and you turn around to face her
> Applejack's cheecks are still red, and she looks away when you catch her eyes "Guess I went and grew feelin's for ya"
> You smile sadly, not sure exactly how to respond. Applejack's awesome, cute and sexy, but at the same time, she's your boss, and you really don't want to fuck things up at work
> Thankfully, her next line makes things easier "Look, ah know you can't return 'em, hell that's why it was so hard to say. We're a good team at work, yer my best friend, but ah'm still yer boss, and that's a major C.O.I"
> She looks sad, but doesn't move away "Still, bein' held like this... Ah just feel alright"
> The mood went quickly from 10 to 1, but the fact remains you're still holding onto AJ, and she isn't pulling away
"So what do you want to do then?"
> Applejack pauses and considers this, then smiles wickedly
> "Well, y'all never said no, did ya?"
> She looks up at you, inches from your face as you hold each other tightly "C'mere sug"
> Her lips meet yours again, and her arms wrap tighter around you, pulling you right in close
> The stepladder by the door makes a perfect seat, and you move down onto it, pulling her waist in to straddle you
> You only break the kiss for a brief moment to catch your breath before diving back in
> Applejack's arms finally find purchase around your shoulders, and she leans back a little "Anon... ah don't know if... ah... never mind!"
> She calls out the last part loudly as you move your mouth to her collarbone, which peeks through the loose fitting shirt she's wearing
> Gentle moans slip from her lips as you kiss along her neck, biting her gently
>>25315941
> Her hands move toward her shirt buttons, undoing the top few under your chin
> She holds onto you with her legs while she does this, and you can feel her pressed right against your now throbbing crotch
> You run your hands up her back, under her shirt, her soft skin warm to the touch
> Applejack puts her hands back around behind your head, not letting you pull back and keeping your mouth pressed firmly to her body
> Unable to pull away, you instead opt to move down, sliding your lips across her collar and down to the top of her chest, feeling her shake gently when you do
> Her skin has an almost perfect tan right over, and in the dusty shed light it practically glows
> She starts to rock back and forth, pushing herself up against you and panting lightly
> Your cock presses hard against your jeans, and Applejack lets out quiet moans as she feels it push against her
"AJ... You sure this is a good idea?"
> Christ even saying that was hard, this girl's body is amazing
> "N... Not at all" she replies, undoing the last of her shirt buttons
> She's wearing a pale orange bra with a striped pattern on it, which is barely enough to hold her flawless breasts in
> Applejack leans back slightly, then pulls you right up against her
> "We should... *pant* we should stop sug" she says, but doesn't stop grinding against your crotch
> It's hard for you too, and you honestly don't want to stop
> There's a whimpering sound from Applejack, and you feel a dampness against your crotch as she shudders in your arms
> She stares into your eyes for a moment, then pulls your head back into her chest, having stopped grinding
> "Sorry, ah just... nnh... ah never done that before" she breathes
> It's pretty clear what happened, though you're not sure exactly how
> Did she really just finish through her jeans?
> You just smile, trying to collect your thoughts as to how exactly this wound up happening
>>25315946
> Applejack lifts your chin, then plants a soft kiss on your lips
> "Ah'm sorry ah came onto you like that, ah just couldn't hold back" she says, blushing and turning away
> She climbs off you and turns around, but as you start to stand up and join her
> "Jus' wait a sec Sugarcube, ah wanna make it up to ya. After all, 's not fair if it's just me"
> She quickly turns back around and pushes you back into your seat on the stepladder
"AJ, really, you don't need to-"
> "Shush Anon, ah'm already blushin' ya don't need ta make it worse"
> Well alright then, you decide to just roll with it, and give a cheeky grin
"Sir yes sir"
> She smirks, undoing your fly and reaching in to grab your still rock-hard dick
> "That's Ma'am to you"
> Your senses are sent into overload as she pushes it up between her tits and brings the tip up into her mouth
> Her flawless chest rubs against your cock, still held in place by her bra
> You moan softly as Applejack's tongue starts to snake it's way across the tip of your shaft
> Your hands instinctively grab for her head, and she starts rubbing harder, using her hands to make the pleasure that much more intense
> Each time you moan, she just ups her game, squeezing with her boobs and pushing hard down on your shaft
> Just as you think you can't take it any more, she grins and lifts herself up, pulling your dick out from between her boobs
> She wraps a hand firmly around your shaft and starts rubbing quickly, then leans forward and puts the end back in her mouth, sucking gently
> "Ffffffuuuuck Applejack!" you moan, wrapping your fingers in her hair
>>25315948
> She stares straight at you, never dropping eye contact as she sucks down on your dick, pulling the whole thing into her mouth
> You can see her clenching a fist hard, and realise your dick is right at the back of her throat
> The fingers of her other hand run down into her pants, undoing the button and running to her crotch
> She starts fingering herself vigorously as she pushes down on you
> Applejack's tongue runs up and down your shaft, and you bite your lip trying not to cum early
> It doesn't work
> You blow your load, filling her mouth, and she swallows the whole lot
> Applejack rubs a few more times, squeezing out every last drop you have
> It's possibly the sexiest thing you've ever seen
> When it's clear there's no more to be had, she lets go, falling back and laying down with a satisfied look on her face
> You lean back on the ladder, completely spent
> Both of you stay there catching your breath, you especially
> Again, you're forced to accept that Applejack has one of the sexiest bodies you've seen
> You look down at her sprawled out on the ground, her chest hanging out of her unbuttoned shirt
> Her pants are half way down her hips, revealing matching underwear, complete with damp streaks
> She looks up and sees you staring, wiping her mouth and smiling at you "So what now, lover boy?"
> You're too exhausted to even reply, so you just shake your head, returning the smile
> Somehow you think you just recieved the best blowjob of your life
"Shit man, I don't even fucking know"
> You both laugh, and she rolls over onto her stomach, reaching into a pocket and pulling out her phone
> Oh man, this is too good an opportunity to miss
> You quickly pull out your own, snapping a photo before thrusting it unceremoniously back in your pocket
> Photo of DAT ASS acquired
> Rainbro would be so damn jealous
> "Oh shit! Anon it's like 8 O'clock!" Applejack yells, pulling herself to her feet as fast as possible
>>25316047
all dat green
all so quickly
>>25316047
> You're just about to ask why that's not a good thing when you hear something outside
> Sounds like a car
> Fuck
> You quickly step up the ladder and flick the switch to shut off the lights
> Applejack starts fixing her clothes, and you pull your pants up as fast as you can manage
> The door swings in, and a loud voice calls into the room "Applejack, you okay? We were st-"
> Mac's eyes meet Applejack's, then yours, and he steps inside
> "Now hold on Mac, ah can explain!" Applejack tries to interject, but with you and her in the state of dress you're in, there's no point
> He strides forward, right up in front of you, and you feel a sense of absolute dread
> Mac cracks his knuckles, pushing Applejack aside
> "Nope."
> The last thing you remember of that evening is Mac's fist rushing at full pelt toward your face
>>25316050
I wanted to give you guys something to make up for my getting wasted and not posting last night, so there's my post buffer, which I'll have to write up to again tonight ;)
>>25316058
Words cannot accurately express my rage.
I had a similar experience once with an absolutely amazing girl whose ENTIRE FAMILY, not just brother, were over protective.
She was fucking TERRIFIED, like panic attack terrified, of them finding out about me. Inevitably they did and her brother and I got into a really nasty fight. After that she just refused to be around me to "protect me". I wouldn't let it go and they all ended up moving away "for our own good".
This was years ago but it still sets me on fire. I wonder sometimes, if they ever relented or if she is still completely alone.
>>25316116
This.
Overprotective family are twats.
>>25316058
>>25315941
> You only break the kiss for a brief moment to catch your breath before diving back in
Fucking mouth breathers!
>>25316058
Wait. I just realized that Applejack is tecnically a virgin, because no penetrations, and she told she never did that before.Applejack lost her virginity before Applejack. This is my new headcanon.Hard mode: Big Mac is also a virgin.
>>25316058
You s-stopped :(
>>25316711
>Applejack lost her virginity before Applejack. This is my new headcanon.
god damn time traveling Applejack
losing her virginity before she lost her virginity
oh yeah she got fucking alright
FUCKING WITH TIME
>>25316776
NO! FUCK! I meant Apple Bloom! Fuck. Thanks for pointing it out.
>>25316058
I was wondering when he would show up.
>>25316058
stray you never have to apologize for getting shitfaced.
Boop
SAVED!
Where are you WriteFriend? :(
>>25319309
writefag is DED
RIP IN PISS
>>25316058
Mac's a right shithead. Good way to lose your sisters respect right there.
What the
Weren't there more posts? Were posts deleted?
Damn son. I haven't read a horse greentext story in a while. Come to think of it...I haven't wrote one in a long while either. I actually like this one too. I think you've inspired me.
Tell y'all what. Instead of posting here and having dualing stories on the same thread, I can post my pastebin here and I'll start posting it there while giving you updates. It has some old clop fics I wrote a while ago too that you can check out.You know...if you want to.
>>25320754
I don't think it would be "dueling stories"
more green is ALWAYS welcome...pastebin link please
>>25320812
http://pastebin.com/u/anontheterrible
I actually had a lot of fun with the sexi flexi story in there. It had a few issues here and there but it was a first time story after all.
>>25320839
You wrote for Blossomforth. That's rare enough that I'm willing to forgive a lot.
>>25320839
Thanks
here's a pic
Dolan got remove
Is sad day
More green soon
Once I finish writing this bit of shit
> Fuck, everything hurts
> Your head is killing you, and for whatever reason some fucknugget is shining a torch in your eyes
> You try to yell out to turn that shit off, but can't seem to make your lips work
> Just easier to fall asleep
Tonight's special includes a healthy serving of green, and I'm told our chef seasons it well
>>25322044
sir im doubting how australian you are, i have not seen the sentence "do a skid" or the word "uleh" yet
>>25322071
STREWTH THIS ONE'S GOTTA FUKKEN MOUTH ON IM, FUCKIN' GET IM ON THE BARBIE AND GET IM A STUBBIE, HE'S OUR NEW SNAG FLIPPER
But in all seriousness, 'Straya, cunt.
>>25322044
> "Gotta say Applejack, whatever happened, this kid looks like he's been hit by a fucking bus"
> The nurse drops her cigarette butt into the ashtray, blowing another cloud of smoke into the room
> "Will he be alright?!" AJ practically pleads
> Mac had slogged him right in the face with his right arm
> Anon flew back a full 10 feet before cracking his head into the case of drinks they'd been sharing earlier
> There'd been blood all over his face, it was awful
> Mac had literally just left them there, and she'd had to take Anon's car and drive him to the hospital
> She had Twilight on the line the whole time, trying to calm down and get advice
> Probably would have been pulled over if there'd been any cops out
> When she arrived at the hospital, Anon had been rushed to emergency, and she hadn't seen him since
> "He took a beating, but he should be alright. But you're an adult, I have to be straight with you."
> The nurse lights up another cigarette, frowning sternly at her
> "He was knocked out cold, then rammed into the ground. Brain damage is fully possible."
> Applejack lets out a whimper, and sits back down in the chair
> "'s all mah fault..." she says, practically sobbing
> The nurse rolls her eyes "Hey, save it for when he wakes up, kid. We've got doctors, and they're busy fixing him up. They know what they're doing, hell, they used to patch up our footy team, so they're used to this shit"
>>25322148
this nurse
Pic related
>>25322148
YEAS~ MAOR~
>>25322148
> An older man wearing a white coat leans through the door "Redheart, we need some more hands, had a car accident come in, and all the other Surgicals are busy"
> She swears under her breath "Fine, I'll be there in a minute, not like I was doing anything anyway"
> Redheart turns and grabs Applejack's head, looking her dead on
> "Kid, I've seen people come in with miles worse than your boy and make a full recovery. Believe in that."
> She leaves, and Applejack heads back down to the patient waiting area
> There's a flurry of movement as she steps in, and Rainbow is the first to reach her
> "What'd they say? Is he gonna be alright? When are you gonna tell us what the HELL happened?!"
> Applejack just sits down and motions them all around
> "So, what DID happen? We know he was with you, but you didn't tell us how he wound up in surgery" Twilight says matter of factly, cocking her head
> "And Sweetie was so very worried about him, I said I'd come on her behalf given the hour, but she really does deserve to know"
> Rarity's passive aggressive way of saying she didn't actually want to come was pretty obvious
> "Alright, y'all better get round fer a story then"
> Applejack resigns herself to the fact that they won't be satisfied until they know, and prepares to tell them everything
> "So ah was at work with 'im, and we finished up..."
> The others sat in wrapt awe, shock on some faces, horror on others, surprise on Dash's
> "...so ah drove here as fast as ah could, an' Twilight called y'all over to take carea me, which was mighty sweet Twilight"
> Twilight smiles "Any time... but I have to ask... is that really true?"
> A frown splits AJ's brow "Ah wouldn't a said it if it weren't"
>>25322429
aww yea
>>25322429
> "So you guys really just had a few too many drinks? And Mac got the wrong idea? I mean, not that I don't think he would do that, but it just seems a little out there"
> Dash is right into the questions, but AJ isn't hearing any of it
> "Ah told you what happened! Now if ya don't mind, ah'm gonna go see if ah can't get more information outta onea them nurses by the ER"
> AJ gets up and storms off down the hall
> "Ooooh I think you made her mad Dashie, :C " says Pinkie, poking her head around to frown at her
> "Shut up! I'm just worried, alright? He's my friend too!" Rainbow snaps
> "We know, and if if he's your friend, and Applejack's friend, and he's friends with Scootaloo, Applebloom and Sweetie Belle, then he's practically ours by default, so we have to be a little concerned, right?" Fluttershy interjects, trying to calm the situation
> "And I don't have anything bad to say, he seems a proper gentleman from what I've seen" Rarity adds
> "Okay! Well, let's all sit around and wait for Anonymous to get out of hospital then! Then we can give him a present or something!" Pinkie says, rubbing her hands together with a villainous glee
> "Pinkie, whatever you're thinking, try to think it... less." Twilight finally says, shaking her head. It was looking to be a long wait.
> The light shining on your face hurts
> Actually scratch that, all of your senses hurt
> There's a blinding pain behind your eyes and you feel like someone just rolled over you with a backhoe
> You slowly open your eyes, adjusting to the painfully bright light coming through the window
> Wait, this isn't your place
> You look around, trying to figure out where the fuck you are
> Last you remember you were with AJ, then Big Mac came and... oh.
> You're in hospital
>>25295120
absolutelyharem.kek
>>25322653
> As your eyes finally accept that it's no longer night time, you groggily lift your head, trying to take in the room
> Moving just makes the pain worse, but you can't stay laying do-- oh god yes you can
> You struggle not to vomit as your head spins, flaring a new pain up
> Okay, bad move
> You mutter in frustration as you roll your head around, trying to see the room
> It's no good, they've got you wrapped in so tight that without sitting up, you can barely move
> Alright, time to give it another go
> Your vision slowly clears up as you struggle upward in bed, biting back against the pain in your skull
> You eventually manage by leaning up against the wall and bedframe, taking in the small hospital room
> Various machinery keeps track of your vitals, and the windows are half open, letting in a cool breeze
> Around the room, you spot a bunch of people, all fast asleep in chairs, lounged across couches, and two leaning right across your bed
> So that's what the other pressure on your legs is, you think to yourself as you look them all over
> You recognise Dash, AJ and Rarity, the others though...
> Twilight, you're pretty sure you can recognise her based purely off description
> The other two you're guessing are Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie
> Gee, I wonder who's who?
> A nurse wanders past the window, peering in and spotting you
> "Sweet fucking christ, what do you think you're doing? You lay right the fuck back down in that bed before I sedate you!" she practically yells into the room
> Why does she look so familiar?
> The shouting wakes Dash immediately, who jumps up shouting "YES SIR SORRY SIR IT WON'T HAPPEN AGAIN SIR" before realising where she is and blushing
> This stirs the others awake, and they all groggily make their way to their feet
> All this shouting is making your head pound, so you do as the nurse suggests and slide back into bed, pulling an arm out of the covers to rub your eyes
>>25322879
> "Anon! Yer up! Oh thank god ah thought... well that doesn't matter, but you're okay! Fuck ahm so sorry... ah... nnnnn"
> Applejack runs up to the head of the bed, throwing her arms around you and trying to say something between tears
> You wrap an arm around her, trying to calm her down
> "Dude, whatever the hell happened, I'm glad you're alive" Rainbow says, sitting on the edge of the bed
> "I think we all are, after all, you seem to have made quite the impression on my friends" Twilight adds, walking over and stretching
> "I'm Twilight Sparkle, I don't think we've met" she says, motioning for the others to introduce themselves
> "I'm Pinkie Pie! And I'm super duper glad you're okay! Or going to be okay! Or WHATEVER!" Jesus fuck she's exciteable
> "And I'm Fluttershy... Hi..." Flutters quietly says, softly enough you have to strain to hear it, which just hurts more
"Well, thanks for all coming in. I appreciate it, even if the circumstances of me being here aren't favourable"
> You manage a wry smile, and the girls all look at you uncomfortably
> It's really quiet, and Twilight coughs "So um, there's something you should know..."
> Blank Stare
"I'm not going to like this, am I?"
> Applejack finally manages to calm down some and starts to explain
> "Granny heard what happened, and what landed ya here. There's a reason Mac ain't kin to hurtin' folks, and, well, she didn't exactly have very nice things ta say 'bout what he did"
> You can guess where this is going, and it doesn't leave a good taste in your mouth
> "Ah may have said a few words too, 'n Applebloom went right off at 'im. Hell ah don't think ah've seen that girl yell at anyone, let alone her brother"
> The uncomfortable silence grows heavier around you, and there's a knock on the door
> "So uh... well..."
>>25322960
You forgot Rarity.
Actually, the whole introduction sequence thing felt pretty out of place. I'm guessing you had some trouble writing this.
>>25323089
Well, he's met Rarity (Back at the end of the first part). I basically assumed she was in the room, but didn't really care enough to re-introduce herself.
That said, I've been a bit down lately, so my writing's slowed down and I've been more liberal taking breaks.
I'll try to keep the quality at least decent
>>25320676gooby pls
>>25322148
Being fair, the first few posts had Anon speaking real fucking... whatever your accent is called. I like that it's not that way anymore, but I guess the joke is lost on anyone that wasn't there for the first thread.
>>25323155
Yeah, I started out the story as a bit of shit to have fun with, but eventually I decided to take it more seriously
>>25322960
> The door opens, pushed in by a large red arm, followed promptly by the rest of Big Mac
"What the fuck AJ?! He fucking hospitalised me and you brought him here for what, to gloat?!"
> Engage hella fucking pissed mode
> Your head pounds as you shout, and she recoils visibly from the flurry of words you shoot her way
> "Anon! Calm down!" Rainbow tries to butt in, but you turn on her too
> "Did you know she was bringing him? After he fucking smashed me in the goddamn face without a word?!"
> "ANON!" Comes a ringing shout through the room "SHUT. UP. FOR ONE. SECOND!"
> Everyone sits in shock, staring at the -until now- quiet girl in the corner
> Fluttershy has her fists balled and is practically shaking
> "Just hear him out before you say something you'll regret later!"
> You're stunned. So is everyone else. Even Mac seems a little taken aback
> It's only now that you're calming down that you notice how he looks
> Holy shit he looks worse than you do
> Like he hasn't slept in days
> Mac steps forward, and moves up next to the bed, clearing his throat
> "Anon" he rumbles, sitting down in the chair previously occupied by his sister
>>25323186
Ugh, more formatting errors
> "Ah know ah can't say nothin' to make what ah did any better. Just wanted to tell you ah'm sorry, for everythin'. I should've let y'all explain before overreactin' like that, an' even if ya had been like I thought, well, 's not mah place to interfere"
> Wait, is he crying?
> This guy, built like a house, is sitting by your hospital bed, crying and apologising. Where the hell is this coming from?
> "Ah don't expect y'all to forgive me, hell ah know ah wouldn't. But ah don't want y'all to hate me neither, so ah'm here, facin' what ah've done, and hopin' y' might be willin' to come chat when ya get better. If not fer me, for AJ's sake."
> Mac finishes what he's saying, and looks relieved to have gotten it off his chest
> Everyone sits in silence, still shocked
> You have a feeling that's more words than Big Mac has ever said outside of a classroom
> And that kinda tugs at you, that he actually freaked out that much over what happened
> You sigh, thinking about how all this came about, then turn to face the girls who were standing around the end of the bed
"Guys, could you give us a moment? I wanna talk to Big Mac alone."
> Twilight and Applejack nod, ushering the others out of the room
> Fluttershy looks worried as hell, but reluctantly leaves, closing the door behind her
> A minute or two passes, the silence in the room growing heavier by the second
>>25322960
>Big Mac walks into the room
>He simply stands there breathing, his face completely stoic
>You look him in the eyes and wait
>A simple two words
>"Ah'm sorry."
>Fits him well
>After a few moments of deafening silence, you start to chuckle
>A low chuckle at first
>But it gets louder
>The others, including the nurses, start to look worried
>Even Mac breaks his stoic facade to look confused
>Every movement of your diaphragm hurts like Hell, but you don't care
>Finally, you inhale sharply, and look Mac dead in the eye
"You goin' to jaaaail, mo' fuckeeeerrrr. Haha, you goin' to JAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIL!"
>AJ's eyes go wide, and she leaps at you, grabbing your shoulders
>Ow
>"No, Anon PLEASE NO! PLE-"
>You stop her by putting a finger to her mouth
"Shhhhhh. Listen AJ, there are many things I can look past."
>You look over at Mac, and cackle a bit
>You don't know why, but you do
>You then look back to AJ and ate serious again
"I can forgive a punch, I can forgive being put in the hospital over a misunderstanding, but that's not what this is about."
>You point to Mac, and let out a loud 'HA!'
"This guy here, he doesn't care about you. Not as a person anyway."
>As soon as you say this, Mac's face becomes one of shock
>As he processes it, his eyes light up in anger
"Because if he did, he'd want you to be happy. He'd want you to do what you want and be free. But you're not his sister, you're his slave."
>You can see that Mac is now pouring all his concentration and willpower into not jumping you
"You're an object to him, something to be guarded, like a family heirloom, or a pile of gold. He didn't hit me because he thought he was protecting a person."
1/2
Note: this isn't meant to infringe or anything, just how I imagine Anon would react. Keepthe blow to the back of his headin mind.
>>25323233
>Applejack looks confused and sad, but you need her to know this
"He hit me, because he was protecting his property."
>You start the low chuckle again, and look to Mac
"Go ahead, big guy, tell me I'm wrong. Tell me you want AJ to be happy. Tell me you care about what she wants for herself. Oh, but you can't, because you know that if you did, you wouldn't be so overbearing. You wouldn't do what you do. You'd treat her like a person, wouldn't you?"
>You feel yourself cackling again
>You're not sure why
>You're not sure why you did or said any of that
>But it felt good
>As the corners of your vision turn black, you hear weeping
>A sole voice, crying deeply
>A male voice, by the sound of it
>A deep, male voice
>And then
>Nothing
Fin
Now to read the canon version
>>25323233
One, cool dubs.
>>25323264
Two, my sides! Someone help me get back my sides!
>>25323204
I'm actually rewriting that part for the pastebin, mostly because I don't like how it came out in the end
But you guys'll get the unabridged version here
> You break the ice though, giving a wry smile
"You know, I don't blame you for being protective of AJ. She's an awesome girl, but jesus dude... I'll admit I was pissed as hell that you came here after that stunt. But I can tell you're sincere. If nothing else, I can respect that you want to own up for laying me out like that, and it takes balls to do it in person"
> Mac looks down, clearly ashamed
"You've got a hell of a right hook, Mac. Fucking cleaned me up right on the spot. Broke my nose too"
> He now looks absolutely miserable "Ah'm sorry Anon, ah thought ah was protectin' muh family. But ah just hurt 'em bad. You too"
> You laugh, causing him to look up at you, confused as hell
"Seriously, don't sweat it. You came here, in person to say that, and I'll be honest, you look like shit. Drinks are on you when I get out of here though, you fucking owe me one"
> Mac nods firmly, finally losing the depressed stare he'd held up until this point
> "Ah organised with Granny to get you paid for the days ya been here. 's comin' outta my packet, but ah would'a given it to ya anyway"
> He sits up and wipes a hand across his face, putting on his usual stern look again
"I'm not gonna press charges or anything. It's not worth it, besides, I don't think AJ'd talk to me if I got you stuck in prison"
> He nods "Yup."
> You look out the window, watching the cars drive past, and people wander in and out of the building
"So how long was I actually out? I know I was kept sedated for a while, but I feel like I haven't eaten in days"
> He nods, rubbing the back of his head "'bout two days, give or take a few hours"
> The same nurse from before busts in the door as he finishes
>>25323354
pissy redheart is great
>>25323354
> Ah, now you recognise her.
> "Alright, out, out. Anon, what the fuck did you do, and why am I not going to be surprised?"
> She ushers Mac out the door, and he nods to you as he goes, looking a whole lot better
"Hi to you too Redheart. You taking double shifts again? You look fucking awful"
> She grimaces "Do I need to put you under again?"
"No ma'am, as for what happened, I may or may not have been too close to Mac's sister"
> A loud laugh floods the room "Holy shit, are you for real right now? God damn, you got a death wish?"
> You smile as she walks around checking various equipment before moving over to you
"Guess I must, you've spent enough time checking up on me"
> "I was surprised to see you here though, last time I saw you you were still fuckin' about at Canterlot U. Hold still"
> She checks your eyes, and double checks the dressings on your head
"Yeah, as you can see, it obviously went really well"
> Redheart laughs "Well, good news is, you probably don't have severe brain damage. Bad news is, that means you remember me"
"Oh, but why would I ever want to forget you?"
> "Careful, or I'll break your nose again" she says, miming a swing at your face
>>25323369
So much fun to write, too
>>25323411
So are we going to learn how he knows Redheart or what.
>>25323411
> To be honest, it scares you because you know full well she might do it
> Redheart used to be a doctor near Canterlot U, but couldn't deal with the hours
> So she became a Nurse and moved out, mostly because she was actually being paid more to be here than she ever would at the old clinic
> High demand, low supply, everyone wants to be a hero doctor some day, not the nurse on the side
> You'd been in and out of her office while you were studying more times than you cared to remember
> She was a good friend, and you were glad to see her
> "Well, you should be out of my hair by tomorrow, but not until the afternoon. I wanna make sure you don't have a fuckin aneurysm or something before I let you out of here"
> You nod, smiling at her as she busys herself about the room, fixing up the chairs where they'd been dragged about
"It's good to see you, Red."
> Redheart pauses for a moment, smiling before heading to the door "You too kid, you too"
> She leaves, and the room is left quiet once more, the only sound to bother you being the ticking clock on the wall
>>25323429
Literally 15 seconds before I posted the next part
>>25323434
> There's a knock on the door about an hour later, and you put down the trashy magazine you've been flipping through
"Yeah, come on in"
> Three very memorable faces peek through the door, before Sweetie, Scootaloo and Applebloom bounce into the room, running up and climbing onto your bed
> "Anon! We were so worried when we found out what happened!" Scootaloo yells, throwing her arms around you
> The other two nod and join her, turning you into an improptu snuggle pillow
> "Are y'alright? Ah had a go at Mac over it, ah still can't believe he'd do that!" Applebloom says, holding you tightly
> Rainbow walks in and takes a seat, smiling at you "They demanded to come see you, I had no choice!"
> You just wave 'It's alright' to her, and she grins "Oh yeah, figured you might want this"
> Rainbow tosses your phone to you, and you manage to grab it around the girls who had, thus far, refused to move
"Cheers Rainbro"
> She stares blankly at the nickname "Really? Rainbro?... You know what? Yeah, I like it" Dash grins, kicking back
> The girls finally let go, sitting along the edge of your bed
> "So we all chipped in and got you this. It's not much, but it's a present! Which you don't seem to have many of"
> Sweetie reaches behind her and pulls out a tiny box
> It's a little variety sample pack of chocolate, couldn't be worth more than a few dollars
> But it's the thought that counts, right?
"Thanks girls, I really appreciate it"
> They beam at you, then are quickly ushered from the room by Rainbow "C'mon girls, I wanna have a chat with Anon for a bit"
>>25323411
PLOT TWIST:
Redheart and Anon fucked in the past. Drunk, messy, casual, fully consensual, fun sex. AndRedheart had a strapon.
>>25323456
i like it
>>25323462
YOU HEARD THE GUY, STRAYANON! DO IT! DO IT! DO IT!
>>25323444
Oh, cool trips, by the way.
>>25323434
>"It's good to see you, Red."
IT'S A SIGN!
>>25323456
Funny thing is, that's an actual part of the story I didn't wind up writing in. Might add it later when it becomes relevant again
> The three of them wave at you, quickly departing, and Dash shuts the door
> "Soooo, I saw your phone." she says, sitting on the chair and leaning against your bed
> Oh god panic mode
"Hmmmm?"
> Just play it cool, deny everything
> She grins at you "You didn't delete my photo"
> Wait that's what this is about? OH THANK GOD.
"What can I say? It's a good photo"
> Her grin widens and she punches your shoulder "You're an ass, and you're lucky I like you, but at least you're an ass with good taste"
> "But really, you should probably take it off your phone, before someone else finds it. After all, if Applejack went on there and saw the picture..."
> She's dancing around the subject, but you can tell what she's talking about
"Yeah, you're right, I should probably save my gallery somewhere else. Do you think you could hold onto a picture or two for me?"
> Dash winks at you, glad you caught her meaning "I'm sure I can save a photo or two, just text them to me and I'll be sure to keep them safe for ya"
> You grab your phone and send datass.jpg to her, winking back
> "So, I really have to ask what actually happened. The others might've bought that you just got really drunk, but with that photo? Not on your life"
> You sigh, of course it wasn't gonna be that easy
> "Can we talk about it when I get out of here? I'm fucking tired dude, and it's a long story"
> Well, it's not a long story at all, but you are actually really damn tired
> Dash pouts "Fiiine, but in exchange you're gonna give me ALL the details!"
> Fistbump
"Sure thing Rainbro, I'll give you a call when I'm out"
> She waves on the way to the door "Stay safe you lucky bastard"
> Door shuts, quiet again.
> Time for some well earned rest.
And that's all I've got for the moment, stay tuned for more soon!
>>25323301
Didn't think it would end up being a sidesbuster, but OK, whatever works, I'm just glad someone enjoyed it.
>>25323504
YES!
>>25323434
And double dubs before a cool triple? Shit's just fucking with us. RULE 34~
>>25323456
why do you people always gotta ruin it at the end
every fucking time i swear
>>25322653
> "And I don't have anything bad to say, he seems a proper gentleman from what I've seen" Rarity adds
PFFFFFFFF, HA hahahahahahaaaaa!
>>25323590
i know anon i know i feel the same way but what can we do.
Bamp
Was going to go watch the martian tonight
Due to money issues, can't do that any more, so I guess I'm writing more of this shit.
Stay tuned folks.
>>25325144
Moar!
>>25325144
>shit
this is gold. don't sell yourself short.
>>25325144
My pants tighten with anticipation!
Really though, anon. This is a good fic.
Kinda wondering if someone will sneak anon a bj in the hospital bed when Redheart is busy.
>Redheart notices
>"Anon! I told you not to get worked up! I'm gonna have to sedate you now."
>Doesn't stop the bj -- only watches, and Anon gets dazed as fuck.
>>25325200
Don't inflate his head. It's electrum at best.
>>25325207
BRB renaming story to Four in the Bed 2: Electrum Boogaloo
>>25325144
>Due to money issues, can't do that any more
Wait, what? Why not?
>>25325144
YES!!
Which glorious damsel shall be Anon's next conquest?
>>25325248
Unfortunately I lost my job a while back, so I'm almost flat broke
Fucking shitty position to be in, but hey, at least I can enjoy writing for you guys
>>25325463
Make a writefag patreon or something.
>>25325496
Will write porn for food
Nah, I'll be alright. I'll watch it when I get some cash, or when I can find a rip online
>>25325205
>My pants tighten with anticipation!
>>25325205
>Doesn't stop the bj -- only watches, and Anon gets dazed as fuck.
Would rather see Redheart sedate anon, and do the bj herself (or more?). It's not rape if he is too dazed to say no.
>>25326045
Okay, let's see how this little idea goes over...
> Lilly finishes setting out the last of the merchandise on the shelves.
> Daisy makes some final adjustments to the outfits on the mannequins in the window.
> L: “Well, I think that’s everything. Just another hour and we’ll be ready for the grand opening.”
> Daisy is less enthusiastic.
> D: “Are you sure about this? This doesn‘t seem like the best way to start a new business.”
> Lilly walks over to her with a reassuring smile.
> L: “Relax. It might be a little awkward at first, but everyone here is really kind and accepting. They’ll warm up to it all eventually.”
> D: “I’m more concerned about what they’re going to think about us, not just the store.”
> L: “Oh you worry too much. Everything will be just fine.”
> Lilly pulls back the curtain just enough to peek out the window.
> L: “Perfect. Rose is back.”
>>25326522
>L
>D
>L
>D
>L
You aren't writing a script. Quit it.
